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 DEF'T. OF ;-'-J.:-;Aï,ON 
HISTOIRICAL COLLECTION 



ONTARIO 
TEACHERS' XIAN UALS 

CO.IP)SITION ANI) SPELLING 

AUTHOIRIZED BY THé. MINIST.R OF EDUCATION 

TORONTO 
THE COPP, CLMIK CONPY, INITED 



COPYRIGHT, CANADA, 1916. BY 
INISTER OF EDUCATtO ¥OR OITARIO 



... ,TION 
- "qLLECTION 

COMPOSITION 



CONTENTS 

PAGE 
COURSE OF STUDY ................................... V 
CHAPTER I 
The Teaching of Language ......................... I 
Language and Its Value ....................... 1 
The Aim of Language Teaching ............... 2 
Relations of Language to Other Studies ........ 3 
The Teacher's Requirements ................... 6 
CHAPTER II 
Influence of the School ............................ 10 
How School Conditions Affect Language ........ 10 
Slang ......................................... 11 
The Home and the School ...................... 12 
The Recitation ................................ 13 
CHAPTER III 
The Child's Vocabulary ............................ 17 
How the Child Learns to Speak ................ 17 
Growth of Vocabulary ......................... 22 
CHAPTER IV 
From Oral to Written Composition ................. 28 
Relations of Written to Oral Composition ....... 28 
Beginnings in Written Composition ............ 30 
Transcription ................................. 31 
C HAPTER V 
Written Composition .............................. 33 
The Daily Exercise ............................ 33 
A Deflnite Purpose ............................. 34 
Inspiring Self-Reliance ........................ 6 
Clearness and Fluency ......................... 37 
CHAPTER VI 
Suitable Material .................................. 40 
Choice of Subjects ............................. 40 
Stories ........................................ 44 
How to Tell Stories ........................... 48 
Dramatization ................................. 54 
Pictures ....................................... 55 
Language Books ............................... 58 
V 



ri COMPOSITION 

CHAPTER VII PAGE 
Letter-writing .................................... 60 
Importance of Letter-writing ................... 60 
The Friendly Letter ........................... 60 
Parts of the Letter ............................ 62 
The Business Letter ........................... 65 
Formal Notes ................................. 66 
Models of Letters ............................. 66 

C HAletER VIII 
The Composition Lesson ........................... 6ô 
The Lesson Period ............................ 68 
Prevention of Mistakes ........................ 69 
Self-criticism .................................. 70 
Correction of Errors ........................... 73 
lIarks to Indicate Errors ...................... 74 
levision of Work .............................. 74 
The Teacher's Point of View .................... 75 

CHAPTEa IX 
The Mechanics of Composition ..................... 77 
The Teaching of Mechanics .................... 77 
Common Errors in Written Work .............. 79 
Directions for Writing ......................... 81 
Sentence Structure ............................ 81 
Punctuation ................................... 82 
The Use o[ Outlines ........................... 84 
Models ........................................ 87 

CHAPTER X : FORI I 
Details of the Course .............................. 89 
Chief Aires .................................... 89 
Character of the Work ......................... 89 
Material for Transcription ..................... 90 
Oral Exercises to Correct Faulty Expression ..... 90 
Memory Work for Transcription ................ 92 
Practical Exercises ............................ 92 
Models ........................................ 93 
Black-board Work ............................. 94 
From Oral to Written Work ...... . ............. 94 
Stories for Reproduction ....................... 95 
Favourable Conditions ......................... 95 
Rough Beginnings ............................. 95 
Memorized Stories for Writing ................. 96 
Pictures ...................................... 96 
Brief Notes and Letters ........................ 97 
Composition of Brie[ Notes .................... 98 
Corrections and Criticisms ..................... 99 



CONTENTS vii 

CHAPTER XI: FORM II PAGE 
Details of the Course .............................. 101 
Outline of New Work .......................... 101 
Transcription ................................. 102 
Sentences to Impress Correct Forms ........... 102 
Sentences to Impress Technical Work .......... 103 
Practical Exercises ............................ 104 
Black-board Work ............................. 104 
Letters for Transcription ....................... 104 
Prose for Transcription ........................ 106 
Poetry for Transcription ....................... 108 
Friendly Letters ............................... 109 
Study of the Paragraph ........................ 112 
First Material in Written Work ................. 112 
Exercises in Writing Paragraphs ............... 113 
Sentences to be Combined ...................... 114 
Suitable Material ïor Reproduction ............ 114 
Methods in Beginning Written Composition ..... 115 
Punctuation ................................... 116 
Preparation for a Written Composition on " The 
Wind " . ..................................... 117 
Pictures ...................................... 119 
Original Compositions ......................... 122 
Thought and Expression ....................... 122 
Black-board Wo-rk ............................. 122 
Oral and Written Work ........................ 1W2 
Exercises ..................................... 123 
Material for Written Work ..................... 123 
Invention ..................................... 124 
Rough Beginnings ............................. 125 
From Reproduction to Invention ................ 126 
Eradicating Errors ............................ 126 
Main Parts in Paragraphs ..................... 128 
Corrections of Work ........................... 125 
CHAPTER XII: FORX III 
Details o the Course .............................. 130 
Review with Additional Material ............... 130 
Oral Exercises to Secure Clear and Logical State- 
ments ....................................... 131 
Topical Recitations ............................ 133 
Clearness ...................................... 136 
Planning a Paragraph ......................... 136 
Planning a Composition ....................... 138 
Methodical Plans in Narration ................ 139 
Common Faults in Written Composition ........ 141 
Variety of Expression: Sentences ............... 142 



viii COMPOSITION 

CHAPTER XII: FORM III--Continued 
Exactness of Expression: Synonyms and Anto- 
nyms ....................................... 145 
Precision ..................................... 146 
Errors to be Avoided .......................... 148 
Type Lesson: lay and fie, and and but. ail and 
any ........................................ 150 
Direct Narration .............................. 153 
Indirect Narration ............................ 155 
Letters ....................................... 157 
Business Forms ............................... 158 
Summary ......................................... 160 
CHAPTER XIII: Fo.i IV 
Details of the Course .............................. 161 
Subjects for Written Work ................... 161 
Letters ....................................... 167 
Narration ........................................ 169 
Lesson on Examination of a Paragraph of 
Narrative ................................... 171 
A Narrative Letter ............................ 173 
Description ....................................... 174 
Description of Places ......................... 174 
Description of Persons ........................ 175 
Description of Birds ........................... 177 
Description of Common Objects ................ 178 
Descriptive Words ............................ 178 
Comparison and Contrast ..................... 179 
Exposition ........................................ 181 
Exactness of Expression ....................... 183 
Review ........................................... 183 
The Paragraph ................................ 183 
The Whole Composition ....................... 186 
Effective Arrangement ........................ 188 
Criticism of a Composition ..................... 189 



PUBLIC AND SEPAATE SCItOOL 

COUPSE OF STUDY 

FORM I: JUNIOR GRADE 

The oral reproduction by the pupils of stories told or read 
by the teaeher. 
Narration by the pupils of personal experienees. 

The 
The 

The 

FORM I: 8ENIOR GRADE 

reproduction of stories, told or read, about famous 
persons, places, peoples. 
oral and written reproduction by the pupils, in brief 
complete sentences, of the subject-matter of sueh 
selections. 
oral and written expression of thoughts suggested by 
observation of objects, plants, animals, and pietures. 

FORM II 
0ral and written reproduction of stories told or read. 
Transcription. 
The study of capitals, abbreviations, and punct-uatior 
begun. 
Xarration of personal experiences and observations. 
Original written work begun. 
Simple letter writing. 
Sentence forms: statements, questions, command., and 
exclamations. 
ix 



x COMPOSITION 

FORM III 

Original narratives and descriptions. 
Simple business and friendly letters. 
The planning of compositions begun. 
The study of the paraaph begun. 

FORM IV 

0ral and written narratives and descriptions, and letter 
writing. 
The study of the paragraph. 
The studv of good models. 
An elementary knowledge of the principles of effective 
expression. 
Common synonyms and antonyms. 



COMPOSITION 

CIIAPTER I 

THE TEACtIING OF LANGUAGE 

LANGUAGE AND ITS VALUE 

IN THE activities of the school, language holds a position 
different from that of any other subject. Not onlv is it 
the ordinary medium used for communication, but it is 
also the chief instrument needed fo gain knowledge in 
other subjects, and is, moreover, an important object of 
study in and for itself. Language has hcld the place of 
supremacy in school from the very beginning, at rimes 
alnmst to the exclusion of othcr sul,jects. IIow can this 
I,e accounted for? It is recognized that the dcvelopment 
of mind and the development of language are co-ordinatc, 
that the child tan understand the world only in so far as 
he understands language. 
As Professor Laurie says: "The raain function of the 
school is to focus, so to speak, the life of the nation, and 
to I,ring its best elements--its langage, laws, religion, 
ethics, art, literature, history--to bear on the young 
to the making of good citizens. Xational lire 
in its variou. forms will always 1,e, as it ought always to 
be, the dominant factor in education". But a person can 
gain possession of this ri«h inheritance only in so far as 
he bas ma.tered ifs expression by his study of language. 
The mother-tono-ue is, therefore, rightly regarded as the 
supreme subject of study, af least in elementary education. 
For out present purpose, lanuage mav be dcfined as 
a system of cnnventional vocal or written s.vmbols hy 
means of which we are able fo givc expression fo our states 
1 



2 COMPOSITION 

of consciousness. The cultivation of oral and written 
language, with the objêct of improving this means of 
expression, is termed composition. 

TIIE AIlI OF L.OENGUAGE TEACYIING 
As fo tbe aire to be kept in view lu teaching composi- 
tion. there bave becn widely different conceptions, bui; 
these necd hot be discussed here. The following stai;emeni; 
of the aim seems fo be satisfactory: "To give the child 
judicious, systcmatic training in the adequate expression 
of clear tbought". This assumes that tbe starting-poini; 
is thought, which the mind organizes and which is then 
cxprcssed in suitablc form. Consequently, thc three steps 
in due order are observation, tbought, and expression. 
Tbis view of the aire i. thus stated in T],e Teaching of 
Engli.h: "The general aim of elementary composition 
teaching secms fo be, primarily, not the acquisition of an 
art, hot the cultivation of a science, but the training of 
the mind through the acquisition and expression of ideas. 
The second aire must be to teach those facts and 
principles of language which are the necessary media of 
successful expression" Composition implies the organizing not so mucl of 
words, sentences, and paragraphs, as of thoughts and 
feelings. It is vain to look for well-expressed thought fo 
spring from ill-digested ideas. But when eflïcien eaching 
has enabled the pupil to organize properly his impressions, 
his idcas, and knowledge, there arises in him, as a natural 
consequence, a real desire for expression. "Well-possessed 
knowledge differs from ill-possessed by its being a generator 
of power that seeks an outlet." Adequate expression is, 
therefore, a mcans and a test of the mind's capacity to 
organize, and the teacher's chier task is to aid the pupil 



RELATIONS OF LANG,UAGE TO OTHER STUD1ES 3 

in this organization. This work is grcatly assisted (a) 
by the teachcr's orderly presentation of knowlcdge in all 
subjects; (b) by constantly cultivating in pupils the habit 
of ordcrly expression: and (c) in senior grades by the 
sympathctic study of good litcrary modcls. 
It is evident that this conception of composition differs 
essentially from lhat actcd on I,y many tca«hers, whose 
view apparcntly is that in composition you cannot mark 
ïor scnse but only for form. As a result, the pul)il sup- 
poses that this exercise means juggling with words and 
guarding always against crrors in thcir arrangement; 
thereforc, he does hot focus his attention on saying in a 
clear, natural way what he bas definitely in mind. 
Above all, the teachcr should ever bear in mind that the 
mother-tongue is to be taught hot as an accomplishment, 
hot chiefly for culture, but mainly for daily use. Language 
should be regarded as a living activity of the mind, as the 
common possession of socicty, which every member should 
acquire, fo be employed as skilfully as possible. " In 
language, as in manners, knowlcdge of what ought to be 
done, however valuaMe as information, is unimportant as 
compared with the habit of doing it when occasion arises. 
The only successful teachers of composition are those who, 
consciously or hot, assume and maintain that the onlv 
kind of good English which can be practically taught fo 
a large class, is, hot an accomplishment, but a habit."-- 
:BARRETT WENDELL 

RELATIONS OF LANGUAGE TO OTHER STÙDIES 
Though in a general way composition bas relations 
with ail school subjects, yet with certain of these its rela- 
tions are c]nse, requiring some considcration. Usua]]y if 
is assumed that his reading moulds the pupi]'s ]inguistic 



4 COMPOSITION 

expression to a considerable extent. Yet in the earlier 
grades the thought and the language of his reading books 
are bclow the pupil's standard. In his eighth or ninth 
year thcse standards are about on a level. Thereafter, 
though each steadily advances, his forms of speech and 
range of thought are rapidly outstripped by those in his 
books. Clearly his early books aid him little in language 
forms; nor, on the other hand, does he gain much from 
the great toaster-pieces in his higher books. These are 
far abovo his reach, too elevated as to thought and ex- 
pression. He can profit most from books dcaling with 
idcas and situations somewhat akin to those of his own 
experience and thus zppealing most fullv to his interests. 
Especially is this true when the book expressions do hot 
di.plaee speech forms already established, but provide a 
fitting dress f«jr new-fledged ideas. It need searcely be 
pointed out that in this matter the immature child is in 
a very different position from the adult who consciously 
imitates the style of his favourite author. 
Could hot the school of set purpose do nmre to have 
the pupil's language al,ility improve through his reading? 
From the speech of their felh»ws «hildren readily appro- 
priate expressions which strike their fancy, though in this 
they mav hot be guided by good faste and judgment. But 
a tem'her appreciative of the beauties of speech should be 
able so to direct and stimulate his pupils that gradually 
they will themselves develop in some measure the dis- 
criminative facul-. Happy turns of expression or good 
sentence fç, rms met with in their reading should be noticed 
and admired. ('omparisons mav be ruade between the way 
a thouzht is expressed by the pupil and by an able writer, 
between ifs form in poetry and that in prose. The pupils 
in senior grades should be encouraged Go copy in the back 



RELATIONS OF LANGUAGE TO OTHER STUDIES 5 

of their composition books some of thcse forms, to serve 
as models for their own writing. Fortunate indeed are 
the pupils whose teacher brings to bear both culture and 
ethusiasm in directing their ]anguage training. 
Former]y a considerable part of what pa.sed as com- 
position was in reality grammar in a more or less diluted 
form. But in recent years ttm respective lilnits of these 
subjects have become more clearly defined. "' Grammar, 
as the logic of common speech, is a system of abstctions." Instruction therein is formal and is designed fo make 
clear '" the gencral laws and principles which underlie the 
structure of lan«uage ". But the using of languagc in a 
practica way for thought communication is an art, in 
which skill is gained chiefiy through practice; while the 
refiective study of language, carried on in a analvtic way, 
is a science, designed fo make conscious and expli«.it, 
knowledge that is already implicit through practical use. 
If is tobe taught " il! close relation fo the use to which 
words are put in e.xpres.ing a thought, and fo the lune- 
tions of each word and phrase and clause in the thought 
as e.xpressed ". Abundant experience in the use of speet.h 
fo convey thought should preeede any inquiry into the 
laws of language. Indeed, if is quite possible fo use 
language with considerable felicity and force in communi- 
cation without having ruade any study of grammar. 
But an acquaintance with the laws of grammar gives 
aid in the organization of thought, leading, as it does, 
a more or less conscious analysing of one's own ideas and 
modes of expression. There cornes a rime in the pupil's 
work when habit or feeling is no longer looked upon as a 
safe guide n regard fo correctness of form. Especially 
in his writen expression does he seek the help «f definite 
rules for guidance. Yet if should be evident that a study 



6 COMPOSITION 
of the ]aws of grammar wi]l hot make a correct -riter any 
more than a knowledge of the rules of rhctoric v¢ill make 
an e]oquent writer, unIess each is taught as based on a 
reality--thou-ht--and in its practi«al relations. Besidès, 
in the case of elementary schools, the precepts of grammar 
and rhetorie corne too late tobe of great importance in 
shaping oral speeeh. 
But ail schnol studies have a ffreater or less influence 
on lanzrage derelopment. " When litcrature is well taught 
in primary »«radcs, with lircly reproduction of stories by 
children, when songs and poems are memorized, when 
nature stu«Iy leads to a spirited and smpathetic inquiry 
and conversation, when earlv history and geography find 
aa cqually strong and stimulating oral treatment, we shall 
fi,d the fondati,,ns well laid for proficiency in English." 
Then, as language is required in all studies, ifs skilfu] 
u,e in every lcsson is of the highest importance in the 
ffettin and givin- «,f thonht. The various subjects 
furnish the nmtter for th,,ught and also aff,rd opportunity 
for the skilful empl,,yment of lanffuaze forms, so that 
immcdiate use may be ruade of what was learned in the 
language period. 

THE TEACIIER'S REQUIREMENTS 

"To be a good teacher of language in an elementar, 
school is fo satisfy a large variety of diflï,'u]t standards of 
excellence." These requirements may be considered under 
two heads--the personal and the professiona]. 
In a matter so purely persona] as is one's dai]y speech, 
the relations existing between tcachcr and pupils are of 
great importance in the endeavour fo secure improvement. 
No one can be forced to use any particular speech forms, 
no young child can be taught his mother-tongue chiefly 



THE TEACHER'S REQUIREMENTS 7 

by precept or by formal instruction. One's speech is 
largely amatter of voluntary absorption, varying with 
one's environments, yet guidcd eonsiderably by personal 
feelings. The teaeher "can influence the pupil's speech 
only by being an important part of the pupil's environ- 
ment. When the teacher is kindly, and interesting, winning 
the sympathy and admiration of his pupils, the influence 
of his example and precept in moulding their language 
expression will be important. Then the measure of the 
teacher's power is ehiefly lais own personality--his amia- 
bility, his sociability, his ardour. He requires, moreover, 
great patience and perseverance, for deïective speeeh habits 
give place but slowly to better forms. The old lessons 
require tobe frequently reviewed, yet in a somewhat new 
dress, so that gradually they beeome incorporated into 
daily speech; correct usages must be constantly recalled 
until they have become firmly established. Then he must 
be appreciative of any real effort bv his pupils to do good 
work. In junior classes, at least, the teacher's commenda- 
tion is the pupil's chier reward. 
Though fo a large extent frue in all subjccfs, in fhis 
one if seems fo be whollv truc that "one's powers of 
teaching increase, nof by teaching, but by learning". The 
following estimate of fhe teacher's practical knowledge 
would, if truc, show the need of more fhorough prepara- 
tion: "The shortcomings of the average teacher as a 
writer are serious enough, (we speak after much reading 
of teachers' compositions, note-books, etc.). Their un- 
guarded spoken language, however, is worse than fheir 
written productions. One still hears af rimes bad grammar 
and idiom; while as for any stylistic quality, revealing 
literary or artistic feeling, how rare if is! We also look 
in vain, in the average school, for good, cultivated pro- 
2 c.s. 



8 COMPOSITION 

nuniation clear enunciation, pleasant tones, a proper use 
of thc vocal organs ". Granting that the colours are too 
dark to dcpict the existing situation, if is still evident that 
this severe arraignment of Ulffortunate conditions should 
serve as a warning. It indicates the need of fuller know- 
ledge in all its departments as an essential condition for 
the teaching of langage. 
The teacher's speech and writillg should be hot merely 
crrect, but effective and attractive; that stiff, pedantic 
style termcd " schoohnasters' English" should be sedu- 
lously avoided. Instead, he should be able fo adapt his 
speech to the capacity of his pupils, making it graphic, 
concrete, imaginative, the bettcr fo suit their own natural 
modes «,f thought and expression. Ilis car should be so 
offended by bad English that this will not pass unnoticed. 
Yet, while constantly contending against defective speech, 
he mu.t endeavour hot to wound the feelings of even the 
most sensitive child. Great resource and tact are needed 
for thus guiding pupils into better language habits while 
ver enahling them to preserve due respect for their present 
capabilities. ]3ecause of the strong imitative proclivities 
of children, there is a tendency tiret the teacher's modes of 
speeeh, even his ways of enunciation, and his very tones of 
voice, nmv become theirs. If is thus his duty " to beautify 
thê spokên word by (.lear, rich intonation, by faultlêss 
pronunciation, and by clear-eut enunciation ". At ail rimes 
and iu all ways, thê teachêr's spêêch should offêr an admir- 
able example for pupils' imitation. 
In writing as in oral speech he should strive eonstantly 
fo improve his facu]ty for using ]anguage skilfully. Clearly 
if is here of little service to know methods and devices if 
the teacher's own performance is not edifying, if he is a 
bungler in doing such work as he requires of his pupi]s. 



THE TEACHER'S REQUIREMENTS 9 

IIis influence is greatest whcn he is a workcr along with 
his elass and when his proficiency inspires them with a 
strong desire fo improve. Then, too, he cornes fo know 
each pupil's eapacity for this work, and he can therefore 
adopt a somewhat flexible method according fo individual 
needs. Moreover, as he rcalizes the difficulties inherent 
in the sul,ject, he is lcd fo make-due allowance for his 
pupils' somewhat crude a«hieements. 
The training that is best for thc pupils is required also 
by the instructor. Every teaeher of English should 
regularly read some of the best prose and poetry; he slwuld 
carefully study some selected texts, weighing words, 
choosing the most suitable forms, and admiring beauties 
of expression. Besides this, it is necessary fo compose, 
perhaps fo reproduce in his own way. the paragraph or 
the essay of the toaster; to trv alteri,ate forms of expres- 
sion-in brief, fo seek constant development of his language 
powers. The pupil's growth in expression is dependent 
largely upon the teacher's self-owth. 



('IIAPTER II 

IXFLUEN('E OF THE SCtIOOL 

1XOW SCHOOL CONDITIONS AFFECT LANGUAGE 
" LANGUAOE is possible in all normal children ; it becomes 
actual only in the presence of a companion", writes Dr. 
Tracy. And Emerson says: "You send your boy to the 
schoolmaster, but it is the school-boys who educate him ". 
Like other arts, the art of speech can be learned chiefly 
through practice. Before his school life began, the child 
had usually abundant opportun/ty and encouragement to 
develop his lan«uage powers. II,: realized the need for 
effective expression in the activities of pleasurable play 
with his companions and in a variety of other 'pieal 
situations. Then every word or phrase heard or uttered 
was meanino-ful. A sociable chi]d of active, inquiring dis- 
position, playing freelv with others slightly older and more 
advanced than himself, is situated very favourably in 
regard to language acquisition. If he is solitary in habit, 
if he has no young playmates, or if the home requires that 
he he seen but not heard, the conditions are not so advan- 
tageous. But the school situations are still less favourable. 
An essential requirement is fo keep quiet: therefore he is, 
not permitted fo communicate with his fellows, except in 
the brief interval of recess. The presence of so many 
strangers makes him shy and reserved. The usual routine 
offers little opportnnity or encouragement for natural, 
connected expression. The language forms he acquires 
are chiefly those of his companions on the school ground 
or on the wav to and from home; so it is not " the school- 
toaster, but the school-boys who edueate him " 
10 



SLANG II 

SLAN( 

Nearly ail children between the ages of eleven and 
seventeen use two styles of expression ; one, that of the 
school, felt to be weak and formal; the other, that of the 
street, evidently better suited to their free and vigorous 
life. Usuallv these two styles have little influence on each 
other, each being used as occasion demands. The teacher 
may hear but little of the rude, emphatic expressions us«d 
outside, ï(r the formal wnrk of the school is given in 
formal language. But in their confidential moments, most 
ehildren confess fo finding slang attractive. Few think 
if vulgar or ïeel that if impairs expression bv destroying 
beauty and exactness. 
Naturally thev are drawn to use the form best suited 
for communication with their fellows, for if is with these 
that are exchanged their intensest thoughts and feelings. 
Despite adverse criticism by teachers and parents, slang 
is ïreely used, since adolescence arouses new and strong 
feelings with rapid and forcible mind processes, and for 
these the conventional speech forms are weak and unsatis- 
ïying. Slang abounds in terres descrihing conflicts of all 
kinds (sports have a vernacu]ar of their own), praising 
courage, censuring pride or boastfulness or inquisitiveness, 
ridiculing absurditv and sentimentality, disparaging fine 
dress and affected manners. Thus it is used fo express 
moral judnents, for which service their usual vocabularv 
does not suflîce. " Faults are hit off and condemned, with 
the curtness and sententiousness of proverbs devised by 
youth to correct ifs own faults." 
Those who value speech ehiefly for ifs ¢orm are un- 
sparing in their condemnation of slang. But Professor 
Lounsbury says: " Slang is an effort on the part of users 
of language to say something more vividly, strongly, and 



12 COMPOSITION 

,.oncisely than the existing language permits if fo be said. 
If is thê source from which the de,.aying enêrgiês of speêch 
are constantly refreshed". Whilc slang may be charac- 
terized as " language in the making", its very crudêness 
is êvidence «,f the nêêd of su,.h expressive terres, and ifs 
prevalence is perhaps a reflection on out schools for hot 
providin pupils with a mode of expression better fittêd 
to their 'outhful nêêds than are the polishêd and re- 
strainêd phrases of adult lire. Under favourable condi- 
tions thcse uncouth f,,rms will gradually be cast aside, 
being replaced 1,y more fitting diction. The wise course 
for the sch,,.1 appcars fo be to teach pupils fo discriminate 
between permissible slang and 1,ad slang, rather than to 
forbid its use entirely. Yet. along with this, evêry effort 
should be put forth t- devcl,,p a faste for good English, 
making if an everyday habit. 

THE HOME AND THE SCHOOL 

The school is commonly held responsihle for defects 
«,f language which owe their origin and growth fo debased 
standards outside. Af best. the s«hool bas charge of the 
child for but two hundred davs of sav rive hours each in 
a vear. On the average, hot one fifth of this rime is given 
te, definite lanuage teaching. But outside of school hours, 
the child is almost constantly using his mother-tone, 
influenccd chiefly hy the standards of the home, the play- 
ffround, and the street. Should these be on the side of 
illiteracv, if is clear that the sdool is contending against 
long odds. In this respect language is in a different posi- 
tion from any other sul,ject. Even when children know 
bettcr, they will. fearing the ridicule of their companions, 
revert fo the incorrect or inelegant forms that others 
employ. If the school and the home do not co-operate, if 



THE RECITATION 13 

can scarcely be expected that tendcncies fostered during 
the bricf hours of school will overcome the lowering in- 
fluences operating on the child during the greater part of 
his active life. hl this matter of good spcech it shouhl 
be the school aidin and extending the work of the honte, 
ralher than the home assisting the work of the school. 
Aud certain if is that they should hot be in conflict. 

THE RECITATION 
Usually the school gives pupils but little training in 
connected discourse. Teachers do nearly all the talking; 
tests nade in different places show that from seventy-five 
to ninety per cent. of the rime is monopolized by the 
teacher. Even in the higher grades, pupi|s are often hot 
af ease when speaking on thcir feet, for thev bave hot been 
given sufficient opportunity fo express their thoughts 
freely under school conditions. They have been trained 
to give brief, perhaps fragmentary answers; indeed mere 
hints af answers are accepted and fil|ed out by the teacher. 
Questioning has often been too detailed, admitting of but 
brief responses. This practice is inimical not merely fo 
the development of language power, but fo the unity of 
the subject, which is then seen by the pupils in unrelated 
scraps, rather than as a connected whole. 
Little opportunit)" is given the pupi] fo deve]op natura], 
spontaneous expression about things in which he is in- 
terested. In most recitations he is hot reallv expressing 
]imself; offert be is mere]y repeafing/]e snmewhat sfereo- 
t)Têd forms got from thê teacher or the book. When 
askêd a question in history, hê doês hot answer in familiar 
terres, but triês fo recall the forma| book expression, per- 
haps bêcausê he bas hot really graspêd thê historical tact. 
Now, thêsê formal terres are in littlê dêmand in his active 



14 COMPOSITION 

life outside the school, and therefore the somewhat stilted, 
artificial forms of the school have little effect upon hîs 
thought or language. "' Practical lire calls for ability fo 
express one's self--one's feelings, thoughts, and ex- 
periences." :But the school lays most emphasis on the 
impersonal side, whilc his past experience and his future 
needs make the personal aspect important. A fair measure 
of freed«,m might wisely be gin'en pupils both in the 
choice and the treatment of language topics. 
That every lesson should be a lesson in language is a 
maxim accepted almost universally but interpreted very 
differently in application. As a rule, little more is 
attempted than file correcting of the more common gram- 
matical errors, and perhaps the encouraging of logical and 
fornml clearness and variety in expression. Yet it shou]d 
be evident that the value of a subject for lanuage training 
depends chiefly upon the method of teaching it. If pre- 
sented in a formal way, largely through the use of books, 
formal answers will be given, probably in the very words 
of the book. But when a subject, such as geography or 
nature study, is presented in a concrete, interesting way, 
requiring thc pupil to observe and then fo express his 
thought, its influence on language development is very 
considerable. When a pupil, in answering, really feels 
the drawbacks «,f a limited vocabulary, the teacher should 
supply the right terre af the right moment. 5Iore suit- 
able forms of expression may be offered, usually in an 
incidental way, fo replace what the pupil recognizes as 
fau]ty or awkward in his own speech. The value of such 
aid is in proportion to the need felt; aid proffered when 
hot demanded is but lightly esteemed. :Besides, there 
.¢hould be more general and hearty commendation of 
earnest efforts at good expression. Such sentences as: 



THE RECITATION 15 

"That was very well told ", "What did you like in John's 
way of saying that"? encourage ail to greater effort. It 
is wiser fo draw attention fo desirable speech habits than 
always fo emphasize defects. 
]s it best fo require pupils always fo " tell it in their 
own words"? Experienced teachers rcalize the great 
danger of the pupil's getting, hot the th«»ught, but only 
its empty form. When this is feared, it is wise to demand 
statements in his own lanouage. Yet impro'cment in his 
speech can corne about only by substituting nmre fitting 
terres for those that are inadequate or defective. New 
knowledge demands suitablc modes of expression as a 
necessarv condition for its being understood and retained. 
He should therefore be encouraged fo steer a middle course 
between merelv imitating or copying and rigidly adhering 
fo his own defective usage. This he does by being stimu- 
lated fo make apt use of the most serviceable phraseology 
obtained from the text or the teacher. 
Should we expect all answcrs to be in complete sen- 
tenccs? Surely hot. At ]»est, sclmol life tends to restrict 
freedom and fluency of speech, leading to the briefest 
modes of expression. Yet the remedy for this is not in- 
sistence on formal completeness, but rather making the 
pupil less self-conscious, and expecting only such fulness 
of expression as is common outside the school. In answer 
to the question, "How manv boys are there in your class ?" 
should we insist on the pupil's saying, "There are nine 
boys in my class"? There is the best of reasons for pre- 
ferring that he should answer merely, "Nine", for this 
is the only ïorm that is good English. .N'o toaster of our 
lanuage would think of answering in a complete sentence 
--onlv a priz would do so. Then we should take into 
account the ability of the pupils and the importance of 



16 COMPOSITION 

the topic, trying fo shun both scrappiness and rigid 
formalism. Especially in drill or review would insistenee 
on full sentênee forms defeat the very object of the exercise. 
In first studying the number, the pupil might properly be 
rêquirêd fo say, "Five and seven are twelve ", but whên 
applying this faot later or when taking a rapid drill, he 
would say merely « Twelve ", in answer fo the question, 
"How many are rive and sêvên"? As the pupil pro- 
gresses, he should be expeetêd fo give longer and better 
eonneetêd answêrs. But the training in school should be 
in line with the best practice outside. 



CHAPTER III 

THE CHILD'S VOCABULARY 

HOW TIIE CIIILD LEARNS TO SPEAK 

UNDOUBTEDL¥ the chief literary assêt of the (.hild on 
entering school is his proficiêncy in his nother-ton_--me. It 
is important to know how he has acquired this, for the 
rêlated school process should prêserve an essential con- 
tinuity in his mental habits. At lea.t in thc bêginning, 
the school mêthods should be nerely a botter organized 
way of his continuing to grow in thought and in language. 
Long bêfore the child understands a single word, he 
has ideas, gained chiefly through sight and touch, and ex- 
prêssed by looks, gestures, and cries. This innate ability 
to form idêas is the basis for the undêrstanding and right 
use of langaage. Nêarly all the sounds used in spêech 
and other sounds discarded later, are correctly nade by 
the infant within the first nine or ten nmnths. This is 
done unconsciously and in play; during waking hours his 
tonoue is nearly always in nmtion, even when no sounds 
are heard. It is largly through the tones of voice, ges- 
tures, actions, and facial expression that he is enablêd 
fo intêrpret his mothêr's words, distinguishing command 
from caress, forbidding fron allowing. Bv expêrience he 
gradually lêarns that certain sounds are connêctêd with 
certain actions or ol)jects that have interêst or significance 
for him, and thus he gains the mêaning of most of his 
first words. The formation of ideas is a prêrequisite af 
this initial stage of word-learning. His own êarliêst 
speech is always in the form of sentence-words--tone, 
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18 COMPOSITION 

gesture, etc., making clear what is lacking in verbal 
expression. His chair may mean: "Here is my chair"; 
"I want my chair"; etc. The motive for his efforts at 
speech is the satisfaction of lais desires--to be fed, fo get 
objects he secs, etc. Only through interest is an early 
and firm association of sound-images with motor-images 
possible. 
After some rime, there is a differentiation of the sen-- 
tence-word into two parts, but for a considerable space 
the cupola is omitted, the child saying, "Baby--tired". 
q'he defects of articulation are overcome but gradually, 
and only very slowly do correct and distinct speech sounds 
become established. In this, as in other departments of 
lan,,.mage, the «bief factor is imitation. At first this is 
unconseious; besides listening to the sound, the infant 
watches the speaker's lips and tries fo imitate their more- 
ment. But later, hen it is diseovered that sounds convey 
meanings, imitation is greatly stimulated, and the child 
acquires the sounds of voice and the speech forms heard 
from those about him. The child's speech depends then 
upon the conjoint action of two forces; heredity (instinct) 
and education. While in all normal ehildren langxlage 
i. possible, if becomes a realitv onlv in the interchange of 
companionship. As loger Ascham in bygone days said: 
'" As se use fo hear, so ve learn to speak; if ye hear no 
other, ye speak hOt yourself; and whom ye only hear, of 
them only ye learn" 
Except a few, adjectives are not round in ear]y speech. 
since their emplo3unaent implies an ability to compare and 
eneralize not possessed by the young child. The adverb 
usually lags behind the adjective as to ifs introduction and 
the freedom of its use. There i. an absence, also. of con- 
nective words, since the child's thoughts are not complex 



HOW THE CHILD LEARNS TO SPEAK 19 

enough to require the use of such relational terms. Con- 
junctions, cxcept the simplest (and, or), are acquired 
still latcr. Indeed, if may be said that many adults employ 
conjunctions less effectively than any other part of speech, 
probably because the relations they indicate are not clearly 
perceived. 
Usually the child is about three years old bcfore he 
emplo)'s pronouns, the place of which was previously 
by the noun, supplcmentcd b)" tone and gestures. Af first, 
but one form is used in all cases; coramonly n,y or n,e is 
used before I. This latter form has, af a later stage, to 
supplant a form fixed by priority and practicea task hot 
easily accomplished. 
Though few in English, inflected forms cause the 
(.hild much trouble. In nouns ho stuml-,les over the 
irr%tlar plurals, using gooses, mou.çe.¢, etc'. It requires 
long practice to ensure correct use of the various pronoun 
forms, bspecially of ifs, u'l, ose, and ,«l, om. The relative 
pronoun offers great difficulty, and sentences of the type, 
"I know the boy u'l, at won the race", oïten æersist stub- 
bornly. Usually wl, at is the first relative used, and be- 
coming firmly established, if is not easily supplanted. 
Comparison in adjectives and adverbs is mastered only 
by great effort. Usually the superlative appears I)efore 
the comparative, as being more in keeping with the child's 
boastful tendency and his inability to be moderate in his 
judgqnents. When the comparative forms are introduced, 
such vulgarisms as worser and beauifuller make their 
appearance. Unless as a result of good teaching, the child 
does not use freelv the modifiers expressin.u a lower d%ree, 
for example, le.çs, fewer. 
The verb with ifs numerous forms ves the most diffi- 
culty. Af first the present is the only tense used. When 



20 COMPOSITION 

the ehild cornes fo employ the past, misled by his feeling 
for regularity, he commonly says runned and buyed. The 
future is the last of the simple tenses fo be called into 
service. The compound tenses can be handled only com- 
paratively late; the past perfeet hot u.ually even af ten, 
whilc the future perfect demands greater maturity of 
thouzht than is possessed by children or even by older 
persons with limited education. This order of appear- 
ance is ea.ily under.tood when one considers that, at least 
for the child, the prescrit is most strongly in conscious- 
ness, while past events are more clear and definite than 
future happenings can be. 
Practically all children af first use will fo the habitual 
exclusion of shall, pr.bably because the former seems more 
forcihle. For a like reason con is preferred to ,nay, could 
fo might or should, and the double negative (I ain't got 
none) is so freely emphJyed. 
But agreement and word arrangement are the two 
most serious diffieulties. The ehild's early speech evinees 
supreme di.regard of sueh eonventionalities: He were, 
I are, There goes Tom and John, are types of what is 
freely use& Certain principles of agreement are beyond 
the child's grasp, but, 1,ng after he has learned and under- 
.t,,,d its broad prineiples, he will often revert fo incorrect, 
but earlier-used, t.,Tes. In forming his sentenees, the be- 
ginner laeks knowledge of the faet that words usually 
c,me in certain sequential relations. This he must dis- 
cover through prac'tiee and correction, aided q'eatly by 
imitation. Indeed. throughout his whole school course 
there is need of direeting his attention to the most effective 
ordering of sentence element.. 
In his first years, the eonventional lan-aage forms are, 
undcr favourable conditions, being eonstantly brought to 



HOW THE CHILD LEARNS TO SPEAK 21 

his attention; by practice and precept the family circle 
stimulate his efforts to use right expressions, not infre- 
quently hastening their adoption by a generous use of 
ridicule. Above all, such teaching is individual and con- 
crete and its importance clearly undcrstood. But, even 
under the best conditions, if is inevitable that tbe child's 
utterances should show much confusion and many blunders. 
As suits his mental dcvclopment, he adopts the various 
language forms in the ordcr of their complexity, the more- 
ment being from a vague sentence of (,ne word supple- 
mented by tone and action, to the finer distinctions of 
word modifications, agreement, and arrangement. There 
are two strong m«,tives for the child's conïorming to the 
speech usages of those about bim- one is the inborn, 
powerïul tendency to imitate; the other, the need of 
making himself plainly understood. 
From this brief survey, if will be evident that in this 
difficult art the child has, in the three or four years 
immediately preceding his entrance to school, made won- 
derful pr%-ress---reater than he will again make in anv 
like period. All this he has accomplished without organized 
teaching, yet under the impulse of strong motives. His 
mother-tongue is not an outer garment, but a very intimate 
part of his whole being---of his lire, th«»ught, character-- 
it is the result and the revelation of his mental develop- 
ment. Moreover, change and -rowth can corne only along 
the lines of its first acquisition. Speeeh habits cannot be 
changed quickly and af will; they may be grown off as 
the stag grows off ifs horns. To aid in this development 
the school must offer examples worthy of imitation, must 
base teaching on reality and interest, and must provide 
abundant practice. 



22 COMPOSITION 

6OWTII 0" VOCABULARY 
I, ifs endeavour fo develop language ability, the task 
facing the school falls under three main heads: (a) To 
extend and clarify the vocabulary; (b) fo make pupils 
familiar with varied and effective forms of expression; 
(c) fo train them in habits of clear and consecutive dis- 
e'ourse. 
The acquisition of a moderately large vocabulary of 
ïullv understood word. is a slow and difiïcult task, yet one 
of the highest value, for the learner, by increasing his 
stock of understood terms, increases his stock of ideas 
and adds fo lais material ïor thought. The child from an 
intelligent home, beginning school at six years oï age, 
bas usuallv a voeabulary of two thousand words, more or 
less well known. The higllly edueated adult understands 
possibly forty to fifty thousand word,, though he rarely 
enploys more than one third of this number. If will be 
ivident on eonsideration that nearlv every one has two, 
perhaps t]lree, v««-abularies. One is ruade up oï colloquial 
terres u.¢ed in ïamiliar speech; a second, employing more 
formal terres, is used in writing; while a third comprises 
word understood when read or heard but rarely employed 
in one's own speech or writing. The school should aire 
to make arailable in the active, spoken vocabulary a much 
larger proportion oï ternls lying practieally idle in the 
pas.ive vocabulary. In turn this will improve the written 
expression. 
Though paucity of words mav be due fo a limited 
knowlcdffe oï men and things, it generally indicates lax 
mental habits. When one becomes too careless to make 
clear distinctions in either thought or speech, there is fixe 
tendency o forezo intelligible expression and fo refer fo 
something as a "thing-um-bob" or a "what-d'-you-call-it". 



GR.OWTH OF VOCABULARY 23 

Those who have no clear thought to convey feel little need 
for exactness in the mode of conveying it. It is a reproa«h 
even fo many educated persons that their expres.ions are 
often loose, indefinite, undignified, tending fo become 
slangy. :For this the lack of good training in early years 
is chiefly responsible. What definite notion does a rational 
mind attach to such terres as "awfully nice ", "perfectly 
lovely ", as these are popularly used ? Most people cease 
to study language when once they have such a knowledge 
of if as suffices for the common intercourse of dailv life. 
In consequence the best literature is little read, since ifs 
language is hot understood, and there is difficultv even in 
comprehending the best utteranees «»n public questions. 
The undeveloped understanding cannot easily detect 
differences in things somewhat alike and, therefore, fo 
such minds all classes of dogs are simply dogs and all kinds 
of trees are merely trees. And this general and vague 
use of terres will long persist unless adequate means be 
taken fo substitute others more precise. Improvement in 
definiteness is almost as important as increase in the 
number of words, if indeed the two can well be separated. 
Resulting from greater definiteness there usually arises a 
technical vocabulary, though in this matter different 
teachers often take extreme positions. In some schools 
all technical terms are tabooed : there are "action words ", 
but not "verbs "; pupils are taught to " take away', but 
not to "'subtract" one number from another. The pur- 
pose is to avoid words showing perhaps a delusive, hot a 
real acquaintance with things. Yet the pupil's actual 
difficulty will ever be, not with the word, but with the con- 
ception. Once the idea is grasped, if will be the better 
understood and retained by attaching fo if the one fitting 
term. Of course it is important that technical expressions 
3 c.a. 



24 COMPOSITION 

should be brought to the pupil's attention individually and 
only aftcr their exact meaning has become clear. 
In the case of young pupils, a serious obstacle is that 
they and the teacher ,peak almost different languages, as 
shown in the choice and the arrangement of their ex- 
pressions. Even when the saine words are used, their 
implied meanings are by no means identical. But the 
teacher is not in a position fo do good work until he has 
learned to understand pretty exactly the real purport of 
his pupils' speech, tIe is then able to draw a conclusion 
as to he ideas his own speech will awaken in their minds; 
he wfll realize what common weaknesses in their language 
need immcdiate attention. 
It mu.et be acknowledged that the methods taken fo 
improre the pupil's vocabulary are often ineffective; in- 
deed it can be trulv said that hot iafrequently there is no 
real effort in this direction. Yet the school bas serious 
responsibility in this marrer. Sot only should it aire to 
secure for the pupils definite meaning and apt usage of a 
goodly number of words, with varied forms of expression, 
but above ail, it should try to develop habits of thought 
and good faste in speech. 
Usuallr the least effective way of strenhening the 
vocabulary is through formal dictionary definitions, given 
frequently in technical and abstract form. "Xo one, 
from the sight of a horse or a dog, would be able to anti- 
cipate ifs zoological definition, nor, from a knowledge of 
ifs definition, fo draw such a picture as would direct 
another fo the living specimen."--C.lDLX'_,,L NEwra. 
Knowledge of meaning comes rather when the terre is 
correctlv employed to express an idea within the pupil's 
comprehension. When hot explained fo him bv some ex- 
perience, real or imagined, or by a drawing or picture, 



(3ROWTH OF VOCABULARY 25 

words should be presented in their living use in sentences 
varied in form and meaning. The best evidence ,that he 
bas understood the word is his significant use of if fo ex- 
press his own thought. The boy who wrote: "The baby 
was anonmaous for two weeks after birth ", could doubtless 
give a correct definition of aoymos, but he fail«d fo 
apply if properly. Pupils should constantly be encouraged 
fo employ new terms both in speaking and writing. 
There are three stages in gaining mastery over new 
words. Af first one gives heed fo their sound or their 
written form; they may be reproduced parrot-like with 
no conception of their meaning. The next step may be 
a formal definition of meaning. But this is not yet the 
true language stage, since the formal definition bas fo be 
called up before the word conveys meaning. To the 
average Canadian, half a crown bas little significance until 
translated into our familiar nmncv tern». If is probable 
that a fair proportion of our words do not advance beyond 
this stage, remaining in our passive vocabulary. But a 
word is hot reallv in one's stock of lan,«uage until ifs oral 
or written form and ifs meaning bave become inseparably 
joined, so that in using it one fixes attention hot on it. 
form, nor yet on ifs definition, but solely on its signifi- 
cance. Success in word mastery depends upon intelligent 
conception and frequent repetition. 
If in choosing the words due regard be had fo the 
pupil's comprehension, the study of synonyms may be 
begun in the fifth school year. With most pupils there is 
a strong tendency fo overwork a limited vocabulary, in- 
stcad of employing more suitable though less familiar 
terres. But youn.g pupils can easily be interested in 
observing shades of meaning in common expressions. They 
can readily be taught fo distin_guish rock" and stone; blind, 



26 COMPOSITION 

shade, curtain; loz'e, like, etc., etc. Though literature 
offers opportunities for this study, it is probable that the 
need of making sueh distinctions is more strongly felt in 
composition, where clearness is so important. 
That many common words enshrine interesting stories 
should be known to pupils of the highest Form. Every 
one realizes how firmly a brief story impresses a fact; 
similarly, the interesting derivation of a word will so 
impress its meaning that this will ever remain clear. Take, 
for instance, desultory, derived from de and salto--to 
]eap from one thing fo another, as the skilful circus rider 
jumps from the back of «»ne horse to that of another, 
never remaining long on anv. Such a study would give 
a vigorous grasp of the basie meaning of words, wholly 
different from that gained from a definition. Professor 
Laurie thus sers forth the reasons for this study: '" The 
words bound together by a common root-idea are thus 
better remembered, and ever after more correctly used; 
and let us never forget tbat the correct use of a u'ord is 
the correct perception of a tl, ig. ('an any one doubt the 
value of this kind of exereise? Is it hot, indeed, indis- 
pensable, if we are to take possession of out native tongue 
--the sole vehicle of expressing out own thoughts and 
understanding the thoughts of others". 
The value of the dietionarv and the way fo use it are 
discussed under the head of Spelling. But, in connection 
with his language study, each pupil should be encouraged 
fo keep in the last pages of his exercise book a list of 
servieêable words as these are aequired. Often he might 
jot down the phrase or the sentence (if short) instead of 
the isolated word, sinee this gives a elearer insight into 
ifs meaning. In fhis wav he might add new words possibly 
af the rate of ten or fifteen each week. The teacher should 



GROWTH OF VOCABULARY 27 

regularly supervise these lists, fo encourage and guide 
the pupils in selecting the most useful words and in incor- 
porating them in their speech and writing. 
Systematic memorization of good poetry and prose is 
fo be highly commended in this connection. Though at 
times thc pupil may he encouraged fo choose passages that 
specially appeal fo him, yet the selection should u.ually he 
ruade, at least in Jui,ior F.rms, by the teacher, as thc 
pupil's judmÇnt is often ïaulty. In the litcrature lesson 
he will have had his critical fm'ulty exercised hv choosing 
apt descriptive terms, or those expressing noble fceling or 
vigorous action, by pointing out the beauty of form and 
thought, or telling what he likes best in the suhjcct'-matter 
or in the characters represented. Then, with the meaning 
and the expressi«m clearly understood, he is in a position 
to commit the piece to memory with the greatest benefit. 



CHAPTER IV 

FROI ORAL TO WRITTE. COMPOSITION 

RELATIONS OF WRITTEN TO ORAL COMPOSITIOI 

EVERY teacher of composition should fully realize that 
good results therein depend in large measure upon the 
development of good habits of oral speech. The vocabulary 
and sentence forms habitually employed by the pupil in 
oral expressions are likely to be used in his written ex- 
pression. In the early years, beïore written work has 
assurned a place of prominence, his daily speech can be 
directed into proper (.hannels, and needful improvement 
«.an be secured beïore wrong ïorlns have become toc firmly 
cstablished. As a result, many of the annoying defects 
of written cornposition will either not appear or will be 
more readily overcorne. 
In all grades «,f the elementary school, oral composition 
should be an irnmediate and important part of the pre- 
paration for writing. In this way the teacher learns what 
thoughts the pupils have on the subject, how these are 
organized, and in what forrns they are likely to be ex- 
pressed. The pupils should take the leading part in 
criticising the strong and the weak ïeatures and in offering 
suggestions f«»r irnprovement. Pe»or choice of words, 
defective sentence structure, triviality of thought can be 
pointed out and corrected, so that they rnay not mar the 
written expression. Good oral work thus paves the way 
for good written work. 
Usually it is taken for granted that efficiency in writing 
depends upon efficiency in speaking, and that skill in either 
of these ways of expression is readily available in the other. 
28 



FROM ORAL TO WRITTEN COMPOSITION 29 

This inference is based on the assumption that expression 
is not a special but a general ability--acquired in one 
form it is applicable in all forms. But even a cursory 
examination shows the weakness of this conclusion. The 
author who charms by the wit and elegance of his writings 
may be singularly weak and ineffective when speaking to 
an audience; even the brilliant lecturer is often dull and 
prosy in the drawing-room. 
In written expression, there are inlportant factors llOt 
round in oral speech. The latter is the more general, the 
nmre natural means, firmly established before writtcn dis- 
course is begun. The young child is unconscious of any 
distinction between thought and ifs oral expression, 
especially when frequent repetition of set forms has ruade 
their use virtually automatic. '" I want a drink of water", 
is said as essentially an instinctive reaction arising from 
his feeling of thirst. 0rdinarily, af this early stage, he 
gives little thought fo the choice or arrangement of his 
expressions. He is more aware that his utterance is ruade 
up of separate words than is an illiterate person that his 
sentence consists of different parts of speech. 
A pupil of six or seven, even though he talk with case 
and fluency upon many subjects, finals serious diffieulties 
in writing upon any. His penmanship is a slow and 
laborious process, requiring so mueh attention that he is 
able fo spare little for making his expression effective. 
Habitually his speech follows so promptly upon thought 
that the two are practically simultaneous; he has hOt 
learned to think belote he speaks. But now he finds a 
serious handicap in the slowness of writing, since graphie 
execution lags far behind his thought. When he purs pen 
fo paper, both words and ideas seem fo elude him, and the 
effort is usually disappointing. 



30 COMPOSITION 

BEGINNINGS I. WRITTEN COMPOSITION 
For the young learner the uttered sound, hot the 
written sign, is the meaningful symbol. In his earlier 
copying, he habituaIly trans}ates the printed into the 
spoken word fo get its iinport. Writing fo dictation has 
fostered the saine habit. This practice of appealing to 
the auditory sense is often discouraged too early, fo the 
serious detriment of written exlression. When in his 
carliest attempt ai writing, the confused and apparent]y 
hc]pless pupil exc]aims, "'I don't know what fo say', he 
should be encouraged to tell if first oral]y. Then he is 
Inade fo repeat the first sentence s]owly, so that the in- 
dividual words in proper order stand out in consciousness. 
Now the sentence is held as if it had been dictated. Net 
he is directed to write that thought. The other sentences 
are treated in a siini}ar nmnner. Dea}t with in this way, 
the pupil does not corne whollv to distrust his ability to 
express himsclf in writing, nor does he acquire an early 
distaste for the subject. Gradually the need of such close 
personal help wil] cease. But for a ]on tiine yet the 
sounds of the word, must be the timulus fo the writing 
of his thoughts. Besicles, the Inany details of written 
discourse--spelling, pnnctuation, capitalization, penman- 
ship--have fo be essentiallv Inastered, so that they can be 
intimatelv related and rightly used almost unconsciously. 
Then af the start, the teacher Inust expect Inanv faults" 
and much hesitation. Onlv as the result of long practice 
rizhtly directed will the learner gain abilitv fo give his 
attention ehiefly fo the content and hOt fo the details of 
written execution. 
But the earliest beginnings of written coinposition 
should be on the black-board. Af first the teacher mav 
write some sentences as given by the pupils. Their atten- 



TRANSCRIPTION 

tion should then be drawn to essential matters of fvrm, 
such as capitals and final punctuation marks. Then the 
pupils singly, or in small grvups, should be encouraged to 
try, each giving his sentence at first orally, saying it slowly 
and distinctly. Should anv mistake appear, the pupil i. 
directed to erase it at once, and then the right form is 
given before he again makes trial. For the first lessons 
the sentences need ,lot be original; they may be drawn 
from the reading or be taken fr«m menmrized .work, but 
they should be short and everv word sh,,uld he known. 
Soon, however, original utterances will replace these. 
At his seat the ehild should write, as his earliest 
sttempts, some of the sentenees first taken on the board. 
This work sh,,uld be de,ne with a large, .oft lead-peneil 
on unruled paper. Manv tcachers make a serious mistake 
in emphasizing excellence in writing at this stage. Itis 
proper to expeet the pupil fo do gç,«,d work aeeording fo 
his ability, but no one shoull expect of a m,:re heginner 
the replat, preeise penmanship of a well-trained adult. 
Through teaching and praetice, his hand-riting will 
gradually improve, but it should never be eonsidered that 
mere neatness of exeeution is the ehieï aire of composition. 

TRANSCRIPTION 

OEhe simplest exercise in written language is transcrip- 
tion. It demands no originality and but little thought, 
its edueative value resting on the great .importance of 
imitation. When rightly employed, it trains in the 
meehanies of composition, promotes aeeuracy, enlarges the 
voeabulary, strenNhens the menmry, and it may even 
develop literary taste. Some teaehers eondomn it as a 
sheer waste of rime, whilc others overdo it as a simplo 
means of keeping pupils employed. But ifs roal worth 



32 COMPOSITION 

depends upon wise, systematic use with a well-defined pur- 
pose. When assignments are ruade in a haphazard fashion, 
as, for ëxamp]e, " Copy the next two paragraphs ", the 
value of the exercise is doubtful. 
Ordinarily the selection of parts fo be copied should 
be ruade with some desirable end in view. This may be 
to impress some noble thought or beautifu] expression, 
since s]ow, thoughtful copying results common]y in fixing 
attention both on ideas an«l their mode of expression. It 
may be to reinïorce some lesson on form--not mere]y such 
matters as quotatinn marks, but also letter and business 
f,,rms. Such social and conventional requirements as notes 
of invitation, bills, notes, receipts, etc.. are all better under- 
st,,o,| when correct examp]es are given tobe faithfullv 
copie& Nor shou]d suitah]e poems be over]ooked. Usual]y 
the pupfl's interest shou]d first be aroused in the se]ection 
to ho transcribed, so that the exercise is not pure]y me(.h- 
anicaL and then he should be held accountable for a perfect 
reproduction. 



