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THE EXPOSITION OF IDEAS 



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Exposition of Ideas 

BY 
BAXTER HATHAWAY 

Department of English, Cornell University 

AND 

JOHN MOORE 

Department of English, Montana State University 




D. C. HEATH AND COMPANY 
Boston 



Copyright, 1948, by D. C. Heath and Company 

No part of the material covered by this 
copyright may be reproduced in any form 
without written permission of the pub 
lisher. 

Printed in the United States of America 




BOSTON CHICAGO NEW YORK 
ATLANTA DALLAS SAN FRANCISCO LONDON 



Those who have handled sciences have been either 
men of experiment or men of dogmas. The men of 
experiment are like the ant; they only collect and 
use: the reasoners resemble spiders, who make cob 
webs out of their own substance. But the bee takes 
a middle course; it gathers its material from the flow 
ers of the garden and of the field, but transforms 
and digests it by a power of its own. Not unlike this 
is the true business of philosophy; for it neither relies 
solely or chiefly on the powers of the mind, nor does 
it take the matter which it gathers from natural his 
tory and mechanical experiments and lay it up in the 
memory whole, as it finds it; but lays it up in the un 
derstanding altered and digested. 

From FRANCIS BACON S Novum Organum 



Preface 



FROM all sides we are deluged with words: in newspaper articles, 
radio broadcasts, lectures, and advertisements, on billboards, in maga 
zines, in the speech of friends. Words swarm upon us and fuse with our 
thoughts as they have done in no other period in history. The tech 
niques of influencing men by suggestion and by appeals to the emotions 
of fear, pride, and ambition and to mass prejudices have never been 
more fully employed than they are today. In the midst of this flood of 
words the college student tries to keep his attention fixed on the words 
that communicate honest thought, on the words by which sincere men 
and women attempt to bring order out of chaos and make valid com 
ments about the shifting patterns of experience. At least this is what 
the ideal college student should attempt to do. His main object is learn 
ing, and learning necessarily involves contact with reputable thoughts of 
others as they are expressed in words. He does not want his instructors 
to fool him by the use of the irrational methods of the advertiser or the 
propaganda devices of the demagogue. His interest, for the present at 
least, is in words that make sense, that is, words that can be tied down to 
the realities they name. 

In turn, the college student must learn how to use words so that 
they will make sense, for he must express his thoughts about his own 
experiences so that others will understand what he means. His natural 
instinct is to imitate the models that he finds on all sides, to cast his 
thought into the molds established by his predecessors and contem 
poraries. His problem is to choose the form best suited to the ideas he 
wants to express. 



x PREFACE 

Within the limits of honest thought there are many kinds of prose, 
and one of the major requirements in learning to write well is to 
understand the nature of thought and the prose structures that cor 
respond to the several kinds of thinking. The intention of a writer 
should determine the structure of his writing. Knowledge of sound 
structure is one of the goals toward which every writer should aim. 

If we are concerned with sense, we are not concerned with words 
as detached entities, nor with writing problems as devices for decorat 
ing the substance of thought. The thought itself is of prime importance 
and must determine the words used to communicate it adequately. 
Clever writing which divorces words from thought may temporarily 
tickle the reader s fancy, but the writer who falls into the habit of 
striving for temporary effect is going in the wrong direction if he 
wishes to learn to write well. 

It is with the expression of ideas which he has thought out for him 
self that the writer faces the full problem of organization. When he 
duplicates the ideas of another writer, his attention is really upon the 
words rather than upon the ideas they represent and much of his 
work has thus been done for him by another. Even in writing an 
account of a process or a description of a mechanism, the student 
writer is relying upon the thought and the organization of another on 
the inventor of the process or mechanism. For this reason this book 
avoids discussion of the kinds of prose that go by the names of 
"Exposition of a Process" or "Exposition of a Mechanism" and limits 
itself to original perception and thought. 

The student is asked to work with the expression and substantiation 
of ideas, and, more particularly, with the kind of ideas that can be 
substantiated. He must not generalize wildly nor use words without 
regard for the communicable meanings that the words should carry. 
The standards used in this book for distinguishing among different 
kinds of thinking and writing are: (1) the subjectivity or objectivity 
of data, and (2) the level of particularity or generality, that is, con- 
creteness or abstractness, of statements based upon data. By analyzing 
writing in terms of these standards, the student can come to know 
better what ideas are and what makes them sound or unsound. 

An understanding of the differences between levels of generalization 
is important. A generalization is a statement not about individuals 
doing particular things about classes of things. The statement "My 



PREFACE xi 

brother fed his dogs at six o clock this evening" is a relatively concrete 
statement. It concerns one person doing a certain thing at a certain 
time. The statement "He is fond of pets" is more general since it is 
not limited to one particular time or to one particular pet. The state 
ment "Human beings like pets" is far more general. The best test for 
the level of generalization of any statement is to ask how many particu 
lar actions or perceptions it comprises. Before accepting a general state 
ment, we might ask ourselves how many separate experiences the writer 
must have had to be absolutely certain of the truth of his conclusion. 

When a writer wishes to make statements which the reader can 
recognize as valid, he must speak from concrete experiences that have 
a bearing upon the point he is making. As readers, we cannot be sure 
that we are dealing with sense unless we can translate the general 
izations made by the writer into concrete experiences and test them 
against these experiences. If a writer tells us that "Politicians are a heart 
less race of men with no care for the well-being of society" we test the 
truth of his statement by referring it to politicians we know. We must 
beware of the generalization based upon little or no concrete ex 
perience. 

It is true that by inference we can often make certain sound general 
izations about large classes of things upon the basis of experience of 
a few instances only. When a biologist has explored the anatomy of a 
few lobsters and has found similar intestinal tracts in all of them, we 
do not ask that he examine the intestinal tracts of all lobsters before 
drawing conclusions about them. Here, however, the reasoning in 
volved is partly deductive; that is, it is based upon larger general 
izations already accepted. We already believe that lobsters are animals 
and that other animals have intestinal tracts. Likewise, we have learned 
to rely up to a point on the constancy of nature. The experiences out 
of which we generalize are, indeed, often not our own; provided that 
we have faith in the reliability of the statements others make about 
their experiences, we accept them and can base our conclusions upon 
them as well as upon our own experiences. 

But something is seriously wrong when adult minds readily accept 
generalizations that come fully manufactured in the form of whisper 
ings from the world about us, when they trust these generalizations 
without inquiring into the experiences upon which they are based or 
into the trustworthiness of the person doing the generalizing. Often 



xii PREFACE 

no set of concrete experiences does in reality exist, and usually the 
identity of the original generalizer is unknown. The generalization is 
merely a "fairyland" statement, a part of a world of words that does 
not correspond to real life experiences. Writing that contains unchecked 
generalizations of this kind is likely to be bad writing or worse, 
dangerous writing. It is not aimed at truth. By its aid, groups in society 
continue to believe what they want to believe, ignoring the real world. 

Many well-intentioned writers commit errors of faulty generalization 
by writing on subjects about which common sense should tell them 
that they lack a sufficient fund of concrete experiences. The high school 
orator who knows just what the Security Council of the UN should do 
about, say, Yugoslavia is usually making this error. Without having 
been to Yugoslavia, without knowing much about the economic con 
ditions there or how they affect individual men, women, and children, 
without knowing who controls those economic conditions, without un 
derstanding the emotions of the people or the causes of those emotions, 
often without even reading carefully firsthand accounts of reporters 
on the scene, he somehow feels capable of solving Yugoslavia s prob 
lems by applying a few elementary principles of political science 
learned in the classroom. Perhaps he will find, if he attempts to get to 
the bottom of politics in his own home town, that human problems are 
a little more complex than he thinks. 

Arriving at sound generalizations is, then, a difficult task. Neverthe 
less, sound ideas are manufactured by human beings essentially like 
ourselves. How do they do it? First, they turn to matters about which 
they know something, matters with which they have had experience. Or, 
if they have not had a sufficent number of experiences relating to their 
idea, they devise means of having more. Finally, they use methods of 
observation and thought which should carry a reasonable degree of 
reliability. The average student is capable of following these procedures. 

This book does not, for the most part, contain the sort of essay, 
full of high level generalizations, which is often put before the college 
student of composition as a model to imitate. True, most of us should 
read, during the years when we are coming to maturity, the writings 
of men of wide learning and deep insight, of men who face the difficult 
questions of the significance of life on our planet. But if we hope to 
arrive at that same point of experience and wisdom, we should serve 
an apprenticeship nearer the base of the pyramid. The selections in 



PREFACE xiii 

this book often deal with important problems, but they deal with them 
in such a way that the student can see the methods by which the 
authors have reached their conclusions. The student is thus able to un 
derstand how to embark upon investigations that will enable him to 
duplicate the models set before him. 

The arrangement of the articles in the text is from the concrete to the 
abstract. The first section is concenied with the reporting of concrete 
fact. The student will learn how good writers have a knack of seeing 
particulars accurately and clearly. The second section presents essays 
that arrive informally at generalizations. The writers of these essays per 
ceive related facts and draw conclusions without embarking upon the ex 
tensive research necessary for scientific accuracy. The third section 
presents secondary source papers typical of the kind of "library paper" 
that has proved valuable in college courses. The articles in the fourth sec 
tion are based on primary source materials. These articles differ from 
those in the second section in that the approach to the material is more 
formal. The fifth section, comprised of case histories, once more shows 
clearly the relationship between the concrete and the abstract, the gen 
eral and the specific, in the creation of ideas. The sixth section gives 
examples of numerous kinds of organization useful in the orderly presen 
tation of ideas. The seventh section, consisting of "appreciations," illus 
trates human value judgments, subjective and often personal. The eighth 
section, refutations, has obvious utility in providing models for student 
writing. The final section, which gives an example of high level general 
ization, offers the only form which the student cannot expect to dupli 
cate well. 

BAXTER HATHAWAY 
JOHN MOORE 



Contents 



PREFACE IX 

Section 1. OBSERVING AND REPORTING 1 

WILLIAM FAULKNER: Wagon on the Road 6 
FREDERIC PROKOSCH: After the Crack-Up 7 
JOHN DOS PASSOS: The Camera Eye (14) 13 
GEORGE SESSIONS PERRY: Night in the Woods 14 
FRANCIS PARKMAN: The Buffalo 17 

HENRY DAVID THOREAU: Ice 22 

FAIRFAX DOWNEY: The Last Days of St. Pierre 24 
Sample Theme Subjects 34 

Section 2. INFORMAL INDUCTIONS 35 

LOUIS ADAMIC: Thirty Million New Americans 38 
LOVELL THOMPSON: How Serious Are the Comics 56 
MRS. TROLLOPE: An Englishwoman in Ohio 63 
BERGEN EVANS: I Pick Em Up 70 
w. E. BURGHARDT DU BOIS: The Negro Scientist 76 
BRUCE BLIVEN: Westchester Women 87 
PHILIP RAHV: Paleface and Redskin 91 
Sample Theme Subjects 96 

Section 3. SECONDARY SOURCE PAPERS 99 

A. GRENFELL PRICE: The Causes of Failure of White 

Man in the Tropics 107 
FRANK LUTHER MOTT: Popular Sports in America, 

1850-1865 125 
Sample Theme Subjects 129 



xvi CONTENTS 

Section 4. PRIMARY SOURCE PAPERS 131 

GEORGE GALLUP AND SAUL FORBES RAE: Thirty Dollars 

a Week 135 
EDWARD JENNER: An Inquiry into the Causes and Effects 

of the Variolae Vaccinae, Known by the Name 

of the Cow Pox 143 
MADGE M. MCKINNEY: Training for Citizenship in the 

Secondary Schools of New Yor/c City 149 
BERTRAM B. FOWLER: Sharecroppers of the Sea 162 
PAUL FATOUT: Yarning in the Eighteen Fifties 171 
Sample Theme Subjects 184 

Section 5. CASE HISTORIES 187 

KIMBALL YOUNG: Projection of Parental Ambitions 

upon Children 191 
JOHN BARTLOW MARTIN: The Ring and the Conscience 194 

EDWARD A. STRECKER AND FRANCIS T. CHAMBERS, JR. : * 

Psychology of Alcoholism 206 
RUTH L. PORTERFIELD: Women Available 213 
KIMBALL YOUNG: A Case Study of Intracommunity 

Conflict 222 

WELLSON WHITMAN: Three Southern Towns 226 
DONALD DAVIDSON: Brother Jonathan and Cousin 

Roderick 242 
Sample Theme Subjects 252 

Section 6. TRADITIONAL PATTERNS IN 

ORGANIZATION 253 

FIRST PATTERN: Enumeration 

WILLIAM ERNEST HOCKING: The Changing World 258 
HOMER CROY: You Wouldn t Know the Old Farm Now 261 
JAMES BRYCE: The Results Democratic Government 
Has Given 272 

SECOND PATTERN: Classification 

CHARLES TODD AND ROBERT SONKIN: Ballads of the OklBS 276 

JAMES HARVEY ROBINSON: On Various Kinds of Thinking 284 



CONTENTS xvii 

THIRD PATTERN: Component Parts 
TACITUS: Germania 298 

BRUCE WINTON KNIGHT: How to Round Up Cannon 
Fodder 312 

FOURTH PATTERN: Cause 

JAMES FENIMORE COOPER: Rumor 326 
JULIAN HUXLEY: Mice and Men 327 

FIFTH PATTERN: Concession 

CLIFFORD BARRETT: Mans Moral Responsibility 342 
RALPH WALDO EMERSON: The American Scholar 348 

SIXTH PATTERN: Analogy 

DOROTHY GRAFLY: Art Criticism for Human Beings 352 
WILSON FOLLETT: Are Children Vegetables? 354 
HAMILTON BASSO: Italian Notebook: 1938 356 
PAUL PARKER: The Iconography of Advertising Art 359 

SEVENTH PATTERN: Comparison 

JAMES TRUSLOW ADAMS: Jefferson and Hamilton Today 367 
ALDOUS HUXLEY: America and Europe 378 
Sample Theme Subjects 387 

Section 7. APPRECIATIONS 389 

JAMES HUNEKER: Night and Its Melancholy Mysteries: 

The Nocturnes of Chopin 393 
STEPHEN VINCENT BENET: The "Conquistador" of 

Archibald MacLeish 395 
E. B. WHITE: Once More to the Lake 399 
Sample Theme Subjects 406 

Section 8. REFUTATIONS 409 

THOMAS PAINE: The French Revolution 412 
THEODORE DREISER: If Man Is Free, So Is All Matter 423 
MAX WYLIE: Washboard Weepers 431 
Sample Theme Subjects 439 

Section 9. HIGH LEVEL GENERALIZATIONS 441 

EDWARD M. MILLER: A Westerner Views the U.S.A. 444 



THE EXPOSITION OF IDEAS 



1. OBSERVING AND REPORTING 



Observing and Reporting 



A LTIIOUGH it is possible to reason logically upon false assump- 
jLjL tions, the ideas and conclusions which are the result of a thought 
process are only as sound as the facts which set that process in motion. 
If the facts are not to be trusted, the conclusions drawn from them are 
not to be trusted. Therefore, the first principle of sound thinking and 
good writing is accuracy of observation. 

