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COUNTRY JOURNALISM
BY
CHARLES LAUREL ALLEN, M.A.
Instructor in Journalism, University of Illinois
THOMAS NELSON AND SONS
NEW YORK
1928
Copyright, 1928
THOMAS NELSON AND SONS
PRINTED IN UNITED STATES OF AMERICA
CONTENTS
Parti
EDITORIAL
I. Community Journalism and the Country Editor 1
II. The News Functions of the Community Weekly 14
III. The Interests of the Country Reader 21
IV. News Sources in the Country Town 34
V. Collecting Local News 46
VI. News Writing for the Country Paper 56
VII. Big News in the Country Community 74
VIII. The Community Paper's News Policy 90
IX. The Use of Editorial Comment in News Stories 106
X. Country Correspondence 113
XI. Farm News 135
XII. Feature Stories 154
XIII. The Editorial Page 179
XIV. The Editorial in the Country Paper 192
XV. News Editing and Display 210
XVI. Make-up. 234
Part II -
ADMINISTRATION
I. Surveying the Community , 257
II. Making Minutes Count 276
III. Self-Advertising 290
IV. Circulation Problems and Helps 312
V, The Value of Country Newspaper Advertising 330
VI. Selling Local Commercial Advertising 339
VII. Non-Commercial Advertising 360
VIII. Farm Advertising 382
IX. Special Pages : 391
X. Classified Advertising 402
XI. National Advertising 413
XII. Rates 423
XIIL Problems of the Combined Newspaper and Job Printing
Shop 436
XIV. Methods of Speeding Up Production 452
XV. Cost Accounting 463
XVI. Accounting and Records 484
THE COUNTRY NEWSPAPER
I AM A country newspaper.
I am the friend of the family, the bringer of tidings
from other friends; I speak to the home in the evening
of summer's vine-clad porch or the glow of the winter's
lamp.
I help to make this evening hour; I record the great
and the small, the varied acts of the days and weeks
that go to make up life.
I am for and of the home; I follow those who leave
humble beginnings; whether they go to greatness or to
the gutter, I take to them the thrill of old days, with
wholesome messages.
I speak the language of the common man; my words
are fitted to his understanding. My congregation is
larger than that of any church in my town; my readers
are more than those in the school. Young and old alike
find in me stimulation, solace, comfort. I am the chron-r
icier of man's existence.
I bring together buyer and seller, to the benefit of
both; I am part of the market place of the world. Into
the home I carry word of the goods which feed,/^nd clothe
and shelter, and which minister comfort, health, and hap
piness.
I am the word of the week, the history of the year, the
record of my community in the archives of state and
nation.
I am of the lives of my readers.
I AM THE COUNTRY NEWSPAPER.
Bristow Adams in Canton Sentinel.
PREFACE
WITH the passing of the country printer-editor who served
in all capacities from office boy to editorial writer, have come
vast and significant changes in the entire field of community
journalism. A tendency for small newspapers to consolidate
has made for larger and more powerful newspapers in the small
communities. The investment in the average country print
ing plant has increased from a few hundred dollars to several
thousand. Modern equipment has made it possible for com
munity papers to be as well printed as any city daily, and
modern methods have made journalism in the small town a
very gratifying profession.
These many important changes have increased, emphasized,
and varied the problems of the community newspaper editor-
owner. His work is constantly becoming more that of the
executive and administrator and less that of the mechanic.
And yet, the successful editor must know the fundamentals of
every part of newspaper making in order competently to su
pervise and direct his staff members in the performance of
their various duties.
It is for the purpose of treating these numerous problems
of the editor of a community newspaper of today that this
book is written. Primarily, it is a book for the student of
journalism who seeks a knowledge of the best practices in the
country field. That the book may also prove helpful to those
men who have been many years in the profession, is the hope
of the author. If certain practices are recognized to have
definite and great value, it is only to be expected that these
practices have long been known to a majority of the better
country editors. It is also certain that many of the methods
used successfully by some country editors will be gladly wel
comed by those men who are constantly seeking to better their
own newspapers.
The author's aim throughout has been to give the theory
necessary to a clear and thorough understanding of the prob
lems of community journalism, and to supplement this theory
with facts and actual examples taken from the practice^ of
community journalism. With very few exceptions, the stories,
advertisements, and other illustrations in this 1 book have been
taken from country newspapers. It is the author's firm belief
that the student will learn more easily and more thoroughly
from examples that actually have been a part of some com
munity newspaper than he will from so-called "perfect 7 '
examples, which are usually not representative of present
practices and tendencies. The examples used are necessarily
good illustrations only of the point for which they are in
tended. They include errors of various kinds commonly found
in community papers of today.
Those theories which in actual practice have proved unsatis
factory and those which have never been tested to determine
their practicability have been purposely excluded. New ideas
that have proved valuable in some offices have been included
in the hope that they will be helpful in other offices.
A special attempt has been made at all times to show the
differences between methods most satisfactory in city and in
community journalism. Variations of the phrase, "In the
country field there is this difference/' occur many times to
emphasize the peculiarities of journalism in the smaller com
munity. Those city practices which have proved helpful to
the country editor are explained and recommended.
The chapters on "Cost Accounting" and "Accounting and
Records" should acquaint the student with business problems
in community journalism and with time-tested accounting
systems for the small shop. The material on accounting is
not intended to be sufficient to teach the student principles of
general accounting. He is strongly advised to get a course
in this subject before studying country journalism.
The author is indebted to Professor Lawrence W. Murphy,
director of the School of Journalism at the University of
Illinois, for many valuable suggestions.
Professor Ernest Bernbaum, chairman of the department of
English, University of Illinois, assisted very greatly in read
ing the manuscript and suggesting changes, which service the
author gratefully acknowledges.
Acknowledgments are also due the Porte Publishing Com-
PREFACE
pany of Salt Lake City, Utah, for permission to use their cost-
finding and bookkeeping forms, and to the editors of country
newspapers from which the many examples in this book were
taken.
PART I
EDITORIAL
CHAPTER I
COMMUNITY JOURNALISM AND THE COUNTRY EDITOR
To THE student of journalism, anxious to make the most of
every opportunity, the question of determining a lifetime
field in which to work is of the greatest importance. Should
he start at the foot of the ladder, with reporting work for a
big city daily, where many years of experience are necessary to
put him at the top, or should he begin in country journalism
where he can some day, not too far distant, hope to have his
own newspaper? The way this question is answered will
depend upon the student himself, and upon what he aspires to
be. If he wants power and influence, a comfortable living,
the respect of his fellows, and intimate association with them
in his work, he will find all these in country journalism. If
he would be rewarded both in money and in regard for his
life's work, he will be more sure of it in country journalism
than in many other professions. If he wants to live his life in
some sort of freedom and be contented, happy, and satisfied,
country journalism will help him do it.
There is great pleasure in being a country editor, as many
who have been in the business a long time will testify. The
following article tells what one man thinks of his chosen call
ing. It is written by Edgar White in the Inland Printer:
In addressing one of the press meet
ings at Columbia, Missouri, not long ago,
Walter WilliainjS,j^aji^^
. said : 'When
ineja ^
be a"coun^^9K^^agam. There's more
faW^m^JH^W'^SS^Mier thing I know
ofl' Any country newspaper man who
can look back through a decade or so
of experience will quickly understand
what the dean meant. ^ There's many
a man in country journalism today who
might have made his mark with some
large city newspaper had he not pre
ferred to cast his lot among people who
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2 COUNTRY JOURNALISM
called him by his first name and sent
him pumpkins and tomatoes at season
able times.
The country editor rubs elbows with
his constituency, and he knows their
every mood and peculiarity. There
pass before him every day the tight
wad, the envious, and the jealous;
likewise the generous, the hopeful, the
ambitious. As best he can he deals fairly
with them all, knowing his own frailty
and liability to make mistakes. With
alacrity and pride he assumes the bur
den of hewer of wood and drawer of
water for the old home town, 'atitf 'ft&TOf*
until the angel writes '30' on his brow
does he cease from telling the world
of the t virtues of his people and the
possibilities of the region in which he
Jives.
Berated for errors, he smiles and says
he will be more careful next time. Ridi
culed because his paper does not contain
as much news, or as clever editorials, as
the great city papers, fie shrugs his shoul
ders, but holds n,o;:gFUflge. Forgotten
when invitations are jsrent out for some
high society event, he ignores the slight
and tells his reporters to get 'as good a
story of the affair as they can. And
when patted on the back by good old
Farmer Jo^es, who fetches in a pumpkin
or watermelon, or perhaps a basket of
luscious pears or peaches, the clouds roll
away and the old world is again lighted
with good will and the joy of life.
The Extent of the Country Field. li one Is Inclined to
think that only a few people, and an insignificant few at that,
live in country communities, let him consult the last census
figures. There are sixty million people living in rural com
munities and towns of five thousand population or less. This
means that the country field is as large, considering the num
ber of persons concerned, as the city field. There are certainly
enough people to make country journalism an interesting call
ing and to offer the young journalist ample opportunity.
At present there are more than 13,000 weekly papers in the
United States, and they are increasing at the rate of about
fifty per year. There has been a tendency in the past ten
years for weekly papers to decrease in number but this de
crease has been brought about by consolidation, where the
weaker paper is absorbed by the stronger. There has been a
COUNTRY JOURNALISM 3
corresponding increase in the number of dailies that have been
started in small towns. It used to be thought that no com
munity of less than 20 ; 000 could support a daily, but today
there are many communities smaller than that which have
prosperous dailies. These dailies are country papers just as
the weeklies are ; they have the same problems and deal with
the same people. There is as much opportunity in the coun
try field for the student who wishes to do "daily" work, as
there is in any other.
Power and Influence of the Country Editor. John H.
Perry, President of the American Press Association, is the au
thority for the following article on the "Growing Influence
of the Rural Press." Mr. Perry has daily contact with hun
dreds of newspaper editors and readers and knows the situa
tion. Here is what he says concerning the power of the coun
try press:
/ The next time the Inquiring Reporter
/stops you on the corner and asks : 'Who
really runs the United States? 3 do not
answer according to your temperament
and prejudices 'The Interests,' 'The
Politicians,' or 'God knows.'
The correct answer is: The country
oiFceTEat T"controls this country
of ours, in t the long run, is the rural
editor, in his capacity as spokesman for
sixty million Americans who live and
earn their living on the farms and in
the villages and towns of 5,000 popula
tion or less.
It is not necessary to take the
writer's word for it. Ask any politician
whom you know well to tell you the
truth. Ask any representative of 'the
interests' big city bankers, for in
stance, or presidents of great railroad
or industrial corporations.
The politician, if he is above peanut
size, will tell you that he worries little
about what the city papers say; but
let even half-a-dozen country weeklies
in his home state or district open on
him, and he pulls down the lid of his
desk in Washington, Springfield, St.
Paul, or Jefferson City, and takes the
next train home to see what it is he has
done to make the farmers sore.
The Big Business man, if he is big
enough to be entitled to the designa
tion, will tell you that his business is
4 COUNTRY JOURNALISM
good or bad, depending on how the
country people like the way it is run;
and that what those country people
are thinking he finds out by reading,
or having others read for him, what the
country papers are saying.
Some Characteristics of the Country Editor's Readers and
His Friends. What Mr. Perry said about' the power of the
country press will be more clearly understood when we con
sider more closely the farmer and his family. These are the
people that make up most of the country community. What
they are and what they do will determine in a large degree
what the community is. Everyone is familiar with the ante
diluvian cartoons which depicted the farmer as the green-
looking simpleton dressed in patches or in rags and chewing
the well-known straw. Let us see what his real characteris
tics are.
Consider his purchasing power as shpw:n by the^wehase of
automobiles, which is a pretty good in^igjuef - a "community's
prosperity. Seventy-two per cent of all automobiles sold go
to people living in rural communities and towns : ~of>jjLess than
5,000 population. These cars, many of them, are bought by
farmers. They buy cars which cost as much and look as well
as any that are owned by city people. These are the same
farmers with whom the country editor deals and for whom he
writes the news of his community.
* Farmers also buy their share, or more than their share, of
other commodities which we generally associate with citified
persons such things as silk stockings, cosmetics, and luxuries
of all kinds. The average farm family, according to Mr. Wil
liam H. Woodin, president of the American Car and Foundry
Company, spends more than $2,000 every year for things
which are not necessary to raise crops. The total sum that is
spent by farmers in the United States for these things with
which to live well, is the appalling sum of thirteen billion dol
lars a year. There are six and one-half million farm families
in this great commonwealth and they look for their news and
their editorial guidance to the weekly and daily papers pub
lished in their local communities.
It will be seen that the country editors of the United States
are very comfortably situated so far as potential possibilities
COUNTRY JOURNALISM 5
are concerned. They have a majority of the people of the
country in their communities, and they have a majority of the
wealth and buying power of the country as well. There are
greater opportunities for the country editor than have ever
been imagined, and today he is making use of them as never
before.
One must realize from the above figures that the farmer of
today is far from being the character depicted in the comic
strips. People living in country communities are quite as
human as those in the city indeed, in many ways they are
more so. They live and amuse themselves in much the same
ways as do their city cousins: drive cars, have good clothes,
are very much civilized, and are coming to be as well educated
as anyone else. They have money with which to buy things,
and they spend most of it in neighboring country towns.
The Country Newspaper o Today. From the little, poorly-
printed paper of a decade or more ago the country newspaper
has come to be an advertising medium of power, and a chron
icler of news which is relied upon to cover thoroughly the
local field. Instead of printing a four-page paper, half of
which is ready-prints, the country editor today very often
runs as many as twenty-four pages in a single regular issue.
Many country papers are printed in the best-equipped print
ing plants that money can buy. They are nearly all set on
linotype machines which cost around $3,000, and are printed
on presses which cost several thousands more. The old print
shop where everything was done by hand is completely out of
date and there are few papers that are hand-set today. The
country editor of today has many thousands of dollars invested
ia~his plant and spends many more in publishing his paper.
Qjiads^ur^-t0 Botice, if he reads country newspapers-^tt-all,.
that they are in general vjg^j^.prmt^ f nd^titat they look
While some of this appearance
may be due to the fact that certain country editors ape the city
dailies, some of it is also due to the fact that as much caie is
taken to make the country paper attractive as if it were a
large daily. The news in these papers is mostly all local, be
cause that is what interests the readers, and the advertise
ments tell what local merchants have for sale.
6 COUNTRY JOURNALISM
The Editor Himself. Changes in equipment for country
printing offices and in the appearance of country papers have
come about becaulse the country editor of today is far from
being the poorly-dressed, puny-looking, poverty-stricken per
sonage that he has been depicted in the past. The A country
editor today is a live business man ; he has to be, to live in a
community that is up and coming. He has much money
invested and he must know how to take care of it. He is not
starving to death; if he were, he couldn't be hiring a force of
from five to twenty-five men to work for him and be paying
himself a salary of from $50 to $100 a week as he does. Be
sides a reasonable salary, he gets the profits from his business.
Neither is he some kind of character who has happened to
drift into journalism after he has failed at everything else.
More often than not he has gone to school to learn his profes
sion and is a college graduate. He is respected in his com
munity and is looked up to as a leader and one of the town's
most prominent citizens.
Usually the editor belongs to several associations for the
general good of the profession and he knows what is being
done and why It is being done. He knows the power he wields
over the votes in his community and he is judicious in its use.
He gets features for his paper from the best writers and from
the best artists in the country, and Tie is aided by cooperative
organizations in getting national advertising at rates which
pay.
Chances for Financial Success. The fact that 13,000 coun
try editors are today making so much money that they con
tinue to stay in the business even though many of them could
go elsewhere if they so desired, argues that country journalism
offers opportunity for financial success comparable to that
offered in any similar undertaking. When local merchants
thrive, the editor's opportunity for financial success is greater,
and today farmers are spending most of their thirteen million
dollars in their local communities. Bob Mooney, of Temple,
Oklahoma, does a $2,000,000 business by advertising in coun
try papers to bring farmers in to trade with him. Fred P.
Mann of Devil's Lake, North Dakota, has built a department
store that any city would be proud of in a town of less than
5,000. National advertisers are learning that to reach the
COUNTRY JOURNALISM 7
consumer living in rural districts there is only one way and
that is by using the country newspapers. Country journalism
is paying financially so well that more than 13,000 editors and
their thousands of .assistants would not trade their jobs for
any others.
The Country Editor and Leadership. Once, the country edi
tor was considered as a necessary evil, some one who had to
be tolerated but who was to be considered as inferior to almost
everyone else. That is changed. Today he is respected as he
should be. Let us see what Mr. Perry has to say about the
country editor of today:
They (farmers) look to the country
editors for leadership, and the country
editors have made their leadership effec
tive by organizing. That is the new
thing that has made the voice of the
rural press effective organization; it is
also what has made the publishing of
country newspapers profitable.
The country editor of today has a
standing in his community and a respon
sibility to it comparable with that of
the banker, the doctor, or the minister;
perhaps a little of all three. He has
a personal relationship and contact with
his readers such as the editor of a city
paper can never hope to attain. The big
city newspaper is edited impersonally,
perforce, for the accidental fraction of
city people who may happen to get
hold of any particular issue. The coun
try weekly is edited ^ personally , for the
entire community within its circulation
limit. The result is a different type of
journalism in every respect.
City journalism is founded upon the
sensational, the unusual, the abnormal.
Country journalism has as > its base the
every day comings and goings of com
mon-place people, their fairs, and church
socials, their breeding associations and
farmers' institutes, their births, mar
riages, and deaths; the emphasis is upon
the common welfare and the individual
good.
The country editor must not merely
know the people he serves, to succeed;
he must be of them. Individually and
collectively he is the force that poli
ticians and Big Business must, reckon
with first in the conduct of this nation's,
government and in the operation of i^
commerce and industries.
8 COUNTRY JOURNALISM
Personality Counts. When a "country newspaperman" is
spoken of, the emphasis is on the last syllable. In the country
and in the small town a man is first of all just what he is as a
person, and secondly, what he happens to be in order to make
a living. That is why the most important considerations for
a country newspaperman are an examination of the environ
ment he is in, and of himself.
Function o the Country Town. The majority of the Ameri
can people, it is said, are not far removed from the soil, and
are interested to a considerable extent in what is being raised
and marketed by the men who till the soil. Whether this is
true of the rank and file of city folk or not, it is certainly true
of the people in the small town. They are interested in the
country and in country folk. Why shouldn't they be? Most
of them have been farmers at one time, and living in a small
town does not make a person cosmopolitan. The farms and
the great expanses of land were there a long time before the
railroad came through and the town sprang up.
The small country town fulfills its function best when it
best serves as a community center and furnishes a good mar
ket for the products of the soil. In mining and industrial
districts there is little difference in the function of the town.
"Small-Town Stuff." It is still a standard joke to say that'
a thing is "small-town stuff." Actually the only rule that
can be applied to determine when a thing is "small-town
stuff" is the one of comparison with the city. If it isn't done
that way in the city it's just naturally "small-town stuff/' and
this phrase is usually said in a manner which aims to convey
to the hearer the feeling of disgust with which one born and
reared in the city looks upon those things which are "coun
trified."
The significant fact here is that city people are just as fond
of the things they do as are country people, but city ways are
taken as a matter of course to be the better. When small
town people are accused of provincialism, the limitations of
the average city dweller's views and ideas are never men
tioned. Who is there that has lived all his life in Chicago and
still believes that St. Louis, Minneapolis, Los Angeles, or even
New York offers all the advantages that are found in Chicago?
When those who are urbanites laugh about a quaint costume
COUNTRY JOURNALISM 9
or a peculiar custom of the small-town resident, they are show
ing in the strongest manner possible that they are more pro
vincial; more confining, more narrow in their views than the
same simple folk that they ridicule.
Residents of a small town are "countrified" in just the same
way that city people are "citified." Persons in small towns are
"just folks/' They do not profess to be what they are not.
Each one is known by almost everybody else, and everybody
shares in the joys and sorrows of everyone else. The "false
fronts" of life seldom appear and if they do, are soon torn
down. It is hard to appear to be what you are not in a small
town because the constant association with the same group
of people does not make for secrets. The braggart in a small
town is either laughed at or openly told to keep still. Life
here is relatively simple, where people have, to a great extent,
the same interests. There is a unity, everyone interested in
his town, and ready to help to make it better. It is true that
there are some who do not cooperate ; but they are the excep
tions, not the rule.
The student who plans to go into country journalism ought
to realize at the start that he is going into a community that is,
in the dignified sense of the term, "small-townish." City
methods and city ways just simply will not work in these sur
roundings. He must be ready to take a part in the affairs
of his community and work with the other people in that com
munity for the general good. He must be ready to associate
with people who are "just folks" and to be interested in the
little things, the commonplace things, the local affairs that
interest them. If he despises the country and the small-town
atmosphere, and has no appreciation of the character and
worthiness of these people, he will do better to find another
way to make his fortune and another field in which to spend
his labors.
Qualifications of a Successful Country Newspaperman.
With a sympathetic understanding of the people in the small
community the student intending to enter this field will do
well to consider those personal qualifications which make a
successful country newspaperman. There are, perhaps, no
certain qualifications which may all be found in all successful
io COUNTRY JOURNALISM
country editors but many of these qualities will be found in
the majority of those who are successful.
The successful country newspaperman will:
1. Be a booster. The country newspaper is the town's most
powerful force for boosting if it is rightly used. If you knock
your own town you boost the other fellow's and thereby take
business away from local concerns. When there is no business
in your home town, there is no place for a newspaper. Boost,
even when something needs correcting; a positive suggestion
showing the way to better the town will accomplish far more
than showing how poor the town is.
2. Be active in community enterprises. Commercial clubs
and other organizations for the betterment of the local com
munity are the best agencies for cooperation that the country
editor can have. He should be a member of every organization
looking to civic betterment, for not only will he here meet the
men with whom he has to deal but he will meet them under
favorable circumstances and in pleasant surroundings. There
is a spirit of good fellowship in the air at the Kiwanis meeting,
for instance, that makes for thorough acquaintanceship and
happy association.
3. Be informally friendly. Dignity is the screen behind
which, too often, the real character of the individual is hidden.
The country editor should have dignity, but he should not hold
himself aloof from his fellow men. It i's not "Editor Smith"
when a real country newspaperman is met on the street by a
friend in a small town; it is "How are you, Jack?" and there is
more real friendship and respect contained in the familiar
greeting than in the formal one. Country folks are not formal
nor do they like stiffness and formality in another. They like
to feel that they are every bit as good as anyone else, which
they are, and the successful country editor is the man who can
be sociable without being patronizing.
4. Be a "mixer" Nothing is important enough to happen
in a community and not important enough for the editor to
notice. The country editor can afford to spend much of his
time in getting better acquainted with his townspeople. The
COUNTRY JOURNALISM 11
best news to be found in a small town will often be heard in a
friendly conversation. The editor should be on good terms
with everybody; in a few words, he should be "one of the
boys." This does not mean that he must conduct himself in
a manner unbecoming a gentleman, but simply that he should
have the confidence of the people with whom he associates and
be trusted as one of them. Making friends and keeping them
is a big part of his job.
5. Be connected with some church. Connection with some
church in the community is a point in the editor's favor. Not
only are lasting and worth-while friendships formed here, but
the influence of Christian association acts favorably for him
upon the other people in the community. There is a great
deal of news about church affairs, now ignored, that is good
news for the country paper.
6. Be even-tempered. The days when the editor carried a
.44 to talk for him when an argument went the wrong way, are
gone. There is certainly all the chance in the world to lose
one's temper around a country print shop. Grief is as plentiful
there as anywhere else, but the man who "flies off the handle"
every time some little thing goes wrong will only make those
around him lose respect for him.
7. Be neat in personal appearance. Although it is some
times necessary for the editor to do some work in the back
shop, when he appears on the street or anywhere in public he
should be neatly dressed. Nothing counts so much as a clean,
neat appearance, even in a small town. He should try to show
the professional marks of his business more and the ink marks
less.
8. Be well-read. Keeping abreast of the times is one of the
important points in being successful. The editor must know
the latest developments in state and national politics, in litera
ture and religion. He must read the newspapers, periodicals,
state documents and literature for a liberal education, because
he is expected to bear aloft the torch of learning for his whole
community.
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9. Be a business man. Many a man has failed in country
journalism because he had no "business head." Besides being
a collector and interpreter of news for the community, the
country newspaperman must take care of his own business
interests. The theorist who has no ability in money matters
is not a success because bills must be paid. A sense of financial
principles and economics is among the most important quali
ties of the successful country newspaperman.
10. Have and develop other talents. In the country town
there are many things to be done and few that are able to do
them, which is the reason that the man who can do something
"out of his line" is always sought after and respected. Special
ability in music, dramatics, athletics, organizing, and other
branches comes in very handy to the country editor. Each
thing done for the good of the community is one more point
in the editor's favor.
11. Have a knowledge of his subscribers' methods of making
a living. The man who has spent his life in a mining com
munity will find it difficult to run a newspaper in an agricul
tural community because a working knowledge of the methods
and occupations of his readers is invaluable to the editor. He
cannot write intelligently for farmers unless he knows agricul
ture. Getting all the news is a problem for which there is
no solution unless the news-gatherer knows what affects the
living conditions of those who read his paper.
12. Have an education that will give him a command of
the English language. Poor writing has too generally been
the rule in country papers in the past and a study of only a
few country newspapers today will reveal many grammatical
errors, and examples of poor rhetoric and composition. There
is no reason why news stories in weekly papers should not be
as well written as those in daily papers.
13. Cultivate originality and resourcefulness. Doing the
same thing in the same old way with never a thought of im
provement may show perseverance, but it does not show
progress. The good country editor always strives to perfect
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his methods. Ideas for increasing business and securing greater
efficiency must be constantly occurring to him, and he must be
resourceful in planning to handle situations which arise
unforeseen.
14. Be a leader. Waiting for some one else to start things is
a good way to get nothing done. Campaigns for civic better
ment can well be engineered from the newspaper office. Those
intangible qualities that make a man able to start a project
f and carry it through successfully are essential qualifications
of the country editor.
15. Be able to cooperate. Too often the idea of leadership
is taken to mean that anything not begun by the country editor
should not receive his support. A real leader realizes that
other people have some ability and he is ready and anxious at
all times to help them. Cooperation will accomplish what is
impossible if only one or a few are working for a project.
16. Be tactful and courteous. Much can be accomplished
if it is attempted in the right way and little if some one is of
fended at the start. Every person with whom the editor comes
in contact is entitled to courteous treatment and such treat
ment helps build up a newspaper.
17. Be fair and tolerant. One who deals with so many
people as the country editor must accord each one fair and
just treatment if he is to succeed. He must learn that other
persons have ideas which are often as good as his and which
must be given the consideration they deserve. He must be
fair in everything he does, and tolerant in considering the views
and opinions of others.
CHAPTER II
THE NEWS FUNCTIONS OF THE COMMUNITY WEEKLY
The Field of the Metropolitan Daily. Daily papers are no
longer a luxury possessed by a few. The majority of people
living in small towns and rural communities enjoy the benefits
of reading a paper published in a neighboring city a few hours
after it is printed. They depend upon the metropolitan daily
to tell them what is going on in the city and in all parts of the
world since practically every large newspaper receives news by
wire through some press service. Happenings are wired to the
office a few minutes after they occur and this news is sent out
in printed form in a remarkably short time. Good distribu
tion facilities make it possible to disseminate news of the
world to every village and hamlet in the country.
Radio. The invention of radio has been perhaps the great
est annihilator of distance between the country dweller and
the world at large. The use of radio receiving sets makes it
possible for the farmer and small-town resident to "listen in"
on market reports, lectures, and programs coming from every
city of any size. There is no isolation today as there was a
decade ago. Modern inventions have established a marked
association between the country resident and the rest of the
world.
Prediction that the Small Paper is Doomed. Recognizing
the fact that anyone who so desires may know what has hap
pened during the day in distant parts of the nation, individuals
have from time to time prophesied that in a short while there
would be no community paper. Their beliefs are based on the
idea that in a few years at most there will be no function for
the weekly paper to perform. They see, quite correctly, that
the country paper cannot hope to compete with the metro
politan daily. Equipment, location, and personnel all tend
tp make it impossible for the small paper to get the news of
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COUNTRY JOURNALISM 15
other regions before the public in time for it to be news. And
so the passing of the weekly is predicted.
Considering all the seeming handicaps under which the
community paper has to be published, it would at first appear
to be a losing proposition. There is, however, something for
it to do, and it is something that no number of large dailies
can ever do. It is just as important as getting the news of
the world to the uttermost parts of it, but it deals with but
one community.
Community Interest. Scientists tell us that man is by na
ture a social being. One of the strongest forces within every
human being is the tendency to gregariousness, and it is this
force which makes men form towns and communities. The
person who finds delight in living aloof from his fellow men is
considered odd. The hermit is looked upon as being "iust a
little off."
It would be a peculiar association indeed if men could come
together and each one go on living as he had before. Society
takes as much as it gives. In order to enjoy what others have
done each one must in turn do something. Privileges are never
found without duties, for rights would never have to be defined
if man had nothing to do but act as he saw fit.
It would be an equally peculiar association if men could
band together without developing an interest in each other's
affairs. Communication must take place and when there is
communication there is an interchange of ideas, or at least of
information. Self-preservation alone demands that what one
man cannot do alone he must learn to do from some one else
and that he must sometimes ask for help.
If this association were among a very small group it is con
ceivable that all communications could take place by word of
mouth. The old New England town meetings were 1 a good
example of the way an exchange of ideas was effected among
the members of a small group. But when a group attains a
greater size the difficulties of such a method are too great to
admit of its being used. This is the situation that we find in
every community today. There is no town, no group of people,
so small that everyone can voice his sentiments and spread the
information that he knows to everyone else by word of mputh.
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Some means of disseminating news and ideas must be used that
will tell a man what his neighbors are thinking and doing.
This is the reason that a community weekly newspaper
exists. It is the means of spreading information to the towns
people; it is the bearer of facts and ideas concerning the things
that affect the lives of people in that community.
The Local Field Interested as the country dweller is in
what men in remote parts of the state and nation are doing,
his first interest is by nature in himself and his next great
interest is in his close neighbors. What he is doing and what
the men with whom he is associated are doing occupy his
thoughts to the exclusion of what everybody else is doing
until he has satisfied himself of local interests.
It is very evident then that if the community paper is to
perform any function it must be first, last, and all the time
a purely local institution. At all times the editor must keep in
mind the fact that his readers are his neighbors; that they are
his greatest inspiration, and that they want to know of things
close at hand.
Only the very unusual, the gigantic, the outstanding news
of the day gets into the city daily. The ordinary individual is
not noticed unless he departs from the ordinary and orderly
way of living. Fortunately for the small-town newspaper,
most of the people in the world are just ordinary human beings.
They live without attracting the world's attention; they come
and go and are not mentioned unless it happens that they have
achieved something that everyone the world over considers
great.
Yet these same men and women are accomplishing some
thing every day in which their neighbors are interested. Every
garden plot, every back yard, harbors activities that the people
in a country town want to know about. There is no event too
small to be noticed in the country paper and none too large
to be fully covered if it is of local interest. Every time a mem
ber of the community comes or goes, he makes interesting news
for the townspeople.
- The Newspaper Is More Than a Mirror. It has been said
that the country paper should be a mirror of the home-town
life. It should be more than this, for while everything that
happens there should be recorded or "mirrored" in it, it should
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also be thoroughly explained. The country paper should, if
anything, be a mirror which has power to show all sides and
phases of things; a mere mention of what takes place is not
satisfactory. Too often only the scantiest facts are given
about an affair which has been an event in the life of the com
munity. People in country towns are interested in everything
that happens and they want the news in detail. Little things
that are never mentioned in city papers are the essence of
many good stories for the country weekly.
The Threefold News Function o the Community Paper.
So far only one phase of the country paper's news function
has been mentioned getting all the local news. This is its
greatest function but it is not the only one. The second thing
the country paper can do is to get all the news of local interest
out of a story^ which is of general interest. The third purpose it
should have is to supply its readers with much material which
can best be called "local features.'' Local news, the country
paper's first service, will be considered at length in the next
chapter.
Second News Service Stories with a Local Angle. In the^
news of the day there are many stories of events happening
miles away from the place where the country paper is pub
lished. Since the city paper will probably be read by many
people in the country, a mere repetition of this story will not
be interesting to them. There is, however, much news of local
interest to be found in the stories printed in other papers. It
is the job of the country editor to find this news and to write
a story for local readers that will connect up the news of
the day in distant parts with something having a local touch.
Let us suppose that a story appears in the metropolitan
daily about the preparations being made in the city for "Fire
Prevention Week." Local people in the small town or city are
not interested in what the city is doing, but they will be in
terested in a story appearing in the hometown paper that tells
what was done there during Fire Prevention Week last year.
All regulations and suggestions of fire chiefs which will affect
the observance of Fire Prevention Week in the small town will/
be of vital interest to them.
In another case a man has given a speech before the com
mercial club of the nearest city. In that speech he has told
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of being abroad and of seeing the way in which farming opera
tions are carried on in foreign lands. If, as is often the case,
this man has been a state official at one time, or if he has been
known to many of the people in this town, a story of his talk
will be interesting to the people of the community. All of his
speech that has any relation to local agricultural conditions
will be worth while, and the rest of his speech will be read be
cause he was formerly connected in some way with local
people.
Stories of the accomplishments of former residents usually
come in this class of news. Boys who have grown up in the
community and have moved away to make their fortunes often
furnish the material for a good story with a local angle. The
work, the fortunes, and the experiences of relatives of a local
resident are interesting to the readers of the weekly paper be
cause they know the local man.
A majority of the stories appearing in daily papers will have
some bearing on local matters. This does not mean that for
every story in the daily the country editor can "make" one for
his paper. If he is alive to local situations he will not have
to make one; it will be there for him. In no case will it help
to rewrite a story which has no local angle, and in every story
of this kind the local feature should be played up.
Third News Service Features, Puzzles, Helps and Hints,
etc. The third news service that the country paper can per
form for its readers is that of supplying them with much
material which is neither straight local news nor general news
with a local angle. This includes columns of helps for the
housewife, recipes, "How to Make" columns, instructive
puzzles and games, party suggestions, and like material. These
"local features' 7 are essential and are of great interest to the
majority of people in the community. They can be 1 made
timely and when well written, keeping in mind the type of
reader that the paper has, will be appreciated as much as the
news story which is of local interest.
Most of the material now being printed in country papers
which would classify under this heading appears in the "ready-
prints" that are used. This is not the only kind available
even though there are many valuable suggestions in some of
the articles. A column of "How to Make" items that includes
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a story by Henry Hanson, who lives four miles north of town,
on "How to Make a Handy Work Bench for the Farm Tool
Shed/' will be read and appreciated much more than an article
telling the same thing which appears in the ready-print
section.
Housewives are always looking for household hints. Be
sides those that can be obtained from local housewives, the
editor can get many by being on the lookout for such things
in his reading and study of other publications. Furthermore,
he should not feel that he "has no time" to devote to figuring
out things that will help local readers. Special news articles on
any subject are worth while if they contain one thing that will
be helpful to residents of the community.
In this class will also come the stories of local interest that
would be called "feature" stories in a daily paper. An old
building that is being torn down may furnish the material for
a fine local feature story. The timeliness element would find
expression only in the fact that the building was being torn
down. The feature may bring in the fact that the house was
formerly owned by a wealthy rancher, or perhaps was the
original shack of some homesteader who has since become
very famous in the state or nation. Feature stories of all
kinds are good reading and the small town has many things
that deserve such stories. They will be considered at greater
length in another chapter.
An example of a "Hints" column follows:
Only a Few
Timely Hints for
the Home Owner
The time is at hand when the man
of the house can well afford to de
vote his evenings to making minor
repairs needed before the winter season
sets in. If the home owner does not
have time, skill or inclination to per
form the work himself, he should call
in the necessary artisans to do the work
for him. For example, he should
Have the furnaces examined and
cleaned and necessary repairs made.
Have all smoke flues swept clean and
defective parts replaced.
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Have chimney tops examined above
roof and brick work repainted and
metal caps repaired.
Have all roofs examined, repaired and
repainted if necessary.
Have all exterior painting done now
while the weather is good and the paint
will have a chance to dry properly.
Have all interior painting and decorat
ing undertaken at once.
Plumbing carefully checked for hidden
flaws that may cause serious trouble
when the weather becomes cold.
Have all general repairs and altera
tions undertaken at once.
By doing such work in the summer it
can be carried out without resort to
overtime and will be done by the me
chanics regularly employed by your con
tractors, whom they know to be com
petent.
CHAPTER III
THE INTERESTS OF THE COUNTRY READER
Accomplishing the Purposes of the Country Paper. Since
the news service of the country paper to its readers is three
fold : ( 1 ) To givejill the nejo?jpfjg^ -(2) To
give news of things in %er jgar^^ a
local angle, ancT'^SJ^To give n^ws^J^ fea
tures" and helpful material for "the country andjtpwn resident;
tliere must be a consideration oTffie lands of news that will
give this service. Anything that can be considered as news for
the country paper must be something in which the average
resident of the country and town is interested. Only by giving
him news of those persons and things with which he comes in
contact and which have a bearing on his life can the country
paper accomplish its purposes.
I. LOCAL NEWS
Interest in People. A large part of all the news appear
ing in the country paper will necessarily be about the
people in that community. As one woman reader said: "The
first thing a woman looks for in the country paper is the page
that has the items about people on it, for she wants to see what
everybody has been doing." This is not the only section of
the paper that has news of people in it, for most of the stories
that appear on the front page are also written about people.
News^ concemiiigL^^_inhabitants of the community them
selves, what they are doingf^
"portance in Ccbnlffltlliity paper 7 " TKis^will 'm^de ^Xl J^sSesl,
about certain persons, aiid (2)"Per6nailtem^^295^^I
things
he wants to read in the country
paper?
1. He wants to read about their activities. Probably 75 per
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22 I ' V E S H w E D
can you expect an understanding of the subtler values
from the masses of India? There is so little education
here."
There was a pause, after which he added, "The idea
of Gandhi is good. It is taking root in the minds of our
thinking people. That is its value. The masses only set
the stage for the demonstration. It is the moral resist
ance of thinking people which tells. Gandhi is trying
to link this resistance of thinking people with mass
demonstrations. Then satyagraha will have its full ef
fect/ '
Maiji confessed she did not understand all that. "All
I know is that after tomorrow the bazaars are going to
close," she said, "and I have to lay in food for two or
three days." *
"At least it makes you think about the struggle. But
if your lives were normal and undisturbed, you would
not bother."
"Maybe," Maiji replied, "Politics are not for me. I
admit it was wrong that they treated him so .badly in
South Africa. I did not know about it."
"No one knows the number of similar cases in which
our people have been humiliated. No one cares. But
one day you'll see a change. Often out of humiliation
strength is born."
Many other people spoke in the sarrie spirit. What
they said has always been in the back of my mind al
though many of the details I have now forgotten. But
the spirit of these conversations I can still remember
as an indication of the new way of thinking which had
crept into our lives. I was conscious, even at that young
age, that a change was taking place around us.
Some of us wanted to move with it, others ^ere on
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activities the name of the principal parties will still be the all-
important thing. The work that a member of the community
happens to be doing is. interesting only because of its connec
tion with the person.
Social activities are perhaps best classed as matters affecting
the family life, but all attendances at such events have news
value mainly because of personal interest. In fact the society
news even in the large dailies is replete with names of ho-sts
and hostesses, honored and invited guests.
2. He wants to read about their accomplishments. When a
neighbor has achieved something worth while it should be the
subject of a news story in the community newspaper. Every
one likes to share in the glory attracted to a person he knows ;
he likes to be there to praise and to feel that everything that
comes to anyone in that community is really in part his.
Election to office in local, county, state or national politics
makes a story about the man elected. Important positions in
trade organizations, professional societies, lodges, and clubs
which are filled by local men will be good personal news stories.
A prize won by a local man for expertness in any line, com
mendation from men higher up in the business, and recognition
of worth deserves to be chronicled in the columns of the coun
try paper.
An exceptional yield of wheat, a better way to do any
thing, a successful business deal, an opportune purchase,
taking advantage of an opportunity to accomplish things ; all
these are interesting to townspeople when they know the party
accomplishing them.
The story which follows is interesting to community news
paper readers because some one who is known to them has been
honored for an achievement.
(From the Greenwich (Conn.) Press)
Clarence Manero, son of Mr. and Mrs.
John Manero of 557 Steamboat Road,
who learned to play golf in Greenwich
is being congratulated by his friends on
having qualified in the national open
.golf championship held last week at the
Scipto Country Club, near Columbus,
Ohio. Manero finished next to last on
the list, but his showing is considered
most praiseworthy in view of the fact
that he beat out many nationally known
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golfers who failed to get under the
dead line.
Manero is only twenty years old, and
was presented with a handsome plaque
engraved as follows: "Awarded to the
youngest finalist, National Open Cham
pionship, 1926." The plaque was a gift
of the Downtown Country Club of
Columbus. It is now on display in the
window of Sobol's Sport Shop at 335
Greenwich Avenue.
3. The home life of neighbors. The Jones family having a
siege of the whooping cough would hardly get space in a city
daily. Yet it is worth while as news in a country paper simply
because everyone is interested in the family life of his neigh
bors in a country town. Readers want to know what fortunes
and misfortunes have fallen to the lot of everyone they are
acquainted with. Sickness and health, pleasure and business,
births, deaths, weddings, children's affairs, and everything af
fecting the family life of residents of the community is good
news material for the country paper.
4. What they are thinking. What one man thinks about a
subject will often influence the opinions of his neighbors on
that subject. This is especially true when he is in a position
to know about that subject and speaks with authority.
Opinions and comments by local citizens on all laws, ordi
nances, customs, situations, conditions, institutions, and affairs
concerning the community are of great interest to readers of
the country paper.
B.^Pgj^onffiks^-Not always will the news of a person's activ
ity be significant enough to warrant a long story about it. As
one country editor said: "If Pete Burns comes to town to sett
his cream and get some groceries, you can't write a column on
it." These numerous news happenings that occur in the coun
try community are, nevertheless, the best news, even if they
are small. When an item is not long enough to be run as a
separate story with a head it is placed with other items of its
kind in a "personal" column. Personals are news stories
similar to larger stories and differ from them only in the
amount of news given. They are generally about some person
in the community, although they may chronicle some event
without mentioning any particular individual.
1. Advantages of Local Items. The necessity for having
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local or personal items is appreciated when it is remembered
that most of the doings of the country town are minor events.
Personal visits, parties and entertainments, club meetings, and
other local happenings can sometimes be here recorded. It is
this page that is read first. Here the townsman sees his friends
and neighbors pass before him. It is the most interesting part
of the country paper for him. The reason this is so is that
these items, even though they are short, talk about men and
women. Names are symbols that represent an individual to
the reader, and no other part of the paper offers the oppor
tunity of using these names to a better advantage than does
the local column. In no other place can so much news be
put in so small a space.
Nothing is so rare as that species of human being who, deep
down in his heart, "doesn't want to see his name in the paper."
It is as natural to want other people to be interested in you as
it is for you to be interested in them. This is where the
personal item is most valuable. It is perfectly right for a man
to expect his own life to be recorded there as well as his
neighbor's. Friends are made or lost by the editor as their
affairs are or are not mentioned in the country paper. The
country newspaperman can give no better service to his readers
than a comprehensive, live, local page.
C. News Service Concerning Local Events. While it is
gener&^^ a local story
of an event without mentioning persons connected with it, the
news of the event itself will often be more important than
the personal side of it. Such things as parties, meetings,
dances, shows and entertainments, lectures and lyceum courses,
socials, parades, carnivals, club and lodge functions, court
trials, accidents, church affairs, fires, civic improvements, con
certs, celebrations, etc., are events which deserve good news
stories.
1. Advance News. Stories before the event takes place
should be followed by stories of the event after it has taken
place. There is much material about many kinds of events
that can be run a long while before the thing actually occurs.
It is generally the practice in country papers today to run only
one story about a coming affair and to neglect the possibilities
26 COUNTRY JOURNALISM
for other advance stories. Until the editor is absolutely sure
that he has told the story from every possible angle, he should
attempt to get a new or more complete story each issue about
every coming event until that event has passed into history.
D. News Service Concerning Local Institutions. Every
townlias^^ to serve
the community. Some of these institutions are maintained by
the public at large and are responsible to everyone in the com
munity. The public schools, which are maintained by taxes
from all citizens, try to serve them all. It is impossible for
each one who wants to know what the schools are doing to
visit them each week, and it is the newspaper's job to get this
news. It is not the newspaper's job to be continually praising
the work of the schools in the news columns; such material be
longs on the editorial page. Straight news about school affairs,
showing the taxpayers the kind of work the school is doing, is
what the news columns should contain.
Libraries, public meeting houses, rest rooms maintained by
the city, the fire department, museums, community show
houses, halls, and all institutions that are for the general wel
fare of the town, and are maintained by taxation or contribu
tions, are public institutions. The townsman has a right to
know how they are functioning and whether or not they are
satisfying the requirements of a good institution. He wants
first of all information on all phases of their use and activity.
The churches are not, strictly speaking, public institutions.
They do, however, serve the public in a commendable manner
by keeping the spiritual life of the community at its best, and
for this reason the public is interested in them. News stories
of church activities need not be sermons. Too much of the
-material run as church news in the country papers today is
made of moralizing statements. Everyone expects to hear the
pastor urge him to come to church and to hear him expound the
doctrines of theology, when in church, but this is not church
news; it is pulpit printing, and all who go to church will hear
the same thing there. Those who do not go to church want to
know what the church is doing and how it works. Interest
in church work must first be aroused through information
about its value to the community, and persuasion can come
COUNTRY JOURNALISM 27
only when the person feels that he should be a part of such a
worth-while institution. The newspaper is the only medium
through which the whole community can hear of church affairs,
and church news should contain this information in straight
news stories.
The way in which church news can be interestingly written
is shown by the following extract from the Earlville (111.)
Leader.
At the evening service, a group of a
dozen Epworth League, "Franklin Grove
Institute" boosters from LaSalle held
sway. They were: Marion Birke, Julia
Bird, Franklin Stevens, Dan Festus,
Wayne Caskey, Lillian Hamels, Esther
Swanson, Charles Hosutt Jr., Sarah
Bradley, Miss Hamerich, George Ham-
erich and Selena Spiers.
Rev. Lyons opened the services by
reading, I Cor. 13, and Paul Trump of
Polo, sang as a solo, "Spirit of God,"
by Neidlinger. He was accompanied by
Miss Matie Walters.
Miss Spiers, sub-district president of
the institute, acted as the chairman of
the evening. She outlined briefly the
scope of the program which covers July
12-18 and has as its aim, Christian train
ing, service and recreation. The registra
tion fee $2 covers tent or cottage and
furniture and office fee. Rev. L. V.
Sitler of Franklin Grove is registrar.
Board may be obtained at $8 to $10 for
the week at the cafeteria. There is no
library fee, although the Methodist Book
Concern has a depot on the grounds
where books may be purchased. A doc
tor is on the ground day and night.
Requests for reservations should be sent
to Warren Hutchinson, Steward, 111.,
not later than July 1.
E. News Service Concerning Public Service Agencies. -
This *j^^^ longer
without street lights; electricity has made it possible for the
small- town dweller to enjoy all the comforts of electric lights
and power in his home. Street railway systems have been in
stalled in many places to furnish transportation to the com
munity. Gas has displaced the old cookstove. Rarely are
these institutions which serve the public at large, owned by
the public. They are privately owned, and are permitted to
28 COUNTRY JOURNALISM
exist in the city because they are felt to be of service to all
inhabitants. When the electric light company advances the
rate it brings a storm of protest from users of electricity.