CHAPTER V 

WRITTEN COMPOSITION 

THE DAILY EXERCISE 

BY TYIE rime the pupil reaches Form II, he is prepared 
for writing exercises in which he expresses his own thoughts 
or reproduces in his own language the contents of stories 
which he has read or heard. 
Language exercises should be frequent rather than 
long. The aim is to form habits, hot fo give knowledge, 
and the young pupil is incapable of long-sustained atten- 
tion. In every grade some recitation offers opportunity 
for a written exercise daily. A single paragraph may con- 
tain all the pupil has fo say on the subject, but that is 
produced under the best conditions, and it has all the 
greater value because it is hot regarded as composition 
proper. In addition, the re]ar lan.guage recitations 
should be as frequent as conditions will permit, never 
falling below two or three each week. So strong are the 
influences inimical fo good lanmage habits, that they can 
be successfully overcome only through the school's bringing 
fo bear its best stimulus af all rimes. Most of the written 
exercises should be short, fo prevent mental and physical 
fati«ue which wnu]d seriously interfere with improvement. 
In Form IV, it is advisable to have a longer composition-- 
say once a fortnight. However brief the exercise, however 
short the time, insist that the work be done creditablv. 
Nor should the board work be slighted. "Any habit is 
more conveniently directed when if is most habitual." 
Daily practice, especially in written work, will make it a 
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34 COMPOSITION 

eustomary mode of expression and will rob the exereise 
of the dread whieh the infrequent composition usually 
inspires. 
Nor is it well in elementary sehools to make this 
habitual expression appear more formidable by announcing 
the suhjeet in advanee for studv and research. The story 
or the letter is takên immediately belote itis tobe repro- 
duced, the purpose being to have the subject "strike" the 
pupils and fo have them write undêr this inspiration. 
Indeed without some sueh impulse no one tan write with 
pleasure or suceess. With the pleasant sounds of the story 
still fresh in thêir êars, and the pleasant images strong 
in their minds, the pupils should be set to work without 
delay. Ail the lire and brightness will vanish if they are 
allowed fo ponder or hesitatê. They should be urged to 
write rapidly, hot stopping to weigh êxpressions or fo 
consider form. It is best fo strike whilê the iron is hot, 
fo accomplish this task while the enthusiasm la.ts. A 
pause of two minutes fo erase a line will probal»ly bring 
forgêtfulness, self-consciousness, indiffêrence. The rime 
for critical examination cornes when the exercise is finishêd ; 
the aetual writing must be under the most favourable con- 
ditions. 
A DEFIXITE PURPOSE 
It is of first importance that every composition, how- 
ever brief, should have a definite purpose. This, more 
than anything else, will serve to raise the doing of it from 
a dull task into an exercise brightened bv some glow of 
interest, even of pleasure. Above all it gives the work an 
air of realitv. Who can do his best when writing merelv 
to fi]l in spaee or in obedienee to the teacher's delnands? 
But if one desires fo get some information, fo tell a friênd 
about an interesting event, or to refute a charge ruade 



A DEFINITE PURPOSE $5 

fo one's hurt, the thoughts corne freely, and their effective 
expression is hot considered a tiresorne task. Cornrnonly, 
children need such stimulus fo effort more than do adults. 
An irnportant concern of the tcacher is, therefore, the 
seeking for a clear, attractive purpose to set before his 
pupils. Then their utterances, though still halting and 
irnperfect, as is to ]»e expected, will yet be easy and effective 
cornpared with their laboured efforts to produce the tale 
of brick on dernand. 
There are two essential conditions for securing credit- 
able results: First, the writer should have sornething 
worthy that he desires fo say; next, there should be sorne 
one duly interested in what he says. To the child, ex- 
pression is not only iatural but pleasurable, unless the 
thought is hazy and indefinite or the nmde of expressing 
it unfarniliar or difficult. The business of the tcacher 
is fo enable the pupil rightly to organize his knowledge, 
his ideas, his feelings, for then the desire to utter thera 
will arise naturally. Through questioning and illustration, 
he is aided to overcorne the chier obstacle fo readv com- 
munication, narnely the loose, unrelated way in which he 
holds his thoughts. When he is able to think clearlv and 
connectedly on a subject, he will hot find it so formidable 
a task to express these thoughts fittingly. But, if he lacks 
ideas, the atternpt to express wlat he considers such will 
surelv convince both him and others of his want. 
The second requisite is that the pupil should ever speak 
or write to get the attention of some one really interestcd 
in what he says, and in hirnself. Undoubtedly the strongcst 
motive for acquiring skill in language is the natural 
irnpulse for social communication. The teacher regards 
his part as finished when he bas aided the pupil to clarify 
his thought; but, further, he should provide a s)'mpathetic 



36 COMPOSITION 

audience. The pupil's class-mates are good critics, for 
though thcy condemn poor work, thcy are frankly appre- 
ciative of good results. In nearly every lesson, time can 
be found to have one or more pupils read compositions 
judged the most creditable. The pupil's letters should be 
written, perhaps, to his father or mother, or fo some one 
who will care fo read what he writes. ]t is important to 
have some of these written on note-paper in his best manner 
and taken or sent to friends or relatives. I[e should be 
encouraged to retell at home for his parents or for the 
younger members of the family the stories told in school. 
The oral reproductions in school should have the teacher 
and tire (.lass as an attcntive, appreciative audience. The 
stimulus will nmke the pupil do the best of which he is 
capab|e, whereas le severely critical attitude or the care- 
lcss disregard of his efforts will give but sorry results. 
The pupil should write because he bas something he wishes 
fo say, not because he has to say something. 

I/SPYRI.N'G SELF-RELIANCE 

In composition, most pupils are too prone fo dis- 
trust their own abi]ity and fo rely on others. Sensitive 
pupils thus begin a process of self-abasement. When 
asked to write, even on a familiar subject, their impulse 
i. fo say: "' Please tell me what I should say, I can think 
of notlaing of interest ". The class exercise should train 
a pupil to place a proper estimate upon his own ideas and 
powers, not fo be so ready to prefer those of others. His 
own mental habits and powers must be his main resources, 
fo be developed as his chier reliance in the activities of 
lire. He may say little that is wholly original or very 
striking, but he can never gain efiïciency without consider- 
able self-reliance. The composition is meritorious largely 



CLEARNESS AND FLUENCY 37 

in proportion as it gives the pupil's own thoughts in his 
natural way. Yet when he attempts fo express himself 
effe«tively and af some lenh through writing, self-con- 
seiousness is often a serious obstacle. He may have ideas 
enough, but the unfamiliar process produces mistrust, 
ehecking free, natural expression. The teaeher's encour- 
agement and appreeiation of honest effort will gradually 
overeome this eramping influence. 
The narration of personal ideas or experienees is an 
exercise of the highest value. Naturally the pupil's chief 
interests are in those things relating fo himoelf or in 
actions and situations that he tan interpret in terres of 
himself. When dealing with other topics, the process is 
less natural and more mechanieal--it is quite outside of 
himselï, and therefore his own feelings, desires, or ex- 
perienees do hot enter into the aeeount. Lacking this per- 
sonal element it loses the interest and stimulus whieh are 
the aire and inspiration of his ordinary speech. The com- 
position is, therefore, likely tobe dull and mechanieal. 
The impersonal topie ma,¢ foster study and the gathering 
of ideas, but if is onlv the personal topie that develops and 
enriehes his real mental life and encourages self-reliance. 

CLEARNESS AND FLUE.'qCY 

" Ability to express one's thoughts clcarly, forcibly, and 
with a degree of elegance--that is, ability fo write good 
English--is perhaps the highest test of mental cultiva- 
tion." So writes Dr. A. B. Hinsdale. To what degree 
should we expect evidences of culture in the compositions 
of pupils in elementary schools? Elegance we need not 
look for, though a few pupils can be ruade fo feel pride in 
artistic expression. Force. as based on feeling, may appeal 
to a larger number. But the chief effort might well be 



38 COMPOSITION 

centred on clearness and fluency. Before the age of 
adolescence, few children take much pride in habitually 
expressing themselves well. Ordinarily they arc satisfied 
when thev convey their meaning not too imperfectly. The 
school practice focuses attention on correctness as the 
leading feature of good utterance. But refiection will 
show that while precision is always important, if is by no 
means the most valuable quality of discourse. Fluency 
and naturalness are ever to be preferred te) rigid conformity 
with rules, and they should be developed first. 
In composi.tion, more than any other subject, good 
work depends upon freedom and self-confidence; the hesi- 
tatin., self-conscious child, biting the end of his pen, will 
accomplish little. Especially when he is trying, the child 
needs appreciation and stimulus far more than criticism. 
But the rigid criticism fo which some of his oral and most 
«,f his written expression is constantly subjected makes 
him so self-con.cious that his utterances are neither natural 
nor effective. In all junior grades the key-note should be 
encouragement. The growth of lan«uage and of the cor- 
responding ideas shou]d be vgorous rather than formally 
correct. Gradually this steady deve]opment can be directed 
into more desirable forms. "The remedy for exuberance 
is easy: barrenness is incurable bv any labour." The apt, 
untrammelled utterances of the child outside of school are 
often in marked contrast with his halting, feeble utter- 
ances inside. 
"If may rightly be said that the chief purpose of 
lanuage is hot simply to express thought, but rather fo 
impress it--to convey in the best manner our ideas and 
feelings into the mind of another. We bave hot only 4o 
pour the water out of the bottle, we bave fo pour if out in 
such a way that every drop may, if possible, be got into 



CLEARNESS AND FLUENCY 39 

another bottle." The child can easily be led fo appreciate 
this, for his habitual utterance has for ifs object to make 
some one understand him. When he finds that his mode 
of expression fails fo eonvey his thought adequately, he is 
ready fo make needful changes. Most of the teacher's sug- 
gestions for improvement might well be based on this one 
principle. Clearness tan be aquired by any one willing 
fo take pains, and should, therefore, be within the reach 
of most persons. Usually the most effective teaching 
results from coneentrating the attention of the pupils upon 
elearness rather than upon force. The two qualifies tobe 
developed in the elementary sehool are fluency and elear- 
ness. 
But there is some conflict between these two charae- 
teristics. Fluen«y means freedom from much refleetion or 
hampering rules, 'hile reflection and rules are needful fo 
secure clear]]ess. Fortunately young children are not sen- 
sitive fo critieism when given tactfully. Then habit cornes 
to their aid, when the short, daily exercise in lan_-mage 
enables them fo fransforrn ri-ht têaching into fixed usage, 
leaving them untrammelled. There must be constant 
repetition of the correct mode to seeure unfailing obser- 
vance; hence the importance of the daily exercise. In- 
telligent feaching unifed with frequent practice and 
generous eommendation will enable the child fo acquire 
clearness without saerifieing spontaneify. 

4 



CHAPTER VI 

SUITABLE MATERIAL 

CHOICE OF SUBJECTS 

A :IATTER of cardinal importance is the selection of 
material. It is through the organization and the expres- 
siou of the subject that the child receives his language 
training. The success of the training depcnds largely 
upon thc eff,»rt and the interest natural]y ca]led forth by 
the subject. From the child's point of view, the two 
essential features of a suitable subject are familiarity and 
attractiveness. The prime requisite for expression is 
abundant and clcar knowledge. Vae ideas must needs 
resu]t in crude, faulty expression; while clearness and ful- 
ness of expression can spring only from clear and abundant 
conceptions. It is not the aire «)f composition to require 
the child to seek for new or original ideas as a necessary 
preparation. Rather it seeks fo have him give suitable 
expression to the thoughts that arise naturally and with- 
out mu«h reflection from the situations in his own lire. 
The choice of topics should depend largely on what the 
teacher knows about his individual pupils--their interests, 
their abilities, their knowledge, their experiences. It 
follows that no text-book can make choice of subjects which 
would be suited to all schools alike; moreover no one topic 
selected even by a teacher fully acquainted with his pupils 
will make appeal fo ail alike. Yet the latter is the only 
safe plan to follow, and if emphasizes the need of knowing 
pupils as an essential for teaching them successfully. 
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CHOICE OF SUBJECTS 41 

Yet merely to have knowledge of a matter may not 
awaken a desire for expression. Stimulus fo utterance 
springs chiefly ïrom two motives--interest in the subje¢.t 
and having some definite purpose in view. Onl)" through 
these two influences can the child's mind be aroused fo full 
activity, resulting in suitable expression. As a rule, itis 
hot difiïcult fo induce him to talk or fo write about his 
home life and occupations--his gaines, his sports, his 
animal pers, his companions--for about ail thcse he has 
knowledge gained tbrough observation, and moreover they 
are centres of deep interest. The effort rcquired to tell 
about these familiar things will stimulate ïurther observa- 
tion and thought in their regard. Talking or writing 
about these things in school will hot seem strange or diflï- 
cuit, since itis in line with what he does out of sehool. To 
secure fluent, natural discourse much thou,ht must, then, 
be given fo the choice of topi«.s. 
Yet as no one topic will appeal equally to every member 
of the class, if is well, occasionally, to allow individual 
choice, especially in the higher gradcs. Anv notable event 
in the school or the communitv offers a valuable oppor- 
tunitv for oral class treatment and subsecluent writing-- 
all will have ideas though these will hot be identical. The 
season of the year. the approach of av festival or holiday. 
will dictate the choiee of tolics we|l suited fo each. Just 
before Christmas, junior pupils will feel mu«h interested 
in writing letters fo Santa Claus or in telling what they 
expect to do at that rime. ,qome children have a somewhat 
keen sense of humour, and from rime to rime this might 
be given vent through the topie suggested; for example, 
"The Funniest Story I Know". Sometimes a pathetic 
incident may be suggested, though usually this does hot 
reeeive satisfaetory treatment. An unfinished story or 



42 COMPOSITION 

incident offers opportunity for incorporating original work 
along with mere reproduction and gives a pleasing varia- 
tion. Though sul)ordinate fo knowledge and interest in 
the choice of topics, yet variety is not fo be overlooked. 
As a rule, the more definite and restrictcd the topic the 
better. No .voun cbi]d is capable of treating successfully 
such a subje«t as " Friendship ", " Canada ", "Railways " 
or " Indian Life". IIe realizes that the fie]d is too vast 
Given such a subje«t he can neither collect nor arrange 
his ïew ideas satisfactorily. Af best he is prone fo 
wander, and with such general topics to treat he would 
fee] bimse]f he]p]ess. To prevent wandering and the in- 
troduction of irrelevant matter, the subjects shou]d be 
limitcd and the mattcr organized in oral class discussion. 
Pul)i]s who could hot well write on the subject of " Dogs" 
«r even on the narrowed one, " What Dogs are Good for ", 
might often show creditable results on more circumscribed 
topics su(.h as, " What mv D«,g Fido «n Do ", or êven 
better, " How Fido Caught a Squirrel". Even the proper 
wording of the title is worth consideration. The assign- 
ment, " What I Could De» with Ten Dollars " would prob- 
ablv make a stronger appeal fo pupils than, "'What I 
W«,uld Like fo Have ". Good results should be expected 
from limiting tbe subje[.t and making if attractive. 
There might well be a greater variety of subjects in 
most schools. Though in early years stories offer the best 
material, yet there is a tendency fo use them practically 
fo the exclusion of other desirable material. The use of 
pictures should be more general, sincê this implies good 
training in observing and in organizing. For a like reason, 
nature study should be drawn upon more genêrally, as 
well as the various forms of activity that interest childrên, 
for examl)lc , the work of the ldacksmith. 



CHOICE OF SUBJECTS 43 

The f«)llowing list may I)e found hc]pful i sue.tm_ 
new types of lcsson assignments: 
(a) What scene is recalled to you on hearing (1 "Pom, 
pom, pull away", (2) "Shinny on your ovn side", (3) 
" Three out, ail out "? 
(b) Describe the scene recalled by these words: '«Street- 
piano, children, monkey". Tell other things that fill in your 
picture. 
(c) Look out of the window for one minute and then tell 
clearly what you see. 
(d) Imagine you see your home now; tell who are there 
and what each is probably doing. 
(e) How I ruade a kite and what happened to it. 
(I) A tramp came to our house; tell how he was dressed 
and what he said. 
(g) Tell a friend who has never been at your home how 
to reach it from the station. 
(h) Without naming the person, describe one of your class- 
mates so as to show who is meant. 
(i) A little boy fell into the river; tell how this happened 
and how he was saved. 
(]) Your dog has been lost; write a short advertisement 
describing him clearly and offering a reward for his return. 
(k) Write a challenge for a gaine of hockey, to be sent to 
another school. 
(l) Describe your father as he appears at his usual em- 
ployment; make the description so clear that an artist would 
be able to paint him. 
(m) Three boys have twenty-five cents each; tell how each 
probably got the money and how he will spend it. 
(n) Imagine that you were chased by a bear; tell how you 
escaped. 
(o) You traded your jack-knife for another boy's rabbit. 
Describe what took place, giving the conversation in fuIl. 



4 4 COMPOSITION 

STORIES 

For junior classes, ail the requirements as to desirable 
material are best fulfilled I,y suitable stories. To a greater 
extent than any other s«hool exercises, they cultivate atten- 
tion, develop hoth thought and its expression through 
language, and lay the foundation of right literary faste. 
In stories we bave the oldest mode of transmitted culture 
and thê most formativê for the young. A good story is 
first and t'hicflv a work of art designed to gie pleasurê, 
and through this to awakên and feed thê mind. Thêrê 
follows a relaxing of the rigid school tension with happier 
relatious estal,lished betwêên têacher and children, and a 
growth of unwavering attention. In the lower grades it 
is not merely an opportunity, but an obligation. 
The êssêntial qualities of good stories should bê well 
recognized. Thev should bê easily within the child's grasp, 
trulv ehildlike, and full of fancy, yet not childish. The 
prime requisite is at.tion : the happenings having close, 
inevitahle sequence, with little explanation or description, 
so as to hold the interest without flagging. The events 
should be those of everyday life, but in a new and attractive 
setting, often with a touch of the marvellous. The child's 
imagination can construct new worlds only out of materials 
alreadv familiar; images wholly strange confuse the child 
and dull the interest. 
There should be no ugly, harrowing scenes, though the 
(.haracters need not all be virtuous, since the punishment 
meted out fo wrong-doers is often a valuable lesson. Those 
first told should contain a fair amount of repetition, 
serving in part the saine purpose as the burden or the 
chorus in music, arousing pleasurable anticipation, and 
aiding memory and expression. The story may bave an 
ethical or oesthetic value: but pleasure rather than instruc- 



STORIES 45 

tion is the leading consideration. The chief tests to apply 
are: Is the story full of action in natural scqucnce? Arc 
the pictures simple, but hot humdrum? Do they give 
rhythmic iteration of significant words and phrases? Good 
stories have a lasting value, ever soliciting repetition, and 
thus becoming a permanent possession of the child. Care 
should be taken fo choose a good version of the best tradi- 
tional tales. 
There are several types of suitable stories--the fairy- 
tale, the myth and fable, the nature story, the nonsense 
story, the hi.torical tale, the Bible story. The nmst valu- 
able in the lowest grades are the fairy-tale and the myth .-- 
the delight of many gencrations in all lands. These 
expand the imagination, exhibit many t)q0es of human 
experience, implant moral principles through the exercise 
of the child's judaaacnt on persons and situations, and 
cultivate a faste for the best literature. The child fully 
realizes that this is make-believe, but then he escapes from 
the perplexities of the real world and dwells for the rime 
in a realm of fancy, where all things are ordered as they 
should be. 
The fairy story is by some condcmned because it is hot 
literal truth. To this Gradgrind objection Professor Laurie 
replies as follows: " If suffices here naerely to point out 
that the imagination contributes largely fo the growth, 
culture, and enrichment of the mind; that if bas fo be 
taken advantage of by the educator, who respects law 
'herever he finds if. I wou/¢] furtber sav that 
what applies fo children applies a fortiori fo the adult; 
and that fiction, the drama, and art ought in consistency 
to be excluded from all lire by those who would deny the 
unreaI to children ". 



46 COMPOSITION 

Likewise Charles Kingsley makes an eloquent plea for 
their generous use in school. "' The old fairy superstitions, 
the old legends and ballads, the old chronicles of feudal 
war and chivalry--these were the foot of Shakespeare's 
poetic tree---they must be the roof of any literary education 
which can teach us to appreciate him. They fed Shake- 
speare's youth; why should thev not feed out children's? 
Why, indeed? That inborn delight of the young in all 
that is marvellous and fantastic--has that a merely evil 
foot? No, surely! It is a most pure part of their spiritual 
nature; a part of ' the heaven which lies about us in our 
infancy'; angel-wings with which the child leaps the 
prison-walls of sense and custom, and the drudgery of 
earthly life." 
Nor should the great value of the fairy-tale for style 
be overlooked. Certain of the best fairy stories are among 
the highest literary types available for children; their 
simplicity, imagery, and strength take strong hold of the 
listeners. 
Simple, like the fairy-taIe, the mvth displa.vs force and 
action, wherein the other is often Iacking. From an 
oesthetie point of view, a knowledge of some of the classie 
m3oEhs is most desirable. Without such acquaintanee an 
appreeiation of nmch of the best in poetry and art is 
impossible. ToId in a simple, spirited way, they kindle 
the youthful imagination. Dea]in. as they do, with a 
more primitive soeietv than that of to-day, they appeal 
more readilv t the ehild's limited powers of moral judg- 
ment. Celtie folklore and legends are the basis of mueh 
of our fairy literature, indeed of considerable of the 
romantic literature of Europe. 
Xonsense stries incIude eunmlative stories of the f.xTe 
of The House Tlat Jacte BuiIt. Though ehildren do not 



STORIES 47 

always have as lively a sense of humour as adults, they 
ncarly all enjoy kcenly certain funny tales that catch their 
fancy. Such stories tend to makc the school-room a me,re 
joyous place, besides imparting useful lessons in a pleasant 
way. Wrong tendencies or bchaviour are hot infrequently 
set right through kindly satire. These whimsical tales 
need not be many, rather they should be carefully chosen. 
Historical tales arouse the feeling of connection with 
the past, giving life to bygone scenes and persons, and 
calling forth ideas of hero-worship and patriotism. 
arousing generous admiration for noble deeds, the desire 
to emulate them naturally follows, and some of the child's 
noblest impulses are thus awakened. The strong influence 
of the greatest and noblest of mankind in ail ages and 
lands may thus be ruade fo minister to the uplifting of 
the little child. Such stories are needed when the child 
has outgrown the fairy-tale and demand. true stories. 
"Stories of wise and honest statesmanship, of struggle 
with pioneer conditions, of generous love and sacrifice, 
and--in some measure--of physical courage, forma subtle 
and powerful influence for pride in one's people, the ilmate 
sense of kinship with one's own nation, and the desire to 
serve it in one's own time." 
Like all dreamers, the child is a poet and, when clearly 
and sympathetically told, simple stories in verse are wel- 
corne to him, especially when the music and rh)oEhm are 
prominent. For ever)- stage of development there can be 
round in poetry appropriate literary food and training. 
The delight in verse effects is well known, but unanalys- 
able; and those who are charged with the training of the 
young for wise living should early begin to fill their minds 
with incorruptible stores of good poetry. "" Babes love 
the sound of it, youth passionatvly delights in it, age 



48 COMPOSITION 

remembers if gladly ; it helps memory, purifies and steadies 
language, and guards elocution." 
Fable and folklore corne down from the childhood of 
the world, and are every child's rightïul heritage. They 
take hold of the hearts of the young by their eternal youth, 
their simplicity, and their daring flights of fancy. They 
anaply ïulfil their mission when they store in the mind a 
great truth, a universal experience, or a noble thought. 
Taken ail in ail, Hans Andersen's are the best of the 
fairy tales. Old and young alike are attracted by their 
artlcssness, their quaint humour, and sound sense. Certain 
stories of the Grimm collection, those least fantastic and 
barbarous, are well suited for school use; but many of the 
tales are too harrowing and tragic, leaving only sad 
impressions. 

FIOW TO TELL STORIES 

Many stories require some adaptation fo meet the needs 
of a class. If too brieï, a story may be judiciously ex- 
panded; if too long, subordinate events or diffuse descrip- 
tions may be abridged, while trivial details or unimportant 
personages are omitted. But the author's style and mode 
of relating the story should be respected, unless the teacher 
have superior language power. Two extremes may well 
be avoided : a rigid adherence fo the book phraseology, and 
a rash, ill-considered originality. The first, by representing 
the teacher's sense of freedom and responsibility, makes the 
work ïormal and ineffective; the second probably lessens 
the value of the story as a work of art. In any case, there 
must be some strong, felicitous utterances which will 
naturally be seized upon, used by the teacher, and repeated 
by the children. 



HOW TO TELL STORIES 49 

The story hour should be for the junior classes the most 
attractive of the dav. For the language instruction fo be 
of benefit, if should conle when the chiblren's forces are 
yet bright and active. The stories should be t,»ld, hot 
read, else much of their value is lost ; the magnetism of the 
eye, the music of the speaking voice, the appropriate 
gesture or facial expression, are of the greatest importance 
in impressing children. Besicles, the story, when read, 
seems less real than when clearly and engagingly told. 
Now the art of story-telling is not so much a natural 
gift as an acquisition ; those who succeed best are hot fluent 
talkers, but sound thinkcrs, able fo knit their clear ideas 
and experiences into connected thought and give it lucid 
expression. Upon adequate presentation everything de- 
pends--the children's grasp, liking, and suitable reproduc- 
tion. For the listeners the story must be ruade fo lice, and 
this makes demands upon the tea«.her's best powers. No 
child can reproduce a thought not understood, nor can any 
teaeher e.xpect fo make others sec as clearly or fo feel as 
deeply as he does himself. 
Effective story-telling demands careful preparation. 
The storv or poem should make a stron appeal fo the 
teacher, else there will be no genuine appreciation of it 
by the children. Individual teachers have different types 
of story which they can handle most effectively, but the 
elass preferences should always be considered. A first 
requisite is that the teacher should know the story: he 
must be toaster of ail details, must see vividly ifs persons, 
scenes, and incidents and fully realize the feelings and 
passions of the actors. Indee«l, there is little difference 
between the demands ruade upon a good story-teller and 
those ruade upon a good player. There must be no repeti- 
tion, no pausing fo recall an incident or a forgotten ex- 



50 COMPOSITION 

pression, no going back fo insert an omitted link--all being 
common weaknesses due fo defective knowledge. Iere 
mcchanical memorization is hot enough; the story must 
be analysed, the imp,,rtance of the various parts and their 
relations clearly scen, and a vivid appreciation of the 
climax gained. Then if should be rehearsed, sometimes 
inaudibly, sometimes aloud, ever with critical watchful- 
ness; finally, if may bc told to an imanary audience. 
Thus carefullv prepared, the storv should be as familiar 
as a personal experience; since no effort wi]l be required 
fo recall if, all attention may be given to securing effective 
reproduction. 
The childrcn should be near the teacher, and so placed 
that he can see every one clearlv and be easily seen by 
them in turn. A hushed expectation should await the 
beginning. Af the very .¢tart, call up thc pervading 
feeling of the story, so that the ehildren may at once 
catch ifs spirit. Thc telling should be simple, without 
affectation or posing, so that attention may not be diverted 
from the story fo the narrator. Of great importance is 
directness--an unimpcdcd, rapid movement, with ever- 
increasing interest till the climax is reached. As a rule, 
cxplanations and moralizing are out of place. The im- 
portant points are brevity, logical sequence, unhalting 
speech. 
Suitable gesture, facial expression, and bodily attitude, 
a simple acting out of parts of the story, will greatly in- 
crease its effectiveness. Especially to young children, who 
are themselves given to dramatic expression, does this make 
a strong appeal. They are learning through the eye as well 
as the ear. On the teacher's part it requires sympathy, 
freedom from sclf-consciousness, and intellectual insight, 
what he tells he must first see. 



HOW TO TELL STORIES 51 

Ability fo draw easily on the black-board is here of 
much value. Sketches, even though somewhat crude, aid 
greatly in giving ready and definite ideas of persons, 
scenes, or events. This mode of illustration not only in- 
terests by its varicty of method, but if saves tilne and 
long e]escription, besicles making the impression more 
vivid. Considerable practice may be needed fo. acquire 
the requisite boldness and freedom for such work. But 
the effort will be well repaie], since children will readily 
adopt the saine practice, for naturally they use drawing 
as a mode of expression. Pictures, if simple, artistic, and 
large enough to be clearlv seen, are a]so an effective means 
of adding interest ane] clearness fo the telling. These 
shoule] be carefully studied by the teacher, introduced af 
the right moment, but regarded as quite subordinate fo 
the story itself. There is greater educative value in the 
- teacher's black-board sketches, e]eveloped as they are under 
the watchful e.ves of the children. 
The teacher should be interested in his own story and 
shoule] tell it with zest. Little value attaches fo the best 
story, the telling of which does lmt give joy to the narrator. 
His feelings will naturally be reflected by his hearers, so 
sensitive fo every impression. Onlv life and interest tan 
beget lire and interest. Even if tired and worried, the 
teacher should e]o his best to feel interested; making- 
believe fo the best of one's ability will usually result in 
real interest. 
The language should be simple, direct, expressive, 
springing naturally from facts and pictures in the teacher's 
tnind. His aim is fo make such facts and /mages equally 
real fo the chile]'s mine], chiefly by the skilful use of words. 
If is of mueh value fo use direct discourse; this aids life 
and movement and ade]s vivacity. The simplest grain- 



52 COMPOSITION 

matical structure is advisable, involved structure and in- 
versions being strictly slmnned. Affectation in voiee or 
carelessness in enunciation slould alike be avoided. A clear, 
gentle, well-modulated voice does mueh to make the story 
understood and appreciated. The thoughtful reading of 
some works by such great story-tellers as Seott, Diekens, 
Defoe, Macaulay, Irving. Hawthorne, Kingsley, and Homer 
will aid the teacher fo sec how narrative and description 
are ruade fascinating. 
Itis often helpful to prepare a clear outline of the 
]eading points of a story, especially of the longer stories 
for the Third and Fourth years. As the narrative pro- 
ceeds, these headings, placed on the board, aid tire mind 
in getting a survey of what has been told ; and, for repro- 
duction, they hold the pupils fo the main facts in close, 
logical ordcr. Lacking such helps, the reeital may be eon- 
fused and fragmentary, for coherency in narration is diffi- 
cult for children. 
The essential qualifications of the storv-teller mav be 
stmmed up as simplieity and clearness in ideas and in 
language, along with an interested, attractive manner. 
The object of this exercise is hot fo develop skilful 
narration by the teacher, but instëad to train the pupils, 
through interest and attention, fo think and fo speak 
clearly and effectivelv. (iood telling is the chier stimulus 
for retelling; therefore the success of the teacher's re- 
lating is measured bv the standard of the children's re- 
production. The strong instinct of imitation will cause 
them fo give ba«k, hot merely the facts, but also the very 
spirit and manner of the teller. For the youngest classes, 
the teaeher's reiteration of the first stories in an unvarying 



HOW TO TELL TORIES 53 

ferre is important for fixing iii their menlory both the 
ideas and the language. Indeed, such children dcric 
great pleasure frein hearing favourite tales in prose or 
verse told over and over again. Usually it is advisable 
te have the first reproductions given by the brightest 
children, whose language powers are the best. Yct the 
shy or dull chihlrcl lnust net l»e overlooked. What they 
chiefly need is encouragcment. The rctelling of good 
stories well undcrstood givcs childrcn mueh plea.ure. They 
will enjoy such an excrcise at home with appreciative 
listeners. 
Though the first attempts af retelling may be weak 
and clunlsy, each child lnu.t be spurrcd on te his highest 
endeavours. It i.5 nlost inlportant that chi]dren shou]d 
receive littlc direct help through prolnpting or sugges- 
tions; rather they should frein the start be thrown larely 
upon their resources. Where a ]lih standard is set, and 
the teacher is rigorous though kindly in his demands, 
children will gradually corne te grasp clearly and express 
accuratelv the stories thus t«,]d. The teacher's lnistaken 
help would dcfeat the very object of the exercise. 
After the retelling of the story, the children should be 
encouraged te depict bv rough drawing their ideas of parts 
that appeal te them. They have a natural aptitude for 
such means of expression, and this often reveals their con- 
ceptions more clearly than could words. Seine variety is 
afforded by the cutting of silhouette pictures. When the 
teacher sers the examp]e and offers encouragement, if will 
be easy te interest the children in this work. 
Consult: How te Tel! 8tories te Children by Sara Cone 
Bryant, Houghton, Miffiin Company, Boston, $1.00; and The 
Art o! the ti«tory-teller by Marie L. Shedlock, D. Appleton & 
Company, New York, $1.50. 



54 COMPOSITION 

DRABIATIZATION 

(f probably greater importance than either of the fore- 
going is the playing of the story. While yet the children 
are aglow with the pleasure of the tale, they are asked 
to volunteer for the various roles. Costumes and scenery 
are no more neces,ary than in Shakespeare's day--the 
strong make-believe instinct is enough. Upon the children 
is placed the chier responsibility for carrying out the play 
successfullv. Yct when a child does poorly, the teacher 
may offer suggestions, though rarely taking any active 
part in the representation. Various sers of actors are per- 
nlitted fo try on different days. This simple dramatiza- 
tion re,u]ts in improvement in attention, in oral reading, 
and in the gencral power of expression. It gives the best 
«pportunity fo be.ŒEEet or foster right habits of voice culture, 
since the children are anxiou. fo make the most favourable 
impression on their interested audience. 

As an example of dramatizati«)n, the fable of The Sun 
and the Wind may be given as follows: 
Wind. I ara the Wind and I ara stronger than you. 
Sun. I ara the Sun and I know I ara the stronger. 
Winà. I tan blow down trees. 
Sun. I tan dry up streams and rivers. 
Wind. I turn windmills and make big ships go over the 
sea. 
un. I melt the show and ice and make people keep in the 
shade. 
ïnd. See, here cornes a traveller with a warm ¢loak on. 
Let us try who can make him take it off. The dne 
• ho does this is the stronger. Are you willing? 
Sun. Yes, I ara willing. You may try first. 
Wind. Wh ! Wh ! Wh.' 0oo, Oo---oo---wh.' 
Traveller. How hard it blows: I must hold my «loak 
tight or it ill be blown off. 



PICTURES 55 

Wind. Oo--oo---oo--oh! Why, the harder I blow the 
tighter he holds his cloak! 
8un. Now it is my turn. Stand aside, Wind, so that I can 
shine on him. 
Traveller. How warm it is! This cloak is now too heavy, 
so, off it goes! 
Wind. I see, O Sun, that you are the stronger. 
un. That is because I use gentle means. 

PICTURES 
Since nearly a]l children delight in seeing them and 
are easily led fo talk about them, pictures afford one of 
the most interesting and instructive means for aiding 
language development. The study of good pictures not 
only leads into the realm of the beautiful, fostering a 
faste for art, but if develops a habit of observation, appeals 
fo the imagination, and encourages ready expression. 
Especially for ifs beneficent influence on artistic appre- 
ciation and on the vocabulary and general language form, 
is this class of material worthy of due consideration. 
Certain principles should guide one in making choice 
of pictures for this purpose. They should be adapted 
fo the child's stage of development, and not deal with 
subjects beyond the range of his understanding and ex- 
perience. For Junior classes they might well depict child 
or animal lire, or af least some phase of life more or less 
familiar fo the young. The subject, too, shou]d make 
an appeal fo their interests. For this if is needful that 
if represent life and action, including some " touch of 
nature which makes the whole world kin ". It is best 
when if suggests some simple story. A picture that is 
merely descriptive seldom makes an effective appeal fo 
children. A beautiful landscape, lacking the human 
element, elicits from the class but a catalogue of the 
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56 COMPOSITION 

objects dcpicted--a mountain, much snow, great rocks, 
some clouds, etc. Young children are too immature to 
appreciate the purely artistic stimulus of such pictures. 
For them the human element--life, action, the sugges- 
tion of a simple story--is needed to arouse interest and 
evoke suitable expression. 
According fo the wealth and depth of our ex- 
perience are we able to use the picture as a bridge 
of communication between our own soul and that of 
the artist. Show a child of six such a picture as 
Millet's " Angelus" and he will see in it a man and 
a woman, a wheel-barrow, a basket, and a fork. 
Probably he will enumerate all these; perhaps only 
the man, the woman, and the wheel-barrow. That is 
all the pieture mcans fo him. A child of twelve will 
give a fuller description of the visible features repre- 
sented. Ho will see the field, will note the dress, 
attitudes, and relative positions of the figures; he 
may remark that it is sunset. He may possibly notice 
the colour-tone of the whole. Further than this the 
ordinary child will not go; further than this many 
an adult cannot advance. But to the seeing eye the 
picture means much more than this; indeed, it does 
hot mea, this at all. It means simple-hearted de- 
votion sweetening arduous and humble toil ; it means 
all the glorious spiritual richness of Christianity.-- 
PIOF. J. WELTOç" 
The picture itself should not be common or tawdry, 
but artistic. A picture in colours is naturally more 
attractive than one in black and white only. Yet it should 
not attract tno much attention to itself, since the aim is 
fo awaken thought which will seek" fitting expression 
through language. If is important also that the picture 



PICTURES 57 

be one not already familiar to the pupils. Fortunately 
there is a wealth of suitable material which can now be 
obtained at but small cost.* 
For the first lessons, the picture should be large enough 
to be clearly seen by all the pupils as they are grouped 
near by. As a necessary preparation, the teacher should 
make a careful study of the picture, fo have definitely in 
mind the story to be developed and the line of questioning 
to secure this. Before the picture is shown, it is well 
fo have a brief talk or discussion to arouse curio.ity and 
to lead fo a keen, purposeful examination. The picture 
should not have too many points of interest, as attention 
would become scattered. After silent studv by the class, 
the iïrst questions should deal with the picture as a whole 
and the story it tells. Details corne aftcrwards The 
questioning should have an orderly basis, leading the 
pupils fo get a clear conception, resulting in a well-knit 
description. With Seniors, a written description should 
ensue, following the outlines devcloped in the oral narra- 
tion. Juniors would give merely a connected oral account 
of what the picture means for them. 
The various steps mav be thus summarized : 
1. Careful study by the teacher 
2. Preliminary talk fo awaken interest 
3. Presentation and intense study of the picture 
4. Oral description of the piç.ture as a whole and of 
ifs chier features considered in natural sequence 
5. Connected account given by various pupils 
6. A written description following the oral outline. 
*See Educational Pamphlet No. 5, List of Reproàuctions 
of Works of Art. 191}. issued by the Ontario Department of 
Education. It contains a classified list of works suitable for 
study and decoration, and a list of Publishers. 



58 COMPOSITION 

By way of illustration, the treatment of a well-known 
picture, '" Blowing Bubbles ", might be considered. As 
an introduction, the class might be asked about some 
pleasant ways of spending a rainy afternoon indoors, 
naming one that would give enjoyment fo little ones un- 
able fo run about or take part in an active gaine. Inquiry 
might be ruade as fo those who had ever tried blowing soap 
bubbles. Then they are told that the picture they are to 
see shows how a great artist has depicted his little son 
enjoying a favourite pastime. Now the picture is shown 
and, after a brief examination of if, the teacher questions 
as follows: " What is the chier thing you see in the pic- 
ture ? What is the boy doing ? How old does he seem fo 
be ? Is he rich or poor ? Tell why you think so. Would 
you like to know him ? Why ? Why does he sit so still ? 
ttow does he seem fo like the sport? What do you notice 
about the bubbles? lIow do you make them? How do 
you like the amusement? Now tell all the story" 

LANGUAGE BOOKS 

Language books are frequently of very great help, 
especia]ly to inexperieneed teachers in ungraded schools. 
They have value in outlining a definite course for the 
various grades and, at rimes, in indicating a method of 
presentation. They give illustrations of friendly and 
business letters, and of business forms, serviceable alike 
fo teacher and pupils. Usually they present suitable 
material in the shape of stories, poems, and pictures. In 
addition, they contain many and varied exercises for 
language drill. 
But most of them haTe serious defects, perhaps the 
chier being the emphasis laid on the formal side. Often 
they have been used fo provide "busy work", largely 



LANGUAGE BOOKS 5 

mechanical and lacking in interest or motive. This has 
contributed fo make language seem a thing unrelated to 
thoughtAa matter essentially formal and abstract; for 
example, "hlake a sentence îrom these words: pound, 
are, in, sixteen, a, there, ounces". Af times the t)'pes 
of exercises are very poor, even bringing wholly wrong 
forms fo the pupils' attention; for example, "Write the 
following sentence, using capitals and a period, 'His 
father had fo take george fo dr. king'". Somctimes 
these books insult the child's intelligence by trivial and 
uninteresting exercises; for example, "Fill in these 
blanks: The clock ; reads". The children can- 
hot afford fo waste rime and effort on such futile tasks. 
Many of the exercises are simply tests in spelling; for 
e.xample, "Choose the right word: The (knew, new) 
teacher will be (here, hear) to-day". Very frequently, 
too, the lan-age book directs too much attention fo the 
use of que»ration marks, contractions, and abbreviations, 
direct and indirect narrations, etc. 
It is well for a teacher to have some useful language 
books from which fo obtain varied material and sugges- 
tions as fo its effective use. But teachers should not be 
dominated by these books. They need other sources from 
which fo draw stories and poems; they might with ad- 
vantage keep a hook for clippings îrom newspapers or 
periodicals, or for suggestions as to suitable topics. In 
senior grades, the pupils might be encoura,ed fo give aid 
in making a collection of useîul material. 



CHAPTER ¥II 

LETTER-WRITING 

I.MPORTANCE OF LETTER-WII, ITI-N'O 

THERE IS danger that written composition may be re- 
garded by pupils as a purely formal exercise, having little 
relation to the demands of actual life. Comparatively few 
persons ever employ the more formal and elaborate types 
of composition, such as narraties or essays; but every- 
body bas frequent occasion fo write letters. Therefore, 
as the commonest ïorm of written expression, and as en- 
couraging originality and self-reliance, letter-writing 
should be taken early in the Course and should receive 
much attention in every grade. The pupil receives invi- 
tations whi«h must be acknowledged; fr.m relatives at a 
distance corne letters calling for answers; there may be 
challenges from rival school teams fo be accepted or 
declined. The letter, too, is valuable because, as the most 
intimate and personal form of written expression, if 
develops the pupil's individualiv. He writes directlv fo 
some one who is interested in what he has fo sav; there 
is thus a strong motive calling forth his best efforts. 

THE FRIEXDL¥ LETTER 
The confidence and full co-operation of the pupils 
must be obtained before we can secure freedom and 
naturalness in this branch of the work. It is best to begin, 
therefore, with the friendlv letter, as the form freest from 
what is formal or constrained. In the second or third 
s«hool year, after the teacher has discussed the marrer with 
6o 



THE FRIENDLY LETTER 61 

the class with the aid of nmdels on the board, the pupils 
may write short ,rotes to mother or father, to one another, 
to the teacher, to Sa,ta Claus, etc. These letters may 
well omit some of the conventionalities required in later 
years, their chief value being in the free expression of the 
pupil's ideas. Such a form as the ïollowing might be 
expected : 
"Dear Mamma, 
I like to play ball. 
I like to go to school. 
I think of you verv often. 
Your little girl, 
Rose ". 
The first ]etters in junior grades shou]d usua|]y dea| 
with but one subject, so that paragraphing is hot required. 
Pupi]s might write to father or mother for something they 
wish to get--a do]L a pair of skates, etc. They shou|d 
evcr remember to thil, k of the person to wholn they are 
writing, and to say what they consider the person wou]d 
like to hear, and to say if as if they were acua]]y speaking. 
If is of the first importance to have them, as ear]y as pos- 
sible, write their ]etters on note-paper, address the enve]ope, 
and send the ]etter. Such ]etters may be ext.hanged among 
pupils in the saine or in different rooms. Soon, however, 
they may be sent, sav once a month, through the mai] ; in 
some schoo]s correspondence is regu]ar]y carried on with 
pupi]s ai a considerab]e dislance, perhaps in other coun- 
tries. The schoo] shouM carry on the work a]ong the most 
interesting and practi«.a] lines. 
The charm of the friend]y ]etter lies in its nalura]ness. 
One should keep in mind the ind}viduality of lhe person 
addressed and try io communicale clear}v and pleasan]y 
vha such a person vou]d ]ike fo hear. The sy]e of the 



62 COMPOSITION 

letter should resemblc that of interesting conversation. 
When too stiff or studied in tone, such a letter is dull and 
ïails fo give pleasure. Yet if should not become-too in- 
ïormal, using slang, or cutting expressions short--in a 
word, there shou]d be no indications oï baste or careless- 
ness. The language should be carefully considered, proper 
sentence and paragraph structure should be observed, the 
rules for capitalizing and punctuation should be ïollowed. 
The friendly letter should be ]egible, clear, and courteous; 
it should show care and good taste in all points, and yet 
not appear studied or artificial. 

PARTS OF TIIE LETTER 
In the fourth school year, the pup}]s should know all 
the points o be observed in wr}t}ng simple friendly letters. 
But the teacher shou}d avod too great attention to these 
forma] points to the neglect of the thought; the matter, 
hot the Ïorm, is oÏ greatest importance. It is we]] to 
train pupils to give the address and the date properly, 
using two or three lines, iÏ need be, fo avoid crowding. 
The headng of a ]etter shows the place from which 
if was written and the date of writing, both matters of 
importance when an answer is fo be sent. If the writer 
lires in a city, the bouse number and the street should 
appear on the first line, the city and province on the 
sec«md, and the date on the third. Euch of these lines 
should begin a litt]e farther fo the right than the one 
above it. The period should nmrk anv abbreviation as 
Are., Ont.  a cçmma shouh] fol}ow the bouse address, the 
naine oÏ the city, and the month ; a per}od marks the close. 
In addressing persons who bave titles, for exampl 
]%v., ]on., Dr., no two ti]es having the saine meaning 
shou]d be used; Dr. Henry Pike, hOt Dr. Henry Pike, 



PARTS OF THE LTER 63 

M.D., nor Mr. George P9ole, Esq. Yet if one does hot 
know the initials of a clergyman, if is proper fo write, 
The Rev. Mr. Ormonde. All persons have some title; if 
hot Capt., Dr., etc., if is ]Ir., Mrs., or Miss; this should 
never be omitted from the address. The address is at the 
left and begins one line below the last line of the heading. 
This should give (a) the naine and title of thc person 
written fo, and (b) on a line below, his post-oflïce and 
province, if the latter is hot the one in which the writer 
lires. Should the one addressed lire in a city, his house 
number and street shouhl appear on a line al)ove the la.t. 
The salutation should be found one line below the 
last of the address. The proper form depends upon the 
relations existing |»etween the writer and the one 
addressed. A business letter wou|d begin with " Dear 
Sir', an oflïcial letter with " Sir', a friendlv note with 
'" Dear Mr. Halcutt". Present usage holds that the salu- 
tation, '" My dear Mr. Orville", implies a less degree of 
intimacy than, " Dear Mr. Orville "; the former is, there- 
fore, to be preferred when writing to a comparative 
stranger but. when writing to a friend, " Mv dear Johu " 
is intended to express intimacv. Unless it stands first in 
the salutation, the w«,rd "dear" i.¢ hot capitalized; but 
the terre " Sir" or "Iadam" or whatever the leading 
word of the salutation may be, alwavs takes a capital letter. 
The punctuation following the salutation varies. ]Iany 
good writers use a comma and dash ; but the colon is recog- 
nized as equally correct. The form. "Gentlemen', is 
usuallv reserved for letters fo business firms, the oflïcers of 
an institution, etc., rather than for purely business letters. 
In beginning the letter, there should be no need of 
making apologies; if is best fo be punctual in acknow- 
ledging correspondence. There is no place for such pre- 



64 COMPOSITION 

liminaries as, "I take my pen in hand", or "I ara 
thinking of 'riting to you ". Without sueh useless intro- 
duetions, begin at once with 'hat you have fo say. Simi- 
larly, 'hen you have finished, close the letter without 
giving as a reason for so doing that the nmil will soon 
be co]leeted. It is equally out of place fo say, after stating 
that vou are well, that you "' hope this will find you the 
saine". Ail introductory excuses or apologies and all 
hackneved phrases seriously impair the tone of these 
friendlv messages. 
In all 'ritten c«,mmuuications, pupils should be trained 
to give tbe greatest attention to tbe body of the letter, 
for thi. is the letter proper, the other parts being but the 
sctting. 
The complimentary ending begius about the middle 
of the first line below the body of the letter. In reality it 
i¢ an abbreviated sentence; "" .incerely yours ", means "" I 
ara sincerelv vours". (hm must tberefore sec that the 
rules of grammatical construction are not violated. Cn- 
struetions such as the following are thên fo be strictly 
avoided: '" Hoping to hear from you soon, Yours truly, 
ete."; " Awaiting an earlv reply, Bclieve me, Yours sin- 
cerely, etc.". " Rêspectfully yours" is a form reserved 
for petitions, for public, or very formal letters. Care 
should be taken to have the ending in keeping with the 
salutation. If the letter begins vith " Sir", it should 
n,,t close with "Cordially yours "; or if the salutation is 
"Dear Mr..:[oyce", tbe ending should hot be " 5[ost re- 
spectfully yours". The two should be nicely adjusted. 
The address on the envelope should be so plain as to 
be unmistakal,le; indeed every pupil should be impressed 
with the need of rigidly observing all matters of good 
u,age in addressing envelopes. The directions appearing 
on the envelope are the only guide the various officials 



THE BUSINESS LETTER 65 

have as fo the right destination of the letter. It is esti- 
rnated that in the United States there go each year fo the 
Dead Letter Office rive million letters, containing about 
ten million dollars. They are sent there because they are 
illegibly or incompletely addressed, or clsc lack any 
address. The narne should be written near thc centre of 
the envelope; the other iterns should be placed exactly 
as in the address. It is usual to ptmctuate as in the 
address. 
THE BUSINESS LE'IER 
In several rcspects thê business letter differs frorn the 
friendly letter. A bu.¢iness communication should have 
these essentials--clearness, conciseness, and courtesy. The 
writer shc,uhl avoid all clipped forms: for example, "Yrs. 
recd. and contents noted: would say in reply, etc., etc.". 
In business letters it is discourteous fo neglêct points of 
/ood f-rrn. },ut vet the CC, lnmunicati«,n sh,uhl be madc 
as brief as possible. The following is a good order fo be 
observcd : 
1. ]dentify by date or by nurnber the lettcr Sou are 
now answering. 
2. Sure up the chier points or subject «,f this letter. 
Af rimes it is wise fo repeat in general terrns the tenor of 
what you understand your correspondent fo rnean. 
3. Take up each point, preferably in the «»rder given 
in his communication, devoting a separate para-,-raph fo 
each leading topic. 
4. Answer directly and definitelv any questions asked 
of you. 
5. Make any explanations you deem necessarv. 
6. Lastly, broach any new subject you wish fo raise. 
7. In any letter do not rnix up friendly and business 
rnatters. 



66 COMPOSITION 

FOR]IAL NOTES 
A note is shorter than a letter proper and is written 
usually with thë object of expressing but one main thought. 
Within the requirements of politeness, it should be brief. 
Formal notes differ from other communications in having 
no headings, no salutation, no complimentary eding, and 
no signature. They should be written in the third person 
throughout. In the lower left-hand corner, appear the 
place and the date. The date of the entertainment, the 
hour. and the place should be in words. No fi,¢ures should 
be used except for the house number. The year is hot 
given. The margins should be more generous than in other 
communications; the ,pace above and that below should 
be about equal. So arrange the lines, if possible, as to 
bave the names of the sender and of the recipient on 
separate lines. The recipient should never use the future 
tense (shall be delighted, will be obliged), since he is tow 
either aeeepting or decliling. 

:MODEL.' OF LETTERS 
To make lettêr-writin appeal strongly to the pupils 
if should be ruade as rêal as Possible. They should read 
and examine some bona ride lêttêrs ïrom business men 
and write answers to them. The sehool should have col- 
lections of letters written fo children bv such masters as 
l,obert Louis Stêvênson, Phillips Brooks, and othêrs. If 
is diffieult for ehildren fo improve if they have only the 
crude efforts of thêir fellows as guides. For inspiration 
they need to see how the great writers have dealt with 
familiar matters in letters to children. A model such as 
the followinz from Phillips Brooks çould probably do 
more to suggest improvement than any amount of eriticism 
on their own shortcomings: 



MODELS OF LETTERS 67 

I-IOTEL DU NORD, BERLIN, 
September 10, 1882. 
DEAR GERTIE, D 
This is Sunday morning. It is just after breakfast, about 
a quarter before nine o'clock. In a shop window on this 
street, I see a big clock every time I go out. It has seven 
faces, and each face tells what time it is in one of the great 
cities of the world. The one in the middle tells what time 
it is in Berlin, and ail around that are the other great cities. 
Yesterday, as I passed it about one o'clock, I saw that it was 
about rive in New York, so I know now that it cannot be 
quite three at home. You will hot go to church for a good 
while yet, so you will have time enough to read my letter 
twice before you go. 
I came here last Wednesday, and ara going to stay here 
for some time. In fact, I feel as if I lived in Berlin. I send 
you a picture of the house, with a line drawn around my two 
windows. The children at the door are hot you and Agnes. 
I wish they were. 
The children in Paris all wore blouses, and the children 
in Venice did hot wear much of anything. Here they all 
wear satchels. I never saw such children for going to school. 
The streets are full of them, going and coming, all the time. 
They are queer little white-headed, blue-eyed things, many of 
them very pretty indeed. They wear their satchels strapped 
on their backs like soldiers' knapsacks, and when you see 
a schoolful of three hundred letting out. it is very funny. 
Only two houses up the street lives the Emperor. He and 
his wife are out of town now, or no doubt they would send 
some word to Toody. 
Affectionately your uncle, 
PHILLIPS. 



CYIAPTER VIII 

THE COMPOSITION LESSON 

THE LES80N PERIOD 

AS C05[laOSITIO-N * should never be a vaoe attempt to state 
thoughts not in the pupils' minds, there should in early 
years be full and immediate preparation for the exercise. 
A rough estimate would allow about one third of the 
lesson period for the step of preparation. Suppose the 
basis of the composition to be a short story. This shoulc 
first be told effeetively by the teacher, then analysed by 
the class fo discover the chier topics and their right order. 
These should be written on the board, and various pupils 
should retell the whole or a part of the storv in their own 
words. Incorrect or inelegant expressions should be faet- 
fully corrected, and some suitable phrases placed on the 
board, together with words liable fo be misspelled. The 
class should be put on -mard against some eommon and 
serious errors of form which they are af this period trying 
fo correct. "Fhere may remain on the board the words 
hard fo spell, the order of the topics, the directions for 
neat work--other matters should be erased. Then, after 
a suitable motive for doing their best work has been sug- 
gested to the pupils, their written reproduction shou]cl 
begin. 
Usually if is best fo allow but a short time for this 
written work--from ten fo fifteen minutes out of a lesson 
period of twentv-five or thirty minutes. All material 
should be in readiness for the work and every pupil should 
begin promptly. Sinee the step of preparation has dealt 



PREVENTION OF MISTAKES 69 

with the material and its organization as well as with 
certain matters of ïorm, the task has been ruade easy 
enough for every pupil to enter upon it without delay. 
Besides, if such exercises are taken frequently, they are less 
likely fo be regarded as unfamiliar and tllereïore diflïcult. 
If is usually a strong incentive for a pupil fo pt forth 
his best efforts when he knows that he is limited as fo 
rime. Indeed, if is generally the case that the exercises 
written in the brieï period given in class are bettcr than 
those for which unlimited time is given at home. 
composition, as in other subjects, good rcsults «.me from 
a focusing of all one's powers on the task, hOt ïrom any 
dawdling over if. 