Unfortunately, habit is one of the most dangerous enemies of ac 
curacy of observation, for we often look at things without seeing them 
at all. When we look at familiar objects what we see is determined 
largely by what we expect to see. It is true that if these commonplace 
things have undergone a sudden change since we last saw them, we 
are jarred out of our mental lethargy and look at them afresh. If the 
change is gradual, however, we fail to notice it. 

Sometimes we accept a formula for an object or situation without 
troubling to check it against our own original observation. For example, 
the society around us tells us that a girl coming home from a dance is 
always "starry-eyed." For years students have written in themes that 
girls coming home from dances are starry-eyed. Perhaps we can legiti 
mately ask if they really are. Are all of them starry-eyed? Is the ob 
server really looking at them as individuals or is he merely taking for 
granted that they look like that because the stereotype tells him so? 

A writer whose work contains such stereotypes may be called de 
ductive minded. He applies to each situation a neat set of reactions 
and ready-made formulas without bothering to check them against 
the actual facts. The inductive minded writer, on the other hand, is 



4 THE EXPOSITION OF IDEAS 

constantly aware of the changeability of the world around him. He 
knows that no two objects or situations, however familiar, are exactly 
alike and that no set of principles can be applied, untested, truthfully 
more than once. He looks directly at the situation he wishes to de 
scribe or evaluate and reports what he sees as accurately as he can. 
The deductive minded person has the simpler time of it but he is not 
the better writer. 

Stereotyped writing is not good writing. The writer bores his reader 
because he does not tell him anything new. He is not looking at the 
world through his own eyes and consequently has little to say that is 
worth the saying. Stereotyped thinking, upon which such writing is 
based, is more dangerous. In this kind of thinking the writer arrives 
at judgments that are based upon stereotypes upon preconceived no 
tions of what, for example, any individual in a class is like. The rich 
woman is arrogant and selfish; the Negro janitor is lazy, light-hearted, 
and irrepressibly fond of singing; the old professor is lovable but absent- 
minded and pedantic. Judgments about individuals based upon such 
stereotypes can cause trouble because often they are not based upon 
reality. We do not see at all what is in front of us. Instead we see, as 
if in a mirror, the picture that is already in our minds. Too often we 
do not know how the picture got into our minds in the first place, but 
when we analyze our reactions we realize that we did not consciously 
put it there. Instead, we absorbed it from the people around us; they 
absorbed it from others; and on and on the chain goes. 

Writing and thinking both come hard when the writer cannot see 
for himself. Observing is his first step toward having ideas of his own 
that are worth communicating. The nonobserver usually tries to hide 
the poverty of his observing by writing about something with which 
he can have had few contacts; he frequently denies the possibility 
of originality of thought and expression because he supposes that every 
body else borrows ideas just as he does. He forgets that men make ideas 
by looking at the world around them and telling what they see there. 

The observer who looks for himself soon finds plenty of ideas in his 
head. Because he has built up for himself a mass of material of his own 
about which he can say something, he no longer belongs to the class 
of student writers who have nothing to say. Most of us need to orient 
ourselves by looking at the world around us. It is the dulling force of 
habit that leads us to believe that the world is brighter and more ex- 



OBSERVING AND REPORTING 5 

citing somewhere else. Brightness and excitement are made by the 
minds of men who see meaning in what they touch upon. 

All reporting, even of simple sense perceptions, reflects somewhat 
the individual doing the perceiving. It is impossible to be entirely ob 
jective. For purposes of discussion, however, we may say that a writer 
is being objective when he describes sensations as they are immediately 
apparent to his five senses. As soon as he makes a judgment or describes 
the train of thought started in his own mind by these sensations his 
reporting becomes subjective. 

The selections that follow present the kind of writing in which few 
judgments are made. The writers are coming to few conclusions; prin 
cipally they are looking at the world and telling what they see there. 
They are presenting scenes, attempting to communicate to the reader 
concrete experiences. As will be noted elsewhere in this book, one of 
the best ways to create good writing of any kind is to keep vivid this 
sense of concrete experience. The student should begin here observing 
how the writers of these passages obtain their effects. 

The observations presented in this section fall into two main cate 
gories. The first, of which the selections from Faulkner, Prokosch, Dos 
Passos, and to a lesser extent Perry are examples, exhibits considerable 
subjectivity. The things and events described are seen through the eyes 
of a particular observer and colored by his state of mind. The second 
kind the group comprised by Parkman, Thoreau, and Fairfax Downey 
represents greater objectivity. These writers distinguish more clearly 
what is outside themselves from what is inside. 

Paradoxically, objective reporting is the more sophisticated or arti 
ficial of the two kinds of observation. The child divides a perception 
into its subjective and objective parts less readily than an adult does. 
For many special purposes the growing child gradually learns to make 
the distinction. The adult writer must sometimes relearn the art of 
infusing objective reporting with the subjective at those times when 
it is desirable to do so. It must be remembered, however, that in many 
kinds of writing newspaper writing, for instance any admixture of 
the subjective is undesirable. 



THE EXPOSITION OF IDEAS 



WAGON ON THE ROAD* 

By William Faulkner 

1. THE WAGON mounts the hill toward her. She passed it about a 
mile back down the road. It was standing beside the road, the 
mules asleep in the traces and their heads pointed in the direction 
in which she walked. She saw it and she saw the two men squatting 
beside a barn beyond the fence. She looked at the wagon and the 
men once: a single glance all-embracing, swift, innocent and pro 
found. She did not stop; very likely the men beyond the fence had 
not seen her even look at the wagon or at them. Neither did she 
look back. She went on out of sight, walking slowly, the shoes un 
laced about her ankles, until she reached the top of the hill a mile 
beyond. Then she sat down on the ditchbank, with her feet in the 
shallow ditch, and removed the shoes. After a while she began to 
hear the wagon. She heard it for some time. Then it came into sight, 
mounting the hill. 

2. The sharp and brittle crack and clatter of its weathered and un- 
greased wood and metal is slow and terrific: a series of dry slug 
gish reports carrying for a half mile across the hot still pinewiney 
silence of the August afternoon. Though the mules plod in a steady 
and unflagging hypnosis, the vehicle does riot seem to progress. It 
seems to hang suspended in the middle distance forever and for 
ever, so infinitesimal is its progress, like a shabby bead upon the 
mild red string of road. So much is this so that in the watching of 
it the eye loses it as sight and sense drowsily merge and blend, like 
the road itself, with all the peaceful and monotonous changes be 
tween darkness and day, like already measured thread being re 
wound onto a spool. So that at last, as though out of some trivial 
and unimportant region beyond even distance, the sound of it 
seems to come slow and terrific and without meaning, as though 
it were a ghost traveling a half mile ahead of its own shape. 

* From Light in August (1932), by William Faulkner. Reprinted by courtesy 
of Random House, Inc. 



OBSERVING AND REPORTING 7 

ANALYSIS 

1. At first reading this selection may well appear to be the simple, perceptive re 
porting of a static scene. Is it really that? , t , , , A< , 

a. What is the difference between the scene reported in the first paragraph^ and 
that in the second? t ^ 

b. From whose point of view is the whole scene seen and heard and felt? 

2. Consider particularly the use of verbs in this selection. 

a. What do you notice about the time element as indicated by the verb tenses? 
What are the significant changes and why are they made? 

b. Has the problem of time any bearing on the larger one of perception, of re 
porting what one sees? 

3. a. Is the girl who appears in the first paragraph still the central person in the 
second? 

b. Is she experiencing the thoughts and sensations recorded in the second par 
agraph? 

4. Are there any evidences of subjective reporting in this selection? If so, what 
are they? 

5. Is there any point to this selection, any generalization which the reporting leads 
up to? Or is the writer presenting a scene for its own sake? 

6. a. What words or phrases in this passage have precise, literal applications? 
What ones do not? 

b. List the figures of speech in this passage. 

c. Which of the following phrases are used literally? Which are used figura 
tively? 

"The sharp and brittle crack and clatter" 

"Dry sluggish reports" 

"Hot still pinewiney silence" 

"Mules plod in a steady and unflagging hypnosis" 

"Like a shabby bead upon the mild red string of road" 

"Like already measured thread being rewound onto a spool" 

"As though it were a ghost traveling a half mile ahead of its own shape" 

d. Do figurative expressions aid in making the reporting more subjective? 

e. If some other person were looking at this scene might his perceptions be dif 
ferent from the ones given here? 

/. How important are figures of speech in the communication of the exact "feel 
ing" of a perception? 



THE CRACK-UP* 
By Frederic Prokosch 

i. THE CLOUDS parted, the sun appeared once more. In less than a 
minute all the moisture seemed to have been sucked back out of 

* From The Asiatics (1935), by Frederic Prokosch. Published by Doubleday 
and Company, Inc. 



8 THE EXPOSITION OF IDEAS 

the earth. The wet glimmer faded from the rocks, the grasses grew 
sere and mottled again. 

2. And it was hot. Unbearably so for a few minutes, until the air 
grew dry and light again. Even after the sky had become solidly 
blue once more, some faint oppression remained hanging in the air. 
High overhead I saw three hawks circling. I could see their shad 
ows in the hollow declivity at my side, twisting and turning like 
strange creatures under water. 

3. I sat down on the brown gravel. Alone in the middle of enormous 
Asia. But, thought I, this isn t solitude; this isn t real loneliness at 
all. The whole sun-stricken country seemed alive, each pebble 
shone with vitality. 

4. I walked toward a small mound not far from the plane. I didn t 
want to be near the plane itself. It terrified me. It looked like a 
great clumsy bird shattered upon the rocks, its tiny head folded 
forward, nothing left to it at all, dead and hollow with fright. 

5. I felt very thirsty. I stood upon the hillock and looked all around. 
To the north, the haze of the hills and the remote forests; to the 
south, the glistening salty stretches; to the east, endless brown 
earth; to the west, endless brown earth. Below me on my right a 
serpentine path ran through the mounds and the boulders. It was 
a dried-up river bed, cracked with the spring sunlight, shimmering 
like copper dust. 

6. I walked down toward the tufted shore. Everything was dry. Not 
a drop. 

7. But then I saw in a dark hollow a little red gleam. Yes, there 
among the shadows of the rocks a few drops of water were still 
waiting. Waiting to be sucked into earth and air until nothing was 
left. 

8. I lay down flat and leaned over the little red pond. The water 
smelled like corroded lead. I drank, and I could feel it gliding all 
the way down into my belly like a slim warm snake. I looked at the 
water again and I could see tiny red animalcules floating in its 
hairy recesses. I began to feel sick again. 

9. I started to rise, but a delicate weariness tugged at me and held 
me back. So I turned back and lay down upon the smooth brown 
river dust and closed my eyes. 



OBSERVING AND REPORTING 9 

10. Physical uneasiness can instill odd thoughts into the mind 
thoughts frilled up in all their elaborateness, in all the bizarre in 
tuitive fullness of a dream. I thought for a few seconds that I was 
dying, was on the very verge of death, was almost dead. "Are you 
afraid of death?" I could hear the old countess whimpering through 
the perfumed curtains: "What do you think of death? When do 
you want to die?" Dimly I could hear her voice continuing. "Think 
about death/ she whispered, "think of these thousands of creatures, 
here in Teheran, here in Persia, here in Asia. Moving across the 
sand, living in mud, crawling through the alleys of the dark neg 
lected cities, dying in the reeds beside a river without a name, liv 
ing and dying with nothing, not even a scrap of paper to state that 
they existed; dying and living, living and dying, the two processes 
growing faster and faster as our world grows older and staler, 
now almost as indistinguishable as the colors in a revolving wheel. 
Where s the one? Where s the other? Here s a living one that s 
dead, here s a dead one still alive, a living one s dead life slowly 
dying, a dead one s living death slowly dying. What can you make 
of it? Anything? Anything at all?" 

