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PHILOSOPHICAL AND CRITICAL
OBSERVATIONS
O N T H E
NATURE, CHARACTERS,
AND
VARIOUS SPECIES
OF
COMPOSITION,
By JOHN O G I L V I E, D. D.
IN TWO VOLUMES.
VOL. II.
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BOOK, II.
Of Compofition as diftinguiflied by par-,
ticular Characters and Species.
SECTION I.
Of the ftyle of Compofition in genera/, its
diftinguijhing properties and defetfs. p. i
SECTION II.
Ofjimpk Compofition* 37
SECTION III.
Of ' perfpicuous Compojition. 83
SECTION IV.
Of elegant Compofition. 122
SECTION V.
Offublime Compofition* 158
SECTION VI.
Of nervous Gompofaion. 199
SECTION VII.
Of cor reft Compojition .
ERRATA.
Page 24. laft line of the note, after Vid. addlAv. Hift. pafiim. P.
26. 1. 3. after fable o^</ when. P. 36. laft line, add up to be peiufed as
a talk. P. 113. 1. 22. Jelemtd. P. 130. \.z.for thruftt read throws.
P. 167. 1. 9. for criteria read criterion. P. 171. J. ai. afttr when add
an. P. 186. 1. II. for particularly read particularity. P. 202. 1. M. for
\s read 3.\c. P. 223 1. 22. for illtiftratiofls read illuftration. P. 238.
1. 12. far feparately read feldom. P. 246. 1. 6. of the note, far allows
read allowed. P. 261. 1. iQ-for cafe* rfjJ caufes. P. 280. I. 5. for cri-
teria read character. P. 286. 1. I. for tells re«d tell. P. 331. 1. 7. for
abjurations rtad adjurations.
PHILOSOPHICAL AND CRITICAL
OBSERVATIONS
O N
COMPOSITION.
BOOK II.
Of Competition as diftinguifted by particular
Characters and Species.
SECTION I.
Of the Jlyle of Compojition in general, its
dijlinguijhing properties and defeffs.
FR. O M the obfervations we have made
in a former part of this work on
Compofition, as indicating the intellectual
character, and as giving exercife to the
powers by which man is diftinguiihed in
all their variety of combination ; from
thefe we are naturally led to confider the
external marks or fignatures by which we
VOL. II. B eftimate
2 Philofophical and Critical
eftimate in the various branches of the art
(at lead in a great meafure) the excellence
or defedl of the artift's execution. This
prefents to us a view of this fubjecl: more
pleafmg perhaps than we have hitherto
taken ; and fuggefls at the fame time the
anfwer to an important enquiry; — by
what method we may diftinguilh genuine
from apparent beauty in the performances
that fall under our examination ; that
faults by being perceived may be avoided ;
and genuine, not feeming excellence, may
become the object of imitation.
It ought to be obferved in the prefent,
as in many other inftances, that the dif-
ficulty of making this diftinction is en-
creafed more perhaps by a habit of trufting
to the judgment of thofe whom we have
been accuftcmed to hold in eftimation,
than from any inability in a great number
of readers to think juftly for themfelves
on this fubjedt. It happens frequently
that thofe who are diffident of their own
feutiments are milled in their judgment
of things by confiding implicitly in the
decifion of others, who, with inferior merit
perhaps
Observations on Compofition* 3
perhaps to themfelves, have pretenfions
incomparably greater; and impofed upon
by an illufion which reafon would have
diflipated, permit their opinions to be in-
fluenced by falfe prepofleffions, in matters
of indifpenfable importance.
Among the almoft innumerable expe-
dients by which the judgment of mankind
may be marked from its native bias, to
form falfe as well as inadequate eftimates,
one of the moil powerful is that prepof-
feffion which the mind naturally and juftly
entertains in favour of a work diflin-
guifhed by judicious fentiments, in what-
ever drefs thefe may be exhibited to ob-
fervation. In fuch cafes the attainment
of an end of primary confequence makes
us overlook a circumftance that is deemed
to be comparatively infignificant ; and
even a reader, whofe good fenfe might (if
unbiafled in its decifion) mow him the
proper value of both objects, is taught to
under-rate the one, becaufe perhaps he
very properly thinks that too high an efti-
mation cannot be formed of the other.
R 2 This
4 P hilofophical and Critical
This remark (we may obferve by the bye)
is one of thofe which difcover the imper-
fection of the human mind in a very ilrik-
ing point of view, and it extends as much
to the various tranfadions . of life, as to
matters that may be deemed of pure fpe-
culation. Thus a beautiful and a deformed
figure, prefented at the fame time before
the eye, will imprefs ideas upon the found-
eft underilanding, which an examination
of each of thefe feparately will enable it
afterwards to correct. The faults of the
former will be found to have efcaped ob-
fervation only as obliterated by the more
glaring deformities of the latter; as on
the contrary, beauties will be found in this
laft when contemplated apart, which the
luftre of its companion has fcreened effec-
tually from fuperficial inveftigation. Re-
flection will convince us that we form
eftimates equally inadequate almoft always
when objects cf contrary natures are fet
in immediate oppofition. The advantages
arifmg from any acquifition are never feen
in fo ftriking a light, as when contrafted
with
Obferv 3t ions on Compqfition. 5
with the lofs or the want of this benefit.
We are ready in iuch a cafe to include
every enjoyment in the poflefTion of the
one, and every mifery in the approach of
the other ; contrary to that dictate of fober
reafon which would foon convince us that
the lofs of fome acquirements is as necef-
lary at one time to prevent fatiety, as the
pofieffion of thefe at another is to confti-
tiite happinefs. — But let us return from
this little digreflion.
To ob (Inactions arifmg from the motives
here enumerated, we may moft probably
afcribe the little improvement which the
ftile of philofophical Compofition received
for fome ages after the fall of the Roman
Empire. Thofe who profefTed philofophy
in thefe ages collected the maxims without
imbibing the fpirit of the ancients ; and
having obtained the reputation of thinking
judicioufly in confequence of a few meta-
phyfical diftindtions, the obfcurity of an
embarraffed and inelegant diction, like the
hieroglyphical learning of ./Egypt, was
deemed a proper veil to fcreen their tenets
B 3 from
6 Phllofophlcal and Critical
from the cognifance of the vulgar *. Their
readers, impofed upon by the pretenfions
of their teachers to fuperior knowledge
and underftanding, received their inftruc-
tions as oracles emitted by wifdpm ; which,
conveyed in any form of words whatever,
were either admitted as truths irrefragably
certain ; or admired, when not underftood,
as indications of profound fagacity. In
this manner the jargon of the ichools not
only pafled upon the lefs intelligent for-
found philofophy, but even the errors of
•certain writers came to be held in vene-
ration ; and obfcurity of expreflion, the
capital fault of the ftyle of Compofition,
to be regarded as the myfterious vehicle
of truths derived from the deepeft dif-
quifition f.
While
* Among thefe the difciplcs of a philofopher were
bound to take an oath. E« inroxpu^oi? raura t"Xjnvt
xat TOJ? aTfcj&UTOK xa* a^vr.rot; JIATI [A,ITOL$I$O-J»I.
Seld, de Diis Syr.
t The bad confequences that arofe from the ab-
furd, trifling, and fcandalous do&rines of the fchool-
men in the I2th, 13th, I4th, and I5th centuries, are
now fo well known that it would be improper here to
trace
Obf equations on Compcfition. j
While it fared thus with the nobleft of
fciences, the arts, whofe improvement con-
tributes
trace thefe at any length. We (hall therefore only
obferve, as a remark connected with the prefent fub-
je£l, that the barbarous language in \vhich thefe weie
doathed contributed as much as any other circumftance
to prevent genuine philofophy from being at the fame
time fooner and more univerfally propagated. Inftead
of claflical purity and elegance, I-Lilc', Aquinas, Bo-
naventure, Achillini, Albertus Magnus, and many
others of the fame clafs, ftudied only a language
fui.ed to their own barbarous and unintelligible dif-
tinclions. One of thefe in particular (Achillini) car-
ried to fo great a length this talent of perplexing every
fubjedt by diftin£tions, that his acutcnefs was com-
pared to that of the devil. " Fu acutiffimo argumen-
tutore (fays an Italian hiftoi ian, of the writers of Bo-
logna) onde ne circoli dove argumentava e non era
conofciuto, pafso in proverbio qu'ell aut Dkibolus, aut
Achillinus." Orlan. Notiz. degli bcritt. Bologn Per-
haps one reafbn which contributed principally to, keep
mankind for fo many ages in ignorance of every thing
but this jargon, which reafon has now fo totally ex-
ploded, was the ftate of modern languages then in
their infancy, and unfit (from the multifarious dialecls
then blended together, but having formed no perma-
nent ftandard) to convey the principles of any art or
fcience whatever. Metaphyfical fubtlcties, therefore,
fcreened from cenfure by the facred name of 'Arijlo-
telian philofophy^ were cloathetl in a language refined by
the efforts of a Tully and a Virgil ; but thefe having
been exploded by the Quodlibetarians, Sententiarians,
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8 Phikfophlcal and Critical
tributes to that of philofophy, with which
thefe maintain a conftant and indiffoluble
union,
Nominate, and Scotifls*, (thefe Pandals of fcienct who
made havock of the Roman learning as much «s their
predeceflbrs had done of its empire) the admiration of
the vulgar was kept up not only by the apprehended
importance of certain tenets, but by the very circum-
flance perhaps of their being unintelligible; and as
the Roman language was ftudied only for the fake of
a few hackneyed phrafes, known likewife to a very
fmall number, no man had either inclination or ability
to expofe the abfurdity of their fyftems. The human
mind however muft have emerged in the courfe of
fo many ages from this ftate of Gothic ignorance, had
not men's eyes been artfully dazzled by the fplendor
of an illuftrious name, and one of the greateft bene-
factors of mankind rendered, by a ftrange perverfion,
the patron of abfurdity and nonfenfe. It muft, no
doubt, be acknowledged, that fome very abftrufe dif-
tinclions in the logic and phyfics of Ariftotle perhaps
originally led the way to thofe verbal controverfies,
and unintelligible senigmas, which were fanttioned by
his authority. But nothing ferves to difcover more
clearly the danger arifing from an indulgence of this
metaphyfical fubtlety than the confequences of which
it became productive. The dreams which every dif-
tempered zealot conceived with regard to election,
free will, predeflination, &c. were retailed as the
• Of thefe parties fome took their name from perfortmnces of
Thomas Aquinas, entitled, Qnodlibetical Propofilions, Commentaries
on the Sentences of Ariftutle, &c. or from his name Thorais, or from
that of Duns Scotus, the founder of another ttibe*
tenets
Obfervations on Compojttion. 9
union, were equally neglected ; and genius,
like a tree capable of bearing the richeft
productions, but rifing uncultivated in a
wildernefs, difplayed extravagant though
luxuriant fhoots, inftead of that mature and
beautiful affemblage which is the off-
fpring of culture, induftry, and attention *.
During
tenets of this great phiJofopher * ; and the play of
words introduced into philofophy, was fcreened from
cenfure under the name of criteria, in imitation of the
fame model by whole aid the boundaries of truth and
falihood may be always difcriminated. <« Di cio ce
doveva in gran parteobligazione ad Ariftotele, il quali
fe non fi foffb adoperato in dijlinguer operaiamente i ge-
neri delli rngioni, noi mancavamo d't mo/ti articoli di
Fede." Palavicin. Thus Compofition in every fenfc
of the word, was obliterated dining the reign of thtfe
profound metaphyficians ; and perfpicuity of expref-
fion once loft, a man's learning and fagacity came to
be eflimated by aflertions which could not be refuted
by the human underftanding, becaufe they exceeded
its comprehenfion.
* That imagination which is the principal charac-
teriftic of genius, differs in this important reipecl;
* See the works of Thomas Anglus, who wrote io the i^h centurv.
Others difcovered in the works of A'iftotle, the myftcries of the
trini'y and incarnation. At thf. fame time thefe men were themfclv(.s
<b ignorant of the language in which Ariftotle wrote, '.hit one of rhem
in a commentary on his works, mil'alting thr wotrf an" it for <x^X»;,
a mufical inftrument, adduced thirteen proportions to prove that the
foul cf man is a pipe,
from
io Philojbphical and Critical
During the declenfion of the Roman em-
pire, the arts which had fiouriihed in the
time of its maturity, decayed gradually as
its
from the faculty of underftanding with regard to the
objects about which it is employed, that though the
latter may, as we have fcen, be perverted in its ufe to
fupport trifling or even abfurd proportions, and to
render fa!fhood plaufible by fubtlety of difiinftion ;
vet the genuine offspring of the former however un-
cultivated are always beautiful, and though in a favage
or barbarous age, its range may be contracted within
a narrower compafs, or its procedure marked by ex-
centricity and wildnefs, yet ft ill there is fomething
even in this irregulaiity which the mind contemplates
with delight, and approves by a natural and irrcfiftible
impulfe. Of the truth of this obfervation we have a
ftriking evidence prefented to us by the prefent fubjecl,
as at the very time when philofophy was reduced by
the fchoolmen to the defpicable fituation above-men-
tioned, poetry cultivated by a great and original ge-
nius, produced fruit which every fucceeding age has
beheld with admiration. The learned reader will
perceive immediately, that the perfon here referred to
is the great Italian poet Dante^ who fiourifhed about
the end of the thirteenth century ; and was contemporary
with the writers mentioned in the preceding note.
.Stimulated at the fame time by the propenfity of his
genius, and by the mod implacable refentment of his
country's ingratitude, he produced a poem in that age
of fuperftition full of the keeneft and moft pointed in-
veclive ; in which, though deficient in difpofition and
in
Observations on Compofition. \ i
its dominion became contra£led, and its
inhabitants, inflead of cultivating thefe,
which
in claflical purity of language*, he lavifhed the beau-
ties of poetry in fuch a manner on his fubjeft, that,
even two centuries after his death, Francis I. felt the
(ling of that fatire fo forcibly which was levelled at
one of his predeceflbrs f> that unable to bear the far-
eaiin, he commanded it to be ftruck out from the edi-
tion of his works then extant in France. — At a time
when the world was ftill buried in ignorance, the
celebrated Petrarch fucceeded to this original ; and
with a genius lefs daring and animated, but gentler
and more amiable than that of the former, contributed
to prevent a tafle for letters from being wholly extir-
pated, and to carry on the work of reformation.
Thefe and fome other writers formed a kind of barrier
againft the encroachments of the fchoolmen ; and by
polifhing gradually the language of their country,
opened a way to that clear and comprehenfive philo-
fophy which fucceeded to metaphyfical impoflure.