When improvements are made in the physical property of these
agencies, the benefit is widespread. The newspaper has a
service to perform here through its news columns where the
activities of each company should be recorded as news. The
connection between the agency and the consumer can be es
tablished only through the newspaper. Everybody wants to
know about the changes in these services because they will
affect the life of the whole community. Statements by public
utilities officials are not news when they contain a "puff" for
the company. Paid space should hold such material, but the
real news about developments in the street traction system,
gas, light and power plants, should be given the community
through the news columns of the paper.
An example of news about a public service agency, the
electric light company, follows. This item will explain the
interruption in the service in such a way that the users of
electricity will understand that it is not due to poor service but
to improvements which will later be beneficial to them.
LIGHTS TO BE SHUT OFF]
MONDAY FOR TWO DAYS
Current for electric lights will be
turned off Monday, May 7, and will
not be turned on again until Wednes
day, May 9, according to an announce
ment of the Central Electric Company
made last night. The current will be
shut off at 1 A.M. Monday morning.
The reason for this interruption in
service, as announced by the officials of
the company, is that the local plant will
be improved during the two-day interval
by having one of the old engines re
moved and a new Diesel engine installed.
The new engine is capable of generat
ing enough electricity to supply all local
consumers during the hours from 5 P.M.
to 7 A.M. and the remaining old engine
will be used in the future for service
in the other hours.
The officials of the company said that
they regret that the current must be shut
off on Monday as they know it will in
convenience many housewives who use
COUNTRY JOURNALISM 29
that day for washing. It was found to
be impossible to get the experts of the
Diesel engine people here at any other
time, however, although the Central
Company offered them an attractive
bonus if they could come in the middle
of the week.
Some will perhaps wonder why the
old engine could not be used during the
installation of the new one, and the rea
son it cannot is that the new engine re
quires a different placing which will
necessitate replacing of the common
drive shaft. It may be possible to turn
the current on as soon as the new engine
is in place, but it is unlikely.
This is the first interruption of more
than twenty minutes ~ in the service, in
the last two years.
F. , J!&5mjSk3^
d^ Factories, stores of
all kinds, garages, shops, offices of doctors, dentists, lawyers,
realtors, abstractors, are private businesses and professional
interests which serve the public. The newspaper should get
all the news about these places and give it to the readers for
their information. The grocery store at which a man trades is
a part of his life; the factory in which he works is his business;
the business places with which he deals are a necessary part
of his world. He is as anxious to know about them as he is
about the schools. These places are the town; they make up
the whole community for many persons during business hours.
It is a poor country paper that neglects to furnish its readers
with all the news happenings about the institutions that con
tribute to their physical life. Ask any man to tell you about
his community and he will begin by telling you how many
dry-goods stores there are, how many elevators there are, how
many places of business surround the square or line the main
street. Most of the campaigns, in country towns (and cities
as well for that matter), are for the purpose of boosting local
business and keeping trade at home. A new store or some
thing new about an established place of business makes a fine
story for the country paper; and it boosts local business,
which is another way of saying that eventually it boosts the
country newspaperman's business. Plenty of news about
trade and market places should appear in every issue of the
country paper.
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An example of industrial news follows from the Bellows
Falls (Vt.) Times.
PACKING HOUSE
OPENS OCT. 1ST
Cray Plant in North Walpole To
Have $40,000 New Equipment
Will Buy Hogs, Cattle and
Fowl FromJFarmers.
That nearby farmers will be given an
unlimited market at top prices for
hogs, cattle and fowl is the assurance
given by P. L. Stickney of Albany,
N. Y., who is moving his headquarters
to Bellows Falls with the formation of
a new Vermont corporation which will
operate the Cray Packing Plant in
North Walpole beginning about October
1st. Mr. Stickney is in town at the
present time supervising repairs to the
plant and the installation this month
of about $40,000 worth of new equip
ment.
The new corporation, of which S.
J. Cray, former owner of the packing
plant will be a director and stockholder,
will have as a resident plant superin
tendent J. B. Cuff of Buffalo, who is
the son of J. J. Cuff of the Cuff Pack
ing Co., Buffalo, and formerly general
manager of the Jacob Dold Packing
Co. of Buffalo. Mr. Cuff has been in
the packing game all his life.
^^
Just before an election, papers are full of announcements, by
officials of the city government. That has been in the past
about the only time the readers of the paper ever heard about
governmental affairs. Election news is very important if each
citizen is to exercise his franchise wisely, but most of the
material heretofore printed has not been news of the inform
ative kind. It has rather been the ideas and persuasions of
those in office and those trying to get in office. More news
of the election itself, where and when to vote, how to handle
COUNTRY JOURNALISM 31
a ballot, what offices are to be filled, what the duties of these
officers are, and actual information on the whole subject, will
be of more value to the community than political propaganda.
If material airing some one's views is to be printed, it should
be in paid space and not in the news columns.
What the city council did at its meeting will never be known
by the majority of people if they have to get it out of the
official proceedings of that body. They are supposed to be dry
reading, and are passed by as having no particular interest for
the average man. When a situation develops that does not
suit him, the voter wonders why he never heard of it before
and blames the municipal government for getting things in
such horrible shape. These very acts of the council, if written
in the form of an interesting news story, would be eagerly read
by that same man, and he would be better informed when he
came to cast his vote.
The newspaper has a double duty to perform in keeping the
public in touch with what the city administration is doing.
It must, first, keep the public informed; and secondly, interpret
the actions of the local government. These two obligations
should not be confused. The news columns of the good paper
give the reader all the news there is about a situation. The old
idea that a paper should give "both sides" of a question is
based upon the assumption that the actual facts cannot be
determined. 'Quoting one official as saying one thing and an
other as saying something that contradicts the first, does not
help the voter to cast his ballot intelligently; it rather serves
to confuse him. There are certain things that are facts, and
these are what the paper should print. Before any story is
accepted from an official the editor should do everything in
'his power to verify the facts or supposed facts in the case. If
the paper is Republican, the editor's first thought will be that
news from a Republican source is true. The real facts, how
ever, will not be printed if they are all taken from a story
put out for political purposes.
The kind of interesting, informative news story about com
munity matters that can be gleaned from municipal council
or town board proceedings is shown by the following legal
notice and the news story that could have been written from it.
32 COUNTRY JOURNALISM
(Legal Notice)
PROCEEDINGS OF
DOSEY TOWN BOARD
The town board of Dosey met Novem
ber 6, 1926, in regular session. All mem
bers present.
Road petition presented by Adolph
Anderson. Motion mada by W, C.
Chapman that petition be granted.
Seconded by Andrew Kimblom. Car
ried.
Motion made that Adolph Anderson
and Olaf Benson be awarded contract
from Adolph Anderson's residence east
to the Soo Railroad for the sum of
$75.0(1. Seconded and carried.
The clerk was instructed to notify
Paul Pahos that gates be put in at
Anderson crossing by order of the town
board.
Bill of Ivan Krouch presented.
Motion by W. C. Chapman that this bill
be tabled. Seconded by Andrew Kim
blom. Carried.
Motion made by W. C. Chapman that
$150.00 fire fund be transferred to drag
fund.^ Seconded. Carried. The clerk
was instructed to notify treasurer the
above amount stated.
(Suggested News Story)
Adolph Anderson's petition that the
road from his residence east to the Soo
Railroad tracks be repaired was granted
by the Dosey town board at its regu
lar meeting November 6. This stretch
of road has been almost impassable in
rainy weather during the past two years
because of its soft surface. The con
tract for fixing this piece of road was
awarded to Adolph Anderson and Olaf
Benson at a compensation of $75.00.
The road will have the mud holes that
are now causing difficulty filled in and
part of the stretch will be graveled.
Because many farmers have com
plained of the crossing near Anderson's
place being open so that cattle could get
on the track, the town board ordered
Paul Pahos to erect adequate cattle
guards at that crossing.
The drag fund received a $150.00
transfer from the fire fund because the
board believed that for the remainder
of the year the amount remaining in
the fire fund would be sufficient and that
the drag fund needed replenishing.
COUNTRY JOURNALISM 33
H. News Service about Local Organizations. The country
reader's interest in people makes him want to know the news
about organizations in which these people play a part. The
news of the last Rotary or Kiwanis meeting is interesting be
cause it tells about the activities of a local organization as well
as because it gives the names of those concerned.
Organizations such as the community club, commercial club,
baseball backers, fraternal bodies of all kinds, league of busi
ness men, women's clubs, and boys' and girls' clubs furnish
news of great interest to community-paper readers. They
want to know what these various organizations have been
doing, what their programs are, who the persons are that are at
the head of the group, what the organization is doing for com
munity betterment. When the organization has a meeting or
arranges for any other kind of event, the readers are very much
interested in that event.
Local News Has Most Value. The attempt to classify
readers' interests given in the foregoing paragraphs is of value
only in helping the student or the country editor do his work
better. Local news is the most powerful, the most interesting,
the most necessary of all news for the country paper. The
above classification is open to the same criticism that can be
applied to all classifications, which is that some of the classes
overlap. It is very probable, for instance, that connected with
every event that happens in the community there will be
several people. Municipal government news cannot be given
without telling of the work of some persons. In the last
analysis, every bit of news ever published is in some way con
nected with one or more persons. It is hoped that the classi
fication here given will help the editor cover his news field
better because his attention will be drawn to readers' interests,
several of which are always present in any news story.
This outline applies only to news of purely local interest,
that is, news of happenings in the community. Much news
with a local angle will be interesting to local readers as well as
much general news. The successful country paper, however,
is not the one that prints much general news, but the one which
is full of live local stories about persons and things in the home
community. These local items are the only news that the city
dailies cannot give country and small-town readers.
CHAPTER IV
NEWS SOURCES iisr THE COUNTRY TOWN
Determining Sources. One country editor said that since
his town had 1,000 inhabitants he had 1,000 sources of news.
Probably this is overestimating the value of each individual
in the town as a regular news source. It is a fact, however, that
the editor can consider everyone in the town as a potential
news source. There will be some time when each of his ac
quaintances will know something having news value. The
biggest problem in connection with local news gathering is the
difficulty encountered by the average editor in judging news
sources. Rarely, if ever, is it the case that the editor will know
every person in his community; and it is not probable that he
will have an equal regard for each of his townsmen. The
tendency is for the editor to learn to depend upon a few par
ticular friends of his and perhaps some of his wife's friends to
help him get all the news of the town. The result is what can
be expected, the paper is full of personals each week about the
same people. This is not only inadequately covering the local
field, but it is making enemies of all those people who are
never mentioned in the paper. The writer is familiar with
a country newspaper which has from three to ten items about
the same family each week. These items have come to be the
laughing-stock of the town and everybody feels that "so-and-
so" is editing the paper. If all the items were actually good
news, it would be different; but most of them have little news
value and are simply reader advertisements for the man men
tioned, who happens to have a business in the town.
This situation arises from an agreement altogether too com
mon in small towns, between the editor and some few business
men, whereby the business men give the editor news items
about all the people who trade with them during the week and
in return for this the editor allows them to write several "ad-
yertising news items" to help their business. This practice is
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COUNTRY JOURNALISM 35
to be denounced in vigorous terms. If the country newspaper
is to be successful it must be run on a business basis. Free
advertising in the news columns does more to ruin the business
than any other thing.
The following local news and advertising items, clipped from
two and a half columns of local news, were obviously derived
from only one source:
Mr. and Mrs. John Doe entertained
Mr. and Mrs. A. E. Brown, Mr. and
Mrs. L. Smith, Mr. and Mrs. Geo.
Thompson, and Miss Frances at a wild
duck dinner Tuesday evening.
Oct. 23d is the last day for handing in
books to be given to the hospital at
Plymouth. If you have any books of
fiction that you would like to donate to
this worthy cause, kindly hand them to
Mrs. John Doe,
Remember that you can purchase
your Singer sewing machine on the in
stallment plan from us. John Doe Hard
ware.
We have three four-tube radios, which
will be sold to the first one with a ten
dollar bill, John Doe's Radio Store.
Mr. and Mrs. John Doe spent the
evening last Sunday at the home of
Mr. and Mrs. J. W. Peterson near Baden.
On Monday John Doe, together with
Art Burdick and Dick Smith, were up
near Uptown and installed a Magnavox
radio for Sam Jones. Mr. Smith brought
back two Holstein cows in one of
Wagner Bros.' trucks.
Come in and see the new five-tube
Crosley radio sets, in both one and three-
dial models, at the lowest possible prices.
John Doe's Radio Store.
On last Saturday Edward Kuhn, Mr.
Phillips, and John Doe erected a Moni
tor self-oiling windmill for Joe Donne
south of town.
John Doe and Mr. Beekman, the
Caloric furnace man, autoed to Seamore
on business Thursday.
John Doe was at Carlson on furnace
business Wednesday.
Need of Many Sources. ThjgM&l^^ of
He m^fc^^to cover th^^^ f jS]ff^^
attiBl^^ to
the idea that every person in town is a news source than to
36 COUNTRY JOURNALISM
suppose that only a few are worth going to see. It is not wise
to accept all news from persons in one business, because every
business place has many things happening in it every week and
all of these things that are news should be printed. Taking one
man's word for what has happened in his competitor's business
is sure to give an unreliable story. That competitor can be
seen and the reliability of the news checked. Fifty news sources
that give only one story apiece are worth far more than oae
source that gives fifty stories.
Testing the Reliability of News Sources. The fact that a
man is a personal friend of the editor does not mean that
he is a reliable news source. It is to be hoped that the editor
will try to make personal friends of men who are dependable,
but this is not always the case. There are few people in a
small community that are not interested personally in any
project carried on, but their side is not always the only side to
the question. In stories of things affecting the community
at large, such as school affairs, bond issues, paving and street
improvement projects, municipal government affairs, public
service concerns, etc., the editor must constantly be on the
alert for the fellow with "an ax to grind." In gathering such
news the only way the editor can be sure of getting the facts is
to consult many sources. The Tact IJiat a man holds a re
sponsible position in a ^Qmmunity does not make him a re-
Ifable news spurce. The possibilities of getting all the facts
from him may be less. Checking news by the use of many
sources is the best way the editor has of being sure that what
he prints is the truth.
Rumor. The story which just seems to "grow" without any
one really knowing its foundation, is the biggest bugbear of
the country editor. Often everyone will accept the story as
true, and it will be printed in the paper, only to be followed,
the next week, by a retraction. When this is done it shows
that the editor did not get the facts but accepted a nirrior.
Nowfi^^^ in the mistakes in names
found in country papers; and nowhere does it do more harm
to the paper. A retraction never Corrects the error; it merely
seeks to smopth over a bad mistake, $nd it always makes
people think that the paper cannot be relied upon. To say,
rr Rumor has it that John Jones was arrested yesterday on a
COUNTRY JOURNALISM 37
charge of drunkenness/ 7 when the person was David Jones and
the violator was not arrested for drunkenness, is a gross error.
It lowers the reputation of an innocent man, even though the
statement be retracted the following week, and it lowers the
reputation of the newspaper.
Making Rumor News. Rumor is one of the best aids with
which the country editor can collect news, but it is only an
aid. It affords the editor a chance to get the facts for a good
news story. He can get these facts by tracing the rumor until
he has found out what actually happened. If some one says
a thing happened, and there is no way to check the facts, let
the editor quote that person as saying so and the reasons he
gave for his statement. Jiumor at best is only a means to an
end and that end is the securing of, news ffiat tells the truth
and all of the truth. If the story cannot be verified, the coun
try editor will do better to leave it out altogether than to say,
"Bi/uinbf lias It, etc."
The Country Editor's News Run. There is often only one
'''news run" in the country town and that is the whole town.
Generally, too, there axe only one or two men to make this
run stnd they must make every possible news source every week
if the paper is to give a complete news service. This run will
consist of every place in the town where there is a chance to
secure a story or to hear a rumor that will help to get a story.
If there are ten stories in the town, ten of them should be
visited. If there are twenty-five offices in the city hall and
^g^g^lg^^ visiting only twenty-four of them is admitting
ffiat the paper does not get all the news, unless the twenty-fifth
office was not in operatiqii^,,
*" TttS^ouiitry editor's news run should be as definite and
well planned as any city run. If the places the editor visits in
his quest are left to chance, some source will be overlooked.
He should have a very definite idea when he leaves the shop
inhere he is going, and how long he can afford to spend there if
he is to get around to all sources. A workable plan is "to visit
all those places that can be made without an unnecessary
waste of time in going back and forth. If the town has only
bne business street there will be time lost in going to a place on
one side of that street and then to a place on the other side.
Time is' money for the country editor, and good planning in
38 COUNTRY JOURNALISM
making the news run will save time. System in visiting news
sources is important no matter how large or small the town is.
Personal Sources. Individuals are the most prolific sources
of news in the country town. Not every person in the town
has a nose for news, and even though he hears much that
would be news material he may not remember it when the
editor talks to him. There are always certain persons in a
town who have a greater opportunity to come in contact with
people than others. There are some who seem to know every
thing that is going on, from the birth of a baby to Mr. and
Mrs. , to the underhand methods being employed in the
school election. Whether they get this material through con
versation with neighbors, a constant prying into other people's
business, just gossip, or from personal observation, makes quite
a difference in the reliability of their news, but it does not
make any difference in the possibility of a news story in every
case. The local gossip is often the best news source the editor
has, i.e. A in giving him clues to good stories or to personals. It
will not be out of place to say that the editor's main business
is also to keep on "prying into other people's business" when
that business concerns and interests the community at large.
How else would news be found? The editor should make a
friend of the local gossips, and get all the material from them
he can, unless he finds by trying to verify his news that any
one of those persons has no regard for the truth and is trying
to discredit some one. This is often the case, but if the editor
is alive to his responsibilities such 'stories will never see the
printed page.
There are many other people who have a chance to hear and
see much news because of the nature of their businesses. These
persons are generally quite dependable sources of news. The
telephone operator has been lauded as one of the editor's best
news sources in the country town. It is true that a telephone
operator hears much that the community talks about, but she
also hears much that the community at large has no right to
hear about. The distinction between a man's private affairs
and those the public has a right to know is a very nice one
and one which many country people fail to recognize. Most
telephone companies give their operators to understand that
COUNTRY JOURNALISM 39
they are to tell nothing that they hear over the wires. The
only news that the editor has a right to print that he gets from
telephone operators is news which he has~verified by going to
the party concerned. This is a great deal, and the possibilities
that the editor can legitimately get from the telephone oper
ator every week will be numerous. News of visits, travels,
parties, and events of various kinds will be heard of through
conversations over the wire. When checked^ they make good
news items.
Places as News Sources. Those places which are jisited by,
the greatest number of people each day are 'theTbest .sources
of news for the country paper. When people get together
there is conversation and in it all the things of interest to those
people. The editor will therefore find it to his advantage to
visit these places as often as he can. The local post office is
a fine example. There the people come to*geE tlieir mail and
stand around while it is being distributed. Men meet who
do not see each other every day and they talk of what they
have been doing, what their friends have been doing, what
they have heard, and usually express many of their own ideas
of things. It is the one best place in the small town for the
editor to get his fellow men's opinions on community matters.
The postmaster will also be a good personal news source since
he sees many people every day who have come tp town and
generally learns what they came for without asking them.
Visiting th^Jr^ns for the purpose of getting personals is a
practice employed by many country editors. Here they learn
of arrivals and departures and the supplementary news facts.
There is no doubt that much good news is learned at the
trains, but there is also no doubt that if there is one place
that a person doesn't like to be queried, it is at the train.
Furthermore, the editor can get most of this news from other
sources in the town and do it without offending anyone. The
old method of accosting everyone who alights from the
"limited" and asking him all about everything, having the
trusty notebook in hand all the time, is worn out. There are
other and better sources of news. The editor can well afford
to meet the trains to get all the angles he can on news, such
news as he can get by conversation with others at the depot,
40 COUNTRY JOURNALISM
and then can verify this news and write it at the office. If a
reporter can't depend upon his memory for anything, he is
not in the right business.
If the town is a county seat, the courthouse is a good news
source. There are many offices he^eTxTwhich people from the
whole county come to transact business. The conversational
possibilities are also great since men meet who have not seen
each other for a long time. Most courthouses in country towns
are gathering places at certain times of the year when many
meetings are held there. There is also a vast amount of news
that can be gleaned from documents kept on file at the court
house offices. When court is in session the editor should, of
course, be present or have some capable person there to get
the court news.
All gathering places, such as club rooms, billiard parlors,
some barber shops, some garages everywhere that people
come together for common exchange of ideas and for fellow
ship are good news sources.
"Things" Which Are News Sources. Persons and places are
news sources, but there are certain things which will also
furnish the editor with much news. Documents of all kinds
will often furnish the editor with news material. The records
of the city council, the comijiunity association, civic organiza
tions, lodges, clubs, etc., will be included here. The old files
of the newspapers are one of the best sources of feature news.
The school or public library contains many current books and
publications which the editor may review for his readers or in
which he may find stories of local interest. Exchanges are a
good source of news and will be discussed in detail later.
Care should be taken that the document used as reference
is reliable. The files of the paper may be so considered but
may be checked by the memory of old-time residents or by
comparison with other documents if any doubt arises. Docu
ments of lodges, councils, etc., can be checked by officials and
sometimes by comparison with other documents. Books and
papers in the library can be checked against each other.
The following list of news sources will probably not include
all found in some towns but will suggest many more
possibilities.
COUNTRY JOURNALISM 41
County Judge: News of marriage licenses and marriages,
probates of estate, wills, visitors transacting business, mothers'
pensions, magistrate court cases, interpretations of laws.
Clerk of Court: Court proceedings documents, cases in
court, naturalization papers, visitors on business.
Auditor's Office: Hunting and dog licenses, tax records,
bids, reports of county commissioners' meetings and business,
election records, visitors, all county business such as roads,
bridges, county farm.
Treasurer's Office: Taxes paid and unpaid, expenditures
of county, problems of collecting taxes, helps to taxpayers in
sending in taxes.
Register of Deeds: Transfers of property, mortgages, ab
stracts of title with transfer, visitors.
Coroner: Accidents, sudden deaths, murders, suicides,
funeral arrangements since the coroner is a practicing doctor,
general county health news.
Sheriff: Arrests, prohibition activities, general condition
of county as to, lawlessness, occupants of jail, details of crime
apprehension, inspection of dance halls and dances (in some
states).
County Farm Advisers: General farm news, helps and
hints to farmers, news of particular problems of farmers,
scientific agricultural news.
County Superintendent of Schools: General news of
schools of county, teachers' examinations, teachers' meetings
and institutes, -travels of county superintendent, inspections.
All Offices: Personals about the people employed, personals
about people doing business there.
Post Office: Personals from the postmaster on people who
have come in during the week, business of mail order houses,
new postal laws and rates, instructions for insuring mail de
livery, changes in personnel, items from conversation of by
standers, opinions of local people on affairs.
Schools: Personals of teachers, projects of various grades,
housing conditions, alumni news, organizations such as school
orchestras, glee clubs, etc., sport news of all school athletic
teams, night school news, attendance records, school paper.
Barber Shop -.Personals of those coming to town, visitors
in the trade, personals of personnel, number of
women
42 COUNTRY JOURNALISM
customers, bobbed hair tendencies, changes in equipment or
building.
Billiard Parlors: Personals of visitors, exhibitions, pool
tournaments, bowling leagues and tournaments, improve
ments, sport news, checker and chess tournaments.
Attorneys' Offices: Legal business, visitors, court news,
interpretations of laws and ordinances, notary public business.
Hotels: Guests, traveling men, tourist news, improve
ments, .number of guests during the week and states from
which they came, personals from conversation with hotel
keeper.
Stores: Personals of personnel, visitors and customers from
out of town, trend of buying, general prices paid for produce,
accidents, improvements.
Abstractor's Office: Abstracts of title and visitors on busi
ness. Personals.
Elevators: General prices paid for all grains, number of
men selling grain, quality of grain being sold, amount, number
of threshing rigs from which grain comes and their owners, etc.,
farm news, personals.
Doctors' Offices: Deaths, births, general health, visits to
sick, personals of visitors, operations, physical examinations,
epidemics, health suggestions.
Magistrates: Violations of ordinances, marriages, trials,
fines, sentences.
Clergymen: Marriages, funerals, church announcements,
church parties and socials, meetings in churches, special lec
tures, rallies, revivals, evangelistic meetings, Sunday school
news, bazaars, rummage sales, summer conferences and en
campments.
Tourist Parks: Stories of interesting people camped there,
number of people using the tourist park, condition of the park,
condition of roads used by tourists, news of other communities
in which tourists have camped, needed improvements or those
made, stories of local interest of tourists.
Depot: Train news, changes in time-table, changes in
fares or traveling conditions, personals of arrivals and de
partures, improvements in depot, news from conversations,
produce shipped, merchandise shipped in.
Chairman of Board of Health : Sanitation and hygiene con-
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ditions, better health campaigns, clean-up week, disposal of
garbage, guards against disease, hints on personal sanitation,
disposal of ash heaps and slop piles, problems of those keeping
cattle, horses, chickens, hogs, inside the city limits.
City Council: New ordinances, minutes of meeting, pav
ing projects, street improvements, park improvements, regu
lations on public service franchises, elections, municipal taxes,
town additions.
Chief of Police: Violators of ordinances, arrests of speeders
and parkers, helps in preventing crime, news of the night
watchman, police calls.
Fire Chief: Fire calls, firemen's balls, carnivals, corn roasts,
clam bakes, fire prevention, fire fighting apparatus, personnel
of fire force, how to put in fire call.
Telephone Operator: Local news such as visits, travels,
proposed parties, dances, meetings, advance notice on arrivals.
City Water Works: Condition of plant, equipment or im
provements needed, water supply, regulations governing use
of water, hints at conservation in times of drought, pumping
hours, sewer improvements, water analysis.
Lumber Yards: Amount of lumber sold, new houses being
built, lumber going to country buyers, kinds of lumber for
different purposes, building in general, personals of lumber
buyers, sales of tar paper, roofing paper, etc., in preparation
for winter.
Garages: Number of cars sold, number sold to country
buyers, number to city buyers, kind of cars sold, delivery
problems, personals of customers, news from conversations,
changes in models, result of changes on car sales, new models,
accidents necessitating repair work, road trips, livery trips,
road conditions, best routes to neighboring towns.
Rural Agents: Farm news, road news and improvements,
country personals, meetings, school activities, parties, dances,
socials.
Coal and Ice Dealer: Coal supply, delivery problems,
preparation for winter, how many buy in summer for winter
supply, kinds of fuels used most, locality from which fuel
supply is derived.
Public Service Utilities: New rate regulations, improve
ments in service, stoppage for repairs, imprpvements in equip-
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ment, new houses wired, number of electrical appliances in
use in homes, new appliances, advice to gas users, their side to
public utilities controversies, franchises.
Non-Public Institutions (Such as factories, flour mills, etc.) :
Personals of personnel, accidents, new equipment, improve
ments, amount and distribution of production, amount of raw
material used and where it is obtained.
School Board: School taxes, bond issues, needed buildings
and equipment, laws pertaining to school children, minutes of
board meetings, school elections, elections of teachers for com
ing year, salaries, expenses of schools, promotions of teachers,
new courses provided for such as manual training, physical
education courses and domestic science, changes in old courses.
Presidents of Lodges: Fraternal functions such as dances,
parties, meetings, minutes of last meeting, new members
initiated, campaigns sponsored, lodge dinners, arrangements
for meeting place, purchase of lodge rooms or building, con
ventions and conferences.
Community Organizations: Functions held or to be held
in community halls, finances of community associations, pur
poses of same, shows coming or past in community show
houses, plans for building or purchase by community associa
tions, election of officers, minutes of meeting of association.
Commercial Club: Minutes of meetings, campaigns for
civic welfare, booster advertising campaigns, events sponsored,
out of town speakers, plans for meetings, plans to bring new
industries to town.
Restaurants: Personals of out-of-town visitors, changes in
equipment or service, banquets and parties served.
Meat Markets: Personals of visitors, out-of-town buyers,
how much meat is sold in town, how much in country, how
much to other towns, where stock is purchased, general condi
tions and prices in buying stock, inspection of meats, sanitary
meat handling.
Contractor's Office: General building conditions, new
houses going up, repair supply of building material, trends in
cost of building.
Radio Dealers: Latest development in radio construction,
new stations heard, long-distance records, new radio services,
hints for radio lovers, radio for the farm, radio programs that
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can be received by local people, new radios installed, radio
problems answered.
President of Ladies' Clubs: Society news, personals of
members, plans, meetings, campaigns for civic betterment,
social studies and papers on same.
Photo Studio: Personals of customers, personals of out-of-
town people who came to have pictures taken, examples of
good amateur photography, photo clubs^ hints to amateur
photographers.
Hospitals: News of patients' condition, arrivals and dis
missals, accidents, operations, improvements in service or
equipment, number of inmates, personals on patients from
out of town.
Public Libraries and Reading Rooms: New books, rules
and regulations for use of books, tendencies in modern readers,
need of more library facilities, number using library, number
of newspapers coming to library, how to use books, book
reviews.
Assessor's Office: Township and county statistics, per
sonals, valuation of crops and farm property, variations in
values of property.
Recognized Political Leaders: Political news of all kinds,
voting situations, number of voters registered.
All Supervisors: Of roads, institutions. News about what
the person supervises.
Auctioneers: Sale news, personals.
Theaters: Programs, favorite films, coming events, prices,
new developments in moviedom, improvements in buildings
or equipment.
CHAPTER V
COLLECTING LOCAL NEWS
On the Street. Because most country editors must attend
to the business of the newspaper, they feel that they have
little time to devote to collecting news on the street. The
amount of news that can be secured by the editor's personal
observation on the street is worth all the time it takes. In
country towns, every street corner is the meeting place for
groups of people who stop to pass the time of day. Chance
conversations with friends that the editor will have on the
street will give him many news angles. Once outside the
shop and the possibilities for news stories are many.
When Mr. Brown stops to say "Hello" to the editor, that is
just the beginning of the conversation. The next thing he
will say may be that he has just heard from his son who is
located in the next state and that the boy will be home for a
visit the first of the week. That is a story. The editor should
not leave Mr. Brown until he has all the facts concerning the
boy's stay in town, where he has been working, where he will
spend the rest of his vacation, and when he expects to leave the
city.
The next thing that the editor will see worth a news story
may be a car accident, a load of furniture being moved, streets
being repaired, or what not. Each one is worth a story when
all the facts have been secured. Most editors spend enough
time talking to people to get all the news in the town, but they
often fail to remember that they are out to get news and not
to be entertained. More time can be profitably spent collect
ing news on the street than is now devoted to it, but the editor
must have his eyes open for news all the time.
The Need for Friendliness. An editor who is "sour on the
world'' and who tries to be as aloof as possible from his fellow
men, has a poor chance to get news from personal sources. If
the city reporter finds it to his advantage to have friends on
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his run, how much more important is it for the country editor,
who must associate with these people practically every day.
Make friends of everybody that you can and you will find that
your problem of getting the news is no longer a problem.
These friends will remember you from week to week; they will
want to see their friends mentioned in the paper, and they
will be ready for your visit with all the news they have been
able to get. Confidence is given only to one who has showed
that he is worthy of it. No one tells his troubles and his joys
to a stranger or to anyone that hasn't time to say a kind word
in the regular operation of his business. Sincerity of purpose
and amiability in conversation are necessary if the editor is
to have any personal news sources of value.
Helps in News Gathering. City reporters learned long ago
that everyone on their beats could help them in gathering
news if they could be induced to remember what happens, and
to give the facts to the reporter when he comes around. The
country editor has an advantage over the city reporter in that
all the people of the town know him and know that he runs a
newspaper. His friends can be used to help in gathering local
news. .JQiSJbas^^ was as follows:
Twenty or more persons located in the courthouse, stores,
offices, etc., were supplied with a personal scratch pad and a
pencil which were kept in a certain place within convenient
reach. These friends were asked to jot down everything that
was news that happened in their places. Twice a week the
editor collected these notes and wrote them up for the paper.
There is no doubt that many things of interest never were
written on the pads, but the editor secured many items in this
w^y^jh^t^^Ld. not have been found otherwise.
Another editor printed several cards, saying, "Tell it to the
News" and posted them in conspicuous places about town.
Reminders like these help in covering the local field and any
thing that brings in an item is worth doing. Other cards used
to help get local items may have such suggestions on them as
"Where are you going? Call up the News and tell us about
it" ; "How can we print everything that happens if you don't
let us in on it?"; "Is that so? Somebody else might want to
know about it. Phone the News and see it in the paper this
week."
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A paragraph or a three-line reader in the paper, saying, "The
Press wants to know about all your parties. Help us make a
good newspaper by telling us of the happenings you know
PPRECIATES your assistance in obtaining the
news of the community. Every fact that
informs, interests or pleases is news; the more
,. people it interests, the more valuable it is.
A news item should, if possible, answer the questions:
who, where, what, when and why? Read the list ^of
suggestions. If it reminds you of an item, please jot
it down and give it to The Plaindealer.
WHAT DO YOU KNOW ABOUT
Accidents
Advertising
Auto Trips
Amusements
Anniversaries
Annual Meetings
Balls, Dances
Basket Ball
Band activities
Births
Birthday Parties
Board Meetings
Building Notes
Burglaries
Business Changes
Card Parties
Chamber of Commerce
Church Matters
Coming Events
Crops, Yields
Deaths
Dedications
Entertainments
Factories
Fairs, Bazaars
Farm Conditions
Fires
Former Residents
Holiday Visitors
Hospital Notes
Improvements
Installations
Lectures
Live Stock
Local Clubs
Lodge Doings
Marriages
New Firms
Obituaries
Parties
Personal Items
Picnics
Pioneer History
Politics
Public Meetings
Radio Notes
Real Estate
Receptions
Removals
Reunions
School Matters
Sickness
Social Affairs
Sporting Notes
Trade Comments
Travel Notes
Want Ads
Weather
One of the helps that the Chatsworth (111.) Plaindealer uses
in collecting local news is this reminder card which is given to
certain members of the community.
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about, etc./' will make it easier for the editor to fill the local
page._ These requests will not do the work of news gathering
alone, but they will help the editor in finding out about the
things that will make good news stories or personal items when
he has secured all the news facts.
Blanks may be given to the doctors, preachers, and magis
trates upon which they can record the facts concerning
marriages, births, deaths, etc., that will later be amplified into
news stories by the editor.
Collecting News Through Conversation. "What do you
know that's news today?" is the exact question the editor
should not begin his conversation with if he expects to find any
news. Rarely is a person found who, if asked if he knows any
news, will be able to tell the editor about a single important
thing. Most people have too many things to think of in their
own business to worry about the editor's most important func
tion. Even when they have intended to remember something
for him, when confronted with a definite request for it, they
forget everything they had in mind. A conversation beginning
with anything but the exact subject of news is to be desired.
Remarks about the weather may lead to other remarks that
hold much news value. "Terrible storm we had last night,
wasn't it?" from the editor may provoke a complete recital
from Mr. Brown of the damage the storm did to his farm, to
his neighbor's house, and the many evidences of the storm
which he saw while on the road to town.
After all, it is the editor's business to be interested in what
the other man is interested in, which is his business. The
human mind tends to hold the thought that the person wants
to hold. The editor wants to know what the other man is
thinking about, for that is the substance of a news story.
The other party thinks of many things but "news" does not
associate itself readily with anything in his mind. There are,
furthermore, many reasons for catching the person who is the
source off his guard. When he talks freely as in ordinary con
versation he gives the facts as they are in his mind, before he
has a chance to think whether or not he should make just that
statement. After he thinks it over he is much more likely to
tell what he thinks he ought to say for business or personal
reasons. If the word "news" does not associate itself with any-
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thing in his mind, he can only reply that he can think of noth
ing. The weather, a local situation, any general remark will
call to his mind a number of things in which he is interested.
From the variety of incidents and situations that he talks about
because he is interested in them the editor can get several
clues to news stories. If a specific question is used to open the
conversation, the association of ideas in the person's mind will
be narrowed to the few things that he happens; to know about
that question.
Conversation vs. Interview. There is much difference be
tween getting news through friendly conversation on the street
and getting it through an interview. In the latter case some
thing very definite is sought and the question must be specific.
When all the news possible is the aim in mind a more general
flow of conversation is better.
Getting people in a small town to talk is a simple matter
when the editor talks to them as a friend. If he has the air
of being a busy newspaperman in his everyday conversation
with friends, he will get little information. The country town
is different from the city in this respect. The city reporter
who is a stranger to the country people will find it more dif
ficult to get news facts from them than he will to get facts from
people in the city. In the city everyone is used to seeing
strangers ; in fact acquaintances are rare. In the country town
it is the opposite and a stranger is regarded with something
not far from suspicion until he has become acquainted with
the townspeople. There is an element of disfavor that can
be overcome only by establishing friendly relations. This
situation is hard to appreciate until one has actually lived and
worked in several country towns and experienced it. Coun
try people are very friendly when they feel that the news-
gatherer to whom they are talking is one of them.
Planning the Conversation. It is the editor's business to
direct this conversation in any direction only when he has dis
covered a news angle that he feels is worth tracing up. Until
that angle is discovered, and sometimes it will only be after
several minutes of conversation, he can best enjoy a friendly,
ordinary, easy-going talk with a friend. Even when a news
angle is discovered, the editor must usually avoid appearing
to be transformed into an interviewer. Direct questions which
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will bring out what the editor wants to know may be used in
conversation on the street, but only when the editor is actually
interested in what he is talking about. Furthermore, these
questions ^ should always appear to arise out of the preceding
conversation and not seem to be devised for a definite pur
pose. Nothing is more irritating to the country person than to
feel that some subtle force is at work on him. The pleasure is
all taken out of the conversation by such a feeling and when
the process is no longer pleasurable to him he has no interest
in it. He does not feel that he owes the editor anything.
Getting the Facts. Keeping in mind the fact that you are
the editor of a country newspaper, what facts will you find in
the following casual conversation which will furnish clues for
news items or complete stories? The following is an actual
conversation with the names of the parties changed. The
editor meets Art Graven, manager of the local baseball team on
his way to the post office in the morning.
"Morning, Art. Where to?"
"Have to go down to see how Joe is this morning. I doubt
if he'll be able to play with us Sunday."
"You don't say. What happened to him?"
"We were practicing last night and you know where that old
post sticks up out in left field? Well, Joe was after a high one
and he fell backwards over that. Hurt his back some I guess."
"Tough luck. Who will take his place?"
"For this Sunday's game with Creighton we can get Jim
Peters from Hoople. He's good. Bobby Brown is pretty
young but we can use him, too, if we have to. That would
save us some money and we need all we have."
"Didn't the subscription go over?"
"Yes, it went pretty well, but we haven't had the crowds
at the games that we should have had. They don't back up
the team, and we have won all but one game this season. I
can't be here Sunday, either."
"How's that?"
"I just got word from my father in Weston that my brother
Dick is to arrive there from Oregon and can only stay a week.
I won't be able to see him if I don't go Sunday. He's been out
there working for the Terrence Valley Fruit Company for four
years. I'll have to trot along now. So long ! "
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The stories which were written as a direct and indirect re
sult of this conversation follow:
No. 1.
Joe Hplley, who deals in real estate
for a living and plays baseball with the
local team for pastime, was injured last
Tuesday evening when he fell over an
old post in the left field of the baseball
diamond. The old post has been stick
ing up in a dangerous position all sum
mer, but it is so far out that no one
ever expected to see a ball knocked out
to it. One of the men who was batting
"flies" to the outfield in Tuesday eve
ning's practice was forced to come nearly
to third base in order to get a returned
ball and batted one from there. t It came
in Joe's direction and in running back
wards with his eyes on the ball he did
not notice that he was approaching the
post. He suffered a sprained ankle and
injuries to his back which will not per
mit him to play baseball the rest of the
summer.
Joe has played baseball with the local
team for the past five years and has
come to be relied upon as one of the
main standbys in a fast game. Manager
Craven feels that his loss will make a
material difference in the strength of
the team.
No. 2.
Subscriptions totaling nearly $900 have
been received to date by the secretary
of the local baseball association and
more are expected. The subscriptions
ranged in amount from $1 to $100, every
business place in town being represented
on the list of subscribers. According to
Manager Art Craven, this amount of
money will not be sufficient to run the
team for the entire season unless the
crowds are better at the coming games
than they have been at the games that
have already been played. Bad weather
accounts for the poor crowds at two of
the games but local people have not
backed the team as those who are spon
soring baseball wish they would. Man
ager Craven believes that, with fair-
sized crowds at the rest of the games,
the association will come through the
season with good financial success.
No. 3.
Jim Peters, one of the baseball players
of Hoople and a man who has been in
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action on the local diamond many times,
has been engaged to play Sundays' game
here with the local team against Creigh-
ton. Peters is an all-round baseball
player and will be worked at several
different positions. He will probably
play a field position if things go
smoothly and may be used to twirl a few
if he is needed. Peters is coming to
play Sundays' game in the place of Joe
Holley who was injured in a practice
session last Tuesday evening. Bobby
Brown, a local boy, will play part of the
game.
No. 4.
Mr. and Mrs. Arthur Craven and two
sons leave early Sunday morning for
Weston, where they will visit until
Monday noon with Mr. Craven's parents
and his brother Richard. Richard
Craven has been employed by the
Terrence Valley Fruit Growers Associa
tion in Oregon for the past four years
and this is his first visit home in that
time. He has only a month's vacation,
ten days of which will be spent at the
home of his father from where he will
go to visit a sister and another brother
living in Colorado.
Collecting Personals. Local items or "personal" items do
not offer the difficulty of checking reliability that stories affect
ing the whole community do. Yet they are often only rumors
at the start. If the one from whom the personal is received
knows exactly what happened from personal contact with the
subject of the item, or from personal observation, the editor's
job is considerably lightened. If he says only that he "heard
so and so" the editor must ask other people about the same
thing until he gets several accounts that check.
Rdativety more time must be spent collecting personal far.
the^counlry p^eFIKan* |^^g^.jg^|g e material for the larger
n0ws
pajger anJ nothing u readers
M> &J^ items ar, of great impQL-
tlmce they are a^ the cause of much intensive work in the
^yay^Pt^liwi^lxe .i3cS^ A;mfsp:
take in the lopal colurrma will , be noticed before any story on
the front '"*"'
54 COUNTRY JOURNALISM
Getting the News of Local Functions. Perhaps it is the
multifariousness of the country editor's duties that keeps him
from getting news of events first hand; perhaps it is because
he has decided that he can get news easier from his friends.
Whatever the cause, the country editor does not attend all the
meetings that he could; he does not get the news first hand
that he could get. There are few meetings in the country town
that the editor could not attend if he wished. There are still
fewer that some member of the staff could not attend. The
editor will always make it a point to see that the meeting of
his lodge is recorded fully, but he will forget to attend a meet
ing of the local band members and their backers. City papers
send a reporter to "cover" all important events, and ag a re
sult the news they get is more accurate and is more complete.
If the community association holds a meeting in the town, the
editor should consider it his privilege as well as his right to
be present and learn what takes plase. If the Mothers 7 Club
meets, it will be perhaps impossible and unnecessary for the
editor to attend the meeting, but some one should be there
representing the paper. Ofttimes the editor's wife does it very
well. If the Republican party holds a caucus in the court
house the editor should be there, even though he is a Demo
crat. The writer worked on a newspaper for a political organi
zation for three years during which time he attended meetings
of the parties fighting the organization for which he worked.
Once the members of an organization find that the minutes
of their meeting will be reported correctly and with due regard
for the rights of all, the editor will find no difficulty in gaining
admission to their sessions.
Meetings of religious organizations other than the one to
which the editor belongs can also be covered. This is not so
easily done in the country town. It is seldom, however, that
the editor is refused admission to a public meeting of another
religious organization. When secret sessions are held, if the
general public is affected, the news item will give all the facts
and information that the editor can get about the meeting from
reliable sources.
Representatives of the Press. The editor can't be a member
of the local chapter of the W. R. C.; he can't be affiliated with
an organization to which men are not allowed; often he can't
COUNTRY JOURNALISM 55
attend meetings such as those of women's clubs; but he can
always arrange to have the minutes and proceedings of that
meeting accurately recorded. Every organization should be
encouraged to have a press representative. Most women's
clubs today have some one officially delegated as the press
reporter or correspondent who writes the news of that organ
ization for the local paper. If there is no such person in the
organization at present, the editor can see the president of the
group and make arrangements to have some one so appointed.
He can generally secure some one in the club who knows some
thing of writing for publication, or some one who at least can
accurately report all the essential news facts. More often the
problem is not to get enough news from these organizations,
but to persuade them that much of the proceedings is not news
for the general public. Never will the notes be just as the
editor wants them. The news will one week be too scanty, the
next week too plentiful, sometimes full of nonessentials, and
sometimes lacking in sufficient news facts. Whatever the re
sult of getting news through a regular press correspondent, it
will be much better than trusting to a conversation with some
member who happens to be a friend of the editor, but who
takes no particular note of what goes on at the meeting. It has
the added advantage of being a regular service, and generally
a fairly satisfactory one, both to the editor and the readers.
Town press correspondents can be aided in the preparation
of their material by suggestions just as the country corre
spondents are, and the editor, of course, reserves the right to
copy-read their contributions. If this is not understood at the
start there will be no end to the misunderstandings that come
about later. Instructions as to what is the office style, what
the paper will and will not print, news values, etc,, is a part
of each correspondent's instructions in town or country.
CHAPTER VI
NEWS WRITING FOB THE COUNTRY PAPER
IT is not the purpose of this book to attempt to teach the
fundamentals of writing news stories. That subject has been
\reated very competently by other writers and if the student
is not familiar with the fundamentals of news writing he is
advised to get this knowledge before beginning the study of
country journalism. This chapter will treat only of those
phases of news writing which are peculiar to the country paper
and will try to show the differences between writing news for
a city daily and for a country newspaper.
The Different Types of Readers. News in the city paper is
written for a class of readers, or for many classes of readers,
who have little or nothing in common. They are always busy
and must read their papers in a few minutes a day while on the
road to work or in the evening after work. For this reason the
news in the city daily must be very concise and as brief as
possible. Only the main facts in any story are read by the
majority; the rest of the story goes unnoticed, which is the
reason that the lead or the beginning of the story has become
so important in city jour&alism. The most important thing
in the whole story must come first and it must be so worded
that a reader can get the gist of the news by reading only the
first paragraph. This necessity has brought forth the "sum
mary" type of lead, which is the whole story in brief. The city
paper could not be well written with any other type of lead,
for all of the facts could not be put forward in such concise
manner. The most striking or unusual feature of the story is
played up in city journalism in order that the interest of the
reader be aroused immediately. This striking feature may be
any one of several things: the name, place, time, cause, re
sult, event, or significant circumstance, whichever will catch
the eye of the reader the quickest and hold his interest the
longest.
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In country journalism many of the circumstances are dif
ferent. The readers of the country paper have much in com
mon, where the city readers have little. The country people
generally know most of the persons about whom the news is
written and that is their chief interest. They all belong to one
community and anything that concerns that community affects
them and they are interested in knowing about it. They are
more interested in knowing who the person was who found a
treasure than they are in the treasure itself, but they want to
know about that also. Furthermore, the readers of the coun
try paper are not in a constant rush as city people are, but, on
the contrary, they read their paper in their leisure time and
they have enough time so that they read all of it, every word
of it, a every word in the news stories and all of the ads. This
condition affects the way news stories are written in the coun
try papers. It makes it unwise to begin with the striking
thing when that thing is certainly not the most interesting
thing to country readers. All of the important features of a
story must be included, but they do not have to be crowded
into the summary lead as in the city daily.