11. I was feverish, of course. This is what I thought that for a brief 
while I actually had died, that for a few seconds I was dead, had 
entered the darkness, was experiencing the first throbs of a dis 
solution about to spread inside me as at the sound of a gong. And 
then, there was a confusion of signals. Something went wrong at 
the switches, some misunderstanding occurred, some slight error 
on the control boards. By the merest accident I slipped back into 
life. I was alive. 

12. But everything exists forever, nothing ever vanishes completely. 
Each second goes off into space and is held there forever, traveling 
and spreading with unalterable speed, the sight of it now reaching 
Betelgeuse on an unbelievable arrow of light, the tiniest ray of it 
now filtering through the circles around Saturn. Somewhere now 
is flashing the sight of Hannibal crossing the Alps, of Xerxes passing 
into Asia Minor, of the first apeman rising out of the green twi 
light of the swamps. And somewhere, I thought, I am still dead. 
At some point in space a million miles away a flash of light is now 
carrying me outward caught in the momentary state of death. And 



10 THE EXPOSITION OF IDEAS 

now ten thousand miles farther. And now still farther. Somewhere 
I am still dead, thought I, and 111 carry the thought of that with 
me for the rest of my life. 

13. I opened my eyes. It was growing dark already. A mile away 
across the waste I could see the plane leaning upon the rocks like 
a huge moth, wings brittle in death. Now I felt really and pro 
foundly alone. It was a new thing; I could never have imagined it. 
It was as if I were wearing a mask, or were made out of wax, or 
were growing scales instead of skin. My body was beginning to feel 
unreal. The fading light on the dead stalks two feet away might as 
well have been the gleam of a star in the deep heaven. 

14. I turned and looked at the dry river bed. High above it, passing 
slowly through the gathering dusk, I could see faint shapes passing 
westward. The shapes of the newly dead. A regular caravan of 
them. There they were, the dim astonished spirits moving out of 
their old life. To hell, or to heaven? There was no telling. Some 
looked stiff and virtuous, others limp and degenerate. Some appeared 
to be overwhelmed with delight, others bleak with detestation. 
Most of them surprised me; they were people of a kind whose 
existence I should never have suspected. People who had spent 
their life in some sort of hiding. But now they had to move into 
the open; they couldn t hide any longer: women with their hair 
shaved, hands clasped in prayer; others without eyes, horribly fat, 
the capitalists of the spirit; others dead of starvation, with faces 
like lamps in a forsaken alleyway; others hideously, exhaustingly 
insane; a few with faces made wonderfully expressive by lust, re 
vealing every possible variety of degradation and decay; the un 
employed ones, dead without hope, eyes not knowing where to 
look for mercy and mouths wide open in a voiceless, grief -stricken 
shriek of accusation; several quite rigid with solitude, men like 
dried trees, arms raised in supplication cripples and suicides; 
those dead in battle, lips pressed together with a sudden devastat 
ing understanding, eyes bleeding; four or five with eyes exquisitely 
tender there were the protected ones, the stupid ones, the lucky 
flowerlike ones whom life hadn t touched; and finally the children, 
with hard malicious eyes and bodies beautiful as ferns. More and 
more of them, more and more thickly they seemed to pass, now 
like a herd of dark slender animals, now like a great funnel of fog 



OBSERVING AND REPORTING 11 

swiftly expanding. Then they grew hazy. The sky grew darker. 
Soon they would be gone, soon it would all be over, none would be 
left. None at all, nothing, not a trace. 

15. When I opened my eyes again the sky was dark, the land was 
hidden in a strange flickering shadow. Firelight. And high above 
me, the usual stars. Then I felt my body moving gently, and when 
I looked again I saw that I was lying on a couch and that a dark 
bare-chested man was gently massaging me. 

16. When he saw that I was awake he stopped and looked at me 
questioningly. He murmured in a rich low voice something that I 
couldn t understand. I stared blankly. He murmured something 
else. Still I didn t answer. Then he said, in a broken almost in 
comprehensible accent, "Perhaps Englishman, speaking English?" 

17. I nodded. He looked pleased. 

18. I raised my head and glanced around. I was lying on a rug out 
side a tent, and beside this tent stood another tent, and beyond this 
a third one, large and elaborate. I could see slender tree trunks 
shining in the firelight, and lying on the grass in front of the fire 
four great spotted dogs, jowls resting between their paws. 

19. "Very sick," said the big brown man, "very sick." He shook his 
head sadly. "But better now, much better." He nodded his head. 

I breathed deeply. "Did you find me?" I asked him. 
He looked puzzled for a moment. Then he smiled and nodded 
again. 

"And you brought me here?" 

He thought for a moment. "No, camel brought you here." 

I pointed at the tents. "Your home?" 

20. He smiled again, a great white-toothed rich-lipped smile. Sweat 
was dripping from his bearded chin and his eyebrows. "No, not 
home." He nodded toward the largest of the tents. "Prince Ghura- 
guzlu he go hunting here." 

21. I could see naked, sweating boys passing back and forth in front 
of the fire, carrying pots and dishes in and out of the tent. A fierce- 
eyed old man in a huge white turban was squatting beside the fire, 
stirring and stirring away in a big black bowl. 

22. "Do you serve Prince Ghuraguzlu?" said I. He nodded. "What is 
your name?" 

23. He looked embarrassed. "Rama Singh," he replied, gazing down- 



12 THE EXPOSITION OF IDEAS 

ward. His eyelids shone like satin, his lashes cast long slanting 
shadows on his cheek bones. 

24. He must have brought me several miles, thought I. We were in 
the hills, the earth smelled rich and mossy, the larch trees were 
rustling in the hot night wind. 

25. Presently Rama Singh rose and walked into the big tent. A min 
ute or two later he reappeared. He leaned over me. "Feeling bet 
ter?" 

I nodded. 

"Prince Ghuraguzlu desiring to see you." 

26. He put his strong male-smelling arm under me and helped me 
to my feet. Then he led me slowly into the tent. 

ANALYSIS 

1. Make an outline of this selection. 

a. What are the main divisions of your outline? 

b. Are they based on chronological sequence? On the distinction between hallu 
cination and sanity? 

2. a. When you are trying to describe the sensations you have had in an hallu 
cination or a dream can you express your experiences in the same way that you 
would if you were describing a real-life situation? 

b. To which of the five senses do you refer most in describing a dream? 

c. If you can trace the component parts of your dream back to experiences you 
have had in real life, do you find that your memory of these real experiences 
is more or less vivid than your memory of the dream? How do the elements 
of your description compare with those in this passage? 

3. a. At what point does the first part of this selection end? 

b. Has the observation up to this point been primarily objective or primarily 
subjective? 

c. Might any observer be expected to note precisely the same objects and to 
have the same feelings about them? 

d. Is it clear at all times which of the observations given here are objective and 
which are colored by the narrator s feelings? 

4. List the metaphors and similes used in this selection. Compare these figures of 
speech with those used in the Faulkner selection. 

5. Underline the particular words and phrases that indicate to the reader the tran 
sitions from observation of the external world to observation of the world of the 
narrator s mind. 

6. Note that during his hallucination the narrator is expressing many generaliza 
tions that would normally be made only after much observation. Some of these 
generalizations are translated into concrete form, as when he sees people repre 
senting problems of morality rather than the problems themselves. 



OBSERVING AND REPORTING 13 

a. How does this reporting of sensation and perception differ from the report 
ing in the first part? 

7. a. Are more figures of speech in the part concerned with the narrator s mental 
wanderings than in the more objective parts? 

b. Are the figures from the first part similar to those in the second? How do 
they differ? 



THE CAMERA EYE (14)* 
By John Dos Passos 

i. SUNDAY NIGHTS when we had fishballs and baked beans and Mr. 
Garfield read to us in a very beautiful reading voice and every 
body was so quiet you could have heard a pin drop because he 
was reading The Man without a Country and it was a very ter 
rible story and Aaron Burr had been a very dangerous man and 
this poor young man had said "Damn the United States; I never 
hope to hear her name again" and it was a very terrible thing to say 
and the grayhaired judge was so kind and good and the judge 
sentenced me and they took me far away to foreign lands on a 
frigate and the officers were kind and good and spoke in kind 
grave very sorry reading voices like Mr. Garfield and everything 
was very kind and grave and very sorry and frigates and the blue 
Mediterranean and islands and when I was dead I began to cry 
and I was afraid the other boys would see I had tears in my eyes 

2. American shouldn t cry he should look kind and grave and very 
sorry when they wrapped me in the stars and stripes and brought 
me home on a frigate to be buried I was so sorry I never remem 
bered whether they brought me home or buried me at sea but 
anyway I was wrapped in Old Glory 

ANALYSIS 

1. Compare this selection with the one by Frederic Prokosch. 

a. How are they alike? How do they differ? 

b. Are the similarities and differences determined by the kind of reporting or 
observing in each? 

2. How much of this selection deals with concrete material? How much of it 
does not? 

* From The 42nd Parallel ( 1930), by John Dos Passos. Published by Houghton 
Mifflin Company. Reprinted by permission of the author. 



14 THE EXPOSITION OF IDEAS 

Is there any evidence in the organization or the writing in this passage to in 
dicate a "point," a judgment that the author is making? If so, what is the na 
ture of the judgment? 

Examine the words Dos Passos uses here and comment on their effectiveness in 
aiding or obscuring the land of reporting and observing the author is doing. 



NIGHT IN THE WOODS* 

By George Sessions Perry 

1. LATER, there being two axes and Harmie having a cold, Sam went 
with Mamma to cut some wood and was beaten at it and proud of 
Mamma. Then, near dark, the wind lay and Sam ate a couple of 
sweet potatoes, called the dogs, and went to the woods. 

2. Now he was a tall man striding through the naked woods, which 
were clothed only with falling night, to hunt down the furred ani 
mals; following Zoonie and the cur, who were busily reading and 
editing the tangle of trails on the woods floor, disregarding the field- 
mice and rabbit trails, the bird tracks and those of the domestic 
stock that had wandered here, and the faint, lingering traces of 
squirrel musk. 

3. The dogs were transfigured. They were no longer winners after 
buttermilk or fire heat, were no longer slinkers or sluggards, but 
were roaming the dark woods with the strange dignity of things 
doing what they were born to do, of things afire with mastery and 
fierce intention. 

4. Now Zoonie was chipping the brittle night to pieces with his 
small, fast, sharp bark, and Sam knew an animal was marooned in 
the night there above the little dog. It proved to be a possum, and as 
Sam climbed the blackjack tree, armored as it was with toothed 
bark, he was full of the hot flush of the chase and the haunting 
minor dissonance of sympathy that goes out to a thing that is 
alone and is doomed and that knows it. 

5. Sam could not push it out on the ground because the dogs would 
slash it and ruin the fur. So with a stick and the light he toyed 
with the beast until it began to play dead. Once it began the pre 
tense, Sam knew it would continue that all night. 

* From Hold Autumn in Your Hand by George Sessions Perry. Copyright 1941 
by George Sessions Perry. Reprinted by arrangement with The Viking Press, 

N. Y. 



OBSERVING AND REPORTING 15 

6. Soon he climbed down the tree with it, holding onto its hairless 
tail, and fought off the dogs, though the cur was so fierce in his 
determination to get his teeth into the possum that Sam was for 
a moment afraid of him. Even so, Sam pretended not to be, and 
beat him away with a heavy stick. 

7. When the dogs were launched again and Sam had walked 
two hundred yards, he heard a rattling in the leaves nearby and 
went to it. Suddenly the light fell on a skunk, all shining and black 
in the radiance of the lantern, perfectly confident that whatever 
manner of creature was approaching, that creature would know 
what would happen to him if he came any closer. 

8. As Sam set the lantern down, the skunk, with thrilling poise, 
turned his stern to Sam and eyed him critically over his shoulder, 
sure of his weapon. 

9. Sam was afraid that the slight but abrupt noise of cocking the 
gun would startle the skunk and launch him on his offensive of 
chemical warfare. But Sam also knew that in any conflict the 
worst thing of all is to be afraid. Firmly his right thumb drew back 
the hammer which would drive home the firing pin. At the re 
sultant clicking sound, which seemed sharp and loud in the tense 
silence, a tremor ran over the skunk. Then through the notch in 
the rear sight and just above the lump of darkness which was the 
front sight, Sam could see the skunk s left eye, bright and calm. 
Slowly, so as not to spoil the aim, Sam s trigger finger closed, and 
in a single instant the skunk was a dead thing. 

10. Where a moment ago it had been all loveliness and calm cer 
tain threat, it was now a lump of meat to be denuded with great 
care, to be robbed of its shining coat and left in nakedness to 
freeze and thaw and rot. 