The laft mentioned poet in particular, wrote many
pieces in the language of ancient Rome, which (as he
was publicly honoured with the laurel) had their
weight in rendering it more univerfally ftudied. Claf-
fical elegance in this manner came gradually to be
admired and imitated ; and thofe unintelligible quib-
bles which had been deemed the efforts of profound
fagacity, gave way to refearches in which human na-
* This deficiency can only be imputed to the age in which be
wrote. See Lillius Gerald. Hift. Poet.
t Charles of V«loi=, whofe predeceflbr Hugh C^per, he ftigmatizeth
as the fon of a butcher.
ture
i 2 Philofophical and Critical
which are the offspring of tranquillity and
opulence, were employed in repelling the
afTaults of northern barbarians, who, after
many attempts, at laft accomplimed their
deflruclion *, In thefe ages the fpijrit of a
» — ,
ture was developed, and the heart ofman> not the quod-
libeticalpropofitions, became the fubjeft of philo-
fophical enquiry. Thefe poets however (and even
Ariofto himfelf who lived in an age fomewhat more
enlightened) though we may contemplate them as
lights hung out to illuminate fome places amidP. the
general darknefs that overfpread other regions ; yet
while they reformed mankind, participated themfelves
of the faults afcribed fo juftly to the ages in which they
lived. In works of length a judicious reader will ob-
ferve a ftriking defect of correct difpofmon univerfally
taking place, which is one of the furefl marks either
of a mind inadequate to its fubjecr., or of licentious
freedom derived from the manners of an uncultivated
and barbarous age. But with all thefe disadvantages
the language in which thefe authors wrote was gra-
dually polifhed by their efforts ; and as foon as men
were led to examine the ftandards of Greek and Ro-
man geniup, which had fallen fo long into difufe, the
faults of Compofition in thefe days of ignorance were
detected and rectified, at the fame time that a more
improved age expelled their models of architecture,
ftatuary, and painting.
* See the deplorable fhte of the empire at this time
defcribed by Ammianus Marcellinus, and St. Jerom,
who prophetically foretell the fall of the Roman
world.
nation
Qbfirvations on Compofition. 13
nation was deprefled while its acquifitions
were gradually fubverted; and attention
diverted from the cultivation of the beau-
tiful, into the channel of the neceflary and
more immediately important, was wholly
engrofled by external tranfadtions, or by
fuperftitious terrors arifing ultimately from
difappointment.
.It is a remark which will be found uni-
verfally characteriftical of mankind, that
when the mind is damped and crufhed as
it were, by a feries of unexpected and dif-
piriting incidents, it is apt to follow the
lead of fuperilition, and to trace confe-
quences to caufes wholly fictitious and im-
aginary when it cannot dsvelope their real
original. In Rome when in all its glory
with regard to grandeur and conqueft, a
didatcr was formally eleded to expel the
peftilenoe by driving a nail into the wall
of a temple * ; and one of the greateft men
whom Athens ever produced, was facri-
ficed to the cabal of a few factious citizens
* Examples of this need not be adduced. They oc-
cur often in the hiftory of the Commonwealth while
in us infancy.
artfully
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artfully working on the fuperftition of the
populace *. Thefe, however, as both na-
tions were ftill in their maturity, were
only fhort eruptions of a flame which was
fmothered though not extinguifhed by the
fudden extinction of the caufes which gave
rife to it. But during the decay of the
immenfe empire of Rome as thefe caufes
operated more fteadily and univerfally,
their confequences are fet in a very ftrong
light, and lie immediately open to dif-
paffionate enquiry. The minds of men
were at this time occupied in every pro-
vince of the empire by attending either to
the ravages of the barbarous nations attack-
ing it on all fides, or to the more alarming
internal duTenfions which divided the
chriftian church, and gave full fcope to the
fuggeftions of fuperftition, as the growth
of heterodox opinions, and not the general
corruption of manners was deemed to be
* The incident here referred to, relates, as the
learned reader will perceive, to Alcibiades, who was
driven from his country to gratify the moft abfurd fu-
pei lliticn, and with whom fell the glory and dominion
oi Athens.
the
Obfervations r>n Compofitton. 15
the caufe of every repeated difafter *.
Each feet had here a field to retort the
accufation from one to another ; and while
men's hearts were heated with rancour and
animofity, or their dread excited by the
imminent danger of lofmg their pofleffions,
it is furely not to be wondered at, that their
fentiments became perplexed, their learn-
ing contracted, and their language in-
elegant.
In this feries of events it is that we are
to fearch for the true caufe of the decline
of the finer arts, and of the darknefs in
which for many ages thele continued to
be inveloped. Hiftory affords us many
* The author here means only to take notice of
thofe fchifms in the Chiiftian church which from
their ab/urdity and in confidence could not produce
bad confequences of any kind, though the zeal of fomc
good men who employed their pens to expofe prin-
ciples which would have been forgot in a few years
had no notice been taken of them, contributed at the
lame time to fliarpen . the ipirits of men againft each
other, and to render the comagion more univerfal.
Thus it happened, that what would have been only
contemptible became noxious; and men were raifed
into ftgmlicance by mif«pplieatio:i of the means ap-
plied to render tlum the objects of ridicule or de-'
teitdtion.
examples
1 6 Philosophical and Critical
examples of barbarous nations who, after
having fubdued people more improved than
themfelves, have in the courfe of a few
ages adopted the laws, the manners, and
the learning of the conquered. Here
however the cafe was altogether different.
The fubdued nations became affimilated
(at leafl in a great meafure) to their bar-
barous conquerors. Whence arifeth this
ftriking difference ? — From this caufe un-
doubtedly, that every objecT: worthy of
imitation (with regard to the circumftances
above-mentioned) had been cancelled a-
mong the conquered nations before they
fubmitted to a foreign yoke. The wretched
remains of their former excellence were
ftill indeed to be met with : — but thefe, in-
fufficient to improve a people altogether
uncultivated, were mixed with abfurd and
extravagant hypothefes ; by which means
a group of diflimilar, often difcordant ob-
jects was prefented to the mind, which it
required the efforts of mankind not in one
but in many ages to expel as the offspring
of error, and to fubftitute proportion and
fymmetry in its room. Superilition in
thefe
Qbf creations on Compojition. 17
thefe times, untamed by the dictates of
temperate philofophy, fuggefted imaginary
evils which pafled immediately for reali-
ties; and thefe dreams inculcated in lan-
guage fwelling into fuftian, chiming into
quibble, loaded with ornament, or pointed
with unmeaning antithefis, made an im-
preffion upon minds unacquainted with
any fuperior ftyle of eloquence, adequate
in every refpect to the purpofes which it
was calculated to produce.
There is, it will be obferved, this inva-
riable affinity betwixt fentiment and the
language in which it is conveyed, that
though the diction may be fmooth and
mellifluous when the thoughts are wholly
fuperficial, yet when thefe laft are juft and
pertinent, forced ornaments and little con-
ceits are feldom or never to be met with
in the other. Sentiments judicioufly ap-
plied, and diftincftly comprehended, fup-
port themfelves by their own intrinfic
worth, and require only to be placed be-
fore the mind in flmple, clear, and appro-
priated words. The fame remark may
be applied to illuftrations. Thefe (which
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in all works of length are indifpenfable)
may be made to reprefent their objects in
a very animated manner, when the words
are forcible without being turgid, and the
image ftrong though perfectly x natural.
When language on the contrary is obvi-
oufly ilrained, and the words thrown out
of their natural arrangement into irregular
combinations, there is generally fome cor*-
refponding affectation in the thought
which will marr the effect ariiing ulti-
mately from all.
During the continuance of thofe ages
that elapfed from the decline of the Ro-
man empire after the removal of the im-
perial feat, to the revival of letters in the fix-
teenth century, the faults that we have thus
enumerated as character i (ing the ftyle of
Composition, we may affirm to have* been
principal caufes, not only of the ignorance
and confequently the rude manners of^
men, but of the duration of both to fo
diftant a period. — But invorder to compre-
hend the truth of this aflertion, it will be
neceflary that we. enter more clofely into
the fubje£t.
In
Obfervations on Competition. 1£
In what light foever we confider man*-
kind, very little reflection will ferve to
convince us that the drefs in which objects
are prefented to the mind is a circumftance
demanding the greateft degree of atten-
tion. It is in this cafe with the intellectual
powers as in common inftances with the
external organ of perception, " As an
" object, perhaps naturally uninviting if
" not difagreeable, is rendered attractive
" by an happy choice and difpofition of
" ornament in the laft inftance, fo in the
" other, even trite fentiments and mode-
" rate elocution become ftriking and ani-
" mated when thefe are recommended by
" the mufic of harmonious expreffion *."
When deprived on the other hand of
this recommendation, the mod judicious
thoughts lofe to every reader a great part
of their energy, and appear at beft like
Ulyffes in the rags of a beggar, difguifcd,
ungraceful, and difqualified to attract that
attention which thefe might otherwife have
* f< Nam quaedam & fententiis parva, & elocu-
tione modica virtus bcec fola commendat." Qi^intil*
lib. ix. c. 4.
C 2 irre-
2o Philofophlcal and Critical
irrefiftibly arrefted. The ftyle therefore
of Competition will claim from thefe con-
fiderations a very high degree of merit,
as upon this fingle circirmflance depends
the impreflion which fentiments make
upon the mind *. It is true indeed, that
when in confequence of a great difpropor-
tion betwixt the intellectual faculties,
thoughts altogether fuperficial are fpun
out and elaborately decorated with fuper-
fluous drapery; a judicious reader will
foon be difgufted with fo obvious an in-
congruity, and the writer will accomplifh
no other purpofe than that of difcovering
the levity of an exuberant imagination
uneontrouled by the underftanding. But
even here we may obferve in a flrong
light the effect arifing from mufical dic-
* Oux oOWiOa <T«« rr,v <ruv0«n» a*owai> ru/ot
w&v-
xa* trwyytvuv x<zt a(<*« T» /t*»« xai
ruv £JSUT>J? (pQoyyuv TO 7<rapfrof ru
tif rag xj/u^af w«p«0'aj'»o'av. Aovyiv.
tion,
Obfer vat Ions on Compofition. 21
tion, as the ear is not only filled with the
period, but the pailions themfelves are
often powerfully excited when reafon re-
ceives but little information. It is reflec-
tion that detects the fallacy, by enabling
us to diftinguifh the tinfel of puerile fancy
from the accurate and coherent inveftiga-
tion of reafon.
As it is thus obvious that the effect;
which any difcourfe produceth depends in
a great meafure upon the propriety of well
adapted expreflion, it will follow that the
ultimate ends of Compofition cannot in
any cafe be obtained when this propriety
is neglected, and when fomething unfuit-
able is perceived to take place betwixt the
things inculcated in any branch of the art,
and the language in which thefe are pre-
fented to the mind. That the civilization
of mankind was originally promoted by
perfons who excelled in the higheft fpecies
of this comprehenfive art ; that during its
maturity, nations the moft admired flour-
ifhed in every circumftance either agree-
able or beneficial ; that upon its decline
the manners of men returned gradually
C 3 back
22 PJiilofophtcal and Critical
back to their primitive rufUcity ; and that
in all ages, without exception, it has been
the principal vehicle of light, of know-
ledge, and of happinefs, as connected with
cultivated life ; — thefe truths in a follow-
ing fedion of this work it will be our bu-
finefs more particularly to enforce and
illuftrate *. At prefent it is only proper
to obferve, that in proportion as we admit
all or any of thefe to be derived from this
original, the language in which they are
exhibited will appear to merit a greater
or lefs degree of attention. That any
means whatever may accomplim the pur-
pofe for which it is applied, we confider
it always as expedient that this mould not
only be thoroughly comprehended, but
that it mould likewife be rendered agree-
able. Neceffity indeed fometimes obliges
us to turn our thoughts upon fchemes of
utility, in the purfuit of which we enjoy
only the fatisfa&ion of contemplating the
end as making gradually its approach.
But it will confift with every man's ex-
perience, that truths the moft important
* Bookiv. fe<St \.
when
Objlrvations on Competition. 23
when conveyed in dry language, and far
more when wrapt in obfcurity, are com-
monly ftudied and underftood by few from
whofe memory likewife thefe may eafily
be erafed; and no purpofe of general
emolument can be effectuated while the
path that leads to it is intricate and un-
frequented.
In order therefore to extend the obfer-
vation, to cultivate the minds, and to
polifli the manners of mankind, their firft
teachers confidered it as principally re-
quifite to clothe their inftrudions in the
moft captivating drefs. Hence fable and
allegory became the vehicles of moral
fentiment in the firft dawning of fociety * j
and as this method of communicating it
was conformable to nature, whofe ftandard
is unalterable, it continued to be purfued
fuccefsfully when civilization had made
much greater progrefs f . In many cafes
* In the writings of Orpheus, Amphion, Linus,
Sec. not to mention the two perfect ftanciards of the
cpopoea, the Iliad, and Odyfiey.
f Such are the beautiful pictures of Prodicus and
Cebes in particular, befides the many fublime allc»
gories in the philofophy of Plato.
C 4 (as
24 Pkilcfoplrical and Critical
as that of the legiflator in particular) when
this medium of knowledge could not be
made ufe of, precepts, rules of conduct,
and even treaties of war and peace betwixt
nations, were exprefled with the utmoft
perfpicuity arfd brevity, that thofe truths
might be rendered univerfally intelligible
whofe immediate end is the benefit of fo-
ciety, and in the expreflion of which ex-
terior ornament would be wholly im-
proper *. By thefe means the mailers of
Compofition alternately edified and enter-
tained mankind. The manners of men
became infenfibly foftened, and the love
' of virtue was inftilled into the heart while
their attention was arrefted by harmonious
expreflion, or their judgment convinced
* The reader who would fee this truth evinced
may hare recourfe to many parts of the Greek or
Roman hiftory, in both of which he will find the trea-
ties made with different nations, particularly with the
Greeks and Perfians, and betwixt the Romans and
Carthaginians in the Punic wars, conceived in fuch
fimple terms, and fo conciiely exprefled as will (how
that perfpicuity beyond all other circumftances was
Uudied by both nations in the relation of their mutual
agreements ; and that thefe may be exhibited as mo-
dels of ancient accuracy and propriety. Vid.
by
on Cowpcftfon. 25
by fentiments clearly as well as jufily laid
before them; thofe principles by whofe
aid the human mind is moft powerfully
imprefied, were judicioufly applied to for
this purpofe ; and that defign was accom-
plifhed to which means were fo happily
adapted in confequence of that knowledge
which the firft philofophers difcovered of
the nature of man.
In the whole procefs here carried o'nr it
will be eafy to difcern the ufe, or rather
the neceffity there was for adorning fci-
ence, when thus eminently ufeful, with
the infmuating eloquence of modulating
language *. Precepts of any kind are un-
doubtedly of advantage only as thefe are
univerfally examined and underftood. In
order to be rendered thus extenfively bene-
ficial, it is requifite that thefe mould be
rendered intelligible to all, and fo entcr-
* " Et tamen omnium longitudinum & brevitatum
in fonis ficut acutarum graviumque vocum (fays the
illuftrious Roman orator) judicium ipfa natura in au-
ribusnoftris collocavit ; aures enim vd animus aurium
nuncio naturalem quandam in fc continet vocum om-
nium menfionem, &c. See likewife Ajo^<r. AAixap-
>a<r. ixtfi SwQiir. Ovc/xar. p. 30.
taining
26 Phllofophkal and Critical
taming at the lame time by being incul-
cated as the morals of fome beautiful fable,
this vehicle can be employed as to evince
that their authors well underftood this
important truth, that he alone pofleffeth
true difcernment — " Qui mifcuit utile
dulci, — who blends the agreeable with
the infiruftive."
Here it may perhaps be objected to our
remarks on Compofition in general, and
particularly to the importance of attending
to expreflion, that in whatever language
we clothe our fentiments thefe cannot be
of fuch extenfive emolument as has been
reprefented, becaufe the far greater num-
ber of mankind have in all ages fhown
little taile for the arts, and have neither
inclination to ftudy, nor capacity to be
improved by the beauties, however exqui-
lite, which are here pointed out. But we
may reply to this, that in order to be
benefited by the art of which we treat, it
was not neceflary that every man mould
have judged from perfonal experience of
its utility, any more than it is that to be
convinced that there are fuch cities as Paris
and
0 If er vat ions on Compifitiori. 27
and Rome, we muft receive occular evi-
dence by furveying thefe on the fpot. Of
the laft we receive fufficient proof from
tefthnony wholly unqueftioned, and the
firft becomes fubfervient to all the ends we
have mentioned, by refining the fentiments
and manners even of a few whofe natural
abilities thus improved qualify them to
render thefe advantages at laft univerfal by
their influence, example, and converfation.