PREVENTION OF fI.qTAKES 

The nlost satisfactory way of dealing with mistakes 
in written work is fo take all possible ('are fo prevent them. 
This should be the tea«her's attitude ïrom the outset, ïor 
ïew aspects of his task are so trying as the endeavour to 
reforln careless habits of written work fixcd by years oï 
practice. To prevent mistakes from the be.ginl6n,,-, two 
things are needïul: every lessm should be carefully 
planned, and the language abilities of each child should 
be known. Then it is not so diffieult fo antieipate errors 
and fo put pupils on their guard. The step of oral pre- 
paration is used to ]earn what pupils have fo sav and their 
way of saying if. In the fourth or fiïth year, the order 
and importance of the several topics will be discussed; 
the board will be usexl in dealing with matters of ïornl, 
such as spelling, the use of capitals, of punctuation marks, 
etc. One or two leading points in which general weak- 
ness is shown may well be impressed upon the elass. 
Though most of the board work will be erased before thc 



HISTO7,! 
ï'O CPO81"TION 
writing in class begins, 3"et some matters, such'as spelling, 
the order of the topics, a reminder as to paragraphs or 
sentences, might well remain. 
Then the rime of writing af the seats offers an excellent 
opportunity for preventing or remedying mistakes. During 
this rime the teacher should more about fo sec what the 
different pupils are doing, giving most attention fo those 
not hard af work and fo those who are weak in language. 
In the junior grades, the pupils might inquire about 
spelling, ab«mt the correct meaning of a word or phrase, 
about the form of sentcnces, etc. When pupils are not 
hard af work, the tea«.her should find out the diflïculty 
and remove it if possible. Look]ng over the work in pro- 
gress tbe teacher tan bring fo the pupil's attention defects 
of thought, of language, or of form. Frequently this is 
most effective when if takes the form of a question, hot 
«»f downright telling. " Is that what you mean fo say"? 
'" Where does this sentence end"? "How offert have you 
u.ed that word"? But the teaeher's eoneern is wider than 
mere eritieismneouragement and stimulus are just as 
important. A word of eommendation with perhaps a 
simple suggestion looking fo better work will spur the 
writer on to renewed efforts. In the earlier vears one or 
more pupils should write on the board while the others 
write af their seats. These compositions on the board 
offer the best means for earryingon elass discussion and 
eritieism. With proper oversight by the teaeher, there 
need be little fear of eopying from sueh board work. 

SELF-CRITICISI 
When the rime given for writing bas elapsed, ail should 
be required fo stop punctually, so that the step of criticism 
mav begin. Every pupil should be directed to examine 



SELF-CRITICISM 71 

his own work carefully by reading it over three times, each 
rime with but one particular object in view. The first 
reading is to see that he has said just what he meant fo 
say; the second, fo nmke sure that his sentence forms are 
quite right; the third, to take note of ail matters of form 
or of the special points fo which his attention has been 
directed in the first of the lesson. These matters would 
hot be given sufficient attention if all were taken in but 
one reading. Experience shows that without this habit 
of self-criticism pupils will commit the most flagrant 
breaches of rules with which they are quite familiar in 
theory, and that, even when their errors are laboriously 
corrected by the teacher they will make the saine mis- 
takes over and over again. When the teacher does most 
of the criticism, he thereby strenhens his own powers 
of discrimination, n,ot those of his pupils; he does work 
the pupils should do, he notes needful changes, and the 
pupils make these perfunctorily, tIis task is laborious and 
unprofitable; the pupil's task is mechanical and unin- 
teresting. 
But when each pupil is required fo find his own errors 
and then fo amend them, he realizes the importance of 
doing his work well af first and of avoiding faults pre- 
viously committed without thought or a feeling of respon- 
sibility. It is fundamenhdly important fo bave each thus 
criticise his own performances with the direct aire of doing 
better. He is working then to satisfy, hot the teacher, but 
his own ideal. This ideal should always be high, quite 
above his ability to reach af the moment. This method 
develops his judqnent and makes it supreme; this critical 
sense can be a«quired only by exercising it often. Pupils 
will hot toaster thc art of composition if the teacher does 
tle work for thcm; the lcss they are required to do the 
le.s they are able fo do. 
 ('... 



72 COMPO ITION 

All corrections should be of an intensely practical kind, 
hot bringing self-conseiousness or diseouragement. It 
would, therefore, defeat the very purpose of criticism to 
notice manv «-lasses of mistakes in any lesson. Long ago 
Locke reeommended the plan of eorrecting at first only 
the most serious fault in expression, and certainly if would 
be unwise to deal in any lesson with more than two or 
three of these blunders. The best efforts of pupils should 
be brought fo bear on the improement of one or two 
common and serious errors. When these have been pretty 
well eradicated, new matters will claire attention. Errors 
that are individual, not general, should be tre_ated privately. 
But under no consideration should the correction of every 
mistake be attempted--this would mean that none would 
be effectively mastered. 

It is of no use to correct young children's work 
in detail. Leave it childish--boyish, girlish. Why 
should not the boy or the girl be allowed fo write in 
the boyish or the girlish way, as well as fo speak in 
the boyish or the girlish voice? The pedant corrects 
young composition into mature forms--a ridieulous 
and useless labour. You will distinguish between 
things positive, like spelling, whieh are distinctly right 
or wrong, and things relative and elastie, like the 
choice of words and phrases, which are good or bad 
aceording to eireumstanees. But for preeocious eon- 
ventionality in style I have no praise. Be chary of 
correction. By eorrecting too much you may easily 
check spontaneity, and spontaneity in the child is fo 
the teacher of Eng]ish preciots bove all things 
else.--S-]çEL THURBER 



CORRECTION OF ERRORS 73 

CORRECTION OF ERRORS 
The compositions written on the board afford the best 
opportunity for making criticisms. The writers should 
be given the first chance to suggest improvements ; after- 
wards the others in the class may tell, with reasons, what 
changes should be ruade. When matters of form--spelling, 
capitals, etc.,---or of sentence structure, or of the due order 
of ideas, have been thus discussed, pupils sh«»uhl bc directcd 
to search for and correct similar errors in their own work. 
In moving around during the writing the teachex will note 
some typical blundcrs, one or more of which may be brought 
to the notice.of the whole class. 
It is a mistake fo allow pupil. fo write c«,mpositions on 
stray scraps of paper, for this will lead them to -,-alue the 
exercise lightly. At latest, in the ïourth school year, each 
pupi] should be required fo have a proper exerci.e book in 
which all written language tasks should be neatly entered 
in ink. Each exercise should be dated; the briefer cor- 
rections should appear in the margin, the longer ones 
below. These corrections should rarely be ruade by the 
teacher---as far as possible ïull responsibility is to be 
thrown on the pupil.¢. The teacher shuld examine these 
books regularly, and by a proper system of marks he 
should record his jud-nnent of each pupil's work. The 
practice of many teachers of writing all corrections, or 
else of indicating the exact changes to be ruade, leaving 
fo the pupil only the mechani«'al act of writing, cannot 
be rccommended. On but rare occasions and only in the 
Senior Forms, does if seem to be advisable o have pupils 
exchange books for correction. It is well. however fo read 
for all the class a ïew of the best exercises in nearlv evew 
lesson, and occasionally fo show some of those conspicuous 
for neatness. It does not seem a necessary or a profitable 



74 COMPOSITION • 

task for lhe teacher to read critically every exercise book 
in every ]esson; but if the work is done systematica]]y, he 
shou]d see each pupi]'s book at least once a fortnight. 
Especial]y in senior grades, the emp]o)-ment of a set 
of svmbo]s ]ightens the teacher's work considerab]y. The 
fo]Iowing set wou]d be round too e]aborate for junior 
grades, but a few easi]y understood signs might be used 
in their case: 

BI2RKS TO IN'DICATE ERRORS 

S means spelling. 
C means capitalization. 
P means punctuation. 
G means grammar. 
A means something left out. 
? means a doubtful statement. 
! means an absurd statement. 
X means not clear. 
6 means strike out. 
 means make a new paragraph. 
A means an awkward construction. 

REVISION OF WORK 

Should compositions be rewritten ? Clearly they should 
be when the pupil has done careless work. But, assuming 
that he has done his best, there is no great gain from re- 
quiring the rewriting of ever)." exercise. The pupil will 
likely put forth more willing effort on a new topic than 
on the somewhat mechanical drudgery of copying an old 
one, making the suggeçted changes. He shows his under- 
standing of criticisms by applying them in new form% 
rather than bv incorporating them as designated by the 



TEACHER'S POINT OF VIEW 75 

teacher. Yet there are some advantages in rewriting, 
especially when its practice is hot overdone. It might be 
suflïcient in senior (-lasses fo have one composition in ea«.h 
fortnight rewritten after due discussion. 
It is most desirable to have each pupil trained fo do 
his best af all rimes. The custom of allowing several trials 
does hot develop concentration, it wastes valuable rime 
and usuall S develops carelêss habits of work. The habit 
of putting forth the best efforts from the start is fostcred 
by two things--the use of books instead of sheets of paper, 
and a limitation of rime. Even in earlier years, when 
working af the board, pupils shoutd be discouraged from 
making many erasures. Indeed it is wise at rimes to 
require them fo obtain the teacher's permission before 
u.ing the bru.h. Make every pupil se the importance of 
having his thought clear in his mind before he attempts fo 
express if. 
In senior classes, if may be helpful for each pupil fo 
note in the last page of his exercise book a few of the 
errors that he is prone fo commit. There might be also a 
few directions in regard fo means of improving his work. 
By occasionally referring fo these pages, he will be able 
fo judge how well he is avoiding known mistakes or 
employing known means of improving his expression. 

TIIE TEACHER'S POINT OF VIEW 

If would be vain fo expeet excellence in the first years 
of written composition. These first efforts will be in line 
with the early efforts af drawing houses, horses, or other 
objects with wlaich the child is familiar. Even though 
matters of good form may be well taught at the outset, if 
does hot follow that they will be correctly applied ever 
after. 'I'he teacher must be very persistent in recalling 



76 COMPOSITION 

them rime after rime, since they are overlooked in the 
pupil's haste. Yct once any important point has been 
well understood by the class, no member should be allowed 
t¢» disrcgard its use. 
In this subject there can be no uniformity of standard. 
Even on beginning scho«d, children show marked differ- 
ences in language ability. Those from intelligent, refined 
bornes have usuallv ampler and more effective powers of 
expression than the «hildren of careless, illiterate parents. 
There are, besides, great differences in the natural endow- 
ments of those in the same social sca]c. Except in certain 
esscntial matters «f f«rm, if is vain to expect ail to benefit 
fr«m settinz a unif«rm standard, lndividual treatment 
is requi.ite, so that each pupil may rightly develop his 
own capabilities. Itis unwise fo institute comparisons 
among the members of a class, except on rare occasions 
fo spur nn careless pupils. Each should be kept up to 
his own best standard, and commendation given fo all, 
even fo the poorest, for honest efforts fo improve. Teachers 
shou]«] know that in language hot every pupil is capable 
of soaring high. 



CIIAPTER IX 

TIIE MECHANICS OF COMPOSITION 

TtIE TEACItING OF ]£ECHANICS 

AI)EQUATE communication of thought through writing 
makes demand on two distinct lines of effort: mechanical 
correctness and intellectual effectiveness. These require 
entirely different treatment and perhaps varying emphasis 
at different stages. Some educators contend that mech- 
anical correctness should be eml)hasized early, especially 
as written execution is af first se) new and diflàcult as to 
demand all the pupil's effort. No one, it is contended, 
can think clearly or write well if he fears severe criticism 
because of his inability to observe established forms. Yet 
careful consideration will make it evident that " Matter 
before form", is to be prcferred fo, "Teach the how be- 
fore considering the wh«t". The latter regards form as 
something wholly external, entirely independent of the 
thouzhts to be expressed. The former assumes that the 
pupil learns all form--capitals, pun«.tuation, sentence 
structure--much more readily and understandingly when 
he really requires them for suitablv expressing his 
thoughts. The necessity and the occasion for teaching 
the mechanics of lanffuage expression should arise natur- 
ail 3" from the need experienced by the child. He should 
see that they are a social necessity, facilitating communi- 
cation by making the meanin.z clear. It is truc also that, 
"an artistic sense of outward form helps a deeper mental 
system--the lbgical arranerrïent of thouht ". 
These mechanical details are commonly matters of 
arbitrary and conventional usage and are best acquired 
77 



by first ohserving closely what that usage is. But when 
rightly understood through intelligent teaching, they 
shou]d tend to becomc a fixed habit in writing. In 
transcription, done so frecly in early years, the pupil must 
be required to produce a copy faithful in every detail. No 
careless work should ever be accepted; the training in 
close observation and perfect reproduction is of great value 
in many ways. Rules corne ]ter as a definite statemént 
of what has been required in early practice. Yet merely 
incidental teachin.g wil] hot suffice. Adequate praetice in 
this marrer requires a resourceful teacher, but it must 
never be allowed to bec, me mere routine drudgery. Keep 
ever before the pupil the need of habitually ohserving 
certain reeognized forms if he would make himself under- 
stood c]early. 
0rdinarily we cannot make instruction in written 
composition so methodical that the various matters of 
form are kept quite separate and dea]t with in different 
grades. In reality, when first tire child begins fo write, 
he is confronted with the whole problem of good tortu. 
Af rimes if is clearly best fo give immediately the help 
urgently needed, postponing definite exp]anation until 
the c]ass as a bod, can be taught eCOllomica]]y. As a rule, 
the illustrations for t.pe lessons on form are best when 
drawn from the pupi]s' work. 
Teachers differ as fo the importance of requiring care- 
fui attention fo mechanica] detai]ssome over-emphasize 
this aspect of the wort, regarding thought too lightly, 
while others slizht mechanical details and accept slovenly 
work. The result of the first attitude is that pupils, 
worried bv attention fo dctails of execution, regard com- 
position wifh hearfy dislike. The second makes pupils not 
only carelêss in questions of good tortu, but indolent in 



COMMON ERRORS IN WRITTEN WORK 79 

effort. The extremcs should be avoided. It may be taken 
for granted that definite, inspiring teaching, as well as 
constant, intelligent ovcrsight, is needed fo make right 
form a marrer of fixed habit, and that supelwised practice 
is the more important. If is hOt essential that the order 
of details given in the outline of the Course should be 
rigidly observed. As the Fourth, Fifth, and Sixth school 
years are accounted the best for the mastery and memory 
of form, they should be utilized in fixing the mechanics 
of written language. 
In the teaching of mechanics, the inducti'e is the 
method fo be followed. Present a sertes of illustrative 
examples and lead the pupils fo discover and formulate 
the generalization. Then give varied exercises continued 
long enough fo fix the rule. Usually it is hot best fo give 
special lessons for each separate feature of the numerous 
details included in good written usage. When, through 
proper teaching and practice, a pupil has obtained firm 
control of the essential points, other details may be taught, 
largely by reference to usage shown in books or in the 
teacher's board work. Probablv the nmst effective wav 
for te.ting and drilling the mechanics of writing is round 
in the dictation exercises. As a rule, the selection should 
be studied carefully prior fo the dictation, f,»r there can 
be no gain in having the pupils make mistakes that might 
have been prevented through proper attention. Ability 
fo punctuate, fo use quotation marks, capitals, abbrevia- 
tions, fo observe the usage regardin letters or business 
forms, tan ail be tested through dictation. 

COlliSION ERRORS IN WRITTE. WORK 

In their first written exercises, pupils are apt fo give 
short, scrappy sentences, the result, perhaps, of much 



80 LOiVllaO8 ITI ON 

conning of their primers. There the sentences that first 
meet their eyes are of this kind: " See the pretty cat. 
Her name is Floss. Bon is our dog. He is a good dog. 
]Ie has four paws", etc., etc. When su(.h forms have be- 
corne established as the result of the great efforts ruade by 
/he «hi]d to toaster his earlv reading, if is not surprising 
that hev reappear as le first types of his own written 
expression. If great (.are is taken fo have the child give 
his sta/ements af first orallv in natural and varied form, 
this fault may be prevented or overcome. 
Whcn pupils begin fo use eonnected expression, they 
offert produce rambling, disjointed statements linked 
ïecl,ly togêther by and, attd so, thcn, but, so, etc. Com- 
mollly, thcy write sentences of one uniïorm pattern, re- 
peating the saine words and phrases. Their utterances 
oïtcn la(.k point and conciseness. Give them abundant 
illu.trations and prat'tice in varying the beginnings of 
their sentences, with the direction fo place and within the 
sentence, hot af the beginning. Encourage them fo say 
over their expressions quietly, so that the ear may be a 
guide as fo whcther or hot they sound well. 
In pra¢'tically all grades certain types of mistakes are 
frequent: (a) The omission of a vital part of the sen- 
tence; (b) the laek of agreement 1)etween the subject and 
the predicate; (c} confusion in the use of the past tense 
and the perfect participle; (,1} a wrong use of the con- 
junctive pronoun, 1,oth in form and in position; (e) the 
sub.titution of adjectives for adverbs; (f) a careless 
ehoi.e of prepositions; (g) redundancies and faulty 
idioms. 
As a rule, if is saler hot fo encourage the use of parti- 
cipial phrases, sinee they are often loosely linked with 
the word they modifv. Pupils in Form III should be 



SENTENCE STRUCTURE 81 

taught the simple rule about the right order of words and 
phrases in a sentence and should then be made fo observe 
if in their own writing. It may be stated thus: " Things 
thought of together must be mentioned together ". 

DIRECTIONS FOR WRITINO 
Some simple directions for avoidin clumsy and in- 
effective constru,.tions might well be discussed from rime 
fo rime with the pupil., and their application shown by 
abundant black-board illustrations. In Form III, pupils 
should be encouraged fo keep in their composition books 
some easily understood rules, such, for instance, as these: 
1. Know well what vou mean fo say. 
2. Say if clearly and naturallv. 
3. Short sentences are better than long ones. 
4. Varv the form of your sentences. 
5. So long as the sense is clear, the fewer words the 
better. 
6. Do not use the saine words or phrases too often. 
7. Do not repeat what you bave once said. 
8. The }»est way fo test your writing is fo read if aloud. 

SENTENCE STRUCTURE 

In intermediate and senior grades, the value and the 
structure of complex and compound sentences should be 
regularly brought fo the pupil's notice. Occasionally 
attention may be directed fo the superiority of these sen- 
tence forms for expressing such easily understood relations 
as rime, place, or manner, and notice may be directed fo 
the various terms used fo connect such propositions. The 
teacher's task is fo lead fhe pupil fo undersfand and fo 



82 COMPOSITION 

admire fine sentence structure, fo examine [he word groups 
and their arrangement, fo observe the effect as fo clear- 
Jess, force, etc. Gradually he is led fo employ longer and 
more difficult sentence structure, suited to his ability fo 
sec things in a more complex relationship. By easy stages 
he may learn fo reeognize the various substitutes for a 
dependent clauseappositive, participial, and preposi- 
tional phrases, as well as single words--and may note that 
these convev the meaning more conciselv. Then aïter 
having studied effective sentence structure in the writings 
of others, he should endeavour fo apply this knowledge 
in his own compositions. 

PUNCTUATION 

The child finds great difficulty in pun(.tuation. In 
his oral speech there is nothing corresponding fo if; nor 
is the child of eight or ni,m able to realize that discourse 
is made up of word groups whose relation to one another 
is indicated in part by these signes. He may have been 
drilled fo reproduce faithïully all these marks in his 
transcription, but this was merely blind imitation. Now, 
at the age of nine or ten, after considerable practice in 
the writing of original stories and letters, he is, as a rule, 
able fo employ correctlv the period and the question mark. 
But the comma, the semicolon, and the exclamation point 
still give him much trouble. In earlier years, his written 
«'ompositions were in such simple form that skill in punc- 
tuation was not dcmanded. But as his written expressions 
become more «omplex, the need of these aids fo make clear 
his meaning is felt, and then he is ready for this instruc- 
tion. 
The practice of introducing punctuation early in the 
Course and of impressing if by special formal lessons and 



PUNCTUATION 83 

definitions is not fo be commended. The pupil must be 
able fo analyse his thoughts and to discern the relations 
of their different parts, beïore he is in a position fo appre- 
ciate the rules of punctuation. Some help cornes from 
examining a well-punctuated paragraph in the reading 
book, and still more from requiring punctuation in con- 
nccted dictation, though in early years the marks are told 
fo the class. Yet punctuation should be taught chiefly 
in connection with the pupil's own composition, rather than 
as a thing apart. Ite knows the thought to be communi- 
cated, but the diffcrent meanings it might suggest fo 
another, according fo various schemes of punctuation, 
should be discussed. Pupils might be asked fo gire the 
meaning of an unpunctuated sentence given by one of 
their number and placed on the board. Then the aid in 
interpretation given by punctuation would be ruade 
evident. 
The aim is fo bave punctuation, like penmanship, be- 
come automatic, but it must first be a matter on which 
attention is focused and fo which due consideration is 
thereafter given. Now, while pupils may recite punctua- 
tion rules glibly, it is fomld that they rarcly apply them 
correctly on their own initiativè. Moreover, in this 
matter, it is practically impossible fo store up skill fo 
serve some remote need. If seems best hot fo lay too 
much stress on this point until the Senior Third Form is 
reached. In early years the pupils should be encouraged 
to write short sentences hot needing infernal punctuation. 
Above all, the teacher should remember that there are few 
fixed rules in punctuation, the modern tendency being fo 
use marks only when absolutely required fo prevent mis- 
understanding of the meaning. 



84 COMPOSITION 

THE USE OF OUTLINES 

Is the use of outlines advisable? This question has 
received much consideration front teachers, who yet are 
divided in their opinions. An essential element of good 
expression is clearness, and this requires logical sequence 
,f thought. Assuming abundant knowledge of the sub- 
ject, together with a just perception of the relative intpor- 
tance of its parts and of the relations of these parts, com- 
position mcans an intelligent effort to arrange and express 
thought in the best way. The outline implies that the 
nmterial is organized; if is needful in writing as in 
drawing. Such organization is often done simply, perhaps 
unconsciously. Yct f-r well-connected uttcrance of any 
length there must be right arrangement either in the 
mil,d only, or else put on paper. Rare ability or long 
practice in orderlv thinking may make such steps less 
evident, but dçes not dispense with them. The outline 
aids in lç,gical deve]opment, in orderlv arrangement of 
the parts, and in securing unity and coherence. Each 
detail appears under ifs proper heading; ea«.h division is 
mo arranged that if follows naturally fronl the preceding 
part, and leads appropriately fo the succeeding part; thus 
the subje«t progresses in au orderlv wav front .tart fo 
finish. Xor is this exercise unfamiliar; the pupils are 
accustomed fo have such outlines placed on the board in 
history, geography, and other studies; in literature they 
analyse the selection and give appropriate titles for the 
several topics; thus have they learned hy experience the 
importance of order]y arrangement. If may, indeed, be 
said that mu«h of the value of composition cornes front 
clear, orderlv thinking which a proper training in this 
subject develops. 
The use of outlines should be a help, hot a hindrance, 



USE OF OUTLINES 

in good writing. In the first two or three years they are 
little needed. Where the material is a story or a simple 
poem, the ortier of events is clearly fixed. Thc child 
should know that every story has a bcginning, a body, and 
an end. If is when orizinal work is begun that the need 
of planning is felt. Then the marrer is disc.ussed orally 
in class, the various divisions of thc subjec.t are given, 
their order is considcred and shown on the board. This 
process does n«t undulv restri«.t the child's freedom; on 
the contrary, by knowin. what p«dnts he is fo dca] with 
and in what order, he ha. one considoraldc diffi«.ultv over- 
corne. The toupies shouhl be few, but comprehensive, with- 
out many sul,ivisions. The aim should be, while avoiding 
omissions or repetitions, to cover thc whole subject in a 
clear, concise wav. 
:But there are wrong uses of outlines. Somc langage 
books give many e,xercises ]ike the fol]owinz. A picture 
shows a mouse looking af a trap baited with a piece of 
cheese, Underneath arc these questions: 

"What once came to a trap? What did he think he must 
do? How did the cheese smell? Who wanted some of it 
very much? What did he touch it with? What happened? 
Who was caught "? 

What is the result of sueh questions? The pupils 
write suitable answers fo each question, and so have a con- 
nected story. But did they compense? All they were 
required fo do was fo turn the words around from question 
fo answer: "What was in the trap "? " Some cheese was 
in the trap". The proper motive for composition is con- 
spicuous only bv ifs absence. Whatever composing there 
is, was done by the teacher in preparing the series of 
questions. 



86 COMPOSITION 

In telling the story of Brownings Inc{dent o[ the 
French Camp, the following outline would supply ample 
details for a class in Form IV: 

1. Napoleon: lais appearance; his train of thought 
5. The boy: his coming; his news; ifs effect 
3. Death of the boy: opinion of him. 

Pupils need direction and practice fo enable them fo 
make suitable plans for writing. They will be aided by 
observing simple rules of order, such, for instance, as the 
f.llowing: 
1. Set down a list of ail vour ideas in regard fo the 
subject. 
. Cross out anv that have no clear relation fo the 
main interest of the subject. 
3. Arranffe the others in the order 3"ou consider best. 
4. While omitting no important point, try fo avoid 
repeating the saine thing. 
5. Plan to have a suitable beginning and an 'effective 
ending. 
6. The completed list should give a clear conception 
of the whole subject. 

" What is that," asks Coleridge, "which first strikes 
us af once, in a man of education, and which, among edu- 
catcd men, so instant]y distin_guishes the man of superior 
mind? It is the unpromeditated and evidently habitual 
arrangement of his words, grounded on the habit of fore- 
seeing in each integral part the whole that he intends fo 
çommunicate. However irregular and de.u]torv his talk, 
there is method in the fraffments". Indeed, the very basis 
of composition is orderlv thinking. 



MODELS 7 

:M:ODELS 

There is lack of unanimity among teachers as fo the 
use of models in elementary schools. Yet all agree that 
itis unwise to encourage conscious imitation by young 
children. But the child is trying fo acquire skill in a most 
difficult art, and he needs for direction and stimulus fo 
have work better than his own brought clearly fo his atten- 
tion. The desirability of good models is nearly as great 
in composition as in reading or drawing. Every good 
writer owes fo imitation, pcrhaps unconscious imitation, 
much of his skill in expression. On this point Professor 
Minto thus states his views: 

The obvious truth is that the man who writes well 
must do so bv example, if hot by precept. In any 
language that has been used for centuries as a literar¥ 
instrument, the beginner cannot hegin as if he were 
the first in the field. If a man writes effectively with- 
out giving a thought fo the manner of his composition, 
it must be because he bas chaneed upon .good modcls, 
and hot merely because he knows his suhject well, or 
feels it deeply, or bas a natural girl of e_xpression, tic 
can spare himself the trouble of thinking, because his 
predecessors have thought for him ; he is rich as being 
the possessor of inherited wealth. 

The good models may be the best work of the class, 
read as an encouragenient fo others; poor compositions 
should be passed over in silence. Perhaps a still better 
inspiration cornes from the tea«her's work donc in a crafts- 
man-like way on the board. To witness a piece of work in 
the doing is far more educative than to examine it when 
donc. For seniors the examples of what skilful writers of 
English have donc will be of much service. As a rule, 
7 o.s. 



88 COMPOSITION 

the model should follow, hot precede, the pupils' expres- 
sion. They should be left free to do their }»est, unin- 
fiuenced by what some one elsc has done along the same 
line. Comparisons should be ruade rather with the object 
of stimulating the pupils, through their admiration of 
excell(,nt work, to put forth still greater efforts ; care should 
be taken fo prevent discouragement. The object will be 
best attained whcn the pupils are led to read with eager, 
delight«-d attention suitable books of the best writers. 
Naturally, their power fo express will corne long after and 
1)e ever depcndent on their power to appreciate. But it 
is hot possible to acquire the literarv form of English 
except through the plcasurablc, attentive reading of good 
books. The reading hal,it presents literary English as an 
actual reality, and familiar association with it results in 
the adoption of ifs forms. Close acquaintance with the 
1,est literature makes rules of rhetorie almost superfluous. 
The teacher's dutv is to have pupils listen fo good speech 
and fo read go,d speech, always with interest and atten- 
tion, so that in turn they may use good speech in their 
oral and written utterances. 

In connection with the details of the Course in Com- 
position for each Form, the following topics will receive 
consideration : 
1. The material for the different Forms and where it 
may be round. 
2. The principles fo be observed in selecting it. 
3. The methods to be pursued in conducting the 
written work, with illustrations. 
4. The general principles fo be followed in criticising 
and marking compositions. 



CHAPTER X 

FORM I 

DETAILS OF THE COIYRSE 

CHIEF IiS 
THE CHIEF aims of the Course in Composition for Form I 
are to secure for the pupil fluêncy in conversation and 
a greatêr amount of freedom in expressing orally his daily 
desires and observations and in relating the experiences 
of his own active lifê. To accomplish these ends, the 
pupil's vocabulary must be extended; his misuse of ccrtain 
words, due to his erroneous interpretation of their 
meaning, must be corrected or modified; and his ïorms of 
speech must be gradually moulded and improved. 

CHARACTER OF THE WORK 

On account'of the mechanical difficulties fo be over- 
corne, it will be clear that in the pupil's first year in Form 
I, very little writtên work should be required beyond the 
copying of easy sentences from the black-board or the 
leader and the reproduction of short, suitable parts of 
memorized prose or verse. In the second year, however, 
much transcription of sentences should be done neatly, 
in the pupil's best handwriting, with due attention to 
correct spelling, capitals, and punctuation nmrks. Sen- 
tences, very short stories, and poems may be written from 
memory; and practice in the writing of very brief notes 
and friendly letters may be commenced. 
$9 



90 COMPOSITION 

]fATERIAL FOR TRANSCRIPTION 
Sentences fo be copied from the black-board shou]d, 
ordinari]y, be se]ected from thoughts which the pupil has 
a]ready expressed oral]y in connection with his own obser- 
vations or actua] expcriences. In the sentences tobe 
transcribed from the ]eader, both the language and the 
thought conveycd shou]d appeal fo the pupil. The sen- 
tences shou]d be natural and chi]d]ike, and good standard 
forms of speech should be used. They shou]d be drawn 
from suitab]e ]iterature and shou]d embody questions and 
statements regarding fami]iar objects and matters of 
interest in the home or schoo] ]ife of the pupi]s. They 
shou]d contain such ]angruage and forms of expression as 
the pupi]s nmy be expected fo adopt in their free composi- 
tions. 
The sentences may be in the form of questions about 
the sun, the moon, the days of the week, the months of the 
year; questions and answers concerning pet animals, birds, 
trees, gaines; and the proper expression of actions and 
little incidents within the pupil's experience, as: 
Which day of the week is this? 
In which month is Christmas? 
Do rabbits eat clover? . 
Yes, they are fond of clover. 
The horse is galloping. 
Is the pony trotting? 
I fell from the swing. 
Did John jump from the platform? 

ORAL EXERCISES T0 CORRECT FAULTY FXPRESSION" 

Even as early as in Form I, some oral exercises will 
be round necessary to correct faulty expressions. The 
sentences fo be copied from the board and transcribed from 



CORRECTION OF FAULTY EXPRESSIONS 91 

the Reader should be constructed or selected fo supplement 
these previous oral exercises. The sentences may illus- 
trate agreement, for example: 
Mary skates well. 
The bird sings. 
The girls skate well. 
The birds sing. 
The boys are here. 
Cats bave claws. 
Were you ill? 
Yes, we were both ill. 

The sentence may also show the proper use of tle 
italicized words as, for example: 
Who did that? 
Mother has done all the work. 
Have you seen Rover? 
o, I have hot seen him. 
James came yesterday. 
We caught a fish. 
John isn't here. 
Isn't it too bad? 
Yes, it is too bad. 
I-Ie would bave liked to corne. 
I wished you could bave been with us. 
These boys are strong. 
Those girls were nice. 
You and I bave plenty. 
You and I saw the thief. 
Ara I the boy? 
Ara I hot going? 
Are you and 1 going? 



92 COMPOSITION 

To the above may be added exercises in copying sen- 
rentes, previouhly given orally by the pupils, showing the 
proper use of a and a, as: 
I bave a cherry and a plum. 
I-Iave you an orange or an apple? 
Is it an egg? 

IE[OIIY WORK FOR TRANSCRIPTION 
In selecting for transcription suitab]e parts of memor- 
ized prose or verse and short stories, the saine purposes 
shou]d be kept in view, naine]y, fo accustom the pupil fo 
the use of exact language and correct forms of expression; 
for example : 
The story books have toZd you 
07 the fairy folk so nice, 
That make them leathern al)tons 
Of the ears of little mice; 
And wear the leaves of roses 
Like a cal) ul)on their heads, 
And sleep ai night on thistledown, 
Instead of feather beds. 

There are no fairy folk that ride 
About the world at night, 
Who give you rings and other things 
To pay for doing right, 
But if you do to others what 
You'd bave them do to you, 
You'lZ be as blest, as if the best 
Of story-books were true. 
--ALtc CAaY 

PRACTICAL EXERCISES 
The pupil should also bave an abundance of such 
exercises as writing his own naine, the naine of his parent, 



MODELS 93 

teacher, schoohnate. These should he written, first in full. 
and then by using initiais. He should also have practice 
in writing his Christian name, surname, address, the 
address of his parents, of his brother, sister, teacher, doctor, 
minister. These exercises may be supplemented by ques- 
tions set for seat work, such as: 
Write in ful the names of rive of your schoolmates. 
Write them again, using the proper initiais. 
Write the Christian names of four people in your home or 
school. 
Write the surnames of four people named in a book or 
story you have heard or read. 
Write the title for each of these, as: Miss, Mr., etc. 
Write the naine of your dog, or of any dog you know, of 
any horse, canary, or doll. 

IIODELS 
In teaching the simplest sentence forms, a model may 
be given, such as: 
My dog swims in the river. 
and the class may be asked fo write sentences on any such 
subjects as: my bird, my car, the bear, the tree, the plums, 
the oranges, my schoolmates. The pupils select a certain 
number from a list of subjects suggested or choose their 
own subjects. 
The model may be written in question form, as: 
Do horses eat grass? 
and the pupils may be asked fo construct questions about-: 
the chalk, the brushes, the paper, the slates, the caps, or 
about any other subjects they choose. 



94 COMPOSITION 

BLACK-BOARD WORK 
There should be much writing on the black-board of 
the pupils' approved simple statements, questions, and 
answers ; first, by the teacher fo their dictation ; secondly, 
by the pupils to thc teacher's dictation. 
Their simple statements and short stories from memory 
may also be written by the teacher, and may in turn be 
dictated by the tea,'her and written by the pupils. This 
work should be continued until such time as the pupils 
are able to write from memory brief stories which have 
been previously given or reproduced by them orally. 
Good sentences previously constructed orally by the 
teacher and the pupils should, at appropriate stages, be 
placed upon the board and carefully copied by the pupils. 
These should emb,,dy illustrations of all the technical 
work--the use of initiais, capitals, abbreviations, the 
period, and interrogati,m mark--prescribed in the (:'ourse 
for this Form. Selections for transcription from the 
]eader and other books and from memorized prose and 
verse mav also be madë, fo illustrate the technical work 
required by the Course for Form I. 

FRO:h[ ORAL TO WRITTEN WORK 

Although this stage of advancement is often spoken 
of as the transition stage from oral fo written composi- 
tion, if must not be considered that, because written com- 
position begins, oral composition ends here. Oral expres- 
sion mu.t be further developed and continued with, and 
as a preparation for, written composition. From the close 
connection existing between oral and written expression, 
it will be seen that the conditions essential fo success in 
oral composition will also be necessary in writen work, 



ROUGH BEGINNINGS 95 

and that the (:'ourse and the material for written expres- 
sion must necessarily follow in the saine channel and be 
of much the saine nature as that for oral expression. 

STORIE. FOR REPRODUCTION 

The oral work of Form I naturally leads to the written 
reproduction of similar material. If is de.irable that the 
pupils take great interest and pleasure in reproducing 
these ste, rie.% etc., that they know well the parts or inci- 
dents of the story, and that they see and arrange these in 
their proper sequence. 

FAVOURABLE CO.'DITIONS 

It will be necessary, in written as in oral work, fo 
stimulate, encourage, and lead out the shy and ba«.kward 
pupils, and perhaps fo restrain the rambling and voluble. 
The pupil should be surrounded with congenial influences 
and be assured of the sympathy of his tea«her and class- 
mates. When a boy writes to his schoolnlate fo tel] him 
what has happened at school or fo his mother at home fo 
tell her of some interesting event in his holidav trip, he 
is usually composing under favourable conditions. 

IOUGH BEGINNINGS 

As in all art work, expression should begin with the 
simplest e.xercises in portraying or rei)roducing in rough 
form, and should afterwards proceed to more cultured 
efforts in original work or self-expression. This original 
work may, for example, take the form of a brief letter 
home, an incident in the i)upil's life, a description of what 
he bas done or has seen done by the baker or the grocer, 
the farmer or the carpenter. 



96 COMPOSITION 

MEMOIIZED STOnIES FOR WRITIN(] 
Stories to be written from memory by this Form 
should be simple, brief, interesting, clear, and we]l defined 
as fo: (o) introduction or situation of affairs, (b) details 
of what took place, (c) result. If is better hot fo trouble 
the pupil with the moral. Stories of the style of: The 
('al and tl, e ('ream Jug, Tl, e Crow and IIe Pitcher, TRe 
Dog «nd II, e ,'l, adow, Tl, e Fox a,d le Goat, Tl, e Fox a,d 
l,e Crow, etc., will be found fairly suitable for this Form, 
if hot too long. 
PICTURES 
The illustrations in the First P, eader furnish materials 
for picture study as a basis for simple composition exer- 
cises. Af first, the, teacher bv means of questions guides 
the pupils' observations of the picture. Af a later stage, 
each pupil is asked to look at a picture fo be studied and 
tcll its story as he thinks if. This gives free play fo the 
imagination and secures variety of thought and expres- 
sion. 
Take, as an example, the picture on the third page of 
the First Reader: 
What shall we call this little girl on the stool? (Names 
selected by different children--Mary, Jane, Ann, Muriel, etc. 
'ho is the man? (Her father, ber uncle, etc.) 
What has her father been doing? (Reading his paper) 
What is Jane doing? (Closing her father's eyes) 
'hy is she doing this? (Various answers. She wants 
him to tell her a story. She wants to tell him a story. She 
wants him to guess who is closing his eyes. 
What will her father do? (Various reasons. He will tell 
her the story of The Lion acl te Mouse. He will listen to 
her story of what she did at Grandma's. He will guess that it 
is mother who is closing his eyes. .) 



BRIEF NOTES AND LETTERS 97 

Ann is asked to tell the story in the'picture. She says: 
Father has been reading his paper. Jane stands on a stool 
behind his chair. She claps her hands over his eyes. She 
wants hirn to tell ber a story. 

John is asked to tell the story as he sees it in the 
picture, and the teacher writes it on the board as he speaks : 
Mary crept up on a stool behind her father. She elapped 
her hands over his eyes so that he could hot read. She asks 
hirn to guess who is behind hirn. 

If there is time, William may tell the story as he sees 
it, and the teacher may write it on the board. 
The pupils may copy one or other of these stories at 
seats, with due regard to paragraphs, spacing, capitals, and 
periods. The pupils may now read the story as itis told 
in the Reader. 

BI{IEF NOTES AND LETTERS 
Nearly all children take pleasure in writing notes and 
brief letters fo their friends and are proud of their ability 
to convey messages in written form. The marvel, that 
on the paper there are real words with all the meaning of 
spoken language, appeals fo them. Pupils at this stage 
may be given easy work in notes and short letters, such as 
the following : 
Write short notes fo: 
1. Your rnother, telling ber of two or three thing8 you have 
done to-day. 
2. Your father, telling him about a runaway you saw this 
afternoon. 
3. Your teacher, asking him for a half-holiday this after- 
noon, as itis the day of the Fair. 
4. Your seat-mate, asking him to corne to your home to 
play or to s.tay all night with you. 



98 COMPOSITION 

5. Santa Claus, asking for a Christmas toy. 
6. Your brother, telling him o a bonfire you had and how 
you marie it. 
7. Your sister, asking ber, since you are iii, to cone to 
your room and read you a story. 

COIPOSITION OF BIIIEF IOTE$ 
The first notes may be developed as follows, the teacher 
writing the letter on t]e board as the pupils give the 
answers fo the questions: 
To whom are we writing? To mother. 
Then we shall commence it in this way : Dear Mother,-- 
(the teacher writing it in place as below). 
What shall we tell ber ? I mended my bob. 
Ilow did vou do it? With hammer and nails. 
What did you do next ? I went fo school. 
After school what did you do? We coasted down the 
bill and broke the bob again. 
Now we shall close by letting mother know who wrote 
this note. This is one way fo do it (writing the con- 
clusion of the letter as helow). 
Tell her now the naine of the place from which vou 
are writing and what dav of the month if is. Place this 
at the tvp of the page af the right-hand side. 
The teacher will have written a letter similar fo the 
following: 
January 13, 1912. 
Dear Mother,-- 
I mended my bob this morning with a hammer and some 
nails. Then I went to school. After four o'clock, Ross and I 
coasted down Pool's bill. We upset the bob, and brokÇ it 
worse than before. 
Your loving son, 
William Gee. 



CORRECTIONS AND CRITICISMS 99 

The following note may be developed in much the saine 

way: 

To whom are we going to write ? 
Why are we writing fo her ? 
tIow long were you absent ? 
When ? 
Why werc you not in school ? 
V'hy are you writing your own note ? 
How are you going to close this letter ? 
On what day was it written ? 
May 5, 1912. 
Dear Miss Domsie,-- 
Will you excuse me for being absent all day yesterday? 
I was fil. Mother is hot at home. 
Your pupil, 
Jennie Black. 
]Iodels of simple, friendly letters will be round in the 
Text-book, Tle Ot«rio Public Sclool ComIosition, on 
pages 16 and 18, but these letters are much too long for the 
pupils of this grade. 

CORRECTIONS AND CRITICIS:MS 
All corrections and criticisms should be ruade in kind 
and inspiring tones. The good points in the work, the 
writing, the spelling, the capitals, etc., should be com- 
mended, and the pupils should be encouraged to do their 
best to produce neat and accurate work. The teacher 
must not expect too much af this stage. It will not be 
necessary to deal witb all faults in expression, but the 
greater errors and those common to the majority of the 
class should be taken up, and the sentences, short stories, 
or notes should be rewritten with a view to correcting 
them. No careless mechanical work should be accepted. 



I00 COMPOSITION 

From the early difficulties the child experiences in 
learning fo talk and fo use conventional ïorms, we _an 
see the main lines along which assistance can be given 
him. The child says: 
Axe the wood. 
It is me. 
He don't want the book. 
We runned hard. 
We deaded the fly, etc. 
The teacher's own model language will be a strong 
influence in correcting the pupil's language; but the 
resourceful teacher will hot fail to use different ways of 
correcting such errors and of making the pupils familiar 
with the proper forms of expression. Sometimes if is 
necessar)." simply fo make the correction as the error arises; 
at other rimes special exercises are required: 
1. The teacher says plainly: 
We do hot say, " Axe the wood "', we say, " Chop 
the wood" 
,qay, " If is I " 
Good talkers say, " He doesn't" 
2. When practicable, the action may be performed or 
a picture of the action shown for the class to interpret in 
words, as: The man is chopping the log. He chops the 
tree. 
3. The teacher asks the pupi]s fo use these words in 
sentences, such as: John is choppin.oE wood. Have the men 
chopped the wood? Chop away, wood-cutter. 
4. He mav leave blanks fo be filled up as- bien ....... 
wooà in the winter. Women do hot ....... trees down. 
In junior classes, wherever possible, the exercises should 
be associated with the work or action in each case, so that 
the àrill in proper forms may not appear fo be connecteà 
with words only. 



CHAPTER XI 

FORM lI 

DETAILS OF THE COURSE 
WHEN the pupil is readv to commence the Course of 
Form l I, he is able to writc legibly. IIe lias transcribcd 
sentcnces ïrom the Rcader and has written short sentences 
ïrom dictation and al.o from memory. IIe is now pre- 
pared for exercises in writing his own thoughts, in repro- 
ducing the contents of some storv known to him, in telling 
in his own wav an original story, or in giving an account 
of some personal incident. 
As additional preparation for the work to be taken up 
in this Form, therc should bc: 
1. A review of the work of the preceding Form : ïurther 
exact transcriptions of (a) good sentence ïorm.. (b) modcl 
letters, (c) brief compositions in prose and poetry. 
2. Memory reproduction of good prose and poetry. 

OçTLLX'E O" NEW WORK 
The new work for this Form may be classified as: 
1. Writing of known stories 
2. Writing of original stories 
3. Writing of personal experiences in the home, the 
shop, the ïactory ; in gaines ; with pers 
4. Writing ïriendly letters, using note-paper and en- 
velopes 
5. Study of the pararaph (sentence group) as a unit 
of expression 
6. Organizing of all written sentences into paragraphs. 
101 



102 COIIPOSITION 

TRANSCRIPTION 
This work should follow the ('ourse outlined for oral 
composition in The Ontario Public Sclool Composition. 
The sentences for transcription in Form I were seleeted 
for their clearness and simplicity. The adage or proverb 
may be taken as a model, for example: 
A new broom sweeps clean. 

These sentences for Form II should include state- 
ments, questions, and answers, and also sentences exclama- 
tory in form an(] periodic in style, as: 
What a monstrous tree'. 
Up the bill he heaved the stone. 
Better three hours too soon than three minutes too late. 

Sueh sentences as require eareful arrangement of the 
parts should be copied and studied, for example: 
Early in lIa.v, a pair of robins began building a nest in 
the elm tree near the river. 
In compan.v with a large number of his friends, he crossed 
the ocean and founded a cit.v. 
This little purse, the old man put in his pocket. 
One da.v, when looking sadl.v into the stream and thinking 
of his lost sister, he saw a face like hers looking up at him. 

SENTECES TO IMPRESS CORRECT FORMS 
The pupils shou]d copy from the board sentences con- 
structed fo impress correct forms of expression that have 
alreadv been dri]led upon oral]y, as: 
I shall teach you better. 
Ara I hot as tall as he? 
Were you here yesterday? 
Father (hot Father he) came in and sang for us. 



SENTENCES TO IMPRESS TECHNICAL WORK 103 

Are there not fewer apples than there were? 
Each boy sits in his place. 
Doesn't this horse trot well? 

SENTENCES TO IgIPRESS TECHNICAL WORK 

The pupils should also transcribe many sentences 
previously noted by .the teacher and pupils as incorpo- 
rating parts of the technical work prescribed for this Form ; 
for example, the use of capitals, punctuation, contrac- 
tions, and abbreviations; thc names of the days of the 
week, the months of the year, the seasons. 
John, will you naine, in order, the days of the week? 
The days of the week are, Sunday, Monday, Tuesday, 
Wednesday, Thursday, Friday, Saturday. 

The class may write senten«es, similar fo the above, 
regarding .the months and seasons. 
To-day is Thursday, May 22nd, 1913. 

The class may write similar sentences on the davs of 
the week as: 
To-morrow will be Yesterday was 
December, :lanuary, and February are winter months in 
the northern parts of the world. 
Thirty days bath September, 
April, June, and November. 
Give me of your bark, O Birch-tree. 
O star light, O star bright, 
First star I see to-night, 
I wish I may, I wish I might 
Have the wish I wish to-night. 
The "0" and "I" and the punctuation should be 
noted in the foregoing. 
8 O.S. 



PRACTIC.,L EXERCISES 
Exercises such as the following may be given for seat 
work : 
1. Make a statement about each of these places: Toronto, 
Ottawa, Hamilton, London. 
2. Write the names of rive other places near your home. 
3. Write the names of the days of the week, (a} in full, 
(b) in short form. 
4. Write the names of the months of the year, (a} in 
full, (b) in abbreviated form. 
5. Write the names of the seasons--the summer months, 
the winter months. (The names of the seasons are hot to be 
written with capitals.} 
6. Write the names of the cardinal points, (a} in full, 
(b) in abbreviated form. (When written in full, the names 
of the cardinal points are hot to be written with capitals.) 
7. Tell of something you did each day last week. 

BLACK-BOARD WORK 
When the pupils have completed tlle work, the teacher 
may write the sentences on the board, calling attention 
to anv difficult parts. 
The pupils will then compare their work with the work 
on the black-board, note the errors, and afterwards rewrite 
correctly the sentences in which these occurred. 

LETTEIS FOR TRA'SCIIPTION 

In addition fo transcribing the letters found in the 
Text-book on pages 16 and 18, other good forms of letters 
mav be copied, such as the letter of the deaf and blind 
girl, Helen A. Keller, fo the poet, John Greenleaf Whittier. 
The teacher should remember fhat this work in transcrip- 
lion is of little value unless the pupils are required fo pay 
careful attention to writing, punctuation, and spacing. 



LETTERS FOR TRANSCRIPTION 105 

Dear, kind Poet: 

December 17, 1890. 

This is your birthday; that was the first thought which 
came to my mind when I woke this morning, and it ruade 
me glad to think I could write you a letter and tell you how 
much your little blind friends love their sweet poet and his 
birthday. 
OEhis evening they are going to entertain their friends 
with readings from your poems and with music. I hope the 
swift-winged messenger of love will be here to carry some 
of the sweet melody to you in your little study. 
If I were with you to-day, I would give you eighty-three 
kisses, one for each year you bave lived. Eighty4hree years 
seems very long to me. Does it seem long to you? 
The happy Christmas rime is almost here! I can hardly 
wait for the fun to begin! I hope your Christmas Day will 
be a very happy one, and that the New Year will be full of 
brightness and joy for you and every one. 

Your loving little friend, 

Helen A. Keller. 

The following letter is from Julian, the grandson of 
Mr. Thomas Huxley. He had been reading The Water 
Babies, written by Reverend Charles Kingsley, a great 
friend of Mr. Huxley's: 

Dear Grandpater: 

Have you seen a Water Baby? Did you put it in a bottle? 
Did it wonder if it could get out? May I see it some day? 

Your loving grandson, 

Julian. 



106 COMPOSITION 

The grandfather's reply: 
March 24, 1892. 
My dear 5ulian: 
I never could make sure about the Water Baby. I bave 
seen babies in water and babies in bottles; but the baby in 
the water was hot in a bottle, and the baby in the bottle was 
hot in the water. 
My friend who wrote the story of the Water Baby was a 
very kind .nan and very clever. Perhaps he thought I could 
see as .nuch in the water as he did. There are so.ne people 
who see a great deal, and so.ne who see very little in the sa,ne 
things. 
When Fou grow up, I dare say, Fou will be one of the 
great-deal seers; and see things .nore wonderful than Water 
Babies, where other folks can see nothing. 
Give my best love to Daddy and Ma.n.ny. 

Ever Four loving 
Grandpater. 

PROSE FOR TRANSCRIPTION 

In addition fo selections from the leader, such com- 
positions in prose and poetry as the following may be 
transcribed : 
BEES AND FRUIT 

Spring, lovely spring has corne. The fruit trees are 
clothed in white and are full of perfu.ne and beauty with all 
their lovely blosso.ns. Standing under a tree, we hear a 
hu.n.ning sound .nade by the wings of nu.nberless insects; 
looking up, we see honey-bees, and bu.nble-bees, .noths, and 
flies, and wasps. What are they all doing? They are feeding 
on the nectar of the flowers or gathering pollen--the yellow 
dust on the little spines within the bloo.n. This pollen is 
.nade into wax for co.nbs or into food for their young. The 
insects are very busy, each intent upon its own work, and 
looking after its own needs. But. at the sa,ne ri.ne, they are 
doing another kind of work for us. and without their help we 
should get no fruit. A bee pushes its head into a flower in 



PROSE FOR TRANSCRIPTION 1(}7 

order to reach the honey, and some pollen sticks to it; then 
it goes to another, and some pollen is rubbed off. By this 
process, the setting of fruit is ruade sure. If pollen from 
one blossom is hot carried to another, the fruit will hot set. 
How much, then, do we owe to these tiny workers' 

October'. How lovely are the woods now; the leaves bave 
ehanged from their summer green to ail kinds of varied 
eolours, scarlet, and crimson, golden yellow, brown, and 
russet, and every shade between. Soon they will fall and 
carpet the ground, and the trees will show limbs and branches 
bare against the sky. Nearly ail the birds are gone; they 
bave flown away to the south to spend the winter, because if 
they stayed here, they could get no food. The sparrows, 
crows, woodpeckers, and chickadees remain, as they are able 
to find enough to eat and keep them warm. The squirrels 
have been busy gathering nuts and hiding them away, so 
that they may have food when the cold weather cornes, and 
it is too stormy for them to go out and gather the cones from 
the tops of the pine trees. These they pick to pieces in order 
to get out the seeds that are between the scales. Autumn is 
often a lovely time of the year, but it makes one sad to see 
ail the flowers wither and die, and all the beauty of summer 
pass away. 
S.N'O,V-FLA KES 
It is a Dleasant winter day, cloudy and hot very cold, little 
flakes of ShOW are slowly falling; there is hardly any wind. 
Look at the flakes on the dark sleeve oï your coat; each one 
is a marvel oï beauty. There are many different patterns, 
but all are rhin and fiat, and have six points. This is the 
way in which crystals are formed when water freezes. Ail 
the ShOW about us is ruade up of millions upon illions o 
these crysta[s. We do hot often see them in their beauty, 
because they are so frail and rhin that the wind breaks them 
up into little pieces; or, if the weather should be mild, they 
stick together and orm large flakes, in which the patterns 
can be no longer seen. How wonderïul and how beautiful 
are even the commonest works of God 



108 COMPOSITION 

POETRY FOR TRANSCRIPTION 

Said young Dandelion. 
With a sweet air. 
°'I have my eye 
On Miss Daisy fair". 

Before green apples blush, 
Before green nuts embrown, 
Why one day in the country 
Is worth a month in town. 

Heap on more wood, 
The wind is chill, 
But, let it whistle as it will, 
We'll keep our Merry Christmas still. 

Again the sunny month of May 
Has ruade our hills and valleys gay. 

The feathered people you may sec 
Perched all around in everF tree. 

Corne, ye thankful people, corne, 
Raise the song of harvest home; 
All is safely gathered in, 
Ere the winter's storms begin. 
God, our Maker, doth provide 
For our wants to be supplied; 
Corne to God's own temple, corne, 
Raise the song of Harvest Home. 

Oh, roses and lilies are fair to seeo 
But the wild blue-bell is the flower for me. 

How pleasant the lire of the bird must be, 
Flitting about in a leafy tree. 

The Queen of the Spring, as she passed down the vale, 
Left her robe in the trees and her breath in the gale. 



FRIENDLY LETTERS :I09 

FRIENDLY LETTEIIS 
The ïriendly letter is usually madc ont of thc earlie.t 
ïorms of original written composition. All children wish 
fo write letters fo their friends, and the dcsire fo convey 
thought is indispensable fo successful efforts in compo.i- 
tion. In writing short ïriend]y lcters in Form ]I, more 
care should be exercised in regard fo the form of the letter. 
Friendly letters may occasionally be written on note-paper, 
and some practice should be giwln in addressing envelopes 
or paper cut the same size as envelopes, and in placing the 
stamps. If note-paper is.ed, tbe lctter should commence 
about an inch ïrom the top of the page. Thê place and 
date are usually written in tbe upper right-hand corner 
and may take one of the ïollow!ng three ïorns: 
I. 83 James St., 
London, Ont., 
May 18, 1911. 

This form is used when the street address is of impor- 
tance as well as the city or post-office address. 

165 King st., 
Aylmer, May 17, 1911. 

This form is frequently used when writing fo a person 
living in the same city, or town, or province as the writer, 
and is the form that is used in ordinary friendly letters. 

Elora, Ont., 
May 17, 1911. 

This form is used when there is no special street or 
number, and when the post-office is all that need be stated. 