The Lead in the Country Paper. It should not be thought
that any kind of lead will do for a story in a country paper;
every lead must be well written and full of news. The dif
ference in the lead in the country paper and that in the city
paper lies in the ia^r^_emphasis more than in choice of
material. While the story in the city paper features the most
striking thing because it is the most interesting to a group of
people with mixed interests, the lead in the country paper
features the thing which is the most interesting to a group with
common interests. When you meet an old friend the first thing
you speak of after you have inquired concerning each other's
health is your mutual friends, the people you have known
before. When a country reader reads a news story of some
happening, the first thing he wants to know is not, "What
peculiar circumstance makes this story different from all
others?" but rather, "Who is the person to whom this hap
pened; was it a friend of mine?" After his curiosity is satis
fied concerning the person in the story he will want to know
all about how it happened, but this is of secondary interest.
Perhaps a farmer was injured while plowing his field be-
58 COUNTRY JOURNALISM
cause some part of the plow accidentally came loose and caught
him in the leg. This is unusual and would be the feature
of the lead if judged by city news value standards. To the
men and women who know this person, however, the most
important thing in that story will be the name of the injured
man. They do not read stories of crime, accidents, etc., be
cause of their interest in the thing itself but because they
want to know what is happening to the persons they have as
friends and neighbors. If you are not convinced of this, ask a
country reader what he reads first; and he will tell you the
personal items, so that he may see what the rest of the com
munity has been, doing.
The lead in the country paper is therefore different from
that in the city paper because it must tell more of the person
in the story and less of the unusual features of the happening.
The lead must be complete just as it is in any city paper, but
the emphasis placed on different parts of the story is much
different.
Playing Up Names. Because of this interest that country
readers have in their fellow men, the lead in the country paper
very often features the name of the person to whom the news
happened. Names are the source of all news in the small
town, and they are the best means for catching the eye of
the country reader, and keeping his interest until the story
is entirely read. When names are not played up the story
loses its flavor for country readers, no matter how well the
rest of the story is written. Little they care about getting the
facts in a concise and clear way if they do not know the person
in the story or some one who does know him intimately.
The following leads of local news stories were clipped from
several community newspapers. Notice the great number of
persons mentioned; names are featured more often than any
thing else. The fact that the new automobile tags are out is
not interesting to local readers, but the fact that motorists in
the county are getting them is strong. local news. Notice the
way in which the name of the town is frequently played up
to attract and interest the local reader. The little phrase "just
south of town" is a powerful interest holder, and the country
editor knows it. "People of Jefferson County" is more impor
tant in a local story than all the facts and figures about the
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paving project. "On Main Street in Brockway" gets the inter
est of every local reader who knows where Main Street is. The
unusual circumstance about the way a man broke his leg is of
secondary importance,, with the man's name taking the place
of prominence. Even a fire, the kind that the city reporter
would be sure to write up in the words "Fire destroyed/ 7 is
not the chief thing when the local fire company played an
active part in the happening. Although no one was injured
and the cars little damaged, the accident happening to a local
young woman was good local news with her name featured.
The obituary lead tells local readers at the beginning that it
was "Tom" who died. It is he "automobile population of
Logan County" that interests local readers.
These leads are here inserted just as they appeared. Some
have a touch of comment or color in them, but they all show
the way country editors play up the thing that is of greatest
local importance.
Judge and Mrs. Harry E. Newman,
and family left Lakewoqd Friday for
Pocono Pines, Pennsylvania, where they
have taken a cottage for the balance of
the summer, where Judge Newman will
recuperate from his recent illness.
Queen Anne's county automobile own
ers this week received the forms to be
used in making application for the new
1926 license tags.
Another indication that Bellows Falls
has turned the corner and is about to
show the wide, wide world, is to be found
in the fact that real money, quite a bit of
it, is dribbling steadily into the hands
of Everett L. Clark, secretary of the
Bellows Falls Chamber of Commerce, as
the result of a, careful canvass that is
being made this week of the business
interests, professional and retail men of
the community.
The big irrigated ranch just south of
town, known as the Milner ranch, of
800 acres, all well watered, has been
bought by a colony of Nebraska farmers
who will sub-divide the big place, cutting
it into 20 and 40-acre tracts, placing it
under intensive cultivation, and making
a number of improvements.
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The people of Jefferson county have
in mind taking part in the paving pro
gram for the upper Snake River valley,
and paying across that county from the
Bonneville to the Madison county line,
a distance of seven miles.
The contract for the bridge over the
Toby on Main Street in Brockway has
been let to the Ferris Engineering Co.,
of Pittsburgh, Pa., contingent on the
plans being approved by the Waterways
Commission.
John Harnett of Fifth Avenue while
at work on the state road construction
job near Keating had the misfortune to
break his leg near the ankle.
Splendid work by the Community Fire
Company, Millington, assisted by the
Good Will Fire Company, Centreville,
and the Chestertown Fire Department,
prevented the destruction by fire of
Crumpton last Wednesday morning.
A Ford coupe driven by Miss Neta
McFee, county home demonstration
agent here, was badly damaged Monday
afternoon in Jackson when it was struck
by a Lincoln machine driven by an em
ploye of the McCuan Motor Co., of
Jackson. Miss McFee's car received a
bent fender and axle and a blown out
tire in the collision. No one was
injured.
W. P. Medlin, familiarly called "Tom"
among his many friends and acquaint
ances, and one of the best known and
prominent citizens of this city, died sud
denly at his home yesterday morning
from a stroke of apoplexy. He was 52
years old. The entire town was shocked
and grieved to learn of his death.
In behalf of the 6,700 automobile pop
ulation of Logan county, the Logan
Chamber of Commerce has petitioned
the County court for co-operation in
having the West Virginia State JRoad
Commission arrange to have the automo
bile license tags for 1927 and there
after issued locally to save the expense,
time^ and trouble of automobile owners
making a trip to Charleston for same.
Featuring the Local Angle. Things that happen closest to
home make the best news for the country paper, but very
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often something happens miles away which affects local read
ers. The lead of the story in the country paper must then
make the reader see the part of that distant happening that
interests him. This is done by playing up the local angle of
the story. Whereas in the city paper the incident would- be
given because of its inherent interest for all people, in the
local paper the story must be written for the readers in that
community.
A bank is held up in a town twenty-five miles from the one
the paper is located in, but there is reason to believe that the
job was done by a band of robbers who broke into the local
bank some weeks before. What would the local editor feature
in his story? The good lead for the country paper in such a
case would be something like this: "Bank robbers, believed by
Sheriff Brown to be the same bunch that held up the State
Bank of this city three weeks ago ? forced the employees of the
Ryborg State Bank to stand with arms above their heads while
the thieves looted the safe and cash drawer." All general news
that can be given a local angle will be stronger for the country
paper than it would be if given for its own worth.
The way in which a story of general interest, clipped from a
city daily, can be made interesting to country readers by feat
uring the local angle is shown by this story from the Liberty
(N. Y.) Register.
ALERTNESS OF GUARD
PREVENTS ESCAPE OF
MAN FROM SING SING
Alfred Molitor, Formerly of Lib
erty, Sees through Cleverly
Constructed Dummy
Alfred Molitor, of Liberty, a guard
at Sing Sing prison, has redeemed him
self in the eyes of prison officials for a
moment of carelessness some time ago,
according to an article which appeared
in the Herald Tribune last Saturday
morning. His redemption came through
his discovery of a clever plot to escape
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from the prison, according to the story.
The story, as told in the dispatch to
the city paper, follows:
Sing Sing Prison, Aug. 13 George
Peterson, twenty-eight years old, me
chanical engineer and burglar, attempted
to escape from here to-night by planting
a dummy in his cell, but Keeper Alfred
Molitor, hoaxed once before and docked
fifteen days 7 pay as a result was too
vigilant. His vigilance earned him a
week's vacation with pay.
"The keepers were making the "supper
count," when Molitor passed Peterson's
cell. He noticed a life-like figure reclin
ing on the cot and started to pass, but
returned and called out. There was no
reply, and he entered the cell, discover
ing the dummy. The inclosure was
searched and Peterson was found on the
powerhouse roof, where he had huddled
in a dark corner.
The passage of a bill by the State legislature will not cause
country readers any concern until they know that they will be
seriously affected by the new law. A bill was passed which
provided for aid to farmers and it received no notice when the
general news fact was run ; but when it was stated in the lead
of a story the following week that local farmers could get
help by applying to the local bank, the story was eagerly read.
A new tax law is simply "another law" until the fact that it
will cause residents of the community to pay an increase is
told to them in the newspaper story. The local application is
the important thing for all stories in the country paper.
Making a Local Angle. Sometimes a news story is re
ceived which is not of itself connected with anything of local
interest or importance but which, nevertheless, has some sig
nificance for local readers. The editor wants to run the story
because it reminds him of a local occurrence or because it is
similar to something that has happened locally. His lead will
in that case make known the connection of the story with the
local thing. Perhaps farmers in a distant community have
found a way to keep down the grasshoppers, and the local
farming community is seriously bothered with this pest. The
way in which other farmers have killed pests will be good
news for farmers in the local community if the facts are
brought to their attention. The local angle in such a story is
real even though it is less obvious than in some other stories.
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It is said that for every story in the city paper there could
be a similar story in the country paper which would be of local
interest. This is perhaps stretching a point, for there are
stories in the city paper which ought not to have any counter
part in the country paper. It is true, however, that many
stories in the city papers will suggest stories for country read
ers and that the significant points in a city paper story can
often be taken for a story in the country paper. In all such
cases the story is made possible by the local application of the
news. When points of local interest can be gleaned from
other stories the feature of the story should not be the general
facts but the local application of these facts.
The Chronological Story. An examination of many coun
try papers will reveal the fact that many of the news stories
in those papers are written in chronological order that is,
the way the events occurred. This method has been quite gen
erally discarded by the city daily because it takes too much
time, and often the thing of most importance is placed so near
the end of the story that the rapid reader fails to get it. Coun
try papers have been criticized for using the chronological
method because it does not conform to the style of city jour
nalism. Unless a better reason than this can be found for
doing away with the chronological method of writing stories,
country papers can still use it successfully. The reason many
men in country journalism have stopped using it is that it
often leads to a long, disconnected tale which does not give
the facts concisely. When it becomes a space waster, the
chronological method is a poor one, but if rightly used it is
story-telling in its most entertaining phase.
An example follows of a story told chronologically in which
too many minor details are given and too much space is
wasted:
While John Thompson was coming in
from his farm which is about three miles
north of town, last Saturday night, he
saw something which made his hair stand
on end and he says that if he had been
coming home from town instead of going
in, the boys- would never have believed
his story. Along the road which comes
from his place there is a bunch of low
brush just about a mile from town and
while passing this brush the lights of his
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car lit upon a part that moved too fast
to be caused by the gentle breeze which
was blowing from the west. John said
he thought it might be a deer as several
have been seen in this part of the woods
so he stopped his car and got out to look
around. When he approached the bushes
that he had seen move he stopped and
shouted. What was his surprise when a
bobcat leaped out and dashed across the
road.
It is obvious that many of the things told in the above
story are unnecessary details and that the whole incident
could be more forcefully told by narrating only the impor
tant facts. An example of a story written in chronological
order stating only the important facts follows :
JOHN SMITH IS KILLED
BY TRAIN AT STARKER
Attempt to Board Moving
Freight Proves Fatal
to Local Boy
John Smith, eighteen, son of Mr. and
Mrs. E. C. Smith of this city, left here
Wednesday with his brother Edward for
Ohio, where they expected to find work.
They stopped at Starker Thursday where
they intended to visit another brother,
James, and his family. While they were
waiting for a fast eastbound freight train
to pass a crossing in Starker, John at
tempted to get aboard the train. Al
though Edward stopped his brother at
the first attempt, John succeeded in
making another trial which proved
fatal. As he grabbed the hand bar on
a freight car and tried to swing himself
onto the car he slipped under the wheels
and was instantly killed.
Edward immediately secured help but
there was no chance to save John's life.
The body was shipped here yesterday
and will be interred in the Protestant
cemetery east of town tomorrow. Funeral
services will be held at the Presbyterian
church at two o'clock tomorrow after
noon. The Rev. T. S. Brown will con
duct the services.
Care in Using the Chronological Method. When the chron
ological order method is used, care must be taken that the
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news facts of the story are not held back until numerous un
essential details are given. The narrative must start at the
beginning with the first important fact and continue through
to the end in a straightforward manner. The name or names
will always have a place in the beginning of every story written
for a country paper no matter what the structure of the story
may be. The facts which make the story of local interest
must also be there. In the above example the names and the
address immediately make a local reader anxious to read the
rest of the story.
There were many things about the boys' trip up to the time
of waiting for the freight train to pass that could have been
put into that story, but they had nothing to do with the news
break itself and so are better left out. One of the biggest
criticisms against the use of the chronological method of writ
ing a news story is that most of the stories tell so many things
only remotely connected with the news break. It is often the
case that the preliminary remarks and explanations occupy
much more space than the news facts. This is not only wast
ing space but also tiring the reader without informing him.
Facts which do not advance the action of the story should be
omitted.
Attention to Detail. In the city daily where space is worth
many dollars an inch very little of it can be taken up with the
details of some happening of minor importance. Only the
biggest stories are printed with full details, and the smaller
stories are merely paragraphs containing the barest facts.
While space is worth money in the country paper, it can be
made to pay the editor if his news stories give the news in more
detail than a larger paper would. Country readers are fortu
nately among the most curious folks in the world and the
country paper must satisfy this curiosity if it is to be success
ful. Because of the close association of people in a small com
munity, everybody wants to know not simply the main facts
about a happening, but all there is to know; and they feel
that they have been cheated if they are not told. This fact
makes it necessary for the stories in country papers to carry
many more details than would be tolerated in the city paper.
When a man falls off a ladder and breaks his leg the country
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paper not only carries the announcement of his accident and
the injury done him but also all of the minor facts telling
how the accident came about. It is not sufficient to state that
the man was hurt and to stop there because the readers know
him and will want to know how he was hurt, where he now is,
and how he is getting along. Perhaps you have smiled at the
news item that ends up by saying that some one "is doing as
well as can be expected" but that line tells his friends a great
deal about him. If he is in a dangerous condition they want
to know that fact. Unimportant details are only those in
which the readers of the paper would not be interested, for that
is the test of what should go into the news story in the small
paper.
Writing the Complete Story. The news behind the news is
often the most interesting although it takes time and energy
to get it. Instead of complaining that nothing happens in the
small community about which news stories can be written, the
editor may well devote some time to getting all of the facts
about the things that do happen. Generally he will find that
there is plenty of news if it is all written. A farmers' institute
was written up by one editor in the following short story. He
didn't begin to scratch the surface of the event and so lost
much of the news that he could have had because he stopped
before he had completed the story.
FARMERS INSTITUTE
The Polk County Farmers Institute
was held in this city on Thursday, Fri
day, and Saturday of last week. The
meetings were all held in the farmers
room of the court house except the en
tertainment which was given in the
community hall. Several speakers from
various parts of the country were on the
program as well as the county agent of
this county and several men from the
state University.
A number of contests of interest to
farmers were held in connection with
the institute.
Another editor with a better sense of news values discov
ered that the farmers' institute was a big thing for his com
munity and wrote it up at some length. Yet he didn't "pad"
his story just for the sake of making news, because he found
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enough facts about the event to make a long story. The first
editor failed to get the news and the participants in the event
felt that the editor was not awake to his possibilities. The
second editor knew news when it happened and was quick to
take every advantage of it. As a consequence he wrote a com
plete story which was appreciated by the farmers for its com
pleteness and was read with interest by his subscribers.
Other Examples o Failure to Get all the News. Each of
the following brief paragraphs or announcements concerns a
happening or event which would make a longer story.
BOY HURT IN AUTO SPILL
Carlisle "Curley" Washechek, was cut
and bruised on the head Thursday morn
ing in an automobile wreck a mile south
of town. Ben Brooks was driving. The
road was full of ruts, and perhaps too
much speed was the cause.
The editor wrote the paragraph above without attempting
to find out all the news facts. This accident received more
than half a column in another paper.
C. J. Ashlock returned from the hos
pital Monday. He is much better.
"He is much better/' is the way in which the editor takes
leave of a man who was the victim of an insane person's pistol
shot and who was narrowly saved from death. There is more
news in such a case.
INDIANA PICNIC
If you are from Indiana, come to
Lakeside Resort on Sunday, July 25th.
Bring all the family and your lunch, and
have a real outing. Coffee free.
A picnic to include all of the former residents of an entire
state, is usually a bigger event than this brief notice would
indicate.
The first frost of the season is re
ported for the morning of September
14th, Some places were not touched
while others were hit hard. Gardens in
Barton seemed to be unhurt.
The first frost of the season furnishes material for some of
the best weather stories of the year. In this same community
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there was much garden stuff impaired, as the editor would
have learned if he had investigated.
Padding News Stories. The opposite of the writer who
fails to get all of the news in his story is the one who inserts
much material which is irrelevant and uninteresting in order
to make his story longer. One method is as bad as the other.
There is enough news if it is all secured and there is no need
for padding a story with much matter that will take up the
readers' time without conveying any new information to them
or helping to make old facts better understood. Much of the
material that is very evident padding is in the nature of edi
torial comment and will be considered in another chapter.
Some of the padding is useless statements which do not aim to
influence anyone but which are just expressions of something
already said.
The timely subject of the news is not found in the following
story until half a column of rambling musings is read. If the
writer had taken the facts from the material and had written
an historical feature story, it would have been interesting, but
no one likes to wade through a mass of material not on the
subject to get a little piece of news. This method of padding
news stories, by beginning with paragraphs of introductory
remarks that are very loosely connected with the subject of
the news, is disconcerting to the reader.
LEE-BARBER FAMI
LIES HOLD REUNION
^ As one motors through certain por
tions of the Pine Belt in Ocean County,
New Jersey, there can be noticed in
numerous places tracts of land measur
ing from five to one hundred acres that
were, fifty years ago, homes of families
who enjoyed a satisfactory degree of
prosperity.
Some seventy years ago about the
time the New Jersey Southern railroad
was being promoted the New York and
Philadelphia papers did much to boost
the property on either side of the new
enterprise as most wonderful sites for
inexpensive farm homes that could be
made to produce fruit, berries and vege
tables as well as grains of all kind,
which could reach the city markets at
a cheap freight over the new route.
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Many persons, who owned property in
the nearby states of New York, Penn
sylvania and some New Englanders were
attracted by such glowing prospects as
appeared in the advertising mediums,
resolved to dispose of their old homes
and pioneer to the Jersey Pines where
conditions were most inducing.
Among these newcomers were Ralph
Lee and Hannah Barber, his wife, who
for a number of years resided on a
very productive farm in Bucks County,
Pennsylvania.
They found ready sale at a good price
for their homestead and reserving the
necessary stock, furniture and other
equipment for the home of new oppor
tunity they, over seventy years ago,
located near where the above school
building now stands.
For about twenty years the place pro
duced abundant crops and was the scene
of very busy activities especially during
the berry, fruit and vegetable season.
Much of this produce was shipped to
the city from Bricksburg as the station
prior to the Lakewood name, was
called.
During the time Mr. Lee occupied the
farm he not only was deeply interested
in farming, but also in community im
provement. It was mainly through his
efforts that the public school which still
bears his name was established. Prior
to that time pupils were obliged to walk
a great distance to the Old Garrison
school house not far from the Irish Mills.
Over fifty years after the passing of
the owner, the place reverted to new
ownership and since then gradually ^ re
ceded to its present form of desolation.
Yet, to those who were born there, there
are some familiar trees, the old pumps
and the grapevine.
On Saturday, August 7, 1926, the Lee-
Barber family held a Reunion in the
pleasant grove in front of the Leesville
School-house.
Out of a possible 54 members of that
union 38 persons embraced the pleasant
opportunity to visit the scenes of many
former happy events.
Importance of Good Grammar. It is not the purpose of this
discussion to attempt to show all of the errors in grammar that
are made in the "country press. It should be sufficient to draw
the student's attention to the fact that there are many gram
matical mistakes in country papers which .could easily be
70 COUNTRY JOURNALISM
avoided. The use of slang phrases and vulgarisms is as much
out of place in the country paper as in any other. Failure to
have an antecedent for each relative pronoun, use of the wrong
verb form, long, wordy sentences, omission of prepositions
and articles, and the inclusion of several unrelated thoughts
in one sentence are some of the most frequent mistakes.
Notice the large number of grammatical errors in the fol
lowing story which was clipped from a country weekly.
BEST RAIN IN THREE YEARS
The downpour Sunday afternoon was
the best rain visiting this section of
the universe in three years. It has rained
a good many times, but generally came
in a form of a mist, and only one or
two rains in that length of time that
made a half inch or better. The near
est to the one Sunday, was the rain in
June that gave us 1.10 inches. The Sun
day rain came like one of the old timers
and for thirty-five minutes dashed to the
ground and foamed. There was not
much wind with the rain, but one par
ticular feature of the storm was the hail.
It hailed continually during the rain.
Not hard, but still considerable hail fell.
Even when the main storm was over
and just scattering drops of rain falling,
scattering hailstones also fell. If the
wind had been high, this country would
have been mowed with the hail. A 1.41
inch rain fell Sunday afternoon and with
Saturday night's sprinkle we register 1.75.
No rain to speak of at Chamberlain.
Three and a half inches of rain reported
over part of Plummer township. The
Craft boys in Pleasant Grove reported a
two inch rain. About five miles south
the Pierce boys and in that neighbor
hood, reported a five inch rain, and hail
with a strong wind, which mowed the
crops and vegetation to the ground. At
Con Kaish's farm, 3 miles west, two or
more inches of rain was reported. A
heavy rain with hail was reported at
Garni Valley.
Attempts at Cleverness. Country papers are noted for the
many attempts at cleverness that are found in th^ir news
columns. Some writers try to see how many clever sayings
and witty remarks they can crowd into each personal item,
or story, whether the situation has anything humorous in
it or not. Besides the possibility of offending the person
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about which the item is written, there is danger that in trying
to be funny in writing news the writer will only make himself
laughed at by the readers. When there is something humor
ous to write about, by all means take advantage of it, for
good humor is always appreciated, but beware of itrying to
make something or some one appear ridiculous. The best
-humor for a newspaper is that which is natural and makes no
one embarrassed. It is far better to stick to a plain state
ment of facts than to make a bad job trying to be funny.
There is too much danger that the readers will not laugh with
you but at you. An example of attempted cleverness follows:
A little bird brought news to the
Graphic this morning that John Van
Bockern and Miss Nellie Harper were
married at Mitchell yesterday, but we
cannot vouch for the truth of it. Any
way, if they were not they are going to
be mighty sudden, and we are taking
this opportunity to wish the young
couple all the happiness in the world,
for they fully deserve it.
Trite and Coined Expressions. Writing the same kind of
local news week after week gets to be a mechanical job and
leads the editor sometimes to resort to the use of the same
expressions that he has used many times before. These ex
pressions are easy to use since they are "always good" and
their use becomes a habit if the editor does not take pains to
get new, bright, and vivid words and phrases. In spite of all he
can do to keep himself from using trite words and phrases the
editor will find one cropping up now and then because they
have been used so often and seem to express just what he
wants to say. These trite expressions detract from the value
of the news for they convey no new; information and most of
the time are superfluous to the actual news facts.
When one word, which has been a perfectly good word but
much used, seems to be becoming trite, it is a good plan to
avoid using that word for a week or a month until other words
have been found to express the same thought. This "don't
use" method of preventing words and phrases from becoming
trite is a particularly good one for country correspondents and
can be used profitably by the editor. Some shops have a plac
ard posted up in plain view which has on it the word or words
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that shall not be used during a certain period of time. When
new words have been found to express the same meaning, the
old word or phrase will not be needed.
It would be impossible to list all of the trite expressions
found in country papers but some of the many will be found
in the following group. All of these words and phrases have
been taken from news stories in country papers.
accompanied by
acid test
actual photographs
affixed signature
aired their troubles
along the line of
angry mob
any way, shape, or form
appeared on the scene
appropriate exercises
beggars description
beyond peradventure of a doubt
bids fair to become
blushing bride
bolt from the clear sky
breakneck speed
breathless silence
brute force
burly negro
burning issue
busy marts of trade
California weather
came to a head
capable young man
checkered career
cheered to the echo
city bastile
city fathers
clutches of the law
community is saddened
contracting parties
cool as a cucumber
crisp $5 bill
crying need
Dame Fashion
Dan Cupid
daring robber
dark horse
dastardly deed
death car
delicious refreshments
denizens of the deep
devouring element
divine passion
doing as well as can be expected
downy couch
dull, sickening thud
dusky damsel
elegantly gowned
entertained lavishly
facile pen
fair sex
fatal noose
feature (as noun or verb)
few well chosen words
finny tribe
floral offerings
foeman worthy of his steel
foregone conclusion
fought like a tiger
fragrant Havana
gala attire
giant pachyderm
goes without saying
gone to his reward
good-natured crowd
good time is assured all
good time was had- by all
grand old man
great beyond
grim reaper
hard earned coin
head over heels
heart of the business section
Herculean efforts
high dudgeon.
high noon
honored with
hotly contested
hurled into eternity
immaculate linen
incontrovertible fact
in durance vile
infuriated animal
is to be congratulated
Jupiter Pluvius
kind and loving
land-office business
large and enthusiastic audience
last but not least
last sad rites
leave no stone unturned
led to the Hymeneal altar
light collation
like rats in a trap
limped into port
long years
loom up
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luscious bivalve
madly in love
marriage was consummated
milady
minions of the law
miraculous escape
mob violence
mooted question
much interest was manifested
musical circles
mystery car
natty suit
neat sum
neck of the woods
never in the history of
news leaked out
noble work
Old Sol
on the sick list
one of the best
one of the most unique
our noble pioneers
painfully cut
pale as death
pass into history
passed away
passed on
pillar of the church
pool of blood
poor little tots
popular citizen
present incumbent
present day and generation
presided at the punch bowl
probe
prominent business man
promising young man
psychological moment
rash act
received an ovation
red letter day
rendered a solo
rooted to the spot
royally entertained
sable hearse
sad rites
sea of upturned faces
select few
sensational failure
she tripped down the stairs
signified his intention
small but appreciative audience
smile that won't come off
smoking revolver
social event of the season
solemn black
solon
sorrowing widow
speculation was rife
spent the day
spirited away
staged (except in theater)
steeled his nerve
stern reality
Sundayed
swathed in bandages
sweet child
talented authoress
the light fantastic
theory exploded
this broad land of ours
this fair city
this noble city
this world's goods
tidy sum
tiny tots
to the bitter end
tonsorial parlor
took things into his own hands
toothsome viands
tripped the light fantastic
turned turtle
typical Westerner
under existing circumstances
undercurrent of excitement
unexpected occurrence
union was blessed with children
vale of tears
venerable old man
well-known clubman
went to her final rest
whipped out a gun
white as a sheet
will be long remembered
will be missed by one and all
wished her many more of them
wonderful repast
worked like Trojans
CHAPTER VII
BIG NEWS IN THE COUNTRY COMMUNITY
LOCAL news has been found to be the first essential of the
country newspaper, and an analysis of any number of country
newspapers will show that there are certain kinds of local
news that seem to be the foundation of the local service.
In considering news stories for the front page of the country
paper, several kinds of stories appear to have a place that
is sure and certain.
.^feto^^e^^-fe the city paper an obituary is run in small
typeln an obscure part of the paper and must be paid for just
as any kind of advertising. In the country paper the practice
is diametrically opposed to this. Some one has said that a per
son hears of a man only three times in his life: namely, when
he is born, married, and buried. If such be the case it adds
to the importance of the obituary. A death in a small town
is an event. The person who dies was known to many of the
residents of the town and had many friends there who were
interested in him. It is not the fact that people like to hear
of ; the death of a friend that makes the obituary such a big
story in the smaller community, but rather that they wish
that friend's passing to be recorded as a part of the history
of the community and indirectly a part of the history of their
own lives.
A death occurs infrequently enough in a smaller community
to be unusual. In the city where many die each day, news
paper readers get used to reading of deaths and their interest
is not held by a story of such frequent happening. Then too,
in the city there is seldom any acquaintance with the person
who dies, which, if there were, would make the story of
interest to the average reader.
The spirit of neighborliness in a small town makes everyone
interested in everyone else. Whether the person who died was
a particular friend of the man who lives a block up the street
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does not matter so much, for he was a friend to some one else
who was known to both. Interest in the community, in the
people who have lived there and devoted their lives to building
up the community, makes the obituary a big story in the small
town newspaper.
It is a common heritage that men think only of the good
things of a man's life after he has died. This feeling of rever
ence toward the dead makes the obituary of greater interest.
Most country people like to feel that the neighbor who has
died has been appreciated, and they want to see him spoken
of creditably in the instrument that records the life happen
ings of the community. This has led to many violations of
journalistic laws in the country press, and the old idea that
an obituary should contain praises of the departed is still held
in many places.
Writing the Obituary. Very often the pastor of the church
to which the deceased person belonged writes the obituary.
When the pastor understands writing for newspaper publica
tion, this practice is a very good one; but too often he does not
understand what constitutes news and injects a great deal of
his own ideas and the comments of neighbors and friends into
the obituary. In justice it must be said that he usually has all
the facts necessary, so that the event is completely covered.
Very often, too, he has an understanding of the person's life
and his value to the community which makes it possible for
him to write sympathetically, though frequently with less
judiciousness than he should,
First of all, the editor, if he is to write an obituary, should
have all the facts concerning the person's life and death before
him. He must write a short history of the person's life as well
as the facts about his death. It is not sufficient to say that
the man was born in such a year, lived here for the past ten
years, and is survived by a wife and so many children. One
must know something of what the man did for a living, the
various positions that he held, and what success he attained
in his calling. One must have an idea of the man's character
and the esteem in which he was held by those who knew him,
must know the man's personal history since coming to the
town in which he died and the achievements that were big
events in his life. If possible the facts concerning the man's
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boyhood and his education should be a part of the obituary.
His family will be mentioned as his survivors, but no elaborate
and heartrending passage need be used to say that his wife
and children are still living. The editor needs to know where
the funeral services were held ; who the officiating member of
the clergy was, and when and where the burial took place.
When there are a number of relatives and old friends from
out of town attending the funeral this information is a part
of the obituary. It is customary with many newspapers to
carry an account of the funeral ceremony describing the serv
ices and procession in detail and commenting upon the flora]
offerings. When such an account is a statement of facts only
it adds interest to the obituary, but when it becomes an expres
sion of the writer's idea as to what an elaborate and fitting
funeral ceremony ought to be, it is objectionable.
There still are some newspapers that use obituaries filled
with praise for the deceased, and editorial comment in the
form of glowing terms applied to his life and work. Editorial
comment in news stories is not infrequent, but there is more
comment in the average obituary in the small- town newspaper
than in all the news stories. It has never been proved that
this praise of a dead person is objectionable from the reader's
standpoint, but it is frowned upon by editors of the better
newspapers because it does not present the news in a fair, un
biased manner. In all probability there is no harm done by it,
but also there is little good accomplished. If the paper has a
policy of presenting fair, uncolored news in other stories, it
should make an effort to do the same in obituaries. Yet in
an analysis of one hundred country newspapers of the United
States, made by the writer in 1926, editorial comment was
found in the obituaries of papers whose news stories were
entirely free from it. There still seems to be a vestige of the
idea that the least an editor can do after a person is dead is
to give him a certain amount of praise in his obituary.
Words and Phrases to Avoid. Variations of "She was a
kind and loving mother" occur in all of the obituaries of
women which contain editorial comment of any kind. It has
been suggested that no doubt the editor had first-hand infor
mation and that the statement is true. Perhaps it is, but it is
an expression of opinion and has been used so much that it has
COUNTRY JOURNALISM 77
become a joke to the reader. "Leaves to mourn his loss/' and
"Is survived by a sorrowing wife" were also found in many
obituaries. An expression of sorrow is generally found in the
obituary containing comment as well as some such statement
as "The Press joins with the many friends in extending sym
pathy to the bereaved ones." All of the words and phrases
used to express the sorrow of the community and friends can
not be given for they are too numerous. The same rules apply
to editorial comment in obituaries that apply to news stories.
The obituary is a news story, just as the record of any other
happening is a news story, and should be written essentially as
other stories are written. This does not mean that the obit
uary should not have a tone which suggests dignity and an
appreciation of the seriousness of the occasion. It should
record sympathetically the passing of a friend and neighbor,
but all this can be done without making the story read like a
chapter from a melodrama or loading it with trite, worn-out
words and phrases that are put in just because the editor
thinks he must praise the dead. An obituary is a complete,
short history of the dead person's life and an accurate, unbiased
report of his death and burial. Flowery language and wordy
sentences are to be avoided. Often an attempt at being ora
torical is responsible for writing that cannot be read without
provoking mirth and disgust.
When a person has died it is not necessary to try to cover
up that fact by saying that "he passed away" or "departed
this life." Most newspapers of good standing today prefer
the use of the word "die" to any paraphrase. References to a
woman's work in the church are used by many, and are not
objectionable when they are statements of fact. Actually, the
only rule an editor needs in writing an obituary for the coun
try paper, if he will follow it rigidly, is the one he follows in
the rest of his work: "Record what happens, completely,
fairly, and sympathetically, making sure that nothing is told
that is not fact." _ y
Use of Poetry in Obituaries. Some country newspapers still
permit the use of poetry in the body or at the end of an obit
uary. This is a relic brought down from the age when the
editor inserted his own ideas and comment anywhere and
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everywhere in the newspaper. None of the country news
papers investigated by the writer in 1925-6 that were finan
cially sound and doing a paying business, allowed such a
practice. The city newspapers permit it in some cases but it
is run as paid advertising. Most of this verse is very homely
and of a consolatory nature. It is often ludicrous and adds
nothing to the well-written obituary. In all cases it is an
injection of editorial comment; and even when well written
serves only to bring forth more tears where many have already
fallen. The tendency today in the best country journalism is
to end the obituary when the facts have all been used and to
suffix no poetry or comment when the story has been told.
The following introductory passage was taken from an
obituary appearing in a country newspaper in December, 1926.
It shows the use of numerous trite phrases and the insertion
of much editorial comment. Names have been changed.
This week it becomes our sad duty
to record the passing of one of our
town's pioneer business men and a be
loved citizen, John Doe, who passed to
the Great Beyond Wednesday night at
about 10 o'clock, following a long ill
ness from cancer. His passing was not
entirely unexpected, but his death comes
as a sad blow to the community in which
he has made his home the past 26 years.
"Jack/' as he was familiarly known, was
69 years of age at the time of his pass
ing from this mortal sphere, and had
not the dread disease gained such a firm
hold he would have spent many more
useful years. But He who is Father of
all, and is all-wise, knoweth best, and
we, His children abide with Him and
His will, confident that he who lives an
honest, upright life and departs this
world goes to another world where all
is perfect and sadness and sorrow is
unknown.
The obituary which follows shows the kind of interesting
news story that a country editor can get about a death and the
way in which it can be fairly and sympathetically written
without the loss of dignity and seriousness. This example
was taken from one of the very few country newspapers that
can be found in the United States which have news free from
editorial comment.
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(From the Carrington Independent, Carrington, N. D.)
HENRY DEXTER
PIONEER FARMER
PASSES AT EIGHTY
Henry B. Dexter, Pioneer homesteader
who on Nov. 13 was 80 years old, died
late Wednesday evening at the home of
his daughter Mrs. P. E, Puckett, of this
city, where he had been staying since
his retirement from active work.
Funeral services are set tentatively for
Sunday afternoon^ pending the arrival
of relatives. The services will be con
ducted from the Congregational church.
Henry Dexter was born Nov. 13, 1849
in Holland where he spent the early part
of his life. He was married at the age
of 28 years to Miss Elsie Bush; and the
couple came to America in 1879, stopping
first at New York, 'and going to Chat-
field, Minn. They came to North
Dakota in 1899, taking a homestead 14
miles west of Carrington near the Hawk's
Nest. Mrs. Dexter died in 1908 and in
1912, Mr. Dexter sold the homestead. ^
He returned to Holland, married again,
but in 1917 was forced to separate from
his wife and return to America on ac
count of the war.
Six children who survive are: Mrs.
D. W. O'Connell of Ray; Mrs. C. T.
Boyd, Straubille, N. D., Francis Dexter
of Mink, Mont., and Mrs. Puckett of
this city.
Twenty-two grandchildren and eight
great-grandchildren also survive Mr.
Dexter.
Stories of weddings are nearly as fre
quently found in the country papers as are obituaries. Be
cause marriage is one of the main events in a person's life,
the wedding story has a right to an important place in a coun
try paper. Since it is important it should be well written.
The first essential of a well written wedding story in the coun
try paper is that it be^caSiBMe. I* 1 the city dailies little
mention is made of the ordinary wedding and much space in
the society columns is given only to stories of those people
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who in the small town would be known as the "400." Fortu
nately for all concerned, the society of the small town does
not have so many cliques and classes as in the city, and when
a marriage takes place the chances are that the bride and
bridegroom have many friends in the community who would
like to see a good story of the affair. The ordinary wedding
gets perhaps a few lines or no mention at all in the city daily,
but in the country paper many wedding stories run more than
a column. In order to write such a story the editor must have
all of the facts at his disposal.
It is not necessary to give a complete history of the con
tracting parties in a wedding story as it is in an obituary, for
most of the citizens of the town are acquainted with the figures
in the wedding and know much of their history. Generally
they are relatively young people who have lived most if not
all of their lives in that community. It is necessary, however,
to know many facts about the main characters. Their ;naoieSL
are, of course, of most importance since names are the chief
element of local news. Above all, the names in a wedding
story must be right. Nothing is so irritating as to find that
you have married off the wrong man or woman in the wedding
story.
Other facts necessary for the wedding story are those con
nected with the life of the bride and groom and with the cere
mony. The place of residence is important as well as the
place where the couple will reside after they are at home to
their friends. The history of either party before coming to the
town is not so important as higjif,e,in Jthat L town, and in this
paragraph a brief but complete summary can fee made. If
the man has figured prominently in the affairs of the town,
either political or economic, that fact is important in the wed
ding story. It is not necessary to insert editorial comment to
make readers see the necessary facts. The bride's identity is
one of the important things concerning her because old friends
will not recognize her by her new name unless they know
who she was before her marriage.
Not every wedding will make as good a news story as the
one which has an elaborate ceremony, but the simple wedding
should not go unnoticed. Too often the editor waits for the
wedding with frills so that he can write a flowery story of the
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incidentals. When such a large ceremony is part of the wed
ding it will be included in the story after making sure that
the details are correct. In writing of the ceremony there are
so many minor details that are considered of great importance
that one is likely to forget some. The decorations, guests,
friends and relatives who were present, the flowers, the dinner,
the wedding program, and all the rest are important parts of
the wedding story. The social and political importance of the
guests who attend a wedding is generally considered of great
interest and this fact is usually played up considerably in the
story.
The likelihood of offending some one by omitting something
considered important by him is very great in -writing a wedding
story for the country paper. The facts of the wedding are
best obtained from the contracting parties themselves, or, if
this is not possible, from the parents of the bride. There is
no need to worry about their leaving anything out and the
information will be complete, if not entirely usable. Still
greater is the danger of making enemies by writing one wed
ding up at length and giving another only scant attention.
Every effort should be made to get all the news there is con
cerning the affair and to use all of this news that can possibly
be included in the story. There is no danger of making it too
long; the complete, well- written wedding story makes many
strong friends. It is obvious that irrelevant facts should^ not
be included even though they are part of the information given
to the editor. Personal gossip such as the financial affairs of
the bride or groom should be omitted and only those facts
included that the public has a right to know. Private affairs
are not a legitimate part of a wedding story.
Nothing is so offensive to an intelligent reader as a wishy-
washy wedding story in which the writer has tried to be clever
and has been only laughable. One editor who could not get
the facts first hand used a letter from the bride as the wedding
story. You can imagine the bride's consternation when she
read: "I was attired in a blue georgette dress/' etc. ^Needless
to say, the editor made many enemies by such an action. The
rules governing the writing of other news stories apply with
the same force to the writing of wedding stories, and nowhere
does poor form become so noticeable. Puns and jokes are
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clearly out of place in a wedding story and the tone of the
whole article should be one of seriousness as the occasion is
itself. Whether or not the editor feels that a wedding is a com
mon occurrence to be rather lightly regarded, he should re
member that it is a big event in the lives of the couple being
married.
The elaborate church wedding demands a complete write-
up and the way in which the story can be interestingly and
completely written without the use of comment and opinion is
shown by the following story from the Hartford (Conn.)
Times.
Miss Helen McLanahan, daughter of
Mrs. George Xavier McLanahan of New-
Haven, and Ellery S. Husted of Peeks-
kill, N. Y., were married Monday after
noon at 4:30 in Center church, New
Haven. The church was decorated with
pink roses. Two columns, entwined with
pink roses and maidenhair fern stood
at either side of an archway of roses
on the church altar, a low screen of roses
being across the entire front of the altar.
Palms and ferns served as a background.
The pews on the aisle were marked by
small bouquets > of pink^ roses and
maidenhair fern tied with pink tulle and
placed at every fourth pew. Just before
the wedding party entered the church,
the ushers enclosed the pews with white
tulle and over the white carpet laid an
other one for the bride and her attend
ants. The Rev. Dr. Charles Woods,
pastor of the Church of the Covenant,
Washington, D. C., which the McLana
han family attends when living in their
Q street home in Washington, assisted by
the Rev. Oscar E. Maurer, pastor of the
church, performed the ceremony, using
the single ring service.
The ten ushers preceded the bride up
the aisle to the altar, and included Mr.
Husted's three brothers, James W.
Husted, Jr., Yale 1918; John G. W.
Husted of Forest Street, Hartford, Yale
1920; and Robert Husted, and the fol
lowing classmates of the bridegroom:
James P. Hendrick of New York;
Walter Donahue of Seattle, Wash. ; Ed
ward C. Smith, Jr., of Rye, N. Y.; John
L. O'Brien of West Chazy, N. Y.; John
Brooks of Bethel; Charles P. Stone, Jr.,
of Washington, D. C.; Stuart Symington
of Baltimore, and Francis Comstock of
New Haven, Miss Louise McLanahan,
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younger sister of the bride, who made
her debut in Washington last season, was
maid of honor. Mrs. William Stevenson.
of New York, the former Miss Eleanor
Bumstead of New Haven, was matron
of honor. The bridesmaids included
Miss Helen Curtis and Miss Cornelia
Curtis of New York, cousins of the
bride; Miss Eugenie Edmunds of St.
Louis, Mo.; Miss Maude Smith of New
York, and Miss Mary Nettleton of New
Haven, who took the place of Misa
Deborah Dixon of Baltimore, Md., who
was suddenly taken ill. The bride entered
the church with her brother, Duer
McLanahan, Yale 1923, who gave her in
marriage. She wore a white satin,
princess model gown with a deep flounce
of silver lace on the skirt, the sleeveless
gown being studded with rhinestones and
pearls. From her shoulders hung a court
train of mousseline embroidered in pearls
and rhinestones in a lily pattern, out
lined in silver threads. Over this long
train hung the tulle veil, which was ar-,
ranged from a close-fitting cap of Burano
lace which had been on her mother's
wedding gown. She carried a shower
bouquet of orchids and lilies-of-the-
valley.
At the altar, the bride was met by
Mr. Husted and his best man, his
brother, David R. Husted, also of the
class of 1923 Yale. All of the bride's
attendants were dressed alike in soft
Nile green georgette made with full cir
cular skirts trimmed with irregular band
ings of gold braid, the long-waisted
blouses finished at the neckline in back
with a small bow with long streamers.
The sleeves were long and tight, banded
irregularly with the gold braid and made
with frill cuffs which fell over the wrist.
They wore picture hats of pale green
horsehair with a cluster of roses droop
ing off the right side. Their slippers
were of gold kid, and they carried large
bouquets of yellow Coolidge roses, with
a scattering of blue sweet peas and blue
Queen Anne's lace, and tied with heavy
gold cloth ribbon. A large reception fol
lowed on the grounds surrounding Mrs.
McLanahan's home on Whitney Avenue.
The natural beauty of the gardens lent
a perfect background to the scene. In a
large marquee there was a long table
where the bridal party sat, rambler roses
and maidenhair ferns outlining the table.
The guests sat at small round tables
placed outside the marquee, their deco-
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rations consisting of vases of spring
flowers.
A string orchestra played throughout
the reception and later for dancing.
Mrs. McLanahan, assisting in receiving
the guests, wore a pale gray embroidered
chiffon ensemble, with gown and cape
matching, and a large horsehair hat of
gray. Her corsage was of lavender
orchids. Mr. and Mrs. Husted sailed
this week for a European wedding trip.
The bride is a graduate of Rosemary
Hall, and was graduated with honors
from Oxford University. Several seasons
ago she was introduced to society in
Washington. Mr. Husted, who was
voted the most popular man of the class
of 1923 at Yale, is now attending the
Yale School of Fine Arts, department
of architecture. Until he completes his
course he and his bride will make their
home in New Haven. Both Mr. and
Mrs. Husted have been frequent visitors
in Hartford.
^r-An analysis of the front page of one hundred
weekly newspapers published in 1926 revealed the fact that
school news of some sort was a part of more than three-fourths
of those pages. This shows clearly the importance of school
news for the country paper. For practically every issue of
the community paper, particularly every issue during the
school term, there will be good, live school news that deserves
front-page space. Some of the weeklies analyzed carried two
or more columns of school news, which shows that there is an
abundance of good school news if the editor wishes to get it.
Many of the papers had a regular department of school news
in addition to the stories that were important enough to be
placed on the front page.
Why School News Is Important. In the country community
school news is of great importance because it is packed with
local interest. The school system in the smaller community
is one of the community's biggest institutions. In the very
small communities, and to a certain extent in the larger ones
also, practically everything that goes on during the school
term is in some way connected with the school. The basket
ball games are most frequently between the high school team
and other high school teams and this athletic news is more
interesting to readers of the community paper than is the big
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story of the baseball scandal in remote regions. The many en
tertainments which the school sponsors, such as musicales,
literary society programs, parent-teachers entertainment fea
tures, home-talent plays and lyceum courses, make up a large
part of the town's life. Very often the school will bring men
to the community who are nationally known and whom local
people would be able to hear in no other way.
At special seasons of the year such as Thanksgiving, Christ
mas, Washington's and Lincoln's birthdays, Easter, and Me
morial Day, the schools have a large part in the exercises to
commemorate the occasions. These various exercises are at
tended by many if not most of the townspeople and make good
news stories.
Interest of All Taxpayers. Practically every taxpayer in
the community is vitally interested in what the schools are
doing because he is helping to support the schools. The
amount of money that goes for school support is very often
larger than that devoted to any other institution that the tax
payers support. It is only natural that a man will want to
know what is being done with his money and will be interested
in the results the schools are getting. Whether he has any
children in school or not, he is interested from the financial
standpoint. It is true that some taxpayers are more interested
in trying to find a way to cut down on the school's appropria
tion, but others, because of this opposition, are that much
more anxious that the school's good work be allowed to
continue.
Parents' Interest in Their Children. There is nothing in
which average, honest parents are more interested than their
children. No matter where people live, how good or how
poor their circumstances, no matter what their education or
abilities, no matter what their ideas or creeds, they always
believe in their children. This is such a well-understood
human trait that no one would question its existence. The
school teacher knows how strong this feeling is because he
has listened numerous times to Mrs. So-and-so tell what "an
unusual child" little Roland or little Pete is, and may even
have been confronted by an irate parent who thought that his
or her boy or girl was not getting fair treatment. Business
men in all lines of work realize the strength of this parental
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feeling and have learned the value of appealing to parents
through their children. Recently, country editors have started
to use the same idea and their subscription lists have increased
accordingly.
All news about children has a great appeal, but the news of
the child in school has a greater appeal than most other kinds.
The reason is that in school the child comes in contact with
other children and begins to take an active part in life which
teaches him the laws and privileges of society. Parents want
to see how their children are adapting themselves, what ac
complishments they are making, how they are succeeding in
this school life which is a step toward the real one. If a father
can't resist telling his friend about the cute thing the little
baby does, how much harder is it for him to keep from telling
about the honor that has just come to his son in high school.