Philofophy, confidered with regard to ef-
fects on practice, is often fufficiently un*-
derftood by men who have never entered
deeply into metaphyfical fpeculation, in
the fame manner as the performance of an
able mufician will communicate the moft
delightful fenfations to a man who neither
imderftands the rules of mufic himfelf,
nor is able properly to employ an inftru^-
ment. In both cafes it is only indifpenf-
ably requifite that there fhould be mailers
excellent in their profeffions, and qualified
from this excellence to bring emolument,
or procure an high degree of pleafure to
thofe with whom they are connected in
fociety.
28 Philosophical and Critical
fociety. It will not be affirmed by any
man that the Athenian people, though ac-
knowledged to have been the moft inge-
nious and polifhed of any upon earth*,
were all of them orators of the firft clafs,
or were fitted to excel in any other fpecies
of Compofition. A diftinguifhed genius
in philofophy, poetry, or eloquence, made
his appearance among them at fome times ;
and by exciting the curiofity, or intereft-
ing powerfully the paffions of human
nature in his caufe, became a benefactor to
mankind in general, though the perfons
more immediately benefited were difquali-
fied to comprehend every part of his writ-
ings, and far more to imitate his example.
In fome ages, matters in almoft all the de-
partments of literature arofe at once, like
new conftellations illuminating the horizon,
and fpread light all around them as they
* Cicero's panegyric on this people (hows what they
continued to be even in his time. " Eruditillimos
homines Afiaticos quivis Athcnienfis indoctus, non
verbis, fed fono vocis, nee tam bene, quam fuaviter
loquendo facile fuperabh." De Orat. lib. iii.
pro-
ObJ foliations on Comfcjition. 29
proceeded in their courfe *. By thefe
means, however, the people of Athens be-
came fuch judges of language, and fo ac-
cuftomed to the moft delicate propriety of
expreffion, that an old woman of this
city is faid to have known the celebrated
Theophraflus to be a foreigner^ notwith-
ftanding a refidence of many years at
Athens, by the wrong pronunciation of a
Jingle word.
As ftates therefore and kingdoms were
gradually civilized, as men of genius and
letters brought Compofition nearer to a
* The age of Pericles affords an example of the firfl
mentioned improvement, as that great man carried
eloquence to a pitch never before known in Athens,
and may be faid to have afforded a model not only to
the orators of his 'own age, but to his fuccefibr De-
mofthenes, who carried the art to perfection. This
was completed in the age of Socrates (as it may well
be called) when that illuflrious name, with thofe of
Ariflotle and Plato, dignified philofophy; in hiftory
appeared a Thucydides and Xenophon ; in poetry an
^Efchylus, Euripides, Ariftophanes, Sophocles, Me-
nander ; in eloquence Demofthenes fhone with un-
rivalled luftre ; while Apelies, Phidias, and Praxiteles,
completed this illuftrious catalogue by their diftin-
guifhed eminence in painting.
ftate
30 Philofophical and Critical
ftate of perfe&ion * ; fo as the art degene-
rated from this flandard we fhali find a
cor-
* It is neceflary here that we keep conftantly in
our eye one diflinQion betwixt the effec~r.s which the
poffeffion of immenfe wealth produceth ufually upon
the manners of a people, and thofe which attend the
progrefs of literary purfuits. Experience hath evinced
in all ages, that the moft hardy nations are in the
courfe of a few generations effeminated by opulence,
and that every refinement of luxury will in time be
fubuituted in place of frugal meals, athletic exer-
cifes, vulgar attire, and mean accommodations. The
ancient Perfians appear to have had all the advantages
derived from this fource in the greateft profufion, and
the arts attendant on luxury feem likewife to have
been in fome meafure cultivated. Science however,
and art in its utmoft perfection excludes effeminacy
as much as rufticity from the manners of mankind,
and preferving the medium betwixt thefe extremes,
confers courage while it fubdues ferocity, and gives an
elegance of manners perfectly coafiftent with vigour
and intrepidity. The Greeks, infpired by their philo-
fophers and orators with the contempt of death, and
with the love of their country, confidered the great king
with juftice as a fplendid barbarian, and furpaffed his
fubje&s as much -in the atchievements of war as in
the cultivation of the finer arts, by whofe influence a
nation is benefited and adorned. The Turks in the
prefent age, and the Afiatic people in general, com-
pared with thefe of Europe, exhibit an inftance in all
refpects fimilar to the former. Enervated by luxury
\vkhout having feized the means of preventing its
confequences,
I
Obfer'vatlons en Compcfition. 31
correfponding change wrought on the
manners of men which at the fame time
indifpenfably loft ' their principal excel-
lencies. Deprived of thofe fchools in
which the practice of virtue was power-
fully recommended, while tafte acquired
elegance and exquifite fenfibility, men re-
lapfed into barbarity as they fell into igno-
rance; and that favage ferocity (digni-
fied with the name of courage) and abfurd
oftentation (miftaken for grandeur) again
characterized nations which the light of
knowledge had enabled thefe to diftin-
guim *. It is true, indeed, that the fci-
ences
confequences, the inhabitants of the fbuthern provinces
are found by experience to want that fpirit of enterprize
which the defire of knowledge powerfully ftimulates,
and that unfhaken fortitude in danger which arifetk
from contemplating death ss a fecondary evil. On the
other hand, we have lately feen a people in the north-
ern regions of this continent barbarous in their man-
ners, and expofed to the rigour of an inhofpitable cli-
mate, polifhed gradually by the introduction of thofe
arts which the others have neglected, and excelling in
the qualities which we have now fhown to be their
infeparable attendants.
* in their joufts and tournaments particularly ; in
the fums that were lavifhed without taite when their
princes
32 O&firvafions on Compqfition.
ences in appearance continued to be taught,
and the arts were known perhaps by more
than appellation : but both became at laft
only " magni nominis umbra." With
regard to the former, had the purity of
philofophical Jentiment even remained in
thefe ages of darknefs, it could have pro-
duced no effect on manners when that of
language had degenerated. But this fup-
poiition is not natural. Juflnefs of fenti-
ment, and an happy perfpicuity of ex-
preflion, had the fame period. As men
were improved by philofophy when ren-
dered univerfally intelligible by fimplicity
of language, and attractive by appropriated
decoration, fo when thefe means of im-
provement ceafed to exift, their effects
were likewife at an end. In proportion
too as the evil fpread, no remedy having
been applied in due time, the cure became
ilill a matter of more difficulty. It is in
all cafes whatever much eafier to deviate
from the right path, than to recover it
princes met with each other, and in the numerous and
barbarous retinues with which thefe affected always
to be furrounded.
when
Obfervations on Compofition. 33
when we have wandered and fallen into a
labyrinth.
» Facilis defcenftis Averni :— *
Sed revocare gradum, fuperafque evadtre ad auras*
Hoc opus, hie labor eft. VIRG.
When a few however began at laft to
obferve the falfe lights by which they had
been mifled, and to follow the true ones $
befides the almofl infuperable difficulty of
forming a juft ftandard themfelves, when
error had every where become fo preva-
lent;— the prejudices of men attached to
certain modes, however irrational, were to
be fubdued ; and that fatal obftacle to all
improvement among thofe whofe opinions
are taken up at fecond hand, a great name
on their fide of the queftion, to be re-
moved by a clear appeal to the deciiion of
reafon.
\Ve have entered into this detail par-
ticularly on the prefent occafion, as it en-
ables us to aflign its due value to an im-
portant branch of our fubject, and may be
of ufe to thofe who having fixed their
attention (where it no doubt ought prin*-
cipally to be fixed) on the arrangement
and fentiment of their work, have failed
VOL. II. D after
34 Philofofhtcal and Critical
after all to render it of general utility by
neglecting to cultivate the elegant and
agreeable *. Thefe men are chargeable
with
* The ancient critics agree univerfally in their fen-
timents of the high value of the ftyle of Compofition,
and their other writers conform exactly (as we (hall
fee afterwards) to the rules which thefe lay down.
Ariftotle tells us, that a writer in profe ought only to
ufe a loofer and lefs ornamented rythmus than the
poet, fo that his ftyle will be a kind of carmen folutum^ as
Quintilian calls it. PHTOP. |3i£. F. T/AU/K. y. & u,
Longinus ftrongly exprefieth his judgment on this
fubject, by faying <pw? j/«p ru OUT* i<hov rov vou rat
x«A« ovojuara. ITtpi Yv}>. T/OMJ/A. f*. Dionyfius Halicar-
nafleus confirms likewife the preceding theory when
he juftly obferves, IIoAAoi ^ouv IIo»»iTa», x«t
aurai? ZtTfitvrt; fixatxv Ttva xai
aura rfw? xat -nrfptTTW? tsroXAiiv rt]j
Ao^w zs-fpjtOnxav. Ilfpj 2TN0E2> ONOM. p. ii.
edit. Lipf, The Roman orator adopts the very words
of Ariftotle in his Difcourfe on Eloquence. " Perfpi-
cuum eft igitur numeris adftriftam orationem efle
debere ; carere verfibus." De Orat. feft. 56. Again,
he calls the ftyle of Compofition in the fame treatife
'* optimus & praeftantiffimus dicendi effector & Ma-
gifter." It would be as endlefs to enumerate the
opinions
Obfervations on Compojltion. 3$
with a fault of the fame kind with that of
a man, who, though poflefled of the
higheft intellectual merit would juftly
meet with neglect, if not with ridicule, by
pretending to frequent the beft company
in an unfalhionable, flovenly, or antiquated
drefs *.
As
opinions of the ancients with regard to the excellence
and ufe of words juftly ranged and properly fele&ed,
as to mention the diversified rules which they have
laid down for the attainment of this purpofe. From
thofe which we have taken notice of here, it ought
not to be concluded that thefe great men either com-
pofed themfelves in what may be termed a poetical
ityle, or recommend this to others who write in profe
upon any fubjf£t. The ancients indeed, infufed in
general into their writings a much larger portion of
the idioms of poetry (as we (hall fee afterwards) than
would now be thought confident with purity of ex-
prefTion. But they mean to prefcribe only an atten-
tion to harmony, as univerfally neceflary, which they
appear to have confidered themfelves as an unifon to
the human heart. Images likewife the moft pic-
turefque, they permit us to ufe in any fpecies of Com-
pofition whatever, as tending to render a femiment
clear that might have been perplexed, and an addrefs
animated which would have been overlooked. 7'he
two provinces however they require to be preferved
wholly diflinct.
* No reader will here fo far miftake the author's
as to fuppofe that he intends to reprefent
D 2 ftvle
36 Philofophical and Critical
As we have thus endeavoured by obfer-
vations drawn from human nature, and
confirmed by the evidence of hiftory, to
ihow the important ends which may be
accompli med by cultivating the ftyle of
Compofition, it is necefiary, in order to
complete our view of this fubje£t, that we
confider next what is the beft method to
obtain excellence in a point of fuch utility,
by examining feparately the various cha-
raflers by which different themes require
exprefiion to be diftinguifhed, and by
pointing out that fault into which we may
fall while purfuing too eagerly the oppo-
fite beauty. The principal characters of
ftyle as the drefs of fentiment, as equal with regard to
its effects with thofe that accompany elegance or fordid
negligence, in the attire of the body. The illuftration
drawn from this lafl is indeed juft, in as much as mean-
nefs in either will expofe a man to neglect ; and the
faults are therefore of the fame ktnd\ but there is this
ftriking difference betwixt thefe, that though intel-
lectual merit may render a man in the laft inftance
univerfally agreeable as a companion, when his pecu-
liarity in point of drefs is overlooked, yet in the other
cafe, a work however valuable, in confequence of its
defect in language is known only to a few, and among
thefe is only taken.
the
Olfervations on Compofition. 37
the ftyle of Compofition, according to that
branch of the art which may be fludied,
are fimplicity, perfpicuity, elegance,
ftrength, grandeur or fublimity, propriety.
The faults oppofed or allied to thefe are
meannefs, obfcurity, affected prettinefs,
weaknefs, bombaft, inaccuracy. To each
of the former therefore we fhall appro-
priate a feparate fection. The latter will
naturally fall under our confideration as
ftanding in relation, or in oppofition to
the firft. In order to render this part of
the work as complete as poffible, we fhall
in the lad place confider what may be
termed omiiTions or defects, rather than
blemifhes in this matter, that thefe by be-
ing expofed may be avoided or rectified.
SECTION II.
Of Simple Compofition.
COMPLICITY of expreffion is a phrafe
often ufed by men who have not af-
fixed to it any determinate meaning.
The greateft number of men who are in-
D 3 fluenced
3 8 Philofophical and Critical
•J •/ A
fluenced in this matter by the judgment
of others, either give their opinion at
fecond hand^ or think that the fimpleil
ftyle confifts of plain words put together
without ftrength, variety, or ornament ;
an advantage which will be poflefled in a
greater or lefs degree, in proportion to a
man's deficiency of genius. A very fmall
{hare of reflection is however fufficient to
convince us that an opinion of this kind
muft be wholly irrational, as it would de-
prive Compofition of that juft variety of
language with which fubje&s altogether
different ought neceflarily to be treated.
The fame juft difcernment which makes a
man feledc fuch exterior decoration as is at
the fame time fuited to his circumftances,
and advantageous to his appearance, will
enable him to pronounce, if equally un-
biaffed, that nothing can be truly beautiful
in Compofition which wants that decent
ornament that in all cafes is necefTary to
coriftitute excellence. A theme of import-
ance, in order to be properly managed,
demands a dignity of expreffion corref-
ponding to the nature of the fentimehts ;
and
Obfervations on Compofition. 39
and vulgar epithets ought here to be
avoided with the utmoft care, as tending
to deprefs thefe beneath their proper
level *. When ftriking images, or illuf-
trations of any kind ought neceflarily to
be introduced, flmplicity is only violated
by the ufe of phrafes wholly unappro-
priated : — but thefe, however diverfified,
while neither meanly creeping, nor affect-
edly pompous, are juft fuch as genius
may perhaps have dictated to the author ;
and the good fenfe of his reader will im-
* '* Et quod facit fyllabarum (fays Quintilian) idem
verborum quoque inter fe copulatio, ut aliud alii junc-
tum melius fonet. — Rebus atrocibus verba etiam ipfo
auditu afpera magis conveniunt. Et honefla quidem
turpibus potiora femper ; nee fordidis unquam in ora-
tione erudita eft locus. Quod enim alibi magnificum,
tumidum alibi. Et quae humilia circa res magnas,
apta circa minores videntur." Lib. viii. c. 3. In the
fame fpirit a critic, formerly quoted, obferves, (pn/xi
<3* TCV |3ovAOj«,£K5i> tpy(x.(rx<rQzi fa£iv xaAijv tv TW <TUVTI-
TOUTWW fo'^pafw TW
xoivorepov tv TW roipi Ai^wf, &C. AIONY2. AAI-
KAP. H-ifi, 2TN0E2. ONOM. p. 15.