110 COMPOSITION 

In large note-paper--eight in«hes by rive inches--a 
mnargin of an inch should be allowed at the top, three 
quarters of an inch on the left side, half an incl on the 
right, and hall an inch at the bottom. On smnall note- 
paper, smaller margins should be suflïcient. The saluta- 
tion should commeHce af the lcft-hand margin, as: Dear 
Sir,-- Dear Madam,-- My dear Tom,-- followed by a 
comma and a dash. The first paragraph usually colm- 
mences be]ow this dash: the other paragraphs should also 
he indented about the width of the margin. After the 
salutation sorne writers place a colon (:); others, a 
comma and a dash (,--). The simple col.nma after the 
naine of a person addressed, as, "John, corne here", cor- 
responds to the latter, and marks the pause after addressing 
a person and before l.naking a statement, asking a question, 
or gi'ing a commnand. 
The introduction should be clear and should denote 
briefiy the subject-matter of the letter. The l.niddle para- 
graph, or bodv of the letter, should give coherenfly the 
message and should be followed usually by a brief closing 
paraaph preceding fle comnplimentary closing. 
The complimentary closing of the letter should begin 
about half-way across the page. The first word only 
should commence with a capital, as: Yours truly. The 
la.t word should be followed bv a comma, as on page 16 
of the Text-book. Beneath and fo the right, is the sig- 
nature. 
In addressing the envelope, the first line--usually the 
namne---should be written about equally distant fromn the 
top and bottom edges and also from the right and left 
edges of the envelope. Care should be taken to write the 
proper title, as Mr., Iaster, Irs., ]Iiss, E.q., Dr., Rev., 
]I.P., etc., in the proper place. Beneath and to the right, 



FRIENDLY LETTERS 111 

should be written the number and the stroet, or the post- 
office box, or the particular address; on the third line and 
fo the right, the city, post-office, town, or village; and fo 
the right on the ïourth line, the province, statc, or country 
in which the post-office is situated, as: 

Miss Janet Brown, 
87 Church Street, 
Hamilton, 
Ont. 

2o 

Master Henry Jones, 
P. O. Box 876, 
Halifax, 
N. S. 

Samuel Hughson, Esq., M.P., 
36 Sparks Street, 
Ottawa, 
Canada. 

4o 

Mr. William Smith, 
Virden, 
Man. 

Mrs. Thomas Lee, 
56 Park Row, 
Bideford, 
Devonshire, 
England. 

Later on if will be seen that, in busincss and ïormal 
letters, the address is also placed beïore the salutation, 
"My dear Sir". The stamp should be neatly affixed in 
the upper right-hand corner of the envelope. (See Model, 
p. 19 of the Text-book.) 



112 COMPOSITION 

STUDY OF THE FARAGRAFII 
The study of the friendly ]etter naturally ]eads fo the 
study of the paragraph. It will be sufficient in this Form 
if the teacher proceeds on broad princip]es, demonstrating 
fo the pupi] b)" means of ]essons Ïrom the Reader the 
nmin ]aw of the paragraph: naine]) y, that the sentences in 
each paragraph are grouped together because they, each 
and ail, bear on the topic usually indicated in the first 
sentence of the paragraph. 
For instance, in the lesson on The Lion a,d te Mouse, 
page 5 of the Text-book, the first paraoTaph tells about 
one part of the story, naine]y, the mouse under dilïicu]ties. 
(See first and second sentences.) The sentences in the 
second parazraph te]l about another part of the story-- 
the lion undcr diflîculties. (See first sentence.) 

FIIIST BIATERIAL IN WRITTEN WORK 

In order that the pupils may have an abundance fo 
say, familiarity with the subject and confidence in their 
ability fo interest those for whom they write are most 
essential. It will be wêll, thêrêfore, in the written Course 
for Form II, frêquently fo rêturn for material fo the 
work takên orally in Form I, especially fo those subjects 
which proved, in the oral lessons, intênsely interesting. 
Each lesson in written composition should be preceded by 
an oral lesson on that subject. The principle of keeping the 
writtên work slightly bêhind the oral in point of difïiculty 
as wêll as rime, will be round to be quite in keêping with 
the method pursucd by writers in developing a subject. 
Well writtên idêas spring from. and are matured by, 
(a) thought, (b) t)nvêrsation on this thou..-ht, (c) study, 
(d) being associated for some tire with the subject, (e) 
living in close contact with the conditions fo be described. 



EXERCISES IN WRITING PARAGRAPHS 113 

EXERCISE IN WRITING PARAGRAPItS 
The following exercises will be found suitable for 
written composition : 
1. Answer these questions about an orange: What is its 
shape and colour? How large is it? Where does it grow? 
What is it used for? Write the facts in a single paragraph. 
2. Write a paragraph about your pony. Speak of his 
naine and colour, what he is useful for, the good or bad 
habits he has, what he likes to eat, how he is cared for. 
3. Write full answers to the following questions, giving 
a short paragraph to each: In what month is Dominion Day? 
Christmas Day? New Year's Day? Empire Day? 
4. Describe, in two paragraphs, a hundred-yard race be- 
tween two fat men. Tell about, (a) the appearance of each 
at the start, how fast they ran, and which won; (b) how 
the people enjoyed the race, and what they said. 
5. Reproduce, in two or three paragraphs, a fairy story 
with which you are familiar, for example, Little Rea Riaing 
Hood, or Silverlocks, or Cinderella. 
6. Write a story about Moses or Joseph, Samson or Daniel, 
Ruth or Esther, in three paragraphs, giving (a) early lire, 
(b) difficulties, (c) great work. 
7. Describe, in three paragraphs, the house you should 
like to live in. You may use the following plan: (a) its 
situation and grounds, (b) size, shape, and general appear- 
ance, (c) what you particularly like about it. 
8. Write a letter of two paragraphs to your mother, telling 
ber the experiences of a single day. Airer writing it, notice 
how the letter answers these questions: Where was the letter 
written? When was it written? What does it tell about? 
By whom was it written? To whom was it written? 
9. Have you ever gone to the woods for flowers, for rasp- 
berries, for beech-nuts, for sap? Write a story about it, in 
two paragraphs. 
10. Have you ever gathered cherries, plums, apples, pears? 
In three paragraphs write when, where, and how it was done. 
Have you helped to take up turnips, potatoes, beets, or 
carrots? In two paragraphs tell how it was done and where. 



114 COMPOSITION 
11. Write a story about mowing, or raking, or loading, or 
drawing in hay, or riding on the load. Tell what you saw 
and did, in two paragraphs. 
12. Have you helped in a field of grain with the reaping 
and binding, the shocking, loading and drawing in, stacking 
the grain or putting it in the mow in the barn? Say what 
kind of grain it was, and tell, in two paragraphs, what was 
done in each case. Take only one action st a time. 
13. If you were to have a holiday on September 1st, tell 
in two paragraphs, where and how you would spend it in the 
country. 
14. Tell, in a paragraph, how you spent your holiday; in 
two paragraphs, how you spent July 1st. 
15. Tell, in one paragraph, about a frolic in the barn; 
in two paragraphs, about a picnic in the woods or by the lake 
or river. 
SENTENCES TO BE COMBI.'ED 
16. Write six sentences, to be combined, about cups, 
saucers, plates, pails. Tell about their shape, and what they 
are ruade of, as: The pan is shallow. It is ruade of tin. Com- 
bine these sentences. 
17. Write six questions about fish or frog, as: Where do 
fish sleep? Then try to combine them. 
18. Write six sentences about leaves and fiowers, telling 
about their shape and colour; combine the sentences, as: The 
leaf of the maple has three points. It is green in summer, 
but turns yellow, red, or brown in the fall. 

SUITABLE MATERIAL FOR REPRODUCTION 

In the memory reproduction of good prose and poetry 
if may be noticed that everv story is not suitable for re- 
production by junior classes; such stories should be clear 
cut, with a definite beginning, nliddle, and end. They 
should be coherent throughout, one part leading up fo 
and suggesting the next. Some stories are too long and 



BEGINNING WRITTEN COMPOSITION 115 

involve too many particulars, with often too much attempt 
af fine composition. There are other stories that may be 
told in an ordinary way, but which lend themselves to a 
process of extension later on when the pupil becomes able 
fo fill in or expand certain parts. 

]fETHODS IN BEGINNING WRITTEN CO]IPOSITION 
In beginning written composition, the fo]]owing 
methods ma), be used: A short, well-known story of one 
paragraph, or a short fable or incident may be chosen for 
reproduction, and the tcacher may ask the pupils fo co- 
operate with him in first giving the story orally. Ho may 
reject the introductory sentence of the first pupil alto- 
gether, may suggest an improvement in that of the second, 
commend the sentence proposed by the third and write it 
on the board as it is accepte& tic will proceed in this 
way, marking the beginning of his sentcnces with capitals, 
and placing the periods and important punctuation marks 
as he writes. After the story is finished, he will probably 
have fo offer explanations and answer questions regarding 
the capitals and important punctuation marks. The 
pupils will then be required to copy carefully what has 
been written on the board, paying close attention fo the 
form, the title, the margin, and the spacing after periods, 
question marks, etc., and also to the writ]ng and the 
spelling. After two or three such lessons, the teacher mav 
proceed as before, until he bas completed the oral work on 
the black-board ; then he may erase what has been written 
and ask the pupils fo write the storv. When several such 
compositions have been written, the work on the board 
may be gradually lessened, and the pupils may be asked 
fo write for themselves in blank books or on paper. 



116 COMPOSITION 

The following is another plan for beginning written 
composition: After reading a short, pointed story or 
familiar incident, preferably from the Reader, the pupils 
may be asked to reproduce it orally, all keeping closely 
to the thread of the story and giving it in much the saine 
words and at about the saine lenh as the original. A 
pupi] may then lead in dictating from memory, while the 
teacher writes on the board, without capitals or punctua- 
tion, the pupil's statements as dictated to him. The 
storv thus written, withot capitals or punctuation marks, 
is then, with the assistance of the pupils, re-arranged or 
broken up into sentences on the board. It is then com- 
pared with the original, and afterwards transcribed. 
Other suitable compositions of the saine style may be 
written in this wav and copied ïrom the black-board or 
the Reader. or written by the pupils from the teacher's 
dictation. The pupils mav thus see how their own matter 
is arranged or broken up into sentences. 

PNCTIYATION 

In breaking up the composition into sentences, and 
also in placing the important punctuation marks as if is 
being written, the teacher nmy compare the methods 
employed in oral composition with those employed in 
written cvmposition, in order to make the hearer or the 
reader under.tand what is spoken or written. In oral 
composition, the speaker's words may be OTeatly rein- 
forced and assisted by repetitions, by inflection and in- 
tonation of the voiee, by action, gesture, and e_x-pression 
of eountenance: so, in the written lanoage, the words of 
the writer bave corresponding aids, indieated by capitals, 
indentions, punctuation marks, quotation marks, etc. 



PR,PARATION FOR WRITTEN COMPOSITION 

PREPARAION FOR WRITTEN COMPOSITION ON «« THE WIND "" 

After an interesting conversation with thc pupils on 
"The Wind ", preferal)ly on a windy day, as fo the different 
directions from which it blows, the work it does, and the 
pranks it plays, the teacher may repeat, or ask a pupil to 
repeat, Rossetti's poem: 

Who has seen the wind? 
Neither you nor I, 
But when the trees 
Bow clown their heads, 
The wind is passing by. 

The pupils repeat the poem with him, ovcr and over 
again. 
After such a lesson, they are in a proper mood to enjoy 
and profit by hearing or reading Robert Louis Stevenson's 
poem, The Wind. 
I saw you toss the kites on high, 
And blow the birds about the sky. 

and Lonoellow's D«ybreat«: 
A wind came up out of the sea, 
And said, " O, mists, make room for me ". 

After talks of a stimulating character on wind storms, 
on the different characteristics of the north, south, east, 
and west winds, and on their romps together, the pupils 
are asked fo describe in turn each wind, distinguishing if 
in two or three appropriate words or sentenees. 

The south wind is warm, gentle, kind, and likes to coax 
the May flowers and crocuses out to play with him in the 
spring. 



118 COMFOSITION 

Later on, the sentences referring to the north wind 
are dictated by the pupils and written on the board, in 
good form, by the teacher. Still later on, each pupil in 
turn is asked fo think that he is the north wind and to 
write what he thinks the north wind says. 
While the pupils are writing, the teacher may more 
about among them, stimulating each fo do his best work, 
he]ping those who are hesitating or in doubt as to punc- 
tuation, spelling, capitals, etc., warning the careless to do 
neat work, encouraging the dull, and being helpful in a 
practical way, but not allowing the pupils to depend upon 
his help. 
The following are copies of compositions written by 
boys in Form II, after the subject had been dealt with in 
this way : 
TH WID 

I arn the wind. I have lots of fun this kind of day. 
Especially to blow people's hats off. 
They say to one another, "I wish the wind would go 
away". But that will hot rnake me go away. I will blow 
all the barder. I like very rnuch to corne out on a snowy 
day like this because I can blow the ShOW in people's faces. 
I like to whistle round Big Ben, who you all know is the 
City Hall Clock, best of anything. The pupils in Miss 's 
room were asked to write a composition about me. Why, 
how do they know what I do? They only sit in their seats 
and learn 2 rimes, while I travel all over the world, and I 
never bave to sit in a seat like they do. Just imagine thern 
trying to write a composition about me. 
The City Hall Clock and I bave great talks at night about 
what we see in the daytirne. So, when you hear rnoaning 
sounds at night, you will know I arn talking to the clock. 
Now I rnust close, as here cornes Brother South, and I want 
to go for a rornp with hirn. 



PICTURES 119 

THE WEST WIND 
I an] the west wind. Son]etin]es I an] very strong, son]e- 
tin]es very gentle. What I en]oy n]ost of ail is sending people 
along the ice on skates, or sailing ships. 
One day, when son]e children were going to school, I tried 
to blow then] the other way, so as to go to the other school. 
"They bave lost their way, poor things", I said, "but I will 
help then] back". But still they had gone the right way 
after all. and I had n]ade then] late. After that, I will n]ind 
n]y own business. 
One tin]e I was very rough. I seen]ed to get stronger 
every day, and, oh! how I longed for son]e boisterous fun! 
As I neared a little town, I blew with all the force I knew. 
Crash! Down can]e the bouses, churches, and stores; 
people rushed out into the streets and cried, " The Hurricane! 
The Hurricane!" I was sorry, and wanted to stop, but when 
you begin you n]ust end, so I blew and blew, until nearly ail 
n]y strength was used up, and when I saw the dan]age I had 
done, I didn't want to see it; so I hurried on to find pleasure 
of a gentle kind. I joined the South Wind, and that n]ade 
us the South-West Wind. 
We went south, and chased a little sail-boat round a lake. 
It greatly pleased the people in the boat. The South Wind 
and I had a quarrel, but I and the boat wandered on. A 
horrid old windn]ill got in n]y way, so, of course, I had to 
turn it. I hate turning windn]ills, because there is no fun 
in it, and I like to play ail the tin]e. Don't you? 

PICTURES 

The study of simple pictures also provides suitable 
material for written composition; and when a composition 
is based upon a picture-study, much the saine method 
should be followed as in the case of a story for reproduc- 
tion. Suppose, for example, the teacher has decided to 
make a study of Millet's "The Woman Feedin. Hens ". 
Either a picture must be provided which all the pupiIs 
9 C.8. 



120 COMPOSITION 

in the class can see clearly, or else a small print must be 
supplied for each pupil. 
The teacher has studied the picture before coming 
to the class, so as to see what details in the picture are 
naturally grouped together. He will first ask the class 
to look af the picture as a whole and tell what they see in 
if. One pupil says: 
In this picture I see a woman feeding her hens. 

The teacher writes this sentence on the black-board, 
at the saine rime drawing attention to the capital af the 
beginning of the sentence and to the Capital I, and also 
fo the period at the end of the sentence. The teacher now 
questions the class further about what the woman is doing, 
and writes down the answers of the pupils, as before, in 
the ïorm of sentences. The following are examples: 
Q. Where is the woman standing? 
A. She is standing on the steps at the door of a bouse. 
Q. What is she giving the hens? 
A. She is giving the hens some kind of grain. 
Q. In what is she holding 
A. She is holding it in ber apron. 

The answers of the pupils, as they are written on the 
board, form a paragraph which will read somewhat as 
follows : 
In this picture I see a woman feeding her henB. She is 
standing on the steps at the door of a bouse. She is giving 
the hens some kind of grain. She is holding it in ber apron, 
and she is giving the hens a handful at a time. Some hens 
are running toward ber. The rooster is standing at one 
side, and he is not trying to get any of the grain. Perhaps 
the woman will throw the next handful to him. In the door- 
way behind the woman there is a young child. He has corne 
out to the door to see his mother feed the hens. 



PICTURES 121 

When the paragraph is finished, the teacher asks one 
of the pupils to read it. Then the paragraph is erased 
from the board, and some of the pupils tell the story orally. 
This is enough work for one lesson, and the class are sent 
fo their seats and required fo write the story for them- 
selves. 
If the pupils are interested in the picture, other com- 
position lessons may be based on if; and the pupils will 
see that in describing each part of the picture a separate 
paragraph is required. These paragraphs may he written 
somewhat as follows: 

THE WOMAN 

The woman is hot old, and the kind of ¢lothes that she 
wears shows that she is hOt rich. She wears a kerchief on 
her head to protect her from the sun and wind while she is 
out of doors. She works hard, for her sleeves are rolled up 
and she is wearing an apron. She has wooden shoes on ber 
feet. Perhaps she is too poor to buy leather shoes. Most 
of the poor people in France wear wooden shoes. 

THE HOUSE AND YARD 
The house is marie of stone, and the steps are marie of 
blocks of stone also. The house has one door and only one 
small window. It looks like an old bouse. A great many 
weeds are growing out of the roof. 
The yard seems to be very small and it is paved with 
stones. Perhaps there is a hen bouse at one side of the yard. 
At the back of this yard there is a garden, and in this garden 
there are flowers and bee-hives. Between the yard and the 
garden there is a stone wall with vines and weeds growing 
on it. The gate in this wall is open, so that the hens can run 
out into the garden if they wish. 



122 COMPOSITION 

ORIGINAL COIPOSITIONS 

Original composition should be begun by having the 
pupil write some personal incident in his experience, and 
should be continued in such a way as to develop the pupil's 
talents in story-telling and in constructing interesting 
plots. The actions should be genuine, truthfully told, and 
closely connected with the pupil's own life. The composi- 
tion may take the form of aletter telling a personal inci- 
dent or a familiar event within the pupil's knowledge, or 
of an autobiography, as of a doll, a bird, a horse, or a dog. 

THOUGI=IT AND EXPRESSION 
The basis of good composition is tbouglt. The first 
essential step is thinking; the second, expressbg this 
ibougbt natural]y, but hot carelessly, so that others may 
understand it. To a kowledge of the subject and a deep 
iderest in if must be added cultivation of good metbods 
of expressing this knowledge. 

BLACK-BOARD WORK 

In Form II. much composition arranged orallv in 
previous lessons should be dictated by the class, or rather, 
by individual members of the class, to be written by the 
teacher upon the black-board. There should still be much 
transcription of suitable matêrial and more reproduction 
of work previously planned or outlined, and dealt with 
orally, but the original work should be brief (not more 
than two or three paragraphs), simple, and interesting. 

ORAL AND WRITTEN WORK 
The beginning of the written work, as we have said, 
follows, and is closely connected with, the oral work. Some 



MATERIAL FOR WRITTEN WORK 123 

of the best exorcises will be found by returning fo the oral 
work and expressing graphically what has been alrêady 
expressed orally on subjects such as those in the following 
exercises : 
EXERCISES 
1. Write what you know about to-day. 
2. Write what you know about this month. 
3. Write what you know about your naine, age, etc. 
4. Write what you know about what Indian children live in. 
5. Write what you know about what we live in. 
6. Describe something growing in your garden, so that 
the other pupils may know what it is and be able to naine it. 
7. In the saine way, describe something in the room. 
8. Take a verbal message from some one, senti back an 
answer, and vice versa. 
9. Write, in ortier, the actions performed by a fellow-pupil, 
for example: John arose from his seat, spoke to the teacher, 
took his cap, and quietly left the room. 
10. Write clear directions for a fellow-pupil to follow. See 
that, in carrying them out, he does what you intended, and 
if hot, in what particular the pupil or the directions were in 
fault. Make this clear. For example, "John, put your book 
in the desk, stand, corne forward, and clean the board, please ". 
11. Write a short description of the work done by the 
shoemaker, the blacksmith, the carpenter, the milkman. 

]fATERIAL FOR WRITTEN WOIIK 

In selecting the material for first lessons in written 
composition, the same order should be followed as in oral 
composition. To begin, a short story or fable may be 
placed before the pupils for composition, orally, and then 
in writing. Their pers may be described, or their favourite 
gaines, first orally, and then in writing. 
The teaeher may use as material for written composi- 
tion in Form II, bright, interesting stories, fables, personal 



124 COMPOSITION 

experiences, reproduction of good prose and poetry; the 
study of simple picture-stories illustrated by brush, pencil, 
or crayon; stories of primitive life, of child-life to-day 
in other lands; stories which have previously been read 
or to]d to the pupils; fricndly letters regarding their 
home life and surroundings, their gaines, occupations, 
school, their nearest post-office, village, town, city; the 
meaning of particular days, such as Thanksgiving Day or 
Christmas Day. The recitation of suitable poetry and 
prose selections should precede the oral and written 

exercises. 

INVENTION 
Pupils may also profitably attempt to writê stories 
which they bave invented, of a type similar to those they 
bave heard or read. 
The teacher's work is fo stimulate and encourage the 
pupil's impulse to express himself; and to endeavour by 
guidance, s)mpathy, and appreciation to make the pupil's 
efforts in expression a pleasure. He should tactfully avoid 
discouraging the pupil by criticising his work in an un- 
kindly manner or belote his class-mates; neither should 
he ridicule it, but should induce the pupil to take pains 
fo make his work intelligible and interesting to his readers 
or hearers. 
The pupil will remember that he story is o be read 
by other pupils and will ask himself: « What else do they 
need fo be told so that they may understand easily and 
may be ineresed ?" After a paragraph bas been written, 
the pupil should criticise it and ask: "Will they under- 
stand that? Yave I said what I meant fo say? Would 
they understand it better or be more interested if I put if 
in another way?" 



ROUGH BEGINNINGS 125 

ROUGH BEGINNINGS 

In written, as in oral composition, the îollowing diffi- 
culties are fo be considered from the pupil's position: (a) 
his lack of matter, (b) his tendency to ramble, (c) his 
confused and wordy way of saying things. 
The teacher should hot look for too mueh af this stage 
and should be content with rough results, as long as the 
work shows thought and plan and is earefully written. 
It is more important af first that the pupil's work be 
genuine, childlike, and sincere, than that if be marked 
by maturity of langage or a degree of excellence of style. 
The compositions are often laboured and sometimes 
uninteresting because wrong topics are chosen. Subjeets 
such as the following will appeal to girls and boys af this 

age : 

Were you ever: 
1. On a big load of hay or grain? 
2. In a boat or on a train? 
3. Wading in a creek or pond? 
4. Driving in a cutter or a buggy? 
5. Riding on a horse's back? 
6. In a snow-storm? 
7. In a rain-storm? 
8. Fishing in a creek? 
9. Camping near a river or a lake? 
Tell about one of these in two or three paragraphs. 

The teacher should look at the indention, the margins, 
the spelling, the neatness and legibility of the writing, 
the eapitals, the punctuation, and the construction of the 
sentences. There should be no broken words at the end 
of the line. 



126 COMPOSITION 

FROC[ t{EPRODUCTION TO INVENTION 
Between the reproductive and inventive stages, good 
exercises tan be ruade for the pupils by varying the story 
to be reproduceà. 
For example, the story may be written from another 
point of view; as, The Lion and the Mouse from the lion's 
standpoint, ïrom the mouse's standpoint, ïrom that of a 
wituess. 
The following method bas been used in connection 
with class composition: After the subject has been decided 
upon and the plan outlined, questions (such as in Study 
IV, Text-book) are proposed and put upon the board, and 
the pupils in turn are requested to answer. This helps the 
dull, limits the range of the rambling, and gives all a 
common interest in the work. 
In taking up the subject orally, it will help the pupil 
if the teaeher considers the subject in different ways and 
aires to create interest and to evoke eagerness to write 
on the part of the pupil. Y[e should feel that he has an 
abundance fo say. On fle other hand. the teacher will, 
in some cases, have fo ]irait the subjeet, keeping if within 
narrower bounds in order fo check the pupil's rambling 
and keep him fo fle point. If this ean be aecomplished, 
the pupil's wordiness will often disappear. If is better, 
however, fo bave too much fo sav or to write flmn hot 
enouzh; and the tea«her should alwavs be tolerant rather 
than critical, and tactful in encouraging rather than in 
repressing the pupil's self-expression. 

ERADICATINO ERRORS 

If will be necessary to eradieate errors in expression, 
etc. The common errors may be round bv asking the 
pupils fo write freelv and ful]y on an easy, familiar, and 



ERADICATING ERRORS 127 

interesting subject, and noticing the incorrect forms that 
are general throughout the compositions. Thcn the plan 
of attack on the part of the teacher mu.t dcpend upon 
the errors and the extent to which they have become 
prevalent. 
When the teacher has, from these compositions, and 
also from the conversation of the pupils in school and in 
the playground, ruade a private list of the typical errors 
common to the class, he may frame appropriate sentences 
and special exercises containing the corresponding correct 
forms of expression. On each correct form he lavs special 
cmphasis, withut referring in any case fo the author of 
the error. For example, he has found in several com- 
positions : 
Ain't it too bad? Ain't they going? Mary ain't here 
now; etc. 
and writes such sentences as the following: 
Isn't it hot? It isn't very hot. Aren't they nice. They 
aren't nice at all. Isn't Thornas home? Thornas isn't home. 
Aren't you going? No, we aren't going to-day. Aren't those 
books interesting? No. they are not very interesting. Aren't 
there any knives on the table? No, there aren't any knives 
here. 
He places these sentences on the board, asks the class 
fo repeat them each day, and invites discussion on them. 
If the pupils refer fo or use an incorrect form, he ignores 
if, passing if by with the comment: " Good speakers never 
use that. If is hot good English ". 
In the same manner, the teacher proceeds to deal with 
another error, "Don't he", by constructing sentences 
such as : 
The sick boy doesn't corne to church now. 
Why doesn't the doctor visit him? 
He doesn't think it necessary. 



127 COMPOSITION 

These are ïollowed by such exercises as: 
John doesn't--; Why doesn't--? He doesn't; 
She doesn't--; Who doesn't--? It doesn't; 

involving the use of the correct form; and much later the 
method of ehoice or test may be used, as, for example: 
Why (doesn't, don't) father take us? 
He (doesn't, don't) think we 8hould go. 

Only the pupils' errors should be treated in this way. 
These correct forms of expression and exercises thereon 
should be designed to eradicate real errors. 

IAIN PARTS IN PARAGRAPtIS 

Ask the pupils to examine the paragraphs in BeIIing 
Hte Cal, Second Rêadêr, page 4-t. In fhe case of each para- 
graph, ask them fo notice the beginning, or topic, and 
the connection of the sentences in the paraaph. Ask 
them to notice also fhe cnnection of each paraaph with 
fhe next paraaph. Cpying, writing, and memorizing 
a few good paragraphs will help the pupils in this work. 

CORRECTIONS OF WORK 

In making corrections in fhe language exercises, the 
teacher should hot harass the pupils by being too exacting. 
If is better fo select fhe chier faulfs common fo several 
pupils, fo deal wifh fhese s3znpathetically and continuously, 
and with the minor faults later on. If should be sufficient 
af flrst fo feach pupils fhat fhere is a right way of speaking 
and fo accustom their ears fo the right forms. 



CORRECTIONS OF WORK 129 

ItiS well, in correcting mistakes, t go over some of 
the preceding work in corrections, in ordcr fo secure the 
proper frame of mind before commencing new work, the 
main idea being fo lead the pupils, as early as possflle, 
to self-criticism. 
A school sentiment should be cultivated in favour of 
correct forms of expression. The sentiment may be of 
gradual growth, but will be fostered by the reading of 
interesting stories written in good English, and bv the 
attention which the teacher pays fo his own language and 
to that of his pupils. 



CHAPTER XII 

FORM III 

DETAILS OF THE COURSE 

ON CO$IPLETING file Course for Form II, file pupil 
should have acquired a measure of clearness and precision 
in expressing his thoughts in connection with his own 
experience, school studies, alld other familiar topics, and 
sonle skill in criticising the form and language of oral 
class answers. He should also be able to write short, 
friendlv letters and hrief, original compositions of one or 
two paragraphs on suitable subjects, with some attention 
fo the unity of the pararaphs. 
In Form III, the pupils are fo continue and extend 
the work of Form II: fo speak and write with greater 
ariety and exactness of expression; fo give clear, concise 
answers fo questions in «lass work: fo construct para- 
graphs with due regard fo the orderly arrangements of 
thoughts; t(, plan the outline of somewhat longer original 
compositions of two or three paragraphs requiring more 
thought and skill; fo continue the studv of the sentence; 
fo change direct fo indirect narration; fo make the best 
arrangement of words, phrases, and clauses in the sen- 
tence and of sentences in the para.aph, in order fo secure 
coherence; fo give further attention fo bu.¢iness forms and 
lctters, and to the use of capitals and punetuation marks. 

REVIEW WITlï ADDITIONAL ]ATERIAL 
No rime will be lost by reviewing the work of Form 
II in the junior grade of Form III, if in doing so the 
teacher makes use of new material. 



ORAL EXERCISES 131 

The simple life and adventures of Indians and savage 
people appeal fo the pupil af this age. He is greatly 
interested in all their struggles and also in their cruel 
deeds. He is attracted, but not deceived, by ideal pictures 
of fairy life. He is interested in fables and shows much 
sympathy for the lower animals when endowed with 
speech, even more thau he does for human beings. The 
explanation of striking things "in the world of martel" 
arouses his attention. He inquires elosely into all natural 
phenomena and is intensel 3" interested in talks about the 
sun, the moon, darkness, and light. These will, therefore, 
furnish good subjects for oral and writtcn compositions, 
as will also his studies in geography, history, literature, 
nature study, art, and arithmetic. Many of the Bible 
stories attract the pupil. These should be closely read for 
their language, as well as for their interest and for their 
moral and educational value. 
In both literature and history, thc human interest is 
the prevailing one, and suitable topics for paragraphs may 
be found in almost every lesson in these subjects. 

ORAL EXERCISES TO SECURE CLEAR AND LOGICAL 
STATEIENTS 
To cultivate clear and logical answering in class, the 
pupils may be exercised in telling well what actions have 
been performed by others and in describing accurately 
objects put into their hands, for example: 
l. The teacher whispers instructions to a pupil in the 
class. She then asks the c]ass fo watch carefullv what 
this pupil does. The pupil rises, takes a book from the 
teacher's desk and places if upon the window-sill, and 
then asks the teacher fo excuse him as he passes before 
ber in returning fo his seat. The pupils are then asked 



132 COMPOSITION 

fo tell clearly and in an orderly way what he did. This 
will be given in such a form as: 
James rose and walked forward, took the book from the 
teacher's desk, and placed it on the window-sill. He then 
walked back to his seat, excusing himself (saying " Excuse 
me") as he pussed in front of the teacher on his return. 

2. Two or more pupils are blindfolded. An object 
sm.h as an apple, a fig, a bottle, a fountain pen, or a 
wooden two-inch cul)e, is placed in the hands of one pupil 
for one minute or longer, then in the hands of the others 
for the saine rime, until eaeh has had time fo handle it. 
Thon each in turn is asked fo describe if, and conclude 
what it is, as: 
(a) The object in my hands is round. It feels and smells 
like an orange. I think it is an orange. (b) I bave some- 
thing square in my hand. It is in the form of a cube. It is 
hard and feels like wood. I think it is a wooden cube with 
an edge of about two inches. 
This practice may be extended fo two objects, one in 
each hand, say an apple and an orange; the pupils may 
be askcd fo dcscribe ea«h and then compare or contrast 
them. 

3. A situation may be created, as: A car was seated on 
the floor there. Ncxt moment the car is on the table. Tell 
what was done: 
(a) The cat was on the floor, but she jumped on the table. 
(b) The cat jumped from the floor on to the table. 
Almost eçery subject in the school Course will furnish 
good material for questions that require cIear and logical 
answers in class. Satisfactory answering will be secured 
only by giving abundance of practice and much encourage- 
ment fo the pupils. 



TOPICAL RECITATIONS 133 

TOPICAL RECITATIONS ." LOCAL GEOGRAPHY 

The daily lessons will serve as oral work for topical 
recitations and afterwards for written compositions. If 
the lesson be on local geography--the school-house, section, 
village, or town, such paragraphs as the following may 1)e 
developed orally by using a map showing concession roads 
and also the side roads. 

Location and Boundaries of School Section 

Our school section is number four in the township of 
Bridge. If is two and a half toiles square, lts northern 
boundary is Deacon's side road; ifs southern, the town 
line between the townships of Bridge and Kerry. The 
boundary on the east is a line from Deacon's side road to 
the town line dividing the fifth concession into two equal 
parts. The boundary on the west is a line from Deacon's 
side road fo the town line dividing the third concession 
into two equal parts. The section contains, therefore, all 
the land in the fourth concession, in thc east hall of the 
third, and the west hall of the fifth lying between ifs 
,aorthern and southern boundaries. 

The School-house and Grounds 

The school-house is on Roche's side road, hall way 
between the fourth and fifth concession lines, and is almost 
in the middle of the section. It is an oic] frame building 
with a large bell-tower and is built on a hill. On the 
road in front of the building and to the east of if stand 
seven pine trees. 



COMPOSITION 

The Farms 
The land in the section is hilly, but the soil is warm 
and well cultivated. The farmers raise many fine cattle, 
sheep, and horses, and grow hay, grain, and hardy fruits in 
large quantities. 
The Nearest Town 
In a similar wav a description can be developec] oî 
the nearest village, town, city, or noted place, by giving: 
(a) naine, sizc, location; (b) river or water near by; (c) 
mills and factories; (d) emplo)anent of the people; (e) 
railways; (f) main public buil]ings; (g) noted men born 
or living there. 

TOPICAL RECITATIONS: ART AND ARITHMETIC 

Both art and arithmetic furnish excellent subjects 
for training in clear and logical expression. The use 
ruade in thc Text-bo.k of picturcs as material for descrip- 
tive sketches should be continued in this Form, for the 
purpose of developing precision and ,learness iii language 
as well as for securing ordcrly arrangement. On the 
other hand. no better exercise can be given fo secure exact- 
ness in languae and elear and logical reasoning than the 
statements required in solving satisfactorily practical 
problems in arithmetic. 
Belote attempting fo solve a problem, two or more 
pupils mav he asked in turn fo rise and state from memory, 
but hot word for word, the whole or a part of the problem, 
in a clear and orderly manner. Afterwards, eaeh should 
give, orally or in writin, the different steps in ifs solu- 
tion. Pra«tiee in eaeh grade in the framing of good 
prohlems from work done in eaeh of the simple rules will 
prove valuable training in expression: for example: 



TOPICAL RECITATIONS 135 

1. Teacher (after reading the following question}: 
What is the problem ? Pupil. A farmer raised a colt. IIe 
sold him to a buyer for $45. The same day he bought the 
colt back for $40. The next day he sold the colt to another 
buyer for $50. How mu«h did the fariner gain by buying 
the colt back and selling him again ? 
The solution may be given as follows: 
After first selling the colt, the fariner had $45. After 
he bought him back, he had the colt and $5. After selling 
him the second rime, he had $50 and $5, or $55. But 
after selling the colt the first rime, he had $45. Therefore 
he gained $10 by buying him back and selling him again. 

T. What does the following mean? 39+87+45--171. 
P. If means that the sum of 39, 87, and 45 is 171. 
T. "Make up a story for if. 
P. A has 39c., B bas 87c., C has 45c. They bave alto- 
gether 171 cents. 

3o 

T. Make up a problem showing what 25 x 12--3.00 
mav mean. 
P. Each boy in a class was given 25c. There were 
twelve boys. 
T. How nm«h did thev ail receive? 
T. Make the statements. 
P. Each boy had twenty-five cents. 
Together, they had twelve rimes 25c. which is 
three dolars. 

T. What does this mean? $4.20 .--" 28c.--15. 
P. If means that we can take 28c. from $4.20 fifteen 
rimes. 
P. If means that $420 is 15 rimes 28c. 
10 os. 



136 COMPOSITION 

T. Make up a problcln for it. 
I'. Butter is 28c. a pound. How many pounds of 
butter can I buy for $4.20? 
Each exercise in arithmetic should be accompanied 
by exact ]anguage training. 

CLEARNESS 
The power fo express thoughts fluently and without 
waste of words, fo narrate easily and naturally, and fo 
dcscribe clearly, sbould be coveted by each pupil. The 
attainment of this power is mainly dependent upon three 
things : 
1. The clearness of the thought 
2. The orderly arrangement of the ideas fo be expressed 
3. The expressions chosen to indicate these tho.ughts. 
To compose well, pupils should write, as has been said, 
about matters that are familiar and interesting and put 
down what cornes naturally into their minds. 
They should keep their attention upon what they have 
fo say rather than on the words fo be used, and should 
arrange their thoughts so that the hearers can readily 
follow tbem and understand exactly what is in their minds. 
Definiteness of thought is the first essential; then the 
orderly arrangement of the expression of the thought. In 
order fo secure the best results, the writer must plan, 
mentally at least, how fo proceed. 

PLANNING A PARAGRAPH 

The pupils will read what is said on pages 15 and 75 
of tbe Te'¢t-book regarding grouping details into one para- 
graph and will note the exercise on making paragraph 
divisions. 



PLANNING A PARAGRAPH 137 

In The Wolf attd the Lamb, page 12, the pupils will 
see that the thought conceived is " Might beats Right ", 
and the plan is as follows: After the first three sentences, 
which give the situation in outline, the first paragraph 
contains all the sentences bearing on the first charge of 
the wolf, wlaich fails. Thc next paragraph contains ail 
the sentences bearing on the second charge and the con- 
cluding remark and act in the scene. Notice where the 
second paragraph begins. Could each of these paragraphs 
be divided into two ? qaere would you make the division ? 
In a dialogue, each speech will in turn occupy a 
separate paragraph. The Wolf and tbe Lttrab is not a 
dialogue, but tan readily be thrown into that form, if the 
pupils, after the words " pouncing on him ", insert tlae 
words, "and the following dialogue took place ": 
"Why are you dislurbing, etc." 
"Sir, I ara drinking, etc." 
When a composition is properly broken up into para- 
graphs and the sentences are properly arranged, the reader 
is materially assisted in following the thought of the 
writer. The important sentences are the opening and the 
closing ones. The reader's attention nmst be rightly 
directed to the suhject by the opening or topic sentence. 
The final sentence is also important, since it may contain 
the summary of the whole paraaph. In some cases, the 
first sentence of the second paragraph is of the nature of 
a link connecting what has been said in the preceding 
paragraph with the subject-matter of its own group of 
sentences. 
On page 75, there are two paragraphs on "The Toad ", 
the first containing the topic sentence followed bv a descrip- 
tion of the toad's work, the second telling what people 
think of the toad. 



138 COMPOSITION 

The pupils should discuss the advantage or disad- 
vantage of dividing each of these paragraphs into two, 
making the main divisions in each case, and stating what 
would then be the subject of each paragraph. 

PLA.,'ING A COMPOSITION 
If the pupil is about fo tell of "A Trip on a Holiday ", 
he will probably plan fo tell it in this order: 
1. The rime and the place visited 
2. The planning and object of the trip 
3. The members of the party 
4. The journey and any incident on the way 
5. The anlusements and the luncheon there 
6. The return and the impressions of the dav's outing. 
This planning is necessary in oral as well as in written 
composition. The written composition will, however, 
differ from the oral composition both in language and 
form. Just as a let/er, ho'e'er friendly, differs from a 
talk, so the written composition differs from the oral in 
being of a higher order both in dignity of language and 
methodical arrangement. 
The pupils will require practice in beginning composi- 
tions after the planning has been done and should study 
how authors begin their compositions. Examine, for 
illustration, the story of Mary ElizabetI,, page 72, Third 
l%ader, first and second paraaphs. Here, after stating 
the subject earlv in the first sentence, the writer heaps up 
details fo emphasize t]le girl's po'erty, and in the last 
sentence gives the thought of the whole paraaph. 
The teacher should have the pupils compare with this 
the method used by the author in beginning the story of 
Tlte Chase, page 152, Third Reader, where, after stating 



METHODICAL PLANS IN NARRATION 139 

the subject in the first sentence, the author adds fo the 
picture of the doe, that of the hclpless fawn, the absent 
father, the mother's anxiety, until the picture is complete. 
In the ttistory Reader for Form III, the pupils may 
well study also the description of Harold and William I, 
pages 45-6; of The Whitc Tower, pages 55 and 57 ; and of 
Francis Drake, pages 145-6. 

:METHODICAL PLANS IN NARRATION 
In telling of the struggles and adventures of the 
Indians and pioneers, and in recording the history of in- 
dividuals, tribes, or peoples, a methodical plan of outline 
should be followed as fo the order of the topics, such as: 
1. The Indians' personal appearance 
2. Their country 
3. Their home surroundings 
4. Their mode of living 
5. Their motives, deeds, and adventures. 
In T]e Little Hero of Haarlem, page 11o of the Third 
:Reader, we have a narrative, or series of events, each one 
closely connected with, and dependent upon, the preceding, 
as follows : 
1. The boy sers out on an errand. 2. On his return 
he finds a leak in the dike. 3. He bravely endures pain 
and cold until he is found by the clerman. 
:First the various facts of rime, place, surroundings, are 
set forth, and the characters are introduced in this order : 
1. Early in the history of Holland 
2. The boy 
3. Haarlem 
4. The sluices 
5. The country. 



140 COMPOSITION 

Then corne the incidents in order; and the reason or 
motive for telling this story hclps to determine what in- 
cidents, what discourse, action, or dialogue, should be 
inserted, and what should be left out; for instance: 
1. The blind man 
2. The father, the sluicer 
3. q'he bov's picking flowers 
4. The dialogue with the clergyman. 
It will soon be seen that, in narrating an event and 
in telling a story, the main purpose is not to describe the 
characters and surroundings, but to relate the incidents 
in order, so that the listener or reader may understand; 
and yet, fo be understood, the characters must be first 
introduced and the conditions made clear. 
For additional models in the form of biography and 
accounts of historical events, the teacher may examine 
with his class the selections from the Third Reader on 
pages 117, 181. 301, and note how the author commences 
and closes and how he makes the different divisions in 
each selection. 
In short biographical sketches, a plan similar fo the 
following may be adopted: 
1. Incidents in the childhood and early training of 
the individual 
2. His abilities or difficulties; some conversations 
showing his ambition 
3. His chief work; the influence of his lire. 
In describing a battle or in speaking of an historical 
event, an outline mav be followed, such as: 
1. The conditions that led up fo the event 
2. How if was carried out 
3. Ifs effect. 



FAULTS IN WRITTEN COMPOSITION 141 

CO:M]ION FAULTS IN WRITTEN COIrOSlTION 
There are usually a number of vcry common faults 
in the first written compositions of the pul)il of this 
Form, which detract from the clearness of his composi- 
tion : 
1. He forgets fo begin and end tlm sentence well. 
The capital and the period or interrogation or exclamation 
mark shoulà be in place. 
2. IIe often changes the rime from past fo present 
anà baek again, as: 
The sehool-house stood baek some distance from the street. 
On the east side of the yard is the shrubbery. On the west 
were large trees. The yard had a neat fenee around it. The 
garden is small but the lawn was wide and well kept. 
3. He often repeats a word or w»rds unnecessarily and 
sometimes part of a sentence, as: 
(a} The sehool-house is near the ehureh. It is a small 
but very pretty sehool-house. 
(b} We heard that the fishing was good; so we took our 
rods and bait and went to the river to fish. 
If would be better fo omit a and school-house, in (a), 
and fo substitute fo try out luclc for fo fish, in (b). 
4. He often joins several eonseeutive sentences by and, 
as : 
He came over in the morning and went with us to ehureh 
and then returned home and we were left alone again. 
This should be avoided either by altering the form of 
the sentence or by breaking if up into several smaller 
sentences, thus : 
He came over in the morning and went to ehureh with us. 
He then returned home and we were left alone again. 



142 COMPOSITION 

The connective so may be used fo advantage, but the 
construction should not be repeated in the same sentence 
or paragraph; therefore or consequenlly should be sub- 
stituted for it. 
A clause beginning with so, lb erefore, or consequently, 
is usually separated from the clause preceding by a semi- 
colon ; for example : 
Uncle's driver was lame; so my cousin and I had to walk 
to the village store. 
My cousin dld hot wisla to carry laer purchases; there]Ore 
she asked a fariner to bring them in his wagon to aunt's 
gare. When he arrived at tlae gare tlaere was no one to take 
the goods; consequently he brought them into the bouse. 
S,metimes, however, these words are used to show the 
relation in thought between two different statements. 

VARIETY OF EXPRESSION': SENTECES 
Variety of expression is produced by using different 
forms of sentences. On page 33 of the Text-book, examples 
are given of assertive and of interrogative sentences, with 
exercises in which the pupils are asked fo ehange state- 
ments fo questions and questions to statements; and on 
page 47, examples of assertive and exclamatory statements 
are given with similar exercses; for example: ' 
That is certainly clever. 
Isn't that clever? 
I-Iow clever that 
The air was very frosty. 
Was the air hot very frosty? 
ttow very frosty the air was! 
These exercises may be supplemented by framing 
questions to which the answer yes is expected, and also 
questions which call for the answer no, as: 



VARIETY OF EXPRESSION: SENTENCES 143 

Are the grapes sweet? 
The grapes are not sweet. 
Are the grapes hot sweet? 
The grapes are sweet. 
The exclamatory form is generally used for emphasis. 
In this form words are often placed in positions which are 
unusual in the assertive sentences, and special attention is 
thus directed to them. For example, the prominent posi- 
tion occupied by clet, er and frosty will be noted in the 
following : 
How clever that is! 
How very frosty the air was! 
But the use of the exclamatory form is not the only 
means we have of showing emphasis. Bv simply changing 
the order of the words and retaining the assertive form 
of the sentence, the expression can be 'aried, the 
emphasis altered, as: 
1. At the age of nineteen, Franklin set out for London 
alone. 
2. Alone, at the age of ntneteen, Franklin set out for 
London. 
3. Franklin, at the age of nineteen, set out alone for 
London. 
1. The old man placed this white rose on the child's breast. 
2. This white rose the old man placed on the child's breast. 
3. On the child's breast the old man placed this white rose. 
Along with the device of changing the position of a 
word or words in the sentence fo secure emphasis, another 
method may be noticed, namely, repeating the subject or 
some other important word, and also repeating the form 
of the sentence, as: 
The boys grew excited over the gaine; they laughed, they 
shouted, they leaped, they threw up thetr caps, and cheered 
and cheered agatn and again. 



144 COMPOSITION 

I carne, I saw. I conquered. 
You should write well, you should spell correctly, you 
should keep the page neat and clean. 
The highway srnokes: sharp echoes ring: the cattle bawl 
and cowbells clank; and into town cornes galloping the 
farrner's horse, with stearning flank. 
Doors bang; and rnother voices call from other bornes; 
and rusty gates are slarnrned; and high above it all, the 
thunder grirn reverberates. 

Different forms of sentences will often produce very 
different effects. Compare the ïollowing types oï sen- 
tences : 

He was clever and industrious and ruade rapid progress. 
Being clever and industrious he rnade rapid progress. 

When I hud finished my breakfast, the waiter handed me 
the bill. 
After breakfast the waiter handed me the bill. 

The races were over and the crowd dispersed. 
After the races the crowd dispersed. 

"What is that blaze?" said Torn, pointing to the east. 
Torn pointed to the east and asked what that blaze was. 

I shall return when October cornes. 
In October I shall return. 

He wus so weak that he could not walk. 
He wus too weak to walk. 

We are sorry that we rnust leave you. 
We are sorry to leave you. 

While this was taking place, the prisoner escaped. 
Meanwhile the prisoner escaped. 

With vicious blows the battle was fought. 
The battle was fought viciously. 



SYNONYMS AND ANTONYMS 145 

EXACTNESS OF EXPRESSION: SYNONYIS AND ANTONYIS 
In our language wc bave many words that express 
nearly the same thought, for example: big, large, great, 
massive. Such words are called synon.vms, because tbey 
leave, in general, one impression, although they do hot 
convey exactly the saine shade of meaning. It is important 
to know these shades of difference in sense, as this will 
hel i us to sieak and write with greater precision and 
clearness and will also give variety fo our sentences. 
The pupils should find in the dictionary one or more 
synonyms for each of the following words: 
Destroy, mistake, bold, falsehood, necessary, advance, 
scholar, erowd, eommon, eareless, journey, proud, suppose, 
happy, seldom, fait, entreat, dwelHng, cost, worry, modern, 
set, defend, famflar, trouble, recolleet, vexed, struggle, return, 
fear, between, further, oversght, station, host, old, pleasant, 
eommand, eonquer, strong, get, john, liberty, toil, make, 
employment, vrtue, terror, combat, recent, shelter, talk. 

They should then write sentences that will make clcar 
the exact meaning of each, or tell how the meaning of 
each differs ïrom that of thc others. 0ther lists of 
synon.zns may be ruade. 
Words that convey opposite ideas are called antonvms. 
It is essential to preeise and clear expression, especially 
in comparison and contrast, that the pupils select the 
proper anton)m. 
Use each of the following pairs of antonyms in a 
sentence : 
Calm, storm; riches, poverty; soothe, irritate; expand, 
contract; clever, stupid; brave, cowardly; highlands, low- 
lands; ruler, subject; rapid, slow; advance, retreat; build, 
demolish; repair, destroy; friendly, hostile; plenty, want; 
create, annihilate. 



146 COMPOSITION 

PRECISION 

Incorrect forms of expression are often employed 
beeause pupils do not know the preeise, or exact, meaning 
of words, or have been accustomed fo hearing them used 
incorreetly. Observe the distinction of meaning in each 
of the following pairs of words: 

brtng, 
fetch, 
[ueBB, 
think, 
got. 
have, 
drive, 
ride, 
let, 
leave, 
may, 
cal:l, 
lay, 
lie, 
laid, 
lay, 
wish. 
want, 

funny, 
odd, or 
etrange, 

Corne and bring your cart. 
Fetch me the book. 
I guess there are ntnety. 
I think we ehall go. 
Where do you think we got the pen? 
Have you a pen? I have one. 
He drives and holde the reine. 
Can you ride on horeeback? 
Let me alone. Let me go. 
Leave me here alone. 
May I hold the baby? Yes, you may. 
Can you lift the heavy weight? No, I ara not able. 
The boy cornes home tired. He laye hic booke 
upon the table. 
He then lies down. (Memorize.) 
The boy came home tired. He laid hic booke upon 
the table. 
He then lay down. (Memorize.) 
What do you wieh? I desire thie souvenir. 
You shall want nothing. We shall eupply your 
needs. 
It was a very funny eight to see the kitten try to 
catch ite own taiL 
}It you have not heard of thie strange etory. 
odd 



PRECISION 147 

into, 
in, 
last, 
latest, 
last, 
preceding, 
intend, 
reckon, or I 
calculate, 
tord, 
anry, 
most, 
almost, 
quite, 
rather, or 
very, 
folks, or 
folk, 
family, 
party, 
person, 
some, 
somewhat, 
without, 
unless, 
healthy, 

health[ul, 
or whole- 
some, 
stay, 
stop, 

The dog Jumped into the water. 
Once in the water, he swam round. 
The last page is done. 
The latest news is bad. 
The last sentence ends the story. 
The sentence precedlng the last is very short. 
I intend to do the work some time. 
I shall reckon, or calculate, the cost. 
He was mad with rage. 
He had ressort to be angry. 
Most boys like to skate. 
Almost every boy likes to skate. 
James is quite (wholly) well. 
Henry is rather rhin. He bas been very ill. 

There are some strange folk in town. 
Our family will be there. 
There were six in the party. 
The person in the silk bat belongs to our party. 
Some men are very tall; some very short. 
He is somewhat lame. 
He cannot go without my permission 
He cannot go unless there is room. 
The fariner lires in the open air. He is healthy 
and robust. 
Fresh air is healthful. Cheese is a wholesome 
food. 
I ara staying at Lee's Hotel. 
I ara to stop at London; I shall go no further. 



148 COMPOSITION 

set, 
sit, 
set, 
sat, 
shall, 
will, 

Set the basket down. 
Now sit down. 
He set the basket down. 
Then he sat down. 
I shall be drowned. Shall I go? 
No one will save me. (Will I ? is never 
correct. ) 
EI{RORS TO ]BE AVOIDED 

Errors in the use of the following words should also be 

avoidcd : 
relatives, 
balance, 

Ail our relatives (not relations) seem to be on 
most friendly relations with each other. 
I have still a balance in the bank. 

remainder, After subtracting ten, the rernaindcr is sixty. 
would have, He would have (ot woltld o] helped you to win. 
tryto, Try to (ot try and) make the best of your life. 
burstor ] The bag burst (hot bust) and the eggs broke 
broke,  (hot busted). 
were, You were (not was) late, were you? 
ought, I ought (ot had ought) to have gone. 
are, There are (ot is) six. 
were, There were (ot was) a chair and a table in the 
room. 
we, We (hot us) boys can do the work. 
my father, My ]ather (hOt my ]ather ha) gave me these. 
whom, The man whom (hot who) we saw was ha (hot 
bien). 
He is better than I (not than me). 
i (when speaking of two). Lee is sick; so is Jones. 
The ]ormer (hot the first) has a cold: the latter 
(not the last) a fever. 
Each (every. either, neither} man bas (hot bave} 
enough. 

former 
and 
latter, 
has, 



ERRORS TO BE AVOIDED 149 

anything, 
between, 
among, 
that, 
is, was, 

He didn't (can't, won't) do anything (not 
nothing). 
Between (hot among) the two boys sat Baby. 
Divide the coppers among (hot between) the six 
pulils. 
I do hot doubt that (not but that) he will corne. 
Neither John nor James is or was (hot are or 
were) here. 

Pupils should be careful fo say: 
A long way (hot ways); 
This kind; those kinds; 
Yours respect]ully (hot respectively); 
It is he (hOt him); 
I see it plainly (hot plain); 
Run quickly (hot quick); 
Each of the pupils is (hot are) going to do his (hot 
their) best. 

The punctuation is also important, as: 
Hurry up John. Hurry up, John! 

Sometimes if is not clear fo which word another is 
related, as : 
The father said to his son that, if he spent as much next 
year as he had done this, he would have to get another job. 

A change in the position of a word in a sentence may 
change the meaning entirely, as: 
Only father lent me a book. 
Father lent only me a book. 
Father lent me a book only. 
Father only lent me a book. 



TYPE LESSON 
Lay and Lie (Sec The Ontario Public School Composition, 
pp. 43, 44.) 
The teacher will ask each pupil: 
1. To take a pencil. 
2. To place it on the desk. 
3. To say af the saine rime, "I lay the pencil on the 
desk ". 
4. Then to say, "The pencil lies on the desk" 
As each statement is ruade by the pupil, the teacher 
writes if on the hoard. 

In the saine manner the teacher will ask each pupil: 
1. To take a book. 
2. To put if on the floor. 
3. To sa)" af the rime, " I lay the crayon on the hook ". 
4. Then fo say, '" The book lies on the floor". 

The teacher next asks the pupil: 
1. To take a crayon. 
2. To lay the crayon on the book. 
3. To say af the rime, "I lav the crayon on the book ". 
4. Then to say, "The crayon lies on the book" 

There are now two sers of sentences on the board. In 
the first pair: 
What word in the first sentence denotes what was 
done? Lay. 
Can we put lie in place of layf No. 
What does lay mean ? To place. 



TYPE LESSON 151 

Such an answer as the following may be given: Lay 
(or lays) means place (or places), put (or purs). What 
does lie mean ? Lie (or lies) means are (or is) in a fixed 
position. 
Similarly, use the words, lay or lays, with pen, slate, 
cap, mitts, as: 
He lays his slate on the table. 

Now use the word lies with each, as" 
His slate lies on the table. 