The activities of school life have a different significance for
parents than the antics of the young child, and this significance
is greater because of the association and competition which
school life affords.
Getting School News. Organizing news-gathering forces,
always limited, to get all the school news has been a serious
problem with some country editors. The system of visiting
the school on certain days of the week and trying to get the
news from teachers has been tried and sometimes proved a suc
cess. If the teachers are trained to remember things of news
interest that are going on or happen in their classes, this
method will give good results. Very often it happens that the
teacher has no "nose for news" and remembers nothing of
interest, and then the editor must get his news from some
other source.
Another method that has been tried, sometimes with suc
cess, is to have some student in each room or each high school
class act as a reporter for the town paper and send in all the
items of interest that he finds during the week. This works
successfully with those students who are far enough advanced
to realize the relative importance of happenings. It gives
poor results in the rooms filled with smaller children.
By far the best method country publishers have hit upon
to get school news is the use of a section of the community
paper for school news only. The school chooses a name for
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its section of the paper and writes its news as if it were putting
out a real paper. Generally there is a regular organized staff
with reporters who have certain beats to cover. This relieves
the editor of a great deal of work and gives more complete
news. It has the added advantage of exciting much interest
among the students and making them work harder. They feel
that this section of the paper belongs to them and they must
make good to merit praise. Unless one has "been there" he
cannot realize how the student feels who is successful in get
ting his material printed. It is the thrill that comes once in a
lifetime, but it can come every week. The editor usually re
serves the right to edit the school copy so that it conforms
to his paper's style, and generally there is a teacher in charge
of the school organization of reporters. If this teacher is a
good critic, the editor will have little to do.
When the high school publishes a paper of its own the editor
can get much of his news from the same staff that handles
the school publication. Sometimes it is necessary to explain
in detail to these students just why the same news in both
papers will be a help to each of them. Even then the school
staff may refuse to cooperate with the local editor and he
must make other arrangements for his news-gathering.
It is sometimes possible to get one high school student who
is a live wire and a satisfactory writer to act as school reporter
for the community paper. Most of the news can be secured
through him and with the editor's assistance he will be able
to cover adequately everything of news value. This reporter
is paid for his services and also gets considerable honor from
his position.
Kinds of School News. While the editor with a real sense
of news values will need little to tell him the things about
school that make good news stories, a few suggestions as to
the various kinds of school news that can be secured may
prove helpful. At some time there will be news about:
The building: new buildings, plans, additions or improve
ments, need for larger quarters, need for more equipment, ad
ditions to equipment, repairs of all kinds.
Teachers: features on past experience and training, appoint
ments, salaries, need for more teachers, teaching conditions.
Activities: programs, societies, bands and orchestras, boys'
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and girls 3 clubs, athletic organizations, work of various rooms,
exhibits, lyceum courses, plays, preparation for graduation
and graduation exercises, projects.
General: honor roll, scholarship, attendance, disciplinary
measures, regulations, administration, books, parent-teachers
organizations.
.CljUcLcente 1 Organizations. Connected with the school are
many organizations exclusively for children, and their activi
ties make very good news. Among these organizations may
be mentioned the Boy Scouts, Girl Scouts, Girl Reserves, Camp
Fire Girls, Four Square Club, Boy Pioneers, Boys' and Girls 7
Project Clubs, Cooking Club, and numerous others. These
groups have regular programs outlined for their work and
accomplish many things of interest to parents. Meetings are
usually held regularly and business of interest both to parents
and children transacted. Although these organizations are
strictly for boys and girls, yet what they do is of interest to
the parents. Viewed in the light of doing something of endur
ing worth and judged by the standard applied to groups of
adults, these activities may not seem to the editor to be very
important. The interest of parents in them, however, is in
no way proportional to the seriousness of the results but
rather to the number of children they have in the groups.
This fact must not be lost sight of because it is the reason that
news of all children's activities is so important, particularly
in the small community.
School Sport News^-All sport news is interesting and the
sports events. In fact, most of the sport
news that the country paper carries, except in the summer
baseball season, will be about school athletics. Beginning in
the fall with football or outdoor basketball, and lasting
through the school term with basketball, baseball, track and
other sports, there will be all kinds of sport news connected
with school athletics.
The way in which this news will be secured will depend upon
the editor and the arrangements he makes. Some have found
it advisable to send a man with the high school team when it
makes a trip, particularly one on which several games will be
played. There will be little difficulty in getting the news of
events in the town because the editor can and should attend
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them. Other editors have found it possible to have one boy on
each team in every kind of sport act as a reporter for the
paper and give the editor the main facts upon the return of
the team from another town.
If there is the cooperation between the editor and the coach
that there can and should be, there will be no trouble in get
ting sport news connected with the school. Some coaches are
paid a certain inch rate for all the sport news they give the
paper. Others are content to write the stories for no pay, to
be sure that sport news is fairly and completely presented. It
means a great deal to a coach to have stories of his team's ac
tivities and games carefully, accurately, and sympathetically
written, and he is very anxious to cooperate with the editor
in helping to get this done. The editor can help the coach a
great deal and the coach can in turn do the editor many a good
turn. Such cooperation between editor and coach assures
local readers of all the sport news about all events and insures
them of an intelligent interpretation of the results. This ar
rangement will not lead to a domination of the sport news by
the coach, unless the editor is afraid to assert himself. Many
country editors are using such a system of getting sport news
with good success.
CHAPTER VIII
THE COMMUNITY PAPER'S NEWS POLICY
"All the News That's Fit to Print." This is the slogan of
several newspapers in the United States whose editors realize
that in order to publish the right kind of newspaper they must
exercise carefully a well-defined critical function. Perhaps
there are still some editors who believe that "anything that
the Lord lets happen is good enough to be published/ 7 but at
least in country journalism these editors are very few. The
difference between news that is fit to print and news that needs
to be printed is also very great. There are times when the
country editor gets a story which, while it will not cause any
great furor in the community, is, nevertheless, very poor mate
rial for him to publish.
Country editors, that is, the best of them ; have come to the
conclusion that the best slogan for the country paper is "All
the news that ought to be printed/' or, in other words, the
news which is of a constructive nature. One who reads the city
papers every day can hardly reconcile this idea with the prac
tice of some city dailies which print anything and everything
that happens, being careful only to omit any news that would
injure some one who is a power in the group of "higher ups."
In this, as in many other things, there is a wide difference
..beiween country journalism and city journalism.
/ Country and City Contrasted. The reason that a country
editor does not print much news of the kind carried by city
papers is that he is dealing with a different class of people
^Hnder widely different conditions. You are not shocked when
yoUf^ead in your city daily that some person whom you have
n^ver heard of has been arrested on a charge of stealing. You
fare used to seeing such accounts and you read them out of
curiosity, just to know what has been going on. What is your
feeling, however, if you read in the little country paper that
an old friend of yours has been arrested on a charge of steal-
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ing? You are immediately affected because the man is a friend
of yours. "There must be some mistake/ 3 you say, and you
are very anxious to have the arrested man proved innocent.
The difference lies in the extent of your interest, in the degree
to which the two accounts affect you.
In the city, a crime is just so much news, no matter who
committed it, and very few persons are affected by the publish
ing of the news. In the country, a crime of any kind is a ca
lamity, not only for the man who is accused of committing it
but for all his relatives, for all his friends and ultimately for
the entire community. Very few persons are affected in the
city simply because very few know the man or any of his
friends.
The man who violates the law in a big city is tried, pays his
fine or does his time in jail and then goes to another part of the
city to start up in business again or to make his living as he
did before. The man who violates a law in the country com
munity is an outcast for the rest of his life as far as that com
munity is concerned. Will it help to broadcast his mistakes
and misfortunes and to lower him still more in the eyes of his
former friends? Unless you have lived in a country commun
ity you cannot imagine the harm that can be done by destruc
tive writing about some individual. Least of all can you
imagine the heartaches, the misery and grief that parading a
man's misfortunes can cause to his friends in his community.
The damage that can be done to a man's family by giving
publicity to his mistakes in the country paper can never be
repaired. Such a story can do no good and hurts everyone in
that community.
The Herington (Kansas) Sun treats news of crime and mis
demeanors in a way that will not necessarily expose the offend
ers to ridicule but will serve to warn others that the law is
enforced.
A Herington man was accused of using
boisterous and profane language on the
street Sunday night in such a manner
as to annoy and offend passers-by, many
of whom were going home from church.
Judge Schuyler finally convinced him
that ten dollars would be about right, or,
he could make big ones into little ones.
He paid.
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The Sympathetic Attitude. What Does It Mean? -"Sym-
pathetic" is one of the most used and least understood words
in the language. To some persons it means lending whatever
aid they can in helping those who are much less fortunate than
themselves, that is, those who are "all in, down, and out." To
others, no one is ever out although he may be down and they
are sympathetic when they help that person to help himself.
To some, sympathetic means looking out for the best interests
of those who are the most powerful, who have the most money
and the most "pull" in that community. To some, sympa
thetic really means hypocrisy, the wearing of a long face when
misfortune hits some one with whom they are not in the least
concerned. These in the latter class, the hypocrites, are dead
wood in the community structure ; they are weeds in the com
munity garden.
To the constructive community editor, sympathetic means
doing the kind deed and saying the kind word to help everyone
he can in every way he can. It means recording in his little
history of the community those thoughts, words, and deeds
which go to make the community a better place and to help
members of the community to be the best possible citizens.
Sympathy, to this ideal editor, is the key to the door which
opens upon happiness. It is his guiding principle of life.
In determining what stories should be printed in a country
paper and the way in which stories are to be written, a sym
pathetic attitude of mind will guide the country editor. In
stead of saying that John Smith closed his place of business
Saturday because he found that it was a total failure, the sym
pathetic country editor will record only the facts and will say
that John Smith closed his business because he thought he
had better prospects somewhere else.
Below are two stories about the same happening. Which
one is written sympathetically, and which will do more good?
Mr. and Mrs. John Doe, who came
to this city with the idea of making
quick money in the restaurant business
some five years ago, have sold their
place of business and have given up the
work as a bad job. Expenses were so
great, according to Mr. Doe, that there
was no money to be made in this par
ticular community. Things have gone
from bad to worse, especially in the
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last year because several other restau
rants have opened up and the competi
tion has been much keener. Lately the
restaurant has been frequented by char
acters of questionable worth and the
place has been under the suspicion of
members of the police force. A party
will be given for Mr. and Mrs. Doe by
some friends on Thursday night as they
leave Friday morning for Minneapolis
where Mr. Doe is to be employed as
manager of one of Kirby's restaurants.
Friends of Mr. and Mrs. John Doe,
who for the past five years have 9perated
the Cozy restaurant in our city, will
give them a farewell party Thursday
evening at the home of Mr. and Mrs.
John Smith. Mr. Doe has sold his place
of business and leaves to become the
manager of one of Kirby's restaurants
in Minneapolis. The Kirby restaurants
are a national institution known all over
the country. Mr. Doe formerly worked
for the Kirby company before coming
to this city.
Mr. and Mrs. Doe came here five
years ago from Thomtown and upon
taking over the old Cozy restaurant, had
it repaired and made into an up-to-date
eating house. Mr. Doe believes that
since several restaurants have been
established here during the past year or
two he will d9 better, in a business way,
in Minneapolis. Mr. and Mrs. Doe will
leave for their new^ home in the big
city on Friday morning.
The editor had the same set of facts with which to write
each story but the way he used those facts made a world of
difference. In this case the reputation of the man would
have suffered only in the memory of those who remained be
hind, but if that man should have ever wanted to come back
to the local community he would not have found very much of
a welcome or many friends, had the first story been run.
Lastly, and most important, running the first story cannot
possibly help a single person in the community nor the com
munity itself. It is full of bile and bitter, mean statements.
Even the fact that the place has been under the suspicion of
the police, although true, is near-libelous material. It will
not help anyone to say these words, and the paper has no right
to cast reflection on anyone until something is definitely found
in violation of the law. Taking everything into consideration,
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the story written by the sympathetic editor who knows that
he can't do any good by stating distasteful facts, is far better
for all concerned.
The Community Betterment Policy. Every story that ap
pears in the country paper either adds to the value of the
community or detracts from it. Be it ever so little difference
that a two-line local makes, nevertheless it does make a dif
ference. Since the editor is the proprietor of a community
institution, he is interested in making that community a good
place to live in and a good place for his business. If he is wise
he will do all in his power, which is much, to make readers
think that the community is up and coming, that it is pros
perous and that it is peopled with the best men and women.
To do this the editor does not have to load his stories with
editorial comment,, nor does he have to fabricate material.
All he needs to do is to choose his news with the evident idea
in mind of doing the most good to the greatest number in
his community. It takes a long time to overcome the effects
of one article which attempts to show everyone that the com
munity is a veritable graveyard, or a nest of criminals. On
the other hand, a well-written account of the good things
which happen in that community will make p'eople proud that
it is their home, and when they are in that mood everyone is
happy and prosperous.
On the editorial page, the wise country editor calls the com
munity's attention to the good things that have happened in
the community. He tells the readers about one of their neigh
bors who has achieved something which is worth while or
about a man who has done noble work. He also calls readers'
attention to the fact that right here in the local community
are business men who deserve and need the support of local
buyers. Every chance the editor gets to boost local business
men, local institutions, and all home-town folks, he does it
because it means a happy, prosperous community.
Since the editor has a page upon which he can place his
comment, and since he believes in giving news facts free from
comment, he exercises his critical judgment in determining
what kind of news will benefit the community. Any news
which will be to the detriment of the town and community
is clearly not good news for anyone. The country editor be-
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lieves that by choosing his news so that he prints only that
which in the end makes for community betterment, he is
fulfilling the function of a good news recorder for the country
community.
Private Affairs. Just What Is Private? Although gossip
flows, freely in a country town, the editor who makes a prac
tice of printing everything he hears is sure to be sorry.
The subjects of the gossip in the small town range anywhere
from what John Brown spent his last pay check for to the mari
tal troubles of Mr. and Mrs. John Doe. The gossipy person
knows no limits, respects no one's opinion, and has no concep
tion of what the right of privacy is. As long as the topic is
interesting to the gossip he will talk about it in any manner
that pleases him.
The country editor must realize that there are certain things
which the readers of his paper have no right to know about.
For instance, as long as John Brown does not do anything that
affects the rest of the residents in the community he may
spend his last pay check as he pleases, and the way he spends
it should not be told in the paper. What Mr. Smith thinks
or says in private "about some one else has no place as a story
in the country paper, even if Mr. Smith should want it printed
there, which is very improbable unless it is complimentary.
These things are simply not matters for publication as they
concern only private parties and in no way affect the public
at large.
The marital troubles of members of the community are no
one's business but their own until they become public by some
violation of law or some public step. In the story which is
to follow, under "Bad Taste in News Writing/' the fact that
a man proposed to a woman and married her a very short time
afterward is his own business; it did not affect the public in
any way and was therefore a private matter which should
never have seen the printed page. So insatiable is some per
sons' curiosity that they cannot recognize anything as private.
Besides showing very poor taste, such material is generally
exceedingly libelous because it may injure a man's reputation.
Bad Taste in News Writing. What possible interest any
one could have in satirizing a woman's life after she is dead, is
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hard for an ordinary person with human compassion to realize.
Saying the unkind word is bad enough when a person is alive,
but to say it after death, is little and inhuman. In the story
which follows some one has tried to publish all he could of that
which would hurt everyone connected with the person who
died. Bad taste in news writing for the country paper could not
be more clearly demonstrated than in this atrocious article. It
is nothing less than barbarous in its content and primitive in
its style. What affairs are private if many of those mentioned
in this story are not? What can a person do or say in this
life that will not be forced on readers of the country paper if
such stories are allowed to be published?
Anything shows bad taste in news writing that offends read
ers and makes them feel ashamed of the editor who would
permit such material to be run. No one, surely, with any
real community spirit in him, or any sense of shame for that
matter, can read this story and not feel ashamed for the one
who wrote it. The story contains all the faults that can be
found in stories in country papers: it is full of comment; it
parades all the private affairs of the individual; it satirizes and
seeks to shame a person who is now dead; it is libelous and
attempts to ruin a man and his business; it exhibits the poor
est taste in choice of material and in style that could appear.
This story appeared in a country paper in 1926,
FANNIE ALLEN
PASSES AWAY IN
JACKSONVILLE
Mrs. Fannie (Allen) Brunaugh, "belle"
of Griggsyille during her girlhood days,
died destitute and alone at the state
hospital in Jacksonville early Friday
morning. Many middle-aged Griggsville
and Pittsfield people remember her as
a ^ charming hostess and lavish enter
tainer. An undertaker notified of her
death did not take charge until he learned
that if relatives refused to pay the funeral
expenses the county, was liable. Mrs.
Brunaugh's remains were taken to
Griggsville. Interment was on the lot
of her father, the late Robert Allen.
Mrs. Brunaugh was 56 years old.
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She seems to have become aged and
disappointed with life soon after going
broke a year or more ago. She had con
siderable money from her father's estate.
In January 1926, she married H. B. Brun
augh of Pike Station. She was his third
wife and their acquaintance was brief.
She advertised for a job as housekeeper
and Brunaugh made her an offer, going
over to Griggsville to make the deal
and take her home. Enroute he sug
gested marriage and they went to Hanni
bal, married, and then began housekeep
ing at Pike Station. He and his brother,
W. W. Brunaugh make a scant living in
the grocery business there and Mrs.
Brunaugh, who liked good clothes, got
very few new dresses. Things went from
bad to worse and seven months after the
marriage she came to Pittsfield in a
dazed condition. She wandered about
town three days early in August and the
matter was called to the attention of
the state's attorney. Mr. Johnston
phoned Brunaugh, who showed up a few
days later, when he learned that she had
been taken to the county farm. Finally
he signed a petition to have her sub
jected to an insanity inquisition, and
she was placed in the state hospital.
Mrs. Brunaugh at no time found fault
with her husband saying only that he
was unkind. Although sick in mind she
seemed to understand that she had no
grounds for a divorce. She had been in
the hospital about .one month and had
at no time shown improvement.
The husband was notified of her
death Friday and left his home at Pike
Station at once expecting to reach
Griggsville in time for the funeral. On
arriving in Pittsfield late Friday night he
learned that the roads were bad and
decided to wait and go over on the
morning train. Because 2200 feet of
track was under water the train did not
run to Maysville. He stayed at the
depot and took the first bus out at 11
a. m., reaching Maysville at noon. No
main line trains went through east and
at 3 o'clock he was still there. He did
not walk the 3-mile stretch to Griggs
ville. The funeral was to have been
held Saturday afternoon at 2 o'clock but
was for some reason postponed until
Monday.
Treatment of Juvenile Delinquency News. It has become a
policy within recent years, even with many city newspapers,
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to treat news of juvenile delinquency cases in a manner dif
ferent from that employed when adults are concerned. Edi
tors have realized that to publish indiscriminately the accounts
of wrongdoing by children instead of helping to make matters
right, serves only as a suggestion to other immature minds.
When one considers that many young boys who have been
found guilty of crimes have confessed that they "saw 'em do it
in the movies" and were thus led to attempt something they
knew to be unlawful, the carefulness needed in the handling
of juvenile delinquency news becomes apparent. Not only is
there grave danger in printing a story about a child criminal
that others will be led by the love of fame and publicity to
attempt the same thing, but there is also much danger of doing
other damage that can never be repaired. Knowing that these
dangers exist, therefore, many editors have come to treat
juvenile delinquency news with great care.
The editor can do much good by publishing the news of
petty crimes in such a manner that those who might be led
to attempt such crimes will be warned that they can only
come to grief by doing so. A child is quick to learn. If he is
so impressed by the account in the local paper of something
wrong that he can imagine himself being punished should he
try the same thing, you may rest assured that he will not try it.
If, on the other hand, he cannot see the wrong in the action
but sees only the notoriety brought to the culprit he will be
very likely to want that notoriety himself.
Editors have sought for a way to present news of juvenile
delinquency which would impress children with the fact that
punishment, grief, and disgrace inevitably follow wrongdoing
and at the same time would not make the child an outcast
from his comrades and would not bring disgrace to his parents.
The method of handling news of juvenile delinquency most in
use among country papers today is that of giving the bare
facts of the news that concern the public at large and omitting
the names or any statements that would point out individ
uals. This is the best method now known from the stand
point of trying to do the greatest good to the greatest number.
The following story is an example of the kind that can do
much harm to the child, to his parents, and to the community
at large.
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LOCAL BOYS ARRESTED
Two of our local boys, John Doe
and Richard Roe, were taken up by the
juvenile delinquency authorities last
Saturday on a charge of breaking into
the candy warehouse of Spear & Gross,
merchants. It is reported that these
boys have committed other minor crimes
and misdemeanors during the past three
months and recently have become quite
daring. They will be brought before
the juvenile court which meets this week
and will be given a hearing. Their par
ents have been notified to report with
the boys on Thursday morning. If the
boys are found to have done what au
thorities suspect them of, they will be
sent to the State Reform School until
they are eighteen years old. They are
now a little more than thirteen years
old.
The above story, besides containing many suppositions not
at all founded upon the facts at hand, is the kind that can
only cause many persons a great deal of grief. The way in
which such news can be constructively handled is shown by the
following write-up of the same happening.
JUVENILE DELINQUENCY NEWS
Two 13-year old boys of this city were
taken in charge by juvenile delinquency
authorities last Saturday and will be
given a hearing before Judge Harker on
Thursday morning. The boys are alleged
to have entered the candy warehouse of
Spear & Gross, merchants, and to have
committed several other violations of
the law. The^ authorities state that all
boys who persist in wrong-doing will be
severely punished.
Suppression of News. The question whether an editor
should suppress all facts in connection with something un
favorable to members of the community will have to be de
cided with each individual case in mind. Some editors believe
in publishing only that news which is definitely boosting the
community, and in suppressing everything which would give
the community or any member of it a bad, name. They believe
this to be the best policy since the news of misdeeds will
travel fast enough in the small community without being
printed. Unless they see that some positive good will come of
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publishing the news, they do not print it. This would seem
to be the wisest policy to follow in all cases and will decide
for the editor what to print and what to ignore. Suppression
in such cases, of the facts that would add misery to woe seems
justified.
There is one type of suppression of news facts, however,
that has nothing to recommend it. That is the suppression
of news which would put some one in a bad light who is a
power in the community. Money is a great wedge with which
men can often gain entrance to the royal class which "can do
no wrong." If it is wrong for one member of the community to
get drunk and disturb the peace, it should be equally wrong
for another. There is no defense for the article which tells of
several men doing wrong and omits mention of some persons
who did as much or more but who are privileged characters.
In a certain instance three men in a country town were
arrested for cattle stealing. Two were day laborers who had
been hired for the job and the third was a man of considerable
wealth and prominence in the community. The two laborers
were put in jail because they couldn't put up a big enough
bond, and the brains of the combination went free under bond.
The following article is similar to the one that appeared in the
country paper.
John Doe, and Richard Roe, two well-
known citizens of Milton, are lodged in
the county bastile where they will be
held until they are tried before the dis
trict court, as they failed to furnish
bond. They were arrested on a charge
of stealing more than 100 head of cattle
from several farmers in the Cat Creek
district.
It is obvious that money and influence were responsible for
the suppression of the news facts about the third man ar
rested. The only fair policy to follow in such cases is either to
suppress all facts or none, provided that the editor doesn't
think it right to give the news facts without names. If any
facts should have been suppressed those concerning the misfor
tune and mistake of the poor men should certainly have been
left put. The amount of harm that could have been done to
the individual of wealth and power was very slight compared
to the ruin that could have been brought to his colleagues.
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Unfortunately, to some editors the thought of offending any
one who is influential is so fearful that they will do many
things against their better judgment to keep that person's
favor.
Publicity News. Although this subject is considered under
"Copyreading" it is closely connected with news policy. Every
country editor receives reams of typewritten and printed copy
both through the mail and from the local agents of national
companies which is publicity material for those companies.
What shall the editor do with this material? Much of it has
considerable news value, but all of it is intended to further
the interests of the firm which sent it out. There are two
extreme policies that may be followed and one which lies be
tween the extremes.
Some editors follow a strict rule that all such copy shall
be thrown into the waste basket. The reasons for this rule are
that very little of the material has news of strong local inter
est, and the editor feels that he is giving away space that
should be paid for. Others feel that all such material is good
time copy, and use it indiscriminately wherever it will fit.
These editors believe that even if the copy is publicity mate
rial it has news value and is very handy when some "filler" is
needed.
The more common practice, and what would seem to be
the more reasonable one, is carefully to edit all such public
ity material, and if sufficient news of strong local interest is
found in the copy to make it worth publishing in a community
paper it is published. There are times when a story sent out
by an automobile concern, let us say, has news in it about a
change in models for the coming year. Local readers will be
interested in these facts because some of them may be con
sidering buying a new car. In such a case the editor will pick
out the facts that he knows will interest local readers and make
a story with those facts. All of the padding that is in the
original copy is deleted because it has little or no interest
for readers of the community paper.
Agricultural news is treated in much the same way. Those
tests, experiments, observations, and schemes that are of in
terest to local farmers are used, and the vast amount of mate
rial which cannot apply to local conditions is thrown away.
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Most editors try to connect the agricultural college copy with
something of strong local interest whenever this is possible.
Movie Publicity. In this connection must be considered the
publicity material that is brought in by the manager of the
local movie theaters. It is an accepted fact that most readers
of the community paper want to know what the characteristics
of the coming production are, but it is also generally known
that much of the material put out by movie publicity agents
is padding and comment. Some editors have established the
rule of limiting stories about coming productions to the bare
facts, cutting out all editorial words and phrases which try to
get the reader to attend the show. Unless the one who writes
the story has seen the movie he doesn't know whether it is
worth recommending or not, and yet many editors take the
movie agent's word that the picture is wonderful. The safest
policy is that of giving all the straight news facts about the
play, such as the name, the actors and actresses, time, place,
and a brief summary. The urging to attend belongs in a
paid advertisement.
The following story illustrates very clearly the kind of pub
licity sent out by movie publicity agents and often run in
country papers. The facts of local interest can all be written
in one short paragraph.
IBANEZ' "TORRENT" IS
A GREAT PICTURE
Tangled motives tangled as life itself,
and indeed the picture is life mark one
of the most astounding plots ever given
the screen, and make one of the most
remarkable departures from the usual
type of picture seen in years, in the
great Cosmopolitan production of
"Ibanez' Torrent."
It is sure entertainment but enter
tainment of so new a type that it
makes one gasp at its sheer original
ity. It has pathos, drama, spectacle,
thrills all blended into a whole that
holds one enthralled, and, as is the
case with a really great work of art,
one realizes, when it is over, that one
has learned a great truth.
Vincente Blasco Ibanez, author of
"The Four Horsemen," has given the
world a screen classic in "The Tor-
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rent," and Ricardo Cortez, who plays
its hero, has shown the world a new
Cortez, a romantic hero who can also
prove himself a peer of character
actors. It is the American debut, too,
of Greta Garbo, the brilliant Swedish
star, and a more glittering opportu
nity could not have been afforded her.
"The Torrent," which will be shown
at the Community theatre, Saturday,
Nov. 27th, is indeed a different type
of picture. It lays a foundation by a
sketch of the popular rumors and pop
ular scandals in the life of an opera
star and then goes below the surface.
It is the heart croy of every actress
who basks in the public gaze and
sometimes shrinks under public cen
sure only too often undeserved. It is
great because it is wonderfully told,
wonderfully acted and because it is
true.
Technically, it has everything; the
drama of broken hearts and misunder
standings ; the thrills of a vast - storm
that sweeps the countryside before it;
daring rescues, delicate comedy situa
tions everything that entertains.
Ricardo Cortez has a Spanish role
of a new type as the young statesman
and Miss Garbo is a vivid and colorful
prima donna. Gertrude Olmsted is
beautiful as the Spanish wife, and
Arthur Edmund Carew, as the sinister
"Salvatti," is a commandingly realistic
character. Tully Marshall, as the dour
"Don Andreas/' has a role on a par with
his "Merry Widow" success. Others
with adequate parts are Martha Mattox,
Lucy Beaumont, Edward Connelly, Lu-
cien Littlefield, Mack Swain, and Lillian
Leighton. Monta Bell's direction was
superb.
Admission 10 and 25c.
Taking the facts out of the above exaggerated editorial mass
of words, the story may be rewritten for country newspaper
readers in this way:
IBANEZ' "TORRENT" TO
BE SHOWN HERE SATURDAY
"The Torrent," the moving picture
production that will be shown at the
community Theater Saturday, Nov. 27,
was written by Vicente Blasco Ibanez,
author of "The Four Horsemen of the
Apocalypse." Ricardo Cortez will play
the part of the hero and Greta Garbo,
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Swedish star, will make her American
debut as the prima donna. Gertrude
Olmstead is the Spanish wife, Arthur
Edmund Carew is "Calvatti" the sinister
villain, and Tully Marshall, who was a
success in "The Merry Widow," will play
the part of "Don Andreas."
Other actors and actresses in the pic
ture are Martha Mattox, Lucy Beau
mont, Edward Connelly, m Lucien Little-
field, Mack Swain, and Lillian Leighton.
Monta Bell directed the making of the
picture.
"The Torrent" is a picture dealing
with the popular rumors and scandals in
the life of an opera star and shows that
many of these rumors are not founded
upon fact. The heart of the actress, her
real life, and how she feels and acts, are
shown as the action progresses.
"Suggestive" or Shopping News. There are certain local
news stories which are so similar to free advertising that they
would do very well for the copy of an advertisement. This is
the kind of news which is full of suggestions concerning the
use of certain products. A reader has a right to know where
he can get the best bargain in food stuffs or clothing, but it is
the advertisers' business to inform him of these facts.
Every advertisement, if properly written, will contain much
newsy material, but it is advertising and not straight news.
When Johnson and Company, grocers, get in a fresh carload
of apples, this is news to the residents of the town. Should
the editor then run a news story telling the people that John
son and Company have a carload of fresh apples and that they
are selling very reasonably? Obviously, this is advertising
copy and not news material. If Johnson and Company want
the people to know about their products they may tell them
through an advertisement of some kind. The editor's duty to
his readers does not include the writing of advertising news
stories.
It has been said that a reader should get this matter so that
he may be wisely guided in his purchases. If this is true,
should the editor write in favor of all the products advertised
in his paper or just a few? If he neglects some, he will make
enemies; if he writes on all of them he will fill his paper with
out getting the local news. Unless the news value of a given
thing is great enough to give it place in the news columns
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without using advertising material, it is not a subject for a
news story. It is very well to say that householders should
know where to buy the paint and other things they need to
clean up and repair with, but it is not the editor's place to
tell them where to get it. His feature stories are for the pur
pose of giving general information and inspiration on the sub
jects of cleaning up and painting, not to draw attention to one
merchant or one product. He writes to arouse interest in the
entire subject so that his town will look well and be clean.
If this helps the local merchants, and it should do so, he has
helped them in a legitimate manner, not by making his news
columns receptacles for advertising.
These suggestive news stories are here considered because
it has been advocated that the editor should write such news
to supplement advertising. When news concerns a subject
similar to something in a paid advertisement, that news may
be placed next to the advertisement. No attempt should be
made to "make" suggestive news which must of necessity be
part advertising. There will be enough local news to draw
attention to the advertisements if the local field is well cov
ered and the association of similar news and advertising is
made a rule of make-up.
CHAPTER IX
THE USE OP EDITORIAL COMMENT IN NEWS STORIES
CERTAIN country editors have long contended that the use of
editorial "flowers" and "puffs" in writing news stories was an
aid to the paper commercially, and that the paper that used
uncolored or "flat" news would not be as financially successful
as the one using news with "harmless" comment. Believing
that the student of country journalism should have some
scientific knowledge about this question on which to base his
judgment, the writer in 1926 made a study of one hundred
American weekly newspapers to determine: (1) What kind of
comment was being used in news stories, and (2) Whether the
use of this comment was an aid to the paper commercially.
The one hundred papers, representing forty-three states and
ranging in size from four pages to twenty pages, were thor
oughly read through and each piece of editorial comment or
opinion in news stories was marked and the total amount in
each paper measured by the column inch. The comment and
opinion was classified according to its purpose, or in other
words, according to what it did, and all adjectives and adverbs
used in an editorial sense were counted. By arranging the
statistics showing the per cent of local news with comment
and the number of inches of advertising of various kinds that
each paper contained, it was possible to draw some conclusions
in regard to the financial success of the papers.
Three examples of editorial comment found in news stories
in these papers follow:
Chester Munspn returned Wednesday
and will remain 'at home for the winter.
Chester is a good man for the Markville
band and we are glad to have him back
again.
This community is saddened by the
death of Oliver Davis, better known as
"Bogie." He passed away at the Au-
drain hospital at five o'clock on Mon-
10ft
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day, August 31st. He will be greatly
missed by one and all.
They come high, these jovial ones,
who know little of the theory of public
economics, yet by sheer nerve make a
blithe assurance pass for practical wis
dom.
The primary is the first move in the
citizens' course of public education.
Where all pay the bills it is only com
mon prudence to see to it that the right
people contract them. Think it over.
Many more examples could be given but they are similar to
these in tone and content.
Classification o Comment in News Stories. Since each
piece of comment was different in wording from every other
piece of comment it was impossible to classify comment ac
cording to the words used. The classification was therefore
made according to purpose rather than word content; for in
stance, it was possible and reasonable to place together all of
the examples of comment that did a certain thing, such as
praising a local living man or a local institution. * This classi
fication was for the purpose of determining what the comment
did rather than what it actually said.
There were in the one hundred papers analyzed, 2,166 ex
amples of editorial comment in the news columns. This means
only that various types of editorial comment occurred that
number of times. Sometimes the comment was a word, some
times a phrase, sometimes a clause, and in 107 instances it
consisted of entire articles which were editorial in tone and
content. These articles were therefore such complete editor
ials that no part of them could be set aside as news free from
editorial comment*
A better idea of the classification of comment can be gained
by an account of what the "average" paper, if there were such
a thing, would contain. This average was determined by the
frequency of occurrence of different kinds of comment. The
"average" paper would contain:
1. Two or three reflections or afterthoughts by the editor.
2. Two or three paragraphs of reader advertising, not la
beled, in the news columns.
3. Comment in praise of a local living man, twice.
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4. Comment expressing opinion for the public or some part
of it, once or twice.
5. More than one editorial sentence or paragraph.
6. More than one article entirely editorial in tone and con
tent.
7. Generally one piece of comment drawing a conclusion or
making an assumption.
8. One or two pieces of comment either:
a. In praise of local musicians, singers, dancers, etc., or
b. Giving advice, suggestions, or commands to do
something.
9. One or two pieces of comment either :
a. In praise of a local living woman, or
b. Predicting success for some one or something.
10. One either:
a. In praise of a local institution, or
b. In praise of a local meeting, dance, and Hke subjects.
11. Generally one either:
a. In praise of the country, county, roads, climate, or
b. In praise of men or women in obituaries.
12. Generally one either:
a. In praise of a dinner, banquet, or eats of some kind,
or
b. In praise of a home-talent play, theatrical or pag
eant.
13. One either:
a. In praise of a party, social gathering, and like sub
jects, or
b. In praise of a program, or
c. In praise of a sermon or talk.
14. One either :
a. Expressing regret or disappointment, or
b. Giving praise and congratulations in wedding stor
ies, or
c. In praise of a sport, game, and like subjects.
15. One either:
a. Expressing welcome or pleasure, or
b. Urging the public to attend something, or
c. In praise of flowers, decorations, or
d. In praise of gifts, and like subjects.
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16. One either:
a. Wishing success to friends or to those who leave, or
b. In praise of young people or children, or
c. Expressing and extending sympathy.
17. One either:
a. Of adverse or destructive criticism to some one or
something, or
b. In praise of a dress or wedding gown, or
c. In praise of a non-local man, or
d. In praise of horses, cows, or other domesticated
animals.
18. One example of comment on some miscellaneous subject
not in this classification.
The average paper would therefore have various kinds of
comment appearing in its news columns more than twenty-one
times. The various kinds of comment might all occur in one
long story, or they might be scattered throughout the paper
in twenty-one different stories and briefs.
A word count was made using only the examples of news
with editorial comment to determine how many times certain
adjectives and adverbs were used in an editorial sense. When
ever these words appeared in quotations or in any other
sense they were not counted. Adjectives and adverbs were
used in an editorial sense 1,134 times in the one hundred
papers. This makes a seemingly low average of about eleven
per paper but it also shows that much of the comment encoun
tered consisted of more than single words. Many of the ad
jectives here classified were also used editorially in phrases,
clauses, sentences, and paragraphs of comment.
Adverbs and Adjectives Used in Editorial Comment. The
adjectives and adverbs used in editorial comment follow in
the order of the frequency of their use:
Good, best, better, excellent, beautiful, fine, finest, interest
ing, lovely, loving, pleasant, pleasantly, successful, success
fully, enjoyable, beloved, splendid, greatest, happy, respected,
well-known, great (success), attractive, delightful, exceptional,
delicious, esteemed, great, kind, efficient, charming, biggest,
real, noble, marvelous, popular, influential, nice, inspiring,
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prettiest, entertaining, pretty, dainty, faithful, prominent,
bountiful, honored, genial, sumptuous, fast, all-star, leading,
royally, fascinating, accomplished, bright, devoted, bounteous,
talented, high class, worthy, poor, malicious, competent, ten
der, ideal, encouraging, artistic, loyal, brilliant, atrocious,
gifted, energetic, cleanest, strong, remarkable, foremost, like
able, appealing, progressive, first-class, sterling.
The ( following words were used less frequently than those
given above:
Grand, indulgent, able, prosperous, modest, comely, supe
rior, magnificent, outstanding, generous, skillful, honest, up
right, livest, expert, best-posted, good-natured, good-hearted,
tastily, inimitably, important, enterprising, amiable, hustler,
handsome, gracious, intellectual, charitable, highest-calibred,
gorgeous, palatial, up-and-coming, up-to-date.
This list of words which were used in editorial comment is
here given to act as a help to the student in writing news for
country papers. Unless the kind of comment now being used
is known, one who writes for a country paper cannot be sure
that his stories are free from comment.
Smaller Papers Have Higher Per Cents of Local News with
Comment. A comparison of the per cents of local news with
comment, made with all the newspapers, showed no consistent
tendency for either large or small papers to have higher per
cents of local news with comment. When the extremes were
ignored and only the six-, eight-, ten-, twelve-, and fourteen-
page papers compared, it was found that there was a consis
tent tendency for smaller papers to have a larger per cent of
local news with comment. This can be accounted for by the
fact that not enough papers were in the extremely large and
extremely small groups to find a true average for those groups.
Comparison of Amounts of Foreign Advertising. A com
parison of the amounts of foreign advertising carried, that is,
advertising which had the signature of an out-of-town dealer
such as a catalog house or a merchant in another town, showed
that the twenty-five papers having the highest per cents of
local news with editorial comment had the most foreign adver
tising. If advertising which takes money out of the town were
used as a measure of financial success, then the papers with the
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highest per cents of local news with comment must be con
sidered the most successful.
Comparison o Amounts o National Advertising. A com
parison of the amounts of advertising of a national product
over a local dealer's signature showed that the twenty-five
papers having the lowest per cents of local news with com
ment had the most national advertising. If the amount of
national advertising carried be taken as a measure of financial
success, the papers having the lowest per cents of local news
with editorial comment must be considered the most success
ful. This result is exactly the opposite of the comparison
using the amount of foreign advertising as a measure of finan
cial success.
Comparison of Amounts of All Display Advertising. A
comparison of the amounts of all display advertising carried
showed that the twenty-five papers having the lowest per
cents of local news with comment had the most display adver
tising. Using the amount of display advertising as a measure
of financial success, the papers having the lowest per cents of
local news with comment must be considered the most success
ful. This result is the exact opposite of the comparison using
foreign advertising as a measure of financial success and is in
agreement with the comparison using national advertising as a
measure of financial success.
Comparison o Amounts o All Kinds o Advertising. A
comparison of the total amounts of advertising of all kinds,
foreign, national, and local display, legal, classified, profes
sional and reader, showed that the twenty-five papers having
the lowest per cents of local news with editorial comment had
the most advertising of all kinds. If the amount of advertis
ing of all kinds be taken as a measure of financial success, the
papers having the lowest per cents of local news with editorial
comment must be considered the most successful. This result
is the exact opposite of the result of the comparison of foreign
advertising and is in agreement with the result of the compari
son of national advertising and that using all display adver
tising.
Placed in tabular form, the results of these comparisons
using various kinds of advertising as measures of financial
success are:
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Foreign National All display All kinds of
Advertising Advertising Advertising Advertising
SjgSSSit'Sd... 727 in. less less less
more
25 papers low 1,096 in. 3,583 in. 4,297 in.
in comment had... less more more more
From these results it would appear that the amount of for
eign advertising carried was not a direct measure of financial
success but rather an inverse measure. It would also -appear
that the papers which are most successful in getting advertis
ing of other kinds either print only certain kinds of foreign
advertising, such as that of a concern which has no local coun
terpart, or else do not attempt to solicit advertising which will
take money out of the town. This is a reasonable conclusion
since these papers are successful in getting enough national
and local advertising, and their editors may feel that it is
against the good of the community to accept advertising which
takes money out of the town.
From these results it would appear that the most successful
papers commercially or financially are those which have less
local news with editorial comment. It may also be said con
versely, that a paper which has local news free from editorial
comment will be more likely to get all kinds of advertising
except foreign, and usually does not solicit this type because
the editor does not believe in helping to take money out of
the local community.
Whatever else can be said in favor of the use of editorial
comment in local news stories, it cannot be said that its use
is an aid to the paper in getting more advertising and there
fore in increasing the financial revenue. On the contrary, the
results of this study indicate that using editorial comment in
local news stories is poor business and that it simply does
not pay.
CHAPTER X
COUNTRY CORRESPONDENCE
The Need for Country Correspondence. In country com
munities newspapers are rarely found that can do a profitable
business by dealing only with the residents of the town. It is
very important that all of the news in the town be gathered,
but most country towns are dependent upon the surrounding
country life for their existence. When the farmers cease to
make a town their trading center and cease to be interested
in it, that town is going backward. Farmers like to read about
the affairs of the town, but they are more interested in the
people who make up their own country community. Every
community is really made up of a number of smaller communi
ties in which the neighbors visit among themselves. This is
not meant to include other surrounding towns, but groups of
people living in the country around the town in which the
newspaper is situated. These people feel that they should
hear about their own activities fully as much as about their
friends in the city. They have their own meetings, clubs, and
interests. If the paper fails to get news of these things, they
stop subscribing. Thus it will be seen that some sort of news
service must be provided that will get the news from the sur
rounding country communities and make it a part of the
community newspaper.
Value o Country Correspondence. One country editor said
that every time a new name appeared in the country items he
had found a prospect for a new subscriber and generally had
the subscriber already sold. Whether this situation is true or
not, the fact is that country correspondence is the best way in
which to secure country subscribers, and is practically the only
way to hold them.
Circulation is not the only thing, however, that is benefited
by country news notes. Advertising from distant parts of the
county is brought in and this revenue added to the regular
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business of the town. Many country people are interested in
business operations in neighboring towns and will be in
fluential in sending ads from these concerns to the paper that
they think is best. Classified advertising from farmers is an
other source of income that is materially increased by a cor
respondence service. Papers attempting to give county service
will get advertising from points hitherto considered out of
their territory because of the interest people in that part of
the county take in the news that tells of people they know.
Still another benefit derived from a good country cor
respondence service is the possibility of securing national
advertising. National advertisers consider not only how many
papers a shop sends out but also what their distribution is.
The paper that covers its territory well although it does not
send any great number of papers into each locality, will be a
better medium for national advertising than one which has a
large circulation with most of its subscribers within the city
limits. The fact that papers go into practically every com
munity around the town will be a good argument for the
editor when soliciting national advertising. There are also
many products that can be sold only to country residents,,
which means that the paper which has a large circulation in
town and none in the country is a poor medium in which to
advertise these products. Farm machinery and products for
the farm home are good illustrations of things that cannot be
sold without getting the advertising direct to the country
readers. Verily, the benefits of country correspondence are
legion-
Country Reporter Not Always Practicable. Perhaps, if the
country newspaper could afford it, a regular reporter to gather
the news notes from each country community would be a
profitable addition. Such a reporter could make it his busi
ness to spend part of his time in each locality and would no
doubt write the news in a better way than it is now written.
To have such a reporter is almost impossible because the aver
age country newspaper staff does not include a man who can
afford to do this and nothing else. The biggest problem
in every country shop is keeping down expenses. Every added
employee adds to the cost of putting out the paper. The ex-
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pense involved would prevent this method from being used in
a large majority of offices.
Resident Correspondents Needed. What the paper needs is
some person who is a part of each community, some one who
is one of the people of whom he writes, to send to the paper
each week an account of the news happenings in his locality.
This person will be there every day and will know practically
everything that is happening. He will have access to all meet
ings and can get the facts at first hand. He will be interested
in the community school and in the roads of his neighborhood.
He will have the interest of his neighbors at heart, and will
try to make his community appear to be the best one in which
to live. This attitude is absolutely necessary if he is to record
sympathetically what happens there. He will know the peo
ple of whom he writes and will be more accurate in statements
of names and circumstances. He will be a better judge of news
values in his community than an outsider would, and lastly
he will be a dependable judge of news sources. All of these
qualifications make for better country news service in the com
munity paper.
Permanent Gorrespondents Needed. Good news service can
be given country communities only when the person who
writes the news is there all of the time. A correspondent who
is well educated and writes well, but who is in the community
only part of the year is not as great an asset to the paper as a
poorer correspondent who is there the year 'round. Nothing
rouses the wrath of country people so much as to find that
their activities are being noticed only once in a while or only
at certain seasons of the year. They want to see news items
in the paper every week, and when these notes appear without
regularity they feel that the newspaper cannot be dependable.
Good English a Necessity. The correspondent must be
able to write good, readable news. It is likely that almost
any one of the residents of that community will know what is
going on, but not every one will be able to write the report so
that it is understandable when printed. If items appear that
are a mess of words and do not give the reader a knowledge
of what happened, the country readers are sure to feel, as one
of them once remarked, that "There are two things about this
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place that whoever writes those notes doesn't know: what's
going on here and how to say it."
Correspondents Must Have a Nose for News. The ability to
know when a thing is news, to find news when it does not
appear of its own accord, is necessary for the good country
correspondent. Initiative is required in finding the mate
rial for the weekly items. Many persons in the community
who are well fitted for the job in other respects do not possess
this quality of scenting news material. No one can stay at
home all the time and learn of all events in the community
through the people who come to visit, or worse, by "listening
in" on the country telephone line. Too often this is the only
method of gathering news employed by the country corre
spondent.
Correspondents Must Be Able to Co-operate with the Editor.
The writer of country items must realize at all times that
the editor is the man who runs the paper. There has been
many a heated argument and long-lasting enmity caused by
the editor's trying to make the correspondent understand that
he could improve his items. It should be made clear to the
person picked to write country items that he must co-operate
with the editor to make this news service as good as it can be.
When the editor sees fit to delete some of his material the
correspondent must realize that it is for the best interests of
all concerned. Too often this understanding is conveyed to
the writer long after he has been sending in items that have
been accepted. It should be the understanding before the
correspondent begins his service.
Choosing a Correspondent. All of the qualifications men
tioned above are hard to find in one individual in each com
munity, but if the editor investigates the situation a little he
will nearly always be able to find a person who will qualify.
School teachers may make admirable news-gatherers when
they are in the community. During the summer vacation the
editor is confronted with a difficult situation. No correspon
dent likes to "fill in" and to be considered valuable only when
someone else is not available. For this reason school teachers
do not make the best country correspondents. It has been
suggested that since they are outsiders they will be unpreju
diced in local controversies. The disadvantage of not know-
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ing members of the community as one would who lives there
permanently, will generally offset this seeming advantage.
