Introduction
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Ok, the intro is nice, you could've sort of filled it in a little more if you know what I mean. It sort of sounds a little too thin at this moment. And the last note (I think) is cut of too early, intended or not, it doesnt sound decent.. It just squashes up my mind. I like those trance hits or whatever they are called, sound nice in here
ok.. moving on..

Middle Part
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Ok, this is very nice actually, love the percussion, and the crispy rhode. I cant stress this enough (tho I've told you before) your weakest point is that the chords tend to be a little false. once you fix up this, the overall sound will raise many points just out of that. Proudction wize, you are not bad at all, harmonically, you are a little less.. Dont take it the wrong way: You are not bad, you are just not there yet (imo)(im not there either so heehhe; )

Ending
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Ok, this is decent, nothing truly spectacular, but usable. Just like all of my own endings.

Overall
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Ok, nice sound quality, nice structure, some 'faults' at the programming of for example, the hammond orgle or whatever it was. But overall, a decent and listenable tune! Keep it up.

Almost as a desperate quest for something as unbreakable and beautiful as glass, the sound of this LP is very fragile, tender and mild and yet has a slight disturbance. The balance between rythm and melody sits never still and it tends to push itself either way but this only adds to the curiosity of the music itself. Awkward and at times unpredictable, it never failed to keep my interest for its sheer beauty.