Some sentences with blanks may llOW be given to test 
the pupil's knowledge, as: 
The paper -- on the desk. 
The boy's cap --- on the floor. 
Charlie the slate down quietly. 
The dog in the door-way. 
The eat on the new rug. 

The following pairs of words may be similarly dealt 
with : 
Set and sit; raise and rise; set and sat; raised and rose; 
laid and lay; laying and lying. 

.ltd and Bztt 
Notice the following sentences: 
I put on my rain-coat, and went into the storm. 
He lifted up the horse's foot and drove an extra nail into 
the shoe. 
He bought some eows and started a dairy. 
He tried hard, but (hot and) he did hot sueeeed. 
He searehed the eity for his son, but did hot flnd him. 
Harry tried the examination, but did hot sueeeed in 
passing it. 
11 



152 COMPOSITION 

From an examination of the above, the pupils may 
be able, without further discussion, to see when if is 
proper to use but as distinct from and. 
The differences in the force of these two connectives 
may be more clearly illustrated by comparing the sen- 
tences in each of the following pairs: 
I-Ie tried hard and he succeeded. 
He tried hard, but he did not succeed. 

He searched the city for his son and round him. 
He searched the city for his son. but did not find him. 

Harry tried the examination and uucceeded in passing it. 
Henry tried the examinatlon, but did hot succeed in 
passing it. 
All and Any 
In the following sentences, the pupils will see when 
all, all t]e ot]er, any, any of the ot]er, mav be correctly 
used, and also when larger (hot larg«st) should he used: 
1. This paper bau the largest circulation of all the papers 
in Canada. 
2. This paper bas the largest circulation of any of the 
papers in Canada. 
3.-This paper has a larger circulation than all the other 
papers in Canada. 
4. This paper bas a larger circulation than any of the 
other papers in Canada. 
5. This paper bas a larger circulation than any of the 
papers in Canada. 

In discussing these sentences the teacher may ask the 
pupils what papers are considered in each? How does 
the circulation of this paper compare with these con- 
sidered, and the pupils will see that: 



DIRECT NARRATION 153 

Sentence 1 states that of all the papers this one has 
the largest circulation. 
Sentence 2 states that of any of te papers, which 
means of any one of the papers, the circulation of this 
one is largest. 
Scntence 3 states that, if we exclude this paper from 
the list of competitors, then of any of the other papers 
this paper has the largest circulation. 
Sentence 4 states if any one of the other papers be 
considered, this has a larger circulation. 
Sentence 5 states that the paper has a larger circula- 
tion than even ifs own (any of te papers). 
Therefore, only 1 and 4 are correct. 
It will be seen from the above that larger Han any of 
t/e ot/er is the proper comparative phrase when we are 
comparing two things; and also that the largest of ail is 
the prope" phrase when we are selecting the largest from 
all, that is, from more than two. 

DIRECT NARRATION 
The teacher may write on the board sentences similar 
fo the following: 
1. " I ara hot going to school to-day ", said John. 
2. "Are you going to-morrow?" asked his brother. 
3. The fox said, "I fear that I have drunk too much". 
4. The goat asked, " May I corne clown, too, and drink?" 
5. "What a fine coat you have.'" said the fox to the crow. 
6. "Yeu ", replied the crow, "my voice iu just au fine ". 
7. "Well ", replied Tom, " father alwayu uays, 'Honesty 
iu the best policy '." 
8. "What do the wordu, 'to the fore' mean?" auked Harry. 
9. "Did you, my friend, uay, 'What a pity!'? '° the rabbit 
asked. 



154 COMPOSITION 

By questioling, the teacher will lead the pupils fo sec 
(o) the use, (b) the ïorm, (c) the place, of the quotation 
marks. 
In 1, why are quotation marks before I and after 
to-day? 
Why are they so placed in each of the other sentences? 
Compare these quotation marks with the quotation 
marks in 7, ' Honesty is the best policy' and in 8, ' to the 
fore '. 
Where is the second of the quotation marks place(] when 
a punctuation mark follows the quotation? Sec 4 and 5. 
If 1 be compared with 3, it will be seen that a comma 
is placed after the quotation in 1 and before the quotation 
in 3. 
In ea«h sentence, unlcss the quotation begins, it is pre- 
(.edcd by a comma. 
The que,ration always begins with a capital letter unless 
if is onlv a broken part of a sentence, as in 8, 'fo the 
fore'. 
If the quotation is broken in two by a parenthesis (or 
interruption}, how i. each of the two parts written ? Sec 
6 and 7. 
Does the second part commence with a capital letter ? 
tIow is the parenthesis {or interruption} punctuated? 
In 7, 8, 9 what is the use of the double quotation 
marks, the single quotation marks ? 
Notice whether the expressions in single quotation 
marks begin with capitals or hot. 
Is the comma always placed before words witllin single 
quotation marks ? 
Is the following correct? If hot, write it correctly: 
Please send The Boys' Own Magazine regularly to my 
address. 



INDIRECT NARRATION 155 

INDIRECT N .RR.¢TION 
The foregoing sentcnces will appear in indirect narra- 
tion as follows: 
1. John said that he was hot going to 8chool to-day. 
2. His brother asked whether he were going to-morrow. 
3. The fox said that he feared that he had drunk too 
much. 
4. The goat asked whether he might corne down and 
drink. 
5. The fox told the crow that he had a very fine coat. 
6. The crow replied that it was truc, and that his voice 
was just as fine. 
7. Tom said that it was well, and that his father always 
said that honesty was the best policy. 
8. Henry asked what the words to the Iore meant? 
9. The rabbit askd his friend whether he said that it was 
a pity. 

The teacher will call the attention of the pupils fo 
the following changes in the forms of the sentences: 
1. There are now no quotation nlarks. 
2. Ko corama now precedcs the words f«»rmerly in 
quotation marks. 
3. The first word of file substance of the quotation is 
hot now capitalized. 
4. In place of file comma, we have t]at followed by 
the substance of the quotation somewhat changed in form, 
for exanlple : 
In the first sentence we begin with, Jo]n said. I be- 
cornes ]e, and rd beconles u'as. 
In the second sentence we hegin with, IIis brot]er 
as]'ed. .ls]«ed is followed bv u'],cl]er, you beconles ]e, and 
are becomes were. 



156 COMPOSITION 

If the teacher asks the pupils to compare each sentence 
in direct narration with its corresponding sentence in 
indirect narration and to note the changes ruade, the 
general rules will be sufficiently impressed fo meet the 
needs of the pupils of this Form. 
In Form IV, this work may be reviewed, and the 
changes may be classified in more technical terres. 
The fullowing sentences may be used as a class exeÆcise. 
The first pupil will make the first statement, as: 
1. I ara the Prince of Wales. 
2. You, Mr. Scott, are an honest trader. 
3. John ranks first in English. 
4. My father lires in the mountains. 
5. Berlin, my boy, has Just been ruade a city. 
6. We shall soon take the train. 
7. Mother bas given me a ring. 

The second pupil will tell what the first said as: 
He aid, "I ara the Prince of Wales", 
o] 
He said that he was the Prince of Wales. 

The first pupil asks the questions: 
1. Which house is yours, Tom? 
2. When shall the boy corne? 
3. What will the girls do? 
4. Who are you, child? 
5. Is the chier very old? 
6. Does he recognize you, Lee? 
7. Dick, will you tell the truth? 

The second pupil will tell what the first asked, as: 
I4e asked, "Which is your bouse, Tom?" 
He asked Tom which house was his. 



LETTER 157 

Afterwards thc pupils may be required fo ,-hange the 
following fo direct narration : 

1. The mayor inquired how things were in the country. 
2. The invalid said that he should never be well again. 
3. The lad asked where the merchant lived. 
4. The father asked his son if the story were true. 
5. The servant inquired what his toaster would have him 
do next. 
6. The agent said that he could hot tell what had happened 
to the train. 
LETTERS 
The friendly letters written in this Form should be of 
the nature of the models given in the Text-book on pages 
16-18, but should gradually become longer and more 
mature in style. 
In writing letters, pupils shou|d be careful fo use exact 
forms of expression and fo arrange their paragraphs and 
sentences in proper order. They should write about one 
thing af a rime and should COluplete one topiç before tak- 
ing-up another. The letter should be clear, and. should 
express their thoughts and feelings. The style and lan- 
guage used should be natural, hot stiff. In friendly letters 
especially, we should write as if le were talking to 
friends. 
Business letters inquiring the price of a particular 
book, a certain fishing-rod, a special skipping-rope, and 
replies thereto, may bê writtên. These may bê /ollowed 
by leers ordering thê goods and by replies thereto, 
aeknowledng the receipt of thê money and stating thê 
manner of sending the goods. There should be abundant 
praetiee in addrêssing ênvêlopês, as in Form 



155 COMPOSITION 

307 

Front St., 
London, Ont. 
June 1, 1913. 

Mr. D. Printer, 
25 King St. E., 
Toronto. 
Dear Sir: 

Please let me know the price of the new book, Daday 
Long-Legs, and also the amount of postage required to mail it 
to me. 
A reply at your earliest convenience will oblige, 
Yours truly, 
John Byer. 
:BUSINESS FO1TI S 
Before beginning fo write a business form, the pupil 
naturally a.ks himself the question, What should I write? 
In first attcml)ting fo writc a receipt, the puloil may ask, 
What do I wish fo sa)" ? I have received t'o dollars from 
w]mm? F«»r what? A book. When did I receive if? Is 
there an)-thing else fo record? If hot, thon if is simply 
a marrer of arranging these facts in this way: 

Athens, Ont., 
June 13, 1913. 

Received from Mr. John Lee two dollars in payment for a 
book. 
T. Pupil. 

In the saine way, in writing an ordcr on a storekeeper, 
W. Brown, for goods, in favour of John Lee, the pupil 
may ask himself the saine question. What are the facts 
I wish fo state ? I wi.¢h fo order P, rown to give Lee goods. 
To what amount? Ten dollars. iqm will pay for them? 
I wil]. D,» I wish thcm char.ged ? Yes. 



BUSINESS FORMS 159 

Then order Brown fo do so, by writing him as 
follows : 
Athens, Ont. 
June 13, 1913. 
Mr. W. Brown: 
Please give John Lee goods from your store to the amount 
of ten dollars, and charge the saine to my aeeount. 
T. Pupil. 

A cheque on a bank is simply a special kind of order, 
in which the writer orders a bank to pay some one a 
certain sure of money. The words "or bearer" may be 
explained fo mean that aly one bearing the cheque will 
have a right fo the monev: and the words "or order" 
rnav be explained fo mean that the bank will pay the 
money only when the person who is named in the order 
signs his naine across the back of the cheque. 
In t]ie case of the note, the pupil should rcmember 
that this form is a promise fo pay. IIe asks again, What 
do I wish to say? What are the fat.fs? I wish to pronfise 
fo pay tventy dollars, hot now, but in three months from 
this dav. To whom? To John Lee. Where? Af the 
School Bank. Have I received value for if? Yes. Then 
it is simply a method of arranging in an orderlv way 
these facts : 
Athens, Ont., 
June 13, 1913. 

Three months after date, I promise to pay John Lee (or 
order) the sure of twenty dollars, for value received. 
T. Pupil. 

For further remarks on |)usiness form., hills, orders, 
receipts, suitable for this Form, sec pages 56, 62, 63, 87 of 
the Text-book. 



160 COMPOSITION 

SUMMARY 
The first step in writing a story or composition is, as 
we have said, fo make a plan or outline. 
If you are writing about "My Canary", you will 
tbink of several points )'ou wish to inelude, and will 
probably ïollow a plan such as this: 
tIis naine, size, eolour, appearanee 
IIis singing powers 
His habits, food, dril}k 
His es(.al)c ïrom a car. 

You may, after thinking over the appearance, habits, 
etc., of this canary, begin fo write down points just as 
you think of thcm, without special arrangement, planning, 
or careful wording. Tbesc points, it will be ïound, ean 
be grouped under certain headings similar fo those men- 
tioned in the above plan. Then the details of each 
heading or group may be arranged so as to present the 
storv or picture in the most nahlral way, but care must 
he taken fo emphasize the important points contained in 
the main paragraph in the composition. 
After thinking the suhject over and trying to see the 
composition as a whole, the pupil shouhl finally select 
and arrange his material according fo the following plan: 

1. Introduce the subject briefly and in an orderly 
manner, fo make clear the purpose of the speaker. 
2. Arrange the topics in an orderly manner, leading 
up to the climax or main point of interest, dwelling on 
these important paraoraphs. 
3. Conclude, while the interest is still unabated, by 
snmming up the points or draMng a conclusion whenever 
this appears to be necessary. 



CtIAPTER XIII 

FORM IV 

DETAILS OF THE COURSE 
THE COURSE in written conlposition for Form IV in- 
cludes a review with new material and the extension of 
the work assigned for Form ] I |. The stories and sketches 
are fo be more varicd and complcx, dealing more with the 
imaginative and assuming nmre of thc nature of a 
problem; the letters to be of greatcr length and written 
for special purposes and from various points of vicw, as 
in a correspondence. Models are fo be studicd for im- 
provement in expression ; at the saine rime, originality in 
thought, plan, and style are fo be encouraged and 
developed. The pupils are fo be given practice in ex- 
panding, condensing, and re-arranging sentences and 
noting the effect in each case; they are to be exercised 
in making comparisons, contrasts, and combinations of 
statements. In the further studv of the paragraph and 
its development, the pupils' attention will be callcd fo the 
principles involved; the topic sentence, unity, coherence, 
and emphasis, or proportion. The pupils will be assisted 
in making definite and systematic criticism of their 
written work. 

SUB.$ECTS FOR WRITTEN WOIIK 

Subjects may be given in connection with this work 
that require the pupils fo make inferenees and fo complete 
compositions that bave been beffun, thus: 
161 



162 COMPOSITION 

1. Tcll the class the f,,llowing story: 
The boys ail at once thought of the swing in the barri. 
Dashing up the path leading to the gate of the yard, the 
foremost in the race nearly fell over a large black duck, 
which flapped its wings and struggled in vain to escape. 
Without lifting it up, the boys saw at once that its leg was 
broken. 
Ask the pupils to complete the story. 
2. A drawing may be ruade representing a litt]e girl 
rive or six years old, playing near a river bank, chasing 
butterflies, her large black Newfoundland dog standing 
near. The pupils may be asked fo plan, and then write," 
the storv. 
3. Mr. Aldrich tells a good story, how early one spring 
a young couple from Baltimore came to lire in a new home 
near his own. He passed the house daily, and used to see 
the new neighbours singing and chattering, as they worked 
in the garden together, "The little wife, very young and 
pretty, with the air of a lady", the husband somewhat older 
but always beautifully dressed. They seemed to enjoy each 
other's company very much. 
He often wished to become acquainted with them and 
tried to find an opportunity to speak to them when passing, 
but, as he approached, they always retired hastily to the 
other end of the garden and seemed to want to have nothing 
to do with any one. 
After a while he missed the little wife with her neat 
figure, always " draped in some sort, dark stuff, with a bit 
of something bright at the throat", but still day after day 
he saw the husband working away soberly in the garden 
alone. 
One morning his two boys burst into his study with 
sparkling eyes: 
" Father! Father! you know the elm tree down the road?" 
cried one. 
" Yes." 



SUBJECTS FOR WRITTEN WORK 163 

"The elm with the hang-bird's nest," shrieked the other. 
"Yes, yes! the Baltimore Oriole." 
" Well, we both just climbed up, and there are three young 
ones in it." 
Then the father smiled to think that the new neighbours 
had such a promising young family. 
After reading or telling this story, the teacher may 
a.k the class to reproduce it orallv before writing it. 
Their ingenuity and command of language will be exer- 
cised in finding suitable terres to describe faithfully and 
consistently this young couple, how they looked, and their 
work in making a home, without disclosing until the very 
end of the story the faet that they were hot persons but 
birds. 
In writing the story, the pupils may attenlpt fo vary, 
where possible, the terres u.ed, as: couple, neighbours, 
husband, wife. house, garden, singing, chattering, worked, 
dressed,, approaehed, retired, hastily, missed, draped, 
bright, soberly, burst, sparkling, promising ïamily. 
The elass mav continue the story ïor another para- 
graph, still eoneealing the faet that thev are telling of a 
ïamilv oï birds, by speaking of the three little ones roeking 
in a eradle, swinging ïrom limb fo limb, and by quoting 
the nurserv rhvme bearing on if. 
4. Write another storv about a ïamilv oï eats, or 
pigeons, or rabbits, or robins, or squirrels, or eanaries. 
The story mav be planned in this wav: 
A mother and her two little ones lived in an old tenement 
bouse, up in a dark attic reached by a back stair on which 
were some old boxes. They were very poor and had very 
little furniture in their room but a bed of straw. 
The mother had to work very hard, often all night, to get 
them enough food. She often warned them not to leave the 
room, for fear of the neighbours. The little fellows were 



164 COMPOSITION 

bright-eyed and playful, and did hot mind the cold, as each 
had a little furry coat that he always wore; nor did they fear 
the dark, as they had soon learned to sec well without a 
light. 
One day, however, one little fellow left the room. He 
played on the stair until a box rolled down on his foot. Then 
he cried bitterly. His mother heard his voice, and, in great 
baste, came up the stairs straight to ber little one. Seizing 
him by the back of his little furry coat, she gently carried 
him back to his bed of straw in the attic. 

The pupils' skill should be exercised in outlining these 
stories and plalming the structure of the composition be- 
lote thinking of the words fo bê used fo describe and yet 
conceal the characters. 

5. The subject may take the form of a problem and 
have the special purpose of leaving certain impressions 
without plainly stating the îacts, as: 
on the corner of the street lay a wagon overturned and 
badly smashed, with parts of the harness still attached to 
the broken shafts. Farther back was one of the wheels, and 
near it a number of broken bottles and two dinted cans. 

Such surroundings may show past events, or they may 
indicate the «haracteristics of the actors without naming 
them. For example, a farmhouse may be thus described 
to show the qualities of /he fariner: 
Placing the farmer's account in my pocket, I mounted 
my wheel, and by two o'clock was at his gate. It hung by 
one hinge and was fastened with a piece of wire. As I 
passed through and up the lane, I could not but notice the 
weeds and thistles on either side and the neglected trees 
with their dead and broken branches. 
Suddenly three poorly-fed dogs rushed out from the 
dilapidated woodshed, barking savagely. On the farther side 
of the bouse were three cattle and two pigs feeding among 



SUBJECTS FOR WRITTEN WORK 165 

the grass and shrubs, where once there had been a garden 
and lawn, while a score of chickens were picking up the 
crurnbs and scraps about the open door. 
The house had an alrnost abandoned appearance. Several 
of the windows were broken; sorne were patched with 
shingles, others stuffed with rags. Through the open door, 
on one side of a rusty store, I could sec the rernnants of the 
dinner still upon the kitchen table, and on the other side, 
asleep on an old couch, lay the farrner, whose account I had 
been asked to collect. 

An exercise such as the following may now be assigned : 

(1) Describe a farmhouse; show that the people are 
untidy; or describe the playhouse of two tidy girls. 
(2) Describe a class-room so as to show that it is 
dosing day; or describe a trip to the bush, showing that 
it was mid-day. 

6. Sometimes past happenings and the clmracters of 
people are judged, not by surroundings, but from their 
conversation. 
From Tom P, rown'. School Day.% f«r example, we have 
the following dialogue: Two of the big bovs had caught 
some little ones, intending to toss them in a blanket: 
"Oh. please, Flashrnan! please, Walker, don't toss me! 
l'Il fag for you, l'Il do anything, only don't toss me." 
"You be hanged!t' said Flashrnan, lugging the wretehed 
boy along. "'Twon't hurt you! Corne along, boys! Here 
he is!" 
"I say, Flashy", sung out another of the big boys, " drop 
that! You heard what old Pater Brooke said to-night, l'll 
be hanged if we'll toss any one against his will; no more 
bullying. Let hirn go, I say!" 
"There's plenty of youngsters don't care about it", said 
Walker. "Here! here's 'Scud' East--you'll be tossed, won't 
you, young un." 



166 COMPOSITION 

"Yes", said East, "if you like; only rnind rny foot." 
" And here's another who didn't bide. Hullo! new boy; 
what's your narne, sir?" 
" Brown." 
" Well, Whitey Brown, you don't rnind being tossed?" 
" No", said Torn, gritting his teeth. 
" Corne along, then, boys", sung out Walker; and away 
they all went, carrying along Torn and East, to the intense 
relief of four or rive other srnall boys, who crept out frorn 
under the beds and behind them. 
"What a trurnp Scud is!" said one. "They won't corne 
back here now." 
" And that new boy, too; he rnust be a good plucked one." 
" Ah! wait till he's been tossed on to the floor; see how 
he'll like it then!" 
(1} What do you think of the character of Flashman ? 
(2} What do you think of the little boy? 
(3) What does the dial(,gue tell you of the other big 
boy ? 
(4} Compare the courage of Ea.¢t and Tom with that 
of the other little boys. 
(5} What impression had they ruade on the others? 
What inference can you draw from the following 
selection from the sarne author: 
Torn was sitting st the bottorn of his bed unlacing his 
shoes so that his back was toward Arthur; and he didn't 
see what had happened and looked up in wonder st the 
sudden silence. Then two or three boys laughed and sneered; 
and a big brutal fellow, who was standing in the rniddle of 
the room, picked up a slipper, and shied it st the kneeling 
boy, calling hirn a snivelling young shaver. Then Torn saw 
the whole; and the next moment the shoe he had just pulled 
off flew straight st the head of the bully, who had just tirne 
to throw up his arrn and catch it on his elbow. 
"Confound you, Brown, what's that for?" roared he, 
starnping with pain. 



LETTERS 167 

"Never mind what it's for", said Tom. stepping on to 
the floor, every drop o blood in his body tingling; « i any 
ellow wants the other shoe, he knows where to get it!" 
(1) What do you know of the two or three bovs ? 
(2) Compare the courage of Tom with that of the big 
fellow. 
(3) Why did Tom get down on the floor? 
(4) Did he ha'e to throw his other shoe? 

The class will now be ready for the following: 
1. Write a short dialogue between two boys ; show that 
one is cowardly, the other |)rave. 
2. Write a short dialogue between two girls; show 
that one is an orphan, loves flowers, and has good taste 
in dre ; that the other has wealthy parents, but no love 
for the heautiful in nature. 
3. Write short sketches of two boys. Lead us to infer 
from their acts and talk that one boy is from the city; 
that the other is from the country. 

LETTERS 
In this Form. longer friendly letters about familiar 
and interesting matters should be planned and written. 
Even the most friendly letters should be orderly and 
superior to convertion in clearness and dignity of 
language. 
]Iore stress should be laid on cultivating a good style 
in ordinary business letters. The pupil's mind should be 
on what he is writing about. The style should he natura], 
but more orderly and condensed than in friendly letters 
and should be appropriate to the marrer in hand. In 
addition fo the ordinary ]errer, the pupils should, in this 
12 o.s. 



168 COMPOSITION 

Form, have practice in writing for specific purposes (see 
Text-book, pp. 56, 97, 99, 111, 126), and also in writing 
formal letters, personal letters, and formal notes and in- 
vitations. (See Text-book, pp. 112-114.) 
Exercise should also be given in writing a complete 
correspondence of four or rive letters. The correspon- 
den(.e should be real, if possible, or one that might actually 
have been written, such as the following: 
The class mav be dividcd into two sections, A and B. 
Each pupil in section A is about fo buy a bicycle from an 
American firm in New York, but is induced fo buy from 
a (°anadian firm operating in Toronto, this firm guaran- 
teeing their bicycle for one year. _Near the end of the 
vear the joint of the frame under the handle-bars spread 
or partcd. 
Each pupil in A will write fully fo the Toronto firm 
(inventing naine and address) asking them fo replace 
the frame and mentioning all the circumstances. Each 
Fui)il in section B of the class will write a reply for the 
firm, asking questions as fo the probable cause and the 
manner of the breaking and when it was first noticed, but 
agreeing fo do as promised. 
A will reply answering the question how the break 
occurred. 
B will write a letter for the firm asking the pupil fo 
return the bicycle, etc., and will give full details as fo 
how and when they intend fo carry out their guarantee. 
A will write the firm aeeing fo the rime, etc., as 
hev have proposed, and state that he is returning the 
bicycle, and how. 
B will reply for the firm, stating that they have re- 
(eivcd the bicycle, when he may expect if fo be returned," 
and how it will be sent. 



NARRATION 169 

A will writc fo file firm that he has received the 
bicycle in good condition, and thank them. 
Exercises in making out orders for the grocer and the 
butcher, and in sending by mail for seeds, books, brushcs, 
and paints, etc., will afford good practice in this style of 
business composition. 
Several short correspondences may be established with 
a firm, one set of pupils writing, another set answering, 
the letters. Ea«h boy of one set may ordcr a new base- 
hall fr«,m a firm, Brown & Lee, Montreal, t(, be sent hy 
mail to his address; each girl, a skipping-rope, to be sent 
by parcel post fo her address. The pupils will state what 
money is inclosed and give ïull directions in each case. 
Of the other sers (f pupils, the boys will answer the boys' 
orders; the girls the girls' orders, with all necessary in- 
formation and acknowledoznents. 
Business ïorms. tclegrams, etc., are discussed in the 
Text-book, pages 147, 160-162, 172-1ï3. 

NARRATION 
In a narrative, the detail. of the storv are given in an 
orderly way according to their occurrence, and the in- 
cidents are closely connected. 
In Gellert, Text-book, page 94, a sertes of details are 
given, each closely connected with the other, leading fo a 
conclusion. The first paragraph tells of the state of affairs 
o the morning of the chase, introduces the main actors, 
and draws attention fo the missing h«»und. The second 
paragraph tells what happens when the prince returns 
from the chase (if will he noted that no particu]ars are 
needed regarding the hunt), the condition of thc hound 
as he came fo meet him, the search for the child, the 
deafl of the hound. The third paragraph gives the result 
or conclusion. 



170 COMPOSITION 

In addition fo the arrangement and the connection of 
the incidents in order of their occurrence, all the circum- 
stances that affect the incidents--the rime, the place, the 
surroundings, and the characters of the actors--are given 
clearly and concisely. 
The motive, or purpose, of the story, or composition, 
will show what incidents should be neglectcd and what 
cmphasized. For instance, in Gellert, notice the omission 
of particulars ,-,f the hunt, but, on the other hand, the 
cmphasizing of the prince's fondness for the hound; note 
lso the ]l«,und's appearance; the search; the connection 
between the hound's dying yell and the child's cry; the 
body of the wolf; the prince's rehaorse. 
In narrating the life of an individual, the pupil will 
grive the facts of his earlv life, education or training, his 
trials or struggles, his achievements or writings, etc., 
the close of his career. He will select only the important 
things and write them i.n order of time. He will devote 
a paragraph fo ea,'h point of special interest and will close 
that paragraph when file items of interest are enlbodied 
in it; and so with the next paragraph; or, after the intro- 
duction, the paragraphs may be arranged according to 
topics. When the pupil wishes fo tell about an adventure 
he had in a thunder-storm when going fo school, he may 
commence with the getting ready, and tell about meeting 
his conlpanions on the way; but something should lead 
up fo and prepare for the main event, the storm. If he 
stated, for example, in the first sentence, that the cloud. 
were black, then the mind of the reader would be prepared 
for the storm. 
The pupils should look np articles, in the daily papers 
or in the Supplementary Readers, on some well-known 
poet or famous inventor and write f«,r the class the 



EXAMINATION OF A PARAGRAPH 171 

important fro.fs, thc purpose being fo give practice in 
selêcting and arranging thêse and in omitting unimportant 
details. 
To têll a personal incident well, the pupils should tell 
what the hearers ought fo know, aftêr making clêar the 
rime, the place, the main pêrsons concêrned. The êvent 
or the climax of the story should hOt be too long delayed. 

LESSON ON EXA:IIINATION OF A PARAGRAPH OF NARRATIVE 
1. The morning of the battle broke with storm and rain, 
lightning and thunder--a fitting prelude for a day of blood. 
2. It was hot until rive in the afternoon that the cavalry of 
France. under Count Alençon, with a band of Genoese cross- 
bow men, advanced to attack the English lines. 3. They 
were met by clouds of cloth-yard shafts from bows of English 
yew, and their ranks wavered. 4. Still the shower poured 
on; horses and men rolled on the earth, and the cavalry 
retired in confusion. 5. The men-at-arms now engaged; the 
second line advanced--France and England were locked in 
a deadly struggle. 6. Edward, who watched the fight from 
a windmill, felt so sure of victory that he refused to send 
aid to the Prince of Wales, a lad of fifteen, who was sorely 
pressed in the front of the battle. 7. "No!'' said he, "Let 
the boy win his spurs; his shall be the glory of the day." 
8. In vain the French King tried to pierce the line of archers 
who stood between him and his routed horsemen; his bravest 
knights fell fast around him: the horse he rode was killed,-- 
there was no hope but in fiight. 9. Eleven princes, twelve 
hundred knights, and thirty thousand common soldiers are 
said to have fallen in the battle and the carnage of the next 
day. 
What is the paraaph about? A battlê. 
Where in the paragraph are we told this first. By 
what word or words.9 
What does the first sentence tell about the hattle? 
The evênts just before if. 



172 COMPOSITION 

What does the second sentence tell us? Ifs com- 
mencement. 
What do the third, the fourth, the fifth, the sixth, al,d 
seventh0 tell us ? 
What does the eighth tell us? Its result. 
What does the ninth tell us? 
IIas the writer followed any plan then, in telling of 
this battle ? 
Yes, the events are in the successive order of their 
occurrence. 
Could any sentence be displaced with advantage ? Why 
not ? 
Things fo be Noted 
1. The sentences bear on one subject. (UnitT) 
2. The subject fs mentioned in sentence 1. (Topic 
sentence} 
3. The details are arranged in proper order; and each 
sentence grows out of, or is suggested by, something in 
the preceding. (Coherence) 
4. In sentence 8 the general results are given--fol- 
lowed by particulars in 9. 
5. They, in sentence 3, carries the reader back for ils 
explanation to cavalry and cross-bow me in the preceding 
selltenee. The shower, in sentence 4, refers to clouds of 
cloth-yard shafts in the preceding sentence. The boy, in 
sentence 7, means the Prince of Wales, already mentioned 
in sentence 6. 



NARRATIVE LETTER 173 

A NARRATIVE LETTER FIO]I A SCHOOL-BOY TO IIIS FATHER 

(Constructed according fo the plan discovered in exam- 
ining the type narrative paragraph 
studied previously.) 
My dear Father: 
I write to tell you of a railway accident that happened 
near our school the other day. 
As you know, there is a slight grade in the track to the 
south of the town, and below this grade is a switch leading 
from the main track to a siding, st the end of which is the 
turn-table and roundhouse. Above the switch yesterday fore- 
noon was a long row of heavy freight cars with brakes tightly 
set st intervals to hold them in their places. On the siding 
facing these cars stood old engine No. 106, quietly steaming 
up ready for some shunting work that had soon to be done. 
All at once a coupling broke near the middle of this train 
and about hall of the cars started to more down the grade. 
The switch was set for the siding, and the cars, gathering 
speed as they went, bore straight down on the engine. We 
boys, let out for recess, seeing what was happening, watched 
the result with our hearts in our mouths. Seeing his danger, 
the engineer, with admirable presence of mind, started his 
engine toward the oncoming cars, rapidly st first, but slowing 
down as he neared them, he backed slightly before meeting 
them, to lessen the shock of contact, and then crowded on 
full steam ahead to try to check their motion. The strength 
of the engine, however, was not equal to the task. It was 
borne gradually backward, with sparks of tire streaming 
from the wheels as they slipped on the rails, right up to the 
pit of the turn-table. The end of its tender, dropping into 
the pit, stuck there, forming a resistance block to any further 
motion. The huge engine, still crowded from the front and 
unable to more backward any further, reared itself high in 
the air, and threatened to topple over with its crew, into the 
pit. Luckily, however, the cars stopped before it did so, and 
the weight of the nearly up-ended engine forced it to settle 
back again almost, though hot quite, in its place on the rails. 



174 COMPOSITION 

Old Andrew Latimer, the engineer, who had acted so pluckily, 
sat beside the track, grumbling audibly at his bad luck, and 
scarcely noticed out cheers, as we hurried back at the sound 
of the school bell. 
With kind regarda to all at home, I remain, 
Your loving son, 
Jas. Hewson, Esq., Wllliam Hewson. 
Hallswell, Ont. 

DESCRIPTION 

In deseribing or pieturing, the writer must first 
have the vision himself, then try to make his readers 
see what he has seen. Before he speaks or writes, 
he shou|d be ame fo see clearly from a fixed point 
the general outline of what he is deseribing, tIe must 
endeavour fo hold the outstanding ïeatures of the view 
before him and must present the details in proper order, 
Both the general outline and the details should be pre- 
sented in proper descriptive words and phrases. 

DESCRIPTION OF PLACES 

With the foregoing points in mind, the e]ass might 
study the following passage, describing an island and a 
cottage : 

I well remember my first sight of V¢hite Island, where 
we took up out abode on leaving the mainland. 
It was at sunset that we were set ashore on that loneliest, 
lovely rock, 'here the lighthouse looked clown on us like 
some rail, black-capped giant, and filled me with awe and 
wonder. At its base a few goats were grouped on the rock, 
standing out dark against the red sky as I looked up at them. 
The stars were beginning to twinkle; the wind blew cold, 
charged with the sea's sweetness: the sound of many waters 
hall bewildered me. Some one began to light the lamps in 



DESCRIPTION OF PERSONS 175 

the tower. Rich red and golden, they swung around in raid- 
air; everything was strange and fascinating and new. 
We entered the quaint little old stone cottage that was for 
six years our home. How curious it seemed, with its low, 
white-washed ceiling, and deep window-seats, showing the 
great thickness of the walls ruade to withstand the breakers, 
with whose force we soon grew acquainted! A blissful home 
the little bouse became to the chiidren who entered it that 
quiet evening and slept for the first rime lulled by the murmur 
of the encircling sea. 

In a sinfilar manner try to describe ail old mill, a 
beautiful lake in thc nmrlfilg, a river scene at mid-day, 
a large forest, a fishpond, a crowded street or train, a 
wooded island iii a little lake with high shores, a farm- 
house from the road, a rooln as seen through a parti)" open 
door. 
It is not so much the completeness of the description 
that vivifies, as the touching of the important points of 
the picture formed in the mind, the salicnt features, in 
true colours. For example: 
But suddenly the doe started, head erect, eyes dilated, a 
tremor in her limbs.--p. 153, Third Reader. 

DESCRIPTION OF PERSONS 
The following is a good description of three girls, by 
Louisa bi. Alcott: 
Fifteen-year-old J'o was very tall, rhin, and brown, and 
reminded one of a coR; for she never seemed to know what 
to de with ber long limbs, which were very much in ber way. 
She had a decided mouth, a comical nose, and sharp, gray 
eyes, which appeared to see everything, and were by turn8 
tierce, funny, or thoughtful. Her long, thick hair was her 
one beauty; but ito was usually bundled into a net tobe out 
of her way. Round shoulders had J'o, big hands and feet, a 



176 COMPOSITION 

fly-away look on her clothes, and the uncomfortable appear- 
ance of a girl who was rapidly shooting up lnto a woman, 
and didn't like it. 
Elizabeth---or Beth, as every one called her--was a rosy, 
smooth-haired, bright-eyed girl of thirteen, with a shy manner, 
a timid voice, and a peaceful expression, which was seldom 
disturbed. Her father called her " Little Tranquillity", and 
the naine suited ber excellently. 
Amy, though the youngest, was a most important person-- 
in her own opinion at least. A regular snow-maiden, with 
blue eyes, and yellow hair curling on ber shoulders, pale and 
slender, and always carrying herself like a young lady mind- 
fui of ber manners. 

The pupils should try fo describe so clearly or vividly 
the form and features of some one welI known to the class 
that, without mentioning the naine, the c]ass may be able 
to tcll what pcrson has been dcseribcd. 
Some pupi]s may be able fo write a description of the 
voiee, gait, manner, or main characteristics of another 
well-knorn person, so tiret the other pupils eau tell to 
whom they refer. 
Irving describes Ichabod Crane in this wav: 
The cognomen (naine) of Crane was not inapplicable to 
his person. He was tall, but exceedingly lank, with narrow 
shoulders, long arms and legs, hands that dangled a toile out 
of his sleeves, feet that might have served for shovels, and 
his whole frame most loosely hung together. 
His head was small, and fiat at top. with huge ears, large 
green, glassy eyes, and a long snipe nose, so that it looked 
like ; weather-cock perched upon his spindle neck, to tell 
which way the wind blew. 
To see him striding along the profile of a bill on a windy 
day. with his clothes bagging and fluttering about him, one 
might have mistaken him for some scarecrow eloped from a 
cornfield. 



DESCRIPTION OF BIRDS 177 

He begins with a general statement that Ichabod Crane 
was hot unlike a crane. IIe then follows this up with 
particulars which would be expcctcd in describing a 
crane--tall, long arms, etc. Then the head, ears, eyes, 
nose are deseribed ; and in the last paragraph he eoneludes 
his description bv eomparing him to a scarecrow. 

DESCRIPTION OF BIRDS 
In describing a bird, the following points should corne 
after the statcment of the general impression of its 
appearance : 
Size---lenh from head fo fip of rail 
Colour--back, under parts, head. and sides 
Beak--shape, lenh, thickness 
Legs and feet--length of legs, number of toes 
Movements--in walkinz, in flying 
Food--how secured, material 
Nest--where and how built 
Young--number, how cared for 
Voice---singing notes or chirping 
Disposition--cheery or sad, cruel or affectionate. 

Let the American Goldfinch tell his story in this way: 
I ara a small bird. My wings and the crown of my head 
are black, but my back, etc.-- 

Describe a bobolink, a bronze-gTackle, song-sparrow, 
bluejay. 
Describe a caterpillar, an insect, a cocoon. 



178 COMPOSITION 

DESCIIIPTION OF CO.M.MON OBJECTS 
Perhaps the most difiit.ult task in descriptive com- 
position is fo describe clearly a common object, such as a 
cent, a postage stamp, a pin, a match, a cup or a saucer, 
a spoon, a knife or a fork. 
If is not, in this case, a description of the vision or 
picture formed in the mind, that is required, but a 
description of thê ohjêct itself as if really exists belote 
the pupil. In this work, thê writer must assume that his 
readers bave never seen or heard of the object he is 
describing, fie must therefore begin with the general 
material of which it is ruade; this will be followed by its 
shape, size, colour, and then the more minute detail's, as 
in the following example: 

A pin is a small cylindrical piece of wire, usually brass, an 
inch or more in length, and about one thirty-second of an inch 
in diameter. One end is sharp; the other is a blunt head, 
snlid and circular, about one sixteenth of an inch in diameter. 
This brass voire is generally tinned to the required colour. 
Pins are ruade by machinery which hot only manufactures 
these articles complete trom the wire, but also sticks them 
in the papers. 

DESCRIPTIVE WORDS 
Xotice the Îorms of descriptive words that indieate 
qualifies : 
Manly, courageous, truthtul, honourable, courteous, heroic, 
fearless, daring, unselfish, unjust, faithful, Christian, un- 
worthy, etc.; 
and also words that are names of qualities: 
Uprightness, temperance, nobility, heroism, politeness, 
patience, sincerity, justice. 



COMPARISON AND CONTRAST 179 

Note also that some descriptive words have a com- 
parative force : 
Glassy, starry, boyish, queenly, triangular, egg-shaped, 
rosy, sunny, heroic, princely, pea-green, childlike. 

COMPARISON AND CONTRAST 
Sometimes we can strengthen our statements and 
make them more clearly understood by means of com- 
parisons. ., comparison may take the form of a simile, 
in which the point of similarity is stated, as, for example: 
Blue were her eyes as the fairy flax, 
Her cheeks like the dawn of day. 
Or if may takc thc form of a metal)hor, in which the point 
of similarity is implied, as, for example: 
He is a lion in strength. 
In the case of the simile, the words lil«e and as are 
the chief words used to express resemblance. For example, 
the sentence : 
He shall be like a tree set by a river, 
shows the comparison between the prosperous man and 
the flourishing tree. In the sentence: 
The news came as abolt from the blue sky, 
we compare the unexpected news fo a flash of lightning 
when there are no signs of a coming storm. In the case 
of the metaphor, however, the comparison is expressed 
without using li]i'e or as. The following lines contain 
both a metaphor and a simile, and the difference between 
the two figures may be readily seen : 
Hearty and hale was he, an oak that is covered with snow- 
flakes; 
White as the snow were his locks and his cheeks as brown 
as the oak leaves. 



180 COMPOSITION 

f'omparing obje«ts in this way by means of similes and 
metaphors, serres not only fo make the idea more clear, 
Imt also, in most cases, to make the description more vivid. 
F«»r cxample, the sentcnces: 
The pupils poured out of the school; 
The little girl flew from the bouse; 
Down the slide like a meteor flew the sleigh; 
are much re.re expressive tban: 
They tan out of school. 
She hurried out of the bouse. 
The sleigh ran rapidly down the slide. 
A contrast is often expressed in the form of a com- 
pc}und sentence, for example: 
The girl was rail and rhin; the boy, short and stout; 
He was rich, yet for out sakes he became poor; 
The valleys were fertile; but the mountains, rocky and barren. 

f'ompare a d,g and a fox. a goose and a duck, a boat 
nd a eanoe, an orange and a lemon, giving points of 
resemhlance, then points of difference. 
('omparison and e«mtrast are sometimes used through- 
«at a composition. Examine closely with fhe class the 
f«,lb,wing scle(.ti«m and note hoir the authc}r makes com- 
parisons, and how he contrasts the conditions and manners 
«,f settling on the land in the orth of Scofland and in 
B«»hemia : 

One clear, cold morning, about the first of September, I 
took a train st Bonar Bridge, in the north of Scotland. south- 
ward bound. There was a cold wind blowing, and Bonar 
Bridge is about the latitude of northern Labrador. 
I spent the next four or rive hours looking out of a car 
window across the bleak, brown moors, studying the flocks 
of sheep and the little thatch-roofed cottages clinglng to the 
lonesome hillsides. 



EXPOSITION 181 

Three days later I was in a beautiful mountain region on 
my way to Prague, the capital of Bohemia. 
In many ways, conditions in the farming regions of 
Bohemia are quite as primitive as they are among the crofters 
of northern Scotland. 
There are a larger number of small farmers owning their 
land in Bohemia than there are in Scotland, but the Scottish 
crofter (renter), although he i'emains a tenant on a large 
estate, bas, at the present rime, a more secure position on 
the soil than the man who rents his land in Bohemia. 
In other respects, the Scotch Highlanders, whose country 
I had just left, and the Bohemians, whose country I was just 
entering, are, I should say, about as different as one could 
well imagine. 
Among other things, I noticed that the farming people in 
this part of the world do hOt lire apart, scattered about in the 
open country, as they do in Scotland and everywhere in 
America. On the contrary, the Bohemian farmers lire 
huddled together in little villages, in the centre of the sur- 
rounding fields, from which they go out to do their work in 
the morning, and to which they return in the evening. 
In Europe, the northern people settle in widely scattered 
homesteads, while the southern people herd together in little 
villages, and each individual becomes, to a great extent, 
dependent upon the community and loses himself in the life 
about him. This accounts, in a large measure, for the differ- 
ence in character of the northern and southern people. In 
the north, the people are more independent: in the south, 
they are more social. The northern people bave more initia- 
tive; they are natural pioneers. The southern people are 
more docile, and get on better under the restraints and 
restrictions of city lire. 

EXPOSITION 

Exposition, or explanation, in ifs simplest form, ha. 
for its purpose fo make the reader or hearer understand 
elearly how a eertain thing is ruade or how a certain 
action is performed. Suppose that the pupils are trying 



182 OMFOSITION 

fo make clear, "llow fo polish a pair of tan shoes". It 
is esscntial that thc explanation should be clear even to 
one who has no previous knowledge of the process. The 
faets shou]d be arranged iu the most natural order, fo gire 
a clear and connected idea of the whole process: 
1. IIaving the shocs and-the necessary cquipments and 
n,atêrials o hand 
2. Method of cleaning the shoes 
3. Mcthod (.f applying the polish 
4. Method of polishing 
5. Putting awav materials. 

Try to describe in an order]y manner: How fo make 
a kite, a fart, a telephone; how fo fly a kite, put up a tent; 
how fo play a gaine, such as authors, blind man's buff, 
croquet, crickct, charades, hunt the slipper, etc. 
In addition fo the subjeets indieated above, and those 
which will be suggested in the work for this Form in 
history, georaphy; literature, etc., there will be round in 
the Tcxt-book, in connec.tion with each study, abundant 
material from whieh selections can be ruade. 

The following questions on literature, if the selecoEions 
fo be ehosen by the teaeher he n«,t of too diffi«.ult a nature, 
will furnish subjects for composition: 

1. Write notes explaining the significance of the fol- 
lowin expressions 
2. Des«ribe fullv and pieturesquely the scene pre- 
sented to the imagination in the followin passage 
3. Expand the expressions in the following fo make 
clear the thou-ht-- 
4. In the followin..,z, show clearlv the meaning and 
force of the italieized words as used in this passage--- 



I.EVIEW: THE PARAGRAPH 18 

5. Express more fully the thought contained in the 
following words and phrases, so as to show that you under- 
stand their value as used in this passage-- 
6. In simple prose, explain the meaning of the fol- 
Iowing-- 
EXACTNESS OF EXPRESSION 
Write senteIces that will make clear the exact meaning 
of each of the following words, or tell how the meaning 
of each differs from that of the others in its group : 
Take, seize, grasp; high, lofty, tall; small, petty, tiny; 
said, replied, retorted; purpose, design, intention; bouse, 
residence, home, dwelling; displease, annoy, madden, ex- 
asperate; glad, happy, joyful, pleased; try, endeavour, 
attempt, undertake; smell, odour, fragrance, aroma; look, 
observe, gaze, glower; council, counsel; choice, alternative. 

REVIEW 

THE PARAGRAPH 
The Paragraph is-discussed briefly in the Text-book, 
pages 15, 16, 93, lo0, 116, 135. 
When the writer wishes to express a complete thought, 
one sentence is seldom suffk.ient; a group of sentences 
may be necessary fo make clear even a single point with 
any degree of fulness. 
A story is ruade up of one or more such units or 
successive parts, usually in three divisions, as: 
1. Circumstances, or beginning 
2. ]Iain events, or middle 
3. Consequences, or end. 
A paragraph is, then, a group of sentences in which 
a single topic or a division of a larger topic, or theme, is 
developed. 
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184 COMPOSITION 

If will be difficult for the pupil fo understand the 
nature of the paragraph unless the whole story be first 
mapped out in his mind and its divisions noted. For 
example, the story of T],e Lion and t]ze Mouse, page 5 of 
the Text-book, is intcnded to show that kindness can be 
returned by little creatures. In planning this story the 
author conceives of two situations, the mouse's and the 
lion's : 
1. The mouse caught and alloweà fo go 
2. The lion caught and freed. 
The first paragraph contains such sentences or state- 
ments as are connected with, and emphasize, the mouse's 
condition and what he said. The second paraaph con- 
tains such sentences as call attention to the lion's condi- 
tion and what he said. These paragraphs are of similar 
construction, and each paragraph deals with a separate 
division of the story. 
Constant reference to good models is desirab]e, to make 
clear and firm the impressioa of the plan of structure. 
(See stories in the Text-book, pp. 31, 60, 75, 102, 116, 
163.) 
The sing]e paragralh is the form of composition which 
enters most ]arge]y into the daily school work. The story 
of Una and the Lion, page 116 of the Text-book, will serve 
fo exemplify the important princ}p]es of paragraph struc- 
tare. The first sentence, it will be seen, introduces the 
topic, or subject, of the paragraph, and if is therefore 
known as the topic sentence. When the pupils have 
examined the remainder of the paragraph, they will see 
that all the sentences relate to the main topic and that the 
law of unity is observed. In testing the unity of the 
paragraph, the teacher may ask the pupils to suggest the 
divisions, as indicated above: 



REVIEW: THE PARAGRAPH 185 

1. The circumstances, or beginning, which extends to, 
If happened just as site lay doa'n. 
2. The main event, or middle, elosing with, For beauty 
and truth have power over all. 
3. The consequenees, or end. 

If now, the paragraph is tested for the law of 
eoherence (see Text-book, p. 187), the elass will readily 
see that each sentence in the group leads up to the next. 
In the first sentence after lost h er way, note how naturallv 
the word u'andered follows; and after grew tired, the 
words lay down, loosened, shone, in their order. The 
attention of the class may now be directed to the art of 
the author in eonneeting the next sentence (just as she 
lay dou'n) and introducing the lion (lion rushed sud- 
denly). The natural connection of the next sentences in 
order (was hungry, caught sight of Una, ruade for her), 
]equires no comment. The next sentence also grows out 
of the preceding, and the author has already led up to 
this and prepared the mind of the reader for this sudden 
touching of the lion's heart, by having mentioned farther 
baek the brightness and the loveliness of Una's face, mak- 
ing sunshine in the shade. In the two sentences follow- 
ing, we have the outc.ome of the sudden change of feeling. 
These sentences, turned to pity, licked ber weary feet 
tenderly, bave pou'er over all, are in striking contrast to 
rushed suddenly, seeking his wild prey, caught sight of, 
ruade for ber greedily, and yet they are closely connected 
with, and grow naturallv out of, the preceding sentence. 
The sentences expressing Una's tears of gratitude and the 
lion's devotion, give the consequences of the main event 
and are closely linked together. The pupils will notice 
how the writer emphasizes Beauty and truth ha,e power 



186 COMPOSITION 

over ail (the sentence that summarizes fhe teaching) by 
heaping up, in the last three sentences, details or instances 
of the lion's constancy and faithfulness. 
As a result of the foregoing analysis, the pupils will 
also see that the law of emphasis, or proportion, has been 
observed. The important details have been given sufficient 
prominence and none of the unimportant details have been 
over-emphasized. 

THE WHOLE COMPOSITIOX 
If now, the pupils are asked fo make a study of a whole 
composition consisting of several paragraphs, they will 
readily see that the principles of paragraph structure 
apply also fo the structure of the composition as a whole. 
The Pied Piper of Hamelin, Text-book, pages 163-4, is 
eomposed of four paragraphs and will serve as a good 
e.,ample for studv. 
Ask the pupils to examine each paragraph, state ifs 
subjeet, point out the topic sentence, and show how the 
ideas are arranged. A black-board analysis should be 
made, showing the plan of the story as follows: 

Paragraph 1. 
(c) 

The P]aoue of Rats: 
The rats in Hamelin 
What they did 
The effect on the people. 

Paragraph 2. 
(a} 
(b) 
(c) 

The Piper's Proposal: 
The piper's arrival 
His appearance 
His proposal aeeepted. 



THE WHOLE COMPOSITION 187 

Paragraph 3. The Effect of the Piper's Music: 
(a) He begins to play 
(b) The rats follow him 
(c) The people rejoice 
(d) The mayor's ingratitude. 

Paragraph 4. The Piper's Revenge: 
(a) The second tune 
(b) Its effect on the childrcn 
(c) Their disappearance. 

When this plan is examined the pupils will readily 
1. That the first paragraph serves as an introdu(.tory, 
or topic, paragraph for the whole story. 
2. That the details in the sevêral paragraphs all bave 
a direct bearing upon the story; or, in othcr words, that 
the law of unity is observed. 
3. That the incidents follow one another in the order 
of their occurrence, and that the relation between the 
arious incidents is clearly shown; or, in other words, 
that the law of coherence is observed. 
4. That the important ideas are properly emphasized 
throughout the story; or, in other words, that the law of 
emphasis, or proportion, is observed. 

The studv of The Pied Piper of Hamelin may be fol- 
lowed by the study of Gellert, page 9 of the Text-book. 
Make an analysis of the story, showing the subject of 
each paragraph and the sub-headings. Note especial]y the 
transition from paragraph to paragraph. The pupils may 



188 COMPOSITION 

think that there is a lack of unity in the third paragraph 
and may ask if a short closing paragraph could hot be 
ruade. If so, they may discuss where it should begin. 

EFFECTIVE ARRANGEAIENT 
On the most effective arrangement of words, read the 
Text-book, page 76, II, 1, and this Manual, pages 142-4. 
Special attention should be given fo the effective arrange- 
ment of words, phrases, and clauses in sentences, and of 
sentences in paragraphs. The proper arrangement, or 
order, of thc sentences has much to do with the clearness of 
the paragraph. 
Not onlv should words, phrases, clauses, and sentences, 
be properly arranged in order, for effect, but the material 
should be arranged as introductory paragraph, main para- 
graphs, and concluding paragraph. The introduction 
should give the setting and all explanations necessary fo 
the clear understanding of the main paragraphs and of 
the writer's purpose (Topic). The main pararaphs 
should state the facts in proper order. The conclusion is 
often used fo complete, or close, the composition and fo 
suïn up or emphasize the main points. 
As already stated, ail the paragraphs must bear directly 
on the subject of tbe whole composition (Unity). Each 
param'aph shou]d grow out of the paragraph preceding 
and shou]d nafurallv ]ead up fo, and be clearlv connected 
with. the next paragraph (Coherence); but, in addition 
fo this, each paragraph should he presented fo the reader's 
attention af a lenh proportionate fo ifs importance, as 
a part of the subject (Empha.is, or proportion). 
For the expansion of outlines of a paragraph, chapter, 
or composition, bv adding detaiIs, see tbe Text-book, pages 
61, 82, 83, and the accompanying exercises. 



CRITICISM OF A COMPOSITION 189 

CRITICISI OF A COIPOSITION 
After writing a composition of one or more paragraphs, 
ask these questions: 
1. What is the composition about? See that the title 
clearly indicates the subject. 
2. Does each paragraph, if there are more than one, 
bear directly on this subject, making the treatmcnt of it 
fuller or clearer? Are a,y other paragraphs necessary 
in order to make clear all that should be said ? 
3. What division of the subject does the first para- 
graph deal with ? 
4. Is this clearly shown in the topic sentence and 
throughout the paragraph ? 
5. Are the sentences all closely connected with the 
topic of the paragraph ? 
6. Are the sentences arranged in the order in which 
the events or actions took place or in the best order for 
clear description or explanation ? 
7. Does each sentence naturally lead to the next? 
Are the sentences clearly linked together in a natural 
order ? 
8. Is the thought in each sentence clearly stated ? 
9. Has the subject in each paragraph been fully 
treated ? 