Teachers are just as likely to give the benefit of the doubt to
those who are "nice" to them as the native writer would
be to give it to his friends. There is no doubt, however, that
the teacher hears almost everything that is current in the
community, through the school children. She is at any rate
a valuable source of news for the correspondent.
Preachers, mail carriers, rural storekeepers, meat sellers, the
county "Watkins" man, the president of the country lodge,
and many others have been tried as correspondents. There
are advantages and disadvantages in each case. The best cor
respondents that the writer is familiar with are women who
have been school teachers but who have married local men
and are now residents of the community. They have all of
the above qualifications, usually, and are easy to keep inter
ested in the work. They are usually fairly well educated, can
write accurately and clearly, are permanent, are more fair-
minded than one born and reared in the community, are inter
ested in what goes on, for they are used to more activity than
the country affords, and will take a suggestion kindly when
they are shown that the editor is really trying to help them.
The woman who has been away to school as a girl and has
later married and settled in the community is another prospect
for a good correspondent. There is no rule for determining
who will be the best person to write the country news in any
certain community. The editor will always have to look the
situation over carefully and choose his representative with
care.
Copy-reading Correspondence. Journalistic style is not an
easy thing to learn without instruction and sometimes the
best correspondent will fail to use good sentences, construct
good leads, and choose his words with care. With a number
of poor writers on the list the need for carefully reading all
correspondence and correcting it before it is put in type is
greater. Office style should prevail in correspondence as well
as in all other news and disagreements in capitalization, punc
tuation, name styles, figures, expressions, etc., must be cor
rected. Trite, worn-out words and phrases, old maxims and
wise sayings, and moss-covered jokes, are things to be watched
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for in editing correspondence. Long, poorly constructed sen
tences are also often found. The writer is familiar with sev
eral country shops in which the machine operator is expected
to word correctly all correspondence as he sets it. Sometimes
he does a good job of it; more often he misses a majority of
the mistakes. Copy-reading the correspondence is a job for
the editor and needs to be as carefully done as copy-reading
of other news. Most country correspondence is written in
longhand, which at best is not easy to read. The editor will
find it a profitable practice to go carefully over all country
correspondence and by the use of certain standard marks make
the items more readable. This takes a responsibility off the
linotype operator's shoulders and speeds up production con
siderably, since it requires much of the operator's time to figure
out just what the correspondent meant to say. The following
practices will aid materially in the ease with which correspon
dence copy can be handled.
(1) See that all i's are dotted and that no e's are made
like i's.
(2) Overscore all ris and underscore all rfs. These are
easily confused.
(3) Separate all words that are run together. Many writers
forget to space words in longhand and the operator often runs
them together subconsciously. Use the straight up and down
mark to separate them.
(4) Cross out or erase all handwriting flourishes. These
only serve to mix up the operator.
(5) Print all proper names, making each letter distinct.
(6) Use small letters in preference to capitals to secure the
maximum legibility.
(7) If lines are crowded at the bottom of the page, write
them over on another sheet of paper and paste it to the first
part.
(8) Number all pages of copy consecutively so that the op
erator will have no difficulty in finding the one that comes
next.
(9) See that every paragraph is indented at least half an
inch and make some kind of a mark (such as an L tipped to
the left) to show that a paragraph begins there.
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(10) If a piece of paper must be attached to a sheet of copy,
use paste. Paper clips and pins come loose and there is trouble
finding the place to make the insert.
What Is News in the Country. The kinds of news which the
country correspondent can be on the lookout for are essentially
those that the editor finds in the town. There will be much
news which is strictly personal. Names will appear in nine
out of ten items. The visits and activities of members of the
community will be recorded. Births, deaths, marriages, meet
ings, events, accidents, fires, and other things that are news
in the city will also be news in the country. The substance
of many items may appear trivial to the town or city reader
but it is important for the country reader because it affects
his life. Township and school district elections and politics
will furnish material for good country correspondence. Situa
tions and conditions peculiar to the country, such as keeping
the roads clear in winter, community get-togethers, etc,, offer
an added possibility for news.
The country correspondent can be trained to gather farm
news. He will know what the farmers are interested in; he
will have daily contact with them and will find out what they
are doing that will interest their neighbors. Besides saying
that "John Brown is hauling hay to fill his barn this week/'
the correspondent can get many facts about what John Brown
does with his silage, how much plowing he has done, how many
head of cattle he will keep through the' winter, and other
information interesting to neighboring farmers. This side
of country correspondence has been sadly neglected in the past.
Most of the items have told of visits and where this and that
family "Sundayed." Urge correspondents to write farm news,
and when they do send in a good farm story give it the promi
nence it deserves. If it is a front page story it can profitably
be taken out of the correspondence column and given a suit
able head. A difference in the rate paid for such news will
bring to light much news that has hitherto been buried in a
two-liner.
The correspondent will not remember to look for all the dif
ferent kinds of farm news unless he is furnished with a list of
them. The material on news sources on a farm given in an-
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other chapter will furnish the correspondent with a suggestive
list of things he can write about. All farm news is news that
the country correspondent can get, with the exception of "agri
cultural copy" from schools and local farm advisers.
An event occurring in the country will perhaps rate not more
than a 'few lines in the town paper, judged by the standard of
what is news in the town, but it is probably worth much more
in the country items. Many weddings are written up in a few
sentences in the town news, but often a wedding in the country
is one of the biggest events of the year. The family plans for
it for months and all the neighbors look forward to it as a big
celebration and it does take the form of a big celebration.
Some of the weddings held in a farming community in North
Dakota last for three days and there is more excitement there
than there is in Chicago when the biggest convention is in ses
sion. Such affairs may not be worth much as news for the
town people, but they are worth good stories for country
readers. The point here is that news values differ with the
locality for which they are written. Proximity plays an impor
tant part just as it does in all news, but there is also a differ
ence in the standards for judging news. Country news should
be written as fully as the event will justify in the interest it
has jor country readers.
Helping the Correspondent. Most people dislike to be
"told" how to do things, and country correspondents are no
exceptions to the rule. When the editor attempts to dictate
methods and demand results from them there is a rebellion fos
tered that will eventually lead to trouble and the loss of loyal
service. Everything that is jsaid or done to better the service
of the correspondents should be in the nature of a suggestion.
Some of these "suggestions" will be pretty strong, it is true,
but any "encouraging with brickbats" that is done does not
accomplish much.
Various methods have been tried to make correspondents
more able to write news notes well. School sessions con
ducted at a group meeting of all the correspondents of the
paper for several days have sometimes proved beneficial. It
is hard work to get these people together, however, and they
usually resent the thought that they have to be "educated."
Some papers try this one day every month or at longer interr
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vals. When the means of transportation make it possible to
get the group together it is a good opportunity for the editor
to explain their work to them and to show them the reason
that good writing is necessary. The idea of helping them
should always be emphasized.
A feature of the work of the St. James (Minn.) Plaindealer,
is the annual entertainment at the newspaper's office at which
correspondents get actual training in writing and handling
the news matter. The 1925 gathering was held late in October.
J. Harold Curtis says of it:
We issued a special edition of the
Plaindealer in the evening while the cor
respondents were in our office. They
were interested in viewing the mechani
cal work of getting out a newspaper. We
had all the equipment in the office run
ning, which included the Model 8 Lino
type, our jobbers, the caster and news
paper press.
The correspondents were first taken to
a movie show, after which W. P. Kirk-
wood, editor of publications at the Uni
versity Farm, University of Minnesota,
gave a talk on "What is News?" They
were then brought over to the Plain-
dealer office to see the plant in opera
tion. A lunch of pumpkin pie and
coffee was served at the office.
Developing a Working Spirit. Those business concerns
prosper most in which the employee is made to feel that he is
a part of the business. The editor will do well to remember
this in developing a good spirit among the people who write
his country correspondence. They should be considered as
members of the staff of the paper and accorded as good treat
ment as if they were in the office. Witticisms on the work
of any of them means the ruination of -the service. Nothing
can be allowed to go into the paper that will reflect discredit
on the news writer. It is a weekly occurrence to receive some
item that, if printed, would make people think the correspon
dent exceedingly ignorant. The reputation of the paper de
pends to no small degree upon the reputation of the corre
spondents.
The editor should urge all correspondents to visit the office as
often as possible. If they trade in town, as most of them do,
a visit to the office every week can be made a part of their
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trips to town. They will get to know the office force, and a
personal touch will be established that will make them more
interested in being a part of that organization.
When it is not possible to have correspondents visit the
office, the editor can find time to visit them once in a while.
In a day, the editor can cover most of his territory and see
each correspondent for a few minutes, but even if the circuit
takes a week it is an investment well worth while. Ideas can
be exchanged on the way the service is being handled. The
editor can get an idea of peculiarities of situations and he can
see the handicaps under which certain writers have to get and
deliver their material. Helpful suggestions can be given per
sonally, and when thus given they are much more likely to
bear fruit.
Remembrance cards, blotters, books, greetings at Christmas,
Thanksgiving, and holidays, and sometimes a correspondent's
bulletin each month, serve to let the correspondent know that
the office is interested in him. No opportunity should be lost
for making the bond of friendship between the correspondent
and the editor stronger. A good spirit makes a good worker.
In any scheme of training correspondents the paper must
stand the expense, and naturally the best scheme will be the
one that gives the biggest return for the smallest investment.
Personal letters are another means of helping the corre
spondent. This method is usually quite successful, for the
correspondent feels that the editor really has an' interest in
him when he writes him personally.
Folders or single-page leaflets sent out once a month are
often used. They contain, besides suggestions, a list of errors
found in country correspondence during the month, that should
be avoided in the future.
Since prevention is better than cure, the best way to keep
correspondents from making many mistakes is to give them
instructions about the things to avoid in writing news. This
can be done by compiling in neat form the suggestions that
the editor has to make on getting the news, news sources, news
values, writing the news, style, grammar, expressions, prepara
tion of copy, press time, etc., and sending it to all corre
spondents. This will serve as a handbook for them and the
sting of personal criticism and "laying down the law" will be
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entirely absent. The Piatt County Republican, published at
Monticello, Illinois, has used this method with remarkable
success. They have issued a booklet, the Handbook for Cor
respondents, that is attractive and contains the directions and
information that they think their correspondents should know.
The contents of this booklet follow :
Introduction
This little booklet is calculated to be of assistance to our corps
of country correspondents in the gathering and preparation of
news items. It is not always the easiest thing in the world to
know just how to go about gathering news items or how to
handle them after they are secured, and it is with a view to assist
ing you in this important work that we have prepared this little
booklet. Read it carefully and then keep it for reference and
we are sure you will find it an invaluable help in the preparation
of your copy for the paper. (Signed, The Editor)
Getting and Writing the News
Legibility and "Style"
Write only on one side of the sheet. Don't be afraid to use
plenty of paper when your supply is gone, we'll send you more.
Write each item as a separate paragraph and leave plenty of
space between paragraphs.
Leave plenty of margin on all sides of the sheet and don't
crowd your lines together. Don't use a hard pencil. If you use
a typewriter, always write your copy double-spaced.
Write plainly just as plainly as you possibly can.
If a proper name is in any way odd, spell it in hand-printed
capitals, thus : SMYTHE. Be careful to spell every person's
name correctly and use care in getting the initials right.
Always put "Miss" or "Mrs." before the name of a lady; but
don't put "Mr." before a man's name in a personal item.
Head each set of items with the name of your community, your
own name and the date of mailing.
Watch our columns for style in capitalization. The tendency of
the average writer is to capitalize too much.
Don't begin a sentence with figures.
Don't abbreviate the names of the days of the week.
It is not necessary to write the name of this state after towns
or cities in this commonwealth. Where the community men
tioned, however, is an obscure one, it is well to designate in what
county it is situated.
Remember that when you write "tomorrow" in an item it
always means the day following date of publication, not the day
after the item was written.
Questions to Answer
Who? W hat? "When? Where? Why? How?
Every printed news item should answer, ^ so far as they can
be asked concerning it, any or all of these six questions.
To illustrate: If an accident has happened, the item should
tell to whom, of what kind, when, where, why and how it
happened. Give all the details.
Judgment to be Exercised
It is impossible, to lay down hard and fast rules concerning news
giving. For instance, always to give all the details would be to
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make a paper's news columns ridiculous. In some instances it is
sufficient simply to state a fact. In others it is exceedingly aggra
vating to have a fact just barely stated.
To illustrate: If Charlie Jones has the measles, it is enough
to say that "Charlie, the little son of William Jones, has the
measles." If, however, he has it in an especially malignant
form, or in some other unusual way, the particulars should be
given.
On the other hand, if William Jones' house burns down, all the
details should be given. Tell what kind of house it was, where
located, when the fire occurred, how it caught, who discovered it
and how, what was done to put it out, what was lost and what
was saved, how much insurance there was all the particulars.
If there was anything especially exciting about the fire, tell of it,
and don't neglect to tell to what neighbor's home Mrs. Jones and
the little children were taken for the time being, where the family
is to reside temporarily and what Mr. Jones' plans are for the
future.
Thoroughness and Accuracy
First, get the news; get all there is to get. Next, get it cor
rectly.
Nothing so disgusts a paper's readers as to feel that it cannot
be relied upon. Casual rumor is not a safe thing to depend on.
It may be correct, but it is more than likely not to be. Rumor,
though, is often a good basis to start on, but the information
should be "run down 7 ' and verified or corrected. Rumor generally
mixes matters.
The best way to get news correct is to go to the persons chiefly
concerned. Rightly approached and assured of a correct pub
lication, most persons will gladly give all the information they
can. Now and then a contrary person may be met with. If a
judge of human nature, you will soon learn how either to ap
proach or avoid such. The information wanted can almost always
be easily obtained from some one else. But never make a
promise to withhold news, just because some one who likes to
be peculiar asks you to do so. Where an apparently plausible
reason for not publishing an item is given, submit the facts to the
editor, and let him assume the responsibility for publishing or
withholding.
Trifles versus Trivialities
The little things in the way of news items count. But a dis
tinction should be made between trifles and trivialities. Things
should not be written merely to fill space or "make a showing"
in inches.
To illustrate : If John Drummer is a traveling man, who spends
his Sundays at home, it is not news to remark that "John Drum
mer spent Sunday with his family." But if John Drummer's trips
are of long and irregular duration, then his home-coming is a
matter of importance as a news item. But it will be better, even
then, to anticipate than to record, or to say that "John Drummer
will reach home next Tuesday ," than to say that "he was at home
for a few^days." He^may have friends who would like to see him,
and who in the one instance can plan to do so, while in the other
they can only regret that they did not know that he was home.
This is a point that should be thought of in connection with
nearly all personal notes, and especially so where the visitor is a
former resident.
The same principle applies to news items in general. To illus-
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trate : To say that "it rained Friday" would, if that was all there
was to it, be trivial. If, though, it rained so hard as to swell the
creeks, wash away a bridge or two, render impassable a section of
the road or do other damage, then the rain storm would be im
portant as an item of news, but the full particulars should be
given. Simply to announce, under the circumstances, that it has
rained, would be enough possibly to make the editor wish he
had a man handy to do some swearing for him.
News, Not Opinions, Wanted
Comment is out of place in a news budget. Opinions, if ex
pression of them is desired, should come to the editor as separate
and signed communications.
Quoted opinions, however, are often valuable as news. If some
public question of local importance is agitating your neighbor
hood, the more opinions that you can get concerning it, the
better. Tell what Mr. Roberts thinks, and what Mr. Ellison
thinks, and so on. But be very careful to represent each correctly.
A Privilege to Be Exercised
The foregoing is not intended to debar you from ever using space
for matter other than that which may be strictly and technically
styled news.
Besides telling of the births, deaths, and marriages, the acci
dents, the comings and goings, the social doings and the various
other events or * happenings of a distinctively news character,
you are invited to put in a good word every time you can for
your town, your neighborhood, your school, your churches, your
local organizations, and your people generally.
Descriptions of local matters of interest are always welcome.
And friendly or encouraging words for persons in any way con
tributing to the good of your community these are more than
welcome.
The Kind WordrThe Unkind Word
When there is an opportunity for saying a kind word, say it.
But resist the temptation to say the unkind one.
Send no item that, printed, would make an enemy for your
self or the paper. This is not because the paper is afraid to make
enemies, but because it is not a correspondent's duty to act as
censor. If abuses exist that you think ought to be corrected,
send full particulars to the editor, with names of responsible
persons possessed of the fullest information concerning them;
then leave the responsibility for using or not using the matter
with him.
Most honest people like to see their names in print. As a rule,
it is only affected, not really, modest people who object to a
proper publicity, provided discrimination and good taste are
exercised in the use of their names. Therefore, get as many
items as possible about people. t
Just here comes in a suggestion of importance. The weakness
of most correspondents is that of missing too many people. They
fall into the habit of depending, in their news-getting efforts,
on old friends and fail to cultivate new ones. As a consequence
they travel too much, to use that expression, in a circle.
Instead of next week speaking only to Mr. Brown, Mr. Rosen-
crans, Miss Grundy, and the accustomed "old reliables," go also to
an entirely new set of people, and see what a brand-new and fresh
lot of items you can find. Think of the persons in your neighbor
hood concerning whom you have never, or not for a long time,
had an item of news and see what you can find out about them
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or their affairs. In this way you'll discover new storehouses of
items. This family will be expecting a visit from an old friend;
that one will have just heard of the marriage 9r death of a
former resident of the vicinity; the other one will have lately
been making a study of old heirlooms or relics. This woman will
be engaged in producing something novel in the way of fancy
work; that man will have just had an interesting result from
some experimental work he has been doing on the form or in his
garden. You will be surprised to find how many more kinds of
items, as well as how many more items, there are in your territory
than you had imagined.
Untold Stories of the People
There is scarcely a person in your neighborhood about whom
an interesting story cannot be told. Such stories help to brighten
up a local news column.
In one family there may be a girl who is showing an especial
aptitude for music, or a boy whose mind runs wholly to botany or
geology, and who in consequence is constantly finding things
about the farm that no one dreamed existed there. In another
family there may be another kind of boy or girl, doing something
in some other, but just as interesting, line.
And there are, of course, the old people with bright minds and
food recollections. Their birthdays should be noted as events,
ometimes they are interestingly reminiscent; when so, they
should be interviewed.
The school teacher ought to be able to suggest many interest
ing things about the youngsters that manifest themselves incident
to their school work.
Births ', Marriages, and Deaths
Reports of these are always important as news.
In inquiring for news, the correspondent " should always ask if
the person inquired of knows of any recent births in the neighbor
hood, or elsewhere, to parents in whom the people of the vicinity
are interested.
No comment should be made upon birth announcements except
ing, if the event occurred in some other place, to state that the
parents formerly lived in your vicinity or that the mother was
formerly Miss or something similar for identification by
old friends. The name of the baby, if a name has been adopted,
may be given.
Correspondents are asked never, under any circumstances, to
attempt any witticism in announcing the birth of a child; they
are also urged to be exceedingly careful to get their information
as to the names of parents, sex of child and date of birth exact.
People like to read about marriages.
If they are of worthy character and reasonably well known,
always tell about the contracting parties. Tell whose daughter
the bride is, where she was reared and schooled, what some of
her accomplishments are, how she was dressed on the occasion, by
whom she was attended, and give details as to the ceremony and
particularly as to any features of it that were different from most
marriage ceremonies. Make distinctions, of course, between quiet,
home weddings and the elaborate kind, whether occurring in
church or at the home. The latter should be gone into more
in detail than the former. Don't forget to tell something about
*he groom (although you need not tell how he was dressed).
And tell, of course, about the reception, if there was one, and
about the guests from out of town and about particularly unique
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presents. And, finally, tell where the couple are to live and when
they will be at home.
Death notices should consist mainly of a summary of the facts
concerning, and incidents in, the life of the person deceased, and
should be brief or extended according to the interest that the
life of the subject may have to the readers of the paper. If,
for instance, the deceased was born in the locality, and was long
identified with it; and especially if he or she had been active
in its affairs and widely and favorably known, the notice should
be made more full than if the person had but recently come to
the neighborhood and was but little known. The date and place
of birth (and maiden name, if the deceased was a married
woman), date and place of marriage, different places of residence
and 4 kinds of occupation, names of immediate relatives who
survive, when funeral occurred or is to occur, data as to church
membership, lodge membership, public offices held, etc. all such
information, where obtainable, should be given with great care.
The always preferable way, when practicable, in which to obtain a
suitable notice, is to have it written by some intimate friend of
the deceased. In any event the best way to get the information
is direct from the family.
Getting Facts for an Emergency
Sketches of people advanced in age or hopelessly ill should
be prepared in advance and sent to the office. This will enable
prompt publication where deaths occur but a short time before
the hour of going to press. Whatever needs to be added may be
telephoned at the last moment.
Advance copy may also be prepared in connection with mar
riages, where a report needs to be elaborate. The arrangements
are usually completed several days in advance of such events, and
full particulars can often be obtained more correctly than in
the hurry and confusion incident to the occasion itself. Of course
care must be exercised to report any change from the .original
plans. Again, use the telephone.
There are always "rush" hours in a printing office. They are
the ones just before going to press. During these hours the
editor's principal worry is to decide what he can best leave out.
Important news sometimes has to be ruthlessly "cut" because
there is not time in which to put it into type.
Brief but Important Points
Carry a notebook; jot down news as you hear it don't trust
to memory.
Send a second or third letter or postal card, if necessary, in
order that the paper may publish the latest news from your
vicinity.
Make reminders of things yet to occur.
Telephone important news that you hear of too late to write.
Tell the operator to "reverse" the charge.
If a murder, suicide, serious accident, big fire, or other excep
tional thing occurs, telephone at earliest possible moment. Give
all the facts you can get, and the news will be written up in the
office. If the matter is one of very great importance, the editor
may wish to send a reporter to assist you; so please be prompt.
Do not send jokes, the point of which will be seen by only a
few who "are in the secret."
Keep in mind the fact that late news is usually the best news
best because it will surprise the readers who haven't heard it, and
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because it will make those who have heard it wonder how the
paper got it so soon and how it could be printed so quickly.
Speak a good word for this paper whenever you can. Send to
the office the names of persons who should be, but are not, sub
scribers. Sample copies will then be sent them. Don't mistake
advertising for news. If. your storekeeper asks you to say that he
has just received a large stock of the latest goods, tell him that
is the kind of item that the paper makes a charge for.
Grammatically speaking, write as well as you can, but don't
hesitate to send news because you fear you may not construct
faultless sentences. It is the editor's business to correct copy and
he would much rather receive ungrammatical letters giving all
the news than grammatically correct ones that fail to give it.
Don't attempt "fine writing." The plainest English is the best.
The Editor's Part
The editor is trying to do the best he knows how.
He may sometimes leave out items that you send. He will
not do so except for good reasons. Very often his reason is lack
of space. Seeing other less important matter in the paper, you
may wonder how this can be. Generally it will be because the
other matter was in type before yours had reached the office, and
sometimes it will be because it has already been printed on what
is called "the first side" of the paper. Even if you get your letter
to the office ahead of the time specified, he may have to cut out
some items because of an unexpected rush at the last moment.
It is no uncommon thing in this office to "kill" from one to three
columns of matter each week, because received too late to handle.
A Word in Conclusion
The editor is, you will find as you will come to know him
better, a reasonable as well as well-intending; man.
He has filled this little booklet with a lot of do's and don'ts,
that, if every one of them could be heeded to the utmost, would
make of every one of his correspondents an ideal news-gatherer.
He would frankly say, though, that he is conscious that he has
preached a great deal better than he would himself be able to
practice !
The most expected in the way of practice, from our correspon
dents, is that each will profit from the suggestions to the best of
his or her ability and do just as well as he or she can.
If at any time you think of some way in which this newspaper
can, in your opinion, be made more interesting to its subscribers,
do not hesitate to write or speak to us concerning the matter.
Suggestions to that end are always welcome.
Methods of Organizing Correspondence. Time is money
in a country shop just as surely as anywhere else. If news
notes cpme in from thirty correspondents on as many different
sizes of paper, in all colors of ink and pencil, written illegibly,
the paper is held up while the editor gets this material into
readable form. Most newspapers furnish the correspondents
with all the paper they will need. This does not have to be a
high-grade bond paper but should be of a quality that will do
for writing in ink. Ink can be sent to correspondents but a
better method is to give them the money to buy it with. In-
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delible pencils are not as good as ink but are easier to use and
so much correspondence is written with them. These are also
furnished by the paper. Envelopes with the name and ad
dress of the newspaper printed on them will make delivery
more certain. The line "News Rush" is often printed in
the lower left-hand corner to help get the items in on time, but
whether this really helps or not has not been proved. The
newspaper can print this stationery in large quantities at small
cost, whereas the correspondent would have to pay retail prices
and the newspaper would eventually have to stand the expense.
The practice of printing special stationery with the name
of each correspondent on it may help in holding the interest of
the correspondent but it is more work, more expense, and much
of the paper "goes astray." Uniformity iix the paper and
envelopes used will be the better policy for the newspaper.
Some papers send stamps to the correspondents and some
papers expect them to buy their own stamps. It is a small item
but it is generally best to allow some money for stamps. Cor
respondents are instructed to send their material in one bunch
unless some big news breaks after the weekly lot has gone in,
when they are urged to send it in immediately either by wire,
telephone, or special delivery.
A distinguishing head for country news notes is a good
feature since it sets off this news from the rest of the paper.
Any method of handling correspondence to make it easier to
read or find in the paper is worth while. Most papers run all
correspondence on the same page. When there is too much to
run on one page it is run over on the same page each issue.
Country readers come to look for their news in the same place
in every issue and like to find it there.
The page on which to place correspondence is not one of the
subjects upon which country editors agree. Some papers can
be found that run it any place it happens to "fit." The front
page, back page, editorial page, local page, and every other
page is sometimes used by some papers. Reason would with
hold correspondence from the editorial page since it is supposed
to be news and not comment. Certainly it is not editorial
matter and is run as news. The local page is not the best place
to have it since this page is devoted to news of the town and
immediate vicinity. These items are second in importance,
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only to local news and for this reason they rate a place of
importance. The back page would seem to be a logical place
to put them since it is easier to find than any page in the paper
after the first page is read.
Most papers "size" their items of country news. This
means placing the shortest item at the top, the next shortest
next and so on to the longest item. This practice adds to the
appearance of the columns in the paper, simplifies the prob
lem of "filling in a hole/' since any item may be removed, and
prevents having to split an item at the bottom of the column.
Getting Correspondence in on Time. Lines like "Too Late
for Last Week/' "Carried Over From Last Week/' "Late News
Notes/' etc., should be relegated to the melting pot. If cor
respondence is not timely it lacks interest for the readers be
cause country people are not so far behind the times that they
enjoy news two weeks old. Unless the roads are blocked by a
blizzard that does not abate before press time, or the corres
pondent is taken sick, news notes should not be run after being
held a week. There will often be times when the editor will
think it necessary to leave out something. In that case some
of the "canned" editorial, material from exchanges, or un
important local stuff can more profitably be left out than good
live correspondence. Generally the correspondence is the first
thing to be hit when the editor starts on a "cutting" streak.
Occasionally a paragraph about some event to come in the
future may be carried over and run the next week without loss
of news value. More often there is some material from other
sources that is "time stuff."
How to get correspondents to send their material in to the
office so that it will reach there on time invariably, is an un
solved problem. They should be made to understand that un
less the editor has time to read their copy, and the printer has
time to set, correct, and make it up, it will not be run. It is
good policy to require copy in a day or two before press day and
many papers require it to be in- the office before Monday noon
if they print Thursday. If it all comes in on the same day the
editor's job is simplified, for he can take care of all of it at
once.
Deductions from the pay check are discouraging to the cor
respondent, and for that reason a better method to get material
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in on time is to offer something to be gained by being prompt.
A higher rate of pay for material in the office by Monday or
Tuesday speeds up matters. Prizes have been given for the
most prompt correspondent as well as awards for all who have
a certain dependability. These awards may be something
that the paper has or can secure at little cost. A subscription
to the paper, private stationery, position of notes in the paper,
maps, pocket guides and small books have been found to be
good awards. If a man is paid only when the editor happens
to feel like writing a check, he may forget to write notes and
will send them in only when he feels like it. Correspondents
should be paid at regular intervals. The best way, as proved
by the experience of a majority of editors, is to pay once a
month, when the number of inches the correspondent has sent
in is determined and a check sent to cover all expenses in
curred and his remuneration.
Rate o Paying for Correspondence. The amount paid for
correspondence by one hundred country papers as shown in a
survey conducted by the writer, varies from nothing to ten
cents an inch. Those papers that pay nothing show it in then-
news. Most people do not feel that a subscription to the paper
and an occasional "puff" by the editor is enough for writing
news notes. Interest in the work can be maintained per
manently only by paying the writer what he deserves. If his
material is not worth paying for, it is not worth printing. The
editor cannot expect to get something for .nothing, and should
pay for what he gets just as he expects to get paid for what
he does. Prizes may be given until the possibilities are ex
hausted, awards and special privileges worked overtime, and at
last the editor will come to see that remuneration in "coin of
the realm" is all that will get him good correspondence and get
it to him on time. A rate of one or two cents an inch may be
economical in that the outlay is small, but the returns wiU
probably be in proportion. The experience of many editors
has been that five cents an inch is a good rate to have in pay
ing for country correspondence. It is low enough to keep down
expenses and is high enough to make it worth while for some
one to write the news. Every editor will have to work out his
own scale for his own community. If cheap labor gives cheap
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results, it is a poor investment, and good country service is
worth, money.
Evaluating the Correspondent. The editor will soon know
whether a correspondent is permanent or not. He will be able
to learn that he is a resident of the community, that he knows
local people, customs, and living conditions. The difficult
thing to determine is whether or not the correspondent has
that intangible thing, "a nose for news." To evaluate a cor
respondent and check up on him in his work the editor must
have other methods with which to work. If the editor spends
any time at all in the country getting farm news, he will learn
of many news happenings in each locality. If the corre
spondent is not getting these notes and continues to miss a
great deal of the news each week, the editor is right in con
cluding that he either does not make an effort to get all the
news or else needs some help in learning what news is. If the
editor calls his attention to the material he has missed and
suggests ways in which to get more news the situation may be
helped considerably, but if the correspondent continues to miss
them, a new writer is the best investment.
Checking up on the correspondent without spending any
time in the field is possible. Hardly ever will it be im
possible for the editor to know some one in each country
locality. Some editors call this farmer friend on the phone
each week and have a few minutes' conversation with him.
Much news is gathered in this way. Talking with country
visitors to the office is another way in which to learn what
has been going on in the visitor's neighborhood.
The Use of Blanks. Blanks are sometimes furnished cor
respondents upon which to record the important facts about
deaths, weddings, births, etc. These are helpful in that they
give the facts. They are limiting, however, and do not get all
the news about an event. If the correspondent is asked to add
a paragraph of news which deals with any special phase of the
subject, the account will be more complete. Blanks furnished
to doctors, preachers, and other officials upon which to record
this material will prove a help and a time saver.
Correspondence from Neighboring Towns. When the towns
near the local field have daily papers it is almost useless for
the country editor to try to carry news notes from those towns
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with the expectation of interesting readers there. The im
portance of news from other towns to the local readers, how
ever, should not be underestimated. Very few people take
papers from neighboring communities and yet many have
friends or relatives in those towns and want to know what
they are doing. The editor can better his local news service a
great deal and gain many subscribers by carrying each week
some news notes from neighboring towns. This news is best
secured through a correspondent. At one time the Mouse
River Farmers' Press at Towner, North Dakota, had more
local news from several neighboring towns than was carried in
the papers published in those towns.
Is This Poaching? This gathering of news in another's
territory has been called "poaching," or stealing the other
fellow's news. The question is whether a paper can give good
community service without having news notes from other
towns. The papers of the cpunty did not think it wrong to
run items about Towner and they had a much better chance to
get their own local news than the Press did. It is a legitimate
way of bettering news service to get these notes unless under
hand and unscrupulous methods are employed in doing it. The
people are going to read the paper that gets the most news
from all the communities they are interested in, in addition to
the local material. It is not poaching to cover the field better
than a competitor in another town. The Owatonna Journal-
Chronicle at Owatonna, Minnesota, runs more than 250 inches
of news notes from country communities and neighboring
towns each week, and for this reason its news service is excel
lent. Square methods of getting and handling these notes will
not provoke the wrath of any neighboring editor who is awake
to the value of thoroughly covering the territory.
Sections for Neighboring Towns. When there is no paper
in neighboring towns the editor will find it advantageous to
devote a page in his paper to news and advertising from these
towns. Often one town will take a whole page and this page
will be made up as if it were the newspaper for that town. A
resident correspondent is absolutely necessary in this case to
gather the local news and to solicit advertising. Usually the
people in that town are very glad to have a service of this kind
and the editor will get a good amount of advertising from the
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business men. This also builds up a good circulation since the
residents are anxious to read of local happenings. If there is a
paper in the town, the editor would not be justified in running
such a page since it would be materially hurting a fellow
editor's business.
It must be kept in mind that no correspondence service or
section in a paper is a good investment if it necessitates work
on the editor's part that will make him neglect local news-
gathering and soliciting of advertising at home. The editor's
first concern is with his own community and his first job is to
give complete news service to residents of his town and im
mediate territory. Only when this is done is he justified in
carrying a service for a neighboring town.
CHAPTER XI
Farmers and the Community Newspaper. Every country
* newspaperman is vitally affected by the farming situation in
the country surrounding his town. It is usually not a lack of
interest on the part of the local editor that is responsible for
the scarcity of farm news in his paper today but rather a lack
of understanding of the methods of getting farm news. One
country editor when asked why he didn't have more rural
news each week said: "We ought to have and we'd like to
have, but farmers are not ordinary human beings; they are
farmers. We've had farm columns for a long time and it
doesn't help our subscription list any."
In one sense, he was right. Farmers do have interests that
seem trivial and unimportant to the average city dweller or
even the resident of the small town. They live a different
life, have different associations, different problems, and there
fore different interests than the town residents.
In another sense, he was mistaken. Although farmers are
always pictured in the minds of city people as living away
out somewhere, far away from everything that's bright and
lively, they are nevertheless much interested in what is going
on in the outside world which they consider quite as much
their country as anyone's.
The purchasing power of farmers today is so great that no
town can afford to neglect farm trade and since this is the
case, no country editor can afford to neglect the possibilities
of getting and keeping farm readers by giving them a good
news service. Something of the ability of farmers to buy
goods, even luxuries, can be learned from the following story
which appeared in a small-town weekly newspaper,
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Farmers Are Large
Buyers of Motors and
Automobile Supplies
^ Farmers own 3,821,085 of all automo
biles operated in the United States, ac
cording to automobile trade statistics.
Of these, 3,453,159 are passenger cars
and 367,926 motor trucks.
Iowa leads all the other States in the
number of farmer-owned cars with 219,-
854. Texas is second with 207,334 and
Illinois third with 195,788, followed by
Ohio 192,080, Pennsylvania with 191,793,
and New York with 178,019.
In the proportion of automobiles to
farm population the figures show, Cali
fornia is first with one car to every 3.8
farm people. Then come Nebraska with
4.3, Iowa with 4.5, New York 4.6, Penn
sylvania 5.2, and Ohio 5.9. For the
United States, including the negro farm
population, the average is one automo
bile to every 8.1 people. The average
in cities of 1,000,000 population or over
is one car to^every 8.3 people. In New
York and Chicago the average is one to
every 15.5.
Farmers, according to statistics, are
the greatest buyers of automobile equip
ment. They purchased 9,250,000 tires
and 10,000,000 tubes last year. Mail
order houses supplied a big per cent
of these. Other items of automobile
equipment bought by farmers last year
were: 1,250,000 storage batteries; 8,000,-
000 spark plugs; 7,500,000 feet of brake
lining, 45,700,000 gallons of oil; and 18,-
000,000 piston rings.
Country papers have been running farm news for a long
time. Some of them have a whole page of it each issue. The
difficulty lies not so much in the amount of material now used
although the possibilities have only been touched but in
the source of the material used. An analysis of various country
papers will reveal that altogether too much, and sometimes all
of the farm news, is what has been termed "canned" copy. This
is sent out free of charge in many cases by various agricultural
agencies, schools, and county agents, and is run because the
local staff has not secured copy enough to fill the forms.
The Farm Is the Best News Source. This statement is not
written with a view to belittling trained agriculturists or
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scientific experimenters. The copy they send out is usually
authentic and contains much that is of value. It does not
greatly attract the farm-reader, however, because it does not
apply to his particular community. It lacks the local touch;
and he is much more interested in a small paragraph on what
his neighbor feeds his hogs than in a scientific experiment that
some one he doesn't know has performed, even though the
results may be valuable to him.
Farmers are human; they like to read news of their neigh
bors and are just a little more human in the value they at
tach to these neighborhood items than the man who lives in a
city and knows his neighbor less well. If farm news is to be
written for farmers, the farm and the farmers themselves must
be the true sources of the news.
The Farmers' Interests. It is safe to say that a farmer is
interested in the things that people in other occupations are
interested in, when those things touch his life. The election
of a president is a part of the farmer's business and he feels
that he has much to gain or lose in such a national event. At
these times every farmhouse in the land is the scene of many a
heated argument concerning the merits of the different candi
dates, even though it be among the members of the family.
If it were true that rural folks may blame a crop failure on the
election of the candidate of the opposing party, this would
only reinforce the fact already stated that the farmers are
interested in what affects them even if it be imaginary. If
the farmer is given the news, and all of the news instead of
what he now gets through syndicated services, he will not have
this attitude. In this respect the local editor is much to blame
for he should be the one to interpret such news fairly through
the columns of his editorial page.
By far the greater part of the farmer's interest, however,
lies in the things with which the people in urban com
munities do not think it necessary to burden their minds. He
wants to read about the things he knows most about; the
things in which he feels he is to some extent an expert. Every
item on the farm is a part of his means of making a living.
Every foot of land he tills is a portion of his kingdom. His
thoughts are localized; they are upon the things with which
he daily comes in contact.
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News Sources on the Farm. What are these numerous
interests with which the life of the farmer is filled? We may
consider them in certain groups.
A. Crops. The farmer is interested in crops, for from them
he derives an income. A forty-acre patch that is yielding 50
bushels of wheat to the acre on a neighboring farm when wheat
generally is running 20 bushels to the acre in that locality is a
big story. Perhaps the man who got that yield knew some
thing about plowing that the others didn't. Perhaps he used
a fertilizer that agricultural experts had been preaching about
for two years. If he did, then a good story in the local paper
on why John Smith's wheat was going 50 bushels to the acre
would sell more farmers the idea of using that fertilizer than all
the scientific stories on it sent out from the agricultural school
in a year. That would be the opportune time for the country
paper to use a story from the agricultural bureau, linking it
up with the local situation. A trip to the farm of the suc
cessful farmer would probably net enough news for many good
stories.
Under the general heading of crops come literally hundreds
of sources of good news stories. A man has put in a few acres
of a new brand of wheat. What are the results? By growing
corn on a piece of ground that formerly yielded 10 bushels to
the acre an enterprising farmer has been able to get 40 bushels
of wheat the following year. What was the value of his corn
crop, in addition to the yield the following year? How much
extra labor was required? What was the cost of not sowing it
to some other crop when the value of the corn was figured in?
Would it pay to grow more corn each year than is grown in that
locality at the present time? Of course crop rotation has been
shouted about for years, but an illustration of the principle
with a local connection will do more to put the idea across to
farmers than all the previous writing with no local example.
B. News Sources about Crops. It is impossible to suggest
all the sources of news connected with crops but in any list
must be included:
The kinds of crops grown: wheat, corn, oats, rye, barley, flax,
alfalfa, timothy, tobacco, etc.
The kinds of soil they are grown in; which gives the .best
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yield for a certain crop; what methods of handling different
soils have proved best.
Methods of preparing the soil for the seed; plowing in the
fall; plowing in the spring; summer fallowing; deep and
shallow plowing; plowing land that has not been plowed for
two or more years; harrowing; discing; packing; discing in
stubble.
Methods of seeding that have proved best in that locality;
seeding new and old land; seeding the different kinds of grains;
seeding disced stubble; packing after seeding; the amount of
seed needed for different grains and different soils.
Methods of cutting and taking care .of grain before thresh
ing that have proved best; cutting some crops before they are
"dead ripe"; crops that must be entirely ripe before cutting;
shocking and stacking grain; does the saving by stacking offset
the extra labor required?; the value of small stacks in the
field; heading grain; cutting and stacking grains with short
stem.
Threshing: the number of rigs and their owners; price per
bushel of each kind of grain at each rig; kind of rigs ; size of
rig and crew ; labor situation and number of farm teams needed
on each rig that fall; list of farmers already signed up for each
rig; estimated run of each rig; preparing grain to be threshed;
turning shocks in wet weather; other ways of keeping grain in
threshing condition; what to do with the chaff; value of the
straw for local uses and to export; grain lost by letting it run
on the ground; price of grain and application of general survey
of crop-producing area to, the local producers; elevators in the
town; roads that are best to use for hauling wheat; value of
private elevators and granaries.
Crop diseases, such as: rust, blight, etc.; pests that injure
crops, such as grasshoppers, locusts, etc.; prevalence of the
above and means of preventing their destructive work; apply
ing of material from agricultural experts on these subjects to
the local field.
Fruits: kinds grown; methods proved practicable; diseases
and their prevention or cure; danger from frosts; prices; mar
kets; methods of caring for trees; new varieties; shipping con
ditions; storage; crating and boxing; pests affecting crops;
yields.
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Silage: methods of preparing silage; methods of building
silos; methods of loading silage and filling the silo; methods
of preventing silage from spoiling; corn fodder; cutting, husk
ing, and other methods of getting the most out of corn.
Fertilizers: those easy to get such as barnyard manure and
mineral deposits found in the local region; methods of using
fertilizers; reason the soil gets "run down"; rotation of crops
tried and proved to be the best for the kind of soil around
your town; letting a piece of land stand without seeding for a
year.
Farm machinery: plows, harrows, drills, binders, corn bind
ers, headers, mowers, rakes, bullrakes, stackers, engines, trac
tors, elevators, new inventions in the machinery line; new
methods of caring for old machinery ; care of machinery in pro
tecting it from the weather; care of belts, etc.; oiling of ma
chinery; prices of new machinery and where to get it;
discussions of the efficiency of various machines.
An example of a story about soil tests which will interest all
farmers raising crops in that community follows, from the
Centreville (Maryland) Observer:
Figures compiled yesterday at noon
revealed the interesting fact that 43,573
acres of Queen Anne's county land or
approximately one-fourth of the entire
cultivated area had been sampled in
the lime test campaign, conducted under
the joint auspices of the Farm Bureau
and local Extension Service.
Now Analyzing 1 Samples
Analysis is being carried on at the
Centreville High School under the joint
direction of W. E,. McKnight, teacher
of vocational agriculture, and Ernest W.
Grubb, county agent.
All samples are being submitted to the
"Trough Test/ 3 a process originated in
Wisconsin in which quantitative analy
sis may be simply and accurately made.
Each sample is boiled for three min
utes in a water solution containing a
special chemical reagent of known
strength and quantity. A slip of paper
previously saturated with lead acetate
is suspended in the steam coming off, and
the degree of discoloration of this lead
acetate enables those testing to arrive at
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a very accurate estimate of the lime
needed to correct the acidity present.
Need of Lime Shown
By this process one hundred and forty-
nine samples have already been analyzed
in Centreville and sixty-two at the
Maryland Experiment Station. It is
noteworthy that less than ten of this
number reacted in such a way as to
show the presence of adequate amounts
of lime. While it is too early, in the
opinion of those in charge of the work,
to prophesy results, it is believed that
final figures will reveal at least ninety
per cent of the acreage under test in
sad need of lime.
The work of furnishing reports to each
farmer will be taken up at once. The
operator of each field, as his sample is
analyzed, will shortly receive a complete
lime prescription showing his needs in
terms of the usual forms of lime used
locally. It is hoped that the end of
January will bring the completion of all
work connected with the testing of this
forty-three thousand acres.
C. The General Crop Story. Farmers living in one section
of the county like to know how the crops are in other parts of
the county. The country paper, whether weekly or daily, can
give its farm readers this information only when some means
of getting the information is available. Daily papers some
times have men who devote their time to traveling about
through the paper's territory and wiring in to the office data on
crop conditions. The weekly paper cannot afford a reporter
to do this but must get its crop information in another way.
Most weeklies get news about general crop conditions in
the county or in the paper's territory through correspondents.
Country correspondents can be adequately trained to write a
paragraph or two on crops in their localities with little trouble.
Some papers pay more for farm news, particularly crop news,
than for regular country personals. Others send regular weekly
reminders to their correspondents or give them stationery
with the reminder printed on it. If the attention of 'the cor
respondent can be drawn to the importance of crop news he
will be glad to write it.
The general crop conditions story is made for the weekly
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by putting together the numerous paragraphs that country cor
respondents have sent in with their regular material. The gen
eral story is therefore just a combination of many stories about
specific localities. These paragraphs are separate but are
woven together by transition sentences introduced by the edi
tor. The unity of subject matter makes it easy to use these
paragraphs in one story.
D. Market Reports. In connection with crops much em
phasis should be placed on the value of running the local mar
kets in the country paper. These can be corrected just before
the paper goes to press and oftentimes there will be a good
story on the way the market has held or fluctuated during the
week. If prices are on a downward slump the farmer is inter
ested for he may want to hold his grain until they are higher or
he may want to sell before they go any lower. Many people
subscribe to the paper only to get the local situation in regard
to markets.
One method of giving the local markets is shown below.
The Mouse River Farmers Press, Towner, North Dakota, uses
this method and farmers like it because it is concise and easy
to grasp.
TOWNER MARKETS
Corrected Every Thursday
No. 1 Dark Northern $1.19
No. 1 Northern 1.17
No. 1 Amber Durum 1.03
No. 1 Mixed Durum 1.08
No. 1 Red Durum 99
Flax 1.90
Oats 30
Barley .44
Rye 71
Butter 45
Eggs .45
Cream 45
The country daily usually carries a market story written
from the reports that come in over the wire. The country
weekly, which does not have a wire service and must necessa
rily get its information by mail, cannot hope to give up-to-the-
minute market reports and market stories. In many
communities, however, farmers depend upon their weekly com
munity paper to give them a story on the way the market has
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held or changed during the week. A country editor can write
an intelligent market story only when he knows something
about the terminology used in market reports and is able to
interpret these reports so that local farmers who are not fa
miliar with the terms will be able to understand his story.
The following list of terms that are used in market reports,
as they appear in daily papers and in buyers' reports, has been
taken from Agricultural Journalism, written by Nelson Antrim
Crawford, Director of Information, United States Department
of Agriculture, and Charles Elkins Rogers, Professor of Indus
trial Journalism, Kansas State Agricultural College.
Bearish: Tending to keep prices down.
Bullish: Tending to keep prices up.
To sell short: To sell for future delivery without owning the products, in
anticipation of a falling market.
Shorts: Traders who have sold short.
To hedge: To buy or sell in such a way as to neutralize the risk caused by
a previous purchase.
To break: To fall (said of the market when prices suddenly drop).
Top: The highest price of the day (or other period under consideration).
Toppy: High in quality (used of live stock).
Grassy : Apparently fed on pasture.
Milkers: Cows in milk.
Springers: Cows in calf.
@ : To, as $2.95 @ $9.40.
Live stock is graded, starting with the best, as prime, choice, good, medium,
common, and inferior.
Cattle are divided into seven general classes. Beef cattle consist of fat
steers and heifers. The term, "Texas and western range cattle," is self-
explanatory. Butcher stock or "butchers" consists of animals not well
fattened. Cutters and canners are very thin animals, the canners being so
thin that no part of the carcasses can be used for cutting on the block.