D 4 mediately
40 Philofophical and Critical
mediately approve. What one of the moft
fenfible writers of antiquity fays of things^
may furely be applied here with propriety
to words.
Eft modus in lingua ; fiint certae denique fines,
Quas ultra citraque nequit confiftere re£tum. HoR.
i. The fimple therefore in Compofition
may be confidered as ftanding in a double
relation to ivords^ and to thofe images with
which language is ornamented. The ftyle
of a performance is fimple when exprefr-
fions are happily chofen, properly placed,
and fo well adapted to the nature of the
fubjecl: -that the mind perceives in them
neither abundance nor defect. By the for-
mer the force of a fentiment is deftroyed ;
by the latter its grace and its perfpicuity.
That tafte for variety which is natural to
the human mind, operates with equal
power on every fubjecl: that attracts its
attention. A thought ftrikingly charac-
teriftical of the heart or mind, and cal-
culated on that account to make a very
forcible impreffion on an intelligent reader,
when it is fpun out and placed elaborately
m
Obfervattons on Compojitkn. 41
in every point of view, fatigues inftead
of affording us either inftru&ion or en- •
tertainment : — its force is gradually ener^
vated, and at laft it efcapes obfervation.
This fault is often imputable to authors
of unqueftioned genius, and generally to
thofe who have received a large propor-
tion of imagination. In eloquence par-
ticularly, an orator is apt in this manner
to violate fimplicity by attempting to en-
large and amplify every part of his fub-
jec~t. — " As (fays the eloquent Chryfoftom)
" we admire a phyfician when we obferve
" him reftoring to perfect health perfons
*{ who had laboured under difeafes that
" were judged to be incurable; fo, my
" beloved friends, behold with admiration
" and aftonilhment the adions of our Sa-
" viour, who could not only expel at once
" difeafes, however inveterate, from the
" body, but could render thofe in a moment
" worthy of the kingdom of heaven who
" had attained to the very fummit of
" wickednefs. — To-day (faid he to the
" thief on the crofs) thou {halt be with
" me
42 Philofopbical and Critical
" me in paradife *." Without remarking
here on the illuftration, as not perfectly
adequate to its object, I fhall only obferve,
that the fenie at thefe lad words is com-
plete, and the words of fcriptirre are figni-
ficant and ftriking. But ^when. our cele-
brated orator lengthens out this defcrip-
tion by talking of the pry*}* T»/A», Z™AU me
great dignity, immenfe philan-
thropy, and inexpreffible overflowing of
love difcovered in this tranfaction, every
reader will be ready to think that an ani-
tnated ilroke of eloquence is here ener-
vated by an amplification inconfiftent with
fimplicity.
As this character of the ftyle of Com-
pofition appears thus to be incompatible
** 016VV UZTfOV TOTl 'aUjU.aO^CV OTAV
•TI
isrpof xaOapav vymoiv tTrctwyai'yiv' »TW x«»
TO» XPI£TON Secuputffm aj/awnrf xat fXTrAaj^iSi ort
xai rrf xaxtac a?rixAA«^at, xat TTI? TCOV oupa-
fATjAaxoraft Zriajpos HAST f^uou f<r»i «u TW
a&iru. XPTIO2T. ci; TO f«up. p. 488.
with
Obfervations on Compofition. 43
with improper diffufion, fo it is in other
cafes equally violated by the affectation
of brevity. The mind, like the body, is
equally debilitated by too much, and by
too little exercife. It perceives imme-*
diately a defect of expreffion when the
parts of a fubject are not mown in their
full proportions, and when thoughts are
crouded fo clofely together that it requires
the force of conftant recollection to con-
template thefe apart. A noble and ftriking
fentiment is often overlooked by an error
of this kind, juft as a fingle figure though
intenfely animated may efcape the eye in
a piece of hiftory-painting, by being im-
properly placed in' a promifcuous group.
An object delineated with fimplicity is one
in which all is uniform, regular, and con-
fident. When thefe fucceed one another
with too much rapidity, regularity can no
longer be attended to in their difpofition ;
and inftead of being prefented to the mincj
in 2ifuitable drefs, fuch objects cannot be
faid with propriety to have any form
whatever.
Should
44 Philofophical and Critical
Should it be faid after all, that the affec-
tation of concifenefs which is cenfured
here, is rather in general destructive of
ferjpictiity-i than inconfiftent wiflijtmp/tctty
of language, we may anfwer, that if the
latter can only be obtained when an idea
is expreffed in the fitted words, and is
exhibited in a drefs at the fame time un-
oftentatious and attractive, it will follow
that when language wants thefe diftin-'
guifhing qualities it can with no more
propriety be denominated fimple, than this
epithet would character ife the appearance
of a man whofe clothes were difpropor-
tioned to the fhape or fize of his body;
and deftitute of that beautiful fymmetry
which gives eafe as well as dignity to the
deportment.
Among the ancients there is perhaps
no writer who more frequently lofeth fight
of iimplicity by this affectation of peculiar
brevity, than the fatyrift Perfms. Perhaps
indeed of all the other branches of Com-
pofition, fatire is that in which it is moft
necefiary to render a ftroke energetical by
a mode of expreflion at the fame time
concife
Obf creations on Gompojition. 45
concife and forcible. But the poet above-
mentioned will furely be deemed by every
intelligent reader to have erred in attempt-
ing to imitate this beauty. The very firft
lines of his poem prefent to us fentiments
that appear disjointed, becaufe the lan-
guage is defective in which thefe are re-
prefented.
O curas hominum ! O quantum eft in rebus
inane !——
Quis leget haec ? — Min' tu iftud ais ?— -Nemo her-
cule Nemo.
Vel duo, vel nemo..— Turpe, & miferabile. Quare ?
Ne mihi Polydamus, & Troiades Labeonem
Pretulerint.— Nugze, £c.
In thefe verfes the thoughts obvioufly
feem to want connection, from too fcanty
a proportion of words. After having
mentioned the vanity of human enjoy-
ments, we are not aware that the ex-
preffion " Quis leget haec ?" which is
abrupt enough in the beginning of the
fecond line of his fatire, is deiigned to
flrike at the manners of the Romans, then
fo degenerated as to read nothing that bore
the femblance of morality. Again, in the
lines
46 Philofophical and Critical
lines immediately following, the fenfe re-
quires him to have faid — >" As Hector was
" afraid left the Trojans fhould prefer
«' Polydamus to him, fo am I alarmed left
" our Polydamus (Nero) fhould prefer
" Labeo to me." — But by leaving out the
word (vereor) u I am afraid" the fenfe is
left uncompleted. — We might mention
examples of the fame fault in more mo-
dern writers than Perfms *. But what has
been already faid we prefume is fufficient
to illuftrate our view of this fubject, and
to dwell on the faults of an eminent author
longer than fuch an illuftration may re-
quire, is altogether difagreeable.
Let us obferve, however, that the ftyle
of Compofition, confidered as a vehicle of
thought which ought to be juftly adapted
to its object, is in the above-mentioned
inftance principally defective in that fim-
ple defcription which demands the whole
to be plainly and confiftently reprefented.
* In the Satires and Night Thoughts of Young,
the reader will meet with inftances of the fault here
cenfured, arifing moft probably from that rapidity of
thought (if we may thus exprefs it) which often cha-
ra&erifeth the higheft degree of genius.
When
Obfervations on Compo/ition. 47
When the language of any work is on
the other hand judicioufly adapted to the
fentiments, the perufal of it affords the
mind that perfect fatisfadion which
(though unknown to ourfelves) is really
the confequence of having obtained an
accurate imitation of nature. In philo-
fophy and hiftory, as well as in fuch
works as are more immediately addrefled
to the imagination, this correfpondence of
expreflion and thought hath the fame uni-
form and unvaried effect. Every man is
ready to think, that placed in fimilar cir-
cumftances he would have thought or fpoke
in the fame manner as the author, becaufe
in fad: he hath adopted the language not
of an individual, but of human nature.
There is no miftake more common,
and at the fame time fufcepiible of eafier
refutation, than that which would confine
fimplicity to fome particular fpecies of
Composition, when in reality it conftitutes
the principal ornament of all. Though
paftoral poetry, obvious narration, or de-
fcriptions of ftill life are the ufual fpheres
of this excellence, in which it ought inva-
riably
48 Philofophical and Critical
riably to predominate, yet we fhall find
upon trial the fublime, the picturefque, the
nervous, and the pathetic, to be diftin-
guifhed when in their higheft perfection
by the being conveyed in words the moft
fimple and artlefs. We fhall here pro-
duce examples of each.
Of genuine ftfblimity, a ftroke univer-
fally acknowledged to be one of the no-
bleft that ever entered into the mind of
man, is in the account given by Mofes of
the creation *. " Darknefs (fays he) was
" upon the deep, and the fpirit of God
moved upon the face of the waters.—-
And God faid — Let there be light, and
there i^as light /" — This example of
divine eloquence, exprefled in words fo
fuited to the majefty of the fpeaker, agrees
exactly with our defcription of Jimple
Compofition, as confifting of words hap-
pily felected, in which the mind perceives
neither abundance nor defect. — In a fimilar
fpirit of fubiime fimplicity does Milton
pourtray the fhield of Satan, and the atti-
* Genef. i. 3.
tude
Otyervations on Compo/itton. 49
tude of this prince of hell treading on the
burning lake*
He fcarce had ceafed when the fuperior fiend
Was moving tow'rcl the fhore j — his pond'rous fhield
Behind him caft, — the broad circumference
Hung on his fhoulders like the moon ! — Par. Loft, b. i.
Let the reader try whether this defcription.
(fo completely exhibiting its object) would
bear either the addition or tranfpofition of
a Tingle word without being impaired.
Yet here is no ornamental epithet. The
words themfelves and their arrangement are
the moft natural and fimple that can be
conceived. — Apollo in the Iliad leading on
Hector to the deftrudion of Greece, and
levelling the mound which the people of
that nation had reared for their defence,
affords us an example in all refpe&s ade-
quate to the former.
' •' IlpoTrapOiOi $t $0160?
Pti' o^Oac? >wt7r£To«o |3a&i*»;j
Eg
Ti
AiJ^iJ* f)(UN tp»TI^*0>, tpfJTTf Si T«p£C?
- IAIAA. O;
Apollo planted at the trench's bound
Pufh'd at the bank j down funk th' enormous mound i
VOL. II, E Roli'd
50 PhitofopJiical and Critical
Roll'd in the ditch the heapy ruin lay,
A fudcten road, a loi>g, and ample v ay !
The wondering crouds the downward level trod,
Before them flamed the Ihield, and march'd the God;
Then with his hand he {hook the mighty wall,
And lo ! the tin rets nod ? the bulwarks fall ! &c. *
As in the examples above-mentioned
we obferve the fimpleft words conveying
the moil fublime ideas, fo in what follows
thefe appear to conftitute the moft pic-
turejque defcription. An example of this
kind incomparably animated, occurs in the
fourth chapter of Job, where Eliphaz. re-
lates his interview with an inhabitant of the
invilible world, in fuch language as placeth
every circumftance of this tranfaction be-
fore the very eye of the reader. — *' In
thoughts from the vifions of the night,
when deep deep falleth on men, — fear
came upon me and trembling, which made
all my bones to make. Then a fpirit
panned before my face: the hair of my
flefh flood up. It flood ftill, but I could
* We have here given Pope's tranflation, in which
a reader of tafte may perhaps think, not unjuflly, that
though the fub!imity of the original is in this pafiage
improved, yrt its fnttplicity is in a great meafure left.
not
ftkfcrvaitons on Composition. $t
hot difcern the form thereof. An image
was before mine eyes : — there was filence,
and I heard a voice." — What fimplicity
is here in the expfeffion ! yet what ftrength
and vivacity in the colouring ! — Without
the aid of a metaphor, the infpired writer
fets before our eyes a picture fo calculated
to excite the moft exquifite feelings, that
it was drawn (one fhould think) by the
pencil of nature herfelf.
Virgil (though his excellence appears
to lie rather in throwing pathetic than
pi&urefque circumstances into his defcrip-
tions) yet has, wrought up a piclure of the
fame kind with that already mentioned,
in his account of the ghoft of Hector,
remarkable for the beauties pointed out
in the former.
Ecce ante oculos moeftiflimus He&or
Vifus adefle mihi, largofque effundere fietus !
Raptatus bigis ut quondam, aterque cruento
Pulvere perque pedes traje£lu3 lora tumentes :
Hei mihi qualis erat! _&neid. lib. ii.
This mixture of the pictutefque and pa-
thetic, exprefTed with the moft beautiful
fimplicity, characteriie'th the attitude of
Priam in the Iliad, befeeching his fon to
]{. 2 enter
52 Philofophical and Critical
enter the city and fhun Achilles.
£l[AU%it
T\|/o? a
The fimplicity as well as pi&urefque
beauty of the original is well preferved in
the tranflation.
Then wept the fage
He ftrikes his reverend head now white with age;
He lifts his wither'd arms, obtefts the fkies ;
And calls his much-loved fon with feeble cries. POPE.
If in the inftances above referred to, the
fublime and picturefque in Compofition
appear to be confiftent with perfect fim-
plicity of language, nervous and forcible
defcription is equally compatible with,
and adorned by this diftinguifhing excel-
lence. As a proof of this we find Xeno-
phon, who among all the hiftorians of
antiquity excels in the beautiful fimplicity
here recommended, ufmg words, when
the occafion demands it, full of energy
and fignificance. In the account of Cyrus's
battle with Crcefus, we meet with fome
ftriking examples to this purpofe. " There
" was then (fays he, defcribi.ng the heat
" of the battle) a defperate engagement
" with
O&ffrvations on Compojltlon. 53
*
" with darts, lances, and fwords, com-
" menced on both fides. — There was
" great (laughter of men, terrible clafhing
" of arms, and a tumultuous clamour
" raifed on all hands ; fome congratulat-
*' ing their companions, fome exhorting
" the fearful, and fome imploring the
" Gods." — When Cyrus's horfe a little
after is wounded, the confequences are
thus concifely, but energetically defcribed.
** Then (fays he) you might have feen
" of what advantage to a prince is the
" love of his fubjeds. For inftantly all
" ihouted at once, and rufhed impetu-
" oufly to the battle. They drive, and
" are driven ; ftrike, and are ftruck. One
" of Cyrus's attendants in the mean time
*•' difmounted, and placed him on his own
" horfe. But when on horfeback, look-
" ing around him, he faw the ^Egyptians
" flaughtered on all fides *." The hif-
torian
*
The author hath tranflated this paflage in the text,
left fome readers fhould be frightened at the fight of
fo much Greek. But the original is too beautiful to
be omitted, and incomparably beyond any tranlladon.
K 3
54 Philofophical and Critical
torian was fenfible that ornament of any
kind in a detail of this nature would have
been wholly unappropriated. He is there-^
fore principally intent upon making the
words correfpond as juftly as poflible to
the things reprefented by them. Super-
fluous epithets are therefore avoided ; and
there is a flrength in the expreflions which
conveys to us an idea of that defperate
perfeverance with which the battle was
carried on. — So confident b the moft per-.
fed fimplicity with that vigorous language
which renders an idea diftincl: by its pro-
priety of phrafe, and its impreflion dur-
xau
XTUTTOS OTrAwy xa» (3jA&.-v
i'Twv «AA.i«>.af, raw J'f
ITTOtlOV,
JTTTTX TO»
aurov f?r» TOI/ f XUT» UTTTOU. fi? avtfl o uco?
Oiw r^£ caioajfou? T«J AiVUTrriouf, &C.