11. And now the dogs were barking somewhere off in the night, far 
ahead, to be reached before the quarry should run through the 
intermeshing treetops and escape. Sam picked up his things and 
began running to them. 

12. When Sam came in next morning just at dawn, having taken a 
sight on the north star which was the only one he knew defi 
nitely, since the two stars that form the front of the cup of the 
Big Dipper point outward toward it he had the hides of seven pos 
sums, one skunk, one coon and one ring-tail, and an amount of 



16 . THE EXPOSITION OF IDEAS 

respect for Mamma s yellow cur that was Mamma-big. In the first 
place, to tree a ring-tail is not a sorry dog s job, and the coon, which 
had made his final stand on a log in the middle of a creek, had 
fought that yellow dog magnificently and shrewdly, had half 
drowned him several times. But the yellow dog had never yielded an 
inch, oblivious of everything except his driving desire to fight and 
kill, while Zoonie attacked from the rear, until Sam had been able 
to shoot the coon. 

13. There had also been some pretense made at a fox race when 
the dogs happened on one, but he was out of their class when it 
came to speed and soon convinced them. 

14. Now Sam was coming into the yard and the kids ran to meet 
him and he let them take his burdens. Mamma, who was standing 
in the kitchen door, said come tank up on breakfast and then get 
some sleep and she d wake him up later for a big roast-possum 
dinner. Sam had brought home four, it being out of the question 
to carry more, and Mamma said she d just roast them all and use 
the left-overs for sandwich meat for the kids. 

15. After breakfast he got out of his clothes and went to bed, falling 
almost immediately into that exotic, delicious daytime sleep that 
waits for those who have hunted hard, who have not slept through, 
but lived through, the raw violence of the night. 

ANALYSIS 

1. Study the author s methods of describing feelings and large, complicated per 
ceptions. 

a. Mark off the outstanding descriptions. 

b. Rewrite four of these descriptions and try to give the same meaning in terms 
of precise detail, rather than through figurative language. 

a. a. Point out the passages where the author has carefully put in details; for ex 
ample, "the skunk s left eye* instead of simply "the skunk s eye"; "Firmly his 
right thumb drew back the hammer which would drive home the firing pin." 

b. Rewrite these sentences by using summary phrases; for example, "He cocked 
the gun." 

c. How important are the details to the effectiveness of the whole selection? 

3. Note where the detailed account of the night s actions breaks off and the sum 
mary begins. Note also that the author describes in some detail two or three 
other adventures in the middle of the summary. 

a. Why did he not proceed to these before starting to summarize? 

b. What would the effect have been if he had described in detail all the events 
of the night? 



OBSERVING AND REPORTING 17 

4. Note that two incidents are described in detail in the first part of the selection: 
the killing of the possum and the killing of the skunk. 

a. How many paragraphs are devoted to the possum incident? How many to 
the skunk? 

b. Would one paragraph have been sufficient for each of these incidents? 

c. What is gained or lost by treating these incidents so fully? 

5. a. How many major divisions can you find in the entire selection? Or to ask 
the same question in another way: the paragraphs can be reduced to what 
number without undue violence to customary principles of paragraphing? 

b. Why has the author made many more paragraphs than this minimum 
number? 

6. To what extent is the paragraphing based upon logical divisions of thought? 
To what extent upon chronological divisions? 

7. Is this selection primarily subjective or objective reporting? Defend your de 
cision. 

THE BUFFALO* 
By Francis Parkman 

i. THE GROUND was none of the best for a race, and grew worse 
continually as we proceeded; indeed, it soon became desperately 
bad, consisting of abrupt hills and deep hollows, cut by frequent 
ravines not easy to pass. At length, a mile in advance, we saw a 
band of bulls. Some were scattered grazing over a green declivity, 
while the rest were crowded together in the wide hollow below. 
Making a circuit, to keep out of sight, we rode towards them, until 
we ascended a hill, within a furlong of them, beyond which noth 
ing intervened that could possibly screen us from their view. We 
dismounted behind the ridge, just out of sight, drew our saddle- 
girths, examined our pistols, and mounting again, rode over the 
hill, and descended at a canter towards them, bending close to our 
horses necks. Instantly they took the alarm: those on the hill de 
scended, those below gathered into a mass, and the whole got 
into motion, shouldering each other along at a clumsy gallop. We 
followed, spurring our horses to full speed; and as the herd rushed, 
crowding and trampling in terror through an opening in the hills, 
we were close at their heels, half suffocated by the clouds of dust. 
But as we drew near, their alarm and speed increased; our horses, 
being new to the work, showed signs of the utmost fear, bounding 

* From The Oregon Trail (1920), by Francis Parkman. Published by Little, 
Brown and Company. 



18 THE EXPOSITION OF IDEAS 

violently aside as we approached, and refusing to enter among the 
herd. The buffalo now broke into several small bodies, scampering 
over the hills in different directions, and I lost sight of Shaw; 
neither of us knew where the other had gone. Old Pontiac ran like 
a frantic elephant up hill and down hill, his ponderous hoofs 
striking the prairie like sledge hammers. He showed a curious mix 
ture of eagerness and terror, straining to overtake the panic-stricken 
herd, but constantly recoiling in dismay as we drew near. The fugi 
tives, indeed, offered no very attractive spectacle, with their 
shaggy manes and the tattered remnants of their last winter s hair 
covering their backs in irregular shreds and patches, and flying 
off in the wind as they ran. At length I urged my horse close behind 
a bull, and after trying in vain, by blows and spurring, to bring 
him alongside, I fired from this disadvantageous position. At the 
report Pontiac swerved so much that I was again thrown a little 
behind the game. The bullet, entering too much in the rear, failed 
to disable; for a buffalo requires to be shot at particular points, or 
he will certainly escape. The herd ran up a hill, and I followed in 
pursuit. As Pontiac rushed headlong down on the other side, I saw 
Shaw and Henry descending the hollow on the right, at a leisurely 
gallop; and in front, the buffalo were just disappearing behind the 
crest of the next hill, their short tails erect, and their hoofs twin 
kling through a cloud of dust. 

At that moment I heard Shaw and Henry shouting to me; but 
the muscles of a stronger arm than mine could not have checked 
at once the furious course of Pontiac, whose mouth was as insensi 
ble as leather. Added to this, I rode him that morning with a snaf 
fle, having the day before, for the benefit of my other horse, un 
buckled from my bridle the curb which I commonly used. A 
stronger and hardier brute never trod the prairie; but the novel 
sight of the buffalo filled him with terror, and when at full speed 
he was almost incontrollable. Gaining the top of the ridge, I saw 
nothing of the buffalo; they had all vanished amid the intricacies of 
the hills and hollows. Reloading my pistols, in the best way I could, 
I galloped on until I saw them again scuttling along at the base 
of the hill, their panic somewhat abated. Down went old Pontiac 
among them, scattering them to the right and left; and then we 
had another long chase. About a dozen bulls were before us, scour- 



OBSERVING AND REPORTING 19 

ing over the hills, rushing down the declivities with tremendous 
weight and impetuosity, and then laboring with a weary gallop 
upward. Still Pontiac, in spite of spurring and beating, would not 
close with them. One bull at length fell a little behind the rest, 
and by a dint of much effort, I urged my horse within six or eight 
yards of his side. His back was darkened with sweat: he was 
panting heavily, while his tongue lolled out a foot from his jaws. 
Gradually I came up abreast of him, urging Pontiac with leg and 
rein nearer to his side, when suddenly he did what buffalo in such 
circumstances will always do: he slackened his gallop, and turn 
ing towards us, with an aspect of mingled rage and distress, low 
ered his huge, shaggy head for a charge. Pontiac, with a snort, 
leaped aside in terror, nearly throwing me to the ground, as I was 
wholly unprepared for such an evolution. I raised my pistol in a 
passion to strike him on the head, but thinking better of it, fired 
the bullet after the bull, who had resumed his flight; then drew 
rein, and determined to rejoin my companions. It was high time. 
The breath blew hard from Pontiac s nostrils, and the sweat rolled 
in big drops down his sides; I myself felt as if drenched in warm 
water. Pledging myself to take my revenge at a future opportunity, 
I looked about for some indications to show me where I was, and 
what course I ought to pursue; I might as well have looked for 
landmarks in the midst of the ocean. How many miles I had run 
or in what direction, I had no idea; and around me the prairie was 
rolling in steep swells and pitches, without a single distinctive fea 
ture to guide me. I had a little compass hung at my neck; and ig 
norant that the Platte at this point diverged considerably from its 
easterly course, I thought that by keeping to the northward I 
should certainly reach it. So I turned and rode about two hours in 
that direction. The prairie changed as I advanced, softening away 
into easier undulations, but nothing like the Platte appeared, nor 
any sign of a human being: the same wild endless expanse lay 
around me still; and to all appearance I was as far from my object 
as ever. I began now to think myself in danger of being lost, and 
reining in my horse, summoned the scanty share of woodcraft that 
I possessed ( if that term is applicable upon the prairie ) to extricate 
me. It occurred to me that the buffalo might prove my best guides. 
I soon found one of the paths made by them in their passage to 



20 THE EXPOSITION OF IDEAS 

the river: it ran nearly at right angles to my course; but turning 
my horse s head in the direction it indicated, his freer gait and 
erected ears assured me that I was right. 

3. But in the meantime my ride had been by no means a solitary 
one. The face of the country was dotted far and wide with count 
less hundreds of buffalo. They trooped along in files and columns, 
bulls, cows, and calves, on the green faces of the declivities in front. 
They scrambled away over the hills to the right and left; and far 
off, the pale blue swells in the extreme distance were clotted with 
innumerable specks. Sometimes I surprised shaggy old bulls graz 
ing alone, or sleeping behind the ridges I ascended. They would 
leap up at my approach, stare stupidly at me through their tangled 
manes, and then gallop heavily away. The antelope were very 
numerous; and as they are always bold when in the neighborhood 
of buffalo, they would approach to look at me, gaze intently with 
their great round eyes, then suddenly leap aside, and stretch 
lightly away over the prairie, as swiftly as a race horse. Squalid, 
ruffianlike wolves sneaked through the hollows and sandy ravines. 
Several times I passed through villages of prairie dogs, who sat, 
each at the mouth of his burrow, holding his paws before him in 
a supplicating attitude, and yelping away most vehemently, whisk 
ing his little tail with every squeaking cry he uttered. Prairie dogs 
are not fastidious in their choice of companions; various long, 
checkered snakes were sunning themselves in the midst of the 
village, and demure little gray owls, with a large white ring 
around each eye, were perched side by side with the rightful in 
habitants. The prairie teemed with life. Again and again I looked 
toward the crowded hillsides, and was sure I saw horsemen; and 
riding near, with a mixture of hope and dread, for Indians were 
abroad, I found them transformed into a group of buffalo. There 
was nothing in human shape amid all this vast congregation of 
brute forms. 

4. When I turned down the buffalo path, the prairie seemed changed: 
only a wolf or two glided by at intervals, like conscious felons, never 
looking to the right or left. Being now free from anxiety, I was at 
leisure to observe minutely the objects around me; and here, for the 
first time, I noticed insects wholly different from any of the varieties 
found farther to the eastward. Gaudy butterflies fluttered about my 



OBSERVING AND REPORTING 21 

horse s head; strangely formed beetles, glittering with metallic luster, 
were crawling upon plants that I had never seen before; multitudes 
of lizards, too, were darting like lightning over the sand. 
5. I had run to a great distance from the river. It cost me a long ride 
on the buffalo path, before I saw, from the ridge of a sandhill, the 
pale surface of the Platte glistening in the midst of its desert val 
ley, and the faint outline of the hills beyond waving along the sky. 
From where I stood, not a tree nor a bush nor a living thing was 
visible throughout the whole extent of the sun-scorched landscape. 
In half an hour I came upon the trail, not far from the river; and 
seeing that the party had not yet passed, I turned eastward to meet 
them, old Pontiac s long swinging trot again assuring me that I was 
right in doing so. Having been slightly ill on leaving camp in the 
morning, six or seven hours of rough riding had fatigued me ex 
tremely. I soon stopped, therefore, flung my saddle on the ground, 
and with my head resting on it and my horse s trail-rope tied loosely 
to my arm, lay waiting the arrival of the party, speculating mean 
while on the extent of the injuries Pontiac had received. At length 
the white wagon coverings rose from the verge of the plain. By a 
singular coincidence, almost at the same moment two horsemen ap 
peared coming down from the hills. They were Shaw and Henry, 
who had searched for me a while in the morning, but well knowing 
the futility of the attempt in such a broken country, had placed 
themselves on the top of the highest hill they could find, and picket 
ing their horses near them, as a signal to me, had lain down and 
fallen asleep. The stray cattle had been recovered, as the emigrants 
told us, about noon. Before sunset, we pushed forward eight miles 
farther. 

ANALYSIS 

1. a. How does this selection compare with the two preceding as to the subjec 
tivity of the reporting? 

b. At what points do the writer s feelings color his perceptions? 

c. Does this subjectivity affect the tone of the selection as a whole? 

2. Does the fact that the author is taking part in the action described affect the 
nature of the reporting of the action? 

3. The paragraphs are long here. Could they be broken into smaller paragraphs 
without change of wording? 

a. Examine especially Paragraph 2 in this connection. Note that the order is 
almost entirely chronological. 