Stockers and feeders are usually grouped together as the fourth class. They
are young cattle suitable for fattening. Stockers are under the age of 18
months. Veal calves are calves sold for immediate slaughter. Milkers and
springers are cattle more useful for dairy purposes than for meat.
Hogs are classified on the market as follows: Prime heavy, 350 to 500
pounds, with high quality; butcher, 180 to 350 pounds; packing, of about the
same weight but lower quality than the preceding classes; light, 125 to 220
pounds; pigs, 60 to 125 pounds; miscellaneous, hogs not suitable for the
other classes. .
There are three market classes of sheep mutton, suitable for immediate
slaughter; feeder, thinner animals suitable for fattening; and breeding, pur
chased for breeding purposes. ,
Horses are marketed as draft horses, chunks, wagon horses, carriage norses,
road horses, and saddle horses, each of which classes t is divided into ^from
two to five subclasses. 1 The common mule classification comprises mining,
cotton, sugar, farm, and draft mules.
E. Weather Reports. The amount of precipitation that
has fallen during the week is very good material for a story.
1 For explanation of classes of horses and mules, as well as for more detailed data
on other live stock, a manual on the subject should be consulted, such as Types and Market
'Classes of Live Stock, by H. W. Vaughan.
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People in remote regions having farming interests are more
interested in the rainfall and general crop conditions than
anything else in the local paper. The farmers in the imme
diate vicinity are also glad to know just what the rainfall has
been. The weekly paper can't predict the weather for the next
day or two, as the daily does, but it can supply much infor
mation on weather conditions nevertheless.
The Flagstaff weather is given by the Coconino Sun, Flag
staff, Arizona, in this fashion :
FLAGSTAFF U
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Thursday
79
47
Friday
84
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- Saturday
8?
50
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Sunday
51
Monday
80
56
Tuesday
82
52
Wednesday . . .
82
51
.16
Mean temperature 6
6.
Normal temp, this \
veek
65.
Total precipitation .
17.
Such a weather report is in addition to the many stories
on the weather that are run.
F. Live Stock. Besides raising crops, most farmers raise
some live stock. If the paper happens to be located in a ranch
ing or stock-raising country this is of more importance than
crops. Every kind of animal on a farm is a news source.
Some of the specific things connected with raising stock that
will furnish news material are :
The kinds of stock raised in that community; how many
head of cattle the average farmer has; how many horses, ducks,
chickens, geese, guinea hens, mules, etc., are raised for use and
for marketing. %
What is the average selling price of various animals in the
community? Where are these for sale? Is it worth while
to care for many head over the winter? What is the price of
hay and feed in the community, and the outlook for the winter
COUNTRY JOURNALISM 145
supply? Will there be wintering of cattle and horses by some
one with a well-protected feed ring?
Diseases of animals; reason for animals getting diseases;
ways of preventing them from getting sick; what to do when
they do get sick; veterinary service; home treatment. Each
of these questions and subjects will make several stories.
Feeding: kinds of feed used, prices, diets, feeds for curing
ailments.
G. Dairying. Dairying has come to be one of the main
stays of the small farmer and should receive much more atten
tion in the country paper than it now does. Men who started
with two or three head of cattle a few years ago now make
more money from the sale of butter and cream than they do
from the land they sow. Large dairy farms are becoming
numerous throughout the country, and in some regions dairy
ing is practiced to the exclusion of grain raising entirely.
Sources of news under dairying will include :
Kinds of cattle raised in that locality; what breed is best
suited to that climate; what breeds are best for beef; what
breeds are the best for milch cows.
Care of cattle: modern barns and equipment; milking ma
chines; separators; milk houses, how to build them and take
care of them; how to take care of calves; feeding calves; let
ting calves run with the cows; need of cleanliness in handling
dairy cattle; pasture for cattle; range conditions, where it^is
and the condition of the grass; nearness to water, etc.; dis
eases of cattle, prevention and cure.
Special articles written by men who are practical farmers
in the community are very valuable farm news features. The
writer of the following article in the Markvitte (Minn.) Enter
prise-Messenger is a practical dairyman and is known by many
in the community. What he writes about dairying will be
eagerly read.
GEORGE RASH GIVES
DAIRY FEED HELPS
Mr. Farmer:
Now is the time to breed cows to se
cure fall and winter production. The
reason is simply this: First, cows must
be fed and taken care of during the
winter months. Second, the price of
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butterfat always advances during this
period. Third, cows freshening during
October and November if properly cared
for and fed during the fall and winter,
will increase in production when put on
grass in the spring.
It is not practical dairying to expect a
spring-freshened cow to increase in milk
flow when put on dry feed in the fall
and winter. In order to make a profit
from cows when mill feed must be de
pended upon, every means available
must be relied upon, every precaution
taken to stop the many leaks whereby a
profit is turned into loss through lack of
efficient feeding and care given your
dairy herd. A temporary loss may be
turned into a permanent profit by in
vesting in a good balanced ration for
your dairy cow.
The experience your creamery has gone
through the past month should teach
you that you must prepare now for next
winter's production of butterfat. Those
of you who are stockholders must rea
lize that any investment, whether made
by a bank, organization of any kind,
or any individual, must be protected
by this same bank, organization, or in
dividual if it is expected to return a
profit on such investment. The same is
true of each individual farmer in this
community or anywhere else. If you
do not protect your investment of the
many items that make^ up your farm
machinery this same investment will
show a loss.
Check up on your cows. Find out
which ones are producing enough to
show you a profit. Sell those which are
not. If I can be of any assistance to any
of you I will be glad to aid at any time.
Markville Coop. Creamery Assn.
George W. Rash, Sec.
H. Poultry. Poultry raising will offer as many sources of
news as dairying and in some communities where there are
many chicken farms this industry will get much attention.
The items listed for live-stock raising in general, and for cattle,
will nearly all be news sources when considered in regard to
poultry.
The following story will interest all farmers and poultrymen
in the vicinity of the New Egypt (N. J.) Press.
A big get-together and field day for
poultrymen will be held at the Vineland
Egg Laying Contest grounds on, Wednes-
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day, August 25. Everybody is welcome
and invited to come.
At noon the Vineland Poultry Asso
ciation will act as host to all those pres
ent, furnishing ^ a good lunch to those
who did not bring their lunches.
From two to five P. M. an interesting
program of lectures and demonstrations
will be given. Prof. Harry R. Lewis is
expected to be one of the speakers.
During the entire day the contest will
be open for inspection and members of
the staff of the Poultry Department will
be present to answer questions.
Sports will be part of the program,
with tug of war teams from the different
counties the feature.
A tour will be run from Ocean County
to this gathering of poultrymen at Vine-
land on Wednesday, August 25. The
tour will leave the Jersey Central Sta
tion, Toms River, at 8:00 P. M., new
time, which will bring the tour to Vine-
land around 11 :00 or 11 :30.
I. Hay and Feed. In certain regions haying is one of the
principal occupations during the summer season. The hay
land being cut, who is doing it, the size of the crews, location
of hay land, number of stacks put up each day by different
crews, baling of hay, stand of hay in meadowland and prairie
hay fields, wages paid, labor situation in hay fields, haying
machinery, and similar topics will furnish much news of inter
est to local farmers and haymakers.
An example of a hay and feed story of great interest to
farmers and stockraisers is given below, taken from the Times-
Register, Idaho Falls, Idaho :
$40,000 Alfalfa Hay Sale
By Utah-Idaho Company
The biggest individual sale of alfalfa
hay, all in one /place, ever made in
Idaho, was closed yesterday when the
Utah-Idaho Sugar Co. closed a deal with
the Woods Livestock Co. for 5000 tons
of alfalfa hay on the Osgood project, five
miles northwest of Idaho Falls at $8 per
ton, or a gross of $40,000 and all will
concede the fact that that is a lot of hay
and a lot of money.
The $8 per ton price fixes the market
value of hay for this section for the
time being, at least, although there are
those who make the statement that be-
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fore the season is over the price will be
higher.
The contract stipulates that the hay
must be fed on the land, which is in
itself a great advantage.
The Osgood project will this year har
vest the best crop in six years, as in ad
dition to the 5000 tons of hay there are
1000 acres of the best beets produced in
the valley and about 1000 acres in po
tatoes.
The project is one of the "show places"
of the section, is formed by 65 tenants
and members of their families, all com
fortably housed in well-built homes. The
Osgood school, which is a part of Idaho
Falls independent school district No. 1,
has 136 children registered for school
this year.
What Makes a General Story of Interest to the Farmer.
Farmers are not interested in all of the news that the daily
papers publish, but much of it could be made interesting to
them if it were linked up with a local situation. Every story
in a daily paper will suggest a story for the weekly that will
be read by farmers. Stories on radio, science and invention,
real estate and buildings, fires and fire prevention, insurance
of all kinds, laws and law enforcement, automobiles, roads,
politics, religion, taxes, tariffs, and many other subjects ap
pearing in daily papers, will be good stories for farmer readers
when linked with farm life.
Giving Agricultural Time Copy a Local Angle. The way
in which a piece of agricultural college time copy can be suc
cessfully used by linking it up with something of local impor
tance, is shown in the following story.
COW-TESTING GROUP
GETS GOOD RESULTS
The McHenry County Cow Testing
Association composed of more than one
hundred dairymen, in its last report
states that its members are well satisfied
with results obtained and gives quota
tions to prove the statements. Several
farmers in the southern part of the
county have disposed of as many as ten
cows apiece which were not good pro
ducers. As a result of weeding out poor
producers, fanners have increased the
monthly cream check and have cut down
expenses.
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John Smith, Gust Nordin, Peter
Thompson, Jake Kirk, and Tom Paulson
are members of the association in this
community.
North Dakota farmers would make
$28,000,000 more from their dairy cows
each year if all cows were tested for
production and inferior animals replaced
with good ones, according to A. M.
Challey, dairy extension worker of the
North Dakota Agricultural college.
Mr. Challey bases his estimate on the
actual records of the members of the
Flasher Cow Testing association, show
ing an average production of 258 pounds
of butterfat per cow last year, whereas
the average for all cows milked in the
state was only 140 pounds. At 40 cents
per pound for butterfat, the average cow
produces $63.85 worth of butterfat in a
year at a feed cost, according to farmers'
records, of $24.44, leaving an income
above feed costs of $39.41.
News for Farm Women. Farm women read the newspapers
more closely than women living in the city. They do not have
all of the parties and teas to go to that the town women have,
and so depend upon the paper and word of mouth to keep
them informed of what is happening. Farm news for women
is as important as farm news for men. While much farm news
is of interest to both the men and women, there is a great part
of it that will be more interesting to women. Gardens and
gardening; landscape gardening at small cost; ways to make
the 'farm home more attractive ; hedges around the farm house;
flower raising; hotbeds and cold frames; raising fruits; care
of fruit trees, vines and bushes; best methods of canning dif
ferent fruits; recipes for canning and cooking; ways to save
steps in getting the housework done; menus; ways of saving
food by using it in the preparation of different dishes; new
ways of cooking foods; kitchen equipment and its location so
that things are more convenient; homemade devices to assist
in the work, etc., will furnish material for many stories that
will interest farm women.
Although they do not have as much time to devote to dress
as women living in the city, nevertheless farm women are very
much interested in styles. The latest in dress fashions; pat
terns; sewing problems; goods for clothes; tatting; embroid-
150 COUNTRY JOURNALISM
ery; crocheting patterns; fancy work, etc., are all of interest
to them.
How to Gather Farm News. The problem of gathering
farm news cannot be solved by following the rules for gather
ing news in the city. No regular beats which can be made
every day can be established in the country. There is little
excitement on the farm when a man finds a better way to care
for cattle or makes some similar discovery. There are no offi
cial documents to turn to in collecting farm news. Different
ways of getting the news from farmers must be used than
those used in getting city news.
First of all, the country newspaperman should make it his
business to know as many of the farmers personally who live
in his vicinity as he can, and should do all he can to make
them feel that the paper is run for their good. Displaying a
prize pumpkin in the window of the print shop will make a
friend who will come in many times after that with something
of interest about his farm. The country newspaperman should
visit surrounding farms whenever he has the time to do so.
A personal visit to a farm and an ordinary chat with the
farmer will turn up a dozen good stories. If the farmer is
approached in a formal fashion with: "I am with the Small
town Daily Argus and would like to interview you on the
subject of raising hogs/ 3 or a similar statement, he will imme
diately become suspicious of the motives of the reporter and
will divulge nothing. Simple, plain ordinary conversation
about the weather, crop conditions in general, and things he
is interested in will start him talking and give the reporter the
material he desires.
In rural communities much news is carried by word of
mouth. A chance conversation with a farmer hauling hay
will reveal to the newspaperman many things that are going
on in that farmer's locality. A friendly talk with a farmer
when he comes to town will furnish material for several good
stories.
The wise country journalist will encourage farmers to visit
the office every time they come to town. Their visits, what
they came for, and all interesting facts connected with their
business in town, can be written for the local column.
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News from Conversation with a Farmer. A country editor,
while on his way home from a Sunday visit to another town,
picked up a farmer walking along the road. Here is part of the
verbatim conversation 1 showing the stories that the editor
got from the chance conversation and the way in which he
got them:
"Hello, John. Going my way?"
"You bet. I'm going down to Ed
Holland's place to help him husk corn
next week. He's going to help me han
dle the sheep a bit later."
"Got all your work done already?"
"Well, no, but the boy carne home
from Mayfield last night on the train,
and him and Jake are going to get the
sheep from the Forbes 3 pasture next
week and fix up the barns for the win
ter."
"What boy? Do you mean Bill?"
"Yes. He's home while the factory's
shut down over there for repairs."
"How's the corn going this year?"
"Well, Ed said, his was making 45 to
the acre and mine's been going about
fifty. Most of the boys around here
have hogged off five acres or so. There's
some mighty fine hogs on account of
it too. Charley Peters shipped twenty-
five good-sized ones yesterday and
there'll be lots more sold before winter."
"Get much rain at your place the other
night?"
'More wind than anything else, I
guess. Me and the missus was over to
Al Jones' place when it came up and
when we got home the machine shed
door was hanging by one hinge. Blew
the shed over at Hammond's place, I
guess. Let me out here and I'll cut
across to Ed's."
There would be little in that conversation to make a story
for the city paper. After using the phone the next day to
verify statements the country editor wrote these stories for
his paper:
Story Number 1.
John Stevens, who lives four miles
south of town, is helping Ed Holland
get the rest of his corn husked. Ed has
a corn crop this year that is averaging
more than 45 bushels to the acre. John
I7 his conversation was taken down by the writer/ who was a member of the editor's
party. The names are changed.
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has finished husking his corn, which
made 50 bushels to the acre, and plans
to spend the next week at Ed's place
before starting farm preparations for
winter.
Number 2.
William Stevens, son of Mr. and Mrs.
John Stevens, who live four miles south
of town, arrived here Saturday night
from Mayfield for a visit with his par
ents. Bill has been working for the
J. C. Rogers Company, plumbing and
steam fitting factory, as their pipe de
partment foreman for the past two years,
and is home for a vacation while some
new machinery is being installed in the
factory. He plans to spend a week
visiting friends here and then return to
Mayfield by way of Mason, some time
the next week.
Number 3.
Bill Stevens and Jake Thomas left
Monday morning for Beldon where they
will get the flock of more than 1,000
sheep belonging to John Stevens and
drive them home in preparation for the
coming winter. Mr. Stevens has had
the sheep pastured on the old Forbes
place two miles east of Beldon for the
past three months.
Five years ago John Stevens started
raising sheep by purchasing ten ewes
from the Jackson sheep ranch at Cam-
den. He found it a paying business and
the following year increased his flock to
100. Since then he has added to his
flock by purchase and natural increase
until he now has more than 1,000. When
he started in the business he says his
neighbors laughed at him and called him
an "old sheep herder." John says since
the money has been coming in for wool
and mutton in large amounts each year
he doesn't care what they call him. He
is the largest sheep owner in this com
munity.
Number 4.
A wind and rain storm struck this
vicinity last Friday night about 8:30
o'clock, and from the reports of several
farmers, did some slight damage. The
shed at Ben Hammond's farm that has
been used as a milk house was com
pletely demolished, and the machine
COUNTRY JOURNALISM 153
shed door at John Stevens' farm was left
hanging by one hinge. Milk pails and
jars were blown around the yard at
Hammond's and the separator was over
turned. No damage was done to any
property in the city.
Number 5.
"Hogging off" five or ten acres of corn
is, in the opinion of Charley Peters, local
farmer, a profitable practice. He shipped
25 hogs to the St. Paul Produce Com
pany last Saturday which he said were
practically raised in the cornfield. The
hogs averaged 186 pounds apiece.
Charley says there's nothing to it but
turning the hogs into a small patch of
corn and seeing that they have plenty of
water to drink. He also fed them
skimmed milk the first part of the sum
mer.
Perhaps some will wonder how the editor got so many stories
with so little as a working basis. He knew something of the
history of sheep-raising in his community from previous
stories. The files of the paper helped him verify statements.
A phone call to the Hammond, Peters, and Stevens farms did
the rest. No amount of conversation will help the editor in
getting news unless he uses every possible angle to run down
the rest of the story.
Need of a Farmer- Journalist. When it is practicable the
country paper should have a man to devote all of his time to
writing farm news. This reporter must be more than a jour
nalist ; he must know farming as well as any farmer and know
what interests farmers. His business will be to collect farm
news and write it and to conduct special research problems
in a scientific way that will benefit farmers. He must write
the results of experiments so that the story has a local connec
tion. A man who knows a great deal about journalism and a
little about farming will not be able to compete with the man
who knows much about farming and enough about journalism
to write simply and interestingly. The day when every coun
try paper will have a farmer- journalist is yet to come, but
until that time farm news will not be covered adequately.
CHAPTER XII
FEATURE STORIES
What They Are. Included in the type of news which has
been designated "Local Features 7 ' are many stories which dif
fer materially from the helps and hints of practical guidance
previously explained. These stories are generally much longer
than the practical aid briefs and frequently are longer than
the regular news stories of the week. They are different, too,
in the manner in which they treat subjects and in the form of
the story.
Even in the country paper, the straight news story is lim
ited to the facts that are available concerning some happen
ing which is of greatest interest only because it is of recent
date. The feature story serves a different purpose and is not
limited by the number of facts about some particular happen
ing. Many persons like to know more of the persons, places,
things, and circumstances mentioned in the straight news
story. Readers like to know something of the life of those
who are talked about in the news, more about the background
of the happening, and some of the less striking but none the
less interesting facts about circumstances which are not
brought to their attention in stories of current events.
Feature stories have come to be used because not all of the
interesting things connected with community life can be pre
sented in straight news stories. In the feature story the
reader gets to know some person, place, or thing, in a way
that makes him feel that he has a personal acquaintance with
the subject of the news. The material is so presented that the
reader feels he is reading one of the best short stories of the
day, made all the more interesting because he knows the story
to be true.
Professor Willard G. Bleyer of the University of Wisconsin
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COUNTRY JOURNALISM 155
defines the feature story x as a "detailed presentation of facts
in an interesting form adapted to rapid reading, for the pur
pose of entertaining or informing the average person. 7 ' The
story may deal with: (1) recent news that is of sufficient
importance to warrant elaboration; (2) timely or seasonal
topics not directly connected with news; or (3) subjects of
general interest that have no immediate connection with cur
rent events.
Feature stories are not written immediately after the event
has occurred but appear sometimes many days later. The
writer has time to look at the facts presented by the straight
news story, to gather any additional facts that are interesting,
to organize his story, and to present it in a form which will
arouse enough interest in the reader to make him read the
entire story.
Value of Feature Stories in the Country Paper. There are
times when the country editor is ready to give up the ship, to
conclude that not enough happens in a small town to fill 'his
paper every week. Unless the editor is one who believes in
having something stored up for a slack season he must fill his
paper with a lot of "filler" material and let it go at that. This
material is very seldom of much interest to local readers, and
instead of helping to make the paper appear full of news it
acts as so much dead weight, detracting from the local news
that the staff has managed to secure.
Feature stories, written up at times when business is slack
and when news is scarce, serve the editor in the same capacity
as money in the bank. They are interesting to local readers
and they make the use of "fillers" unnecessary. By the use
of them the editor may always have a newsy paper and will
save himself much feverish work trying to find something to
"fill that space." Very few newspapermen forget that it is
necessary to have money in the bank to be used if needed, but
they do not apply this reasoning to news stories. If there
were no other value in having feature stories in the country
paper, the saving of time and thought that they afford would
be enough to warrant their use.
The second reason for having feature stories in the country
paper is that they are real tonics for a sick subscription list.
1 See "Special Feature Articles" by Williard G. Bleyer (Houghton, Mifflin Co.)-
156 COUNTRY JOURNALISM
Of all the schemes that have been tried to boost circulation
and to arouse interest among readers in what the paper is
doing, good live, local features have been of the most help.
Feature stories are also of much service to the country editor
because they furnish him with an opportunity to bring before
the readers in an interesting manner, some person, condition,
or circumstance which is an important part of the life of the
community. Instead of complimenting some progressive
farmer in words which might make some one else feel unkindly
toward the man, the editor may write about his farm in a
way which will bring out all of the important points. Rather
than try to get people interested in the school by urging them
in an editorial, the editor can arouse intense interest by run
ning a series of feature stories telling about the interesting and
valuable work the school is doing. From the standpoint of use
fulness in arousing the readers' interest in any part of the
community, the value of feature stories can not be overes
timated.
Aims of Feature Stories. If we except the short briefs of
helps and hints, and the stories of practical guidance, from
this classification, and deal only with regular feature stories,
we may divide the aims of these stories into two divisions. A
feature story aims either to: (1) entertain readers, or (2) to
inform them. There are, of course, many stories which com
bine these two aims in a manner which makes them both in
teresting and educational. Most of the stories found in the
country paper will have both of these aims.
A trip through a local factory such as is mentioned in one
of the feature stories given later might have been written
with a view to furnishing readers with material for entertain
ment only. The writer could have picked from what he saw
the actual situations and incidents which would be humorous
and could have presented them in such a way that readers
would have been only amused. Stories which classify as "hu
morous' ' are good illustrations of features written with the
view of entertaining readers.
The same trip through a factory could have been written so
that it was not in the least entertaining, simply presenting
the facts about the factory in a businesslike manner. Some-
COUNTRY JOURNALISM 157
times such a story must be written, but it is only when the
information contained in the story is of such great importance
that any entertainment would interfere with the presentation
of facts. Generally, both aims will be shown in feature stories
found in good country papers.
Getting Material. Much material for feature stories the
editor will get from his own personal experience and observa
tion ; in fact, this is the most prolific source of material for any
feature writer. Visiting a neighbor may give the editor enough
material for a good story of the way a man can raise an or
chard in his back yard. A trip through the country on a Sun
day afternoon will furnish material for a story on bee-keeping
as a side line, roadside marketing of produce, a significant
landmark, or what not. Personal experience with a rather re
fractory furnace may lead the editor to write a feature story
on taking care of a furnace; experience with an automobile
will give the editor ideas for many features about the care of
the car, getting pleasure from long rides, cheap touring, etc.
The editor's personal experience and observation will be re
sponsible for most of the feature stories he writes, because in
such cases he will know most about his subject.
News stories in his own paper and in exchanges will some
times give the editor ideas for feature stories. The account
in another paper of the organization of a golf club and the
preparation of a place to play will suggest the possibility of
having a club in the local community. The purchase of a
new tractor by a farmer well known in the community will
suggest the possibility of getting a feature story about that
man's farm. There is no end to the subjects which will come
to the editor from watehing news items for significant and in
teresting points.
By collecting facts about some seasonal event such as Christ
mas, the editor can prepare many of 'his feature stories weeks
and even months in advance. If a book of subjects for fea
ture stories is kept and referred to frequently, many ideas for
features on coming events will be obtained. Anniversaries,
holidays, special days, fairs, etc., will afford material for stories
which may be written much in advance.
Classification of Country Feature Stories. Unless the coun-
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try editor has some definite idea of the kinds of feature stories
that can be written for the country paper he will miss a great
many stories that could be used. A satisfactory way of clas
sifying features about the country community is one which
makes use of the subjects of the news. Each community will
be different and each editor will have different ideas, but after
looking over his possible sources for feature stories he will
be able to make a classification which will serve him well.
Feature Stories in the Country Field. Historical. The most
common kind of feature story found in the country paper is
one which appeals to the interest everyone has in historical
facts. No matter how old or how young a reader may be, he
still likes to hear and read about times long since past but
perhaps still fresh in his memory. Our interest in the affairs
of many years ago, in the people of that day, never grows less
with advancing years; on the contrary, the older we get the
more we live in the past. Most of the country papers in the
United States that are old enough to have any files, are run
ning short briefs each week about days gone by which are still
remembered. Various headings are used to introduce these
collections of stories but all indicate to the reader that here
are stories gleaned from memory and record. There is no
other feature which is read with so much interest as these
" Years Ago" columns.
Two methods are in vogue for presenting such historical
briefs, one in which the news is given in the exact wording of
the original item and the other in which the editor of today
tells the important facts about what happened years ago. The
first method is better since it permits readers to get the atmos
phere of the former time and to see the way news was chron
icled in that day.
Sometimes a relic of historical importance is brought to
light by some one who accidentally stumbles on to it in a long-
neglected place. The opportunity for feature stories about
such historical relics is great and is limited only by the number
of subjects found. An old paper, interesting because of its
age, and more interesting because of its historical significance,
furnishes the material and inspiration for the following story
for the Tri-County Press, Polo, Illinois.
COUNTRY JOURNALISM 159
POLOAN HAS PAPER
OF JULY 8, 1776
AS FAMILY RELIC
HISTORICAL RELIC IN STORAGE
BOX FOUND BY MISS ES
THER WATERBURY
PIONEERS ACTIVE
Issue Contains Historical Docu
ments; Interestingly Written;
Ads Are Short
^ Rainy days are usually fruitful espe
cially when one likes to rummage
through the old boxes that hold relics
of days gone by, personal effects of one's
family, or keepsakes treasured for years.
Miss Esther Waterbury, school nurse,
came across a copy of the Pennsylvania
Packet dated Monday, July 8, 1776, on
one such trip into the attic, the land of
storage boxes.
The issue of the Packet brought to
this office by Miss Waterbury contains
"A Declaration by the Representatives
of the United States in Congress Assem
bled" made four days previous, on July 4,
1776. The Declaration of Independence
is printed in full setting forth the rea
sons for the separation of the Colonies
from England. "The history of the
present King of t Great-Britain is a his
tory of repeated injuries and usurpations,
all having in direct object the establish
ment of an absolute tyranny over these
states. To prove this, let facts be sub
mitted to a candid world," wrote John
Dunlap, editor of the Packet.
Another part of the paper contained
"An Act to prevent Sedition, and pun
ish Insurgents and Disturbers of the
Public Peace." Much news of the
times, war stories, is given in the Packet.
Plans were published for the protection
of the Colonies. John Hancock, presi-
160 COUNTRY JOURNALISM
dent of the Congress, seemed to have
much to say as his name was signed to
many of the orders. A call for flint
stone was made with the request that
"all printers of newspapers in the sev
eral states are desired to insert this
advertisement ."
All advertising is in the form of our
classified section. No display space was
used at that time. The subscription
was 10 shillings per year. Miss Water-
bury prizes the copy of the Packet very
highly. She says her parents secured the
paper which had been handed down for
several generations.
Personal. Some papers have made' it a rule to run some
thing about prominent citizens each week so that members of
the community will get acquainted with them. "Who's Who
in " is the caption of many a column which runs facts
about prominent people in the community.
Such short direct quotations as the two following taken
from the Farmer City (111.) Journal are both entertaining and
informative with the readers' interest aroused in both.
WHEN I GET BIG
MARION ROLLINS
"When I get big I want to stay
at home and play, I don't want
to work. If I can't stay at home
and have a good time, I want to
work on a farm, so that I can
ride horses, 'cause I like to ride
horses, better than most anything
else that I know of."
Marion is the son of Mr. and
Mrs. C. L. Rollins. He is in the
first grade and is six years old.
COUNTRY JOURNALISM
161
WHEN I WAS 20
G. F. Zumwalt
"When I was twenty years old
I was working as night telegraph
operator, at Birkbeck first, and
then DeWitt. I was only at Birk
beck three months, and the rest of
the year was spent at DeWitt. I
boarded and roomed with a man
by the name of Cutch Bourn,
where I paid $12.50 a month for
both. Of course, I slept during
the day time, and it was quiet
there to sleep. When I was at
Birkbeck, I stayed with some peo
ple that lived two miles back in a
timber, among the mosquitos and
pinch bugs."
Pioneers and patriarchs of the community deserve to be
commended while they are still alive and readers need to be
reminded that the local community has men who have lived
interesting lives. The Sun, Rutherfordton, North Carolina,
ran the following "living obituary" of a prominent citizen with
a splendid picture of him to commemorate his birthday. Such
personal feature stories are easily obtained and are of great
interest to those who know the subject of the news.
THE LIFE STORY
OF MR. E. E. CLINE
E. E. Cline, soldier and officer of the
Confederate Army, a successful farmer
of the best type and a courageous and
courteous gentleman, was born at the
home of his father, Ephraim Cline, near
Newton, North Carolina, on July 12,
1833.
Brought up on his father's farm, t it
was natural for Mr. E. E. Cline to in
herit a love of the land and to follow
in the footsteps of his parents, who were
true and successful farmers. For a wife
162 COUNTRY JOURNALISM
of a farmer in those days, and it is
equally true in the present day, did
enough work in the house and garden,
and often in the fields, for her to share
the honorable title of "farmer."
Mr. Cline received the school educa
tion to be obtained in the period in
which he was born. It may be the
schooling he had would be called at
present but little, but it sufficed to give
North Carolina many of the finest men
and women the State has ever had.
In 1861 the conflict between the South
and the North came to a head. The call
for men came and it did not have to
come twice to Mr. Cline. In August, the
13th, he enlisted in Company E of the
57th Infantry Regiment of North Caro
lina. The Company marched to Salis
bury and there the regiment was formed.
Mr. E. E. Cline was elected Second
Lieutenant of his company and this
arduous post he^ ably fulfilled. From
Salisbury the regiment was sent to Wil
mington, where they spent the winter
of '61.
"From Wilmington," said the ninety-
three years young veteran, "we went
to Richmond and it was in the battle of
Fredericksburg I was wounded in the
thigh by a minnie ball. I carried that
ball for ten months before it was re
moved. In fact I still feel the effects
of the wound but it doesn't bother me
much except now and then, in wet
weather. I marched to Bristol Station
with that bullet in me but we didn't
have a fight. After returning from that
place my wound became inflamed and I
had to go to the hospital to have the
bullet taken out. It was at Danville in
Virginia I had the operation.
"One day after the bullet had been
taken out and I was using crutches the
doctor came along* 'Throw away those
crutches/ he told me. I answered him
back right smart and said, 'I will fall
to the ground if I do. I can't stand
yet.' We had some more words and I
spoke pretty freely. Now to be honest I
knew I would be no good for a long time
and I wanted to get transferred to the
hospital at Salisbury."
The veteran's handsome face was
wreathed in a reminiscent smile and he
chuckled softly before he resumed:
"Yes, I wanted to get to Salisbury. You
see," here he laughed aloud, "it was just
that much nearer home and I knew if I
once got to Salisbury, I could work it to
COUNTRY JOURNALISM 163
get home and see my wife. Well, Dr.
Montgomery and I had a time of it but
in the end I did get to Salisbury and I
did get to my home for a time.
"Did I have any brothers in the war?
Yes, I had five, but one of them had no
business to go. He was sickly, and he
was refused time and time again, but
he managed at last to get accepted.
No, he wasn't killed in action. He was
writing a letter in Richmond when a
stray bullet killed him. He was Am
brose. I think it was in 3 65 he died.
Then there was Darius, he's still living
over in Granite Falls, and he is ninety-
one years old. No, he did not come to
my birthday dinner.
"Then there was Abel J., he's in
Texas, Montcalm, Hill County. He's
only ninety years old. It was too far
for him to come to Gilkey. Alfred died
some years ago; Ambrose was killed in
the war and then there is the baby, S. J.
Cline. How old is he? About eighty-
six, I think."
On November 11, 1857 Mr. E. E. Cline
married Miss Leoma Narcissus Rader,
the daughter of Mr. and Mrs. Daniel
Rader. Mrs. Daniel Rader was Miss
Fanny Deal before her marriage. The
following named children were born to
Mr. and Mrs. Cline:
Mr. P. L. Cline, who married first
Miss Cora Bell Healen. They had
three children, and some years after
the death of* his wife, Mr. P. L. Cline
married Miss Lizzie Abernethy. There
are 5 living children by his second wife.
Mr. and Mrs. Cline reside at Granite
Falls.
Miss Dora Cline, who married Mr. J.
A. Poovey. They have five children.
Mr. and Mrs. Poovey also live at
Granite Falls.
Miss Ella Cline, who married Mr. J.
W. Abernethy. To this union were born
three children. Mr. Abernethy died
some years ago. Mrs. Abernethy re
sides with her brother-in-law, Mr. H. C.
Cobb, of Rhodhiss, N. C.
Mr. J. M. Cline, who married Misa
Ellie Payne. Mr. and Mrs. Cline are
residents of Granite Falls, and have six:
children.
Mr. C. F. Cline, who married Miss
Effie L. Jones, of Granite Falls. Mr.
and Mrs. Cline reside at Gilkey and
have eight children. It was C. F. Cline
who gave the birthday dinner for his
father at Gilkey on July llth.
164 COUNTRY JOURNALISM
Mr. George E. Cline, who married
Miss Delia Hamby. Mr. and Mrs. Cline
live at Granite Falls and they have
three children.
Mr. E. E. Cline's first wife died in
1877 and a few years later the Confed
erate veteran married Miss Isadora
Abernethy. From this union were born
the following children : Mr. A. A. Cline,
who married Miss Emma Lynch, of
Rutherford County. Jhey have one
child.
Miss Bessie Cline, who married H. F.
Killian, of Lincoln County. They have
six children and reside at Gilkey, N. C.
Miss Claudie Cline, who married Dr.
M. T. Hickman. They have four chil
dren and reside at Hudson, N. C.
Mr. Carr Cline, who is the only child
not married, and Miss Mamie Cline,
who married Mr. M. L. Moore, of
Granite Falls, where they live. Mr. and
Mrs. Moore have two children.
Thus Mr. E. E, Cline has eleven chil
dren who are living, forty-two grand
children, and thirty-one great-grandchil
dren. Mr. Cline 's second wife died on
November 11, 1912.
Agriculture and Stock Raising. In communities where
agriculture and stock raising are the main occupations there
will be ample opportunity for the editor to get live local fea
ture stories about conditions in general and about interesting
things on particular farms. The following article is interest
ing to all who have anything to do with stock raising, or
farming. From the Madison County Democrat, London, Ohio.
Old Dobbin
Coming Back
SOME LATE FACTS AND FIGURES
SHOW BETTER DAYS COM
ING FOR THE HORSE
Madison county farms formerly were
looked to by city buyers to furnish big
handsome Percheron, Clyde and Bel
gian horses for the market. Of late
years horse breeding has fallen off and
good, heavy horses are becoming scarcer.
The present is the onportune time to re-
COUNTRY JOURNALISM 165
vive the business. Wise breeders who
have continued are expecting big profits
as demand and prices are on the upward
tendency.
Old Dobbin is scoffing at the idea of
becoming just mere material for remi
niscence.
Folks who think his usefulness lies
only in his performance at shows and his
posing for sculptors are all wrong, he
snorts. To prove it, he directs their
attention to a survey, just completed,
dealing with his "comeback." Figures
compiled by the U. S. government, the
records of the American Horse associa
tion and mounting sales of harness and
horse foods by the leading mail-order
houses, all prove that the horse is com
ing back into his own.
Yes, the humble horse is doing his
humble work again and he will keep
right on doing it, contends the report
which is based on government census
bureau figures. Again he is pulling the
transfer man's heavy dray. Again he
is hitched to the plow.
And his role in both city and farm life
is emphasized still further by the big
gains in harness sales. E. J. Albro, as
sistant manager of the harness depart
ment of Montgomery Ward & Co., re
tailing perhaps more horse equipment
than any other American concern, an
nounced yesterday that its harness busi
ness last year had received an 80 per
cent increase over 1922, and the sales are
still on the rise. The farmer, he said,
found he could use the horse when he
could not use a tractor in his work.
A couple of years ago the automobile
and tractor had just about succeeded in
pushing Dobbin out of the race. The
"horseless carriage" had the laugh on the
horse. Today it is the horse that is
chuckling.
"The motor truck," said Secretary
Wayne Dinsmore of the Horse Associa
tion of America, "is the only thing where
speed is demanded. But for short hauls
and where frequent stops are made, it
isn't practical."
And he pointed to the number of
dairies, laundries, bakeries, newspapers
and others with big delivery problems
which are following such a plan.
Speaking of tractors on the farm, Mr.
Dinsmore thought the main objection
to them was that they "do not eat farm
products."
"They eat gasoline and oil," he ex-
166 COUNTRY JOURNALISM
plained. "And you can raise neither
on the farm. But you can grow the
corn, oats and hay the horse requires."
There are a total of 22,266,387 horses
in the United States today, the govern
ment statistics disclose.
Homes, Farm and City. The word "Home" is one of the
most suggestive in the language. It arouses emotions and
interests in everyone who says or hears it. It is no wonder
that every reader of the country paper is interested in hearing
about other people's homes, what they look like, how they
are arranged, made comfortable and convenient, and the yards,
gardens, and lawns surrounding them. No town is too small
to have homes which will furnish material for such a feature
story as the following. The Cameron Enterprise, Cameron,
Texas, runs a column of such short feature stories about the
many interesting things in the city.
Around the
City
Cameron has many beautiful homes,
none of which is more ornate than the
stucco residence of Mr. and Mrs. Geo. T.
Graves on Hefley Heights, which is sur
rounded by massive oaks ~and pecan
trees, of great natural beauty. The
house fronts on Thirteenth Street but
the lot runs back to Eleventh. The
front lawn is attractive but the back
yard is a picture, having the appear
ance of a sunken garden, with its fern
beds, bird-bath and ornamental fencing.
This home is so attractive that a home
magazine published in Baltimore, Mary
land, sent a man all the way to Texas, to
take exterior and interior pictures for an
illustrated article describing the beauties
of this Cameron home. There are four
massive live-oaks and four large pecans
among the forty beautiful trees that
form a magnificent setting for this ele
gant home and artistic grounds.
The community includes farm homes as well as city homes
and this fact adds subjects of feature stories to the editor's
COUNTRY JOURNALISM 167
list. The following story shows how a farm home may be
so well described that not only farm neighbors will read the
story but also everyone who lives in the community that is
interested in homes of any kind. This story is also a very
good example of bringing a worthy citizen before the public
for deserved attention. The description of local scenery given
is worth considering.
JOHN SCOGGINS HAS
PROGRESSIVE FARM
Farms Portion of Washburn
Plantation and Also Operates
Meal and Flour Mill. Large
Family Connection.
Mr. John Scoggins is a tenant farmer
of part of the Washburn plantation on
the new Coxe Road between Rutherford-
ton and Broad River. The fifty acres
cultivated by Mr. Scoggins lie on both
sides of the road which leads from the
main highway to Shiloh.
In this pretty section of the county
at the foot of a hill on the right and
close by the picturesque old Washburn
Mill stands the comfortable home in
which Mr. and Mrs. Scoggins and five of
their eight children reside. Surrounded
by lovely old trees, shrubs and bushes,
and some fruit trees, the house has an
unusually good setting.
Picturesque Mill.
On the left of the road and a little
beyond the residence stands the old
mill ; run by water power from the creek.
It has the exquisite color attained only
by age and beside it stand trees to
provide shade for the farmers who still
bring their corn to be ground. Formerly
wheat was also brought, but the days of
burr flour have passed and it is rare now
for any call to be made for the grinding
of wheat.
The forty to fifty acres which Mr.
John Scoggins has under cultivation are
used for cotton, corn, sugar cane, sweet
potatoes, watermelons and other crops.
168 COUNTRY JOURNALISM
From this comparatively small acreage
Mr. Scoggins and his two sons, Clyde
and Horace Scoggins, earn a good living.
Mrs. Scoggins, like the good housewife
and helpmate she is, attends to the
chickens, the garden of about half an
acre provides her table with vegetables.
Besides looking after her family, Mrs.
Scoggins, in the canning season, puts up
fruit, vegetables, pickles and many other
things for the winter months.
Progressive Farmer.
Mr. Scoggins is a progressive farmer
and has a knowledge of the manifold
branches of his occupation gained by
being born on a farm and spending
much of his younger days there. Natu
rally he believes in the proper fertiliza
tion, rotation of crops and all the other
details so well known to farmers but are
vague to those who do not gain^ their
livelihood from the soil. In addition to
his farming, Mr. Scoggins runs the mil],
when there is demand for such service.
Institutions. Feature stories about the various institutions
in the community are easily obtained and are interesting to
everyone. The great majority of people never know what is
inside of most of the buildings in the town, and nothing of
the way institutions are run. They would like to know about
these places but never seem to have time to visit them per
sonally to get the information. In the following story the
editor has taken it upon himself to conduct his readers through
the rather new factory in the town, showing them with words
what he experienced and observed on the trip.
Little Journey Thru
New Factory Made
By News Reporter
"How's the new factory getting
along?" has been a current question, on
the lips of Hillsboro residents, for some
time, so that now, even with the new
Gordon Mills, Inc., sheet and pillow
case factory located, set up, and running,
in Hillsboro, they still ask the question.
A News reporter made a flying visit
COUNTRY JOURNALISM 169
to the factory Friday morning, to see
what is done, in a sheet and pillow case
factory.
The trip was worth the time, even
if the factory is still in the pin-feather
stage, so to speak, only one week hav
ing elapsed, since the machinery arrived
here, to be set up.
Hillsboro's new industry is located in
the former A. H. Bartlett Motor Sales
Co.'s building, northwest of the court
house. The front part of the building
still bears the marks of oil drippings
from car storage, on its floor and men
are still at work cleaning up the "lobby"
to make it an attractive entrance to the
new industry. The entrance room will
be used for storage, shipping purposes,
etc. The office and the cutting and sew
ing room are housed in the large light,
well-ventilated room at the west side
of the entrance. The mangle and other
equipment of this kind will be set up in
the basement.
Two long rows of Singer sewing ma
chines, operated by electric motors, fill
a large part of the sewing room and ten
girls from or near Hillsboro, were at
work Friday morning, C. Haines, of
Bement, is in charge temporarily, and he
personally and politely conducts visitors
about, explaining the system and the
process, and satisfying the curiosity of
the visitors who drop in at intervals, to
see the new factory.
Sewing machines are threaded from
two or from three five-inch cone-shaped
spools of cotton thread to each machine.
Workers do not leave their places, but
helpers put piles of pillow-slips or sheets,
at their elbows, and the girls at the ma
chines put the material under the needle,
and the piece is rushed thru with almost
lightning-like rapidity, and is sewed, the
seam covered, and the waste material at
the edge of the seam cut off, by the ma
chine, all in one operation and in the
twinkling of an eye.
A cheaper grade of sheets is made with
a seam down the middle and the worker
seems to be doing three things at once,
as the seam is stitched, the edge turned
under and this edge stitched again, all
at one "run," the machines being
equipped to do this.
Two new workers had been employed,
instructed and put to work, Friday morn
ing, and -though they must have been
"green hands," this was not apparent to
an observer.
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Cutting Them Out.
Across the north end of the sewing
room, was the long cutting table with a
frame nearby to support the rolls of
muslin which are to be cut into sheet
or pillow slip lengths.
Twelve rolls of cloth at once are set
across the frame, which is like a long,
open box, and the muslin, twelve thick
nesses at one time, is unrolled down the
length of the cutting table. Other
cloth is unrolled, twelve layers deep at a
time, until as much as one hundred
thicknesses of muslin are spread
smoothly down the table. Then the
cutting machine, which is as unlike a
pair of shears or scissors as possible, is
brought into action. It is a small ma
chine, two feet high, or less, composed of
a metal frame which supports a knife
like an elongated razor-blade, set in the
machine vertically. The cutter is op
erated by electricity and cuts cloth as
if it were cheese. The cutter is small
and light and can be placed and moved
at will; yards of cable, attached to it
and to a "trolley wire" extending over
head the full length of the table, permit
it to be moved to cut long or short dis
tances, at will, on the muslin, along
straight edges, or along patterns, if
fancy goods are being turned out.
After the cutting, each pillow slip or
sheet is folded, ready to sew, and piles
of this material are carried by helper
girls, to the girls at the machines, where
seams are sewed, covered and trimmed.
Hems are stitched or hemstitched, de
pending on the grade of the goods being
made. Turning the pillow slips and
turning out the two corners, after they
are stitched, is each an art in itself, and
the girls are said to become so pro
ficient after they learn how to do it,
that as many as 500 pillow slips in one
hour, are turned.
The finished pieces are then put into
a clothes chute leading to the basement,
where they are pressed in a mangle and
made ready for shipment to the whole
saler.
To Increase Number of Woiker*.
The factory here hopes to have one
hundred workers on their pay roll, in the
next few months. A superintendent will
be in charge of the plant here, as the
COUNTRY JOURNALISM 171
general head and a forewoman in charge
of the actual work of making the prod
uct, by the girls.
Mr. Haines, who is here at present,
was sent here from the Bement factory
only temporarily, asjhe owns property in
Bement, and has his own work in the
mechanical department of the factory
there, and a superintendent for the Hills-
boro plant has not yet been selected.
f A carload shipment of materials con
signed to the Hillsboro plant is already
billed here, and in spite of the fact that
arrangements and equipment placement
are still incomplete, the sheets and pil
low slips are being turned out, the fac
tory is in operation, and a visit to it is
most interesting.
Curiosities. The instinct of curiosity or whatever it is that
makes human beings interested in strange, unnatural, peculiar
things, is just as strong in country readers as in others. Hardly
a week passes that the editor doesn't hear of some freak in the
vegetable or animal kingdom which is interesting because of its
variation from the normal. Many of these vegetable freaks
are displayed in the windows of the newspaper office or some
other conspicuous place where passersby may see them. The
following story tells of a curiosity that has been found in the
local community.
Large Sunflower Leaf,
Chas. E. Steele, near Indian Creek,
brought a large sunflower leaf to the
News office and he wonders if anyone in
the community has one that can beat it
in size. The leaf measured nineteen
inches across and eighteen inches from
stem to tip. If anyone has one larger
the News would like to be informed
about it.
Mr. Steele also has a new variety of
corn which he has grown for two seasons
with excellent success. It is the variety
called the Smoky Dent and is a quick
maturing kind. The kernels of the corn
are smoky brown in color with a white
dent in the top. He has in twelve acres
of the variety this time and is well
pleased with the yield. It matures in
about 75 days from the time it is
planted. Monroe City Semi-Weekly
News.
172 COUNTRY JOURNALISM
Special Occasion Feature Stories. The various holiday sea
sons of the year, national holidays upon which celebrations
are held, State celebrations, and local festive occasions always
furnish the country editor with much material that he can
use in good feature stories. In many country papers the fact
that the local merchants were having a Santa Glaus come to
town would not get more than a stickful; in many it would
not have been mentioned because it is a very common thing
for merchants to have a Santa Glaus at the Christmas season.
The editor of the Centreville (Maryland) Observer could see
a big feature in the Santa Glaus day in his town and wrote a
story of more than two columns under a banner "JOLLY KRIS
KRINGLE TO MEET KIDDIES HERE TODAY." An ex
tract follows:
ST. NICHOLAS WILL
ARRIVE ON TRAIN
Roly-Poly Old Gent To Be Met
By Clown Band And Kiddies
This Morning At 11:30
Free Movie Show At Opera
House This Afternoon
Gifts For Lads And Lassies.