. Ku.
Obfirvations on Compofitivn. 55
able by an energy fluted to the nature of
the object.
Simple Compofition, confidered as con-
fifting of well-adapted words without
taking in adventitious ornament, thus cha-
racteriftical as it is of the fublime, the
pi£hirefque, and the nervous in this art,
yet in no cafe whatever is feen to higher
advantage than when we aflume the Ian-,
guage, or paint the confequences of paf-
fion. We have obferved in a former
fedtion of this work, that a mind agitated
by the conflict of paffions never adopts a
metaphor to exprefs its feelings. A fud-
den exclamation jult infpired by the occa-
fion, has an efFecl: upon .every mind at
thefe times, fuperior to that which the
•moil artful aflemblag-e of mellifluous and
ornamented periods could ever have pro-
duced. Art never indeed appears fo dif-
gufting as when we difcover it (however
affectedly concealed) in any purely pathetic
reprefentation. In an account of this kind
indeed the paffions may be gradually
wrought up to the utmoft height by a
progreiuve and elaborate detail; but in
E 4 fuch
56 Philofophical and Critical
fuch a procefs the author is required to
conceal his addrefs at the time ; and
though upon a clofer fcrutiny we may
obferve it with admiration, yet we juftly
impute a defect of judgment to him who -
lets us enter too fuddenly into his defign,
as fuch a conduct always defeats the ulti-
mate purpofe of his work.
There are, we may obferve, two me-
thods of rouzing the paflions to the moft
flrenuous exertion, both of which, though
different in other refpects, yet agree in re-
quiring fimplicity of diction. One is
when a climax is carried on, either in rea-
foning or in defcription, from lefler to
more important objects, until the whole
becomes highly and univerfally intereft-
ing : — the other arifeth from fome judi-
cious and happy imitation of nature in a
particular occurrence, when her language
is fo fignifkantly adopted as to make a
powerful, as well as immediate imprefiion
upon the heart. The difference betwixt
thefe lies principally in this, that the effect
produced by the firft method is (lowly
accompli fhed, though an entertainment
Obfervations on Compoptlon. 57
agreeably protracted prepares us imper-
ceptibly to feel it with .energy ; whereas
the laft prefents a picture whofe force we
immediately acknowledge, and which
without preparation makes its way to the
heart. Of the former kind are thofe re-
prefentations which either fet one event
In a ftrong and particular point of view,
or derive their power from a detail of cir-
cumftances. Here we permit the writer
to expatiate at leifure on every topic of
perfuafion, every fentiment of tcompaflion,
every event in which we difcover even a
remote connection with the principal ca-
taftrophe. That a. fkilful artift may by
thefe means irrefiftibly ftimulate the paf-
fions, as well as excite the affedions of
his audience, will not be difputed by any
perfon who is acquainted with either.
Yet he who placed himfelf in circum-
ftances of diftrefs, or happily imitating
that of another, hits off an expreffion
which every mind appropriates as its own,
poflefleth this peculiar advantage that he
takes the heart as it were by furprize ;
and to the paffion, of whatever name, ex-
cited
58 Phllofophlcal and Critical
cited by him fuperadds this feeling by
which it acquires incomparable poignancy
and power. In both cafes, (the lad how-
ever more particularly) we fhall find the
fimpleft language producing the happiefl
effect:. We fhall here adduce examples of
each.
The celebrated ftory of Lucretia, as told
by Livy, affords us a fignal example of
the pathos with which a few unadorned
expreffions may convey an interefting
event to the mind. This heroine, after
having fuffered an indignity which fhe
determined not to furvive, fent one mef-
fenger for her father, and another for her
hufband. — " When theie arrived (fays the
" hiftorian) they found Lucretia fitting
." difconfolate in her chamber. Her tears
44 ftreamed at their entrance. To her
44 hufband's queftion, whether all was well
" with.her: — No, replied fhe; what can
44 be well with a woman who has loft her
44 honour? — The footfteps of another,
44 O Collatinus, faid fhe, are in your -bed.
44 But my body alone is violated: — my
** mind is innocent. Let death be my
" wit-
Obfervathns on Compcfition. 59
** witnefs." — After having then concifely
related the tranfaction, fhe adds in a fpirit
of true heroifm. — " I, though guiltlefs of
*' crime, exempt not myfelf from punim-
" ment, nor (hall ever violated chaftity
" live by the example of Lucretia. She
<s pierced her heart, when Ihe had fpoke,
*' with a knife concealed under her gar-
*< ment, and falling forward in the pangs
«* of death, expired *." In this pathetic
tale, related with inimitable fimplicity,
we are dazzled by no adventitious orna-
ment:— a juft and beautiful affinity takes
place betwixt the tranfaction and the
words employed to defcribe it. The hif-
torian paints the whole with a fpirit ade-
I
* " Lucretiam fedentem mceftam in cubiculo in-
veniunt. Adventu fuorum lacrymas obortce : — qus-
rentique viro fatifne falva ? " Minime, inquit, quid
enim falvi eft mulieri amifTa puuicitia ! Vefligia viri
alieni, Collatine, in leclo funt tuo : ccterum corpus eft
tantum violatum, animus infons. Mors teftis erit." —
" Ego me ifti pcceato abfolvo, fupplicio non libero.
Nee ulla deinde impudicitia Lucretije exemplo vivet."
Cultrum quern fub vefte abditum habebat, eum in
corde defigit, prolapfaque in vulnus moribunda ceci-
dit." Hiftor. Rom. Scriptores Omn. torn, i. p. 18.
Aurel. Allob.
quatc
60 Philofophical and Critical
quate to the greatnefs of the action. The
crime was quickly committed ; the refo-
lution immediately taken, and unexpect-
edly executed. The language is therefore
perfectly concife ; and this correfpondence
betwixt the colour and the pattern imitated
(if we may thus exprefs it), this feemingly
artlefs, and eafy narration, conveys the
whole with an energy* which elaborate
defcription, if it had not annihilated, muft
have greatly impaired.
As we obferve a pathos of the ftrongeft
kind to be excited in this inftance by the
narration of one event, in the following
paflage the fame unaffected fimplicity cha-
radtcrizeth the language when the detail
is copious and , circumftantial. — Tacitus,
after having related the life of the cele-
brated Agricola, and expatiated on the
cruelty of the tyrant whom he ferved, at
laft addrefles his fhade in a noble ftyle of
pathetic eloquence. — *c Happy Agricola
" waft thou (fays he), as thy life was illuf-
" trious, and thy exit feafonable ! — From
" thofe who witneffed thy laft fcene we
" know that thy fate was fupported with
" chear-
Obfervatioru on Gompojition. 61
«« chearfulnefs and refolution, as if thou
" wouldft have configned thy innocence
" as a legacy to thy prince ! But to me
" and thy daughter, befides the bitternefs
" of reflecting on a loft parent, our grief
" is augmented, becaufe we had it not in
" our power to watch thee in ficknefs;
*' to relieve the languor of declining na-
" ture; to fatiate our defires by gazing
" on, and embracing thee ! — Beft of pa-
" rents ! — Every thing was then no doubt
" performed to thy honour by the moft
" affectionate of conforts : — but fewer
" tears, in confequence of our abfence,
•c were fhed at thine obfequies ; and thy
" dying eyes exprefTed unfatisfied defire.
" If there is a place for the fpirits of the
*' juft ; — if (as philofophy allures us) great
" minds furvive the ruin of the body;
" ferene be thy repofe*!" — In this ad-
drefs
* " Tu vero fclix Agricola non vitae tantum cla-
ritate, fed etiam opportunitate mortis. Ut perhibent
qui interfuerant novifllmis fermonibus tuis, conftans
& libens fatum exccpifti, tanquam pro virili portione
innccentiam principi donares. Sed mihi fihreque
prater accrbitatem parentis erepti auget mceflitiarn
quod
6 2 Philofophical and Critical
drefs the reader will obferve a clima*
finely conducted throughout, the laft words
of which particularly have, from an ab-
ruptnefs perfectly natural, a very ftriking
effe<2.
The imprefiion made upon the heart in
thefe, and in many other inftances of a
fimilar kind, after all becomes no doubt
weaker in fome degree, as during the
whole procefs we obferve the purpofe
which all is meant to effe&uate. There
is likewife an appearance of art in the
round of modulated periods, however
feemingly flowing and eafy, which pre-
vents an appeal, how forcible foever, frcm
having irrefiftible energy. — But in that
kind of pathos which is produced by a
fudden exclamation, ftrongly expreflive of
internal feeling in any intereftihg occur-
i
quod aflidere valitudini, fovere deficientem, fatiari
vultu complexu non contigit. — Omnia fine dubio, op-
time parentum, addente amantiflima uxore fuperfucre
honor! tuo : — paucioribus tamen lacryrais compofitus
cs, & novifllma in luce defideravere aliquid oculi tui.
Si quis piorum manlbus locus, fi, ut fapientibus placet,
non cum corpore extinguuntur magnae ar.imse, placidc
quiefcas !" Id. torn, ii, p. 279.
rence,
Obfervatlons on Compofition. 63
rence, the effecT: is at the fame time power-
ful and univerfal, becaufe the principles
here wrought upon are common to all.
Here we may foon be convinced that de-
clamation or external ornament would be
aVguments of an exceedingly defective un-
derftanding. — Nature, in circumftances of
deep diftrefs, has one voice in every heart ;
to imitate which juftly is to excite the
moft powerful principles of perfuafion that
operate on mankind. In this cafe, a man
may be faid to fpeak as if he had been de-
puted by the whole fpecies, every indi-
vidual of which adopts his language as his
own. The exclamations of David when
he heard the account of Abfalom's death,
are fuch as we may fuppofe that every
father would make ufe of in fimilar cir-
cumftances. " O Abfalom, my fon ! my
" fon ! Would to God that I had died for
" thee ! O ! my fon, my fon Abfalom !" —
There is inexpreffible pathos in thefe fhort
repetitions, as they mow a -mind wholly
engrofled by the contemplation of one
object, and unable to depart from it for a
moment,
When
64 Phthfophical and Critical
When Creon, in the Antigone of So-
phocles, finds that by having commanded
the fifter of Polynices to be buried alive,
he had occafioned the death of his own
wife and fon, how perfectly natural is his
behaviour ! — " Alas ! alas ! (fays he) why
tc does not fome man plunge a hoftile
•c weapon into my heart ? — I, unhappy
•' wretch, was thy murderer*!"— Deaf to
the conlblation of his friends, his mind
dwells only on one unhappy object. —
•* Ah ! (fays he) my fon ! my wife ! I
«' killed you not willingly f ! — Wretch
"* Ai, ai, at, ai,
AHVTOIV £>c£ij' n //,' vx
TJ> a/M^idfixru
yut &C.
Eyu yap s-'fyx xavov
Tjfyu $>(X,IA ITVfAOV.
•f" AJ/O»T* a» juaratov ftvJp*
O; w era i rt ^* K^ exwv
O? <r£ T*«UT«». O
OTT« Trpoc woTtpou IM*
ITW, ITW
pijy o xaAAir
rrpjuiav a^
f. ITW, ITW
OTTWJ /*TIX£T' a^ap' acAA
"
that
Obfervations on Compofition. 65
<£ that I am, where fhall I fly ? — Come,
" O death, to my relief, that I may never
" behold another day." In thefe exam-
ples it is not the poet, the orator, the man
of fenfibility ; it is the father and the
hufband that fpeak. A fcene like this
puts us in mind of an ancient portico*
temple, or city, viewed in perfpeclive;
Upon contemplating thefe for fome time
we forget the art of the engraver, and
ftand beneath the mouldering obelifks of
Tadmor; walk through the portals of
Perfepolis ; recline in the apartments of
Darius, and behold the great originals of
ancient majefty and dominion.
II. Having thus confidered fimplicity
of expreflion as adorning every branch of
animated Compofition, when no foreign
illuftrations are made ufe of, it remains,
in order to complete our view of the pre-
fent fubjecl:, that when it becomes necef-
fary to introduce thefe, we enquire what it
is that conftitutes fimplicity in the orna-
mental beauties of difcourfe.
As there is nothing which fets every
part of a fubjecl: in a more attractive light
VOL. II. F than
66 Philofophtfol and Critical
than juil and appofite images, fo the ftyle
of Compofition requires not, in any point
of view, greater delicacy and attention in
order to receive the laft heightening than
in the prefent. It is, indeed, a matter of
the greateft difficulty to cull out from the
ftore of imagination, thofe natural orna-
ments which give colour and beauty to
the arguments of reafon ; and to propor-
tion thefe fo exactly to the object, as at
the fame time to take in every part of it
at once, and to render its impreflion for-
cible and permanent. All this is included
in the idea of perfect fimplicity. A feries
of argumentative fentiment, however pow-
erfully it may for fome time arreft atten-
tion by conveying new evidence to the
underftanding, yet in confequence of that
uniform Compofition, which muft here be
carried on, often becomes tedious, and
when the thoughts are abftradted is almoft
unavoidably obfcure, when it is not diver-
fified with proper illuftrations. Thefe are
like little openings in a country, otherwife
uniformly cultivated, which at the fame
time that they prefent fome new object to
the
on Compq/ition. 67
the eye, beginning to be fatiated with its
former view, contribute to fet off to the
higheft advantage fuch as are already fa-
miliar. There are few men in whofe
minds imagination is fo defective, as not
to fuggeft many of thefe ornaments in the
conduct of an exteniive work: — but the
judgment of a writer appears in nothing
more confpicuous than in their propriety
and difpoiition. A fenfible mind will be
offended immediately with a group of
illuflrations, promifcuoufly fcattered over a
performance without much experience ;
becaufe, even though thefe may be well
appropriated to their objects, it is flill at a
lofs to difcover their ufe. Difguft arifeth
as much from viewing too profufe, as too
fcanty a proportion of illuftrations, becaufe
thefe, in fact, lofe their name wrhen ap-
plied to truths which are eaiily compre-
hended, and which require only to be
perfpicuouily expreffed. The limplicity
of nature is here likewife violated, incon-
fiftent as it is with the glare of often-
tation.
F 2 In
68 Philofophical and Critical
In order to preferve this inimitable ex-
cellence in the ornaments of difcourfe, it
is likewife neceflary that the image mould
exhibit a complete reprefentation of its
original, by bringing every part of it fuc-
ceffively into view. The principal defign
with which metaphors are introduced, is
either to explain fome truth which would
have been obfcure, or to render fome fen-
timent ftriking which would have failed
otherwife to excite obfervation. To ac-
complifh the former of thefe ends* the
object muft be fully and diftindly repre-
fented to the mind by an image, as the
face is mown in a mirror; and to obtain
the latter, it muft be placed judicioufly in
that point of view which contributes moft
-effedhially to difplay its propriety. That
fcn object may be diftinctly placed before
the mind, it is requifite that the metaphor
\vhich conveys it mould be followed out
juft as far as illuftration requires, and no
farther. Simplicity, as we have already
evinced, excludes every degree of fuper-
fluity. When images are opened, ex-
panded, and traced elaborately through a
variety
O&firvations on Compofition. 69
variety of circumftances, the mind lofes
fight of the original idea : — its proportion
is no longer obferved, and attention flags
infenfibly becaufe it is not kept awake by
the current of fentiment. We may ob-
ferve likewife, that in philofophical, or
even fentimental performances (as they are
called), this attention to extend and expa-?
tiate upon every minute circumftance of
an illuftration, ufually indicates fterility
both of the reafoning and inventive fa-
culty. Of the firft, becaufe thoughts in
this cafe appear to rife very {lowly when
the mind is fo intent upon drawing out
each with every poffible enlargement : —
of the laft, becaufe a vigorous imagination
is difplayed by the variety, not the la-r
boured decoration of its images; and by
rendering each fignificant, but neither ter
dious nor overwrought.