SPELLING 



CONTENTS 

PAGE 
COURSE OF STUDY--DETAILS .......................... ri 

CHAPTER I 
Value ............................................. 1 
Effect of Weakness in Spelling ................. 1 
Results in the Schools ......................... 2 
Comparative Importance ...................... 2 
Aims ............................................. 3 
To Teach the Spelling of Common Words ....... 3 
To Give Spelling Ability ....................... 3 
To Foster the Dictionary Habit ................ 4 
To Teach Certain Mechanics of Writing ........ 4 
Relation to Other Subjects ......................... 5 
To Reading ................................... 5 
To Composition ............................... 5 
To Penmanship ............................... 6 

CHAPTER II 
Number. Choice. and Arrangement of Words ........ 7 
Extent of Vocabulary .......................... 7 
When to Emphasize Spelling ................... 7 
Number of Words to be Taught ................ 8 
Number of Words in a Lesson .................. 8 
Time Required ................................ 9 

Choice of Words .............................. 10 
Words that may be Omitted ................... 11 
Words that may be Added ..................... 11 
Lists of Words to be Kept ..................... 11 
Words from the Reader or Text-book ........... 12 
Various S.vstems of Word-grouping--By Length. 
Sound, Common Signification, Common Deriva- 
tion, Phonograms ........................... 13 

CHAPTER III 
Does Spelling Need to be Taught? .................. 16 
Incidental Teaching ........................... 16 
Ability to Spell Cornes Later than Ability to Read 16 
Why English Spelling is Diflïcult .................. 17 
Defective Alphabet ............................ 17 
Many Symbols for the Same Sound ............. 17 
Obscure Vowels ............................... 18 
Silent Letters. Doubled Letters ................ 18 
The Features to be Known ......................... 19 
Meaning ...................................... 19 
Pronunciation ................................. 19 
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iv SPELLING 

Meaning and Pronunciation .................... 20 
Nleaning, Pronunciation, and Spelling .......... 21 
The Teacher's Essential Qualifications .............. 21 
Knowledge of Subject ......................... 21 
Immediate Preparation ........................ 22 
Writing ....................................... 22 
Distinct Reading ............................. 23 
Difficulties in Words ........................... 24 
C HAPTER IV 
The Work in Forms I and II ....................... 25 
Transcription ................................. 25 
Written Spelling of Words in Common Use ...... 25 
Importance or Vizualization .................... 26 
Devices ....................................... 26 
Homonyms ................................... 28 
Seat Work .................................... 29 
C H.JrER V 
The Work in Form III ............................. 31 
Use o[ the Black-board ........................ 31 
The Teacher's Preparation ..................... 31 
Three Important Rules ........................ 32 
Teaching and Testing .......................... 32 
Inflected and Contracted Forms ................ 33 
Incidental Teachtng of Terres .................. 33 
Homonyms ................................... 34 
Black-board Lists ............................. 34 
Spelling as Home Work ....................... 35 
CHAPTER VI 
The Work in Form IV ............................. 36 
Contrasting Words ............................ 36 
Homonyms ................................... 36 
Different Endings ............................. 37 
Oral versus Written Spelling ...................... 38 
Use ot Oral Slelling .......................... 38 
Observing and Writing ........................ 38 
Seelng versus Hearing ........................ 39 
Place of Oral Spelling ......................... 39 
Value of Writing in Learning Forms. and in 
Testing ..................................... 40 
The Dictation Lesson .............................. 40 
Its Value ..................................... 40 
Particular Aires ............................... 41 
Preparation ................................... 42 
Suitable Matter ............................. . 43 



CONTENIS v 

CHAPTER VI--Continued PAGE 
Self-detection of Mistakes ...................... 46 
How Mistakes may be Indicated ................ 47 
Correction of Mistakes ........................ 48 
Causes of Mistakes ............................ 49 
Errors: Causes, Kinds ............................. 52 
Defective Sight or Hearing .................... 52 
Mistakes Due to Excitement or Fatigue ......... 53 
Unfavourable Conditions ...................... 5i 
Lack of Control over the Writing Process ....... 54 
False Analogies ............................... 55 
Defects in Sense Impressions .................. 55 
CHAPTER VII 
Aids in Spelling .................................. 57 
Transcription ................................. 57 
Word Building ................................ 58 
Rules for Spelling ............................. 59 
Syllabication .................................. 60 
The Dictionary .................................... 61 
Derivation .................................... 64 
Order of Teaching ............................. 66 
Methods ...................................... 66 
Prefixes ...................................... 66 
Suffixes ....................................... 67 
Root Words ................................... 67 
The Spelling Match ............................... 69 
CHAPTER VIII 
Exercises in Spelling .............................. 70 
Form I: Senior Grade ......................... 70 
CHAPTER IX 
General Outline of Lesson Procedure .............. 91 
Assignment and Preparation ................... 91 
Test .......................................... 92 
Detection of Errors ............................ 92 
Correction of Errors ........................... 92 
Order of Steps in an Elementary Spelling Lesson .... 93 
Illustrative Lessons ........................ .-.. 94 
Notes ......................................... 97 
General Remarks on Lessons 2, 3, 4. Exercise I ..... 100 
General Remarks on Work of Form I .............. 101 
General Remarks on Work of Form II ............. 103 
Dictation ..................................... 105 
Leading Rules ............................... 107 
Illustrative Lesson, Form III, Junior ............... 107 
Test .......................................... 111 



PUBLIC AND SEPARATE SCHOOL 

COUISE OF STUDY 

DETAILS 

FORM I, JUNIOR GRADE 
- The transcription of simple, familiar words, but chiefly 
of short, easy sentences from the Primer. 
The spelling of some simple phonic words. 

FORM I, SENIOR GRADE 
Continuation of transcription of selected marrer frein the 
First Reader and other sources, including questions, 
the occasional filling up of blanks, the use of Ir., 
Mrs., ]Iiss. 
Simple word building. Forming new words having an 
e]ement in common, bv affixing letters; plural ferres 
in .. 
The .¢pelling of easv words frein the First Reader and other 
sources. Words may also be taken frein the Primer, 
Imt mainly frein the Lessons incorporated in this 
h[anual. The other words frequently required in the 
oral and written compositions of pupils of the grade 
te be tauzht incidentally and as supplementary te the 
Lessons for Ferre I in this Ianual. 
A few simple homonyms as given for Ferre I. 
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COURSE OF STUDY vil 

FORM II 

Dictation from the Second Reader and other sources, 
especially ïrom the Exercises ïor Form II in the 
Ontario Public School Speller. Dictation may also be 
given from the First Reader. 
Transcription. See Exercises, pages 3-22 in the Ontario 
Public School Speller. 
Word building, as in Exercises ïor Form ]I in the Ontario 
Public School Spe]ler. 
Simple homon)ns, as in pages 51-4 of the Ontario Public 
School Speller. 
Contractions and abbreviations. The contractions ïor the 
cardinal points, the days of the week, the months of 
the year, etc., as required in class work. 
Proper names, as required in class work. 

FORM III 

Dictation ïrom the Third Reader and other sources, as 
supplementary fo the Exercises in the Ontario Public 
School Speller. 
Word building, as in Exercises for Forra III in the 
Ontario Public School Speller, including common 
prefixes and suffixes. 
Simple homonyms, as in pages ï9-82 of the Ontario 
Public School Speller, with a review of those taken in 
the previous Forms. 
Contractions and abbreviations in common use. 
Attention to plurals and possessives; plurals in es, chang- 
ing y fo i, f fo v, possessive forms--singular and 
plural. 
Technical terres and proper names, as required in school 
work. 
The use of the dictionary. 



viii SPELLING 

FORM IV 
Dictation from the Fourth leader and other sources, as 
supplementary fo the Exercises in the Spe]ler. 
Word building and simlfle derivation. The common pre- 
fixes and suffixes may he taken in groups of two or 
three, with words illustrative of each, in place of the 
seat work as given for Form III after the columns 
of each Exercise in the Ontario Public School Speller. 
Tbe most common Latin roots in connection with the pre- 
fixes and suffixes. See the Ontario Public School 
Speller, pages 185, etc. 
Homonyms, as outlined on pages 137-140 of the Ontario 
Public School Speller, with a review of those taken in 
the previous Forms. 
Inflectcd forms. Review of seat work in Form III, includ- 
ing plurals, possessives, geder forms, additions of 
es, ed, ig, etc. 
Technical terres employed in the various subjects of study, 
and proper names as required. 
The use of the dictionary. 



SPELLING 

CIIAPTER I 

VALUE 

I ovn elementary schools spelling has long held a place 
of prominence, ranking in public opinion along with 
reading and writing. If has been used as a measure of 
the educational standing of both individuals and schools. 
Commonly, though perhaps erroneously, proficiency in 
spelling has been deemed adequate proof of mental ability 
and scholarship; while, despite clear evidences fo the con- 
trary, weakness in this subjeet has been regarded as an 
unmistakable mark of illiteracy or at lea.-_t of defective 
education. 

EFFECT OF WEAKNESS IX SPELLING 
Slips in spelling cause mo.t persons greater mortifica- 
tion than do more serious faults in other aspects of lan- 
guage; for the impression of defects in spoken language is 
unheeded or transient, while the record of errors in spelling 
is obvious and permanent. As a rule, teachers are keenlv 
sensitive to their pupils' weakness in spelling. In other 
subjects a comparatively poor showing mav n«,t disturb 
them greatly, but few are so indifferent as hot to feel 
mortified when attention is directed t« the faultv spelling 
of their classes. In no other school subject, however, is so 
high a standard expected--here we are satisfied with 
nothing short of perfect accuracy. 
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4 SPELLING 

round, pould, grould, etc., when taught together as a 
group, than in learning each as an unrelated word in a 
diffcrent lesson. When such words are taught in groups, 
spelling and phonetic reading become mutually helpful. 
Yet the pupil must not be lcd fo think that all words are 
spelled strictly according to sound. From the outset, 
some irregular forms should be taught along with regular 
forms, fo show him that many words must be learned as 
individuals, "each having a graphic personality". 

TO FOSTER TIIE DICTIONAR¥ HABIT 

When in doubt about the spellin of a word, prudent 
persons dcem it wiser fo consult a dictionary than to run 
the chance of blundering. The simplest purpose for which 
a dictionary can be used by young pupils is to discover 
the right spclling of words. Therefore, at an early period 
of their course, thev should be shown how to use the book 
f«r this purpose and Ire traincd in doing this regularly, 
until the habit has been fixed. Then, in senior grades, 
they may fairly be held accountable for spelling errors in 
all written exercises. 

TO TEACH CERTAIN IECHANICS OF WRITING 

Correct spclling includes more tban the placing of the 
right letters in their due order. The use of capitals, con- 
tractcd and abbreviated forms (don't, a.m., etc.), the pos- 
sessive forms of nouns in the singular or plural, the use 
of the h)Then , the right breaking up of a long word af the 
end of a line, should 1)e taught as parts of this subject. 
In writing sentences from dictation, punctuation is 
needed for correct form and should be required of the 
pupils as far as they may fairly be expected to understand 



RELATION TO OTHER SUBJECTS 5 

a marrer so arbitrary and difficult. In dividing words into 
syllables, the best authorities now take pronunciation as 
the sole guide, for examplc, pre-fer, pref-er-ence, rep-ro- 
bate, etc. A note on this point is given on page 112 of 
the Otario Public ,'chool ,'peller (Revised Edition). 

RELATION TO OTHER SUBJECTS 

TO READING 

In earlier days spelling had a much more intimate 
relation fo reading than if has now. Then reading was 
begun by learning the names of the letters and combining 
these to get words. Even )'et the practice of asking pupils 
who eannot recognize a word fo spell it, has hot totall)" 
disappeared. Tbis association oï reading and spelling ]lad 
two important results. The method of using the alphabet 
fo teach reading long determined the procedure in spelling, 
causing it to be taught orally. It resulted also in the 
spelling material being drawn almost exclusively from the 
reading books. Sec p. 12 and p. 16. 

TO COMPOSITION 

Spelling has a close relation fo composition. The only 
need for learning to spell is the need of giving written 
expression fo thought. Though one mav read quite satis- 
factorily while lacking in ability to spell, one cannot give 
satisfactorv form fo written lanuage without sueh ability. 
There is a elear recognition, therefore, of the vital 
pendence of spelling upon written composition, and better 
spelling results will be obtained when such recognition is 
regularly observed in practice. 



6 SPELLING 

TO PENMAN8HIP 
Neat, exact penmanship donc without much conscious 
effort, tends to prevent spelling errors. Ail written work 
whether donc on the hoard or on papcr, by the teacher or 
by the pupils, should be as perfect as possible. In ail 
written work every one should conform as closely as may 
be fo the standard letter forms. Whatever tends fo improve 
writing, for example, abundant practice and good writing 
material, will also influence improvement in ail aspects 
of written language. Ordinarily, it is found that pupils 
who are careless or indifferent as to penmanship, neatness 
of exercises, and accuracy of statement, are less likely to 
i)e careful about pcrfect spelling. The relation of spelling 
to penmanship is considered further under method. Sec 
p. 23 (the tea('her's writing), and p. 30 (the æupils' 
writing), also pp. 40 and 54. 



('HAPTEI II 

NUMBER, CHOICE, AND ARRANGEMENT OF WORDS 

EXTENT O VOCABULARY 

IT Is important fo have a clear idea of the extent of 
the task to be mastered in spelling. Careful tests and 
records have shown that on entering school af six years 
of age the average child from an intelligent home has a 
vocabulary of at least two thousand words. By the time 
he is prepared fo enter a high school he understands ïairly 
well about six thousand words. A considerable proportion 
of these present no difficulty, since their notation is quite 
regular; once he bas mastered the ordinary ways of repre- 
senting sounds, he will be able to write these words with- 
out trouble. It is hard fo believe that an:ything but care- 
lessness can accourir for the misspelling by a pupil nine 
or ten years old of such words as pri»ti»g, vaished, 
important; but many of the everyday words used fo express 
his thoughts are among the most irregular in our language 
and require for their mastery careful teaching and 
abundant practice. 

WHEN TO EIPHASIZE $TELLING 

That particular phase of memory which enables one 
fo recall all the letters of a word in their proper order is 
most active in early youth. This indicates that spelling 
should receive most attention in earlier years, chiefly in 
the Second and Third Forms, and before the pressure of 
new and more important subjects is felt in the higher 
Forms. Then, as a result of good teaching and thorough 
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8 SPELLING 

correction, a pupil on entering the highest Form will have 
mastered the spelling of the words he uses in ordinary 
conversation. Moreover, in those earlier years he is less 
sensitive fo anomalies and inconsistencies, and is therefore 
less troubled than an adult would be by the many peculiari- 
ries of English spelling. 

/VUIBER OF WORDS TO DE TAUGHT 

It is well to consider the number of words to be taught, 
hot only in a year, but also in a week and in a lesson, and 
the rime required for this task. Let it be assumed that 
the pupil gTaduating from the elementary school after an 
attendance of eight years bas a vocabulary of about six 
thousand words. An examination of these will make it 
evident that not more than four thousand require special 
teaching because of inherent difficulties. The task is, then. 
to teach about six hundred words on an average for each 
of the seven years when spelling is formally taught. This 
would mean the teaching of from fifteen to twenty new 
words each week for fort3" weeks. But, in addition to 
these, the most difficult words previously taught need to 
be drilled on until it seems impossible for any one fo miss 
them. 
XUI]3ER OF "WORDS IN A LESSON 
School practice bas varied greatly in regard fo the 
number of words presented in a lesson. In a certain 
secondary school, it was the custom to assig-n one hundred 
and fiftv words to be learned for each of the fortnightly 
spelling tests. Needless fo say the results were disastrous. 
The other extreme is round in schools which fix the 
number of new words at one or two each dav. The in- 
herent difficulties of spe]ling show how vain it is fo expect 



TIME REQUIRED 9 

pupils fo toaster af one time many difficult words. ]t is 
preferable to take a few hard words, and to drill thorouzhly 
on these, giving much practice fo their emplo)anent in 
sentences. As school conditions differ so greatly, perfect 
uniformity of practice cannot be expected, but it may be 
advised that in junior classes four or tire new words be 
taught in each lesson, and in senior classes, eight or ton. 
Together with these there should be a review of perhaps 
several old words which have been found difficult. As a 
rule, one of the exercises in the Ontario Public ,q'chool 
Speller {levised Edition) should be nmstered each week, 
or else three in two weeks, which will permit of rime for 
spelling matches and for drill on the list of difficult words 
for the year. 
TIME REQUIIIED 
In some schools the rime devoted to spelling is ex- 
cessive. The value of thls subject bas been exaggerated so 
that if receives as much attention as reading. This mis- 
take will be remedied when fewer words are presentêd in 
each lesson, and when the work to be covered in each 
grade has been clearly marked out. Further, it must be 
remembered that ail written work affords pra«tice in 
spelling. 
]Ioreover, there is the test of experience to guide us. 
Careful investigation has shown that schools devoting an 
undue amount of time to this subject attain results no 
better than those where the time is but moderate. Wide 
and successful experience shows that in no grade should 
the periods be more than one hundred minutes a week. 
In rural schools, hot more than two hours a week should 
be allowed for ail the classes, and there if will economize 
tirne and effort fo take toffether more than one grade when- 



12 SPELLING 

countered, these individual lists provide a most useful 
supplement fo the matcrial in the Text-book, so that from 
them the teacher should often choose words for drill and 
review. These difficult words which a pupil has need of 
using in his written work will probably be acquired more 
readily than easier words for which no need has been felt. 
By these various means the teacher can secure the best 
possible adjustment of material to individual needs. In 
the spelling lessons there should be fewer mcommon 
words lacking in signifieance for the pupil and a greater 
proportion of words required in everyday work. 

WORDS FROM THE READER OR TEXT-BOOK 

Not infrequently, the choice of words has been ruade 
in a haphazard fashion, chieflv fr«»m the reading books. 
The historical reason for this bas already been given. 
This plan of choosing material is unsystematic; there is 
no definite course to be covered in each grade, and no way 
of preventing serious omissions or frequent duplications. 
S»me teachers believe that a pupil should be able fo write 
whatever he tan read; indeed they think that spelling aids 
reading, and that consequently the two should be developed 
eo-ordinately. But word recognition in reading is a far 
simpler process than spelling. If an attempt is ruade fo 
keep a pupil's spelling up to a mastery of words in his 
reading, language, history, and other subjects, the results 
are likely to be harmful both fo these subjects and fo 
spelling. In spelling, as in any other subject, if is im- 
portant fo bave the material properly organized, and, as 
a rule, this can be secured only bv following more or less 
closely the course in a suitable text-book. 



SYSTEMS OF' WORD-GROUPING 13 

VARIOUS SYSTE,[S OF WORD-(]ROUPING 
1. BY IFmTH.--Spelling texts have followed different 
systems for classifying their material. The earliest books 
used the simple plan of grading words by their length or 
by the numbcr of syllables. But many short words are 
little used, and words are not diflàcult in proportion to 
their length. 
2. BY souI-D.--By this plan words were arranged on 
the basis of their phonetic structure. For instance, words 
having the long sound of oo, as, toof],, s]oe, sottp, slcw, 
juice, etc., were placed together. Ilomonyms were taught 
together, for example, sail, sale; traig]t, strait. It was 
assumed that sound is the chier aid fo spelling ; but, need- 
less to say, the practice proved a scrious hindrance, not a 
help. 
3. B¥ CO:httOh  SlG/'IFICATIO.N'.--y this plan words 
were grouped according to their meaning; for example, 
under the heading of vegetables there would corne potato, 
turnip, carrot, beet, etc. This represents the first attempt 
to give meaning fo isolatcd words by grouping them in 
natural association; but il affords litt]e direct help to 
spelling; f«»r examp]c, the correct spelling of carrot would 
hot aid in lcarning the spelling of potato. 
4. BY cotMox DEItVATION.--There are other plans 
of word-grouping proceeding on the basis of meaning and 
structure. Thus, word. may l)e classified by common pre- 
fixes or suflïxes: compel, control; election, caution; or be- 
cause they corne from the same roof: reduce, educate. By 
this arrangement there is some suggestion of likcness in 
meaning following from likeness in structure, and to this 
extent it is helpful. 



14 SPELLING 

5. B PHONOGA»S.---The most modern system of 
classification is by phonograms; for example, th-istle, 
br-istle; inscribe, describe; subterraneatb Mediterranean. 
This has the advantage nf focusing attention upon the 
largest units in words having like sounds represented by 
like symbols. It is evident that the pupil can more easily 
toaster the spelling of piteous, pletteous, righteous, 
bo«teou.% courtcous, etc., when these are taught together 
and their poits of similarity emphasized. 
The advantages claimed for the phonogram are many. 
I the first place, if provides a large unit for the division 
and identification of new words. If induces even larger 
divisions than the svllable. If is superior fo the syllable 
in another respect, namely, that if separates words on the 
basis of their sound division regardless of derivation or 
the arbitrar)- (from the standpoint of somld) divisions of 
dictionar)' s)-llabication. It is a more flexible mode of 
attack on a word. taking account of the individuality and 
maturitv in pupils. In the case of the word re«tionship, 
(,ne pupil, depending on the known units of the word that 
happen fo be suggested in his attempt af interpretation by 
analo,, mi,ht divide the word thus, re-la-tion-ship; but 
a pupil with a knowledge of larger words would see it as 
relation-ship. The phonogram, as generally used, avoids 
ail artificial marking., su«h as diacritics and accents, so 
that the pupil from the beginning sees the word as it will 
be read or spelled in nnrmal use. 
Through an eamination of suflïcient examples of this 
kind, the pupil learns fo generalize, fo know what letters 
are uscd for certain sounds, and fo apply this knowledge. 
For it is not necessary fo teach every, word in groups 
having features in common: good teaching should enable 
a pupil to spell, unaided, hundreds of words of regular 



SYSTEMS OF WORD-GROUPING 15 

notation and other words resembling those in a group 
already known. Then, by this method of grouping, we 
can best attain one of the chief aires in spelling, namely, 
that of giving the learner, through a study of well-chosen 
examples, power to toaster word forms in geeral. Of 
course irregular word forms; for example, through, eye, 
shoe, oe, must be dealt with chieflv as unrelated individ- 
uals, for they lack conformity to any t:)'pe. 



CHAPTER III 

DOES SPELLING NEED TO :BE TAUGHT? 

SOV.TES the theory is advanced that spelling does 
hot rcquire Slccial tcaching, because it can be learned in- 
cidentally through reading and other school activities. 
Pupils taught by the word or the sentence method will, if 
is sometimes contendcd, be able fo spell correctly, since 
they see how the words look. Though alluring as a theory, 
in lractice this has lroved a comllete failure. If is quite 
safe fo a.sert that lractically all children and even adults 
rcad with ease and certainty many words which they are 
unable fo Slell. 

ABILITY TO SPELL COMES LATER TttAN ABILITY TO I{EAD 

Experience proves that the ability fo spell lags offert 
far behind the ability fo read, for even an extensive course 
in story-reading does not ensure mastery of simple word 
notation. A familiar word is recognized chiefly by ifs 
gencral appearan«e, aided perhaps by certain dominant 
lctter fourres. If is only in the case of new and unfamiliar 
words tbat tbe cye pauses fo get thc various component 
]ctters; as a rule if recozizes well-known forms as wholes 
and so rap]dly that examination of their parts is pre- 
cluded. But spelling demands exact analvsis and memory 
of word forn», fo enable one fo reproduce them correctly. 
The context, of great help in word recognition, gives no 
a]d in building up words through their constituent parts. 
Paying heed fo the letters is a great waste in reading, 
16 



WHY ENGLISH SPELLING IS DIFFICULT 17 

making it slow, and fixing attention on mere forms, hot 
on the meaning. But in spelling this careful serutiny of 
the various letters in their due ordcr is essential. Though 
extensive reading is of some help, it ealmot takc the place 
of definite teaching in spelling. 

WHY ENGLISH SPELLING IS DIFFICULT 

DEFECTIVE ALPtIABET 
It is probable that English presents more serious diffi- 
culties in spelling than any othcr modern languave having 
an extensive litcrature. A regular phonetic alphabet 
would have as many letters as the language ha. separate 
sounds. No syml.ol would stand for more than one sound, 
nor would the saine sound be represented by two or more 
characters. The English language, however, bas about 
forty-rive readilv distil.Uuishal,le sounds, but «,nly twenty- 
six letters to represcnt them. In reality there are twenty- 
tvo really servi(.eal,le letters, as four--c, j, q, and x--are 
redundant. Olfly eight lctters of out alphabet represent 
fixed sound values. Of the forty-five s,,und., twcnty are 
classified as vowcls, and twenty-five as cons,,nant.. Ex- 
cluding y as superflu, ,us, there are but rive vowel signs fo 
indicate the twenty vowel sounds. 

:MANY SYSIBOLS FOR THE SASIE SOUND 
Not only are there too few signs to represent ade- 
quately the diffcrent sounds of the language, but the chier 
difficulties in spelling arise rather from tire ma,y ways of 
representing the saine souaà. 
1. The twenty vowel sounds are written in one hun- 
dred and eight different ways. In illustration, the fol- 
lowing words show how long a is represented: ache, sale, 
15 c.l. 



18 SPELLING 

nlail, say, break, gaol, gauge, the//, veil, reign, eight, eh, 
d«hlia, halfpenny, eampaign, strai, ght. 
We may safely eonelude that the great difiïeulty of 
Eglish spelling tan be aseribed to the many different ways 
o[ writing our vou'el sounds. 
2. In like manner, the twenty-five eonsonantal sounds 
have over one hundred and sixty different spellings. 
Vari6us ways of indieating sh are here given: ship, Asia, 
chaise, i.._ue, fahion, social, ocean, conscience, oflïciate, 
vi/iate, portion, mission, fuchsia, puncheon, schedule, 
moustach e. 

OBSCURE VOWELS 

The vowels in unaccented syllables tend to become 
obs(.ure and, since they are not clcarly heard, the uncer- 
tainty in regard to their spelling is greatly increased. 
Note such words as bcnefit, mutton, fertile, necessary, 
fortune, séparate. 

SILENT LETTERS, DOUBLED LETTERS 

Silent letters are found in a considerable number of 
out words in eomnl«m use. These usually give consider- 
able tr.uhle t. pupils in all grades and espeeially to those 
of the auditory type. Even in the case of adults, slips 
are hot infrequently due fo this difficulty. Of the vowels, 
only e and o are commonly doubled, and this is not in- 
dicated by any «.hangd pronunciation. The three con- 
somnts frequently doubled af the end of words are s, l, f. 
Even accurate pronunciation fails fo be a sure guide to the 
d«ulling within a word. But knowledge of derivation and 
of the rules for doubling the final consonant are of con- 
iderahle help. 



FEATURES TO BE KNOWN 19 

THE THREE FEATURES TO BE KNOWN 

:BIEANING 
The teaching of spellbg implies more than merely 
enabling pupils fo reproduce the right letters of words in 
their due sequence. With this there should always be 
associated two other important elcmcnts, namely, mcaning 
and pronunciation, and these should be known beïore the 
letter sequence is taught. As a broad principle, it may 
be stated that a pupil should learn fo spell only those 
words whose meaning and pronunciation he already 
knows. This, however, requircs some consideration. 
Through silent reading and study, pupils meet many 
words first in thêir written or printed form and, while 
they understand their meaning, thcy mav be ignorant of 
their pronunciation. There are, in almost êvêry class, 
some members with habits of care]ess or incorrect pro- 
nunciation which is the cause of êrrors in spêlling; for 
example, (nomitive) nominative, (reglar) regular, (Artic) 
Arctic. 
PRONUN«'IATION 
When oral spelling is given, especially in junior 
ades, the teacher should require the pupil to pronounce 
the word correctlv and distinctlv b«»th before and after 
spelling it. If af first the word is improperly pronouneed, 
the pupil shou]d be set riht before being permitted fo 
naine the letters. In senior grades the usual plan of 
dietation does hot afford mu«.h opprtunity for correcting 
faults of pronunciation ; for but few pupils may he called 
on fo say the words aloud. As a first precaution, the 
teaeher should make sure that his own pronun«'iation is 
clear and correct. Words that he deems diflïcult in this 
respect, he should pronounce very distinctly two or three 



20 SPELLING 

rimes, and afterward test some pupils individually. He 
will know which pupils are seriously defective in this 
marrer, and with them he should take special pains. 
There are two ways of securing pronunciation--by 
imitation of the living voice or bv consulting a dictionary. 
The imitation of a correct model is always the better way, 
and for young pupils the onlv way, of acquiring good 
pronunciation. Usually, this marrer is take up in con- 
neetion with oral reading, though the standard of correct- 
ncss then exacted is hot maintained at other rimes. But 
even a slight consideration will show ifs value in the case 
of spelling and indeed in all spoken lan_-mage. The use 
of the di'tionarv for obtaining pronun«iation will be dis- 
cussed further on. 

MEAN'IN*G AND PRONUN-CIATION 
The mcanings of the w«,rds in any lesson may be known 
verv clearly by some pupils, onlv vaffuel.v I,y others, and 
n,,t at ail by a few. Yet, as these pupils are to be taught 
as a body, if is best fo make sure that all are familiar with 
lhe meaning and pronunciation before they give attention 
fo the spellinz pro,per. If anv be found quite ignorant 
of the signification of a word, the teacher should endeavour 
fo develop this, if possible, through action, object, or 
picture, especially in Junior Forms. Failing such means, 
he may give a simple explanation of ifs meaning or show 
its distinctive use in one or more sentences. This latter 
method is alwavs of zreat value and should be required 
,f pupils in the case of words hot clearlv understood. It 
seems evidt.nt, however, that bv representinz new words 
af first experientially--that is, throuzh action, objects, 
picturesappeal fo past experience is far more effective 
in most classes than by presenting them orally or visuallv. 



TEACHER'S ESSENTIAL QUALIFICATIONS 21 

The plan of requirin formal definitions must be eOll- 
demned--it does hot imply undcrstanding. 

:MEANIXG, PRONUNCIATION, AND SPELLING 
In spelling, a most pernicious pra«ticc is the trans- 
lating of mere sounds into letters, with little idea of 
meaning--thc ba.ic element i thc word. In every spelling 
lesson, the teachcr should endeavour to have his pupils 
acquire or connect thc mcaning, the pronunciation, and 
the spelling in right association. 
Word forms are acquired in various wavs. It may be 
assumed that, in general, the order fo be folh,wed is: 
1. The mental image, or concept, of the word 
2. Ifs auditorv and visual impression through hearing 
and seeing if 
3. At times, its oral expression through the pupil's 
vocal spelling 
4. Ifs written expression 1,v him 
5. The motor impression arising from both oral and 
written reproduction. 

THE TEACHER'S ESSENTIAL QUALIFICATIONS 

KNOWLEDGE OF SUBJECT 

The first requirement s that the teacher spell with 
unfailing accuraey, and this abilitv «annot alwavs be taken 
for granted. A teacher's errors in spelling, if noticed bv 
his pupils, are apt fo upset confi,l«,n«e in his fitness; 
besicles, one who does not spell well is less likely fo dctcct 
the mistakes of others. 



22 SPELLING 

I[IEDIATE PREPARATION 
The teacher should have a clear, comprehensive view 
of the subject, should understand the laws, or principles, 
on which spelling is based, should know the usual causes 
of errors and the remedies therefor, and sec the relations 
of spelling fo other school activities. Though spelling is 
an extremely complex subject, many teachers regard it 
as a particularly easy one, and therefore they have hot 
sought fo discover those practices that ensure success in- 
stead of failure. The teacher should know in advance the 
particular difficulties in the words of any lesson and he 
best ways of dealing with the various individuals in the 
class. This demands immediate and painstaking prepara- 
tion for each lesson; moreover, this subject makes great 
demads upon the teacher's unremitting perseverance as 
the chief price of success. 
WRITIXG 
The teaeher's writing on the board should be large, 
legible, and regular, with precise and unfailing attention 
to the meehanics of the sentence. Indeed this should be 
the unvar.ving rule lu all board work, whether written by 
the tea«her or the pupils. Pupils af the rear of the room 
are af a considerahle disadvantage in being at a distance 
from the board. ('«,mmOlflV te,o, some of the pupils have 
defective sigt. The letters, therefore, should be large 
enough and heavy encuzh to be seen clearly from auy part 
of the room. (;ood board writing by the teaeher, vhile 
very desirable in every subject, is here of special value. 
Everv lettêr should readily show ifs individuality; there 
should be no dc, ubt a. fo whether if is i or e ; j or g. When 
written upon the board ,v the teacher, the word picture 
should be the saine as that fo be ruade by the pupils  the 



DISTINCT READING 23 

st3,1e of writing should therefore be uniform throughout 
the school. It is onfusing for pupils to see the 
word which the3, are learning to spell written on the board 
in quite different ways as fo letter forms, slope, etc., for 
example, BOX, BOX, box, box, etc. It is, in the opinion of 
some teachers, an advantage fo have pupils study the 
words from lists or sentences in their own handwriting, 
especially when this is good. 

DISTINCT READING 
Examination of the pupils' work shows hot infre- 
quently that they did hot catch the tcacher's rcading of 
the dictated passage. Though at times their lack of atten- 
tion is responsible for such failure, 3,et hot uncomonly 
the actual cause is the teacher's defective pronunciation 
or enunciation. If one reads the word. ahud as 
goret(n) ment, hyg ( i) ene, a (b ) brei'iate, it will naturally 
lead fo errors in spelling. The teacher means to say, "a 
great deal, a tract of land, the mother's tenderness, I 
accept thc offer", but thc 1)upil hears "a gray deal, a 
track of land, the mothcr's tendernuss, I except the offer" 
In ail oral teaching right articulation is of great value, 
but, when the pupils are expected fo rcproduce exactly a 
text read fo them, distinct and correct speech is of supremc 
importance. In this respect there are few teachers whose 
speech is hot open fo some improvement, and this improve- 
ment would benefit both the oral and the written language 
of the pupils. The sounds, however, should hot be unduly 
emphasized with the view of preventing mistakes in 
spelling. To pronounce the words as s«.issors, ra.¢pberry, 
epistles, dflapidate, would be both incorrect and mis- 
leading. The pupil should hear the familiar sounds, but 
he should hear them distin«.tly. 



24 SPELLING 

DIFFICULTIES IN WORDS 

When a word proves troul,lesomë in spelling, if means 
usually that one or two letters cause the difficulty; for few 
words are difficult throughout. In the following instances 
itis evident that only the italicized letters would cause 
mud perplexity: separate, delicacy, impostor, putrefy, 
fascinate. Attention should thcrefore be centred on such 
puzzling parts and not given equally fo ail letters. Senior 
pupils might fairly be expected fo pick out such perplexi- 
ties for themselves, but the junior pupils lack the re- 
quisite knowledge and experience. For them, the teacher 
must analyse the words fo discover and point out the 
difficulties. Success will depend upon whether this is 
donc so clearly and impressively that every pupil will be 
put on his guard against probable mistakes. 



CIIAPTEI. IV 

THE WORK IN FORMS I AND II 

TRANSCRIPTIOX 

THEltE IS 110 need of teaehing spclling fo a pupil until he 
requires fo use it in his own wrillc slatemeMs. Though 
there is no serious ol@etion to his learning the spelling 
of some regular forms in eonneetion with the phonetie 
reading in the first year, 3"et little gain will arise fronl 
nmch rime so spent. If is erident that his ability fo read 
should be eonsiderablv in advanee of his ability fo spell; 
for reading is b.th easier and more imp,rtant than 
spelling. The pra«tiee of trans«.rihing teaches him word 
notation; if, in addition, he is required oceasionally fo tcll 
what letters represent familiar sounds wh.,¢e svmbols he 
has learned, he will bave had sufficient exercise in spelling 
f,r his first school vear. 

WRITTEN SPELLING OF WORDS IN COMMON USE 
Spelling be(«,mes a uscful activitv «mlv whcn the school 
directs the pupil's attcnti.n fa written language. In the 
second year, he hegins in writc his own expressions besides 
reproducing those fçmnd in his h«,oks. |le feels now the 
need of mastering word form.«, and his greater faeility 
in writing enaldcs him to do this work m-re easilv. At 
first the teachin will he ehieflv oral, the hoard heing 
freely u.ed hv the toaç.her and, fo se,me extet, hy the 
pupils. In the first f(,ur vears none but words iii conlmon 
use slmuld be taught. There are two classes of these 
words--those of redar f«,rm, as lramp, whi¢.h ,hould be 
25 



26 SPELLING 

the more numerous al the first; and those irregular in 
notation, as eye; a few of these latter shoulà be taught in 
e.very lesson. 
I[PORTANCE OF VISUALIZATION 
To carry out the principles already diseussed, the pupil 
must know the meaning, the pronunciation, and the 
spclling, and fo these he gives attention, usually, in the 
order named. The words nlay be developed ïrom the class 
or given by the teacher in sentenees showing their import. 
Thcy are careïully written on the board hy the teaeher, 
and pronounced slowly and distinetly by the pupils. 
Attention should bc focused on the special difficulties in 
irregular words and on the like parts of regular words. 
This may be done bv asking the elass, for example, the 
fir.t lctter in wrong, the mlmber of e's in tlree, the letters 
that stand for oo in cheu', those that are the saine in loop, 
drooi, sloop, and fo give the sound these stand for. 

DEVICES 

An effective appeal fo the eye cornes from the teacher's 
underlining speeial difficulties, for examlfle , sclool, shoes, 
kniïe, brid, etc. At limes this is done in coloured chalk, 
or else the difficult part is written over in coloured chalk ; 
this use of colour attracts the eye verv ïorcibly. The 
underlining of such parts in white ehalk is effective, 
though it does hot centre attention so strongly. The 
pupil. spell orally, first as they look al the hoard, after- 
ward as they look away from the word, or as il is covered. 
For the final oral test, it is best fo give lhrases or short 
sentenees fo be repeated bv the iadividual and then spelled. 
At rare intervals ea«h pupil may be re_quired in turn to 
spell a singlë word in the se,tence. Any doubt or error 



DEVICES 27 

is dealt with by having them observe the word even more 
closely, the teacher's questions directing them as fo where 
they should fix attention. Some of the pupils may he 
asked fo copy the words on the board and later to write 
them when hidden from view. 0ther devices that en- 
courage visualization are tbe exposing, for a nmment, of 
eards on which the words have been written in large hand 
or the writing of a word on the hoard and instantly 
eovering or erasing if. Simple and varied deices that 
will focus attention, especiall 3 through the eye, are always 
of value. 
Every teacher should clearly realize that this work 
ought tobe carried on very briskly. When too mueh rime 
for observation is given, there is less focusing of attention ; 
usually the briefer tbe rime, the nmre intense the attention. 
IDWDU,XI aswnxo.--Simultaneous oral spelling 
should never be used. In spelling, as in other sul,jects, 
the only satisfactory method is individual answering. 
TEACHING WOItDS IN I.'4OLATION OR IN CONNE('TION.-- 
In the latter case tbe eye wanders over ail tbe words, ard 
thus attention is m,t eoneentrated on the one fo be taugllt 
and on the speeial diflïeulties tberein. But. in the case of 
homonyms, if is better t» write a short phrase or sentence 
on the board fo exemplify tbe correct ïorm through use 
rather than by definition. 
BoartD woK.--The board work would be neatly 
arranged; thongh tbev may be writtcn elsewhere on the 
board, the individual w«»rds slmuld he put in short 
columns, and tbo phrases, if any, should 1,e grouped by 
themselves. A curtain on a sl)ring re, lier attm'hcd fo tbe 
top of the board is of mu.h use il tbis, as in other sub- 
jects; for if permits the covering of the work temporarily. 
In the absence of a curtain, a large shoet of cardhoard 



28 SPELLING 

may serve fo hide individual words. ]t is generally a 
waste of rime fo write the words on the board, then fo 
erase them, and afterward fo rewritc thcm. In the pre- 
liminary test thev need fo bc quiekly hidden fr,m the class 
and then shown azain. When two or more pupils misspell 
any word in the tc.qt, this word should be written two or 
three rimes by ail. either on the board or at their seats. 

IIOIONYIS 
One of fhe most serious difficulties of our .pelling is 
fhe proper treatment of homonyms. English has many 
pairs of words whose sound is the saine but whose meaning 
and spe]ling are different. S«»ne of these require to be 
tauzht from the very outset, because they are in such 
frequent use. 
MzxxI-.The first point fo note is thaf the meaning 
shou|d be given, never l»y a formal definifion, but always 
through some distinctive use «»f the word : for example, "a 
pair of gloves", rather than "a pair means two things 
alike in îorm and that go together". 
ODE.--It sh«»uld be remembered fhat in things some- 
what alike, beginners see resemblances before they ean dis- 
tinguish differences. The probability is therefore that if 
plain and plane are taught together, the likeness in sound 
will be remembered hetter flmn the differenee i» spe]ling. 
To prevent (.onfusion, sueh word. should, as a rule, be 
/aught separatély in the Junior Forms, the commoner one 
e,,ming first. Thus .qreat. four, die, stair, should be taught 
heffre gr«te, fore, d!le. stare. The flr.t of ead such pair 
shou}d be used in a varietv of sentences, most of these fo 
be given by the pupil.q. When the second of the pair is 
tauzht, there shou|d, in Junior Fourres. be no reference fo 
the flr.qf. 



SEAT WORK 29 

DEVlCES.--To prevent pupils in the lowcr grades con- 
founding such words, one may he in the plural, for 
example, cets, thc other in the singular, for examplc, 
sed, scetd. In such phrases as, a beec] trce, on tlte sea 
beach, it is too loo.se, associating the homon,aa with a 
familiar word similarly spelled may assist in impressing 
its form. 
SEAT WORK 
The seat work for junior classcs demands due con- 
sideration. Thcre should be carcful reproduction of the 
words taught in /he lesson. Sh, wness of writing is now 
no drawback, as it compels greater attention fo dctails. 
Though words arc best lcarncd in isolation, they are }»est 
tested in scntences, and these should very fr(.quently be 
of the pupil's own making. Espccially should ail 
homonvms be thus used, fo show that their mcaning is 
understood. The dictation exercises in thc Text-book 
should also be carefully transcribed. In addition, words 
taken from the board or from the Text-book may be neatly 
transcribed in short colunms. Writtcn word ïorms are 
strange and diflàcult for young pul)ils, and therefore 
patience and perseverance are demandcd of the teacher. 
He must see that every step they take is a success, must 
dwell upon their correct words more than on their failures, 
and must inspire them with a belief in themselves; only 
thus do they gain in confidence and power. 
WOD UILDrNo.--The word-l,uildin.ŒE exercises given 
in the Text-book are intended for seat work. The words 
may first he written out in colunms, perhaps two or three 
times. Then they should be incorporated into sentences, 
and this latter exercise is of far greater value than the 
first. This work is fo follow the lesson and should be 



30 SPELLING 

varied from rime fo rime fo prevent monotony. Occasion- 
ally it nay I»c nccessary for thc tea(.her to illustrate how 
the work is fo be donc. And always there is need of care- 
ful supervision fo secure good resulis. 
WITI,X'G.--In every grade clear, reêaalar penmanship 
is a valualde aid fo spclling. In the classes of Form I 
pupils should write with large, soft pencils iii note-books 
kcpt f,r this purpose. Later on, pen and ink should be 
us(,d instcad. There are strong objections to the use of 
slates, hot onlv on account of noise aud uncleanliness, but 
also because of the êase with which words are altered, 
lcading perhaps fo dishoestv. Besicles, itis advisable to 
keep the pupils up fo the highest standard of work and to 
bave a rec(»rd t«a test their improvement from rime to rime. 
Yet if would he unwise fo expc¢'t as great neatness and 
accuracv in penmauship fr«_m pupils in Form II as from 
those in F«wm IV. If the attcnti«,n of the young pupil is 
directed toc) mu('h fo the naechanical process, the intel- 
l(,ctual side will surfer. The saine lesson should hot give 
equal emphasis to penna.anship and fo spelling. 
GUESSI_N'G .T .qPELLI.N'G.--]-)uring the first two or three 
years, thê toa«her shou]d endeavour fo bave a limitêd voca- 
l»ulary «af we]]«'lmsen word forms so firm]v fixed in the 
pupil's rnind tiret hê can rêproduce thêrn with unfailing 
aeeuraev. This mcans constant drill on o]d word., espec- 
ially on those found difficult. Ile must be trained fo be 
sure whên he knows a word and never perrnitted fo guess. 
Every guess is ]ikely fo brinff up a wronff form instead of 
the correct spê]linff, and assuredlv if hinders the fornaa- 
ti¢»n of the habit of close observation. Hê must be 
cautioned ot to nrite a word if he does hot know it, and 
encouragêd, hen in doubt, fo consult the teacher, if un- 
able fo use the dictionary. 



CIIAPTER V 

THE WORK IN FORM III 

USE OF TItE BLACK-BOARD 

As TIIE pupils bave now gained considerable masterv 
over writing, thcy should more freely utilize this form of 
motor activity when learning spelling. The board, as well 
as their books, should be regularly used bv the pupils fo 
gain familiarity with the f«»rms before being required fo 
reproduce them. When a relatively large hoard space is 
available, successive groups of the pupils arc callcd fo the 
board fo write words or phrases, the other pupils mean- 
while writing on paper. In this stage of lcarning it makes 
little difference whcther or hot the pupils see ea'h other's 
work, so long as they observe onlv the correct ïorm. If 
any wrong form appcars on the board, if should be 
instantly eraseà and the right form sul»stitutcd. To call 
attention fo the incorrect spelling or to al]«»w it fo remain, 
would be radically wrong. When a pupil's board work is 
correct, if should be carefulL: examined by the other 
pupils, since thev are likely fo lcarn more from their 
fellows' performance than from the tcacher's directions. 

TIIE TEA('IIER'. , PREPARATION 

Careful preparati«,n 1,y the teaeher is an impotant 
factor. The special difficulties of the various words should 
be sought out and nmrked in his book. In the following 
words the italicized letters are those that usually cause 
mistakes : eoarse, history, barzain, pigeon, minute, measles, 
sausage. OEhese might well be compared with others 



32 SPELLING 

having similar sounds and similar spelling. In Form III, 
pupils might be trained fo tell what parts are hard. The 
tea«hcr should make certain that his own pronunciation 
is correct, lIe shou]d bave, for the testing of homonyms, 
other illustrative uses hesides lhose round in the text- 
books, tic may give, for a written test, sentences different 
from those in the Tcxt-book, especially if his sentences 
contain the words laught in the lesson. 

THREE IMPORTAXT RULES 

It is of great inportan('e fo dwcll upon the dropping 
or the retaining of the e at the end of words. Many 
junior pupils are iJ doubt as fo whether u'elcomeing, 
welcomming, or welcoming is rizht. Similarly the 
('halging of y to i causes considerable confusion. The 
doubling of the final consonant--thc cause of numerous 
errors--should ho taught and dri]]ed on, not in one lcsson 
alone, but in many. These three rules in spelling are by 
far the most important, since thev affcct many thousands 
of words. It is, thereforc, highly desirab]e that pupils 
should, ear]y in s,.hoo] lire, n«,t simp]y understand them, 
but use them regularly and intcl]igent]y. 

TEACIII-*G A.*D TESTING 
Occasionally it may serve fo teach the isolated words 
in one lesson, and on the ncxt day fo test them by the 
dictation of sentences which embody them; yet, as a rule, 
if is preferable fo teach the words from the sentences and 
fo hae the test by sentence wrifing fo]]ow immediately. 
The words in the review lessons will need some attention 
because of their difficulty, but they will hot demand so 
muc.h care as when first presentcd. These reviews may 
also be used to test the pupils' rcmemhrance of similar 



INCIDENTAL "rEACHING OF "rERMS 33 

word forms taught previously They may bc asked to 
use such words in sentences both oral and writtcn. When 
if is desirable fo show the division of a word into syllables, 
if may be donc by drawing light vertical lines, rather than 
by placing hyphens, between the parts. This latter way 
presents the word in an unfamiliar form, for example, 
con-tin-u-al-ly; «onltinlulllly is pref¢«al,lc. 

INFLECTED AND CONTRA«'TED FOR:MS 

The few infleeted form.q in out language should receive 
due attention and al,undant practice. Such f«»rms as 
lady's, ladies, ladies'; emperor, empress; wharf, wharves; 
reply, replies, repIying; lazy, lazier, laziIy; etc., offcr con- 
siderable diflïculty to me,st pupils, t_'ontracted or abbre- 
viated forms should be taught as they are needed. Some 
of these are in common use in oral and written discourse, 
yet through laxity of correction the wrong form rnay 
become fixed in the pupil's writing. The frequency of 
mistakes in such words as doesn't, c'er, etc., is well known 
fo most tea«hers. If proper/y taught from the first, 'ith 
watchful correction of all their writing, pupils will hot 
acquire the habit of carelessness in spelling these forms. 

IXçlDENTAL TEAçHIXG OF TEMS ' 

In these grades, many proper names and eome scien- 
tific terms corne into the pupil's vocabulary. As these are 
met with in history, geography, or other lessons, their 
proper spelling rnav be tauzht incidentally or shown on 
the board and dwelt upon, especially when the pupiL are 
expected fo reproduee in writin. the substance of the 
lesson. The scientific terres in hyiene, nature study, etc., 
whieh the pupils arc fo rernember should be taught 
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34 SPELLING 

similarly. Certain technical terres belonging to arith- 
metic, grammar, and other school studies ïnight be taught 
as fo spelling when first they are explained to the class. 
But the importace of technical terres, of historical or 
geographical namcs, is oftcn overestimated. Pupils should 
l.c shown where fo look for these words when needed in 
written work. 
Thc tca«.hing of homonyms should continue fo receive 
mu¢'h attention, as these are found to be one of the greatest 
ditiiculties in our spelling. If seems best not to take 
thcm together in a sentence even in Form III. 
Many common honmnyms should be used unobtrusively 
in the sentences given for dictation, since itis only by 
frequent practice in different connections that pupils learn 
t. Sl)cll such words unerringly. Bcsides those found in 
the Spellcr, thc teachcr may teach other homon)mas re- 
quired bv the activities of the school. When mistakes bave 
becn madc in homon3mas , if is usually best to have both 
forms rizhtly uscd in sentences placed on the board, so 
that their differences may be clearly seen, and subsequent 
confusion guarded against. 

BLACK-BOARD LISTS 

In this and the higher Forms, it is recommended that a 
h,ng list, say forty fo fifty, of the words most frequently 
misspelled be kept on the board fo be regularly copied 
as a seat exercise. Solne (,f those longest in view should 
l,c replaced after ea«.h lesson by words then missed. If 
the words are written in several columns and numbered, 
thc tea¢.her can readilv indicate those that are fo be copied 
in any exercise. Especially in these and the senior grades 



SPELLING AS HOME WORK 35 

such words should be embodied by the pupils in sentences 
showing their typical meaning. Since many of the words 
now taught are comparativcly new fo thcm, thcy outzht fo 
practise employing them in connected expressions, in order 
fo gain mastery over their meaning and form together. 

SPELLING AS II05IE WORK 

Teachers are sometimes in doubt as to the advisability 
of assigning spelling as a home task. It should be evident 
that at no stage is this an easy subject nor one in which 
the young pupil tan readily discover the difficulties or 
overcome them unaided. As in the case of othcr difficult 
subjects, the tcaching should always precede. Some 
exercises based upon it mav follow for seat or home work, 
if the teacher decm it advisable; but the home study of 
untaught lessons in spclling, especially in preparation for 
recitation, is hot advisable. 



CIIAPTER VI 

THE WORK IN FORM IV 

CONTRASTING WORDS 

]N TIIE Junior Forms and in Form III, c,,mparison was 
the prin(.iple gencrally used to teach word forms, but in 
the higher Forms contrast, also, may af rimes be employed 
with good results, lb.re, the liability fo confound forms 
having some rcscmblance is much lcss than in the younger 
classes. Consequcntly pupils may be asked to note the 
differences in such pairs as harass, embarrass; proceed, 
precede; e»vclop, en,'elope; fitted, bencfited; «bility, tran- 
q,dllity; inflcction, complcxion; etc. The strong ten- 
dency to spel] .su«.h words in a like way, rcgardlcss of their 
differences, usually gives much trouble. The point fo 
emphasize here is their dissimilarity. 

IIOMONYMS 

Homonyms may now l,e taken together; for example, 
principal and pri»ciplc mav be taught together in the 
saine lesson and, if thought desirable, tested in one sen- 
tence, the object of the teacher being, hot fo entrap the 
pupils, but fo secure, if possible, perfect spelling in each 
test. In the case of some of these terres, one of the pair 
would have been taken in tire earlier years, and the second 
one onlv in le Fourth Form: for example, liar, lyre; 
mean, mie : wave, wab'e; etc. If is not so hard as might 
be supposed for pupils fo learn the spelling of such new 
and diffieult words if these are properly taught when first 
36 



DIFFERENT ENDINGS 37 

presented. Their very strangeness leads fo a careful 
examination of thcir parts. Bcsidcs, the pupil bas nothing 
to unlearn, as he has lmt misspelled them himself nor has 
he seen thenl mi.*spelled. The frequency «,f their correct 
use in his oral and written uttermleeS eollditions his 
mastery of their nleaning and f,»rm. Itis essential tobe 
unsparing of teaehin.,z, and especially of drill, in the en- 
deavour to guard pupils against errors in honmn)ans, par- 
ticularly in their composition exereises. 

DIFFERENT ENDINGS 

There are some endings that present great ditïàcultv 
and consequently eall for the most watehful care; for 
example, cy, sy; able, ible; ant, ent; sion, tion; or, our; 
ise, ize; etc. In some of these cases the teacher tan give 
considerable help; there are, f,,r instant.e, few words ending 
in ise, where s bas the sound of z; Lesson 7, page 144, 
in the Speller givcs nearly all the i.¢e (yse) forms in 
common use. ]taving learned these few forms, the pupil 
can take it for granted that ail othcr verbs having this 
terminal sound are spelled with i:e. With few exceptions, 
su«.h as parlour, larbour, arbour, neighbour, armour, 
rapour, the ending our belons fo abstract nouns and their 
related verbswhile or usually denotes the agent or doer. 
The dropping of the u from our when the sutïàx ous is 
added should be brought fo the attention of the pupils. 
As there are manv more adjeetives ending in ible than in 
able, if is simplcr fo drill thorouhly on the commoner 
words having this latter ending. The difference in the 
meaning of the two words in sueh pair. as complement, 
compliment; stationery, stationar!: etc., should be im- 
pressed on the memory by thorough teaching and repeated 
review. 



CIIAPTER VI 

THE WORK IN FORM IV 

('O.TRASTI NG WORDS 

IN TIIE Junior Forms and in Form III, comparison was 
the princip]c gcncral]y used to tcach word forms, but in 
the higher F«»rms contrast, also, may at times bc ernployed 
with good rcsults, litre, the liability to confound forms 
having some rescmldance is much less than in the younger 
classes. Consequcntly pupils may be asked fo note the 
differences in such pairs as ],arass, e»,b«trrass; proceed, 
precede; etrelop, ett,'elope; fitted, bet, cfited; ability, tran- 
q,Hllity; iflectiot, complexio,; ctc. The strong ten- 
dency fo spell :uch words in a like way, regardless of their 
diffcrences, usually gives much trouble. The point fo 
emphasize here is thcir dissimilarity. 

]IO]IONYIS 

Homonyms may now be taken together; for example, 
pritcipal and priciple mav bc taught fo.gerber in the 
saine lesson and, if thouzht dcsirable, tested in one sen- 
tence, the object of thc teacher being, not fo entrap the 
pupils, but fo secure, if possille, perfect spelling in each 
test. :In the case of some of these terms, one of the pair 
would have been taken in the earlier years, and the second 
one onlv in the Fourth Form: for example, liar, lyre; 
meat, mict : «a'e, wab'e; etc. If is hot so hard as might 
be supposed for pupi|s t« learn the spe|ling of such new 
and diffi«ult words if thesc are properly taught when first 
36 



DIFFERENT ENDINGS 37 

presented. Their very strangeness leads fo a eareful 
e\aminatiol of thcir parts. Besidcs, the pupil has nothing 
to unlearn, as ho has hot misspelled thcm himself nor has 
he secn them misspcllcd. Thc frequem-y «»f their corre«.t 
use in his oral and written utterances conditions his 
mastery of their meaning and f«Jrln. It is essential to be 
unsparing of teaching, and especially of drill, in the en- 
deavour to guard pupils against errors in homon)zns, par- 
ticularly in their composition êxercises. 

DIFFE1REN'T :E N'DI.N'G S 

There are some endings that present great difficulty 
and consequently eall for the most watchful care; for 
example, cp, sp; able, ible; ant, enl; sion, tion; or, our; 
ise, ize; etc. In some of thcse cases the tcacher can give 
considerable help ; there are, f«r instance, few words ending 
in ise, where s has the s,und of z; Lesson 7, page 144, 
in the Spellcr gives nearly all the ise (pse) forms in 
common use. Having learned thcse few form.¢, the pupil 
can take it for granted that all other verbs having this 
terminal sound are spelled with ize. With few exceptions, 
such as parlour, harbour, arbour, neighbour, armour, 
rapour, the ending our belongs fo abstract nouns and their 
related verbs--whilê or usually denotês thê agent or doêr. 
Thê droppin. of thê u from our when the suffix ous is 
added should bê brought to thê attention of thê pupils. 
As there are manv more adjeetives ending in ible than in 
able, it is .impler fo drill thoroughly on the commoner 
words having this latter endinz. The differenee in the 
meaning of the two words in sueh pairs as cornplement, 
compliment; stationer!l, stationar!t; etc., should be im- 
pressed on the memory by thorou.,:h teaching and repeated 
review. 