Hail to His Imperial Majesty, King
ofToyland!
For today the stage is set for Santa
Glaus' triumphal entry into Centreville,
and countless scores of little hearts
throughput Queen Anne's county are
palpitating in anxious expectancy as in
numerable tots await the opportunity to
shower a joyous welcome upon the broad
shoulders of jolly, roly-poly, white-whisk
ered, blue-eyed, ruddy-cheeked old Kris
Kringle.
Santa will arrive on the southbound
Pennsylvania passenger train, arriving in
Centreville at 11 :30. He will be met by
the famous Christmas clown band, with
a bevy of juvenile clowns, and a throng
of welcoming kiddies.
COUNTRY JOURNALISM 173
At 2 o'clock there will be a free movie
show in the Opera House auditorium,
and Santa's gifts will be distributed
either immediately before the movies, or
while they are in progress.
Weeks ago Centreville business men
extended an invitation to Saint Nich
olas to come to Centreville today.
When they first communicated with Old
Kris they were fearful he would be so
terribly busy that it would be necessary
for him to decline the invitation. But
not so. Santa was tickled immensely.
Consequently, last night in hundreds
of little beds, faithful, loving subjects of
a venerable, kindly old Saint, drifted
away into dreamland with lips curved in
contented smiles, and roguish eyes that
only awaited the first peeping rays of
dawn to "twinkle in childish anticipation
over being accorded the^ opportunity to
pay homage to an Imperial Ruler, whose
realm extends throughout the world in
the hearts of innocent children.
Feature Stories from Documents and Records. There are
many documents and records in the offices of officials in the
country town which will furnish the editor with ample material
to write an interesting local feature story. The following ex
tract shows the way in which a writer for the Liberty (N. Y.)
Register took the records of the city clerk's office and made
them interesting to local readers*
174 COUNTRY JOURNALISM
Ordinary Mutt Dog
Is in Minority in
Liberty Town
Only One Listed on Records
of Town Clerk; Collie
Breed Predominates.
Those who believe that the
common, ordinary "mutt" dog 1 is
the most numerous of the canine
tribe are wrong so far as the
town of Liberty is concerned, if
the records in the office of town
clerk Louis H. Nealy are any reli
able indication.
For the "mutt" is represented on the
roll of nearly 350 licensed dogs by just
one individual. Those who say the Hst
is no accurate indication because the
"mutts" are not considered worthy of
the expense of securing a license, but
that they roam the town just the same,
are still wrong, for under the provisions
of the law all unlicensed dogs will be
wiped off the town map before another
month has passed, the town clerk de
clares.
There is a loop-hole, however. Among
the dogs listed, 56 are described as of
"mixed" breed. If this is interpreted to
mean that owners of "mutts" classify
their dogs as "mixed breed" from a sense
of pride, then popular belief in the pre
dominance of the kids' favorite breed
need not be abandoned.
Collie Is Most Numerous
Up to last Friday morning, nearly 350
licenses had been issued to dog owners
in the town of Liberty. The information
given at the time of obtaining these
licenses shows that the collie predomi
nates over all other breeds in the town
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in point of numbers. Of ^them 67 were
listed as against 56 of mixed breed, 59
hounds, 55 shepherds, 27 airedales, and 18
terriers of various kinds.
Police dogs licensed are not so numer
ous as might appear. But 11 are regis
tered on the license stubs in the town.
Nine dogs have the right to hang their
heads in shame, for their owners did not
know what breed they belonged to.
There were 2 coach dogs, 10 bulldogs,
2 Chows, 4 spaniels, 15 poodles, 5
beagles, 5 setters, 4 mongrels, and one
each of the following: Belgian Chipper-
kie, Pomeranian, Newfoundland, mutt,
whippet, Belgian griffin.
Humorous. There are some feature stories which cannot be
classified under any head but that of humor. The purpose of
the story is evidently only to amuse the readers as the subject
has amused the writer. Good humor is hard to get and still
harder to convey to others through the medium of the printed
page. Sometimes, however, the subject matter is so mirth-
provoking that all the editor has to do is to set down the facts.
An incident which might have proved fatal but which proved
to be very humorous was written for the Rawlings (Wyo.)
Republican in the following manner:
LONG SHOT WON
AT MUDDY LAKE
GAME PRESERVE
Harry Breitenstein, affectionately
known to a million friends as "Brit," for
mer banker and now president of the
Parco Chamber of Commerce, while
duck hunting in the vicinity of Mud
Lake, last Wednesday afternoon was ac
cidentally shot by a gun in the hands
of H. E. Dunlap, Harry Free, Glen
Decker, Frank Breitenstein, John Doe,
Richard Roe and other persons whose
names are at this writing unknown.
As soon as the alarm announcing the
accident had been sounded, which was
done by the victim himself, who pro
claimed to a cock-eyed solar system, in
a calm, subdued tone which could not
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have been heard more than a mile, that
he was as full of lead as Mark Twain's
Jumping Frog, members of the hunting
party gathered around the unfortunate
man in order to render first aid, or to
hear any final words he might wish to
utter.
Solicitous friends made a hasty exami
nation which disclosed the fact that the
principal wound appeared to be in the
lip of the moving target. This being
a vital spot the discovery caused much
anxiety at the clinic for it was feared
that the stricken man's loud speaker
might get full of static and cause a total
loss or partial abridgement of the power
of speech.
This however proved to be ground
less for as soon as Mr. Breitenstein re
gained his mental equilibrium he
launched forth into an oration so force
ful, eloquent and fluent as to make
Sparticus 7 Address to the Gladiators
sound like a practice lesson in a School
for Stutterers. This discourse was di
rected to all and sundry who carry guns,
large or small, loaded or unloaded, in
war or in peace, but more particularly
while hunting ducks.
As soon as it became clear that the
wounds were unlikely to prove fatal the
hitherto friendly huntsmen fell into a
violent quarrel over the question of who
fired the shot that caused the commo
tion, each claiming the credit and each
the right to shoot Mr. Breitenstein, that
is, if he was to be shot at all. This
heated argument broke up the party
and was continued after returning to
town and is still unsettled.
The Pote Lariat of The Republican
was so moved by the whole sad tale
that he burst into verse, with the fol
lowing result:
The ducks were falling thick and fast,
"Pop, pop 3 ' went the noisy guns,
A grim reminder of the past,
When we faced the bloody Huns.
There came a cry from the muddy
marsh,
Where the^ ducks did their flit,-fiit-flit,
Above the din, both loud and harsh,
"My Gawd, I'm shot" sez Brit.
They gathered 'round the wounded man,
To get his dying word;
Sez Harry Free, "I guess 'twas me,
I thought he was a bird."
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"Nix, nix," sez Dunny, "I'm the guy
Who made the bull's-eye hit;
I always swore that I would try,
Some day, a shot at Brit."
"You yaps are nuts," sez Brother Frank;
"I hit him and no other,
Who else has got as good a right
To take a shot at brother?"
"When all is said and done," sez Glenn,
"You'll find that I'm to blame ;
I rarely miss with my trusty gun,
And I took careful aim."
But Dunlap wouldn't have it so,
"You marksmen make me sick:
Just ask the man, if talk he can,
He'll say I did the trick."
Poor, bleeding Brit lay back and
moaned :
"Right now I'm here to state
When next I shoots, with these here
brutes,
I'll dress in armor plate."
(ITncopyrighted, 1925. No rights re
served except translation into the
Scandinavian.)
Writing the Feature Story. Everyone who intends to go
into journalistic work in the country field will find it advan
tageous to study the writing of feature stories. The student
can learn not only the methods used in writing for newspapers
but also for magazines which gives him a chance to add to his
income by doing special articles.
The types of beginnings in use by writers of feature stories
may be divided Tnto^these seven kinds: (1) summary; (2)
narrative; (3) description; (4) striking statement; (5) quota
tion; (6) question; (7) direct address. Combinations of these
beginnings are also used. Without giving illustrations of these
beginnings they may be explained by saying that the summary
lead is similar to the summary lead of a straight news story;
the narrative lead is one which relates a story; the descriptive
lead begins by describing something; the striking statement is
any that will compel the reader to give his attention; a quo
tation, a question, and direct address are self-explanatory.
The value of a definite plan as an aid in writing a feature
story cannot be overestimated, and the need of a plan must
be emphasized in the case of the country newspaperman who
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has so many other duties. A definite purpose, which is not
too big for the amount of space available, should be held in
mind while the story is being written. Nothing should be ad
mitted to the story, no matter how interesting it may be, which
will not accomplish the original purpose. There is much dan
ger in writing feature stories that fancy will take the place of
facts and that flowery and imaginative language will ruin the
story for popular consumption.
CHAPTER XIII
THE EDITORIAL PAGE
Necessity for an Editorial Page. The news function of a
community paper is the most important, but by no means the
only one. In addition to giving a complete coverage of the
news events of the week, the editor has the task of interpreting
this news, of calling the attention of his readers to the im
portant things in the news, of giving them reading matter that
is not strictly news, and of doing what he can with his pen
to help matters in the town. It has been found that the better
newspapers, those which are the most successful financially
and which have the best news service, are the ones that have
uncolored news. If any comment is considered necessary, it
is put on a special page where the rest of the editorial matter
will be found. If an editor wants to make his newspaper
one of the best in the country, he will do very well to pattern
after the successful ones, and to make his news all news. This
is the reason for the existence of an editorial page in the coun
try paper.
There must be some place in the paper where the editor
can have his say and where he may run all of that matter
which is essentially someone's comment. Whether or not
the editor feels that he wants to write editorials he must re
member that there are other editorial features which must
be printed and that he cannot rightly print them anywhere
they happen to fit. It is his duty, therefore, as well as his
privilege to have a page devoted to articles of comment, ideas,
and opinions to supplement his news service. He will not find
it a burden to have an editorial page once he has started to
use it to advantage, and he will not want to do without it when
he has once learned the usefulness of it. The editorial page
will do more than hold the little bit of comment that the editor
wants to run each week: it will be the proper place to print
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many of the features that often adorn the front, back, and
inside pages, making them poorer news pages.
What Should Be Printed on the Editorial Page? Since news
stories should be free from opinion and comment of all sorts,
and should not attempt to convince readers of the rightness or
wrongness of things, all articles which have comment or opin
ion in them must necessarily be run on the editorial page. At
first examination many things that have been run in the news
columns will appear to be pure news, but upon closer examina
tion will be found to be correct material for an opinion page.
The test of what should be run on the editorial page is simply
whether or not it contains comment and opinion.
The first essential of an editorial page and the backbone of
the page is good, live local editorials. When the editor has
done his duty in this direction he may fill his page with other
features. There is little use in having a page set aside every
week for editorial matter, and then filling that page with news
articles and filler material, much of which would be better not
run at all. When the editorial page is made the dumping
ground for propaganda material and free advertising of all
sorts, the effectiveness of the page is lost. If any page is used
it should be a good oite, not a rubbish heap in which to throw
everything that does not fit in any other place.
There can be no set standard for all country papers in regard
to the features that will be placed on the page, because edi
tors differ in their ideas of what constitutes good editorial
features. There are many things, however, that have editorial
characteristics and because of these should be placed on the
editorial page.
Editorials from Exchanges. What is said about exchange
material in the chapter on "Methods of Speeding Up Produc
tion" applies to all editorial matter clipped from exchanges.
Your fellow editors write much that is well worth reprinting
in your paper, and you can take advantage of this fact. When
there is an editorial in the paper of a neighboring editor which
affects the life of your readers, that editorial should be placed
where they can see it. The reason that country editors in
Kansas William Allen White, and the rest of them are
more famous than those in other States is mainly because they
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quote each other. When one of them says a good thing, the
others all pick it up and tell the world about it.
Perhaps the caution is not necessary, but it will Jiurt noth
ing to say again that a page should not be entirely plcFup
material. Don't be a "scissors editor," which is the extreme
opposite of not using any exchange material. It is very easy
to get in the habit of filling the editorial page every week
with Clipped articles, for then you don't have to write any,
but it is not using your editorial page to the greatest ad
vantage.
Other Features for the Editorial Page. Public Opinion.
A column that makes a good feature for the editorial page is
one in which the reading public has a chance to be heard.
Country people like to know what their fellow citizens are
thinking as well as doing, and the public opinion column con
tains short articles by various men and women telling what
they think about a question. The questions discussed in
such ^ a column are various, ranging from bobbed hair to the
election of state and national officials. Very often, when peo
ple know that they will have a chance to get articles published,
they will offer letters for the public opinion column on some
question which they wish discussed. If no such articles are
offered the editor can easily start a discussion by writing what
he thinks about a subject and inviting all readers to participate
in the discussion. There is nothing quite so good for arousing
interest as such a column.
The main dangers in this case are that the articles will not
all be on the subject and that some writers will not be big
enough to avoid sarcasm and personalities. The editor must
exercise rigid supervision of the public opinion column and
have his contributors distinctly understand the conditions gov
erning such contributions. A limit as to the number of words
that any letter may have must be set in order to keep the
"space hog" regulated, but generally these articles will not run
so long that they cannot be published. One method that has
been found useful in getting contributed articles discussing a
popular question is to interview certain men of importance
in the town and get them to give the editor a letter on the
subject. If the question being discussed is one which has a
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technical side, it is a good plan to get the opinion of some
technical men on it.
The public opinion column in a country paper will be most
successful when the subjects discussed in it are of pure local
interest. It is hard to get country people interested in the
new memorial building which has been proposed for Washing
ton, D. C., but it is not hard to get them to voice opinions on
the question of adding a new wing to the local high school.
Rightly used, the public opinion column is one of the editor's
strongest features, for he can put here many articles favoring
or arguing against a cause by persons who have some influence
in the community. If he lias a column at all he should at
tempt to give everyone who writes an intelligent communica
tion a chance to be heard. A column used for the interests of
only a few is not a fair proposition. If he cares to favor some
thing being discussed, it is easy enough for him to get articles
from persons who are favorable to it. A little opposition is a
good thing for any cause and it makes the advocates of that
cause fight harder.
Contributed Articles. The editorial page is the proper place
for all contributed articles that are in the nature of comment
and opinion. All news articles that are handed in to the editor
will of course be printed in the news columns, but every week
he will receive articles from readers who advocate something
or other. These contributed articles are a good thing from
the standpoint of getting interest in local questions. They
differ from the articles in the public opinion column only in
that they are on various questions. The chances are that other
readers will hold different views and will come back with an
article on the opposite side the following week. Sometimes
the articles contributed are merely in the nature of economic
or political discussions that interest local readers but are not
argumentative.
Caution should be taken that all communications pub
lished are signed by the writer. The editor cannot afford to
take chances on getting himself into trouble by publishing
anything which is likely to offend some one.
Church Notes.Church notes appear in various places in
the country newspapers of the United States, but nowhere
are they more appropriate than on the editorial page. In the
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first place, most church notes contain much comment, opinion,
and preaching, and this should be placed on the same page as
other comment and opinion. When the pastor's signature ac
companies the notes so that he is responsible for what is said,
they may be run on other pages, but signed or unsigned, they
have an editorial nature and are well placed on the editorial
page. Another reason that they can well be placed on the
editorial page is that they are usually of a serious and dignified
nature such as editorial material of the best sort. It is placing
church notes to the best advantage to put them next to other
serious and dignified matter rather than in the same columns
with the pool room and amusement park ads.
Paragraphs of Humor. Humor paragraphs are often strewed
around through the paper in all places that they will fit, but
used in this manner they are not so effective as when put in a
separate column by themselves. The column of humor that is
edited by a member of the staff is best placed on the editorial
page. It is not news, and often its purpose is not only to enter
tain but also to convince. While some will argue that the edi
torial page is no place for such flippant articles as humor briefs,
nevertheless the extreme dryness of some editorial pages argues
strongly for a little lighter material. The humor column
serves to enliven a page filled otherwise with serious matter,
and" if the humor is of the right sort nothing is taken from the
more serious articles. Following is an example of a short col
umn conducted each week by a man who writes for a number
of country papers in a far north state.
"BILLY" NOONANISMS
We hate to be considered a doubter,
but it is difficult to believe that Noah
took only one pair of mosquitoes aboard
the ark.
"The Last Word in Homes" is the
heading of an adv. Well, you know who
has the last word in your home.
One of the candidates is telling a story
that is worth repeating. A man at
tempted to drown himself by jumping
into a river. A passer-by jumped in
and brought him ashore. On recover
ing his breath the rescued man blurted,
"I wish you would mind your own
business." "I am," was the quick re
tort. "You've every bit as much right
to live and pay taxes as I have."
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"We have plenty of money," says
Mr. Mellon, secretary of the treasury.
Where do you get that "We" stuff,
Andy?
The championship for foolishness goes
to the autoist who last week tried to
light a cigarette while engaged in one
arm driving.
According to a writer the women of
Abyssinia are the bosses of the home.
What's so peculiar about that?
A writer says that when women short
ened their skirts they added five years to
their lives. Some of them evidently
figure on living forever.
Features from the Files. Under this name we will consider
those paragraphs of news and editorial matter that are taken
from the files of the paper for ten, twenty, thirty, or more
years ago. The reason for including such features on the edi
torial page are perhaps not so strong as those for having other
strictly editorial features on the page, but they are valid
reasons nevertheless. In the first place, much of the matter
in the " year ago" column is editorial. Often the editor
runs something that an editor of several years ago has written
advocating or fighting against something in his day. This
is editorial matter and is interesting reading for present-day
readers because they can see what questions were being dis
cussed when father was a boy.
Another reason that news briefs of " years ago" can go
on this page is that many of them contain editorial comment.
If the editor prints the items as they appeared originally, many
of them will have the editor's afterthought added to them. It
was quite common even ten years ago and is yet for that
matter to add much comment to the news in country papers.
Perhaps the biggest reason that so many editors run the
" years ago" column on the editorial page is that these
items are read mostly by older people, those men and women
who had a part in the life of past days. These are the persons
who will be most interested in reading such briefs for they will
know many of the persons mentioned in the news and will
often find their own names there. These are also the persons
that the editor most wants to read the other features of the
editorial page; that is, the editorials and the discussion ar
ticles. The news items from many years ago serve to attract
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these readers to the editorial page and in this way help the
editor to accomplish something with his editorials. If they
are placed on the editorial page they are where the older people
will be most likely to see them. The younger generation is not
usually given to reading editorials and is also not usually
most interested in the "- years ago" items.
Advice Columns. Columns of material either signed or
unsigned that aim to give advice on various subjects are good
features for the editorial page. If the subject matter of these
advice columns is not such that the editor would want it close
to his editorials, the columns ought to be left out. Many
papers make a practice of running health talks on the editorial
page. Generally this is a plate feature since it would be rather
difficult to get a local doctor to write especially for one country
newspaper. Although formerly considered of little worth,
these health talks have come to be recognized as valuable and
contain much helpful advice for country readers.
Columns of advice to the farmer may be placed on the edi
torial page. Whether this is agricultural school copy or copy
prepared by the local farm reporter, if the article contains
advice on doing things around the farm it has a place with the
other opinion material. It will be argued that this should be
placed on the farm page, which may be true if the paper has
a farm page. Most papers do not have such a page, however,
and then the column is best placed on the editorial page with
the rest of the advice.
Editorial and Comic Cartoons. Various services are now
put out through which the country editor can get a cartoon
each week, the nature of which is determined by himself. He
may either get a comic cartoon which attempts to convey no
message, or he may get a series of cartoons that seek to put
across some point of editorial interest. The latter is perhaps
better for the editorial page if the cartoon is such that the
editor's editorial policy will agree with it. If he cannot get
. such cartoons the comic is better. The question of running
a comic strip on the editorial page rests with the editor and
he may do so or not just as he thinks best. It is argued that
a comic strip is out of place on the editorial page because of the
seriousness of the other matter but the same argument holds
here as in the case of the humor column. Most of the better
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country newspapers run their comic strips on another page
and maintain the dignified appearance of the editorial page.
Advertising on the Editorial Page. The question of
whether or not advertising should be placed on the editorial
page may in part be answered by the fact that 95 per cent of
the country papers in the United States do have advertising
on that page. There is no proof that the best editorial page
is one which has no advertising on it, for there are other ele
ments that enter into the question of make-up. For instance,
it is argued by some of the veteran country editors that you
must have advertising on the editorial page in order to have
pages enough to accommodate the advertising, and also in
order to get readers to notice the editorial page. Both of
these arguments have some weight, for the fact that readers
are coming more and more to use the advertising columns as
their buying guide makes it practical for the editorial page to
carry some advertising. In the small paper the question of
where to put all the advertising sometimes becomes an alarm
ing one as anyone who has attempted making up a small paper
will agree. Utility must sometimes be the editor's watchword
in order that he may save an extra four- or eight-page run
and thereby cut down expenses. When there is no need for
having advertising on the editorial page, it can be made much
neater and more inviting by preserving it as a strictly editorial
department of the paper.
The Position of the Editorial Page. The position in the
paper of the editorial page will always depend to some extent
on the number of pages run. When one page has been decided
on, it should be kept as the editorial page in order that readers
will not become confused or be caused any trouble in finding
the matter that they seek. Most country papers of four pages
use No. 2 as the editorial page, and most of eight pages use No.
4. The reason for using an even-numbered page is simply
that it is convenient and is generally opposite the page con
taining the local items. As these are the most interesting of
all news in the country paper the reader's attention is nat
urally next attracted from them to the editorial page. No. 2
is not used in the eight-page papers because it is generally one
of the pages that is printed in the first run and must necessarily
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be filled with material that is set up a considerable time before
the day of printing.
Patterning after city dailies, some country editors have
started using the last page of their papers for the editorial
page. The last page is a good attention-getting page and this
is the greatest reason for using it. However, the fact that the
country newspaper is read through completely makes it prac
tically unnecessary for the last page to be used as the editorial
page, and most editors have stuck to the old custom of using
an inside page.
Editorial Columns on the Front Page. Although this is
perhaps a question to be considered under front page make-up,
its connection with the editorial page is significant. It has
become quite common in the past five years for country papers
to run a column of editorial briefs on the front page in the left
outside column. This practice was started by the Hearst
papers for whom Arthur Brisbane has written for several
years. His column of "Today" in the city papers is now-
paralleled by "This Week" in the country papers and by other
columns written by local editors.
There is no doubt that this material gets much more atten
tion than does the editorial material run on an inside page,
but the question for the country editor to decide is whether
or not it is necessary to attract so much attention to a column
of editorial material very little of which deals with anything
of local interest. Every inch of space on the front page could
and should be filled with live local matter great in news value.
When an editorial is put on the front page it automatically
forces much live news to another page where it is less likely to
be seen. Before editorial matter, particularly foreign matter,
is played up so strongly on the front page, the editor must be
sure that he has covered the local news field and has given
the important news the display that it deserves. Then if he
has space left on the front page he may use an editorial
column.
The practice of using a front-page editorial column is not
good for the added reason that the front page is a news page
and not a page of comment. Many country papers use the
Brisbane service but run it on the regular editorial page.
The matter of balance on the front page keeps some editors
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from using an editorial column there, because an extra long
column disturbs the nameplate and throws the page off balance
by the dissimilarity of the headlines.
Editorial Poetry. Every so often some one in the country
community writes a poem that has some worth. Perhaps it is
occasioned by some humorous occurrence such as "Casey at
the Bat" was, or perhaps an occasion in the life of the person
makes the poem. Rightly used and not overdone, poetry is a
good feature for the editorial page. An example of a local
historical poem follows:
THE BIGFORK TRAIL
By C. F. KEENB
I was camped on Lake Bemidji
in the fall of ninety -nine,
Barely making a living,
tending a long trap-line,
When a cruiser found the spruce
swamp, just south of Rainey Lake
And every man stampeded to set his
corner stake.
The trail ran over northward,
through spruce and tamarack,
Each man loaded like a pack horse,
his outfit on his back.
We lived on beans and bacon
and sometimes moose meat too,
Which made a fine smullgullion,
otherwise known as stew,
Did you ever tramp through a
blizzard, when it's forty-six below
And camp all night in tepee, all
banked around with snow?
All the weak men perished or
were quickly shoved aside,
By the stronger and the braver,
in the van of that human tide.
Pew men there were among us,
who really understood,
The hardship lying before them
in those miles of silent wood;
Many a man with heart of oak,
who was born and raised in towns,
Failed at the task and met defeat,
packing a hundred pounds,
But this is the law of the northland,
only the strong succeed,
The weaklings fall by the wayside,
crushed by the mad stampede.
At last we came to the Bigfork,
a river fringed with pine,
Which starts in Minnesota and
ends at forty-nine.
It was here we found the spruce
swamps, and here our work began,
We staked a hundred -sixty, for each
and every man.
"We built each" man a cabin, which.
was twelve feet by fourteen,
Chinked with clay and spruce moss,
and thatched with balsam green.
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We settled there on our homesteads,
a bunch of pioneers,
Fighting for our existence, through
those long and lonesome years,
We hunted game in the forest and
trapped the fur on the streams,
Living there on this far frontier,
buoyed up by our dreams,
But fortune never came our way,
we dropped out one by one,
And now the stampede is over and
the pioneering's done.
Poetry that is of a better class is often run on the editorial
page because it is not a news feature. Edgar Guest and other
writers are popular with the readers of country papers as well
as city dailies. Then there is always much splendid poetry in
literature which the editor may give to his readers if he wishes.
The field of literature has hardly been touched, either because
the editor does not wish to take the time to find a good poem,
or because he is not familiar with literature.
When local people and institutions are made the subject of
editorial poetry, the tone of the poetry must be friendly and
sympathetic. No good can be done by running a satirical
poem after a baseball game has been lost, but renewed spirit
will come to the team and backers if the poem has that "we'll
do better next time" tone. Poetry is read to be enjoyed, and
all editorial verse should be packed with enjoyment and good
sense.
The Editorial Column. The column has become a regular
feature of many newspapers today both in the city and country
fields. In the editorial column the country editor tries to meet
his readers in an informal manner and to talk to them as if
he were face to face with them. The column has in it not only
short paragraphs of editorial comment, but also several con
tributed thoughts, some humor, and most of all many items
about persons, places, and things that are well known to read
ers of the paper. Some gems from literature are found in
many of the best editorial columns. The columnist knows
that to put over one serious idea which will start readers think
ing, he must have several items and thoughts that are of great
local interest. If the column is to be interesting and effective
it must be lively. When it becomes dry and uninteresting
it is a dead weight.
Typography on the Editorial Page. To get attention
focused on the editorial page without violating the canons of
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good taste the typography of the editorial page must be pleas
ing and different enough to be interesting. Many editorial
pages are set in the same size and kind of type used in other
reading matter, but a slight change in size will make a better-
looking page and a more readable one. Editorial matter is
thought to be proverbially dry, and typography can do much
to make the page appear inviting to the eye of the reader.
If the paper is using body type of 7- or 8-point the editorials
can well be set in 10- or even 12-point type of the same series.
When the larger sizes of type are used, it is better to set
type in wider columns. For 10-point type the 18-pica column
is very convenient and neat-appearing, and for 12-point type
the double column is used.
Larger type is much easier to read, and is particularly good
for the editorial page because that page is read mostly by
men and women whose eyes are not as good as they were once.
All in all, the use of type on the editorial page somewhat
larger than the body type of the paper, has much to recom
mend it.
Features other than editorials are usually run in regular
body type unless the whole editorial page is set in a size some
what larger. Most papers use common body type for the
opinion items, contributions, and other features that are run
on the editorial page, to distinguish such articles from those
of the editor himself.
The associations called to the mind of the reader by type
forms and combinations have much to do with the opinion
that the reader will form of a paper. For this reason the ty
pography of the editorial page is of great importance. In the
foregoing paragraph we discussed the typography of the edi
torial matter and the other reading matter on the editorial
page. It now is necessary to treat the typography of advertise
ments when they are placed on the editorial page. If the edi
tor wishes to have his page appear dignified so that readers
will be inclined to regard the matter on the page as serious
and worth much attention, the ads on the page must also
present a dignified and neat appearance. If the type for the
editorials were perfectly chosen and a mass of rugged Gothic
or other strong type were thrown on the page in a helter-
skelter advertisement, the effect of the whole page would be
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spoiled. Such types as Caslon and Century Expanded, which
are fairly strong types but which do not have the thickness of
element that others do, are very good for the editorial page.
In general, the watchword is uniformity of tone and if the
tone of the page is preserved, the chances are the type is right.
Bargain advertising is poor material to place on the editorial
page. In selecting the advertisements for this page, the editor
should keep in mind the impression that he wishes to convey
and choose with great care. Bank advertisements, church
and school, and other forms of institutional advertising,
both of public and semipublic institutions, are appropriate for
the editorial page. Lastly, the editor may use part of the
advertising space on the editorial page for his own self-
advertising. .
The Serial Story. Since the serial story ig one of the
features which is not news but entertainment and education,
many editors run this on the editorial page. It cannot be said
to be comment and opinion unless we accept fictitious com
ment and opinion in the story as qualifying for the editorial
page. It is a good feature wherever run, and there is no doubt
that it has some pulling power for the editorial page. On the
other hand, the type of story that is very often run in news
papers is not particularly dignified, serious, convincing, and
perhaps not as interesting as it could be. In such cases the
serial story will detract from the general effectiveness of the
page. If the story is a good one and maintains the tone of
the editorial page, it may well be run there. The same thing
may be said for short stories that are complete in one issue; if
they are the right kind they may be placed on the editorial
page, and if not they should be put where they can do less
harm, or not used at all.
CHAPTER XIV
THE EDITOEIAL IN THE COUNTRY PAPER
Is the Country Editorial Effective? Too much has been
said about the decadence of the editorial in the weekly paper
and too little concerning the good that a well- written editorial
on a local subject can do. If it is true that the press is not
dominated now as it was in the days of Horace Greeley and
others, it is equally true that country-paper editorials are ac
complishing more for the common good every day than could
be accomplished without them. Why do men not write about
the power of editorials in the country press rather than about
the futility of having an editorial page? No doubt it is partly
because the good things that are done too often go unnoticed
and the ineffectual things are brought out into the light. It
cannot be expected that every reader will read and believe all
there is in any paper, and neither should it be expected that
every editorial will accomplish all that its writer expects of it.
Human beings have to be informed, convinced, and stirred to
action before the results of an editorial can be seen, and this is
a slow process often requiring months of constant effort. The
country editor's task is a hard one, more difficult because he is
dealing with persons that have to be convinced slowly. Yet,
if he keeps on in the spirit of friendly helpfulness that should
characterize all of the material in a country paper, he is as sure
of reward as the man who benefits mankind in any other way.
While the editorial is simply one means of bringing a matter
to the notice of the readers of a country newspaper it is never
theless one of the most effective ways in which to do it. In
the editorial the readers meet the editor in a personal manner;
they get to know what the editor is thinking and feeling, and
generally his message is in direct line with some of their
thoughts. It is this personal touch that gives the country
editorial its power. On the street he may be simply one of
the townspeople, but on the editorial page the editor becomes
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a voice for the whole community; and if he has maintained the
right kind of spirit in his past editorials, he talks with the
voice of authority. It is the element of personality that makes
the editorial in the country press read and believed, and it is
this element also that distinguishes the good editorial from
the poor one.
Need of Editorials on Local Subjects. The dry, scientific,
foreign editorial may have some place in newspapers, but it
can never dispute for the place of honor with the local, friendly
sort of message that tells the readers something which affects
them. That is why a local editorial written in the office by
the editor himself will have more weight than a much more
polished article which has no local application. It is easier to
buy a "canned" editorial service than it is to write live edi
torials, but the results cannot be compared. The reader sel
dom gets from a foreign editorial anything that provokes
serious thought, but he will read one telling about something
that needs attention in his own community and will think
about it.
The Scope o the Country Editorial. Questions of national
and state importance are the subjects of editorials in the
great city dailies which have large staffs of men who are paid
to do nothing but write such editorials. They are capable of
treating large subjects intelligently. Country people read
these editorials in city papers quite as much as city people do.
Since such economic and political questions are well handled
in the city press, what is there left for the country editor to
write about? If it is remembered that the reason for the exis
tence of the country paper is that it pays attention to things
of local importance, the question of what to write about will
be answered.
There is another part to the answer, however, and that is
that the editor of the local paper should strive to interpret
the day's news to his people in a manner that will make
them see the significance of every action in the light of their
own experience' and surroundings. The function of editorials
in the country press is, therefore, two-fold: (1) to devote at
tention to things purely local, and (2) to bring to the attention
of the readers those things that are outside the immediate
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community but yet which have a bearing on the life of every
citizen.
Local Matters for Editorial Attention. As local news is the
greatest essential of the country paper, so are local editorials
of the greatest importance to the editorial page. In view
of this fact most of the editor's time should be spent on local
matters, leaving a smaller amount of time to issues that are
taken care of in city papers. It is often true that happenings
far outside of the boundaries of the community will affect
directly the people in that community, and when this is the
case the editor will devote his attention to developing the local
angle of the situation. It would be useless to attempt to make
a list of all of the matters that the editor will take up in his
local editorials, for they are too numerous. Certain classes of
subjects will be of some use in helping the editor choose his
topics so that he will be working on the things most impor
tant. Before any such classification can be made, it is neces
sary to understand the nature of the material that goes to
make up a good editorial for the small paper.
Giving Information. The first purpose of an editorial in
the country paper, as well as in the city paper, is to give the
readers valuable information. Very often this information has
been given before in the news columns, but unless the atten
tion of readers is drawn to it as being significant, they
will pass it by without thinking it over. The kind of informa
tion that can be given in editorials varies all the way from the
notice of an exceptional yield of wheat to a violation of law
that spells calamity for the community. The test of what to
say is that it must be interesting and important for the readers
of the country paper, not that it must be one of the big ques
tions of the world but of the small area in which the paper
circulates.
^ This editorial from the Darien (Conn.) Review is informa
tive as well as convincing. It is on a live local subject and is
part of the editor's community betterment program.
NO BAD NAME FOR DARIEN
Some one has suggested that the
activity of the local police in arresting
speeding motorists will "give the town a
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bad name." We think the alarm is un
warranted. It may give Darien "a bad
name" among those who flout the speed
laws, but conservative drivers will note
with approval the action of the police in
checking the activities of those who have
no respect for the rights of other users
of the highways.
There was a time when Darien had a
deservedly bad name among motorists.
Those were the days of "speed traps,"
roadside courts and the accompaniments
of an era when the slogan was: "Let's
get ours while the getting is good." But
all that has been changed. Arrests are
made by uniformed officers who ride
motorcycles plainly marked as police ma
chines. There are no "speed traps" and
no magistrates camped by the roadsides
to gather in the lucre from the motorist
who perhaps was actually as well as
technically guiltless of wrongdoing.
Those who are arrested are given the
opportunity to be heard in a properly
conducted court, presided over by a
member of the Bar of this and New
York States, and no advantage is taken
of them. If they will drive at an ex
cessive rate of speed through a built-up
section, endangering their own lives and
those of others, they must, if caught
and convicted, pay the penalty. But
they will not be railroaded to jail or
fined without being given an opportu
nity to put in a defense.
It has been said that the widened
Post' Road is a temptation to speed.
That may be the case, but there are
many temptations in this life, and those
who do not wish to be punished must
learn to resist them. The Post Road
was not widened to make a speedway,
but to safeguard those who travel up and
down that much-used highway.
Well behaved motorists have nothing
to fear from the Darien police. They
are only after those who are scoflaws.
More power to them.
The giving of information is a vital part of an editorial, and
nothing that aims to convince or incite to action can properly
be introduced until the reader understands the situation. If
the editor wishes to have a bad rut in the main street fixed, he
must first tell his readers that there is a bad place in the street,
and that it is and has been endangering the lives of all who
drive over it. After he has so informed them he can proceed
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to urge that some action be taken that will make the street a
safe place in which to drive. It would be useless for the editor
to write an oration on the danger of driving while intoxicated
unless his readers had been told of the many deaths and in
juries that have been caused by such driving. This informa
tion paves the way for the message of helpfulness that is to
follow, and must be considered as the first requisite of a good
editorial
Very often there is no need for an elaborate editorial in order
to accomplish what the editor knows should be done. In such
a case the mere information does what argument will not do.
To expand the article may be to defeat the end in^ view. A
tribute paid to the cleanness of the city by an ^outsider is far
more effective in producing a spirit of local pride in the city
if printed alone, than it would be if accompanied by a long
harangue by the editor showing why a citizen should take pride
in his town. A casual remark dropped by a tourist on the un
sanitary condition of the tourist camp in the town is more
powerful than a long article by the editor urging repair of the
camp. Too much said is worse than not enough; the latter
condition can be changed by later editorials but the former is
a condition irreparable when the attitude of the readers has
been wrongly formed.
The Tone of Country Editorials. Constant destruction is
distasteful to most civilized people, and editorials that are
always criticizing some one or something are distasteful to most
country readers. They feel that the good things that are done
should receive mention first of all, and that the things that are
not good can be made good by constructive argument rather
than by destructive criticism. As a consequence, the editorials
in the country press have more weight if they are always
constructive in tone. This does not mean that the editor
must never attempt to right a wrong, but that he must attempt
it in a manner that plainly shows that he is trying to do what
is good.
The keyword to the writing of all good editorials for country
papers is "friendly." If the tone of an editorial is not friendly,
it may be read but it certainly will never get the sympathy of
the reader. The editorial page is no place for the editor to
vent his spleen on some person or thing with which he is not
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in favor, purely for a selfish reason. Personal criticism is the
one thing that such editorials should not contain; personal bat
tles should be fought somewhere else.
To accomplish anything it is first necessary to get the read
ers on the side of the writer, which ought to be the side of
right. If readers are antagonized by the tone of a bitter edi
torial they are lost for all purposes of persuasion.
It is often hard for an editor to see the thing that needs hit
ting without seeing the person that is connected with it. Yet,
it is the evil that must be corrected, and most of the time this
can be done without causing heartaches to any resident of the
community. If the editor can see the vice and strike hard at it
without making the offender appear too low for any aid, he has
done more toward remedying a bad situation than he could by
filling his columns with personal abuse. He should make it
his aim to correct bad practices, not bad men.
Sarcasm is a powerful tool when used wisely, but it can be
wisely used scarcely once in a lifetime. Most young writers
are too anxious to show how clever they can be, and in their
cleverness become sarcastic* Biting words and phrases are
always turned against the writer, and when he thinks it over
he finds that he has suffered more than he has gained. Coun
try readers are especially likely to take offense at sarcastic re
marks in editorials because of the nature of the community.
It is quite a different matter to call John Jones a scoundrel
when he runs a store in your own town than it is when he is
the ambassador to Siam. The country editor is writing about
people with whom he associates every day, and what he says
is on the lips of every person in the town shortly after It is
printed. All the friends of the person spoken of in an un
friendly manner immediately become lasting enemies of the
editor, so it simply does not pay to offend the readers of coun
try papers. If the editor will remember that he is one of the
townspeople and will put himself in the other fellow's place
he will often be led to modify a sentence before he publishes it.
Great good comes not from condemning a person, but from
helping that person to help himself.
The following quotation, taken from an editorial written by
a man who has been in the country newspaper business for
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more than forty years, illustrates the attitude taken by veteran
editors.
(From The Ely Miner, Ely, Minn.)
In our files for the past thirty-one
years are treasured the happenings of the
city. We have cried with you when you
were sad and laughed with you when
you were happy. Many a father, mother,
sister, and brother have been spared a
heartache over something that has hap
pened but has not been mentioned
in the paper. Maybe we were wrong in
suppressing items of news? Maybe not.
In the outside world, Ely enjoys the
reputation of being a fine city. The
local people know of the shortcomings,
so why advertise our faults, if we have
any, to the outside world? The Miner
circulates in every state of the Union
and several foreign countries. The up
building of city institutions and its
people is better news than the short
comings of certain of its inhabitants.
Editorials of Commendation. A little bit of praise is a
powerful thing and when that praise can be used so that much
good results, the editor has done the community a great service
Editorial matter which commends some one is not hard to find:
it is the most usual kind found in the country weekly. That
it is not found on the editorial page only speaks the stronger
for a good, live editorial page, This is the easiest type of edi
torial to write, and it is the kind that is most appreciated by
country readers.
An obituary will often furnish the inspiration for a good
local editorial on the life of the person who has died. Whether
the editor believes in commending people in an editorial after
they are dead or not makes little difference, for he usually does
commend them somewhere in the paper. If a life of service
and kindness is not worth a whole editorial on the page where
the editor should voice his thoughts, then it is certainly not
worth comment in the news story. The death of an old pioneer
should not be left unnoticed in the editorial columns. The
story of heroism of the young person who has sacrificed in at
tempting to help another deserves mention and praise in a
local editorial.
The following editorial commending the bravery of a local
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man who received fatal wounds while doing his duty as an of
ficer of the law, was taken from the Yonkers (N. Y.) Record.
DANIEL J. SHEA,
FIRST MARTYR
"Time heals all wounds." That is
what writers have said time and time
again for many years. The soundness of
the adage can be questioned when the
death of P9lice Lieutenant Daniel J.
Shea is considered. This case, however,
may be the exception that proves the
rule and, therefore, "Time heals all
wounds."
Time had every chance to heal the
wound suffered by the gallant officer as
he blocked a burglary at the home of
one of Yonkers 7 late distinguished citi
zens. Time failed in this case to do
her duty.
Police Lieutenant Shea now rests be
neath a little mound of earth because he
performed a duty that tested the bravery
of the bravest. Unarmed, save for a
weapon that could be used only at close
range, the late lamented police officer
dared do battle with a pair of gun-
toting thugs. The history of the case
tells of his gallant struggle and of the
murderous assault perpetrated upon him
by a brigand at bay. It tells of the
cowardly shooting of the policeman by
a desperado who did not know the
meaning of fair play. ,The story of the
shooting had no place in it to relate that
the police officer cringed when he found
himself at a disadvantage.
The fact that death called upon
Lieutenant Shea nearly 13 years after
the incident cannot belittle the state
ment that the officer went to a martyr's
grave.
Practically the whole city mourns
the death of the valiant police officer.
By his passing his family loses a beloved
husband and father, the city loses a
valued servant and the Police Depart
ment is bereft of a gallant and efficient
officer.
What has happened to Lieutenant
Shea is the lot that daily faces every
man who wears a police uniform.
Many times the fact is lost sight of that
the man behind the brass buttons and
bluecoat is human. It will^be well for
those who are prone to criticise for small
cause that every member of the Police
Department is a potential martyr.
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It should not be necessary for an editor to wait until a man
is dead before he calls everyone's attention to good deeds
well done. The editorial page has a place for the commenda
tion of things that are done by living men and women, and
these stories are all the more important because the person is
yet a living part of the community. Recognition of a local
man's worth by people outside the community should be the
cue to local recognition in the editorial columns.
Whatever the subject of the editorial of commendation, the
tone is always the same, and the editor takes as much pride in
telling of the winning of the prize for good sportsmanship by
the local boys' baseball team as he does in telling about the
election of a local man to the state legislature. How many
times have you read that article about the new baby at So-
and-So's house which ended, "and is wearing the smile
that won't come off"? How many times have you added your
approval to the little squib about the local baseball team
winning a large per cent of its games, or nodded your head
when the editor has written that "our new paving will show
the world that this town is alive and progressing"? Truly, the
subjects for editorials of commendation are as numerous as the
stars, and each of them has the power of the sun in lighting up
the way of some member of your own community. Noticing
the things that are well done and causing people to notice
them is a part of the editor's work and it is the part that brings
him his surest reward. What can be a better tribute to the
veteran editor than the one which appeared in a city paper not
long ago, which said that he had always been "the first to
commend the good in men"?
The following editorial from the Red Bank (N. J.) Register,
is a good example of a commendatory editorial about the work
of local men,
TOWN TALK
It is as unusual as It is refreshing for
a fair to be held without the public
being "dunned" for gifts or beset with
"tag days." If there isn't any genuine
gold medal handy, an imaginary one at
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least should be bestowed by the people
of Red Bank and vicinity to Westside
fire company. That company is holding
a fair without asking anyone to give, but
thankfully receiving such contributions
as are made and buying with their own
money the other things that they need.
The Westside boys seem to be doing
well with their fair. Contributions have
been numerous and the attendance has
been large. The best of success to them!
Everybody ought to try to give the fire
men a helping hand whenever the occa
sion presents, regardless of whether it is
one company or the whole fire depart
ment that needs assistance.
* * *
Aside from that, the Westside firemen
deserve a lot of credit for sparing the
town a house-to-house begging canvass.
The firemen said they thought the town
had been pretty well "shaken down" by
other organizations needing funds and
that they thought it would be well to
give Red Bankers a respite from digging
down into their pockets. The firemen
are dead right about this. Asking folks
for money to support various movements
is always more or less prevalent, but it
has never been more so than this
, Editorials o Correction. Some situations demand more
than a mere informative editorial, and then the tact and skill
of the editor is seriously tried. He must be able to draw the
attention of his readers to something that needs correction,
but he must do this in a way that will get the sympathy of the
readers and ultimately lead them to take some action in the
matter. As one editor expressed it: "It is hard to keep quiet
when something needs hitting/ 7 but it is very necessary that
the editor 'Tlit" in the right way and at the right time. He
must take every precaution that his article is not going to
antagonize readers before the important part of the message
is absorbed and before they have started to think. Even then
he must pursue a policy of trying to do the greatest good to
the greatest number, for he obviously cannot please everyone.
As he writes his article aimed at correcting some practice that
is against the best interests of the community, he will not for
get that no good can come from personal abuse. The way in
which attention can be called to something which disturbs the
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majority of the people without attacking any individuals is
clearly shown in the following short editorial which appeared
in The Ely Miner, Ely, Minnesota.
We wish to call attention to the prac
tice some people have of running their
cars through crowds assembled to listen
to band concerts or any other public
entertainment given on the street. Fri
day night when the band was giving one
of its popular concerts on the James
Drug Store corner, there were half a
dozen cars that passed through the crowd
at least half a dozen times. As an ad
vertising medium, this is poor business.
Some went so far as to stop and start
several times. Some of the cars can
make more noise than fifty bass drums
pounded at one time. Take an inven
tory and see how you appear to the
balance of the people when doing this.
An editorial seeking to correct the practice some persons
have of neglecting to number their houses follows, from the
Forest Hills-Kew Gardens Post, Forest Hills, New York.
Next Door to Mrs. Jones
Where do you live?
Asked that question any number of
Forest Hills residents will answer that
they live on such-and-such a street right
next door to Mrs. Jones, or Brown, or
Higgenbottom, whatever the name may
be.
This is a confusing and indolent
method. People who do not know the
street numbers of their own homes can
readily find them out, and with the
expenditure of twenty cents for numerals
supply themselves with an address. In
the Cord^ Meyer section there are many
houses without numbers. And there are
others with numbers concealed by vines
and shrubbery. Can it be possible that
some people are trying to make a secret
of where they live?
Some editors make it a point never to criticize anything
destructively. Instead of saying, "The sidewalk in front of
the hotel is a menace to public welfare, and if the hotel keeper
doesn't have it fixed he ought to be run out of town/' they
use a simple informative editorial brief, saying, "The sidewalk
m front of the hotel is seriously in need of repair lest some
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one fall through the large hole and be injured." If this fails
to get action the first week, the editor runs another short article
in his paper saying that the hole in the sidewalk has not been
fixed, and that it is becoming more and more dangerous all the
time. If anyone is injured by falling through the hole he will
have that fact in the item. It is true that some of the time
this method will work wonders, but there are times when good
straight talk is necessary to get the thing done. When such
an occasion arrives the editor needs the courage of his convic
tions and should not hesitate to attack with bold and effective
strokes. When all the kindness and sympathetic reasoning
have failed to produce any effect, an editor is justified in using
forceful language and in putting things across with pointed
sentences. Some people have to be jogged good and hard be
fore they will take any notice, and if jogging is needed the
editor is ready to do his share.