While we avoid in this manner the error
of purfuing images too clofely, we muft
take care not to fall into the oppofite ex-
treme of mixing thefe improperly. This
fault is occafioned by our taking only a
partial view of an illuftration by which its
F 3 difpro-
70 Philofophical and Critical
difproportion to the original in fome par-
ticular circumflance efcapes obfervation.
In order to make the whole complete, the
mind adopts infenfibly fome fimilar meta-
phor, and thus jumbles feparate images
together in the fame defcription. A great
genius is often led into this fault, by giv-
ing a loofe to the exuberance of imagina-
tion. When Demofthenes, fpeaking of
./Efchines fays, that after lying in wait to
deftroy an honeft or upright member of
the commonwealth, as foon as he has
found an opportunity to accomplim his
purpofe, " he burfts like a tempeft from
his place of retreat ;" the image here em-
ployed is no doubt incomparably expref-
five and fignificant. — But when imme-
diately after he is defcribed with the ora-
tor's other enemies, " like a wild beaft
furioufiy afTaulting him ;" and in order to
preferve the force of both illu ft rations he
concludes with faying, that fuch afiaults
had failed of " rendering him cold in the
caufe of his country," we are fenfible of
an improper mixture of images. An ad-
yerfary fallying out like a whirlwind, and
carrying
on Compaction, ji
carrying all before him, may be compared
with propriety to a tempeft freezing and
deiblating the earth. But the beauty of
the firfl epithet (chilling or freezing) is
Joft when confidered as a confequence
arifmgJTom the affault of a wild beaft, and
the images are therefore faid to be blended
improperly. The reader will find many
examples of this fault, even in the beft
works both ancient and modern, which it
would be ufelefs here to enumerate.
True fimplicity excludes likewife from
the ornaments of language, all affected
brilliance and prettinefs of cxprefllon.
Little conceits in Compofition have the
fame effect as improper condefcenfion in
the tranfactions of life. As in the laft
cafe, an exalted character is debafed by
fuch a circumftance ; fo in the firft, the
higheft fpecies of the art is reduced by
this affectation in its value, and its author
rendered little and contemptible. Ovid,
among all the ancients, appears to have
fallen moft frequently into this fault. The
moft dignified perfonages in his fable, are
tainted with this bias of the poet. Thus
F 4 Phoebus
72 Philofophlcal and Critical
Phoebus in his addrefs to Phaeton, though
interefted as a father to difluade him from
a ruinous attempt, and fpeaking with fer-
vent affedion, yet ufes this low kind of
wit (as Addifon juftly calls it) by which,
fuppofing the ftory to be true, he muft
have greatly funk in the reader's efti-
mation :
Si mutabile pe&us
Sit tibi, conciliis, non curribus utere noftris.
A4et. lib. ii.
In the ftory of NarcifTus, the fame affecta-
tion chara&erifeth his defcription. When
the youth, heated in the chafe, retires to
quench his thirft at the cooling fountain,
and firft beholds with admiration and love
his own beautiful face, the poet defcribes
Jiis firft emotions by faying,
Dum fitim fedare cupit ; fitis altera qrevit;
fc while he flrived to quench one thirft he
raifed another," i. e. the thirft of gazing
with confuming defire on his own beauty.
Thefe childifh quibbles which the author
defigned for ornaments to this (otherwife)
noble po.em, are incompatible with that
iimplicity which is conftituted by a na-
tural
Obfer -nations on Compofition. 73
tural though happy difpofition of the
fitteft words, conveying ideas to the mind
with eafe and perfpicuity.
As we are here, however, confidering
the illustrations of difcourfe, which are not
carried on in the preceding examples, we
fhall felect one other paffage from this
poet, in which he endeavours to heighten
our idea of diftrefs by comparifon. When
Hypermneftra, in one of his Epiftles, de-
fcribes her terror upon having heard the
groans of her murdered kindred, and
when me trembled every moment for the
life of her hufband, me exprefleth her
emotions by faying,
Ut Jeni zephyro fragiles vibrantur ariftae ;
Frigida populeas ut quatit aura comas ;
Aut fie, aut etiam tremui magis *.• • »
« As
* Epift. Heroid. p. 136. Edit. Delph. Though
the writings of Ovid abound with little faults of the
kind here pointed out, yet thefe are eafily excufed
when we find them abounding likewife with fuch ex-
amples of genuine fublimity, of pi&urefque defcrip-
tion, of happy feleftion, and of juft and beautiful
illuftration, as muft convince every reader that the au-
thor poiTefled an eminent fliare of the mod exalted
Dualities of the human mind. His account, or rather
prophecy
74 Pliilofophical and Critical
As fragile reeds vibrate to the gentle
zephyr; as the leaves of the poplar
" quiver
prophecy of the general conflagration in the,firft book
of his Metamorphofis, affords a well known inftance
of fub!imity.
.Effe quoque in fatis reminifcitur affore tempns, &c.
In the fucceeding book, when Phaeton has thrown all
nature in confufion, by having mifmanaged the cha-
riot of the Sun £a thought which a great imagination
could alone have conceived) there is a circumftance
felected with peculiar propriety in the attitude of
Telius rearing her blafted head, and addrcfling Jupiter
in her laft refource The poet, after having painted
the univerfal conflagration, makes this perfonage arife
from the center of her dark dominions. But no fooner
does fhe face the light, than, before (he can utter %
word, we are told
Oppofuit manum fronti, magnoque tremore
Omnia concutiens, paullumfubfcdity & infra
Quam folet efle fuit. — Met. lib. ii.
The circurnflance of her clapping her hand upon her
lead as foon as fhe felt the heat, is natural and pic-
turefque ; but when we obferve her fhrinking immer
diately after, and feeking a cooler feat before fhe can
fpeak, we admire the addrefs and genius of the poet,
who by this fingle ftroke impreffeth a ftronger idea of
the univerfal ruin that threatened nature, than by
any description however elaborate. An imagination
truly of a fuperior order is never evinced more confpi-
cuoufly, than by fixing on one circumftance vividly
characleriftical, inftead of running into minute repre-
fentation. In the fine poem entitled Carthon, Offian
reprefents
Otfervattons on Compofiticn. 75
<* quiver to the gale — I trembled thus, and
*l even more." — Surely this image is un-
natural and affeded. A perfon animated
by fome part of the feelings which the re-
collection of fo tremendous a fcene mufl
have awakened, would never have ufed
any metaphor whatever to exprefs the
convulfion of agonized nature, and far
lefs one borrowed from objects which are
fhown in the fport and wantonnefs of
fancy.
The moft perfect examples of fimpli-
city in the images with which the ftyle of
Conipofition ought to be embellimed, are
to be found in the facred writings. Of a
far different kind from the inftances for-
merly mentioned, is the Evangelift's de-
fcription of the fcene prefented to the ado-
nimed fpeclators who went on the third
day to vifit the fepulchre of our Saviour ! —
reprefents the ruins of Balelutha in the fame manner,
by the figure of " a fox looking out at a window."
This power of calling out a variety of ideas exhibiting
a complete reprefentation of many objefts, by the fe-
le&ion of one fingle ftroke, chara£terifeth genius in its
utmoft extent, and is rarely to be found unlefs in
>yorks of thfe greateft eminence.
w Behold!
7 6 .Phihfophical and Critical
" Behold ! there was a great earthquake !
" For the angel of the Lord defcended
" from heaven, and came, and rolled back;
" the ftone from the door, and fat on it ! — •
" His countenance was like lightning !
<f and his raiment white as fnow ! And
" for fear of him the keepers did {hake,
" and became as dead men!" Let any
reader of the leaft fenfibility, compare the
feelings excited by this defcription with
thofe that are rouzed by the preceding
one. The tranfaction is related fo fimply
as to betray no affectation in the writer :
yet we fee the ftone removed from the
fepulchre, behold the face and appearance
of him who fat on it ; and make with the
guard who were chilled with amazement
at the fcene !
An effect very different from the former
is produced by the following paffage ; yet
the fame unaffected eafe and fimplicity of
illuftration give its fignificance to each.
When the Gods are engaged in combat
with each other, upon winding up the
ftory of the Iliad, Neptune and Apollo ad-
vance with an hoftile femblance, and the
god
Qbferiiations on Gompofition. 77
god of ocean dares his compeer with fome
pride and fuperiority to the fight. The
dignity of both characters is here to be
preferved ; and Homer has fucceeded won-
derfully in keeping up the majefty of the
divine nature in the conduct of Apollo
while he retires from Neptune. Neither
arrogating equality with, nor acknow-
ledging inferiority to the other, he only
{hows, by an image which has peculiar
fignificance in the mouth of a deity, that
the fubjed: of their difpute is not of im-
portance enough to juftify their con-
tention.
, oux av jtxs <
n J» trot <ye, (Spores evtxx
v, oj (^yAAo«n!> foixoTsj, aAAor? u.tv re
TcXiQovcrtv
AAAors <Tav (pOti/uOouff
-- To combat for mankind
111 fuits the wifdom of ccleftial mind.
For what is man ?— Calamitous by birth,
They owe their life and nouridiment to earth ;
Like yearly leaves that now with beauty crown'd
Smile on the fun, now wither on the ground. POPE.
The comparifon which the mind is led
by this paflage to form betwixt the glo-
rious Being who pronounceth thefe words,
and
78 Philofophical and Critical
and the creatures to whom they refer, in*-
effably heightens the effect produced by
them. What can be conceived more re-
mote from the immutable eflence of Deity
than leaves fcattered on earth by the gales
of autumn ! — Yet what more expreffive of
the fragility of man !
III. We have now confidered fimplicity
as a character of juft Composition,. extend-
ing to every fpecies of this comprehenfive
art, and not only confiftent with, but re-
quired neceflarily to conftitute the prin-
cipal beauties we admire in it. — But the
queftion will here naturally occur, — by
what method is this excellence to be ac-
quired ? — In anfwer to this enquiry, let it
be obferved, that difficult as fuch an imi-
tation of nature may be deemed in moft
in (lances, "yet it is often hit off moft hap-
pily by thofe who appear to have aimed
leaft at its attainment. He who thoroughly
comprehends his fubject, and who is at-
tentive rather to that kind of expreffion
which a fentiment requires, than to thofe
fuperfluous ornaments wrhich. may fet it
off to advantage, will probably convey it
in
Obfirvatlons on Compojition. 79
in the firnplefl and moft natural lan-
guage *. A mind in which the under-
itanding exerts confiderable influence, will
permit the language to rife with the
thought (if we may thus exprefs it), rather
than the thought to be exalted by the ex-
preffion ; as the words in this cafe will
always be fuitable, and every object will
be mown in /#//, but not in Drained di-
menfions. Thus the fublime, the rati-
onal, the picturefque, the pathetic, will
each exert its proper influence on the
mind; producing that effect which nature,
happily imitated, never fails to accomplifh.
When, on the contrary, a fuperficial fen-
timent is elaborately decorated with the
pomp of ornamental epithet, a judicious
reader is fenfible, upon recollection, that
the part is overacted, and challenges im-
mediately the defect of fimplicity. A
difproportion appears betwixt the thought
ftript of its ornaments, and the words that
* " Coniperfa fit oratio (fays Cicero) verborum
fententiarumque floribus, id non fufum per totam ora-
tionem, fed ita diftin<ftum, ut fiat quafi in ornntu Jn-
fjgnia qusedatn difpof.ta & lumina." Ds Orat. lib. iii.
convey
86 Philofophlcal and Critical
convey it, which indicates a correfpondirrg
difproportion of thofe powers which gave
rife originally to fo unnatural an aflem-
blage.
A certain pedantic affectation may cha-
racterife the ftyle of an author's compo-
fition as much as it may his manners.
In both cafes a reader of penetration will
impute this fault to the fame caufe, a.
fir iking defect of the difcerning faculty.
Both therefore may be corrected by the
fame means. Eafe and elegance of ad-
drefs is obtained by frequenting the beft
company, and by converfing with people
whom thefe popular qualities have ren-
dered univerfally agreeable. By thefe
means the ruft of pedantry is gradually
filed off, and a man without having prac-
tifed flavifh imitation, becomes affimilated
to thofe whom he hath regarded as models,
while his deportment ftill continues to be
marked by thofe radical fignatures, in their
full ftrength, which nature ftamps as in-
delibly on the mind as on the countenance.
In Compofition we ought to proceed in a
fimilar manner. By entering deeply into
meta-
Obfervations on Compq/ition. 8i
metaphyfical fpeculation, a man who wants
that acutenefs of intellect) that power of
developing truth from the chaos of ab-
ftracted definition and plaufible diftinction,
which denominates a matter in this fci-
ence, will catch the faults of his original
without acquiring his excellence* One
philofopher who thinks deeply, but whofe
difpofition is accurate and his language'
peripicuous, will acquire imitators, who,
unable to enter with real difcernment into
a fubject, puzzle themfelves and their
readers by a conftant affectation of pre-
cifion; and, incapable of ranging diftindt
objects with accuracy, throw a promifcuous
glare over all. By this abfurd attempt
the genuine character of the imitator is
dijlorted (if we may thus exprefs it), but
not concealed: — an inequality which might
have been overlooked is only called out
into confpicuous light by comparifon, and
we fee not what the man was defigned fof
by nature, but what he is rendered by at/-
tempting to be more.
In order, therefore, to exprefs our
thoughts at the fame time with precifion
VOL. II. G and
8 2 Phihfophical and Critical
and fimplicity, a writer ought to perufe
the molt approved ftandards in every lite-
rary department, but without a fettled
purpoie to follow invariably any original
whatever. His own manner will form
infenfibly while he is engaged in ftudying
thofe of others which have obtained ap-
probation ; and that difcriminating bias
wrhich cannot be concealed ^ will be fet off
to advantage by being mown undifguifed.
There is an affcdtation even of eafc^ which
to a man of true fenfibility is obvious and
difgufting. Like the aukward geftures of
a pedant affecting to imitate elegance of
manners, the real character appears every
moment through the difguife, and a dif-
torted refemblance expofeth it to ridicule *,
It is by ftudying the writings of authors,
who themfelves have followed the ftandard
of nature, that we mall obtain that expref-
* In order to have this obfervation exemplified, an
ingenious reader may compare the writings of Addifon
(one of the cafieffc1 of authors) with fome more mo-
dern performances. The flowing and elegant lan-
guage of the former forms a contraft to ftiffnefs and
alTe£lution, which fhows thefe in a point of view more
confpkuous than v\ hea they are contemplated apart.
fioa
Obfervattons on Compofition. 83
(ion appropriated to every object fo hap-
pily as to admit of no alteration without
being injured, which we underftand by the
term fimple. A tafte naturally good may
be fpoiled by being converfant only with
faulty and defective models, and a judg-
ment which would have defpifed thofe
little conceits that fometimes fland in place
of intereiling fentiment, may be brought
to approve and even imitate thefe, when
characterifmg the patterns that are fub-
mitted to its examination.
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SECTION III.