22 THE EXPOSITION OF IDEAS 

b. In what respect do Paragraphs 3 and 4 violate the strict chronological 
pattern? 

4. In Paragraphs 3 and 4 Parkman is generalizing upon perceptions. He is not de 
scribing each perception as it comes to him, but is making general statements 
about groups of perceptions. His generalizations are, however, so close to single 
perceptions here that we would call the passage highly concrete. 

a. Examine these two paragraphs closely to see exactly what is meant here. 

5. What metaphors and similes can you find in this selection? 

ICE* 
By Henry David Thoreau 

i. THE POND had in the meanwhile skimmed over in the shadiest 
and shallowest coves, some days or even weeks before the general 
freezing. The first ice is especially interesting and perfect, being 
hard, dark, and transparent, and affords the best opportunity that 
ever offers for examining the bottom where it is shallow; for you can 
lie at your length on ice only an inch thick, like a skater insect on 
the surface of the water, and study the bottom at your leisure, only 
two or three inches distant, like a picture behind a glass, and the 
water is necessarily always smooth then. There are many furrows 
in the sand where some creature has traveled about and doubled on 
its tracks; and, for wrecks, it is strewn with the cases of caddis worms 
made of minute grains of white quartz. Perhaps these have creased 
it, for you find some of their cases in the furrows, though they are 
deep and broad for them to make. But the ice itself is the object of 
most interest, though you must improve the earliest opportunity to 
study it. If you examine it closely the morning after it freezes, you 
find that the greater part of the bubbles, which at first appeared to 
be within it, are against its under surface, and that more are con 
tinually rising from the bottom; while the ice is as yet compara 
tively solid and dark, that is, you see .the water through it. These 
bubbles are from an eightieth to an eighth of an inch in diameter, 
very clear and beautiful, and you see your face reflected in them 
through the ice. There may be thirty or forty of them to a square 
inch. There are also already within the ice narrow oblong perpendic 
ular bubbles about half an inch long, sharp cones with the apex up 
ward; or oftener, if the ice is quite fresh, minute spherical bubbles 

* FiomWdden (1854). 



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one directly above another, like a string of beads. But these within 
the ice are not so numerous nor obvious as those beneath. I some 
times used to cast in stones to try the strength of the ice, and those 
which broke through carried in air with them, which formed very 
large and conspicuous white bubbles beneath. One day when I came 
to the same place forty-eight hours afterward, I found that those 
large bubbles were still perfect, though an inch more of ice had 
formed, as I could see distinctly by the seam in the edge of a cake. 
But as the last two days had been very warm, like an Indian sum 
mer, the ice was not now transparent, showing the dark green color 
of the water, and the bottom, but opaque and whitish or gray, and 
though twice as thick was hardly stronger than before, for the air 
bubbles had greatly expanded under this heat and run together, 
and lost their regularity; they were no longer one directly over an 
other, but often like silvery coins poured from a bag, one overlap 
ping another, or in thin flakes, as if occupying slight cleavages. The 
beauty of the ice was gone, and it was too late to study the bottom. 
Being curious to know what position my great bubbles occupied 
with regard to the new ice, I broke out a cake containing a middling 
sized one, and turned it bottom upward. The new ice had formed 
around and under the bubble, so that it was included between the 
two ices. It was wholly in the lower ice, but close against the upper, 
and was flattish, or perhaps slightly lenticular, with a rounded edge, 
a quarter of an inch deep by four inches in diameter; and I was sur 
prised to find that directly under the bubble the ice was melted with 
great regularity in the form of a saucer reversed, to the height of 
five eighths of an inch in the middle, leaving a thin partition there 
between the water and the bubble, hardly an eighth of an inch 
thick; and in many places the small bubbles in this partition had 
burst out downward, and probably there was no ice at all under the 
largest bubbles, which were a foot in diameter. I inferred that the in 
finite number of minute bubbles which I had first seen against the 
under surface of the ice were now frozen in likewise, and that each, 
in its degree, had operated like a burning glass on the ice beneath 
to melt and rot it. These are the little air guns which contribute to 
make the ice crack and whoop. 



24 THE EXPOSITION OF IDEAS 



ANALYSIS 

1. Is Thoreau s report of Walden Pond in winter subjective reporting or objective 
reporting? What evidence can you find in support of your opinion? 

2. a. What order does Thoreau follow in examining the ice? 

b. Does he follow some clearly marked path from general or over-all picture to 
one that is more minute? 

c. Does he merely assemble details that seem to him to be significant; or does 
he allow the picture of the pond to grow on the reader through the accumula 
tion of the details? 

3. a. Is Thoreau trying to make a "point" or "points" in this selection? 

b. If so, what is the relation between his points and the details of observation 
that he makes? 

4. Study the words used here the adjectives, the verbs, the images. 

a. To what extent does word choice indicate objective or subjective reporting? 

5. a. What is the function of time in this selection? 

b. How does it help the kind of reporting Thoreau is doing here? 

6. Thoreau wrote this passage as one long paragraph. 

a. Into how many main parts can this paragraph be divided? 

b. Mark off the places where one subdivision ends and the next begins. 

c. Which of these divisions receives the fullest treatment? 

7. Note the places where Thoreau attempts to give precise measurements for ice 
and bubbles. 

a. Does this accuracy influence perceptibly the effect of the piece on the reader? 



LAST DAYS OF ST. PIERRE* 
By Fairfax Downey 



THE PLANTER 

1. How GRACIOUSLY had fortune smiled on Fernand Clerc! Little past 
the age of forty, in this year of 1902, he was the leading planter of 
the fair island of Martinique. Sugar from his broad cane fields, mo 
lasses, and mellow rum had made him a man of wealth, a millionaire. 
All his enterprises prospered. 

2. Were the West Indies, for all their beauty and their bounty, some 
times powerless to prevent a sense of exile, an ache of homesickness 
in the heart of a citizen of the Republic? Then there again fate had 

* From Disaster Fighters, copyright, 1938, by Fairfax Downey. Courtesy of 
G. P. Putnam s Sons. 



OBSERVING AND REPORTING 25 

been kind to Fernand Clerc. Elected a member of the Chamber of 
Deputies, it was periodically his duty and his pleasure to embark 
and sail home to attend its sessions home to France, to Paris. 

3. Able, respected, good-looking, blessed with a charming wife and 
children, M. Clerc found life good indeed. With energy undepleted 
by the tropics, he rode through the island visiting his properties. Tall 
and thick grew the cane stalks of his plantation at Vive on the slopes 
of Mont Pelee. Mont Pelee Naked Mountain well named when 
lava erupting from its cone had stripped it bare of its verdure. But 
that was long ago. Not since 1851 had its subterranean fires flared up 
and then but insignificantly. Peaceful now, its crater held the lovely 
Lake of Palms, whose wooded shores were a favorite picnic spot 
for parties from St. Pierre and Fort-de-France. Who need fear tow 
ering Mont Pelee, once mighty, now mild, an extinct volcano? 

4. Yet this spring M. Clerc and all Martinique received a rude shock. 
The mountain was not dead, it seemed. White vapors veiled her 
summit, and by May second she had overlaid her green mantle with 
a gown of gray cinders. Pelee muttered and fumed like an angry 
woman told her day was long past. Black smoke poured forth, il 
lumined at night by jets of flame and flashes of lightning. The gray 
ish snow of cinders covered the countryside, and the milky waters 
of the Riviere Blanche altered into a muddy and menacing torrent. 

5. Nor was Pelee uttering only empty threats. On May fifth, M. Clerc 
at Vive beheld a cloud rolling from the mountain down the valley. 
Sparing his own acres, the cloud and the stream of smoking lava 
which it masked, enveloped the Guerin sugar factory, burying its 
owner, his wife overseer, and twenty-five workmen and domestics. 

6. Dismayed by this tragedy, M. Clerc and many others moved from 
the slopes into St. Pierre. The city was crowded, its population of 
twenty-five thousand swollen to forty thousand, and the throngs that 
filled the market and the cafes or strolled through the gorgeously 
luxuriant Jardin des Plantes lent an air of added animation, of al 
most hectic gaiety. When M. Clerc professed alarm at the behavior 
of Pelee to his friends, he was answered with shrugs of shoulders. 
Danger? On the slopes perhaps, but scarcely here in St. Pierre down 
by the sea. 

7. Thunderous, scintillant, Mont Pelee staged a magnificent display 
of natural fireworks on the night of May seventh. Whites and Negroes 



26 THE EXPOSITION OF IDEAS 

stared up at it, fascinated. Some were frightened but more took a 
childlike joy in the vivid spectacle. It was as if the old volcano were 
celebrating the advent of tomorrow s fete day. 

8. M. Fernand Clerc did not sleep well that night. He breakfasted 
early in the household where he and his family were guests and again 
expressed his apprehensions to the large group of friends and rela 
tives gathered at the table. Politely and deferentially for one does 
not jeer a personage and man of proven courage they heard him 
out, hiding their scepticism. 

9. The voice of the planter halted in midsentence; and he half rose, 
his eyes fixed on the barorr^eter. Its needle was actually fluttering! 

10. M. Clerc pushed back his chair abruptly and commanded his car 
riage at once. A meaning look to his wife and four children, and 
they hastened to make ready. Their hosts and the rest followed them 
to the door. Non, merci, none would join their exodus. An revoir. A 
demain. 

11. From the balcony of their home, the American Consul, Thomas 
Prentis, and his wife waved to the Clerc family driving by. "Stop," 
the planter ordered and the carriage pulled up. Best come along, 
the planter urged. His American friends thanked him. There was 
no danger, they laughed, and waved again to the carriage disappear 
ing in gray dust as racing hoofs and wheels sped it out of the city 
of St. Pierre. 

THE GOVERNOR 

12. Governor Mouttet, ruling Martinique for the Republic of France, 
glared up at rebellious Mont P^lee. This peste of a volcano was de 
ranging the island. There had been no such crisis since its captures 
by the English, who always relinquished it again to France, or the 
days when the slaves revolted. A great pity that circumstances be 
yond his control should damage the prosperous record of his ad 
ministration, the Governor reflected. 

13. That miserable mountain was disrupting commerce. Its rumblings 
drowned out the band concerts in the Savane. Its pyrotechnics dis 
tracted glances which might far better have dwelt admiringly on the 
proverbial beauty of the women of Martinique. . . . Now attention 
was diverted to a cruder work of Nature, a sputtering volcano. Par- 
bleu! It was enough to scandalize any true Frenchman. 



OBSERVING AND REPORTING 27 

14. Governor Mouttet sighed and pored over the reports laid before 
him. He had appointed a commission to study the eruption and get 
at the bottom of I affaire Pelee, but meanwhile alarm was spreading. 
People were fleeing the countryside and thronging into St. Pierre, 
deserting that city for Fort-de-France, planning even to leave the 
island. Steamship passage was in heavy demand. The Roraima, due 
May eighth, was booked solid out of St. Pierre, one said. This would 
never do. Steps must be taken to prevent a panic which would scat 
ter fugitives throughout Martinique or drain a colony of France of 
its inhabitants. 

15. A detachment of troops was despatched by the Governor to St. 
Pierre to preserve order and halt the exodus. His Excellency, no man 
to send others where he himself would not venture, followed with 
Mme. Mouttet and took up residence in that city. Certainly his pres 
ence must serve to calm these unreasoning, exaggerated fears. He 
circulated among the populace, speaking soothing words. Mes en- 
fants, the Governor avowed, Mont Pelee rumbling away there is only 
snoring soundly in deep slumber. Be tranquil. 

36. Yet, on the ominous night of May seventh, as spurts of flame 
painted the heavens, the Governor privately confessed to inward 
qualms. What if the mountain should really rouse? Might it not then 
cast the mortals at its feet into a sleep deeper than its own had been, 
a sleep from which they would never awaken? 

THE CHIEF OFFICER 

17. Ellery S. Scott, chief officer of the Quebec Line steamship Rora 
ima, stood on the bridge with Captain Muggah as the vessel bore 
down on Martinique. A column of smoke over the horizon traced 
down to the 4500-foot summit of Mont Pelee. So the old volcano was 
acting up! Curiosity on the bridge ran high as anchor was dropped 
in the St. Pierre roadstead about six o clock on the morning of May 
eighth. But all seemed well ashore. The streets, twisting and climb 
ing between the bright-colored houses, were filled with crowds in 
gay holiday attire. 

18. Promptly the agents came aboard. The volcano? But certainly it 
was erupting and causing inconvenience. But there was no danger, 
regardless of the opinion of that Italian skipper yesterday who had 
said that had he seen Vesuvius looking like Pelee, he would have de- 



28 THE EXPOSITION OF IDEAS 

parted from Naples as fast as he was going to leave St. Pierre. Al 
though the authorities refused him clearance and threatened penal 
ties, he had sailed in haste, with only half his cargo. 

19. By the way, the agents continued, the passenger list was to be 
considerably augmented: sixty first-class anxious to leave St. Pierre. 
Here they were boarding now with bag and baggage. Could they be 
humored, and the Roraima sail for St. Lucia at once, returning to 
discharge its Martinique cargo? the agents inquired of Captain 
Muggah. 