Editorials of Interpretation. Part of the editor's task is to
take facts and figures that mean little to the average reader
and interpret them so that they will be understood. Every
taxpayer likes to know just how much certain things are cost
ing him, but often he is at a loss to know how to find out. The
editor can get figures on taxation and with a little labor give
his readers a story that is clear and understandable. Men
and women do not have time to investigate every movement
that is going on, and yet they like to know about them and
to know what effect they will have on the lives of local resi
dents. Whether or not the editor is in favor of the movement
should not deter him from making a study of it and telling the
results of his findings to his public. If he believes that certain
things are not good, he may add his after-thought to the edi
torial.
Interpreting Political and Economic News. Political activ
ities make good subjects for interpretive editorials. The aver
age citizen knows less about his local government than he does
about his national government, and yet he is far more affected
by the former. The editor will know all of the proceedings of
the local authorities and these may be a part of the news. In
addition to the news he can take the facts and figures given in
the council report and interpret them for his readers. They
want to know what the figures mean rather than what they are.
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If it has been found necessary to increase the tax levy, the tax
payers are more interested in knowing where the money is to
be spent than they are in knowing the simple fact of the
increase. If improvements have to be made in the parks an
editorial which interprets the proceedings of the board of park
commissioners will be interesting and valuable to them. The
paper should be a connecting link between the municipal gov
ernment and the public, and most of this connection will come
through the editorial page.
Measures of state and national importance are often not
understood by readers of the country paper and in such cases
it is the editor's duty to interpret and explain them. Ques
tions of law which the average citizen does not understand can
well be explained through editorials. In cases where the edi
tor does not have all of the facts he can consult a man who
is an expert in the matter. Any lawyer will be glad to give
his interpretation of a new measure, and the fact that he' is
a local man will have some weight with local readers.
An editorial which deals with a political custom affecting
every voter in the community follows from the Ada (Okla.)
Weekly News.
THE CONVENTION SYSTEM
According to the Oklahoman, a whole
string of leading lawyers of the state
have declared in emphatic terms their
undying opposition to the primary sys
tem, favoring a return to the old time
convention. In the recent primary some
400,000 voters expressed their preference,
but if the convention system had pre
vailed, one thousand voters would have
named the candidate. Possibly a few
more would have taken part in the
precinct convention, but when boiled
down, it is safe to say that only a few
hundred would have any real voice in
the matter. In gatherings of that sort
most people are more spectators than
participants and a smooth politician or
two can easily manipulate them. It is
the minority that rules.
We recall the campaign of 1904.
About a dozen of us gathered at the
precinct convention and the first men
nominated were elected delegates to the
county convention. When we arrived
there we found a little caucusing going
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on over the chairmanship of the con
vention and our delegation had little
voice in the matter. Our delegation
went to the state convention at San
Antonio a few days later. After being
given our badges and assigned a place
on the floor one of the insiders dropped
around to inform us that Duff was to
be the temporary chairman and J. H.
Kirby the permanent one. We were not
even consulted about our preference.
The only actual Voice we did have was
in a caucus of our congressional district
in which we, dished out our share of pie,
deciding who should be our delegates to
the national convention.
At the national convention at St.
Louis there was considerable parading
and cheering for Hearst and other candi
dates, but no one saw much of the big
men of the party. They were off in
some room deciding on the details and
the maneuvers and when the program
was presented the smaller fry accepted
it without opposition. Kicking would
have done no good and everybody
knew it.
In a primary every vote has equal
weight. Of course candidates pull a lot
of raw stuff and often some very unde
sirable citizens are nominated, but in
either case the result is the same. We
admit that the average in personnel is
below what it was a quarter of a cen
tury ago, but it has not yet been proved
that this is due to the primary. Neither
system is perfect, but it remains to find
a better one.
The Local Angle Editorial. A type of interpretive editorial
that is common in country papers and that has a definite func
tion is the one that aims to explain the news of the day as it
appears in city papers. The war debt of France means little
to the average person, who can hardly comprehend so many
billions of dollars. When this information is put in an edi
torial showing that France owes us about $4.00 for every min
ute of time since the birth of Christ, it becomes more
understandable. When stories talk about the liquor system of
Sweden in speaking of prohibition, the editor can do his read
ers a service by explaining the differences between that system
and ours. If a farm measure is proposed in the House of Rep
resentatives in Washington, the local editor may give the
meaning of the bill to his readers by showing them what effect
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the passage would have on local farming conditions. In every
case the attempt should be not merely to comment on the sub
ject but to show the connection between it and something
local. . . . A ,. ,.
Much caution is necessary in writing all interpretive edi
torials, because the editor must be sure that he himself is cor
rectly informed before he writes anything. If he -has any
doubts, it is best to see an expert If he once carries an edi
torial which is full of errors, he has a long fight ahead of him to
get himself back into his readers' confidence. Help in inter
preting questions arising from the day's news can be secured
from local men in most cases, but where this is not possible
the editor can get in touch with the men who^know, no mat
ter where they happen to be. It pays to be right before you
write. .
The Editorial Policy. Whether or not an editor consciously
determines the policy he will follow in his editorials, he will
always adhere to certain principles and standards. It is well
for the young editor to set down these principles in a form
that will serve as a guide to him in his career. In this code
of ethics will be the methods of treatment that seem fairest to
him and the things for which he will work. The editorial
policy is dependent both on the ethics that the editor adopts
and upon the views that he holds of local, state, and national
matters. His code of ethics may say that he will give every
thing a fair report in his paper, but he may hold the view
that to encourage the building of a new town hall would be
adding an unnecessary burden to the taxpayers. When the
issue came up he would run several news stories on the project
which would be unbiased, but in his editorial columns he would
try to show his readers why he believed the erecting of the
building to be a false step.
The editorial policy in regard to politics is a matter for each
editor to determine, and it is largely a matter of his individual
convictions. His own political party connections should
not make him blind to the good points of the other side, how
ever, and he should be broad enough to give his readers fair
discussions on the various candidates. His own convictions
are a matter to guide him at the polls; his knowledge of the
men running for office should guide him in his editorial writing.
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It is quite possible for a man to be a loyal member of one
party, and yet write fair and intelligent discussions in his edi
torials on the issues of the election. If he is not big enough to
see that there are two sides to every political question, he is not
big enough to run a newspaper. It is not to be expected that
he will be able to favor both parties at once or even one party
some of the time and one another. If he has given his readers
the news of both sides in a fair, impartial manner and has
interpreted this news the best he can in his editorials, he has
done all he can to clarify political issues.
Working for one party is a common practice and one which
is defended by many editors as being the only safe and sane
method. They argue that a country publisher can get adver
tising only from one party, and that he must boost that party
in order to keep the good will of its leaders. The fact that
many papers run advertisements of all parties indicates that a
publisher has a right to all kinds of political advertising if he
gives a fair presentation of the news. In that case, political
propaganda is not accepted unless it has enough news value to
make it worth printing. Other editors do not believe it a wise
policy to work with any party, and think that the editor
should be free from all political entanglements. No doubt
this is the safest method, particularly for the young editor.
He can never hope to run an unbiased newspaper if he is con
stantly worrying about his political rewards, real or imaginary.
The fewer strings he has tied to him, the better he will be able
to tend to his own business in a capable manner. If he feels
that he has a mission in politics he will find the avenues open
for him to enter that field, and when he has had enough of it
he will go back to newspaper work, wiser for the experience.
Those who can run a paper which gives all of the news in a
fair and impartial manner, and still hold to their own political
views, will have no trouble.
Part of the editorial policy of every paper is that which
deals with the exposing of violations of the law. City papers
carry police news in which one can read the names of all of
fenders against the law, and some country papers have tried
to follow the example of the larger dailies. The conditions
are not the same, however, as the editor soon finds out. It is
better to leave out the editorial flaying a citizen for being in-
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toxicated than it is to print it and cause his family and friends
much embarrassment. When a man is so placed in the public
eye he has a hard time regaining the respect of his fellow
townsmen. Is such a bit of comment worth making many
people unhappy for, or is it better purposely to avoid publish
ing the misdeeds of local people when the account of them
would add more misery to all concerned? While there are
some who think that all news is fit to print and that all viola
tions of the law should receive editorial mention, there are
more who adhere to the policy of looking earnestly and a long
time at the facts before doing anything likely to cause grief.
Every editor must decide this for himself, but^ the experience
of the most successful men in country journalism points to a
policy of toleration and patience in handling such matters.
The editorial policy of the country paper, therefore, resolves
itself into saying and doing what will do the most good. It is
not a function of the country newspaper to do what the law
will take cognizance of but rather to bring before the public
those things of which the law does not take cognizance. When
correction is needed, let the editor be the first to help bring it
about; but when patience and friendly counsel are all that are
needed, let him be the first to offer them.
Planning an Editorial Campaign. Planning editorial cam
paigns has been well treated in several books on the subject
and the points mentioned here are only those which have par
ticularly to do with the country paper. Reliance can never be
placed entirely on the editorial page in attempting to accom
plish some reform or bring about some improvement. The
editorial is simply one part of the well-organized campaign,
although it is an important part. All editorials should grow
out of the news, and so the first essential of any campaign is
good news service covering the thing that is to be done. After
the T readers have all been informed, or rather given a chance
to become well informed on the issue, the editor may start
his editorials and other features.
A somewhat slow and easy start is always advisable, because
it gives the readers a chance to begin thinking about the issue
without making them take sides. Once a man has resolved
to be on one side he will not change, even though he is con
vinced that he is wrong. If he is confronted with all the facts
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before he makes up his mind he will be easier to persuade. The
first few editorials will therefore be of the informative and in
terpretive types, and those of convincing and persuasive prop
erties will be held until later. The clinching arguments will
come at the psychological time, which is usually very late in
the campaign, when all the facts are before the public. This
is the time for the editor to get in his best licks where they will
do the most good.
The small town offers unusual opportunity for the editor
to do work of a personal nature in putting over any campaign.
He is known to all of the prominent citizens, and if he has es
tablished the right relations with them they will listen to him.
He has a good chance to have meetings of the town council, or
other bodies that have a voice in municipal matters, called
and to be heard before them. His arguments will usually be
powerful before his fellow citizens, and generally he will have
several influential men to talk on his side. Talks before the
audience at theaters have been used by some editors in getting
across a message of reform. All methods of getting the propo
sition before the public eye are open to the small-town editor
when he knows his town well. Theater advertising, poster and
billboard advertising, advertising in the columns of the paper,
concerts, and what not, have been used when these methods
would help accomplish the purpose.
Last but not least, the editor can show by his own example
that he believes in the thing he advocates. If he argues
against careless driving and has appeared before the council
urging the adoption of a more rigid ordinance, let him not
forget himself and drive through the streets at fifty miles an
hour. In the small town the editor is watched quite as much
as he is read.
CHAPTER XV
NEWS EDITING AND DISPLAY
COPT-EEADING
Importance o Copy-reading. Too much emphasis is now
laid upon the fact that the editor of a country paper writes
most of the copy and therefore does not need to read it for
possible mistakes. He is just as prone to error as any other
writer, and if he does not correct his own mistakes they will
never be corrected. There is more need for reading copy
in the country shop than in the city newspaper office, because
the numerous duties of the country editor make it impossible
for him to devote enough time to the writing of news to , make
each story good. He must sit down and dash off something so
that the operator can have copy, and he must expect to be
interrupted many times by persons who visit the office. He
never can depend upon having a certain amount of time in
which to do his writing but must do it as he finds a minute
that is not full. All of these conditions make it essential that
he look over what he has written and see that it is right. No
one else has the time nor the authority to correct the editor's
errors.
Another reason that copy-reading is important for the coun
try shop is that it saves much time and money. After the type
is set, no corrections should be made but those that are mis
takes of composition. Every time a correction must be made
in the content of the article it means resetting part or all of
the type, and this kills time and costs money. Reading the
copy over before it goes to the compositor is the only safe
method and is by far the most inexpensive.
Many mistakes are made by the compositor because he does
not understand what the writer meant and his interpretation
may differ widely from that of the writer. If he thinks that
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a certain word should be capitalized and the editor has merely
struck over a letter when he wrote the copy, there is a mistake
to correct in the proof. All directions for the composition of
every piece of copy should be marked on the copy, and all
marks that are necessary for the reading of copy should be put
in before the compositor starts setting.
Importance of Legible Copy. The linotype operator in a
country newspaper office gets more kinds of copy in a week
that he has keys on the keyboard. There is some that is neatly
typewritten, which is easily set up. Then there is some that
is written in longhand on any scrap of paper that happened
to be handy. There are long sheets and short sheets, scraps,
colored paper and white, stiff paper and some that will not stay
on the paper holder without being reinforced. Some of the
copy that he gets must be deciphered before he can set it. It
is no wonder that he doesn't set up as much type in a day as
the editor thinks he should; it is mostly the editor's fault.
Copy should be typewritten on standard-size copy paper,
just as it is in the best city daily office in the land. Copy
paper is the cheapest thing in the world when the advantages
of using it are taken into consideration, and the country shop
always has some old print stock that can be used. If there is
no old stock it is better to use some good paper than to trust
to pieces picked up here and there which will cause trouble
somewhere. What is saved by using poor copy paper is lost a
thousand times in time and money through the delays it
causes.
Typewritten copy is the only thing that should be used for
all stories written in the office. If the editor cannot run a
typewriter he can learn to run one, and for his own sake
should do so. Not every correspondent can have a typewriter,
so this material must be handled in longliand. If there is time
enough, all of this longhand correspondence may be written
over on the typewriter. The time it takes to write it over will
be more than made up by the time that the operator can save
in setting up good copy. When the typewriter cannot be used
the directions for handling longhand copy, given in the chap
ter on "Country Correspondence," if followed, will make copy
readable. This will make the copy understandable, but the
composition will still be much slower than from typewritten
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sheets. There is some longhand copy that looks as if some
thing had walked across the page and left a series of muddy
tracks. When the handwriting is particularly bad, no attempt
to fix it up with marks will make it so that it can be under
stood; it needs rewriting on a typewriter. Generally the edi
tor's handwriting is as bad as anyone's, and if he tries to fix
up the copy with pen and ink he only makes it worse. Legible
copy is the first essential for speedy composition.
Copy-reading Errors. The subject of copy-reading is a
study in itself, and the student is advised to learn the essen
tials of it before studying country journalism. The kinds of
errors that a copy-reader should look for are the same in coun
try journalism as in city journalism. They are listed below
according to the classification made by Professor Grant Milnor
Hyde of the Department of Journalism, University of Wiscon
sin, in his book on Newspaper Editing}-
A. Errors of Expression
1. Grammatical errors
2. Errors in spelling
3. Errors in punctuation
B. Typographical Style
1. Capitals
2. Figures
3. Punctuation
4. Quotation marks
5. Addresses and titles
C. Inaccuracies
1. Misstatement of fact
2. Misrepresentation of fact through omission of qualifying facts
3. Inaccuracy in the use of names (in spelling, initials, or identification)
4. Carelessness in the handling and copying of figures
5. Mistakes in dates
D. News Values
1. Inadequate lead
2. Failure to begin with the feature of the story
3. Inadequate summary of long story in the lead
4. Failure to follow up and explain the feature
5. Failure to prepare for cutting in make-up
6. Lack of paragraph unity
7. Comment and opinion
E. Diction and Style
1. Use of long sentences and complicated grammar
2. Use of unemphatic sentence beginnings
1 See Newspaper Editing by G. M. Hyde. (D. Appleton & Co.)
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3. Failure to use short, compact paragraphs
4. Use of unemphatic paragraph beginnings
5. Wordiness
6. Use of general rather than concrete, definite words
7. Failure to use bright, vivid expression, especially in verbs
8. Lack of dignity of expression, especially in the use of nicknames,
undignified reference, and slang
F. Libelous Statements
System in Handling Copy. Unless a system is worked out
for the handling of copy in the country shop, some stories will
go to press without reading and others will be lost entirely.
The desk of the average country -editor is piled high with all
sorts of letters and papers, and a piece of copy placed in that
mass of material is likely to be left unnoticed. Some editors
have a special desk for their typewriter and news hooks so that
they will not get their copy mixed up with their correspon
dence and business records. When this is possible, it is a good
plan. There are some advantages in having the typewriter on
the same desk at which the editor takes care of his mail and
business, but it may be placed close to this desk and yet not
afford so much opportunity for getting things mislaid.
As copy comes in through the mail it can be placed upon the
proper hook. Generally there is one for time copy which is
used only as needed, and another for correspondence which
must be printed in the next issue. The local news is placed on
another hook until it is read and sent out to the compositor.
There is only one hook on a typesetting machine, and when
material is placed on that hook it should be ready for
composition.
If the copy is copy-read as it comes in and before it is placed
on the hook it will be ready when it is needed. If it is put on
the hook and not looked at again until the operator is calling
for copy, it will probably never be copy-read, or else will re
ceive a hurried glance and no thorough correction. Make it a
point to copy-read all material as soon as it is received. When
the mail has all been opened, the copy that came in deserves
attention before any new work is attempted.
Local news stories and personal items may be copy-read as
soon as they are written. This copy is the kind that cajmot
be held over, and must be set up as soon as possible. It should,
therefore, be ready for the compositor as soon after writing as
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possible, and this is the case only when it is copy-read imme
diately after writing. Time copy is not so important and may
be read when the editor has time to do it or when some of it
is needed, but it is far more convenient to read time copy
before it is needed so that it will be ready. The writers of
this copy may have been good writers, but there will be some
material in there which the editor does not want in his paper
and which will be taken out or changed before the type is
printed.
Detecting Free Advertising. Much of the material that is
received through the mail and which is supposed to be news
is, in reality, free advertising for the concern that sends it to
the publisher. Large concerns have paid publicity men, whose
job it is to write stories about their business and to see' that
these are published in country papers. As long as they suc
ceed in getting copy printed as news, which is really advertis
ing, they will never use paid advertising space. Most of the
concerns which put out such material never took an inch of
advertising in any country paper, and never will.
The news value that such material has is often ,great so
great, in fact, that many editors think it very important mat
ter. Instead of copy-reading the stories to see what is news
and what is not, they run it as it comes to them, full of adver
tising. This is poor policy for many reasons, but mainly be
cause the editor is giving away what he should be selling. If
these companies get free space once they will expect always
to get it and the possibility of any income from that source
is lost. Furthermore, the editor is not playing fair with his
readers; they expect to read fair news when they look in the
news columns and if they find there a mass of propaganda
talking up some certain product, they are disappointed and
tricked. From every standpoint the use of such material is
bad practice.
The stories in this "mail copy" are very well written, and it
is spmetimes^hard for the country editor to tell what part of
of it is ^legitimate news and what part is pure advertising.
Separating the gold from the dross is a difficult job. The
interests of the community will guide him somewhat in choos
ing what part of this material he will use. If the community
is a fanning community the residents will be interested in
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farming developments wherever they have occurred. If farm
copy is received which talks of a business concern that sells a
certain farm implement, the name of the concern can often be
cut out in several places without hurting the news value of
the copy. If the story keeps calling to the attention of the
readers the fact that this wonderful feat was performed by a
"Cuttem" binder, it is not giving any new information but is
simply using repetition for the sake of advertising. The adver
tising may be cut out and the news value of the copy not
impaired.
Many stories are written so that the first one or two para
graphs are straight news and the free advertising is put in the
later paragraphs. When such is the case the first paragraphs,
which are free of comment and advertising, can be run and
the rest of the story discarded. An example of free advertising
for an automobile concern is given below:-
BIG CROWDS TO
LOCAL GARAGE
New Overland Car Now on Display
In Local Automobile Firm's
Showroom
More than 600 persons have visited
the Murphy-Anderson garage in the last
36 hours to see the new Overland
Whippet which arrived in Two Harbors
last week. Gust Anderson, manager of
the garage, drove the car up from the
Twin Cities and declared that in spite
of the fact that the engine was new
and tight, he averaged better than 28
miles to the gallon of gasoline.
Shown here for the first time last
week, this European type of car, adapted
to American driving conditions, has
elicited an interest which is already
reaching record-breaking heights.
If the consensus of opinion of many
of the leading transportation engineers is
to be taken as a criterion, a new type
of motor has come into existence in
the Whippet and one which marks one
of the epoch-making achievements of the
entire automobile industry.
Some of the outstanding points of the
machine are its capacity for slow driving,
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quick acceleration, hill climbing, quick
stopping, riding comfort, easily handled
in traffic and the mileage it achieves on
a small amount of gasoline.
Large concerns often give their local agents publicity copy
which they are instructed to get printed in the local paper.
There is never any appropriation made for this, and the editor
is expected to run the story for its news value. Free adver
tising is free advertising whether it comes through the mail or
from a local man who represents a distant company, and if the
material is printed it should be paid for by the one who inserts
it. Whenever the story has local news value enough to make
it interesting and informative for country readers, it may be
run as a regular news story. For instance, the local dealer for
"Swifter" automobiles comes in with about three-fourths of a
column on the new model car that is now on the market. Very
little of this story is news, only that part of it in fact which
tells what are the characteristics of the new car. The many
exaggerated statements, the comment, the puffs and compli
ments, are not news but advertising. Now suppose that this
same agent received an order for several of these cars from
some local man. This fact would be good news for local read
ers and the story of the sale, with all the details, would be
printed. The second story would be good advertising for the
company but it would have news value enough to be printed
as a news story.
There is no infallible way of telling whether a certain story
should or should not be run. The editor will learn to be on
the watch for the man who is constantly trying to get himself
and his business affairs before the public, and he will make this
man understand distinctly that his paper has no room for free
advertising. Unless the stories have something of vital con
cern locally, they are not good news for the country paper.
Repetition of a company name, frequent compliments, exag
gerated statements, subtle references to the worth of a certain
thing ^ statements that are so all-inclusive as to be ridiculous,
repetition of a certain fact or facts in connection with the sub
ject of the news, are all to be found in the free advertising
story.
Making the Most o Publicity Stuff. When these stories
which are full of free advertising are copy-read the editor will
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find much in them that he could use if it were separated from
the propaganda. If directions accompanying the story say
that it must be run as it is, he will have nothing to do but
throw it in the waste-paper basket. If any or all of it may be
used, he may be able to strike out the faulty statements and
the material that would have no interest for local readers,
leaving only that which is good local news.
Perhaps the worst pest that the country editor has is the
local man who is constantly handing in items about his busi
ness ^ which are pure advertising. He expects to have them
published because he is a local man and because the parties
mentioned live in the community. The only safe method of
dealing with such persons is to have them understand from
the start that the editor is the judge of what goes into his
paper. If the contributor is willing to let the editor copy-
read his items and leave out the advertising, all right; if he
isn't willing to have that done, the paper will get along very
well without his items. When a man makes a small purchase
such as thousands of other people make, it is not news. Items
reading something like, "John Brown bought a new battery
for his radio the first of the week from Bunn's Electrical Shop/'
belong in the column for reader advertising.
PROOFREADING
Importance o Proofreading. Proofreading in most shops
is done because it has to be done and not because anyone gets
any pleasure out of doing it. It is a job that seems to accom
plish nothing and so it is done half-heartedly and poorly.
There are few issues of country papers that are not full
of mistakes that should have been corrected in the proof, and
these mistakes loom up large and noticeable in the printed
paper. Those who understand the printing and publishing
business know that there are thousands of chances for error
in one galley of type, but the public expects the paper to be
printed without mistakes just the same, and as far as this is
possible the editor tries to do it.
In most small shops there is no regular proofreader, and
anybody and everybody who has a minute to spare reads proof.
Since the editor is responsible for all that goes into his paper,
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he should see that the proofreading is well done. The best
method is, of course, to read the proof himself; but this cannot
always be done, for he has too many other things to look after.
If he cannot do it, he can at least see that it is done properly
by some other member of the force. Proofreading is slow work
and demands close attention to the matter being read. When
a galley has to go to the make-up man in a hurry it is often
not proofread at all, or only glanced over hurriedly. Every
line of type that goes into the paper should be corrected if the
editor expects to put out a paper worth reading. One typo
graphical mistake in a man's name will make an enemy -of that
man and will lessen the readers' respect for the paper.
Reading proof by reading the lines of type is a poor method
that never should be used. Very often when the man who
sets up the type is also the proofreader, he does not stop
to pull a proof but simply looks over the lines of type and tries
to detect the errors in it, It is difficult to read type accurately,
even for the man who makes a practice of it, and he can sel
dom get all of the mistakes in this way. It takes only a min
ute to pull a proof, and this can be read much faster and more
accurately than slugs or type. The average reader makes no
allowance and he notices a typographical error quicker than an
error of content.
Reading Proof with Copy. Every piece of news and adver
tising that goes into the city paper is read with copy, but this
is not true of country shops. The editor feels that he does not
need to use copy for much of the news material because he
wrote it himself and knows what he wants in it. This is to a
great extent true, but the many mistakes that appear every
week bear witness to the fact that copy should have been used.
Generally the only proofreading that is done with copy is on
the legal advertising matter; the news is read in galley proof
without copy. It is not necessary to use copy on all proof in
the country shops when the material is unimportant and the
editor or whoever reads the proof is familiar with the matter
it contains. The local news items are of great enough impor
tance to be read with copy for there will always be some names
in them with which the editor is not familiar.
All material that is sent in from some outside source should
be read with copy, for otherwise the editor never knows when
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a mistake is made. The country correspondence is often con
sidered of little importance but unless the proofreader knows
all of the people mentioned in the correspondence, he should
use the copy to verify names and facts. All contributed news
stories should be read with copy because the matter will be
news to the editor as well as to the readers. Contributors
watch their own material closely and if it is full of mistakes
they will not send in any more.
Material taken from exchanges and other publications
should be proofread with copy because the material is un
familiar. If a fellow editor has been quoted wrongly, he will
have little respect for you, and if you get the news facts wrong
you are putting the paper from which you took the news ^in
an unfair light. It pays to be accurate, and clipped material
of all kinds should be just as accurate as that written in the
office. Stories and editorials which are secured from some
service must be watched closely because the thought may not
run as the editor thinks it should.
Country editors as well as their readers will welcome the
day when every office can have a proofreader who makes that
his particular business. The matter of making both ends
meet is now too great to suggest that another member be added
to the staff for this work, but it is to be hoped that every office
will have a proofreader in the future. Until this dream is a
reality the editor will have to take as much pains as he can to
see that his paper is free from errors that should be corrected
in the proof.
Little Mistakes with Unpleasant Consequences. The in
convenience that can be caused a man when a country news
paper carries a misstatement about him is shown by the
following story. This is an error that could have been detected
before the paper went to press. Poor copy-reading and proof
reading in country shops are responsible for many such errors.
MOORE VICTIM OF ERROR
A recent typographical error made it
appear that the Republican congressional
committee sent nine thousand dollars in
the recent campaign to Representative
C. Ellis Moore, to assist him in his fight
for reelection in the Fifteenth Ohio Dis-
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trict. The amount which, it appeared,
had been given, was considerably more
than the law permits a congressman to
receive or expend in his campaign and
newspapers of opposite political faith,
seeing a chance to poke the congress
man a bit, have been freely commenting
on the "enormous fund" used to keep
him on the political map.
The sportive inclinations of these par
tisan journals will receive a setback,
however, when it becomes known that
the original report, crediting Mr. Moore
with receiving nine thousand dollars,
added one extra and superfluous cipher
to the contributions sent to him by the
congressional committee and that the
actual amount was nine hundred dollars,
instead of nine thousand dollars. He re
ceived five hundred dollars from the
committee in October and four hun
dred dollars in November. The only
other contribution to his candidacy was
one of fifty dollars sent to him by Claud
Miller of Toledo last October. His ex
penditures were $1,153.21. Mr. Moore
adds to his statement the following:
"No promise or pledge has been made
by me or by anyone for me with my
knowledge and consent."
The Use of Standard Proof Marks. The proofreader's
marks that are used in city newspaper offices and in book
publishing plants can be secured with little difficulty. Very
often these are not the marks used in the country office. The
editor has a system all his own, and he gets along very well
with it when the man who makes corrections understands his
method. If standard proof marks are used, much difficulty will
be avoided and much time saved. These marks are as simple
to use as any homemade set and have the advantage of being
understood by any good printer or journalist. Every time
the operator has to run into the front office to ask the editor
what some mark means, the paper is put that much behind
schedule.
Drawing lines from the correction to the place in the proof
that the correction is to be made is quite a common method in
reading galley proof, and is not necessarily poor form. When
the proof is not too full of mistakes the eye of the operator
can more readily be drawn to the mistakes by the use of lines.
When the proof is very dirty the lines running, all over the
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page serve only to mix up the operator. Proof of news stories
will seldom be so full of errors that the line system cannot be
used. When it is, the operator either does not -know his busi
ness or is working with a machine that needs repairing. Either
condition can be remedied and clean proof cannot be expected
until things are working in good order.
Catching Copy Errors in Proofreading. When the editor is
familiar with the matter in a certain proof , he can often detect
and remedy many errors that are not strictly typographical
errors. No one advocates that this method of copy-reading'
should be used, however, for it is a very clumsy method.
What the editor should watch in proofreading is that
he gets all of the errors that he has missed before. It would be
far better if these errors were corrected in the copy before the
type was set. Every time it is necessary to cross out whole
lines and change the thought, the paragraph and sometimes
the whole article must be set over. If the errors had been cor
rected in the copy as they should have been, all of this reset
time would have been saved. But if they aren't all corrected
in the copy, they should by all means not escape the eye of the
proofreader. In city shops the proofreader is not allowed to
change anything in the copy, but this is because he does not
write the copy and so knows nothing of what should be in it.
If some one who has not written the story reads the proof in
the country shop, he should consult the editor before making
changes in the content of the material.
How Many Proofs Are Needed? Except on job work, many
country shops never use a revise. This is partly due to the
fact that the staff is too busy to take the time necessary to
read a second proof, and partly due to the fact that most
editors imagine they are better proofreaders than they actually
are. Many mistakes are made when the operator sets up cor
rections and these will appear in the printed sheet just as the
original errors do if they are not corrected. One method to
avoid these mistakes is to proof and read the corrections by
themselves before the slugs are put into the galleys of type.
This does not take as long as reading a second proof and will
do away with many of the mistakes. Hand-set material must
be read a second time if all of the errors are to be caught, be
cause proofing of corrections by themselves is impossible.
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Use of the Page Proof. If no revise of the type is read be
fore it is put into the forms, the only hope of catching the last
mistakes is to read thoroughly the page proof, to check up on
everything before the paper goes to press. There are enough
chances for slips in the country shop to make the page proof
of great importance. If possible, the editor may go over the
entire paper before it is published. If there is not time for
this, there must be time to go over the pages of greatest im
portance; that is, the pages with the local news and advertising
on them. The plate material and the ready-prints will, of
course, not require reading, but they may be inspected to see
that they are printing in their right order and are printing up
well.
After the forms are put on the press, an impression can be
taken and this read over before the papers are run. Many mis
takes that did not appear in the other proofs will loom up
when the entire paper is looked over. Some of the most evi
dent errors are not noticed until the association of one story
with another makes them stand out plainly. If there are five
men working in the office each of them is likely to catch errors
before the paper is printed. It can do no harm to give the
back-shop workers a chance to look over the paper, and very
often they will catch errors that the editorial workers fail to
see.
HEADLINES
History of the Country Newspaper Headline. The history
of the headline in country newspapers for the past fifty years
follows closely the history of headlines in the city dailies.
When it was a common practice for the country weekly to ape
the city daily in matters of news presentation and content, the
headlines were small in all papers. An examination of the
files of a weekly for the year 1888 or any time in the last dec
ade of the nineteenth century will show that most of the heads
were single line, single deck heads set in small type, 6, 8, or 10
point. ^ Very rarely was a head set in type larger than pica,
and this size was reserved for stories of the utmost importance.
Heads started to become larger with the American Civil War,
but country newspapers followed somewhat behind the city
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papers in increasing the size of type used and the number of
decks in the head. The files of country papers for the first
decade of the twentieth century show larger headlines and
more stories given heads. Although most country papers to
day do not use heads as large or as black as the city dailies,
nevertheless, there are some country weeklies that have begun
to look like metropolitan productions, so large and noticeable
are the headlines that they use. The weekly paper that is
published by a concern which also publishes a daily is a very
pronounced example of the use of heads far too large for a
country paper. Some misguided country editors take pride in
showing that their publications mimic the appearance of the
city papers.
Purpose of the Headline. Headlines are large in city
papers, due to the necessity of getting the eye of the man who
buys his paper on the street, since street sales are one of the
most important sources of revenue for the city papers. They
must make the paper appear to be full of news in order to at
tract the reader. The advent of what are today known as
"sensational" newspapers has made the more conservative ones
modify their style of make-up and begin to use larger heads to
combat competition. There are still some large daily papers
that stick to conservative heads, but they are few.
Competition in street sales does not affect the country paper
because there are no street sales in most country towns. The
editor does not have to put out a paper that will sell on the
street because most of his circulation revenue comes in from
subscriptions. The very few individual copies that are sold are
sold in the office, and the money from these would hardly buy
a pound of good ink each year. For this reason the country
paper does not need as large headlines as does the city daily.
There is no necessity for the display which will attract the
passer-by.
What the Headline Should Do. There are other purposes
for headlines besides that of attracting customers who buy
their papers on the street, and many of these purposes are the
same for the country paper as for the city paper. These pur
poses will be considered separately and, wherever possible,
their application to the country newspaper will be indicated.
1. The Headline Summarizes the Story. The headline tells
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the reader at a glance just what the story is about, so that if it
concerns something in which he is not interested he may pass
by that story and go on to something that he wants to read.
This purpose is the same in country papers as in others, with
the exception that here most of the stories will be read because
of the reader's interest in the community at large. Making
the headline a summary of the story is mainly for the purpose
of enabling the country reader to find what he is most in
terested in first. After he has read that, he will most likely go
on and read the rest of the paper. Nevertheless, the head
which summarizes the story is best, for it classifies news so
that the persons for whom it was intended are most likely to
see and read it.
2. The Headline Advertises the Story. This is not so
necessary in a country paper, because the readers generally
have enough time to read all of it without choosing between
two or more stories. The headlines in the country paper should
advertise the story only enough to make sure that everyone
who is looking for that story will be able to find it. There is
no need for the headline to shout out the news in an attempt to
attract readers away from other stories.
3. The Headline Measures the Importance of the Story.
When a reader has only a few minutes in which to read his
newspaper, he must choose his stories. Usually he wants to
read only the more important ones, taking the chance that he
will not miss much by omitting the others. It would be wrong
to say that the country paper should not follow city practice
to some extent in this matter. Stories are of a certain impor
tance, depending upon the amount and content of the news,
and to put a large head on an unimportant story would be
wasting spa<;e. The biggest piece of news that has happened
since the paper was last published will always carry the biggest
head, and the other stories will have headlines in proportion.
There is this difference in the country paper, however, that the
story of most local importance should be given the biggest
head. The death of the United States Secretary of State is not
the biggest story of the week for the country paper if the
town's most prominent citizen has died that week. The story
of the local citizen's death will be read with more interest than
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the news about the national figure, and so deserves the most
display.
Qualities of the Good Headline
The Headline Presents the Newsy Feature. In every story
there will be something of greater news value than anything
else in the story. That thing is the "feature" of the story and
is the thing in which most of the readers will be particularly
interested. In determining the feature of a story for a country
newspaper the interests and activities of the members of the
community must be kept in mind. The headline on a story
in a country paper should give the feature of the story just as
the city papers do, but the headline writer must be sure that
the thing of greatest local interest is made the feature rather
than the most unusual circumstance.
The Headline Should Be Easy to Grasp. This holds true in
country journalism as well as city journalism, not because the
readers must get the story in a hurry but because they should
be given a clear understanding of what the story contains.
Country readers have time to read, but no time to devote to
figuring out the meaning of incomplete, incorrect headlines.
The Headline Should Be Complete in Itself. Country news
paper headlines are often lacking in some of the important
facts; facts that are to be learned only by reading the entire
story. The reason that we have headlines is that they assist
the stories. If they are not complete they are taking unfair
advantage of the reader, tricking him into wasting time figur
ing them out or in reading the story to solve the headline.
There Should Be a Verb in Each Deck. Since the purpose
of having a verb in each deck of the headline is partly to make
the headline and the news more interesting, the headline in
the country paper is also better if each deck has a verb. Verbs
expressing action are best, since every person's interest is
greater in current events. The verb in the passive voice tends
to make th6 reader think that the news is stale.
Definite Statements Are Best. The good headline, no matter
in what paper it appears, tells the reader something definite
about the news. It tells him exactly what is in the news story,
not what general subject the story embraces. Vague, general
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statements are space wasters and make a headline look like a
label. The most definite statement that the headline can
make in the country paper is the identity of the person who is
the subject of the news. For this reason many headlines in
country papers have the name of the local person figuring in
the story in the top deck. Since names are the greatest atten
tion-getters in the small community, the headline which
features a name is most valuable.
Determining the Size of Headline Type. It will be seen from
the foregoing discussion that many of the reasons for having
large headlines are lacking in country journalism. There is
no necessity for having type so large that it glares at the reader.
Sensationalism, that is, trying to make news appear bigger
than it is, has no place in the good country paper so the type
chosen for headlines should not be exceptionally large. The
headline type should be large enough to enable the reader to
distinguish readily between stories and to tell which stories
are of the most local importance. If this is possible, the type
used is large enough.
For all purposes in country journalism, a 24-point headline
is large enough for the important stories of the average week.
There may be times when a size or two larger is needed, but
these times are as rare as the proverbial hen's teeth. If the
town should burn completely to the ground the country paper
might devote most of the front page to headlines, as some city
papers do, but the chances are there would be no newspaper
then. Very rarely is a size of type larger than 24-point
needed for the first deck of the main heads. Other headlines
should be in proportion to the largest one. Stories of second
ary importance may have a top deck set in 18-point, or 14-
point type; and smaller stories will probably have a one-deck
head in pica type or ordinary linotype 7 or 8 point.
Determining the Number of Decks. Some city papers use
a method of displaying the headline down the column rather
thaa across the page. This gives the paper a more conserva
tive appearance. In the country paper only a few lower decks
wiU be needed. There should be enough decks so that the
whole story may be summarized in them; usually two lower
decks will be sufficient. Stories of secondary importance may
well get a head with only two decks in it, the top deck and one
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smaller one. The form that these decks shall take will largely
be determined by the editor's preference, but the size type
that they are set in should be somewhat smaller than that of
the top deck. If the first deck is set in 24-point type the lower
decks may be set respectively in 18 and 12 point or even
smaller. Some of the best country papers never use anything
but bold-face linotype capitals for the lower decks.
The type sizes should be so chosen that there will be a
gradual shading into the reading matter. If a bold type is
used for the top deck, a larger-sized type will be needed in the
lower decks than if a lighter type were used for the first one.
The attempt should be to take the eye of the reader from one
size of type to the next, and so on until he comes to the read
ing matter, without letting him realize that a change of any
consequence in type size has been made. If large type is
placed next to reading matter, it gives the page the appear
ance of being set in very small body type, and it appears hard
to read.
Making a Headline Schedule. Every shop has some kind
of headline schedule for convenience and to secure a uniform
front page. In making such a schedule the editor keeps in
mind the uses that he will have for various kinds of heads.
There is no necessity for the country shop to use many different
kinds of heads, since the types of news stories that are pre
sented each week will remain about the same. Once in a while
there will be some feature material that will require a head
different from the ordinary news stories, but a special head can
be set for this. Three sizes of heads will take care of most of
the regular news stories. If there is one 24-point head for the
main stories, one 14-point head for those of secondary impor
tance, and one regular linotype capitals head for the small
stories, these will be found sufficient. The average country
editor has not time in which to write heads of many different
counts, and it will reduce his work a great deal if he has a very
simple head schedule.
Write Out the Copy. When a good schedule is once made,
it should be held to every week thereafter until the schedule
is changed. If there is a certain count for a headline the count
should never be less or more, even if the editor is sometimes
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able to go out to the case and squeeze in an extra letter or two.
The matter of writing headlines not only affects the con
venience of the editor but it also affects the appearance of the
front page. If the writer had not seen so many headlines made
up at the case, he would perhaps have more faith in the coun
try editor as a headline writer. Too little attention is given to
the preparation of the copy for headlines before they are set.
In those shops where the editor himself sets most of the mam
heads he usually does not write' them at all but simply sets
them up as he thinks of them. If one word won't fit, another
one will, with the result that when the head is set it is a hodge
podge of words with little sense to it and often with a violated
word count. These violations show up plainly on the printed
page but look less offensive in type. If the editor intends to
set his headlines he will find it much better to write copy for
them before he sets them, since in this way he can get the
right number of units in the line and preserve the thought. It
is much easier to think out a headline on paper than in type;
the erasures are not so hard to make.
Guessing at the Count. The matter of guessing at the num
ber of units that will go in a line is another thing that should
be barred from the country office. There are editors who do
not try to set their own headlines, but who write them by
guess. If they are good guessers, the heads may come to the
right count; if they can't guess so well the heads show it.
These editors do not count out the letters because they feel
that they haven't time to do it. When a man has had many
years 7 experience estimating types and type measurements he
can come close with a guess, but guesses are not reliable.
The little time that it takes to write the few lines needed for a
country paper should be an argument for getting them all
perfect. As it is, they are often much worse than those written
by men who have hundreds to write in one working day.
When to Write Headlines. The biggest reason for the poor
headlines found today in many country papers is that this
end of the publishing, that is, the headline display, is left
until the last. No one thinks of setting up any of the larger
heads until the make-up man is ready for them, and then they
must come with a rush. Many of them could just as weU
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have been written and set up much earlier, and then they
would have been ready when they were needed.
If the editor would make a practice of writing the head for
a story when he sends the copy out to the compositor, he
would have better results. He is not nearly so rushed when
he gets the copy in, as he is on press day when the heads are
needed. Headlines on all of the stories of minor importance
should also go out with the copy. This is easily done, for only
a few words are necessary on such stories. As the stories come
in to a city newspaper office, the man who is in charge of make
up decides where he will put them and what heads they will
carry. The country editor can do this much easier than the
city man, for there is little possibility of a news break in the
country so large that it would make it necessary to change the
make-up of the page. In no case, perhaps, would he ever have
to change the size of a headline.
Headline Content. Without stopping to consider the
essentials of headline writing, which the student should be
familiar with before studying country journalism., we may dis
cuss the content of the headline in the community paper.
Since the country paper is not sold on the street, there is no
need for the headlines to be sensational, in the sense that they
play up the startling facts in the news. Yet they should have
in them the facts of the story which are most likely to be in
teresting to local readers. If the story has been well written
the head will follow the story, having in the first deck the
thing of most importance and in the following decks the less
important facts.
Since names are so important in the country paper, the head
lines will very often have the name of some person in the com
munity as a prominent part of them. Nothing pleases a
country reader so much as to see his name in the headlines
and his friends are also pleased with the recognition given
him. Whenever a name can be made a part of the head it is
well to make it so. One of the things that should not be in the
head is a vague statement which means nothing to the local
reader. If John Jones has done something worth telling about,
it is much more striking to say in the headline that "John
Jones Makes Discovery/' than it is to say "Well-known Man
Makes Discovery." The well-known man might refer to some
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person entirely outside the community, and the interest of the
local readers would then be much less.
It is sometimes impossible to put the name of a local man
in the headline because of the length of the name. When the
name will not fit in the headline, the next best feature to play
up is the local importance of the story. Various methods are
used in playing up the local feature in the headline, but per
haps the most used word is "local. 33 When this word is used
in only a few heads it is good, but it is one of the most over
worked words in the headlines of country papers. It is short
and says what is wanted but there are other ways of saying
the same thing.
The name of the town in which the paper is located, or of
the community from which the news comes, can often be profit
ably used in the headlines. It means more to say, "Lewisville
Wins from Balsam in Tuesday's Game" to the residents of
those towns than it does to say, "Tuesday's Baseball Game
Won By Locals." This use of the town name is also subject to
abuse, and it is not seldom that one can find it used in a dozen
or more headlines in one issue of a country paper. The best
features become the least effective if overworked. The follow
ing example shows the use of a man's name and the" name of
the town in the same deck. It is a very good headline for a
country paper.
HANGARTNER OPENS NEW
BEAVER BAY GARAGE
The name of local business places can well be featured in the
headline when the story concerns some institution. It means
little to readers of the country paper to see that "Grocery Busi
ness Sells at $5,000.00" but they are immediately interested
if they read that "Johnson Sells Grocery for $5,000.00." The
point of perfection is the making of every head so full of local
interest that readers will be drawn to the story and will under
stand what the story is about.
Making Heads Complete. If the headline does not give the
reader an understandable fact it has not served its purpose,
and many of the headlines found in country papers do not
State a fact completely. It is not enough to give two or three
words which have something to do with the story, but these
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words must be so tied together that their relation to one
another can be readily grasped. In the example given below,
no one would know what was meant unless he went on and read
part of the story. A better head for that story would have been
one which told of the withdrawal of candidates which left two
tickets with two candidates each. Not all of this can be put in
the top deck, but whatever is used there should express a com
plete thought,
Two Tickets
School Race
Another method of making headlines when words do not
count out right, is the one of leaving out the subject of
the news. When such a head is met the reader knows that
something will take place sometime but he does not know what
it is. In the example given below no one would know what the
event was going to be that was to take place in Hibbing,
August 16. Omitting the subject of the news and starting the
head with the verb leads to unclear and incomplete headlines.
The subject of the news is the most important part of the
headline and it should come before the verb.
WILL BE HELD IN
HIBBING AUGUST 16
Proper Punctuation of Headlines. When more than one
thought is included in a single deck, there must be proper
punctuation between the two thoughts. Any mark which
makes a break in a thought will not do, as the accompanying
example will show. If a semicolon is not used between the
two thoughts the reader gets the impression that there is a
mistake in grammar. Always separate two complete thoughts
that appear in the same deck and you will avoid the appear
ance of incorrect grammatical statements.
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Italy Having Much
Rain, Less Sunny
It is many years since the practice of using a mark of
punctuation at the end of a headline went out of date, but
some editors still persist in doing it. The period is for use
where a complete stop is wanted, and this is not the case at the
end of any deck of a headline. The purpose of the headline is
to lead the reader into the reading matter and so a complete
pause is not wanted. No punctuation at the end of the first
deck is the best policy and there is really no necessity for any
at the end of any deck. The punctuation at the end adds
nothing to the appearance of the head,
Old Settlers
Next Thursday.
It is quite a common practice with some editors to split
words at the end of a line in the headline and to run the rest
of the word in the second line. This is a poor practice, because
it makes the reader jump from one line to the other to get the
thought of the headline, and because it destroys the unity of
each line. It is never necessary to split words in headlines if
a little time is taken to try different combinations. The ap
pearance of the headline is spoiled by one divided word and the
thought is broken. These two reasons should be sufficient for
avoiding the division of words in headlines.
CITY WATER WORKS OP
ERATES AT LOWER COST
The dash is made to serve a multitude of purposes in the
headlines in country papers and it is often used where some
other mark belongs. The dash may be used to separate two
independent thoughts only when one is an unexpected change
from the other. If the thoughts have a close connection the
semicolon is the proper mark to use.
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JOHNSON HAS GOOD HUNTING
BUT IT IS FOR LOST GUN
This is a right use of the dash.
ELECTION WILL BE CONTESTED-
NEW VOTE COUNT
This is the wrong use of the dash.
If the editor will remember the rules for the uses of marks
of punctuation and will apply them in writing headlines, he
will have no difficulty. The rules are the same for headlines
as for text matter with very few exceptions. In general, the
fewer marks of punctuation it is necessary to use in headlines,
the better they will be.
CHAPTER XVI
MAKE-UP
The Purpose o Make-up. An orderly arrangement is more
pleasing to the human eye than is a mass of elements with
no design. We like to see the lawn trimmed or the yard
clea