8 SPELLING 

ORAL VERSUS WRITTEN SPELLING 

USE OF ORAL SPELLING 

In English, pronunciation is no sure guide fo correct 
spelling, any more than spelling is a certain guide fo pro- 
nunciation. 
Assumilig that a pupil bas become skilful in oral 
spelling, to what extent will this profit him in his written 
work? We accept the principle that if is best for the 
school to train a pupil along the lines he must ïollow in 
later years. The occasions when oral spelling is needed 
are few. At best it is telling what should be donc rather 
than actually doing it. Experience shows that skill gained 
in one line of activity is never fully available in a different 
one. It should be evident, then, that ïacility in oral 
spelling will profit a pupil but little, if he is not habituated 
fo carry it over at once into the written ïorm. 

OBSERYING AND WRITINC- 
He should be taught chieflv through the eye, with the 
aid of writinz, so hat all ïorms of w«rd imagery-- 
auditor.v, vocal, or visual--may most readily and econo- 
mically find correct expression throuh the hand. Pro- 
fêssor Skêat savs: "There is now onlv one rule--a rule 
which is often carefullv but foolishly concealed ïrom the 
learner--namely, to go enirelv bv the loo]" of a word, and 
to spell it as we have seen it spelled in books ". With this 
in view, the eye should bc trained hot sinply to sec, but 
rather t« ob.erve, flxin full aênion upon the word as a 
whole and upon each le,ter in its place. The two things 
sought are (1 a perfeet pi.ure of the word as seen on 
{ho printed pae, and (?) readv ability to reproduce this 
in writing. 



PLACE OF ORAL SPELLING 39 

SEEING VERSUS IIEAIING 

It is the experience of most people that things seen arc 
remembered better than things heard. In explanation it 
may be stated that sound images are usually ver)" flccting ; 
when the letters in a word are giron orally, they ïocus 
in consciousness individually, each being rapidly rcl)laccd 
by the one ïollowing. On the other hand, when a word 
is being written, all the letters that have apl)earcd romain 
to aid the speller and fo suggest what should follw; at 
the close the who]e word is in evidencethe parts seen 
relating to each other and fo the whole. Bcsides, the 
written word may be held in ïull cnsciou.ness ïor a con- 
siderable time, thus deepening the impression. Evidcnce 
shows that deaf mutes, trusting solely to sigh t, spell better 
than the average of hcaring children. 

PLACE OF ORAL SPELLING 
Is the vocal method fo be whol/y intcrdiç.ted? If is 
hot intended fo proscribe its eml»loyment, but rather to 
limit this in keeping with it. real value. Pupils in the 
First//carier write sl«»wly and with con.idcrahle ditfi.ulty, 
so with them oral spelling may I»e u.ed more ïrcely than 
with the seniors. In all Form., it is oï value in the case 
oï words of regular notation, though these require but 
little attention. Then some persons, usually a slnall 
minority, are ear-minded rather than eve-minded, and ïor 
flmm oral spclling is needïul. If i. s«»metimes profitally 
employed in the time-honourcd spclling nmtch. Since 
varietv in mcthod is desirable, and silwe it is wcll to aid 
memory through different associations, oral spelling nmy 
be employed in all classes fo a limited extent. But, as 
comparcd with writtcn spcllinff, if sh,uhl occupy a subor- 
dinate place. It is of most service whcn use«l al,ng with 



40 SPELLING 

other methods; for example, the pupil spells the word 
aloud as he looks af it written on the board, then he writes 
if himself. Itis «,f least benefit when the pupil rnerely 
names aloud the lettcrs of a word learned by heart from 
his book. 

VALUE OF WRITI*'O IX LEAaXIXG FOl-l]fS, AXD I.'¢ TESTINO 
We should clearly realize that in fixing spelling we 
depcnd in great measure upon the training of the muscular 
sense. Every writiug of a word leax'es a motor image; 
each repetition strengthens this and renders the act easier. 
The writing of a word gives not infrequently an auditory 
as well as a visual image; for I»v many pupils the organs 
of speech are placed as they would be to pronounce the 
words, though usually no sound is uttered. There is 
greater likelihood of the words thus learned being held in 
menmry, since thcy are linked by various associations. 
The chief dependence should, therefore, be placed upon 
written work, not «mly for testing spelling, but also for 
learning it. The aire of good teaching is fo make spelling 
automatic, so that the writer may be free fo devote his 
full attention fo the thought and ifs appropriate expres- 
sion, giving little care to mere mechanical execution. 
Although this stage of automatism is never reached in 
school, if should be kept in view as directing method and 
practice. 
THE DICTATION LESSON 

ITS VALUE 

Properly taught, dictation ïosters habits of attention, 
aceuraey, and neatness. If is a good training for both 
eye and ear and, by requiring the writing of words from 
reeolleetion and usually in association, it impresses 



DICTATION: PARTICULAR AIMS 41 

spelling in the most practical way. It is one of the most 
effectual mcans for showing file teachcr the success of his 
efforts and the consequent progress of the ¢.lass. Besidcs, 
if is an excellent practice in rapid pcnman.hip al,d, at 
the saine rime, if makes pupils skilful in neatly recording 
what they hear, thus preparing them for note-taking in 
senior classes. Lastly, if affords an admirable drill in the 
mechanics of composition, as the pupils acquire the habit 
of recording Selltences iii good f,Jrm. 

PARTICULAR AI:MS 
When oral spelling yielded place fo written, the usual 
practice was to assign a list of words to be studied by the 
pupils, the subsequent class exercise merely testing the 
thoroughness of this preparation. Later, the written 
exercise was taken usuallv from a paragraph of the 
Reader, often ehosen at random. In no case was prepara- 
tion deemed necessary; the chief, if hot the only, tare of 
the teaeher was the detection of mistakes. 
To-day the best practice aires at presenting a few 
words intelligently, linking together meanil,g, sound, and 
written form ; all effort is put forth to pre ent the pupil's 
getting a wrong or an inadequate first impression, tlle 
emphasis being on instruction, hot on correction. Ail tle 
teacheffs skill is demanded for the right development and 
association of meaning and smfl»ols, and f,,r holding the 
pupil's attention fo a close scfiny of the form and fo a 
distinctive use of the words. The value of the exereise 
depends mainlv upon the infelligence and thoroughness 
of the means faken fo a,,Hcipate and prerent errors and, 
later, fo eradicate completely the mista-es ruade. In sueh 
lessons there are three well-marked divisions, namely, (1) 
preparation, (2) dicfation, (3) correction. 



45 SPELLING 

PREPARATION 
The most important of the three steps is the prepara- 
tion; for thc great business of the teacher is fo instruct 
rather than fo examine. As a rule, the chief delendence 
must be placed on the board work, the aire being to lead 
pupils to obser'e intently anà to concentrate their atten- 
tion on the diflïcult parts of each word. Some ways of 
securing this bave already been discussed. In the word 
pedlar, junior classes might be asked how many d's there 
are, what the letter after 1 is, how to spell the last syllable, 
or to point out the letter hot heard clearly. Attention 
should be called to silent letters, for example, disguise, 
castle; fo the order of the lettcrs, for example, seize, 
centre; fo doubled and non-doubled lctters, for example, 
tasselled, benefifed; and to letter groups standing for a 
single sound, for example, beauty, burlesque. 
D:vcs vo lOCt, S T'_TIO.'.--There are various 
devices for focusing attention. Sometimes the teacher, 
havinz named the word. writes it slowly and clearly, covers 
if at once from view, and requires the pupils to spell it as 
a wbole, or to tell about certain lctters. This is one of 
the best means, as it shows the word in the making and, 
later, in ifs entiretv. Af rimes, words are written in large 
hand on pieces of cardboard and exposed for a few seconds, 
tç» train pupils to vi.¢ualize quickly and accurately. Long 
words mav be broken up into sy]lab]es, first orally, hen 
on the board, asrev/o/]u/tion/aryhus rendering them 
easier fo »ras I) anti fo remember. Or thcv may be broken 
up so as fo reveal parts a]readv quite fami]iar, as, 
froli«./some, dis/couraze/ment. It is of reat service fo 
direct attention fo likenesses in words already well known ; 
for example, cornice, crevice, office. As a rule, no dia- 
critical signs should be used. The s¢ep of preparation 



DICTATION: SUITABLE MATTER 43 

should occupy, roughly spcaking, from one third fo oac 
hall of fim recitation rime. 

UITABLE MATTER 
Care should be exercised in the choice of passages. 
The subject-matter should be suitable--the thoughts and 
the language within the grasp of the pupils, with no pcr- 
plexities but those of spelling. Should a suitable passae 
present some difficulties of word or phrase, these ought 
to be explained in the preparatory wor pri«,r to the 
dictating. Beginning with the Senior Second class, suit- 
able oelections of poetry mav be used occasionally, but it 
is best that most lessons should be prose. Thc passage 
should not be long, else the "giving out" will o«'cupy too 
much rime. ]t is desirablc that the proporti-n of difficult 
words should I,e rclativclv large, for thcre is a wa.¢te of 
rime and energy in writing sentences where hut one word 
in tire or six offers any real diffi.ulty. In trans-ription 
and in composition the easv w,,rds occur very oftçn, as 
they do also in dictation. 
Pos o E ousVD.When di,-tatin a passae, 
the position of the teacher should chai,le him to keep the 
whole class clearlv in view and to be lward easilv by everv 
pupil. If somewhat long and unfamiliar, the passage 
should be read throuzh before pupils are asked fo repro- 
duce if. It should be iven out in short phrases, at sue 
speed as will permit of good penmanship, yct without 
wasting time. YounZ tea,.hers are strongly advised 
fo mark in their books a division of lonz, complex pasages 
into phrases of suitablo h.nh. Thus: " The instructed 
classe are quite conseiou/that the prozess of their race/ 
depends on the prompt destruction/ of the ('hinese wall/ 
of prejudice and exclusivencs./ Thcy desire fo shake off/ 



44 SPELLING 

the stifling load of traditions/ which thrcatens fo ehoke/ 
their natural dcvelopmcnt'. 
The tcaeher sbould rcad in a natural tone, not dis- 
t«,rtiJg word.¢ fo aid spelling, but speaking so elearly that 
every one ean readily catch every sound. Distinctness of 
enuneiation is of the highest importance, for there should 
be no douht as to whethêr the word is prints or prince; 
affect or effect; glulbwus or glutlonous, etc. The phrases 
should be given out only once, as this trains pupils to 
listen attêntively and d¢c. hot disturb those who are 
writing. Words n¢»t eaught at this reading should be 
«,mitted, and the blanks should be filled in when the piece 
is read aftcrward fr review. 

DF.TF.CTm:," OF 5s_:F.s.The deteetion by the 
• tea,'her of mistakes, whether or not sound iii theory, is 
usuallv n,t practieable with large classes. It takes too 
nmch time fo allow of ifs being done during school hours, 
and it is hot fair fo expect the teacher % do if after hours 
as a rule. Neither is it expedient t,» intru.¢t this work fo 
nmnitors. It is a hurdensome ta.¢k, which, simply through 
fatigue, thev mav do carelessl: besides it is of little or no 
benefit fo them, and often a positive detrimênt. Two other 
plans remain f,r crnsiderationself-d,:4ection, and inter- 
detection. Bv the flrst0 each pupil notes his own errors. 
To this there is the objection that if offers too great a 
temptation fo dishonestv: mistakes are intentirnally passed 
over or else marked so faintly as to eseape the teacher's 
notice. 
The serious objections fo detection by fellow pupils 
are : 
1. If leads fo collusion between pupils to mark each 
other's work lcniently. 



DICTATION : MISTAKES 45 

2. It causes disputes, bad feelinz, etc. Pupils chal- 
lenge the markings by a fellow pupil, when they would 
hot those by the teacher. 
3. It tends to unsettle pupils' slJelling, by compelling 
observation of mistakes ruade by others. 
Which is preferalde? Undoubtedly it is best to have 
selï-criticism the fuie, f.llowing the axiom that real cor- 
rection of one's errors tan corne only from one's self. The 
first step toward improvement is te» know clearly what is 
wrong, and the second, fo ïeel interêst in setting this rigbt. 
Though no one detects his own Inistakcs so readily as does 
another, 3"et the s«hool slmuld train pupils fo do this 
systêmatically and honêstly. Then if should be remem- 
berêd that a mêre oversight is no evidênce of decêption. 
To allege that, êven under the têacher's supervision, pupils 
cannot be trusted t. mark thcir own errors honestly, 
elearly proves, if true, that the moral tone of the sehool 
demands attention. It might indicate also, that the 
teaeher's attitude toward poor spêllers is hot wiselv svm- 
pathetic. Logieally in this, as in other work, tbe learner 
should finish lais task by criticising his own performance, 
as the neêdful condition for improvemênt. 
Yet for variêty, some tea«hers deêm it dêsirable 
oeeasionallv fo have fellow pupils mark the exercisês. By 
varying the ordêr of chanzinzbooks and by a riid exana- 
ination of ail marking, some evils of this system tan be 
zarded aainst" but if is hot one fo be recommênded. 
Certain pupils are particularly sensitive to the mistakês 
of others, as these mav corne fo their notice. But for all 
if is suftïciently sêrious fo fiave fo scrutinize one's own 
êrrors, without bêing rêquirêd fo inspêet tbose of othêrs. 
To ruard aainst possible evils, the teacher should examine 
carefully some of the xwritten exercises in each lesson, 



46 SPELLING 

since this will impress pupils with the importance of their 
doing their work with the greatest eare. 

SELF-DETECTION OF :MISTAKES 
The usual method of enabling pupils to find out their 
mistakes is for the tcacher, or at rimes, a pupil, fo spell 
aloud the wholc passage or, at least, the ditticult words. 
There arc, howerer, grave objections to this procedure. 
By it the appeal is ruade, hot to the eye, but to the ear, 
conscqucntly thc risual image is hot revived and strength- 
encd. It is easy for the pupil to be deceived as fo the 
teacher's oral spelling; cither the sounds are indistinct 
or clse his attention is wandering at the instant. Be- 
sicles, it is nearlv impossible fo hold all fo the same rate 
of speed. If the spclling is giren out slowly, the quickcr 
pupils get ahead of the readcr; if thc readcr hastcns 
his pace, the slow pupils are lcft behind ad cannot girc 
proper attention fo thc work. In thc junior Forms thcre 
is the ïurther objection that pupils become conïused by 
haring fo attend af the saine rime fo the teacher's spelling 
and fo the examination of the written work. 
B-" TIIE EYE OR T|IE E.tr,.--Vsually the cye alone should 
be the meas of dete«-ting mistakes. If the sentences are 
taken ïrom the Text-book, the pupils should compare their 
writtcn work witb the prittcd c.rercise. If hot taken from 
the book, the passage should have beon written on the 
board previous fo the lcsson and kept hidden by a curtain. 
When this is draw asJde, the pupils correct as before. 
,qince the true spelling is thus kept belote their rni»ds 
long enou,zh to allow of careful comparison, there tan be 
no doubt as to what the right spelling is, and each pupil 
moves along at his natural rate. Besicles, by this plan 
the work is done without disturbance to others, and if 



INDICATING MISTAKES 47 

allows the teacher to pass around fo note how well the 
pupils are attcnding fo if, and fo aid or direct them when 
necessary. 
PIIACTICE IN DISCOVERING AND CORRECTING 5IIS- 
TaKEs.--Whcn an error made by one pupil in oral spelling 
bas been correctcd by another, it is s,Jmetimes ïnund that 
the first pupil is unable to tell what is wrong in his spe]ling 
or which part is wrong. Even when, on a second attempt, 
he sets himself right, ho may hot know how this differed 
ïrom his first attcmpt. Similarly, whcn words are nais- 
spelled il, writing, solne pupils cannot readily point out 
ïaults, even with the correct form in sight. The diffi- 
culty may arise from their regarding words as wholes-- 
the desirahle rcading 1)ractice--rather than examining 
their parts, as required for spelling. Such pupils are 
likely to bc weak in spclling and, therefore, necd consider- 
able practice, under the teacher's guidance, in detecting 
and correcting their mistakes. 

tIOW II.qTAKES :MAY BE INDICATED 

A simple and uniform plan of indicating mi.¢takes 
should be folhJwed. Assuming tlmt the di'tation has becn 
written in ink, it secnls best fo have mistakes marked in 
peneil, so that there ma S be less temptation fo alter any 
words. Espceially is this desirable if the exereise is 
marked while the teaeher is eondueting another reeitation. 
N.ax.ss.--Dietation books should hot become dis- 
figured through carelessness, nor should misspelled words 
be obseured, lest dispute arises as to the eorreetness of the 
marking. The simplest mode is fo drav a line underneath 
the wrong lctters of the word; for example, devisable, 
eenter, etc., etc. Then the eye readily deteets the error. 



48 SPELLING 

A tarer may show the omis«ion of a leller and a cro.q. the 
omi.qsiot of a word, while a light line drau'n tlrou9h a 
letler indicatcs wrot, g capilalization. The total number 
«,f nistakês should be êntered by the pupil in ink af the 
foot «,f each exercise. Each correction should be writtên 
ncatly in thc martin one or more rimes. The last two 
or threê pages of the dictation book should be kept for 
lists of words misspelIed, whi«.h may be ênterêd each weêk. 

CORRECTION OF MISTAKES 

There still remains a most important stepthe cor- 
rection of mistakes. Ifs purpose is to prevent the repeti- 
ti,,n ,,f these, and this is to he effccted through the gradual 
effaccment of wrong impressions aJld the substitution of 
t.orret.t word images. Frequently, the methods used failed 
t,, secure this economically. Ordinarily, the correction 
was left fo the pupil himself; sometines he was directed 
to study the words again, but often he was required fo 
rcwrite them correcfly, perhaps ten, fiftee, or even twenty 
times. Usuallv the pupil who failed in his effort fo spell 
the word, failed equaHy in hi. attempt to study it unaided. 
IIe night repeat the letters orally or, looking at the word, 
he might copy if mechanically. Nor did frequent re- 
writing overcome his diflï«ultv. In itself the task was 
monotonous, even irksome, and donc with no motive except 
fo obey. It was more an exercise in penmanship than in 
spelling; nor was the copyig always d«»e correctly. 
IrWT'-X* WORDs.--The expectation of securing per- 
fect correction of crrors shoud be based on the general 
laws of hahit formation, namely, (1  iitial concentration 
of attention on the pro«ess to be a,'quired, and (2) atten- 
tive repetition continued until some de'ree of automatic 
control has been approxinated. But usualy this remedial 



CAUSES OF MISTAKES 49 

drill is not carried on with suflïcient interest and atten- 
tion nor eontinued long enough to secure the desired result. 
UMBER OF REPETITIONS.--It is hot best fo have the 
misspelled words written many rimes af one sitting. Better 
results follow when they are copied carefully hot more 
than four or rive rimes immediately after the recitation, 
then two or three tines after a lai)se of a few days. and 
again at ever-widening intervals of a week, a fortni,dht, 
and a month. If detached words are fo be copied, the 
whole list should be written once, then a second rime, and 
so on. By this plan the pupil is forced to pay due atten- 
tion fo the word every rime ho writes it. 

CAUSES OF MI.'qTAKES 
Improvement in the methods of correction have arisen 
from an inquiry into the causes of pupils' mistakes. Fre- 
quently it was found that individuals in the class mad 
different errors in the same words, or else, when their 
mistakes were alike, they arose from different causes. It 
was clear, also, that the correction of old words frequently 
misspelled presented a very different problem from that 
of new words missed ïor the first time. In the latter case, 
progress is more rapid, as no fixed habit has to be over- 
()me. The initial step in successful correction is to study 
the weakness of individual pupils; one makes mistakes 
through sheer carelessness, another has defective sight or 
hearing, and a third is misled by faultv pronunciation, 
while yet another bas failed fo study lais word forms. 
Knowing the cause of the errors, the teacher is in a posi- 
tion fo app]y, in the particular cases, appropriate and 
effective remedies. But experience will clearlv show that, 
while words may, through methods rightly varied, be 
taught fo a whole class, correction, to be effective, must be 
individual. 
17 



o SPELLING 

PERSISTENCE NECESSAY.--lmprovcment in spelling, 
to be permanent, requires time. Af first, the pupil may 
have the corrected word right in his spelling but "a'rong 
in his composition, where, on account of the complexity 
of the proeess, he is lcss on guard as fo word forms. In 
the second stage, the spelling of the word in his own 
written work is hot uniform--at iïrst if is correct usually, 
yet at rimes there is a rctur fo the incorrect form. 
Finally, as a result of persi.tent eff,rts af improvcment, 
the right f«rm bccomes firmly establishcd--the eorre(.t 
spclling bas beeome a fixcd, unvarying habit. Tcachers 
.hould cxpcct their pupil. fo pass through tbese various 
stages in the proccss of rcplacing a habit of incorrect or 
variable spclling hy one unifi»rmly correct. Xo complete 
nnd permanent rcform of errors can be effeeted without 
persistent effort. 
ISOLATED OR i:q SENTENCES.--AS a rule, it is hot best 
to bave words copied as isolatcd uni[s; thcir incorporation 
into suitable scntences relieves excessive monotony and 
indicates gra.p of meaning. This has the further ad- 
vantage of showing the pupil the value of his work done 
now under «,nditions similar fo those which will confront 
him whcn writing his regular compositions. We must 
never assume that ability fo deal with certain aspects of 
words in isolation implies equal ability fo deal with those 
words in complex relationship. Attention and interest 
are prime factors in fixing memory associations, and un- 
less these be secured, the mere mechanical practice will 
prove futile. 
PER]IANENT RETEX'TION.-Tests taken immediately 
after the intensive study of a few words give no certainty 
that these words have been so mastered as to need no 
further attention. Such a test affords a juster êstimate of 



DICTATION: MISTAKES 51 

the pupils' ability to receive than of their power fo retain. 
There fs a fair possibility of error even whcn thc first 
trial has bcen successful; certain pupils are found to spell 
well in class, but hot eloewherc. In all lcarning, the 
fading or forgctting process starts immediatcly and fs 
rclativcly rapid in the first two or thrce days. Words rc- 
tained bcyond the first two or three wceks are likely fo be 
held permancntly. Therefore, reviews should start soon 
after thc initial lcarning and should be kcpt up regularly 
and persistently. As immediate recall does hot necessarily 
imply permancnt rctcntio, the scho«d must aire to scoute 
the latter ability through suitable drills and reviews with 
proper rime intervals. 
PnEVE.XTIO.X, XOT CUE.--All experienced teachers are 
familiar with the marked tcndcncy of sp«.lling errors fo 
persist despite strong efforts fo suppress them. This may 
be illustrated by the record of a weak speller on words 
taught in small groups, then tested and retaught after 
each trial, four trials in all being given. The following 
fs a record of errors ruade in a list of fifty-eight words: 
17 words wrong twice, 5 in the saine way, 12 in other ways. 
9 words wrong three rimes, 4 in the saine way, 5 in other ways. 
9 words wrong four rimes, 5 in the saine way, 4 in other wayz. 

As a rule, it is the first nfisspelling that recurs: its 
repetition shows that the tendency is to do again what has 
once been donc, because this is known. Accordingly in 
spelling, the teacher's ehief concern should be to use all 
means to prevent any initial mistake. A few repetitions 
cf the correct form during the learning process far out- 
weigh many drills after a mistake has been ruade. Herc 
there is literal application of the adage, "An ounce of 
prevention is worth a pound of cure" 



52 SPELLING 

WHAT TIIE PERCENTAGE OF ERRORS INDICATFS.--:In 
suitable lessons, it may be expected that the daily test will 
show some light percentage of error--their complete 
ab.ence indieating that those particu|ar lessons are too 
easy for the cla.s. On the other hand, if the errors aver- 
ac, say, twenty-five per cent. of thc liard words dictated, 
it may be takcn for granted eithcr that the words are too 
difficult or too numcrous, or else that the teaching is hot 
effective. I t is well known that there are wide variations 
as fo thc results in different (.lasses and with different 
pupils in the saine clas.. But if is highly desirable that 
no teaeher should rest content with a lo standard in this 
sul,ject. The pupils, as a body and as individual.% should 
develop a spirit of pride in doing their best fo have every 
written exercise perfeet. 

ERRORS: CAUSES, KINDS 

DEFECTIVE SIG}IT OR HEARING 
The correct reproduction of dictated words presup- 
poses hot only unimpaircd, but even keen and discrimin- 
ating, sight and hearing. In one or in both of these senses 
a certain proportion of children are defective on entering 
school or else become so during their school course. 
Though the results of investigations differ greatly, tests 
in thousands of schools show that from ten fo thirty per 
cent. of the pupils have some defect of hearing in one or 
both ears. It is desirable for the teacher fo know the con- 
dition of the pupil's hearing, as this has an important 
bearing on ail school work. 
TESTS OF SIGYIT AND H.t.G.Without waiting for 
any regular medical examination, a teacher can rcadily 
find out whcther or hot the cause of apparent dulness in 



ERRORS: CAUSES, KINDS 5B 

some of his pupils is defective sight or hearing. 
should know whether his black-board writing can be read 
easily by every pupil and all his words caught clearly 
during teaching. For this purpose, each pupil, plaeed af 
the rear of the room, should be required fo read from the 
board, and to write from dictation short tests of unre- 
lated words. To make thcse tests of any value the teacher 
should be careful fo speak in his ordinary tone, with no 
greater distinctness than he uses when teaching, and his 
writing should be in his usual style and size. Pupils 
failing in such a test should be given faroural,le positions 
in the room, so that they can sec the board work clearly 
and readily catch the teacher's words. The test is com- 
monly necessar'; for frequently ehildren are unaware of 
these defects or else they try fo conceal them. If may also 
lead the teacher to improve in his board writing and in 
distinctness of utterance. When serious defe.ts are thus 
discovered, the pupil's parents should be notified without 
delay and advised fo consult a physician. 

:BIISTAKES DUE TO EXCITE2IENT OR FATIGUE 
We are all familiar with tle disturbances fo speech 
resulting in defective recall or in the misuse of words-- 
"slips of the tongue "--due in large measure to mental 
or physical fatigue, or fo excitement Since the speech 
habit, so firmly established, becomes disarranged in this 
way or through absentmindedness, we may readily suppose 
fhat if is much casier fo disturb the writing habit. This 
form of acfi'ity, not b%«un before rive or six years of ae, 
is the least stable and the most liable fo functional dis- 
turbance. Slips of the pen are more ïrequent than slips 



54 SPELLING 

of the tongue; the mind runs in advance of the pen, and 
thus the last part of a word may be droppcd. Much prac- 
ticc ia sentence writing, with carcful re-reading by the 
pupil will tend fo remedy this. In marking e.xercises we 
might well distinish between mere slips and those mis- 
takes due fo real ignorance. 

UNFA¥OURABLE CONDITIONS 

If should be evident then that if is hOt wise fo teach 
or test spelling whcn pupils are labouring under nervous- 
ness or excitcment or when they are much fatied either 
mentally or 1,hysically. Hence unfavourable hours on the 
daily progranme would bc those just after energetic play 
or physical exercise, or late in the morning or the after- 
noon session. Lip movements, if not audible sounds, as 
an accompaniment of writinz, are habitual with young 
pupils. Gradua]ly they will grow out of these practices. 
but the prohibition of such movements is offert responsible 
fr disastrous results in spelling. 

LACE OF CO.NT1ROL OVER THE WRITING PROCESS 

Tests on an extensive seale indicate that about one half 
the errors ruade in spelling are due fo lack of control over 
the writinz process--to what is called motor-inco- 
ordination. These errors assume variou. forms: the 
omission or the a«]dition of letters (groces, faible), their 
change or transpo.ition (trumh, voilets), the doubling of 
the wr«n z lettcr (beff, croo.Q, etc. When the pupil recog- 
nizes his mistakes anti is ahlc fo correct them unaided, if 
is plain that, with zreater power over writing, he will 
steadi]y overc«me the i«,d«,cy fo su«.h errors. To this 
end, the ,.bief care of t]w tcacher should be fo secure 



ERRORS: CAUSES, KINDS 55 

absolute accuracy in seat transcription along with greater 
facility in pcnmanship. 

FALSE ANALOGIES 

Children who are strongly ear-minded arc apt fo be 
misled by assumin, that words which apparcntly souml 
alike are spelled alike. Such analogies are a prolific source 
of misspelling. This may be illustrated by suc.h forms as 
dismaid (dismayed), offull (awful), diswadc (dissuade), 
etc. In most of these cases, little thought is given fo 
meaning; the mere sound is the dominating fa,.tor. As 
the pupil grows more thoughtful in regard fo his lan- 
guage, such errors are likely fo decrca.¢e rather rapi«lly; 
but most young pupils need fo be warned aainst attempts 
fo determine the spelling of an unknown word through 
some fancied resemblance fo a known one. 

DEFECTS IN SENSE I.XIPRES.qlONS 

Many errors arise from defects in sense impressions; 
either the associations for the lctters and their proper 
sequence were wrongly formed, or, if rightIy formed, were 
later forgotten or changed from their correct ordcr. 
Undcr this hcad corne attempts to spell irregular words 
by phonetic analogies, and error,¢ that arise ïrom faulty 
punetuation, for example, Wensday, ehimh.v. But a more 
fruitfu] cause of errors is fc,und in word. whose sounds 
may be represented by different ]etter eombinations, for 
example, ie, ci; tion, sion; able. ible; etc. Errors of this 
kind are hot so readily noticed or eorreeted by the pupil 
himself; the only remedv seems fo be more intelliffnt 
teaching, closer observation of the word forms, and abun- 
dant written dri]l. 



56 SPELLING 

The following conclusions have been îalrly well estab- 
lished with regard to naturally bad spellers: 
1. Many of them surfer from deective sight, sorne frorn 
defective hearing. 
2. The causes which have operated fo impair their sight 
or hearing bave ïrequently irnpaired their retentive power. 
3. Sornctirnes this is due in part to defective powers 
of attention, which prcvent carcïul observation during the 
teaching, or direct thought away from the forrn of the 
written word. 
If is well known both by cornmon experience and 
through carcful observation that with regular practice 
stenography, typewriting, or telegraphy will steadily irn- 
prove till a certain naximurn point is reached; but any 
rnarked irnprovcment beyond this can be secured only by 
increasing the practice inordiuately. Spelling is, like 
these other activities, a sensori-rnotor function, to the im- 
proverneat of which reading and writing contribute. By 
wise teaching and thorough correction we attain our 
rnaxinmrn proficiency therein. Irnprovernent beyond this 
point can be secured only at such an expense of tirne and 
work as fo he a]rnost pr«)hibitory. There will never corne 
a rime when pupils in elementarv schools will make no 
rnistakes in spellinz. Yet everv effort should be put forth 
fo secure fau]t]e.¢s spe]]ing. The estal»lishnlent of the 
es.ential habits «,f takin. pains «'an corne onlv through the 
tea,.her's insistence that all .¢choo] exercises sha]l show care 
and thought. Success in this marier demands rare tact 
and perseverance, Z««d disciplinary contre,l, an(] a thorough 
grasp of the diiîï,.u]ties. The great differences found in 
classes are owing, hot so mud fo the rnethod of teaching 
the subje,.t, as t« the effe«tiveness of administration, due fo 
the tea«her',¢ personality. 



CHAPTER VII 

AIDS IN SPELLING 

TRANSCRIPTION 
THIS is one of the best ways of teac.hing spelling fo 
beginners, especially in the case of irrcgular word.. As 
the pupil copies the words, he notes each of the letters 
carefully and their due order in the word. It is highly 
important that before commencing fo write he should 
observe the whole word. not a few lettcrs only, and that 
he should habitually associate meaning with tortu. During 
the slow process of copying, the eye is fixed continuously 
on the letters, and 'igilat co»parison of the copy with 
the original tends fo make the impression permanent. The 
very slowness of the pupil's writing is an advantage, as if 
not only concentrates attention, but prolongs if. Nor is 
the exercise an easy one. Perfect accuracv in spelling, 
clear writing, and becoming neatness should be required. 
Therefore considerable practice is neces.¢ary, along with 
unfailing, thorough supervision; fur carelcss work will be 
harmful instead of beneficial. 
PROGP, ESSIVE STEPS.--Gradually the pupils should form 
the habit of keeping in mind not a single word but a 
whole phrase, and refraining from looking af the printed 
page during the writing of such a group. The power fo 
retain a sentence will be of service in dictation and com- 
position. The copy should be a perfect transcription of the 
passage, hot onlv as fo spelling proper, but also as fo 
capitals, punctuation, paragraphs, etc. This exercise is of 
greatest value in the junior Furms and, rightly done, if 
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58 SPELLING 

forms an excellent preparation for dictation later on. 
is usual fo assign a passage ïrom the last reading lesson, 
since ifs meaning is known and if is usually of interest. 
But the rime given fo this work should hot be too long; 
about fiïteen to twenty minutes should be the limit 
junior Forms, though the exereise mav be taken two or 
three rimes a day. In higher Forms, passages for trans- 
cription might well be chosen, hot simply for their spelling 
diflïculties, but also for their value of thought or beauty 
of expression. 

WORD BUILDING 

By this is meant the addition of prefixes or suffes to 
the stem to make new word forms, with some change in 
meaning. ]t helps to impress upon the pupil the preval- 
ente of law and order in spelling, especially when, through 
suttMent examples, one type of formation is fixed beïore 
another is presented. When systematieally carried out, it 
is of considerable value in extending the pupil's vocabulary. 
In additio, if forms the natural approach to derivation 
which is fo be taken up in Form IV. Usual]y if is of 
interest fo the pupil, largely because if makes greater 
demands upon him than the mere reproduction of forms 
already studied. The new words are now of his own 
making, and this gives him a sense of power that mere 
copying eould hot impart. 
The earlier exercises permit of additions being ruade 
fo the stem without change. Later exercises show the 
chan.es ruade in larger classes of words, for example, 
reply, replies; figer, tioTess; anle, angular; permit, per- 
mission; exclaim, exclamation: decent, deeency: etc. The 
ehanes in meanin thus effe«.ted s]mu]«] l,e ruade elear, 
chiefly through illustrations on the board. Exercises of 



RULES FOR SPELLING 59 

this kind are given for the various grades, in the Text- 
book; additional ones may be provided by thc tcacher. 

RULES FOR SPELLING 

In recent years, spelling rules have received but scant 
attention in most schools and, as a result, few people have 
any useful guide in unexpected difficulties. The purp,,se 
of the rules is to sure up and properly formulate the 
pupil's experience, that he may apply it indêpcndcntly in 
new situations. In reality itis hot a questio, of rules or 
no rules ; for every one who does not spelI by more chance 
ïollows some rule, even though he has ,lot given it verbal 
expression. There is no greater difi]culty in learning rules 
in spelling than rulcs in grammar or arithmetic, and no 
greater objection from the pedagogical point of view. 
There are but rive or six important rulcs fo be rcmem- 
bered ; the exceptions are but few, while the ge,rural prin- 
ciples apply to thousa,,ds of cases. In the O,,htrio Ptblic 
8chool Speller the arrangement of the lcssons a,ld of sent 
exercises is intended fo lead naturally and logically to a 
knowledge of thcse rules. The pupils should be given 
abundant practice on varied examples that illustrate each 
rule. Then, after their attention has been directed by 
suitable board teaching to what is common in the examples, 
they should be able fo make their gencralization. The 
formulation of the rule shou|,l be given first in the pupils' 
own words, and then mç, dified as fo w«,r,]ing if necessary. 
After the rules bave been thus learned inductivcly, the 
pupils should have frcquent praçtice in applying them 
deductively. To st(,p with c«,mmitting the ruh.s fo memory 
would be a serious mistake; f«,r the generalization is of 
value only as it is madc permanent bv many and varied 
applications. Indeed it can be affirmed that rules in 



60 SPELLING 

spelling as in grammar are of the greatest service only 
whcn th,y are no longer needed in daily use--when the 
prineiple is so well undcrstood and has been so frequently 
pplied that if no 1,»nger consciously restricts one's 
freedom. 
SYLL.a_BIC.a_T IO N 
One of the serious ditticulties experienced by young 
pupils in learning is their inability t anal)'se words into 
thcir sound clements. Usually the division of his speech 
into scparate words is first brought home to the pupil 
when, in beginning to read, he secs the parts separated on 
the board and in his book. Not only in childhood but 
practit'ally throughout life, the spoken sounds have in- 
fluence in spclling, whcther oral or written. When a 
young pupil attempts t toaster the spclling of a long but 
mfamiliar wrd, there is likelihood of his becoming con- 
fused v account of the number of letters to be given 
rightly and in due order, witl no support, no part finished, 
until the end of the word is reached. The older form of 
oral spelling often required a pupil fo spell and to pro- 
nounce each syllable as coml-lete in itself, and this ruade 
thc anal)'sis too pronounced. But without going so far 
as this, if seenls reasonable to give the pupil such legitimate 
assistance as cornes from recognizing syllable division and 
mastering these in due succession. 
If in lêarning a long word, for example, dictionary, he 
makes, from ]a«k of know|edge, breaks or divisions as 
f,llows, d-ic-tio-nar-y, he will evidently be greatly ham- 
percd therehy. At tïrst the teacher should help him fo 
analyse a word by pronouncing it ft»r him slowlv and 
clearly, but without altering the sounds. Then the 10upil 
should repeat if. But very soon the responsibility for 
analysing must be thrown upon the pupil, wh,) is required 



THE DICTIONARY 61 

to give each syllable plainly, stressing each if needful, 
until ail have distinctncss and individuality in ]ris mind. 
The danger to guard against is thc giving of a wrong 
sound fo some lcttcrs, espccially to those whi«h arc slurrcd 
in the word. In mucilage, for exalnplc, t]le a bas the valuc 
of short i, and this correct sound should bc retailmd in the 
syllable division, otherwise thc pupil will bc led to mis- 
pronounce the word. tic must al,preciatc the fa«t that 
here the sound is softened down, and he should he given 
other words to illustrate this. This separation ,f words 
into their sound eh.ments is hot an easy marrer, but it aids 
good enunciation and is of mm'h help in the spelling of 
regular words. 
THE DICTIONARY 
In connection with this and other departments of lan- 
guage, if is of great importance to train pupils to use the 
dictionary intelligently and habitual]y. Lacking ability 
to interpret if or practice in consulting if regularly, the 
pupil is greatly handi«apped in making improvement in 
spelling or language, when left to his own resources. Tests 
show that some pupils, even in Form IV, find the dic- 
tionary practicall), a sealed book. 
SI:fPLEST PVRPOSE.--The simplest purpose fç.r which 
a dictionary is used is to dctermine spelling, and instruc- 
tion in this may be given in the Senior Second class. 
is essential, of course, that the letters be known in their 
alphabetical succession, so that pupils can give unhesifat- 
ingly the relative order of su«.h ]offers as 1, n, p, etc. They 
should be exercised in telling in what consecutive order 
words beginning with pl. pr. peg, pel, efc., may be found. 
They should be required fo find quickly in the dictionary 
various words with whose spelling they are familiar. After- 



62 SPELLING 

ward thcy may be traincd in finding words about the 
spelling of which they may be in doubt. The meaning of 
the guide words at the head oï the page should be ex- 
plained; contests for spccd in finding words afford a good 
drill. In nmny one-volume dictionaries, ail derivatives 
from one root word are grouped together, hot given in 
strict alphabetical ordcr. 

DEFINITIONS.--The many definitions, differing often 
but slightly, arc puzzling fo pupils. The starting-point is 
thc context in which occurs the word whose meaning is 
sought. Careful trainiag is needed fo enable thcm fo sec 
which of flacsc various meanings is most fitting. For this 
purpose frcqucnt but short exercises are best. When 
pupils bave gained some skill in this, they should bave 
pra«.tice in rcwritbg scntt.n«es and substituting appro- 
priate terres for those indicated by the teacher. He should 
work along with the pupils in the beginning, else mucb 
of their efforts will be fruitless. They should clearly 
rcalize that words have dcfinite meaninzs only as they arc 
uscd with othcrs in expressing th«,ght, that it is their 
contcxual rclations and n«t their formal definitions that 
will bcst rcveal their meanings. Itis chiefly through wide 
and thoughtful rcading that the meaning of words is 
revealed. 

Porvsc'o'.---The use of the dictionary for deter- 
rnining pronunciation may be begun in the Senior Third 
elass. As a preliminary step, the car should be trained to 
distinguish the various sounds of the vowels and con- 
sonants, to note the several syllal»les and tell which re- 
ceives the accent. The key words and the diacritical 
marks employed in the dictionary should be shown on the 
board and their uses illustrated. The uses of phonetic 



THE DICTIONARY 63 

spelling and of primary and secondary accents fo indicate 
pronunciation must be taught. This is a much more 
difficult exercise than the finding of the spelling and will 
need explicit instruction and frequent practice. The 
senior classcs should be taught how fo interpret thê abbre- 
viations used and how fo decide on the preferred spelling 
when various forms are given. 
IISTOR¥ OF WOIIDS.--In thc Senior Fourth or perhaps 
Fifth Form, 1)upils might bc shown iii what ordcr the 
various meanings of words come--whethcr thc earliest or 
the present-day meaning is first. Whcn the deri'ation 
given in the dictionary is specially hclpful in making the 
neaning clcar, if may be taught in thcse Forms. Mu«.h 
valuable information is usually containcd in the appcndix-- 
lists of geogral»hical, historical, and biblical names, foreign 
words and phrascs, lists of abbreviations and contractions 
and, af rimes, noted namcs of fiction and mythology. While 
these are of less importance than the meaning, spelling, 
and pronunciation of words, yet the pupils should be ruade 
aware of what can be found in a di«tionary. Frequently 
the dictionary is the only book of reference that pupils 
bave; they should thcrcfore be taught how fo use if fo the 
greatest advantage. 
ILLUSTRATED 5IEANINGS.--In larger dictionaries, not 
only are defifitions given at grcater lenh and therefore 
ruade more clear and precise, but they are accompanied by 
quotations illustrating their various significations. This 
is the feature that makes the larger dictionaries of so 
much greater worth, and if is therefore one of the im- 
portant matters fo which the teacher should direct the 
attention of the pupils. 



{]4 SPELLING 

DERIVATION 
As word building enables the pupil through the employ- 
ment of prefixes and suftïxes te construct new w»rds frein 
familiar stores, se word analysis, or dcrivation, aims at 
the separation of words into tbeir original parts, tbe better 
te undcrstaJd their meaning. The literal significance of 
the terre itsclf is the tracing back as of a stream te ifs 
source. A generation ago dcrivation was commonly taugbt 
in connection with spelling. If was thon valued largely 
f«)r the direct aid it was supposed te, give te this suhject. 
But, sim.e if bas l»een f,,und tbat its direct aid in enabling 
the pupiI te place thc right ]ctters of a word in their due 
or(ler is net great, the subjcct has received much less 
attention. 
AD Te SPELLL','.--Dcrivation does, however, aid 
.pclling in two ways. First, itis of direct hclp in spelling 
certain w«rds: antidote, antecedent, homicide, dilapidate, 
privilege, aquedu,.t (net acq.) are examples showing that 
a knowledge of derivation tends te guard one a.gainst 
errors. Yet thi. al,me is net imp[»rtant enough te justify 
the teaching <,f derivation. Secon(lly, dcrivation assists 
pupils te arrive independently af approximate meanings 
of words, and this is ifs chier value. But this exercise 
sh,»uld never he expected te take the place of regular dic- 
tionary research. 
AID TO lIEnh'IN(.--It is net implied tbat in most cases 
the prcsent meaning of words can easilv and accurately 
be obtained from their analysis. In many cases all that 
can be se got is an approximation, a basic conception of 
the present meaning. Yet this, taken in connection with 
an illuminating context, is offert suflïcient te afford a 
fairly accurate idea of meaning where other help is net 
available. " But while it is quite truc that words will 



DERIVATION 65 

often ride ver), s]a«k]y af anchor on their etymologies, will 
be borne hither and thither by the shifting rides and 
currents of usage, yct are they for the most part still 
holden by thcm. Vcry fcw bave broken away and drifttJd 
from their moorings altogether. A 'novelist' or writer 
of nev talcs in the present day, is very differcnt from a 
'novelist' or upho]der of new theories in p,»litics and re- 
ligion two hundrcd ycars ago; yct tbe idea of newness is 
common fo them I)oth. A 'naturalist' was once a denier 
of revealed truth, of any natural religion; he is now ail 
investigator, oftcn a devout one, of nature an,1 of her 
laws; )'et the word bas rcmained truc fo ifs etymology all 
the while. 'Ecstasy' (being out of one's senses) was 
madness, it is now intense delight; Imt it.has in no wise 
therel)y broken with the meaning from which if started, 
since if is thc nature alike of ma,|ness and of joy fo sct 
men out of and beside themselves." 
INTEREST IN" TItE LIFE-YII.TORY OF WOD.%--It would 
be a serious mistake to treat this subject in a dr)', unin- 
teresting way, making no denmnd upon the pupil other 
than a sheer effort of verbal mem,ry. ('omposition and 
]iterature, which rcquire the precise signification of terres, 
offer the best opportunities for awakening a desire fo 
learn something about the life-history of somc well-known 
words. Through a simple study of the original and thc 
present meanings of such words as trh'al, calculate, di.,as- 
trous, volume, he_athen, hnnàkerchief, the class will learn 
that etyanology mav be intcrestin. and illuminating. Aftor 
interest in this subject has thus been aroused, the analvsis 
rnay be taken up systematiea]ly. Duo preparati.n fr this 
has been ruade in the OEext-book through the sertes of 
word-building exercises, and new, in the Senior Fourth 
class, one lesson a week in derivation may be taken. 
18 o.s. 



66 SPELLING 

ORDER OF TEACtIING 
Probably it is best fo bêgin with the prefixes and 
sulïïxes, takin first those of Englih origin, as their force 
is more easily understood. The would ï«»llow the more 
commvn ones of Latin origin, and afterward a few of 
;reek. Thesê modifiers should be studied belote the roots, 
heeaue thêy enter so generally into the composition of 
words that their meaning is necessary to the understanding 
of most derivatives. 

:METHODS 

There are two wa's of dealing with this subjeet. Com- 
monly, pupils have been required to learn by heart the 
nmaning of the affixes and roots along with a ïew deriva- 
tions ïrom each stem. The later and eidently better 
mctlmd, at least in the beginning, is to place on the board 
several examples showing the saine prefix, suffix, or roof, 
and through comparison of ïorm and meaning, fo lead the 
pupils to identifv those ïorms that are common and fo 
inïer their force. Then other illustrations are supplied fo 
test the pupil's ability to use the -knowledge thus gained. 

PREFIXES 
compress Irepay submerge «ntichrist 
combine preeede subtrahend antislavery 
e6mingle predict subterranean antidote 
eommittee prefix subdeacon antipathy 
companion preface subdue antipodes 
communicate preposition subscribe antibilious 

Throuh an examination of the form and the meaning 
of the words in the fore.oing lists, pupils should already 
be able fo arrive at the meaning of the prefix in each case. 



SUFFIXES, ROOT WORDS 67 

The first words in the various lists are the easiest from 
which, through analysis, the pupils may infcr the value 
of the prefix. The nlodification of the prefix for the sake 
of euphony should be freely illustrated. 

SUFFIXIS 

Similarly, from the following examples, there should 
be little difficulty in determining the meaning ¢,f the suffix. 
In every case the pupils shouhl bc expcçted to add to the 

list from words of their owu vocabulary. 

beautify military l,crilous sincerity 
ïortify imaginary wondrous obst.urity 
notify t-ustomary chivalrous hostility 
rectify solitary populous antiquity 
amplify tributary scandalous sagaeity 

R00T WORDS 

In like manner, the meaning of the roof word may 
often be ascertaincd by an examination of some of its 
derivatives. From examples sm.h a. these which follow, 
pupils should be able to infer the i,lea common throuzh- 
out a list and should be able to tell the foot word as found 

therein. 
convene scribble eject 
intervene inscribe inject 
convention describe reject 
convenient scripture subject 

predict loquacious 
contradict cloquent 
dictation soliloquy 
dictionary colloquial 

invent manuscript projectile verdict ventriloquist 

It is of consideral,le value for pupils to see that many 
words, whose relationship they had not previously recog- 
nized, are closely connected through being derived from 



68 SPELLING 

the saine roof. Thr¢,ugh the addition of the various pre- 
fixcs and suffics this root idea is modified, and a know- 
ledgc ,,f such m,,difieatiol,s helps to make the meanings 
of the relatçd words more clear. 
But the ,nea,ing tbus obtained does lmt ordinarily 
give the precise signification of the w.rd; usually if is 
merely suggestive or approximate. In practiee, there 
sh,,uhl follow an a('curate definition of the word and 
illu.trali,,ns of its distim'tive use in setences. At times 
it will be desiral,le to trace the steps by which the word 
rea«'hed its present acceplation, when this differs eon- 
sideral,ly fr,,m ifs original sense. 
Probably the f,llowing way of showing derivaton is 
tobe prcferred: bclmfactor  bene + fact + or -- well 
{bene) + d,ws (fat/) + one who (or)  one who does 
well -- one who eonfers a benefit. 
«,ntradicti,m -- contra + di«t + ion  affainst (coatra) 4- 
speaking (dict) act of (ion) -- the act of speaking against 
one. 
irrevo.able ---- if + re + voe + able  hot (ir) + back 
(re) + call (roc) + can be (able)  cannot be called 
back. 
monopolist -- m¢mo + pol + ist -- alone (mono) + sells 
(pol) + one who (ist) -- one who sells alone --- one who 
has exclusive sale of a commoditv. 
Exercises may be given to show the formation of nouns 
from verbs or from adjectives: of adje«tives and adverbs 
from ne, uns and verbs, etc. This .hould have the effect 
of extending the pupil's voca}mlarv, especially when the 
new words are used in suitable senten«es. In the com- 
positi,n exereises, persistent effort should be ruade fo in- 
crease the numher and variety of words that the pupil 
uses in expressing his thoughts. 



THE SPELL]NG MATCH 69 

THE SPELLING MATCH 

The spelling match might be taken once in three or 
four weeks, and should include nmst of the diffieult words 
studied during that period. Thus the pupils are given an 
opportunity of preparing prier te the test. Prominenee 
should net be given te unusual and peculiar words, ner 
should the test alwa3-s be confined te oral spelling. 
"Yhere are various modifications of the general plan. 
In the case of a rural school, there should be separate word 
lists, for the Second, Third, and Fourth Ferres respee- 
tively. When oral spelling is given, ail the pupils nmy 
remain in their places until the end, instead of sitting 
down when a word is missed; in this case the errer is 
reeorded against the group te which the pupi| belongs. 
At the close, the total number of errors marked against 
each side is reekoned up, and the side havin.g the fewest 
mistakes wins. This method has the great advantage of 
net shaming any pupil 1)y .ending him te his seat, and if 
keeps the weakest spellers in the contest te the very end, 
thus giving them the praetice they need se much. 
Occasionally the pupils, in.tead of the teacher, may 
give out the words te the opposite side. Af rimes the 
leaders alerte de this. Again, the list is ruade frein the 
pupils' lists of their own diffieu]t words. In this case 
repetition must be g'uarded azàinst, as well as the intro- 
duction of words net a.¢sizned. A written instead of an 
oral test may be given, and this is the ï«,rm which the 
exercises should u.uallv take te be most serviceable. The 
dictation may be of isolated word.¢, and often of conneeted 
narrative, in which case errors other than those in spelling 
Inay be marked. This test is nearly akin te those met 
with in aetual ]ife. 



CHAPTER YIII 

EXER£'ISES IN SPELLING 

(The Minister of Education is indebted to The Copp, Clark 
Company,. Limited, for permission to reproduce the [ollowing 
forty exercises.) 

1;'ORM I: SENIOR GRADE 

back sit black see car 
sack give track cow dog 
Jack horse crack whip saw 

S.AT WoRK.--Put h, 1, s, t, r, si, st, with--ack. 

Jack has a big horse. He sits on his back. He gives 
him hay. Gêt a sack of bran.--See me on the black horse. 
I can crack the whip. A red cow got on the car tracks.-- 
Jack cracks a big whip. His dog sêes mv black car. I 
saw tracks of cows and horses.--Jack and I sit on the 
horse. We go for a sack of bran. His dog can track the 
cow. Give me back my whip. 
NOTE.--Each exercise is divided into lessons as indicated 
by dashes. The primary purpose of the sentences is fo 
illustrate the use of the words in the columns and the simple 
homonyms. 
70 



EXERCISES 71 

2 

neck sell pick ball eat 
peck dirt sick stop sled 
speck corn kick bird house 

With --ick put D, 1, p, s, t, w, br, sl, st, th, tr. 

Sell Jack a peck of corn. Give his horse hay. I sec 
a speck of dirt on his neck.--Jack kicks a ball fo Dick. 
He stops fo pick if up. His black bird is sick.--Sell 1)i¢.k 
a sled. Give him a whip. I sec a brick bouse. Black 
birds eat corn.--My horse eats no bran or corn. IIe 
kicks at the bouse dog. I saw dirt on the whip. My bird 
is sick. 

3 

rock girl luck toy new 
sock doll duck boy play 
clock drop stuck key baby 

Put d, l, m, s, bi, ff, fr, sh, st, with ---ock. 

The girl rocks ber doll. Ifs socks are red and black. 
She let the clock drop in the dirt.--The boy bas a sick 
duck. He has bad luck with his birds. The house key 
stuck in the lock.--Baby plays with ber new toy. She 
drops if in the dirt. Pick if up and give if back fo her.-- 
The boy and girl are sick in the bouse. Mv ball struck 
the bird. I saw baby drop ber d»ll. Give her a new toy 
fo play with. Can you eat corn ? 

NOTE.--The words in the lists and seat exercises should be 
used by pupils in their own sentences. 



72 SPELLING 

4 

band hear sang bell one 
hand near rang door done 
stand look hang floor none 

With--angputb. g,h,r, s, sl. To--and addb, h, l,s, st. 

A boy stands near a brick bouse. His neck and hands 
look black. IIe hears the hand play.--Baby plays on the 
floor. Shc sang fo her doll. I rang a bell. Hang the 
key near the door.--0ne boy is donc with his toys. The 
girl bas none. Give baby a new doll or a whip.--Hear 
the boys play ball. One boy is near the brick house. The 
girl drops all hcr toys. Baby has one doll but I have none. 
I saw a black bird on the house. 

E¥IEW 

5 

Jack has a big black dog. He plays with him near the 
bouse. Eis dog will track the cows or horses. Jack stops 
his play fo hear the hand. IIe drops his ball and whip 
],v the door.--Look at the boy and girl on my horse ! The 
girl let one of her toys drop in the dirt. Pick it up and 
give if fo babv. tic bas none. He stands by the door of 
the house.--The girl plays on the floor with a new doll. 
She looks si«k. Is she donc with mv ball? Hand if back 
fo me. Jack sells dueks; but he has none now.A cat 
may eat my bird. I saw the horse kick Dick. Look af 
the dirt on his soeks. I hear baby play with the door bell. 
Are the bran and eorn ail donc? 



EXERCISES 73 

6 

sing like long hair eye 
king you song little nose 
bring your strong short have 

Put k, r, s, w, ff, st, str, br, with --ing. 

Bring baby your new doll. Can you hear him sing? 
He sits on the horse like a king.--The little ]«»y is strong. 
He has long black hair. His whip is short. IIe hears 
your song.--Baby has a short nose. IIis eves are black. 
Have you one new song? I like fo hear you sing.--The 
little girl has a lon.e nose. 1Jer hair is shc»rt and black. 
She has big eyes like you. I hear the door bell ring. 

7 

fish good cash nice cent 
dish child sash ruade gave 
xvish Mary flash much book 

With --ash put c, g, 1, h, m, r, ff, cr. 

To sh-- add ed, ip, ut. 