20. Chief Officer Scott, ordered below to inspect the stowage, thought 
of his boy in the forecastle. A good lad this eldest son of his. Used 
to say he d have a ship of his own some day and keep on his father 
as first mate. No, his father planned a better career than the sea for 
him. The boy was slated to go to college and be a lawyer. This 
would be his last voyage. 

21. Stowed shipshape and proper as Scott knew he would find it, the 
cargo plainly could not be shifted without a good deal of difficulty. 
The Martinique consignment lay above that for St. Lucia, and it 
would be a heavy task to discharge at the latter port first. Scott so 
reported. 

22. The agents hesitated briefly. To be sure, sixty first-class passengers 
were to be obliged if possible but ah, well, let them wait a little 
longer. The Roraima would sail as soon as the upper layer of cargo 
was landed. 

23. Ship s bells tolled the passing hours. Pelee yonder growled hoarsely 
and belched black smoke. A little before eight, Chief Officer Scott 
apprehensively turned his binoculars on the summit. 

THE PRISONER 

24. It was dark in the underground dungeon of the St. Pierre prison, 
but thin rays of light filtered through the grated opening in the 
upper part of the cell door. Enough so that Auguste Ciparis could 
tell when it was night and when it was day. 

25. Not that it mattered much unless a man desired to count the days 
until he should be free. What good was that? One could not hurry 
them by. Therefore Auguste stolidly endured them with the long 
patience of Africa. The judge had declared him a criminal and 
caused him to be locked up here. Thus it was settled and nothing 



OBSERVING AND REPORTING 29 

was to be done. Yet it was hard, this being shut out of life up there 
in the gay city hard when one was only twenty-five and strong 
and lusty. 

26. Auguste slept and dozed all he could. Pele*e was rumbling away in 
the distance each day the jailer bringing him food and water 
seemed more excited about it but the noise, reaching the sub 
terranean cell only as faint thunder, failed to keep the Negro 
awake. . . . 

27. Glimmerings of the dawn of May eighth filtered through the grat 
ing into the cell, and Auguste stirred into wakefulness. This being a 
fete day, imprisonment was less tolerable. What merriment his 
friends would be making up there in the squares of St. Pierrel He 
could imagine the sidelong glances and the swaying hips of the mu 
latto girls he might have been meeting today. Auguste stared sul 
lenly at the cell door. At least the jailer might have been on time 
with his breakfast. 

28. The patch of light in the grating winked out into blackness. Ail 
Ai! All of a sudden it was night again. 

II 

29. On the morning of May eighth, 1902, the clocks of St. Pierre ticked 
on toward ten minutes of eight when they would stop forever. 
Against a background of bright sunshine, a huge column of vapor 
rose from the cone of Mont Pel6e. 

30. A salvo of reports as from heavy artillery. Then, choked by lava 
boiled to white heat by fires in the depths of the earth, Pelee with a 
terrific explosion blew its head off. 

31. Like a colossal Roman candle it shot out streaks of flame and fiery 
globes. A pall of black smoke rose thousands of feet in the air, dark 
ening the heavens. Silhouetted by a red, infernal glare, Pelee flung 
aloft viscid masses which rained incandescent ashes on land and sea. 

32. Then, jagged and brilliant as the lightning flashes, a fissure opened 
in the flank of the mountain toward St. Pierre. Out of it issued an 
immense cloud which rushed with unbelievable rapidity down on 
the doomed city and the villages of Carbet and Le Precheur. 

33. In three minutes that searing, suffocating cloud enveloped them, 
and forty thousand people died! 

34. Fernand Clerc, the planter, watched from Mont Parnasse, one 



30 THE EXPOSITION OF IDEAS 

mile east of St. Pierre, where he had so recently breakfasted. 
Shrouded in such darkness as only the inmost depths of a cavern af 
ford, he reached out for the wife and children he could not see and 
gathered them in blessed safety into his arms. But the relatives, the 
many friends he had left so short a while ago, the American consul 
and his wife, who had waved him a gay goodbye them he would 
never see alive again. . . . 

35. In that vast brazier which was St. Pierre, Governor Mouttet may 
have lived the instant long enough to realize that Pelee had in truth 
awakened and that eternal sleep was his lot and his wife s and that 
of all those whose flight he had discouraged. . . . 

36. Down in that deep dungeon cell of his Auguste Ciparis blinked in 
the swift-fallen night. Through the grating blew a current of burn 
ing air, scorching his flesh. He leaped, writhing in agony and scream 
ing for help. No one answered. 

37. Leaving a blazing city in its wake, the death cloud from the vol 
cano rolled over the docks, and the sea, hissing and seething, shrank 
back before it. Aboard the Roraima, Chief Officer Scott lowered his 
glasses precipitately from Pelee. One look at that cloud bearing down 
like a whirlwind and he snatched a tarpaulin from a ventilator and 
pulled it over him. The ship rolled to port, almost on her beam ends, 
then back to starboard. Her funnels and other superstructure and 
most of her small boats were swept off by the mighty blast laden 
with scalding ashes and stone dust. Badly scorched, Scott emerged 
from his refuge to catch a glimpse of the British steamer Roddam 
plunging by toward the open sea, her deck a smoking shambles. Of 
the other sixteen vessels which had been anchored in the roadstead 
there was no sign. 

38. Staggering toward the twisted iron wreckage of the bridge, the 
Chief Officer beheld the swaying figure of Captain Muggah. From 
the hideous, blackened mask that had been his face a voice croaked: 

39. "All hands! Heave up the anchor!" 

40. All hands! Only Scott, two engineers, and a few members of the 
black gang who had been below responded. In vain Scott scanned 
the group for his son. He never saw the lad again. 

41. The anchor could not be unshackled. "Save the women and chil 
dren," the captain ordered. During attempts to lower a boat, the 



OBSERVING AND REPORTING 31 

captain disappeared. Later he was pulled out of the water in a dy 
ing condition. 

42. Now the Roraima was afire fore and aft. Amid the shrieks and 
groans of dying passengers, Scott and three more able-bodied men 
fought the flames, helped by a few others whose hands, burned raw, 
made it torture to touch anything. Between dousing the fire with 
bucketfuls from the sea, Scott tried to give drinks of fresh water to 
those who begged pitifully for it, though their seared, swollen throats 
would not let them swallow a drop. Tongues lolling, they dragged 
themselves along the deck, following him like dogs. 

43. When the French cruiser Suchet steamed up to the rescue, the 
only survivors among the passengers were a little girl and her nurse. 
Twenty-eight out of a crew of forty-seven were dead. 

44. The eyes of all aboard the Suchet turned toward shore. There at 
the foot of a broad, bare pathway, paved by death and destruction 
down the slope of Mont Pelee, lay the utter ruins of the city of 
St. Pierre. 

Ill 

45. Not until the afternoon of May eighth did the devastation of St. 
Pierre cool sufficiently to allow rescuers from Fort-de-France to 
enter. They could find none to rescue except one woman who died 
soon after she was taken from a cellar. 

46. "St. Pierre, that city this morning alive, full of human souls, is no 
more!" Vicar-General Parel wrote his Bishop. "It lies consumed be 
fore us, in its winding sheet of smoke and cinders, silent and des 
olate, a city of the dead. We strain our eyes for fleeing inhabitants, 
for men returning to bury their lost ones. We see no one! There is 
no living being left in this desert of desolation, framed in a terrify 
ing solitude. In the background, when the cloud of smoke and cin 
ders breaks away, the mountain and its slopes, once so green, stand 
forth like an Alpine landscape. They look as if they were covered 
with a heavy cloak of snow, and through the thickened atmosphere 
rays of pale sunshine, wan, and unknown to our latitudes, illumine 
this scene with a light that seems to belong to the other side of the 
grave." 

47. Indeed St. Pierre might have been an ancient town, destroyed in 



32 THE EXPOSITION OF IDEAS 

some half-forgotten cataclysm and recently partly excavated an 
other Pompeii and Herculaneum. Cinders, which had buried its 
streets six feet deep in a few minutes, were as the dust of centuries. 
Here was the same swift extinction Vesuvius had wrought. 

48. Here was no slow flow of lava. That cloud disgorged by Pel6e 
was a superheated hurricane issuing from the depths of the earth at 
a speed of ninety miles an hour. Such was the strength of the blast, 
it killed by concussion and by toppling walls on its victims. The fall 
of the fourteen-foot metal statue of Notre Dame de la Garde Our 
Lady of Safety symbolized the dreadful fact that tens of thousands 
never had a fighting chance for their lives. 

49. But chiefly the death cloud slew with its lethal content of hot 
steam and dust. So swiftly did it pass that its heat did not always 
burn all of the light tropical clothing from its prey, but once it was 
inhaled into the lungs that was the end. Some had run a few 
frantic steps; then dropped, hands clutched over nose and mouth. 
Encrusted by cementlike ashes, corpses lay fixed in the contorted 
postures of their last struggle, replicas of the dead of Vesuvius pre 
served in the Naples museum. Fire had charred others or incinerated 
them to a heap of bones. A horrible spectacle was presented by 
bodies whose skulls and abdomens had been burst by heat and gases. 

50. People who had been indoors when the cloud descended perished 
where they stood or sat, but the hand of death had marked most of 
them less cruelly. They seemed almost still alive, as each shattered 
building disclosed its denouement. There a girl lay prone, her arms 
about the feet of an image of the Virgin. A man bent with his head 
thrust into a basin from which the water had evaporated. A family 
was gathered around a restaurant table. A child held a doll in her 
arms; when the doll was touched, it crumbled away except for its 
china eyes. A clerk sat at his desk, one hand supporting his chin, the 
other grasping a pen. A baker crouched in the fire pit under his 
oven. In one room of a home a blonde girl in her bathrobe leaned 
back in a rocking chair. Behind her stood a Negro servant who ap 
parently had been combing the girl s hair. Another servant had 
crawled under a sofa. Not far away lay the body of a white woman, 
beautiful as a Greek statue, and like many an antique statue 
headless. 

51. Mutilated or almost unmarred, shriveled in last agony or seeming 



OBSERVING AND REPORTING 33 

only to have dropped into a peaceful sleep, lay the legions of the 
dead. After the finding of the dying woman in a cellar, the devasta 
tion was searched in vain for survivors. 

52. Then four days after the catastrophe, two Negroes walking through 
the wreckage turned gray as they heard faint cries for help issuing 
from the depths of the earth. 

53. "Who s that?" they shouted when they could speak. "Where are 
you?" 

54. Up floated the feeble voice: "I m down here in the dungeon of 
the jail. Help! Save me! Get me out!" 

55. They dug down through the debris, broke open the dungeon door, 
and released Auguste Ciparis, the Negro criminal. 

56. Some days later, George Kennan and August F. Jaccaci, American 
journalists arriving to cover the disaster, located Ciparis in a village 
in the country. They secured medical attention for hfe severe burns, 
poorly cared for as yet, and obtained and authenticated his story. 
When the scorching air penetrated his cell that day, he smelled his 
own body burning but breathed as little as possible during the mo 
ment the intense heat lasted. Ignorant of what had occurred, not 
realizing that he was buried alive, he slowly starved for four days in 
his tomb of a cell. His scant supply of water was soon gone. Only 
echoes answered his shouts for help. When at last he was heard and 
freed, Ciparis, given a drink of water, managed with some assistance 
to walk six kilometers to Morne Rouge. 

57. One who lived where forty thousand died! History records no 
escape more marvelous. 

ANALYSIS 

1. a. Examine carefully the divisions of this selection and try to determine why 
the author organized his material in this way. 

b. What effect on die whole pattern of the reporting does the account of dif 
ferent individuals and their actions have? 

2. a. Why did the author choose the particular persons he did? 

b. Is his choice intended to be representative? 

c. Is it intended to cover, by specific and typical instances, what might have 
been covered by a more generalized reporting? 

3. a. Is there any evidence in the passage that the author was present and that 
he is therefore giving an eye-witness account of the disaster? 

b. What changes in organization and approach seem to indicate that the ma 
terial here has been gained through other than first-hand sources? 



34 THE EXPOSITION OF IDEAS 

4. Can you find any places in this selection which might be classified as subjective 
reporting? 

SAMPLE THEME SUBJECTS 

An Indian stick game 

An evening spent at a wake 

A native village in New Guinea 

The last day of fishing on the Blackfoot 

Old men watching an excavation 

A sorority tea 

Hayrakers 

A family of immigrants 

A race-track tout in action 

Children buying candy 

Women in a hat shop 

Men on the production line 

A game of bridge in the afternoon 

On the subway 

Circus people 

A library reading room 

Sensations on regaining consciousness 

Sensations in a dentist s chair 

Gloomy Sunday 

Homesickness 

These are subjects that do not involve generalizations. In handling them, 
simply present a scene that would correspond to action shots taken by a 
movie camera. If more than one paper is written here, make one objective 
and one subjective. 



2. INFORMAL INDUCTIONS 



Informal Inductions 



AT THIS POINT we begin to concern ourselves with making gen 
eralizations and arriving at conclusions. When we generalize, we 
have in mind not one situation but many situations that are related in 
some way. We think of many situations having certain elements in com 
mon, and we arrive at conclusions we consider true about these elements. 
Consider, for instance, the article "I Pick Em Up" on page 70. The 
writer is in the habit of picking up hitchhikers. He is not writing about 
one experience only; he has had many. He is trying to express his gen 
eral attitude toward picking up hitchhikers. Again, W. E. 13. DuBois, 
in "The Negro Scientist," is acquainted with the life stories of several 
Negro scientists. By examining somewhat closely the case of each, he 
attempts to determine whether or not Negroes can become competent 
scientists. This process of arriving at conclusions about a class of peo 
ple, objects, or ideas is what logicians call induction. 