Of Perfpiciious Compofition*
TT is a truth at the fame time fuggefted
by reflection, and confirmed by the
concurring teftimony of all authors who
have thought on the fubjecl: of Compo-
fition, that one character which ought to
diftinguifh principally every fpecies of it
without exception, is a certain happy per-
fpicuity. This excellence goes under dif-
G 2 ferent
84 Philosophical and Critical
ferent names, as the fubjefts direct to
which it is applied *. An ancient critic,
who confiders perfpicuity in as extenfive
a view as we are required to take upon
this occafion, explains its meaning fo prq-
* Quintilian denominates perfpicuity the capital
excellence of an orator. *' Prima eft (fays he) elo-
quentire -virtus peripicuitas." Lib. iii. c. 3. But he
immediately explains himielf. " Quo quifque in-
genio minus valet, hac (perfpicuitate) ic magis attollere,
& dilatare conatur, ut ftatura breves in digitos erigun-
tur, & plura infirmi minantur." Id. ibid. This would
appear at firft to be an inadequate view of the prefeut
fubjedt, which canr.ot, as we fhall fee afterwards,
dittinpuifh, at lead in one important fenfe, the writ-
ings of an author who has a fmall ftare of genius.
Sometimes this word is ufed to fignify philo-
fophical evidence. Thus Diogenes Laertius defines it.
2aOwKX Si fft Af£j? j/vwpt/x-ujf -snxfufuyx TO vovptvov.
Zfv.j3j£. ^. ^ he great critic, to whom we have
often had recourfe, gives a general definition of per-
fpicuity which exhibits a full view of it when applied
to all fubjeifts. A<a(p<zvff Jf Xfyu o {$•» pi-j ofl*Tov, ou
x«6 auto $t ogzrov ux aTrAaf tnrtiv9 aAAa of xXXorciov
Xgupot. I7ff» xJ'^PC* |3*^» (3- *($• £• That vivid
reprefentation (fo different from the perfpicuity of
philofophy) which diftinguiflieth the poet and the
orator, and which may be faid to conllitute this cha-
racter in their fpheres, is included in this definition.
The medium by which it is obtained, is language pro-
perly fele&ed.
perly
Obfirvations on Compq/ition. 85
perly in his general eflimate, that in order
clearly to comprehend its ufe and to dif-
cover the method of obtaining it, we mall
felect fuch of his thoughts as are con-
nected moft nearly with the plan of this
eflay. " Perfpicuity of difcourfe is con-
" flituted by the union of purity or fim-
" plicity, and accuracy. The firft of
" thefe (he obferves) includes all the forms
u of eloquence he had formerly treated
" of; — Sentiment, the manner of difcuffing
" a fubjecl:, expreflion, &c. But accuracy,
" toxemia (as he calls it), relates principally
*c to the fecond of thefe ; — the method in
-" which a fubjedt is treated. Thofe fen-
(l timents or propofitions, which may be
" denominated pure, are fuck as either
" are or feem to be common to all in ge-
" neral, and to have nothing in them con-
" cealed or abftracled."" — Of thefe he pro^
duceth examples.
Purity is here taken in its moft enlarged
fenfe, as diftinguifhing the fentiment as
well as the ftyle of Compofition : and it is
unqueftionably true, that this character of
.the art here treated of, is obtained in the
G 3 greatefl
86 Philofophical and Critical
greateft perfection by him, who not only
treats in fuch a manner of common iub-
jedts as to render his fentiments univer-
fally intelligible, but who has the art of
explaining intricate theories fo clearly as
to make every idea appear obvious and
familiar. This moft probably is our au-
thor's meaning *. He proceeds to fay,
that " the method of treating a fubjed:
" has the neareft affinity to that purity
" which has been explained. A difcourfe
" is diftinguifhed by both, when the au-
" thor plainly relates a fact; and pro-
" ceeding to fpeak of fome truth nakedly
" laid open, introduceth no foreign cir-
" cumftance into his narration *f. By
foreign
* Should we fuppofe him to have meant that purity
is inconfiftent with abftraftion or fubtlety of ideas,
the obfervation would not be juft. Perfpicuity relates
not to the nature of objects, but to the drefs in which
thefe are pourtrayed. It obtains when objects of
whatever kind are diftinctiy placed before the mind;
and it is violated when thefe are detailed inaccurately.
The objects themfelves are of no confequence.
~j~ Za£v»£»*u rotvuv AOJ/J* sroict EvxcHitot. xxi xa-
e KA0APO2 xfv Ao.of tt.7roi.vi
TOI; ZTocirYAfVOt;, cvvoict, /xiow, Afn, xaj TCI;
Qbfervations on Compofition. 87
foreign circumftances here, are meant fuch
as are forced in unnaturally without being
related to the principal fubject. An hete-
rogeneous combination of this kind ren-
ders a difcourfe inexplicable, and is indeed
incompatible both with juflnefs of fenti-
ment, and with perfpicuity of expreflion.
That we may do juftice to this important
branch of our prefent enquiry, we mail
confider perfpicuity as a character of juft
Composition — as difcovered in the general
difpofition of any fubject whatever, par-
ticularly of one that is comprehenfive and
complicated :— as appearing with peculiar
propriety in abfiracted philofophical dif-
quifition : — and as characterising, in a fenfe
higher and more animated than the for-
mer, the moft perfect productions of poetry
and eloquence.
on v.oivy.1
. EPMOFEN. TZffii lAEIiN TC^U.
04 I. We
88 Philofophical and Critical
I. We have in a preceding part of this
efiay, endeavoured to explain at confider-
able length the ufe of method in general,
and to take a view of the underjtanding
as wholly occupying this extenfive pro-
vince. In the prefent, beyond all other
employments, judgment may evince the
clearnefs or obfcurity of its original con-
ceptions. It hath been formerly obferved,
that in every fpecies of Compoiltion, with-
out exception, a method either concealed
or obvious is always carried on, and that
while another faculty may fuperintend the
execution diftinguifhed by no regularity
of procedure ; this in every rational mind
maintains a certain harmony and propor-
tion, or attempts to maintain thefe, dif-
ficult as it fometimes is to obferve its ope-
rations.
The general plan of a work is faid to
be perfpicuous when it is fuch as fully
comprehends the fubjec~l to be treated of;
and when the fubordinate parts though
having each its proper tendency to pro-
mote an ultimate purpofe, yet coincide not
in
Obfervations on Ccmpofition. 89
in fuch a manner as to render the dif-
pofition perplexed, but are placed pre-
cifely in the moft natural arrangement.
When an author takes a large compafs in
his work, and propofeth to include in it
a very diyerfified feries of objects, it be-
comes neceffary to form a certain general
and methodifed eftimate of the whole, of
whofe fitnefs and comprehenfion the reader
may pronounce without having entered
into minute inveftigation. It is, however,
an high recommendation to a performance
in many inftances, that the method is con-
cealed (when materials lefs diverfified pre-
fent themfelves) and that it opens gra-
dually with new light upon the mind, as
a reader is led in this manner imper-
ceptibly and agreeably from one ftep to
another, and never comprehends the full
procefs of reafoning until he arrives at the
end of it. Nor in the conduct of an ex-
tenfive plan is perfpicuity violated by the
ufe of digrejffums, even though we may be
unable at firft to perceive in thefe the moft
diftant relation to the point in view.
When an author difentangles himfelf
agreeably
90 P hilofophical and Critical
agreeably from a little embarrafTment of
this nature (as it may be judged), and
either elucidates his argument, or renders
it entertaining, or accomplifheth both ends
at once by this medium, we juftly form a
favourable opinion of his judgment ; and
the fentiment is imprefTed on memory
more powerfully in proportion as its illuf-
tration was unexpected, — Let us try an
example.
In the noble dialogue on the immortality
of the foul, entitled Phedon, Socrates, after
having endeavoured to prove his point by
arguments drawn from the doctrine of
contraries giving rife to each other*, and
after having likewife attempted to view the
foul in its fuppofed ftate of pre-exiftence f,
* His argument is this. All things (fays he) are
produced by their contraries. Beauty, for inftance,
is oppofite to deformity, juftice to injuflice. What is
called lefs, muft have been reduced to that ftate from
greater magnitude : — fwiftnefs in the fame manner
arifeth from debility, and ftrength from weaknefs.
Now if every thing arifeth thus from its contrary, —
what, fays Socrates to his friends, does life give rife
to? — Death. What then muft death breed? — Un*
queflionably — Life. 3>ou$. T/ATJ^A. »t. if.
f Id. T/xry*. MJ. &C.
at
Olfervatlons on Compofition. 91
at laft comes to ihow that it is an imma-
terial fubftance. He illuftrates this doc-
trine, as ufual, by comparifon. " The
" real eflence of things (fays he) equality,
" beauty, &c. while external objects are
" conftantly varying, is any change
" wrought upon thefe ? — There is none,
" his friends reply. What then, fays
" the philofopher, fhall we pronounce of
" beautiful objects, as men, horfes, gar-
" ments, &c. are thefe oppofite to the
" former in this fenfe, that by no method
" whatever can they be kept in their ori-
" ginal ftate ? — Thefe, it is anfwered, are
*' always fluctuating. — Of thofe two then
" (refumes Socrates, after having reafoned
" at length on the fubjecl) which does
" the foul feem moft to refemble, the di-
" vine, or the mortal ;— the perifhable,
" or the immutable ? — The mind, fay his
" friends, we mull acknowledge refem-
" bles what is unchangeable, and our
" body what is mortal *." — By the little
circum-
^ AUTJJ tj OTSIA »;j Aoj/ov SiSepiy rov «vat xai
xatrot
92 Phihjbphical and Critical
circumlocution employed here, Socrates*
meaning appears perfectly obvious, and
his reafoning at the fame time is ftrength-
ened and elucidated. Another beautiful
ftroke of the fame kind the reader will
find in the note *.
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* When Simmias and Cebes, in the fame dialogue,
have propofed fuch arguments againft the immortality
of the foul as fhggered all the hearers, and appeared
to overthrow all that Socrates had advanced, we are
told he kept filence for fome time, and obferving the
impreflaon made upon his audience, prepared them to
expeft that he would clear up their doubts by a little
piece of conduft adapted with admirable propriety to
the occafion. Inftead of making any direct anfwer to
the objections, ftroking Phedon's head, who fat by
him,
Obf creations on Compojltlon. 93
Though however, circumftances appa-
rently digreffive are thus advantageous in
general to perfpicuity, yet in conducting
the plan of a work, an author ought to
avoid the fault of extending thefe to any
difproportioned length. When this is the
cafe, we neceflarily either lofe fight of the
him, and playing with the ringlets of his hair,—
" To-morrow perhaps, faid he, Phedon, you will poll
" away thefe beautiful locks. — It will probably be fo,
" replied he. Not, faid Socrates, if you take my
" advice. — Why? — To-day both you and I will per-
tf form this office upon ourfelves> if our argument is
" indeed loft without hope of recovery." By this
beautiful digreflion (referring to the Argives, who cut
their hair and made a vow not to let it grow until
they had conquered the Spartans) he at the fame time
teacheth his hearers not to be daunted by the plau-
fibility of objections, however ftrong, at fir ft view,
until thefe have been fcanned deliberately ; and re-
lieves the mind, fatigued with attention, to abftracted
reafoning, and requiring a paufe to return to it with
alacrity. The fubject is here likewife introduced
with great advantage, as it comes in fome meafure
unexpectedly ; and before the philofopher fpeaks, we
conceive him equal to the folution we defire from
him. Circumftances of this kind, happily introduced
and propeily conducted, indicate great knowledge of
human nature, and a difcernment well adapted to the
purpofes that ought to be accomplished by philo-
fophical refearch.
original
94 Philofophical and Critical
original defign, or purfue it with difficulty;
and a performance in which the thoughts
taken feparately may be clearly exprefled,
will appear as a whole to be compofed of
broken and detached parts without fym-
metry or coherence. In the fphere of
Compofition, as in that of converfation, a
man who rambles in his narration or in
his reafoning, without keeping fome prin-
cipal object clofely and invariably in his
view is juftly cenfured, as deficient in
clearnefs of intellectual perception, and as
{hooting without any determinate aim.
As, therefore, to take in, and to range in
perfpicuous order, the various parts of a
complicated fubje£l demands comprehen-
fion, fo to purfue this order clearly, when
once eftablilhed, through all its branches, a
power is requifite of fixing the intellectual
eye upon fucceflive objects fo fteadily, as
that the more may never prevent us from
doing juftice to the lefs important; and
that from impatience to arrive at a fa-
vourite topic, we may not hurry too lightly
over fuch as convey not, when contemp-
lated, fo high a degree of pleafure. The
firft
Obfervatwns on Compo/ition. 95
firft of thcfe powers Cannot be carried by
any application beyond certain limits, ex-
tended or contracted according to the ori-
ginal ftrength or debility of the faculties
of the mind : — the other may be exerted
by any man of moderate underftanding,
who has refolution to fix his thought, as
he may do the external organ of fight,
upon any object whatever, until he gains
an habit of viewing it deliberately, and of
delineating it with prechion.
A feries of objects thus paffing fuc-
ceffively in review before the mind, will
by thefe means be ranged in perfpicuous
order, and as in a family managed with
well-regulated ceconomy, where attention
not diilracted by many promifcuous em-
ployments, is beftowed on each at the
proper feafon ; fo here the parts will ftand
together by this fleady recollection, in
fuch difpofition as to give an air of con-
fiftency and proportion to the whole.
When the firft draught of a work is com-
pleted in this manner, and the principal
parts Sketched out, the inferior members
fall naturally into their places, each occu-
96 Phllofophlcal and Critical
pying that to which it is beft adapted.
Nothing therefore, further remains to
render a difcourfe perfpicuous in every
fenfe of that expreffion, than that the lan-
guage fhould ftand in the fame relation to
the fentiments which thefe laft maintain
reciprocally to each other. This likewife
will follow in a great meafure, as a con-
fequence from the principles here efta-
bliihed. A man is feldom at a lofs to
convey ideas clearly to others, which he
diitinctly apprehends himfelf. When we
are at a lofs for words upon any occafion
to render our meaning explicit, this em-
barrafTment generally arifeth from fome
defective view of our fubjed:, or from fome
combination of fimilar ideas, which we
cannot eafily difcriminate. Let a man
thoroughly comprehend, and be deeply
interefted in any bufinefs; he will then
exprcfs himfelf with energy and fluency.
His language however inaccurate, will
have ftrong iignificance, and he will im-
part to others thofe fenfations with viva-
city, which have made a forcible and per-
manent impreiiion on himfelf.
II. The
Ohferuations on Compofitlon. 97
II. The perfpicuity here recommended,
though it is an eflential character of Gom-
pofition, without which no fpecies of it
can be either entertaining or inftructive,
yet ought in no cafe to be ftudied with
clofer attention, than when the mind in-
veftigates remote and abftracted propofi-
tions. It is exceedingly difficult, when
we attempt to carry to its utmoft limits
the power by which that point is per-
ceived, where truth and falfhood are firft
difunited; to dillinguifh from each other
objects almoft perfectly fimilar fo nicely,
as that plaufible may not be fubdituted in
place of eflential difference ; and apparent
be received as real information. We may
judge of truth and error as of empires
whofe boundaries are not accurately fpe-
cified : — when we have made conliderable
progrefs in the precincts of the laft with-
out intention, we may fufpect ourfelves to
have wandered from the right path, and
may attempt to regain it. But while this
deviation is a matter of uncertainty, re-
flection only ferves to augment our em-
barraflment, and we can form no juft and
VOL. II. H fatif-
98 Philofophical and Critical
fatisfaclory conclufion. Thus it is too
often with intellectual refearch, when car-
ried beyond the limits which perfpicuous
inveftigation would preicribe. Whether
this practice of perplexing what we mean
to elucidate, arifeth from the defire of eila-
blifhing juit principles upon the moft folid
foundation, from the hope of fubduing
difficulty by perfeverence, or (what is
moft common) from the vanity of build-
ing new theories, and of exploding former
fyftems of belief, merely perhaps becaufe
thefe have had univerfal influence ; — from
whichever of thefe caufes derived, it is
certain, that the underftanding is here
made the dupe of the paffions in many
inftances, by whofe influence men having
been perfuaded to overleap the bounds
affigned to the refearches of reafon, have
involved themfelves in the inextricable
labyrinth of error.