Mary is a good child. IIear ber sing! She has a fish 
in a dish. I wish for a new ball.--Mv horse ran like a 
flash. Mary ruade baby a nice sash. IIow much cash do 
you wish?--Marv gave baby one cent. Jack ruade him 
a nice new toy. He likes fo look at my book..--I gave 
Mary a good black sash. She ruade a nice dc»ll for baby. 
She looks much like you. The ]ittle child let ber cent 
drop. Pick if up and bring if fo her. 



74 SPELLING 

8 

flesh peas hush coat bite 
fresh pork blush gray pony 
thresh milk brush want draw 

Copy--Is that you? Is that Dick? Was that she? 

Pork is the flesh of hogs. Babv likes nice fresh milk. 
We thresh peas but hot corn.--You ruade Marv blush, 
l lush! She hears us, She wants to have frêsh pork, 
Brush my gray coat.--My pony likês fresh hay. He 
draws corn and peas. Brush his coat, he will hot bite 
you.--I bave a nice little pony. Itis coat is gray, hot 
black. I[c draws fresh milk to the house. I want you to 
thresh peas. 

9 

lass less hiss loss fuss three 
mass mess miss moss muss four 
bass Bess kiss toss one rive 
glass bless bliss cross two six 

Give my pony less grass. Bess likes a glass of milk. 
Bring a black bass and a good mess of peas.--Miss loss 
wants fo kiss baby. She can toss her up. The moss is 
gray. Cross cats hiss.---Two bovs ruade much fuss in 
class. One boy got thrêe or four big bass. He saw rive or 
six gray birds.--I gave rive cents for a new whip. Toss 
two halls fo Marv. Three boys bave in all six eves. Baby 
mav muss vour hair. She bas four new dolls. 



EXERCISES 75 

EVIEW 

10 

Mary is a good child. She gave baby two cents. She 
ruade him a nice gray coat. I like to hear her sing. Do 
you wish a glass of milk ? No, I want two or three fresh 
fish.--Jack is a strong little boy. IIe draws baby and Miss 
King on a sled. Ite has gray eyes and a short nose. It 
ruade him cross fo brush his long hair. IIe ets pork, 
corn, and beans.--We have four or rive nice books. Dick 
has none. Will vou bring him a new one? IIush! I 
hear him ring the door bell. IIe wants to play ball near 
the bouse. Your pony may bite him.--Baby has two or 
three dolls. Miss Ross gave her a black sash. She likes 
fo crack nuts on the floor. I sec six black bass on a dish. 
Have you much corn fo sell ? 

11 

last hall best ask fly kite 
fast calf nest blue cry cord 
past week chest open sky hurt 

Wlth --est put b, n, r, j, 1, p, t, v, w, bl, ch. 

A bell rings at half-past three. How much is -our 
eloek fast? Last week I saw a big calf.--Ask Jack to 
open the ehest. Is he the best boy in vour class? Two 
blue-birds are near a nest.--Hear babv ery; he hurt his 
nose. See my kite fly fo the sky! I have ruade the cord 
strong.--Last week I got a blue vest. ]Iv best coat is in 
a chest. Ask ]Iary to open the door. She likes fo see 
your kite fly. Give her half of your fish. Stop my calf. 



76 SPELLING 

12 

fist take just pie our 
mist shut dust wind papa 
grist water crust apple mamma 

With --ust put d, g, J. m, r, cr, tr. To st --add op, ep, ab, un. 

Take hall the peas fo the grist mill. I see mu«h mist 
by thc water. Shut your fist.--Baby is just two weeks 
old. The apple pie has a nice crust. The wind marie 
the dust fiy.--Papa trusts me with our. pony. Mammu 
ruade a good apple pie. I ask ju.t ïour cents a week.-- 
(lire mamma a glass oï water. She likes our new gray 
pony. I|e draws pcas to the grist mill. Papa takes two 
apples to baby. See him shut his blue eyes! 

13 
this colt tent buy sun 
that love sent they said 
there very spent pair desk 

Put b, c, d, l, r, s, t, w, with ---ent. 
eM, llS. 

To th --add en, an, 

I love mamma very much. There is ber fast colt. 
This week papa will open that new house.--I sent a tent 
for four boys. They will lmv a pair of ducks. They spent 
rive cents for apples.--There is the sun in the skv. Jack 
said that the mist was just water. Papa gave him a new 
desk.--There is a pair of blue-birds. Can they fly up fo 
the sun? I like our birds verv much. You said the calf 
liked water. Papa hurt hi. arm last week. 



EXERCISES 77 

14 

lift plum hunt axe hint next 
giït drmn blunt bear flint story 
drift candy grunt wolï print noise 

Copy and fill in--lIy naine is -- 

I am  years old. 

Lift my drmn from the floor. I got a gift of plums 
and candy. The wind drifts much sand.--Two men hunt 
a wolf. They bave a bluut axe. A bear hurt one man. 
Hear the pig grunt!--Thi. candy is hard as flint. That 
noise gives a hint of a wolf. Will you print our next 
story?--My new pony was a gift from mamma. We like 
candy and apples. Can you kill a bear with an axe? 
A wolf ruade nmch noise. It may bite our little calf. 

I{EVlEW 

15 

We spent last week in a tent. We went to ff.ch and 
hunt. We got no bear or wolf. There was a nest of blue- 
birds near.--The wind ruade our kites fly. The cord hurt 
my hand. Papa sent me a drum as a gift. He said I 
ruade nmch noise. Just give him a hint fo buv me candy. 
I like apple pie with a good crust. Thc colt draws Jack 
past our house.--Mamma ruade me a pair of hlue socks. 
They are the best that I bave. There is much mist. 
Open the door. This axe is very blunt. Take that storv 
book fo the sick ehild.--Do vou hear the pigs grunt? 
Give milk and water fo the calf. Take half your plums 
fo Dick. He spent rive or six cents on toys for baby. Hc 
asks papa fo buy a pony next week. 



78 SPELLING 

16 

lamp idle jump over word 
camp lazy pump more work 
tramp crazy stump some worm 

Put b, d, h, 1, m, p, sh, sp, with --ark. 

Two lazy tramps ask f«,r rive cents. They are idle, 
hot crazv. Have they a lamp in camp?--I can jump over 
that stump. Pump some more water for my colt. Last 
week Fred had the mumps.--That lazy scamp will hot 
work. tte wants to sell some fish worms. ('an you hear 
his words?--Buv a stamp for two cents. You are hot 
idle or lazv. Do some more work for papa. Are there 
hard words in your story book? I saw worms on the 
shmap. 

17 

add any ill sec shoo push 
odd many all bec purr bush 
Ann even off egg buzz kitty 

Add --s to boy, whip, duck, horse, doll, word, cent. 

Add two and four. Is rive odd or even? How many 
apples has Ann ? Have vou any candv?--See how ill Ann 
is! Take her to mamma. Do bees work ail dav? The 
duck got off the eggs.--Hear kitty purr! Shoo the hens 
from the door. Pusb baba" on the sied. Bees buzz near 
a t,ush.--Manv bovs play odd and even. Shoo the birds 
off that bush. I was verv iii ail last week. Baby likes to 
hear kitty purr. Can you eat two eggs? 



EXERCISES 79 

18 

sank rope trunk tea here 
bank frock drunk coal once 
thank again ehunk stove think 

With --ink put 1, m, p, r, s, w, th, dr. 

A rope sank in the water. Thank mamma again ï,,r 
your frock. Frailk has four cents in his bank.--Open the 
trunk again. Put s,.,me .hunks of «oal into the stove. 
Have you drunk the tea?--Do 'ou flfink Fred is lazy? 
His work is hot half d«,lie. Oncc he came here for a 
rope.--There are four cents in my bank. Once I went fo 
buy eandy and apples. Here is my pony aain. Lift the 
tea-pot off the coal stove. Give mamma two nice apples. 

19 

crib curl clap soap yes 
crop sleep cloth wash read 
crush great clasp dirty study 

Put 1, d, h, n, r, s, t, sh, dr, sl, tr, wh, with --ip. 

Baby sleeps in a little crib. Do not crush his curls. 
There is a great crop of corn.--Clap your hands again, 
baby. IIe clasps a dirty doll. Wash his cloth cap with 
soap and water.--Here is a niee story. Can vou read? 
Yes, if I studv the words. Wash your eyes and nose.-- 
Kitty sleeps ncar a coal store. Sec ber wash her fur 
coat! Study the words in your new book. I wish fo 
hear you read a story. 



80 SPELLING 

Four boys havc a camp ],car thc bank. They get water 
from our pump. None of them arc idle or lazy. They 
take long tramps here and there. They sent papa fresh 
ect.% a great many.--])o 3"ou likc to read story books? 
Yes, I study any hard words. I tan add long sums. Do 
push Ann «»r crush ber frock. She clasps my cloth 
eoat. Ask nmmma to ('url hcr hair azain.--Fred had fo 
draw and thresh his peas. There was a gTeat crop and 
much wcrk. Now ho wants fo crush them af the grist 
mill. Two tramps ask him for se»me more tea. We think 
them idle, hot crazy.--Have you any more fresh eggs? 

Yes, here arc three or forer. Do you fish with worms? 
1)rop the two 'hunks of coal. Get soap and water fo wash 
your dirty hands. 
21 
ball bell bill bull fry ten 
call Nell kill pull dry nine 
fall fell fill full shy eight 
hall yell hill doll fix seven 
tall tell till dull mix eleven 
wall well will gull wax twelve 

I hear some one yell. Nell saw a tall boy near a brick 
wall. Ask her fo ring the hall bell.--Can a hear kill a 
bull ? Pull till I tell you fo stcp. ç, ulls bave strcmg bills. 
--Eight and four aretwelve. Therc are sevcn days in a 
week. Becs ruade wax. Ninc bcvs and eleven girls go o 
flw, hall. Mix more bran and water for the cows. 



EXERCISES $1 

22 

cuff who stiff use skip 
puff what skiff oar skin 
muff when snuff sew skim 

Add --s to camp, lock, key, song, curl, frock, week 

Who sent ]Iary a fur muff? What ruade her cuffs so 
dirty? She puffs when she works hard.--What nice oars 
your skiff bas ! Mamma sews a stiff cuff on a dress. Some 
men still use snuff.--Girls like fo skip with a rope. Who 
will se]l you any skim milk? A 1,car bas thi«k skin.--Use 
the new oars in my skiff. Who stuffs the coal store with 
diry cloths? Will you scw mv fur nmff? What makes 
Tom use snuff? lIe sent twelve fresh eggs. 

23 

hung lady felt snow smell 
flung head belt strap smart 
stung bone melt skate smash 

With --ung put h, I, r, s, ci, ff, si, st, str. 

A lady flung the d«,g a bone. ,%,me bees stung her arm 
and head. Has she rung the door bell?--Use mv belt fo 
strap on your skates. The sun melts SHOW. I felt il] when 
I hurt my head.Do you smell [he plum pie ? Yes, shut 
[he store door, be smart. When did baby sma.¢h [he glass ? 
Fred flung his ska[es on the floor. The lady felt hurt 
when he was cross. Once two bees stuug him ou the eyes 
and nose. I want a fish worm. 

19 



82 SPELLING 

24 

find cart born why sure 
blind both horn foot blow 
grind please thorn where corne 

Put c, d, f. p, t, with --ry; and b, f, h, m, r, w, with nind. 

Dick is blind in both eyes. Please try fo find his cart. 
Some mills grind much corn.--Why do you cry? ca 
thorn hurts my sore foot. Where is your tin horn ? On 
what dav was our Dick born ?--Baby blows a horn. Where 
is his whip? Please corne here in the cart. Be sure te 
naind papa.--Where have you flung my belt? Why did 
you sma:h the «'art? Be sure to corne with your skates. 
Please grind four pecks of peas. 

EVIEW 

25 

Please, papa. buv me a pair of skates. When the ShOW 
cornes I use my sled. We felt strong puffs of wind. When 
Jack hurt his fo, or he gave a yell. Where did he drol c 
his strap?--Fred naade a pair of oars for nay skiff. We 
skim s'ers" fa.t over the water. I will try to sew the stralc 
vou sent me. I used it fo pull mv cart. See papa grind 
his dull axe !--A lady gave the blind girl a long rope. 
Now she skips all over the house. She may smash the 
glass in the door. ,qhe has a fur muff and a stiff belt. 
she a smart chi]d?--Where was Jack born? Who flung 
the rope at hi. head? Ho wants fo lmy some fish. Hert 
are seven or eight bass. I ana sure they are fresh, smel] 
them. He will give twelve cents for one. 



EXERCISES 83 

26 

jaw 

sort claw ice awl roll 
mice thaw glad crawl hoop 
pussy straw sharp shawl sport 

Muke words in --uw with c, j, I, p, r, s, t, cl, dr, th. 

Pussy has four sort paws. She eats both fish and mice 
raw. She opens her two strong jaws.--Kitty has sharp 
claws. She is glad to sleep on straw. The sun thaws the 
snow and ice.--It is good sport fo roll a hoop. A w«,rm 
crawls over that shawl. When 1 sew my belt 1 use an awl. 
--Some worms crawl up the apple trees. With her strong 
claws pussy kills mice. She likes fo sleep on a shawl. 
Corne over here and roll your hoop. 

27 

owl says town first lost barn 
fowl rich down shirt cost burn 
growl poor brown skirt frost storm 
With --ow put b, c, h, m, n, r, s, br, se. 

Why do dogs howl and _-rowl ? Some owls fly near our 
fowl. Tom says he is poor, hot rich.--Mamma has a new 
brown skirt. She buys papa some shirts. She is the first 
fo corne down town.--I lost much corn hv the frost, lIy 
barn may burn in a storm. We sell skirts af cost.--Hear 
our dogs wowl! There is a great ste, ma in town. The 
first frost may kill the peas. Fred says the fowl are near 
the barri. They bave nests in the straw. 



84 SPELLING 

28 

few left drew other lie father 
flew pole grew sister tie mother 
blew aïter threv another die brother 

Put d, f, h, J, m, p, ch, cr, st, with --ew. 

A storm blew down a flag pole. An owl flew at my 
bird. The Jew left a few cents for I)abv.--This pony threw 
my sister off. Our other pony grew fast. He drew straw 
to bed another pony.--Father savs our calf mav die. 
Mother sent my brother a cart. Lie down after you rie 
the cord.--My new straw bat bIew off. Father flew to pick 
it up. My I,rother tied the colt with a strap. Pussy lies 
near the store. My other car died after you left. 

29 

talk salt scold silk kept halt 
walk help scald aunt slept shot 
chalk load scrap uncle crept snug 

Copy--Mr. John Smith; Mrs. Ellen Jones; Miss Mary Nash. 

Next year baby will talk and valk. He draws on the 
fioor with chalk. Hclp us fo load salt.--ttot tea may 
scald )'ou. Then Aunt Mary will scold you. Uncle sent 
me scraps of silk.--As I slept in a snug tent a wolf crept 
near. We ruade him halt. I shot him and kept his skin.-- 
Aunt kept two apples for you. She will sew the scraps of 
silk. Baby slept on the floor. Can he walk or talk ? Hear 
uncle scold his brother! 



EXERCISES 85 

EVIEW 
30 
Uncle gave me a nice hoop. If cost eight cents. He 
says he will help me to find pussy. Our dog growls when 
he hears you. IIe crept ncar the coal store and slept on 
the floor.--:Poor Aunt Mary lost a silk skirt. She left her 
brown shawl with sister. A wind storm blew our barn 
down. We kept some îowl and a calf there. The straw 
fiew all over the snow.--Father walks clown town for some 
salt. IIis pony drew four loads of corn. IIc scold. me 
when I hurt mv brother. I ara g]ad when ShOW and îro.t 
corne. We had the first frost last week.--Our little pussy 
lies on a soît coat. She plays with scraps of silk. She 
rolls a ball on the floor. Mother threw her some fish. 
Jack talks of the wolf he shot. Brush that worm off. 

31 

catch loaf latch gone watch 
patch bread hatch often crutch 
batch thread snatch spool Scotch 

Make words in atch with b, c, h, 1, m, p, sn, th. 

I ruade a batch of bread. IIere is a loaf. Buy thread 
to sew on a patch. Catch mv little pony.--natch the 
spool of thread from kittv. Fred is gone fo ]ateh the door. 
Hens often hateh ezzs.--Uncle bas a golc] watch. He buys 
some spools of silk thread. A Scotch boy walks with a 
crutch.--Jack buys a ]oaf or two of bread. Please match 
this spool of hread. Mamma sews a pat«.h on my skirt. 
Are vou Dutch? No, I ara cotch. 



86 SPELLING 

32 

ditch coax curse oxen chew heel 
pitch Lucy nurse were chase sore 
stitch apron purse fetch churn bare 

Add--s to spool, walk, skirt, grind, eye, hoop, rope. 

0ften a ditch has water in if. Pitch your ball over fo 
Dick. Coax Aunt Lu.y to stit,.h my apron.--None but 
bad boys ourse. Xur.e lost the purse you gave her. Fetch 
more water for the oxen.--I hurt my bare foot. My heel 
is sore. Our calf chcws straw; chase if away. Does my 
aut churn ne r milk?--('oax mother fo sew your dress. 
What ruade your hccl sore ? Lucy went with her bare head 
fo fctch some al»pies. Two oxen were in a ditch. 

33 

arch goes birch close swim stay 
march home perch white swift pray 
starch party porch small swing stray 

Copy--Who are you? What is your naine? How old are you? 

Boys mar¢.h in a party under an arch. The lady goes 
home with her son. Use »tareh on mv cuffs.--Over out 
door is a white porch. Close by grew a small birch. There 
two birds perch near a nest.--Can vou swim in swift 
water? In church we pray fo God. My pony stravs away. 
Fred stars on the swing.--At home I swing near the porch. 
Our bouse is small and white. Papa bas two sons. Jack 
goes to swim with a party of boys. 



EXERCISES 87 

34 

cook John hood split year 
brook copy xvood saved yard 
shook paper stood church yarn 

Join---c, h, 1, n, t, br, cr, sh, to--ook. 

John asked Nell fo cook a fish from the brook. .qhe 
shook her head. Copy ihe word. on paper.--A boy sawed 
and split the wood. He stood near the church. Mv ne 
hood is made of Scotch wool.--Xext vear I shall be seven. 
I want soeks nlade of yarn. Is there much w,«,,l in your 
yard?--Dick was four years old last week. ç'an he c«»py 
words from a paper? See rny colt jump over the brook! 
A swift pony runs past our yard. 

PtEVIEW 

35 

Mother is a great cook. She ruade a bafch of bread. 
She gave one small loaf fo baby and ne. Dick ha. gone 
fo the lake fo fish for pert'h. He nav cat'h sonm f«»r pussy 
fo eat.--J«»hn is a strong Seotch boy. IIe sawêd and split 
a load of wood. He offert walks te» church. Now hi.¢ nose 
is sore. He reads the paper iu the p,rch. Ask him to 
latch the door.--I use an awl fo stitch my strap. Aunt 
Mary will sew a patch on your skirt. Buv her sone yarn 
and two spools of thread. Uncle wants a box of chalk. I 
bave twelve cents.--My pony can swim in swift water. 
Wateh him jump over a ditch. He goes past the barri fo 
eat the grass. Fred stood wifl his head bare. tIê chews 
¢mm as he churns. 



88 SPELLING 

36 

tree raft feel own deer 
free right peel frog beer 
knee start wheel pond cheer 

To cl-- add ap, ara, ub, ip, ock, ing, asp, ean. 

To-day thrce boys ruade a raff. A birch tree hurt my 
right knee. When arc you free 4o start?--Uncle John 
owns a wheel. His arms feel sore, the skin peels off. 0ur 
pond ha. frogs but no eels.--Give three cheers for our 
king. Iany deer lire in the woods. Drink tea or water, 
hot beer.--Papa bas a score heel. His wheel hurt his right 
knee. He peels the bark off a hirch tree. Once we saw 
eight deer. They stood near a church'ard. 

37 

keep bold coop road seed 
creep seen stoop front weed 
sheep mouse droop scrub bleed 

Add d, k, p, w, sh, sl, st, cr, sw, to eep. 

Boys keep watcb over the sheep. A bold wolf was seen. 
Pussv creeps after a mouse.There were fç, ur hen coops 
near thc road. Mary stoops fo scrub the front step. 
What ruade tbe plant droop?--Bu)  the best seed. Kill 
the weed.¢. I hit my hand on the door latch. This ruade 
it blee«].Baby creeps on hands and knees to the door. 
W]lat ruade his noise h]eed ? ¥ou need fo sweep and scrub 
he flo«r. Lwv stoops very mwh over her work. 



EXERCISES 

38 

beet silly boot firm bear 
sweet nasty root those pear 
street sugar shoot worth wear 

With ---eet put b, f, m, ff, sh, gr, 

Sugar is ruade from sweet beets. Some silly boys play 
on the street. They say nasty words.--tlow much are your 
boots worth? Those trees have firm roots. It is hot right 
to shoot birds.--Aunt likes apples and pears. At home I 
wear soft boots. Bears tear the bark off trees.--Some men 
shoot bears in the woods. Be sure to wear boots on thc 
street. IIow much are those four oxen worth? Swect 
pears need little sugar. 

39 

room lily cool limp dead 
bloom grow pool warm read 
broom clean school mitts spread 

Join--c, f, p, t. st to --ool; and b, 1, r, bi. gr to --oom. 

Iany plants grow in our room. Sun and water ruade 
/he lily bloom. A new broom sweeps clean.--0ur room is 
very cool. ]Xow I wear warm mitts fo school. 0ne cow 
limps to the pool of water.--Papa read us a story. He 
spread some jam on my bread. He savs his poor blue- 
bird is dcad.--ç)ur school is kept warm on cool days. 
The room is swept clean. A lilv i.q in blc,m near the 
church. Spread your wet coat fo dry in the sun. 



90 SPELLING 

I{EVIEW 

4O 

We oten walk to school at eight. Lucy goes by the 
front road. Fred cornes on a swift wheel. We arc sure 
fo bave our work done right. Last week we had great 
sport in the woods.--Uncle sent his sox fo catch a pair of 
fowl. They flew into an applc tree. The silIy b«,y threw 
many sticks af them. Once he got a nasty fa|l from our 
frot porch. If ruade his right knee sore.--Aunt read us 
a stçry frçm a paper. It said wn «]eer were near a church. 
Some idlc men «rept up to shoot them. Af the first noise 
the deer ran off. Thev were hot scen azain.--How much 
are those we]ve pears worth? I bave just cleven cents. 
Marv ]ikes suzar and candv. She wears a warm coat, not 
a shaw|. Her apron i. dirtv. Fetch soap and water fo 
c|ean if. Where is ber new dress? 

ail Take ail the plums, hear I hear the baby cry. 
awl Use an awl fo sew. here Please corne here. 
aie I are the pie. I I like to play. 
e|r| I bave eight hens. eye My eye is black. 
bare My neck is bare. read He read a book. 
bear He shot a black bear. red Her dress is rel. 
be Try tobe good. so I ara so cold. 
bee A bee stung me. sew Please sew my dress 
blew The wind blew hard. some Get me some milk. 
b|ue Her dress is blue. sure Is ita big sure? 
buy Buy some eggs. son A ma had three sos 
by I went by water, sun The sun is in the sky. 
et Fred bas one cent. lo I go to school. 
serti He sent me home lwo I bave two eyes. 



CHAPTER IX 

GENERAL OUTLINE OF LESSON PROCEDURE 

THE ORDER and method of presenting difficult words in 
spelling will, as a general rule, be as outlined below. How- 
ever, the teacer is advised to vary this Lesson Procedure 
as far as may be consistent with good pedagogical prin- 
ciples. Details as fo how these lessons nmv be varied will 
be found in the notes following the Illustrative Lesscn, 
page 97. 

ASSIGNMENT AND PREPARATION 

DEVELOP TIIE IEANING OF THE WORD.--Ill the Course 
for Forms I and II but few words will be unfamiliar 
the pupil, yet some pupils may have erroneous or imper- 
fect conceptions of the meanings of some of these words. 
In this subjéct, as in ail others, we should teach for those 
who do not know rather than for those who do know. 
this connection, it is necessary for the teacher fo remembcr 
that it is new ideas that make new words necessary, hot 
vice versa. The new idea should, therefore, be devel,ped 
first, and the new word should arise as its appropriate 
s)unbol. The method and amount of detail will vary with 
the pupil's familiarity with the word. For fuller dis- 
cussion, see pages 19-21, 28, 62-3. 
ECURE THE RIGHT PRO'UNCIATION.--Faultv pronun- 
ciation s the cause of manv errors in spclling. In 
case of difficult words, the teacher should pronounce them 
distinctly first; afterward, individual pupils should pro- 
nounce them. Pupils whose errors can be traced fo mis- 
pronunciation should be given a larger share of this 
practice. :For fuller discussion, see pages 19-20, 23, 44, 
49, 55, 62. 
91 



92 SPELLING 

DILL ON THE SPELLING.--Focalize the attention on 
the difiïcult parts of irregular words, but on like parts 
of regular words. The visual-auditory-motor appeal is 
the most effective and the only safe one. Sufiïeient time 
for preparation and drill shou]d always be given. In 
every spelling lesson, meaning, pronuneiation, and spelling 
should be inseparably associated and in the order here 
stated, since this is the natural chain of association in all 
spontaneous written expression. For devices, see pages 
2», 26-3», 42. 
TEST 

The written test is the one to be mainly used, as this 
is the practical test in life, but occasionally the oral test 
may be used as auxiliary, especially in reviews and in 
spelling mat«.hes. It must of necêssity be used as a pre- 
parat,,ry test until the pupils tan write freely: For fuller 
discussion, see pages 25, 30-32, 40. 

DETECTION OF ERRORS 

In Form I, and perhaps in Form II Junior, it is better 
that the teacher should mark the errors or at least in.pect 
the pupils' work carefully, as the pupils bave hot had 
much practice in reading written work. In the higher 
Forms pupil. are able fo correct their own from the open 
Text-hook or frç,nx the passages written on the board and 
kept coverefl while the sentenees arc bein.ff written. The 
teacher .hould examine some of the books each day. See 
pages 44-7. 

CORRECTION OF 

The correction of errors ranks net in importance fo 
thorough preparation. The causes of errors should be first 



STEPS IN A SPELLING LESSON 9 

sought out, in ordcr fo apply, if possible, the propcr 
remedy against further mistakcs from the saine cause. 
Class trcat,nent of mistakes is hot effective. The possi- 
bility of permanent cure lies in the diagnosis and treat- 
ment of each individual's errors. The tcachcr should, 
therefore, studv the pecu]iarities of each of his pupils and 
seek fo eradicate the error, hot by calling attention fo the 
wrong impression, but by persistently and repeatedly 
focusing attention on the right form until the pupil has 
fixed the habit of sl»elling_ it correetly. ,ee pages 48-56. 
If will be noticcd that in the lllustrative Lesson the 
General Outline of Lesson Procedure has been adhered to. 
The preparation has thus been given more attention than 
may I)e necdful in m.tual practice, as in this early part 
nearly ail the words are known both as fo pronunciation 
and meaning. :But since this is a model lesson, the work 
has been carried out in accordanc'e with the General Out- 
line, fo show the importance of usuallv following the 
various steps in teaching. 
The fi-mres refer fo the exp|anatory notes, whi(.h are 
appended so that the teaching of thc Illustrative Lesson 
may hOt be interrupted. 

ORDER OF STEPS IN AN ELEMENTARY 
SPELLING LESSON 
1. The meaning of the word developed, where necessary. 
by simple illustration. 
2. The pronunciation of the word repeated accurately and 
used in sentences nadc by the pupils. 
3. The form of the word written on the board by the 
teacher (mode|). 
4. 0ral spelling from the board by the pupils. 



94 SPELLING 

5. Details of the word observed--speeial parts underlined. 
6. The form copied on the board or in their books by the 
pupils from the model on the board. 
7. The forms on the board erased and the model hidden. 
The pupils visualize and spell orally the whole word; 
they tell ifs parts--first letter, last letter, etc.,--when 
tbis is deemed necessary. 
8. Tests by writing on the board or in their books. 
ILLUSTRATIVE LESSONS 
LESSON I 
LESSON TOPIC: Exercise I, Page 70. Words: pack, 
sack, Jack. 
SEXTEXCES: Jack ............. horseo (first four) 
DEVELOPMENT OF MEANING.--T. "Thouh a boy's 
right naine is John, what is he often ca]]ed ?" P. " Jack" 
IaoXu'('ATIOX.--Two or three pupi]s may pronounce 
it very clear]v. 
SPELLIN(}.--T. " Now I shall write it for you on the 
board. Watch how I make the word ". tic writes slowly 
and in large hand, Jack. Individual pupils are called upon 
fo spell the word orally as they look at it. " What is the 
first letter? What kind of letter is it?" (He tells the 
class if they do n-t know.) "We always use a capital for 
the first letter of a person's naine. What are the last 
three letters?" (IIe underlines them or writes them over 
in coloured chalk.) Some pupils are asked fo write the 
word two or three rimes on the board while others write 
it in their work-books. See Note 1, page 97. 
The pupils are given a moment for intense observa- 
tion. Then tbey are asked fo (']ose eyes or face away from 
the board and visualize the word. During this rime one 
or more pupils spell aloud. When this exercise is satis- 



ILLUSTRATIVE LESSONS 95 

factory, the teacher covers the board and has the pupils 
write the word two or three rimes on a clear page of their 
work-books. 
If one pupil cannot spcll or write it, he is asked to 
look quickly as the teacher uncovers the word or shows it 
on a card (flash-card), written with thc diffi«ult part under- 
]ined. The teacher then covers it again al,d says, " 
spell it", " Now write if". See pages 26-7, 38-40, 42. 
hIE.-I-. -'' What do you call this part of the hand ?» 
(T. shows the back.) " Where is your back?" 
PuoNt'TcLo_-.--Some pupils say the word slowly 
and distinctlv. The teacher writes on the board baclî 
under Ja«l'. 
SPELLING.--" What is the first letter? The last two? 
The la.st three?" The teat'her underlies them or has them 
written in coloured chalk, br_«c/'. Th.n the word is taught 
in much the saine way as ,lac/'. Pupils observe closely, 
spell, and write ïrom the board. They observe, vi.qualize, 
spell with eyes closed, then write without looking af the 
word on the board. 
]I-'(.---" What do we sometimes eall a large 
one fo hold coal or potatoes ? A loose coat like this is called 
a sack coat. IIow many have seen somethinzlike this? » 
The teacher shows a picture of a bag or sack of bran or 
potatoes and points fo the sack. 
puotcAox.Several pupils use the word in 
short sentences, pronouncing it distinctly; as, A sack is 
used fo, etc. The word is pronounced by itself. 
SPLL'.--" Look closely as I write ifs naine ". The 
teaeher writes sacl« under Jacl. "What are the last three 
letters?" He underlines them as before. "What is the 
first letter?" Some spell the whole word from the board, 



96 SPELLING 

others write it. The pupils observe, close eyes, visualize, 
spell, etc., as before. 
Individual pupils are now asked to spell, in a different 
order and in short phrases, the words taught; as, Pat my 
i.ack, Get the saek, Run Jack. Sec Note 5, page 9.% 
Mz.,,xL«.--" What animal is it that draws a buggy. »' 
The teacher shows a pieture of a horoe if the ehildren are 
hot familiar with the animal. 
Plo_-,-t_xcI.TIox.--" Say the worà again." Several 
pupils pronounee it. 
SPELLIXG.--" Sec how I write horse on the board". 
'" What are the two letters after h ? The last two letters ?" 
He underlines se and writes s in eoloured ehalk. He directs 
the pupils to look af e. Several pupils spell the word from 
the board. The teacher writes the word twiee. The pupils 
observe elosely, visualize, spell with eyes elosed, and then 
write the word in work-books without looking at the board. 
3I.xLx.--" Men do hot stand on a horse's baek. 
What do they do?" "They sit." "Jack sits on the 
horse's back." 
Po_x-r.xc_Trox.--Sav the word distinctly. 
SP_rLx6.--The teacher writes sits. "' What is the first 
letter ?" Ite underlines s and drills as in the words above. 
He writes sit and then under it sits and the pupils com- 
pare. 
Mzxx.Jack gives his horse hav. 
Ploxcxc_xm_x-.--"What does the tiret letter sav? 
The last ?" Several pupils say the word. 
.qPzrix.--" f}bserve the letters that make gires". 
The teacher writes gires on the board. "What is the first 
letter? The next three?" (Underlines them} "What 
letter after v?" He writes e in coloured ehalk. The 



NOTES 97 

pupils spell and write fronl the board. They observe, 
visualize, spell, and write in work-l,ooks as before. The 
lire. 
give. tic purs 1 in place of g; as lires. 
teaeher writes gives. 
DICTTIo.','.--The pupils will turn to a new page and 
write the sentences as the teacher dictates. Sec pages 40-4, 
and Note 9, page 99. 
:DETECTION OF ERRORS.--At fir8t the teacher will direct 
the pupils' attention to their errors, since they cammt 
easily final them. The marking of the errors by the 
teacher (mainly at first) will follow. Sec pages 44-7. 
REWRITI.','6.--After the missed words have been 
thoroughly taught, each pupil will write out two or three 
rimes correctly, from thc board and in his work-book, the 
sentences which contained his errors, underlining the hard 
parts of the misspelled words and emphasizing these parts 
orally. See Notes 10 and 11, page 99. 

NOTES 
:NOTE. l.--This writing shouhl be neatly donc, and the 
words may be arranged in columns. During this first 
writing, the pupils may look af the teacher's writing on 
the board. The tea«.her should observe closely that no 
mistakes are ruade by the pupils. If errors appcar on the 
board, thev should be erased instantly, and the pupil be 
made fo observe the correct fornl and then fo try aain. 
Later the pupils' work is erased from the board, but the 
teacher's writing remains. 
NOTE 2.When these fhree words bave been testc«, 
there shou]d bc a brisk «lrill on them. Attenfion shou|d 
be directed fo the part that is identical, and other words 
of this type given fo be spelled hv inference: fi»r example, 
20 c.. 



98 SPELLING 

tre.k, hack, etc. The ending act" might be written on the 
board several times in a column and pupils asked fo pla«.e 
1,eïore it a lettêr fo make saek, laek, raek, etc. Then the 
conclusion is rêaehêd that words with that sound are 
spelled with the lettêrs ack. 
NOTE 3.--The similar words in the first spelling 
eolumns are taught togêthcr for thê purpose of êeonomizing 
rime, the êasiest and most ïamiliar first. The othêr words 
it the columns are l,rought in as they oecur in the sen- 
tênees. 
NOTE 4.--0ther words in ack, such as are in the seat 
work, may l,e dêvelopêd 1,y asking the pupils simple ques- 
tions. For example, "' What is this?" IIe shows a ta«k. 
IIe writês tack, etc. '" Tell nie what you see" He shows 
a pieture of a hm.k. Writês haek. etc. 
NOTE 5.--The w«,rds shouhl be first obtainêd in sen- 
rentes. Thêv are 1,errer faurjl, f in an isolated form, but 
better tested in sêntenees. 
NOTE 6.--In teaching the worcls, one may at rimes be 
at a loss to know whieh is thê difficult part ,»f thê word 
for the pupil. Thê error most commonly ruade by the 
pupil will decidê this: for instance, the clifficult part in 
wafer is usuallv in deciding how many t's; this then is 
tire part which should lȐ tauzht and emphasized, but if 
the pupil makes thê êrror in tbe first syllable, thên that is 
the part whi«h shou|d be spêcia]ly êmpha.ized for him. 
.N'0TE 7.--Thê primary purpose of thêse sentênces is 
fo illustrate thê word. in the eolumns: thêre are al.ao 
hononvms and othêr important words ineorporated. 
O, enerallv these other words mav he assumed fo be familiar 
to thê pupils through their transcription frein thê Primer. 
NOTE 8.--For example, it is assumed that the pupils 
know the mêaning of, and ean pronounee and spell, such 



NOTES 99 

words as, bi.q, bas, hay, get, a, the, o[, on; otherwise the.e 
words should be tauht as follows: 
MEAxx." What does the horse eat? I[ow many 
bave seen hay ?" 
PlO.','t:.xCLTIO.X.--The pupils say the word. 
SPELLL.--The teacher writes hay on the board, y in 
coloured chalk. " What does the first letter say. What 
letters ïollow h ? What is the last letter?" Drills as 
before. 
][EANING. -«¢ What is made from wheat?" " Flour" 
"What else?" "'Bran'" (The teacher nlay tell if the 
pupils do hot know.) "The sack is full of bran. The 
horse eats bran." 
Pro.t'XClATIOX.--Several pupils pronounce the word. 
SPELLIXG.--The teacher writes the word bran. " What 
are the first two letters?" He underlincs them and drills 
as before. He writes bran and under it plan and the 
pupils compare. 
NOTE 9.--Perhaps one or two sentences will |,e enough 
af first to write from the teachcr's dictation. ()ne or more, 
say the first tu'o, mav be spelled orally in phrases; fre- 
quently one or two sentences mav be copied as seat work. 
NOOEE 10.--During the correction of errors, eçery effort 
should be put forth fo find the cause of individual errors 
and, in the case of errors from wrong impressions, fo 
emphasize the right rotin and fo help the individual pupil 
fo eradicate his indi'idual mistakes. Sec pages 48-9. 
IX*OOEE l l.--Rewriting. After the missed words have 
been thoroughly taught, the rewriting should be continued 
on successive days and afterward at intervals, until the 
correct form has beeome fixed in the minds of the pupils. 



100 SPELLING 

GENERAL REMARKS ON LESSONS 2, 3, 4. EXERCISE I 

LESSON 2 
These three sentences (See trac]s) con- 
tain the words of the third and fourth columns and also 
rcview words from the Primer and from Lesson 1; as, 
rcd, got, ]orse. Thcse sentences may be taken up as the 
scntences in Les.on ], the meaning of any difiïcult word 
and the correct pronunciation bcing first dcalt with. The 
w«»rds bhwi', cr«wi', tr«ci', will be taught first, and attention 
called fo the first two lctters in each as they are written 
on the board and undcrlined. The last three letters will 
be noted as the saine coml»ination seen in 
"In the word see, how many e's? In wh lp, what are 
the first two lctters? The second letter? In cow, what 
are the last two lcttcrs?" The drill will be carried on as 
in Lesson , emphasis bcing 1)laced on the writing of these 
words rathcr than on their oral spelling. See page 42. 
Thc use of c,lourcd (.hlk and of cardboard with words 
written large and diflïcult parts underlined will help the 
pupils fo fix their attention and fo visualize the word 
forms. 
Furthcr preparati«n may be ruade by copying the sen- 
tences frm the l«ard and by spelling the words in phrases. 
Always mke this drill impressive and varied. Then the 
black-board is covered, and the cla.¢s will write the sen- 
tences fo di«tation as beïore. The marking of errors, the 
pointing out «f c«rrect forms, and the rewriting of the 
sentences, will follw as in Lesson 1. If errors in vsual- 
izing bave been mde, if will require all the tact, per- 
sistence, and resourceïulness of the teacher fo make per- 
manent the correct image in the pupil's mind. 



GENERAL REMARKS ON WORK OF FORM I 101 

LESSON 3 
In these three consecutive sentênces, there are only 
four new words to be noted: mg, cci, dog, s«w; and these 
words have alrcady been transcribed from the Primer. 
There are, however, several review words; these nmy be 
written and retaught, where necessary, in pairs on the 
board ; as, 
crack see track cow horse give sit whip 
cracks sees tracks cows horses gives sits whips. 

LESSON 4 
In Chese four sentences no new words are iniroduced. 
The lesson is intended io rcview the words in Lessons 1, 
2, 3, and those words which have been missed in previous 
lessons should first be drilled upon. Scntences or phrases 
other than those in the book and containing the words 
missed may be written. The words should be placed on 
the board, copied, and the difficult parts underlined and 
emphasized. 
Special pains should be taken to have no errors ruade 
by any pupil in the writing of the seniences in the fourth 
lesson of each exercise. If, nevertheless, errors be ruade, 
then a fifth lesson on the words, misspelled generally in 
Exercise 1, may be given after these words have been 
specially taught. 

GENERAL REMARKS ON WORK OF FORM I 

I. The seat work of each Exercise may be given in 
two or three parts or lessons. The c]ass should first com- 
plete the words as indicated and then should write each 



102 SPELLING 

in one or more sentences. This work needs careful super- 
vision--thus : 
Add h t,, a«k  hack--The man sits in a hack. 
" 1 "  lackI lack a pen. 
'" s "' -- sackGet a sack for the bran. 
" r " -- ra«k--Fix the rack with a tack. 
" t " -- tackHit the tack now. 

II. It will be hot|ced from the teaching of the first 
few ]essons in Form I t]lat malJy ot]ler word-building 
exercises may be given the pupils from each ]esson. For 
examp]e; in Exercise l: 

big.--Put r, w, d, f, j, with --ig. 
sit. --Put b, f, h, k, p, w, wit]l--i/. 
lmy.--I'ut m, l, s, d, g, with --ai!. 
get.--Put m, s, p, l, with --et. 

III. Iii the first four exercises and the review, the 
pupils bave met with six homonyms: ail, be, I, red, so, fo. 
These have been repeated manv times, and care should be 
taken fo sec that cach time all is spelled, its meauing is 
t.lcar through its correct use in a phrase or sentence. 
Thus all in "'all the corn", "'all the bo's", "'all the 
girls "- I in " I ara here" "" I sec vou" ; by in " Stand by 
the bouse", " Corne by the train"; red in "I sec a red 
1.i1, r  . ç 
_ , so in If isso hard"; and loin ci go io town"; 
etc. 
IV. Review Exercise, 5. These lessons eontain only 
words that bave already been taught. The teacher wil! 
klmw wh|ch of these words bave been missed and will 
select from his list those to which speeial attention should 
be direeted, making prominent the parts in eaeh that 



GENERAL REMARKS ON WORK OF FORM II 103 

present difficulties fo the pupils, and endcavouring to give 
clear and vivid presentations of these words. The longer 
dictation admits of only a brief and brisk drill. 
For seat work in tlle Reviews. the pupils may write tire 
homonyms using thêm «orrêetly in short sentences. 
V. Page 90. In the work of Form I, twenty-eight 
homonyms have been taught; the more familiar homonym 
has been first embodied in sentences and repeated several 
times belote the other is introduced. The two are not 
brought together in the same sentence or even in the same 
exereise until thc close of the vear's work. They are herc 
eolleeted in pairs and illuArated in short sentenees. 
Should pupils ever l»e in d,ubt, they mav consult this lift. 
This applies with speeial f.r«.e t- re,re advaneed classes. 
These hom,nyms shouhl l»e taught on the h«,ard from 
sentenees showing elearly the meaning uf eaeh. 0ther 
sentenees may be eompuscd l»y thc pupils, to show that they 
understand the words. These sentences shuuld be eare- 
fully supervised. 
VI. One hundred and sixty of the diflïcult words of 
Form I are arranged alphal»etically and inserted in the 
OMario Public School Speller as a review of the work 
donc in Form I. and as a ïuundati«,n for the teaehing «,f 
the Exereises in the Otario Public ,','chool ,ç'l)eller for 
Form II. 

GENERAL REMARKS ON THE WORK OF FORM II 

I. The diffieult common words (Text-book, page 1) 
have been taught in Form I, but the pupils should 
tested before proceeding with the lessons of Form II. The 
teacher may get from the pupils' books a list of those 
words misspelled by several and use this for drill pur- 
poses. This list of words forms a foundation for teaching 



104 SPELLING 

the spelling of words in Form Il. Each pupil should 
keep a list of his difficult words. See pages 11-12, 48. 
]]. The General Outline of Lesson Procedure is 
essentially the saine as for Form I. 

LESSON" 1 
The first three sentences (Warm sprain) 
eontain the words of the first two eolumns. The teacher 
will proceed as in Form I fo develop the meaning and get 
the correct pronunciation of eaeh difficult word and then 
teach the spelling. 
Iain, grain, etc., will be taught together, also maid, 
|»raid, etc.., but the non-phonetic words will be taught in 
the order in whieh they corne in the sentences. "What 
are the middle letters in tain? Which letter is hot 
sounded?" They are undêrlined as in Form I. 
In the saine way, grain, chai,, etc., mav be taught. 
"What are the first two letters?" "What letters say a?" 
" What are the first two letters in aids?" 
grow. The ]ast two letters? The last letter? Write 
grow and under it growing. Compare. 
uncle. The first two ]etters? The last three? The 
letter after n, or hefore L 
wear. What are the midd]e letters? (Çnderlines ea.) 
('hanze w fo b. 
si]ver. The ]ast three ]etters? 
surfer. How many l's? What letter before r? 
( Under]ines fer.) 
much. The last two letters ? What letter follows u ? 
from. The ]ast wo letters? 
The eachcr bas now written on the board for Lesson ], 
the words in column , and a].¢o the words aids, grou', 
u'ear, muc, u,cle, from, surfer, and sih, er. 



DICTATION 105 

Before beginning to dictate, the teacher should be 
certain that the pupils can spell all the words. No 
guessing should be allowed. If is I,etter that the pupil 
should leave a hlank than that he should attempt to spell 
a word of whiçh he is in doubt. 
The form for the dictation lesson should be kept uni- 
formly, as : 
DICTATION 
John Brown ]Iay 27, 1915 
If there be many errors, it will probably show that the 
lesson has been too long or too hard or that thc teaching 
has hot been effective. The class should be exhorted fo 
have, if possible, no errors. If errors are ruade, the correct 
form should be taught and rewritten two or three times, 
and the pupils should be encouraged fo eml»hasize in 
spelling orally, and to underline, in rewriting the words, 
the parts which have been corrected. 
The Review Lessons have longer dictation and, there- 
fore, the drill on the difficult words nmst be donc quickly. 
On pages 23-26 of the Text-book there are 320 of the 
more diflîcult words. These may be taken in about eight 
or ten lessons. The words missed should be reviewed, and 
the difficult words taught and dictated in short phrases 
or sentencs, the pupils writing onlv the words. A eo]umn 
or two nlay well be assignêd and prepared for a spelling 
match, oral or writtên. When the pupils are in doubt as 
to the spelling, they may be directed to eonsult these 
lists as thêy would a dictionary. 
The three sentenees making up the tir.et lêsson, page 
27, Exêreise I, Text-book, will be taken up as illustratêd 
in Form I. Similar words, such as daily, dairy, dainty, 
will bê taught togêther. The word gaiters rnay also be 



106 .qPELLING 

taught with these words. The letters following the first 
will be noted, underlined, and eompared, etc. 
(;allop, gallo, mav be taught together. " What are 
the last three letters in each?" "The letter after l?" 
imilarly, daily, weekly. 
The seat work mav be arranged in two eolumns of 
three words eaeh and sentenees mav be written bv the 
pupils opposite each word. fo show that the meaning is 
understood. For seat work in Exereise 3, the pupils mav 
write the words in sentences of their own construction. 
Thev may also eopy the following: 
lady baby pony fair 
ladies babies ponies hair. 

hox.--I have a paper box. 
boxes.--We have paper boxes. 

fix.--I will fix the rack. 
fixes.--He fixes loeks. 

sky.--The sky is blue. 
skies.--The skies are dark. 

doesn't, does not ; etc., weary, fear ; skate, skating. 

man woman gentleman cherry berry fly 
men women gentlemen eherries berries flies. 

The 32o diflïeult words on pages 4ï-50 of the Text- 
book, mav be taken in about eiht or ten lessons, after the 
manner of the review of difficult words, pages 23-9.6 of 
the Text-book. The homon'rns illustrated on pages 51-54 
of the Text-hook, have been given before, separately and 
repeatedly, and are here represented in pairs. These 
bonmnvm. sboul,l alwavs be presented in short sentences 
whieh shov the distinctive meaninc of ea«h. On page 54, 



ILLUSTRATIVE LESSON. FORM III, JUNIOR 107 

four leading rules are given; number 3 has hot been 
sufficiently illustrated at this stage to adroit of arriving 
at the rule by induction. 

LEADING RULES 

Rule 1.--Examples have been given in Form I, Text- 
book, pages 5, 9, and 11. 
Rule 2.--The examples in the Text-book, seat work, 
page 41 and page 46 lead up fo Rule 2 indu,tively. 
Rule 3.--The scat work of page 41J, ex. 27; page 42, ex. 
32; page 43, ex. 34; page 6J, ex. 11; page 61, ex. 13; 
page 63, ex. 18; page 6t, ex. 19-, page ;5. ex. "»)', page 
66, ex. 23 and 24; page 67, ex. ?6; page 6s, ex. 27; page 
69, ex. 29; etc., will furnish abundant material for in- 
ductive lessons leading fo Rule 3. 
Rule 4.--The examples on page 28, ex. 4; page 34, 
ex. 16; page 35, ex. 18 ; page 37, ex. 22; page 4, ex. 2." 
give sufficient material fo lead up fo Rule 4 inductively. 

ILLUSTRATIVE LESSON, FORM III. JUNIOR 

For General 0utline of Lesson Pro(.edure see pag 91. 
Lvsso." ToPIcs, page 55, Exercise 1 Words: ivory, 
orphan, orchard, celery, lettuce, rhubarb. 
Sv.-TE_-CV.S : Two orphans knife. 
DFVELOPIENT OF MEAN'IN'G.--'OW many know a 
child who has neither father nor m«,ther alive?" " How 
many know a child who ha. only one parent alive?" 
PaO_'UNClAWlOX-.--" What naine is given fo children 
whose parents are dead?" Teacher pr«,nounces clearly. 
Then pupils pronounce. "What is the last sound you 
hear?" (This is a type of word in which careless pro- 
nunciation induces wrong spe]ling.) 



108 SPELLING 

SPELLING.--'" What two letters after or ?" (The teacher 
underlines them) "The last two letters?" He writes a 
in coloured chalk. The pupils point out the letters that 
sound ]ike f. The teacher asks several pupils fo look 
closely at the word and spell it from the board after pro- 
nouncing if. The pupils write if on the board. 
The pupils look closelv af the word and observe if 
intensely. They close their eyes and try fo sec the word. 
Individual pupils are asked fo pronounee and spell the 
word with eves closed. The board is covered and the 
pupils are directed to write the word. The teacher asks 
several pupil. to write if on the ]»oard, taking precautions 
that the word be hot written incorrectly. 
ME,tXIXo.--The meaning of tu'o is already kmown. 
PRoxt-cIaTio.--Several pupils are asked fo say two 
orphans. 
SPELLIxo.--The teaeher writes tu'o orphans on the 
board. "What letter after t ?" He writes u' in coloured 
chalk or underlines it. He teaches the spelling of tu'o 
orphans and drills as in the preceding word. 
Mr.,txIxo.--'" How many have seen many apple trees 
in a field?" 
PROXt'.'¢CIATIO.--" When there are many apple trees 
in a field. what do we eall if ?" Asks several pupils fo pro- 
nounce the word, paying attention fo the sounds of ch and 
ard. 
SPELLX'c,.--He writes orchard on the board. "What 
letters follow or?" (Underlines ch.} "'What letters 
follow ch ?" He writes a in coloured chalk. He asks the 
pupils to observe and spell from the board and write on 
the board. A moment is given for intense observation. 



ILLUSTRATIVE LESSON 109 

The pupils close their eyes, visualize, pronounce, and spell; 
then write in their books and on the board without help. 
][EANING.--" HOW many havc secn elephant's tusks?" 
" What colour arc they ?" "You bave ail seen the keys of 
a piano or an organ. What are they madc of ?" 
PlO,'ç,'cI.TioN.--The tcachcr pronounces the word 
and asks several pupils fo pronounce it, making three 
syllables without cmphasizing unduly the sound of o. 
SPELLING.--I[e writes it'ory on the board. "What two 
letters follow i?" (Underlines fo) ivory. IIe writes o in 
coloured chalk. He tcaches and drills as in orphans. 
MEANIX'G.--The pupils are fanfiliar with the object. 
PION-UNCI.TION.--Thc word is pronouneed and used in 
a sentence. The knife has an ivory handle. 
SP.LLI.'G.--The teacher writcs l«nife, underlining 
Other words beginning with lt'n are named; for example 
le,dt, l«mt. These are written and kn underlined. 
MENLa.--What do you call this part of a knife? 
(He shows the handle.) 
Pno-çx'cI:TO'.--He asks several pupils fo pronounce 
the word. 
SPELLING.--He writes andle on the 1)oard. "What 
kind of handle had this knife?" Ite writes ivory-hand/ed 
and underlines le. "What are the last two letters?" 
IIe drills as belote. "What joins ivory fo handled?" 
(Shows the force of the hyphen.) 
ME.NIC,.--" How many have eaten lcttuce ?" 
pro.,,-r:NCI.lioN.--The teacher says this word very dis- 
tinetlylettis. Then he asks several pupils fo pronounee 
if. 



110 SPELLING 

SPELLING.--e writes lettuce. " Look at the last part. 
What k.ttcrs folow let?" IIe writes tuce in coloured 
chalk. " What are the last two letters?" " tIow many 
l's?" "' What letter cornes after t?" Ite asks several 
pupils fo pronounce and spell lettuce, and several pupils 
fo write if in work-books or on the board. He directs 
pupils to observe intensely, fo close eyes, and to try to see 
the word and the order of the letters. The pupils pro- 
nounce and spell individua]l" with eyes closed. He asks 
scveral pupils fo write in their work-books and others to 
write on the board without help. (If a pupil cannot spell 
orally or write the w,rd, he tells the tea«her. The teacher 
uncovers the bç,ard «,r shows him the word written large 
on a card, then quickly corers if and the pupil writes if.) 
ME..x-\'.---"Wc bave a vegetable with long white 
stalks and light green leaves. We eat the stalks and throw 
away the leaves. What is if called? How many have 
eaten celer)'?" 
Pr, o-t-.x-cm-.--He asks several pupil. fo pronounce 
the word. 
SI'ELLI.\'G.--HC writes the word. " What is the first 
letter?" "]I«w manv l's?" " What is the la.t letter?" 
'" The last three?" Ite underlines cel in celerv. Drill as 
in the preceding word. He writes parcel, underlining cel. 
M.«.x'.'a.--'" We bave an early vegetable with lare 
green leaves. We cook and eat its green stalks. What is 
it called ? 
Pr, o\-c.x-c.çTm..--tIe pronounces the word distinctly 
and ask. several pupils fo pronounce it. 
SP.x-.l-Ic writes rbbarb. These are the hard 
parts. He undcrlines r],u and a. He asks several pupils 



TEST 111 

to pronounce and spell the word. H drills as in orph,«s 
and lettuce. " What other word do you know beginning 
with rlt ?" (r/yme) " Which letter is hot sounded?" 
" Why did the orphans wcar black dresses?" 
writes àress and then dresses under if, and the pupils com- 
pare thc forms. 
Bcfore the test the pupils may 1,e giron further rime to 
rewrite the diflïcult words or to transcribe the diflïcult 
sentences. 
TEST 
DCT_TO..--The pul,il. will turn fo a new page in 
their work-books and write these sentences fo the teacher's 
dictation. See pages 40-4, and Note 9, page 9.q. 
DEECIOX OF r,oRs.--The lnarking of the errors by 
the pupils from the written work on the board or from 
the Ontario Ptblic Scloo/ ,'peller will follow, the teacher 
supervising the work as much as possible. Sec pages 44:-7. 
('OaECTO. Or EOas.--The attention of the pupils 
vill be directed to the correct forlns of the word. mis- 
spelled, and the causes «,f the errors will be noted in- 
dividually. Sec pages 47-56. 
REWTlXt}.--Aftcr the missed word. bave heen thor- 
oughly taught, each pupil may write out two or three rimes 
correctly from the board and in his w,)rk-book the sen- 
rentes which contained his errors, underlining the diflïcult 
parts of the misspelled words and emphasizing these parts 
orally. Pupils should incorporate in their own sentences 
their corrected mistakes. 



HISTORICL  --,:b1lON