Suppose you notice that your neighbor s Siamese cat has a kink in 
its tail. At first you assume that the kink is merely a peculiarity of the 
single animal. Perhaps it has had an accident. But later on you come 
across another Siamese cat with a kink in its tail. Your interest now 
aroused, you check on other Siamese cats and find that each has a 
similar kink. You have by now become thoroughly convinced that 
Siamese cats as a class have kinks in their tails. In arriving at a conclu 
sion about the class of animals, you are making a generalization or in 
duction. 

An informal induction is one in which the writer does not endeavor 
seriously to make a thorough study of all the members in the class 
about which he is writing; or, as the case often is, does not set up any 



38 THE EXPOSITION OF IDEAS 

research machinery by which he can reasonably expect to arrive at 
a demonstration that should satisfy every reader. Although the line 
between informal and formal inductions l is sometimes hard to draw, 
the distinction can be made practically by using the writer s method 
of approach to his material as a measuring stick. If he has noticed 
somewhat at random or from his chance experiences with his subject 
some related phenomena and has drawn conclusions from them, the 
result is informal induction. It is not implied here that informal in 
ductions are inferior products; some of the ideas that govern our 
lives were arrived at informally. The formal induction, however, is an 
investigative job. The writer of such a piece outlines his problem and 
determines what he needs to do to arrive at sound conclusions; he 
devises methods for gathering his material and maintains scientific or 
objective control of it. 

In writing articles that carry informal inductions, the student should 
turn to his own experiences. He should go not to the unusual experi 
ences he has had but to the ones that recur constantly. There is a 
knack to the discovery of subjects for these papers but mastery of it 
is not at all difficult, and when the student has achieved his mastery 
he should no longer have trouble in finding subjects to write about. 
The key to the knack lies in the act of turning away from the unusual 
to the usual as subject matter, in the act of turning away from the one 
striking experience to the little experiences which do not amount to 
much individually, but which taken together amount to an idea of 
more significance than strange happenings or violent accidents can 
ever give. 



THIRTY MILLION NEW AMERICANS 

Louis Adamic 

i. WITHIN its population of slightly less than one hundred and 
thirty million, the United States has today over thirty million citi 
zens the overwhelming majority of them young citizens who 
are the American-born children of immigrant parents of various 

1 For formal inductions see Section IV, Primary Source Papers. 
* From My America ( 1938), by Louis Adamic. Published by Harper and Broth 
ers. Copyright, 1938, by Louis Adamic. 



INFORMAL INDUCTIONS 39 

nationalities: German, Italian, Polish, Czech, Slovak, Serbian, Cro 
atian, Slovenian, Bulgarian, Jewish, Russian, Carpatho-Russian, 
Ukrainian, Lithuanian, Finnish, Hungarian, Norwegian, Swedish, 
Danish, Dutch, French, Flemish, Spanish, Portuguese, Rumanian, 
Armenian, Syrian, Lett, Albanian, Greek, Turkish, and, of course, 
English, Scotch, and Irish. The country as a whole is but dimly 
cognizant of this fact arid its implications which, in my opinion, 
are of fundamental and urgent importance in America s contem 
porary social and cultural scene. It should perhaps particularly in 
terest those Americans who consider themselves of the old Anglo- 
Saxon stock: for here is a tremendous new element what will it 
do to the old stock? to the country? how will it affect the de 
velopment of civilization arid culture, of racial types on this conti 
nent? 

2. These questions had vaguely interested and perturbed me al 
ready in the late 1920 s and the earliest 1930 s, but I did not really 
go into them till 1934. I have told that in the spring of that year 
I went on a lecture tour. It took me to the great industrial centers 
of New York State, New Jersey, Pennsylvania, Ohio, Michigan, 
Illinois, Indiana, Wisconsin, and Minnesota, where the population 
is preponderantly "foreign." Actually, however, my trip was not 
so much a series of speaking engagements as an attempt a device 
to get some clear idea, if possible, of this immense mass of so- 
called "second-generation" citizens, numerically predominant in 
some of the most important cities and towns, whom I choose to 
designate the New Americans. I spoke, or rather tried to speak, 
more or less on the subject of this chapter, to about fifty audi 
ences of anywhere from one hundred to twenty-five hundred men 
and women and young people, in big towns like Pittsburgh, Cleve 
land, Akron, Detroit, Chicago, South Bend, Milwaukee, St. Paul, 
and Duluth, and smaller communities like McKeesport, Canons- 
burg, Ambridge, Farrell, Sharon, and Strabane, Pennsylvania; Lo- 
rain, Ohio; Flint, Michigan; and Hibbing and Eveleth, Minnesota. 
Some of my audiences were almost wholly "foreign," others mixed 
"foreign" and old-stock American. At the time I knew very little 
about the subject; I merely sensed its importance; and, to keep go 
ing for an hour or so, I discussed things more or less akin to it 
and at the end, admitting my ignorance, invited my listeners to 



40 THE EXPOSITION OF IDEAS 

get up and say anything they liked in relation to my remarks. 
Those who were too diffident to talk in a crowd, I asked to speak 
to me after the lecture or call me at the hotel or write me a letter. 
Many of them, both old-stock Americans and New Americans, re 
sponded to this invitation. Some of them then asked me to their 
homes. Others wrote me long letters. And the result was that be 
fore my tour was half over I began to think that these New Ameri 
cans twenty-six million of them in 1930 and increasing at the 
rate of perhaps more than a million a year constituted one of the 
greatest and most basic problems in this country; in some respects, 
greater and more basic perhaps than, say, the problem of un 
employment, and almost as urgent. 

3. This problem has existed, in nearly the same proportions that it 
exists today, for a long time, but few people have shown eagerness 
and ability to deal with it in a broad, fundamental way, or even 
to discuss it. Much attention most of it, as already suggested, ill- 
focused has been paid to the problem of the foreign-born; but 
not to that of their children, the American-born seconcT generation. 
There is no acute or intelligent appreciation of it. Very little is 
being done about it; and the longer it is neglected the worse it 
will become, both for the New Americans and in the long run for 
America as a whole. 

4. In this chapter it is not my ambition to present the problem in 
all its details, ramifications, significances, for it is a vastly compli 
cated one and different in every locality and in every racial group; 
and, frankly, I still have a great deal to learn about it. My purpose 
here is merely to give as strong and broad a general suggestion 
as I can of its character and what I think might be done concern 
ing it. 

5. The chief and most important fact (the only one I shall stress 
here) about the New Americans is that all too many of them are 
oppressed by feelings of inferiority in relation to their fellow-citi 
zens of older stock, to the main stream of American life, and to 
the problem of life as a whole; which, of course, is bad for them 
as individuals, but, since there are so many of them and their 
number is still rapidly increasing, even worse for the country. 

6. These feelings of inferiority are to some degree extensions of 
their parents feelings of inferiority as immigrants in a country so 



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drastically different from their native lands. The fathers and 
mothers of these millions of New Americans were naturally at a 
disadvantage even in the most friendly surroundings, and the sur 
roundings were seldom wholly and continually friendly. As for 
eigners, in many cases not speaking the English language, they 
occupied inferior positions in the country s social, economic, and 
political life. Most of them were workers, performing, by and large, 
the meanest tasks and receiving meager wages. All too often in one 
form or another, they bumped up against racial or general anti- 
immigrant prejudice. Old-stock American workers looked askance 
at them. When work slackened, they were laid off, as I suggest in 
the first chapter of this section, before native employees. Many of 
them lived in the worst districts of their cities and towns, and were 
called Hunkies or Bohunks, Squareheads, Dagoes or Wops, Polacks 
or Litvaks, Sheenies or Kikes. They were frequently and unavoid 
ably discriminated against. And in the face of all this, they in 
evitably felt, as individuals and as members of their immigrant 
groups, somewhat inferior in their relation to America and to other 
people here, and their tendency was to segregate themselves and 
mingle as much as possible only with their own nationals. And, just 
as inevitable, that feeling and that tendency were extended to the 
children, these New Americans, who shared their parents lives and 
experiences, and who too were (and still are) called Hunkies and 
Dagoes by children of Anglo-Saxon origin, and whose names 
names like Zamblaoskas, Krmpotich, and Wojiezkowski were (and 
are) subjects for jokes on the part of ignorant teachers, at which 
the whole school laughed. 

7. But in this respect the majority of New Americans, as individuals, 
are in an even more unfortunate and uncomfortable position than 
were (or still are) their immigrant parents. The latter, even if 
they were uneducated peasants or laborers, living here on the 
lowest social-economic levels, had in them a consciousness, or at 
least a powerful instinctive feeling, of some kind of racial or cul 
tural background. They knew who they were. They remembered 
their native lands. They were Italians or Croatians, Finns or Slo 
venians; and that meant something to them. Many came from coun 
tries which culturally and perhaps in some other respects were 
superior to the United States, which as a new country had not 



42 THE EXPOSITION OF IDEAS 

yet had time to develop along those lines; and when oppressed by 
feelings of inferiority induced by their circumstances in America, 
could take partial refuge in their racial and cultural backgrounds. 
Some of the better educated ones, who did not have merely in 
stinctive feelings about the culture and history of their old coun 
tries, but were also intellectually conscious of their heritage, could 
even look clown upon America and consider themselves superior to 
old-time Americans, thus counterbalancing or compensating them 
selves as persons from time to time for the unpleasant feelings 
about their immigrant status in the New World. This was unhealthy 
socially in the long run, for it was not reaching out toward an 
understanding with America, real or basic, but it did help indi 
vidual immigrants to stand up as men and women. 

8. Unlike their parents, who are (or were) aware not only of their 
European background but of having made the transition from 
Europe to America and gained a foothold here, most New Amer 
icans have no consciousness or instinctive feeling of any racial or 
cultural background, of their being part of any sort of continuity in 
human or historic experience. Some of them seem almost as if 
they had dropped off Mars and, during the drop, forgotten all 
about Mars. I know this to be so; I talked to scores and scores 
of them in more than a dozen different cities and towns, not only 
during that tour in 1934, but on several occasions and in various 
connections since then. In the majority of cases, the immigrant 
parents uneducated working people or peasants from the vari 
ous European countries were too inarticulate to tell their sons 
and daughters who they (the parents) really were, and thus trans 
mit to them some feeling or knowledge of their background. 

9. The average Slavic peasant, for instance, who came to this coun 
try during the last twenty or thirty years in nine chances out of 
ten is unable to inform his children adequately who he is, what 
his old country is like, what his background (which, ipso facto, is 
his children s background) consists of. He tells his numerous sons 
and daughters that he is a Pole, a Croatian, a Slovak, a Slovenian; 
but that is about all. The children do not know what that really 
means. The man acts as if he were proud of being what he is, 
at least in the privacy of his home; for his instincts and his memo- 
lies of the old country occasionally make him act that way. To 



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his children, however, who are growing up under anything but 
the best influences of American life and who do not know that 
behind their father s pride is a rich and vital past, he very often 
seems not a little ridiculous, certainly not worthy of their respect. 
To them he is just a Hunky or Polack, a "working stiff," a poor, 
pathetic creature constantly at somebody s mercy and repeatedly 
stepped upon, and as such not much according to American stand 
ards standards which they pick up in the movies and from 
other powerful agencies in American life. Often they are half 
ashamed of him. The immigrant mother frequently finds herself 
in the same situation. There is a mutual lack of understanding; 
the children as they grow older have begun to grasp at superficial 
and obvious American realities, and sink themselves in America 
as far as they can by adopting the easiest, most obvious ways of 
the country of their birth. And the results arc unsatisfactory fam 
ily life, personal tragedies of all sorts, maladjustments, social per 
versities. 

10. It is not unusual for boys and girls in their late or even their 
middle teens to break away from the homes of their immigrant 
parents, and eventually to repudiate entirely their origin and to 
Anglicize their Polish, Croatian, Finnish, or Lithuanian names, 
which old-time Americans find so difficult to pronounce and so 
amusing. But that, of course, does not solve their problem. In most 
instances it only makes it worse, though as a rule they do not 
realize that. I met New Americans of this type; they were invari 
ably hollow, absurd, objectionable persons. 

11. However, the situation of many of those who do not break with 
their parents, change their "foreign" names, and wholly repudiate 
their origin is but little better than of those who do. They were 
born here and legally, technically, are citizens of the United States; 
but few even in the most fortunate homes have any strong 
feeling that they belong here and are part of this country. For, by 
and large, the education which is inflicted on them in public 
schools and high schools and in parochial schools, or in colleges, 
fails to make them Anglo-Saxon Americans or to give them any 
vital and lasting appreciation of the American heritage, while their 
Anglo-Saxon schoolmates, purposeful ly-by-accident stumbling over 
their feet and calling them Hunkies and Dagoes, and their teachers, 



44 THE EXPOSITION OF IDEAS 

making fun of their names, increase their feeling that they are not 
indigenous Americans, but outsiders who are more or less tol 
erated. Their instincts, if they have any, are at cross-purposes. 
They are bewildered persons, constantly oppressed, as I have said, 
by feelings of inferiority. Their personalities are faint, lopsided, 
out of focus. 

12. These feelings of inferiority manifest themselves variously. Some 
of the New Americans turn themselves inside out and become 
chauvinistically patriotic; only their chauvinism has no basis in 
any vital feeling. It is insecure, empty, mere lip-service, intended 
only to impress the dominant Anglo-Saxon element, with which 
they have to cope; and hence worse for the development of their 
own characters than chauvinism that has some basis in convic 
tion or feeling in racial or national background. And where there 
is any sincerity in this sort of "patriotism" it is based solely on 
shallow materialistic concepts, which they have picked up in school 
and elsewhere. "This is the greatest country . . . we have the big 
gest buildings . . . the best ice cream . . . more automobiles, 
more bathtubs than all the rest of the world," etc. Without realiz 
ing it, these New Americans are ready for any sort of shallow, 
ignorant nationalist or fascist movement which will not directly 
attack the new racial strains in America s population; and thou 
sands of them perhaps would have no great trouble in bringing 
themselves to deny their parents, pose as old-stock Americans, and 
serve even a movement which would terrorize the immigrants and 
their children as the Hitler movement in Germany terrorized the 
Jews. 

13. Other New Americans turn their inferiority inside out in another 
way. They become loud and tough, sometimes actively anti-social. 
But let me hasten to repeat that this last group is not so numerous as 
generally imagined by those who occasionally glance at crime and 
the juvenile-delinquency statistics, or who read the headlines. The 
surprising thing to me is that there is not more delinquency among 
the New Americans. And I should add too that the chauvinists 
mentioned above are not very numerous either. These categories 
together include less than five per cent of the New Americans. 

14. The majority of the grownup New Americans just hang back 
from the main stream of life in this country, forming a tremendous 



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mass of neutral, politically lifeless citizenry; while their younger, 
fellow New Americans, boys and girls in their teens (about twelve 
million of them), now in 1938 attending public and parochial 
schools and high schools, show dangerous signs of becoming the 
same kind of neutral, unstirring citizens unless something is done 
about it. There is among them little aggressiveness, little spirit of 
any sort. Most of them merely hope to get along, to get by, some 
how. Without a vital sense of background, perennially oppressed 
by the feeling that they are outsiders and thus inferior, they will 
live outside the main stream of America s national life. This is 
especially true of groups which linguistically and culturally are 
farthest removed from the Anglo-Saxon, and still more of groups 
which, besides being unrelated to the Anglo-Saxon, are (or till 
lately have been) suppressed or subject nationalities in Europe. 

15. And these widespread personal inferiority feelings are producing 
in large sections of this New American element actual inferiority in 
character, mind, and physique. There is no doubt, by and large, 
in bodily and personal qualities many of the immigrants children 
do not favorably compare with their parents. They cannot look one 
in the eye. They are shy. They stutter and stammer. If an old- 
stock American, or anyone of some standing, is due to come to 
their house, they fuss and fret with their parents. They force their 
peasant mothers to go to the hairdresser, to put on American ladies 
dresses and high-heeled shoes which often make the mothers in 
congruous figures. Then, when the visitor arrives, they tremble 
at what the old lady or old man might say, or that he might mis 
pronounce English words even worse than usually. Their limp 
handshakes gave me creepy feelings all the way from New York 
to the Iron Range in Minnesota. Those handshakes symbolized 
for me the distressing tendency on the part of this vast and grow 
ing section of America s population toward characterlessness, lack 
of force and spirit, and other inferior personal qualities. 

16. From whatever angle one looks at it, this is a serious matter for 
the New Americans as individuals and for America. Thirty million 
or even fifteen or twenty million, a probable number to which 
most or all of my generalizations here are directly applicable 
are a lot of people, and this "second generation" will be (many 
already are) the fathers and mothers of the third generation, and 



46 THE EXPOSITION OF IDEAS 

it is not impossible that in two or three decades half of the popu 
lation of the United States will be of these new cultural and na 
tional strains. 

17. What then should be done what can be done about it? 

18. In going about the country in 1934, and subsequently, I met 
several New Americans of whom most of the things I say above 
are not true. None of them was totally free of personal inferiority 
feelings (in fact, I find that even very few old-stock Americans 
are entirely free of them), but they were, nevertheless, fine-look 
ing young men and women, boys and girls, keen and alert, ar 
ticulate, ambitious, personally charming. Some were still in high 
school, one or two in college, and doing well as students; in fact, 
rather better than old-stock American students. Three or four of 
the boys were locally prominent football and baseball players. 1 
Their handshakes were firm and they looked me in the eye. A few 
had a lively sense of humor which they could apply to themselves. 
Their laughter had a healthy ring. They knew something of what 
was going on in the country, in the world. Some of them", although 
still very young, seemed to know what they wanted from life. 
Two or three had literary ambitions. One told me he would try 
to get into politics "in a big way," by which I understood that 
the United States Senate was not beyond his gaze; and his name 
was Wojciezkowski. Another, attending the University of Pitts 
burgh, thought he would get a job in a steel mill and become a 
labor leader. In a bleak iron town in Minnesota I met a pretty 
girl of Slovenian parentage who was the best student in her school, 
had a vivid personality, and seemed entirely normal in all her atti 
tudes. And so on, and so on. They impressed me as real, solid per 
sons who would be an asset to any country. 

19. Nearly all of them, in their childhood and later, had been un 
pleasantly affected by their parents humiliating experiences as 
immigrants and industrial workers, and had had disagreeable ex 
periences of their own which touched them vitally. They had been 
called Hunkies, Polacks, Litvaks, Dagoes. Many of them had had 

1 Athletes with "foreign" names, as generally known, are not unusual. But 
most of them, in high schools and colleges as well as in more or less profes 
sional sports, are New Americans who are exceptional in the sense as stated in 
this and the ensuing few paragraphs. 



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(and were still having) difficulties with their names. A young 
man of Lithuanian parentage in Pittsburgh, and attending the 
university there, who was attractive, "clean cut" in the best Ameri 
can sense, but whose surname was Lamblagoskas, told me that 
when he was a young boy in McKeesport the teacher had been 
too lazy or too indifferent to take the trouble to pronounce his 
name, so she had called him only Johnnie, while all the other 
children in class had both a first name and a surname. Then the 
two-name children had begun to call him "J ust Johnnie" or "John 
nie the Litvak," which annoyed him very much. As in hundreds 
of thousands of similar instances, this, in conjunction with other 
experiences of that nature, produced in him an acute inferiority 
complex which oppressed him for years "until," as he put it, "I 
sort of worked myself out of it." 

20. A young man of Slavic origin, whose surname also was difficult 
for Anglo-Saxon tongues, told me that in his boyhood he had 
suffered a great deal because old-stock American boys called him 
"Sneeze-it," because in school one day the teacher had said that 
his name could not be pronounced but thought that perhaps she 
could sneeze it. "But now," he said to me, "things like that don t 
bother me very much." 

21. Others in this category with whom I came in contact had had 
and were still having inevitably, let me repeat other troubles 
on account of being immigrants children; but these troubles were 
not seriously affecting them, were not preventing them from de 
veloping into balanced, strong and healthy, charming human be 
ings. 

22. Why? There are at least two explanations. One is that most of 
them lived, during at least part of their lives, in comparatively 
favorable economic circumstances, and their parents managed to 
give them some schooling in addition to the legal requirement, 
which helped them more or less to work themselves out of their 
various second-generation complexes. The other explanation (prob 
ably not unrelated to, but I think more important than, the first) 
is that, in all cases without exception which came to my atten 
tion, their fathers and mothers were wise and articulate enough to 
convey to them something of their backgrounds in the old countries; 
tell them what it meant to be a Finn, a Slovenian, a Serbian, a 



48 THE EXPOSITION OF IDEAS 

Croatian, a Slovak, a Czech, a Pole, or a Lithuanian, and inspire 
in them some respect for that meaning; make them conscious of 
their backgrounds and heritage, give them some sense of con 
tinuity, some feeling of their being part of America, in which im 
migrants like themselves played an important role part of some 
thing bigger and better than the bleak, utterly depressing existence 
led by them and their neighbors in the grimy steel mill and iron and 
coal mining towns where they lived. 

23. During my 1934 trip and later I met, as I say, scores of these 
New Americans. Among them were some of the most attractive 
people I have encountered anywhere. Some of these I already have 
mentioned. Another was a girl born and still living in Cleveland 
whose father and mother were Slovenians; and there is no doubt 
in my mind that much of her charm issued from the fact that she 
was keenly conscious of her parents native land and culture. Two 
years before they had taken her on a visit to Slovenia, and she 
had discovered a tiny country which is physically as lovely as 
anything she had seen in America, with an old, mellotv culture, 
a rich folklore, a considerable modern literature, and interesting 
folkways behind which there are centuries of wisdom and a long, 
unbroken chain of experience on the part of a quiet, peace-loving 
little nation that has lived there for a thousand years. 

24. Still another of these exceptional New Americans was a young 
six-footer of Finnish parentage on the Iron Range in Minnesota. 
He had never been to Finland, but knew a good deal about the 
basic cultural qualities of that country from his mother s word- 
pictures of it. He also had a fluent command of the Finnish lan 
guage which did not interfere with indeed, enriched his Eng 
lish. He knew dozens of Finnish folk ballads and lyrics and sang 
them well, and had read and reread in the original the great Fin 
nish epic poem "The Kalevala." He was quietly proud of his peo 
ple s achievements on the Iron Range both in the mines and on 
the land, and thought that Minnesota was his country. Despite 
the bleakness of the region, and the hard life led there by most 
of the people, especially the Finns, he loved the Iron Range. His 
people had worked and suffered there for decades and converted 
great parts of it into farming country, although before they came 
nobody had thought it could ever be made suitable for anything. 



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25. In short, he was conscious of his background; he had a sense of 
continuity, of being part of a great human experience, which was 
part of the still greater American adventure. Largely, I think, in 
consequence of this, a strength of character was discernible in his 
every move and utterance. 

26. I could give several more such cases of exceptional New Ameri 
cans, but that would be, in the main, repeating what I tell of the 
girl in Cleveland and the boy in Minnesota. All of them repre 
senting, however, but a small minority were conscious and, in 
a greater or lesser degree, proud of their racial groups back 
ground in the old countries, and some also of their racial groups 
background and history in this country. They had a sense of con 
tinuity, a feeling of being a part of something. And they, I think, 
are the answer to the question: What should be done about the 
problem sketched in this chapter? 

27. The answer is that the New Americans, whose inarticulate and 
otherwise inadequate through no fault of their own parents 
have been unable to give them much along these lines, should be 
helped to acquire a knowledge of, and pride in, their own herit 
age and makeup; and this help should come, in very large part, 
from already established and functioning social and cultural in 
stitutions and agencies schools, libraries, settlement and com 
munity houses, newspapers, lecture forums, and so on in co 
operation with a central organization which should be formed for 
the purpose of devising ways to disseminate information about 
the several racial or national groups represented among the thirty 
million "second generation" citizens, of studying the problem and 
working out programs of action for its gradual solution or ameliora 
tion, from the point of view of honest, intelligent concern for the 
country s future. 

28. By now it is obvious to many people interested in the problem 
that it is impossible and, what is more, undesirable to make the 
offspring of Lithuanians or Serbians into Anglo-Saxons; that the 
aim should be rather to help them become real men and women 
on the pattern of their own natural cultures. There should be recog 
nition of the fact that America is not purely an Anglo-Saxon 
country; if only by virtue of numbers, it is also something else. 
A new conception of America is necessary. There is no doubt that 



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in the few places where no attempts have been made by "patri 
otic" old-time Americans to force immigrants children into the 
old-stock American mold as, for instance, in the Bohemian com 
munities in Nebraska and Texas, where Bohemians already are in 
the fourth generation; in the little city of Hamtramck near Detroit, 
where the public school system consistently encourages the large 
Polish group there to keep its individuality; in O. E. Rolvaag s 
Norwegian settlements in the northwest; in some of the foreign 
"colonies" in New York City, notably the Ukrainian one on the 
Lower East Side; or in several small Polish, Italian, and Finnish 
rural communities in New England, upstate New York, and else 
wherethe development of character, mentality, and physique in 
the New American element has been vastly more felicitous than 
where such attempts have been made. 

29. Social and cultural institutions and agencies in various cities and 
towns where the problem stares them all in the face wherever 
they turn already are beginning to do things to help New Ameri 
cans develop more or less on the pattern of their backgrounds. 
To give a few examples: in Cleveland the excellent public li 
brary organization, with its scores of branch libraries, has begun 
to help the New Americans to learn something about themselves, 
their parents native lands and their national groups* history in 
this country, particularly in Cleveland. All three of the big news 
papers there have special reporters covering the "foreign sections" 
of the city, and print feature articles about the various foreign 
groups contribution to the growth and development of Cleveland. 
Public school and high school teachers in Cleveland, as in one or 
two other cities, whose classes are anywhere from forty to eighty 
per cent "foreign," are becoming eagerly interested in "second- 
generation problems" which face them in the form of