In order to avoid being mifled in this
manner, a man who is felicitous to know
how far his fentiments are juft, and to
render thefe perfpicuous, ought to try
whether his ideas will ftand the teft of
com-
Uyervaftonjf oh Compo/ition. 99
comparifon, and of illuftration particularly
from external objects. With regard to
the laft, whatever falls under the cogni-*
zance of the fenfes (fuppofing thefe to be
unimpaired) is expofed in a light abun-
dantly confpicuous. Every eye can dif-
tinguifh with eafe perfect fymmetry from
vifible difproportion, and conveys to the
mind that fenfation of pleafure or pain
which each is calculated univerfally to ex-
cite. A fentiment, therefore, a propo-
fition, or a diftinction that can receive
illuftration by an exact comparifon with
fuch an object, and ftill more with fuch a
feries, we may pronounce, without hefita-
tion, to have been diftinctly comprehended;
Of thefe, on the other hand, that to which
no example can be brought perfectly to
correfpond ; which demands a certain pe-
culiarity of phrafe, or is founded wholly
in fome ambiguous and unexceptionable
epithet; ought to be fufpected as either
having no real exiftence, or* if it have, as
not being thoroughly underftood.
When a truth is indeed either felf-evi-
dent, or is clearly derived from certain
H 2 general
jco Philofophical and Critical
general principles, examples are fuper-
fluous,^md can anfvver no purpofe. When
again the former is of fuch a nature as to
exclude direct comparifon with external
objects, fome real, though diftant point of
refemblance may be felected ; or fome
mode of illuftration, drawn from other
fources, carried on which, may be adapted
to mow it in the happieft point of view.
But whatever purpofe an author may pro-
pofe to accomplifh, that of inftru£tion is
at an end as foon as his principles will
no longer bear to be enforced -in this man-
ner, or are underftood fo defectively that
it is not attempted.
Thefe general obfervations on the per-
fpicuity of philofophical fentiment, will
affift us in forming fome judgment of the
mode of expreflion that is beft adapted to
convey it. On this branch of our fubjecl:
it is indeed impoflible to lay down par-
ticular rules ; becaufe whatever method a
writer may purfue, he will always fail of
rendering that clear to his readers which
is not fully and diftinctly comprehended
by himfelf. As the firft ftep, therefore, to
acquire
Obfervations on Compofition. 101
acquire this happy .characteriftic of Com-
pofition, an author muft be thoroughly
acquainted with the nature and quality of
his materials, which he will thus know in
what manner to digeft. When this im-
portant part of his work is over, like an
able artift, whofe tools are prepared and
at hand, he will proceed to put each to
that ufe for which it was originally fitted.
To drop the metaphor here, the author
ought to confider in what drefs thoughts
following each other fucceffi vely in the
mind, require to be pourtrayed with the
faireft profpecl: of being univerfally intel-
ligible *. To thofe who are not internally
blind, there is a language that will fet off
fentiment, even in the moft abftracted en-
quiry, to great advantage, in the lame
manner as there is a colour or fafhion
fuited with propriety to every complexion.
In general, this may be faid to lie in that
* This is agreeable to Quintilian's clear and accu-
rate account of tne manner in which Compofition is
carried on. " Paulatim res facilius fe oftendent,
verba refpondebunt ; compofitio fequetur. Cun<fta
ut in familia bene inftituta in oiBcio erunt."
H 3 fimpli-
102 Phihfophical and Critical
fimplicity which though confident with
flrength, fublimity, pathos, and elegance,
yet preferves always the juft medium be-
twixt abundance and defect *.
But as in the more abftracted difqui-?
fitions of philofophy, obfcurity is the fault
of all others to be moft feduloufly avoided,
and perfpicuity the characteriftic to be
principally ftudied, we fhall here lay down
a few rules by an exact obfervation of
which the attainment of this important
purpofe may be facilitated.
i. An author ought then particularly to
confider, as foon as he enters upon a work
of this kind, by what means a feries of
thought, naturally cold and uninterefting,
may be rendered as agreeable as poflible ;
and by what method of procedure an im-
preffiori may be made mofl fuccefsfully on
that intellectual power to which his dif-
courfe is principally addrefled. Before a
theory, recommended by its novelty as
well as truth, can be thoroughly efta-
blifhed, an author, however diftinguifhed
p. 23.
Cbfervations on Compofition. 10?
by originality, will find that many known
truths muft be repeated, becaufe the
greateft difcoveries, when fearched to the
bottom, arife wholly from principles uni-
verially acknowledged, combined in fuch
a manner as may lead to fome unexpected
conclufion. — Of thefe even the moft fu-
perficial may appear with fome meafure
of figniiicance, when the words or colour
rnoft juitly appropriated to it are happily
felected. When again this propriety is
not attended to as much in the expreffion
of obvious as of abftracled ideas, the con-*-
nedion is loft, at leaft to many readers ;
and a performance in which thefe laft
may be clearly explained, will thus be
chargeable upon the whole with obfcurity,
The writer, therefore, mould always re-^
member, that whatever may be his own
character, thole of his readers are greatly
diverfifiedf When his purpofe is only to
give information to the underftanding,
this faculty will point out to him the ne-
ceflity of attending to thofe which guard
(if that expreffion may be ufed) the ave-
nues that lead to it. For this purpofe he
H 4 will
104. Philosophical and Critical
will attend as clofely as poffible, not only
to the ftrain of his compofition m general,
but to that peculiar expreffion which the
parts, .taken feparately, demand as moft
fuitable. Thus he will fometimes (as his
judgment may direct) ftudy eafe and ele-
gance of phrafe ; at others, a ftyle more
forcible and animated : a part will here
require a little heightening when the
thought is remote, or the argumentation
protraded ; and by thus varying his com-
pofition judicioufly, as his fubj eel: becomes
diverfified, he will obtain the 'end of ren-
dering his fentiments intelligible, and their
impreflion permanent.
2. As a means ftill further to promote
perfpicuity in .that kind of difquifition
where this acquirement is at the fame time
moft expedient and difficult, a man of un-
derftanding will find it neceiTary to make
life, as much as poffible, of fuch words as
are moft obvious and univerfally under-
ftood. In the prefent cafe, fuch a man
will be careful as much of rendering -his
fentiments obvious and pleafmg, as in an-
x>ther he would be of his external appear-
ance.
Obferuations on Compofitlon. 105
ance. He whofe afpe6t is not inviting,
endeavours naturally to compenfate for
this inconvenience by the fmile of com-
plaifance, elegance of drefs, and infmuating
manners. We would judge ftrangely of
him, if inftead of attempting thus to pal-
liate circumftances that create difguft, we
fhould find him, on the contrary, ftudioufly
heightening it by a deportment diftant and
gloomy as his countenance. It is in the
fame manner wholly improper to clothe
proportions, not eafily comprehended, in
words which, though familiar to fome ears,
are unintelligible to others; becaufe ob-
fcurity is the confequence of this practice
in many inftances, when there is other-
wife no perplexity either in the difpofition,
or language of a performance ; and readers
are difcouraged from engaging in a pur-
fuit by this circumfcance, which might
otherwife have been followed both with
pleafure and information.
" What then ! — Is the philofopher, the
" man of fcience, exalted far above the
" level of his kind by ftudy, capacity, and
" inveftigation ; — is he required to debafe
the
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" the noble ft of all acquifitions, by the uie
of inelegant and vulgar phrafeology !
Ought not fentiments calculated only
for \htfewy to be exprefied in words
fuited to their dignity, without regard
to thofe for whom they are not calcu-
" lated * !" — Odi prophanum vulgus &
arceo,
* In very early ages it feems to have been the prac-
tice of philosophers to conceal their tenets from the
cognizance of the vulgar. Hence the -/Egyptian hiero-
glyphics, faid to have been invented by Hermes
Trifmegiftus, came to be ufed as expreffive of certain
myfterious do£trines. Thefe, as divine truths, (ac-
cording to a maxim of Hippocrates) were only to be
communicated to men employed in facred offices.
Pythagoras (the firft man who aflumed the name of
philofopher, vide Cicer. Tufcul. Queft. lib. v. c. 3. &
Diogen. Laert. in proem.) divided his difciples into
two clafles, the initiated, and the prophane or unin-
ilructed, and to thefe he adopted his method of teach-
ing. To the former his principles were explained in
the cleared manner. To the latter, fymbols and oenig-
inas weie made ufe of. The celebrated maxim,
recorded by Jamblichus, and the filence en-
joined to his difciples, that they might learn to know
its importance, were probably defigned by this cele-
brated philofopher to inftruct his followers in the
duty of maintaining impenetrable fecrecy with regard
to certain uiyfteries, and of digefting properly thofe
truths
Obfervatlons on Compofithn. 107
arceo, is the language of this apoftrophe,
To thofe who ufe it, we would obferve,
that
truths which were to form the fubjeds of their in-
ftructions. That Pythagoras never propofed to keep
up this ftyle of obfcurity upon all occafions, muft be
obvious from the effe&s which his do£trines are faid
to have produced upon almoft all clafles of mankind.
When he travelled through Italy, we are informed by
one author, that he made many good as well as learned
men, two in particular (Zeleucus and Charondas)
eminent lawgivers. Diogen. Laert. lib. viii. By an-
other, that he civilized nations, reftored liberty to
cities, converted thoufands at once to his philofophy,
and even prevailed on women to give up fome part of
their ornaments. Porphyr. Juftin. lib. xx. c. 4. This
conduct difcovers knowledge of mankind in a very
high degree, and is a proof that Pythagoras meant
not to fcreen his philofophical tenets behind the veil of
myftery. The language he ufed muft have been per-
fedtly obvious, and levelled to all capacities, when it
produced fuch effects. The ancients in general, we
may obferve, had reafon in the early ages of fcience
to affect a myfterious air upon fome occafions, as from
reverence to their perfons, men were thus induced to
hold their doctrines in fuperior eftimation. Ignorance
(which is fome fenfe became here the mother of in-
ftruftion, as (he is faid to have been of devotion}, ren-
dered the vulgar credulous with regard to any pre-
tenfions of men whofe knowledge produced the hap-
pieft confequcnces on fociety. Thus the barbarous
Romans were civilized by Numa, becaufe they be-
lieved his laws to have been dictated by a divine
Being.
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that there is a juft medium betwixt af-
fected pomp, and real meannefs of expref-
flon, as much as there is of drefs betwixt
the tinfel of a beau, and the rags of a
beggar. This medium, in the prefent cafe,
lies in ftudying an eafy, natural, unforced
expreffion, whofe ftrength ought to be
proportioned to that of the thought; and
in which thofe founding epithets that may
have propriety and fignificance upon other
occafions, ought rarely, if ever, to be ad-
mitted.
3. The laft rule we mail here lay down
for the attainment of perfpicuity in this
province of fcience, is that an author
ought to avoid in it, as much as poflible,
running into tedious and protradted pe-
riods. There are, indeed, cafes in which
a full and modulated fentence produceth a,
very finking effecT: ; and it is, no doubt,
Being. The legiflator appeared with fuitable dignity,
and his inflitutions were received with reverence.
The vanity of mankind was likewife artfully flattered
by this conduct, as each man believed the leader to
furpafs himfelf, not by fuperior abilities, but by the
capricious favour of a divinity.
poflible
Qbfefvatlons en Compofition. 109
poffible to conduct it, when confifting of
many members, and including great va-
riety of objects* to a clofe without violating
perfpicuous order. Thus in the conclu-
fion of an eloquent difcourfe, in which
fome point of importance hath been pfefled
home upon the mind, and different topics
felected for this purpofe, it is often highly
proper to fum up fuch as have greateft
energy in a well conducted climax, as
after having been feparately illuftrated,
their combined influence accomplimeth an
interefting purpofe. Upon other occafions,
the end either of perfuafion or of convic-
tion is gained more effectually by enu-
merating feveral diftinct motives or argu-
ments at once, than by any other expe-
dient ; becaufe the mind can feel an effect
from all acting with united energy, and
concentrating (if we may thus exprefs it)
their force in one point ; which confidered
apart from each other, thefe could never
have produced. This happens when col-
lateral evidences and incidental circum-
ftances occur in a difcourfe, whofe fignifi-
cance arifeth from their being contemplated
in
110 PhUofophical and Critical
in union. But in the inftance here pre-*
fented to us, reflexion will immediately
convince us, that fuch a procedure 13
neither neceflary nor proper. When fe-
veral arguments or motives of conduct are
placejd in one point of view, their influence
obvioufly depends on their being univer-
fally underftood. Each therefore, being
comprehended as foon as it is mentioned,
the mind proceeds without interruption in
its career, feeling at laft the full effect,
which all taken together are intended to
produce *. But a fentiment whofe truth
we
* No writer, either ancient or modern, underftood
more thoroughly the force of both the methods of per-
fuafion and conviction mentioned here, than the illuf-
trious Roman orator and philofopher. When Afri-
canus (in his fublime vifion of that great leader) informs
his defcendant of the immortality of the foul, he puts
together feveral circumftances, whofe impreffion is
ftrong from being placed before the mind in one view.
" Tu vero enitere, & fie habeto. Te non efie mor-
talem, fed corpus hoc. Nee enim Tu is es quem forma
ifta declarat, fed Mens cujufque is eft quifque, &c.
Deum te igitur fcito efle: fiquidem Deus eft qui viget,
qui fentit, qui meminit, qui praevidet, qui tarn regit
& moderatur & movet id corpus cui praepoGtus eft
quam hunc mundum princeps ille Deus ', & ut mun-
dum
Obfervations on Compofitionl \\\
we do not immediately perceive, and far
more a fucceflion of thefe whofe conneo
dum ex quadam parte mortalem, ipfe Deus seternus,
fie fragile corpus animus fempiternus movet." Somn.
Scipion. He pafleth over, as incidental circumflances,
the principal events of the life of Scipio, to whom he
addrefled himfelf, that he might haften to the moft
momcntuous of all. — There is great propriety in this
conduct. The illuftrious actions of Scipio, placed
here in one group, prepare us for the laft fcene, which
otherwife would have made no adequate impreflion.
" Quum autem Carthaginem deleveris, triumphum
egeris, Cenforque fueris, & obieris Leg'atus -<£gyptiim,
Syriam, Afiam, Grseciam ; deligere iterum abfens
conful bellumque maximum conficies, Numantiam
exfcindes. Sed quum eris curru in Capitolium in-
ve£lus offender Remi>ublicam9 &c. Hie tu Africane
oftendas opportebit patrise, lumen animi, ingenii, con-
ciliique tui." Ibid. — When, again, he enters into
clofe reafoning, his ftyle is indeed clear and forcible,
but concife at the fame time, and diverted of all fuper-
fluity. — " Quod femper movetur zternum eft. Quod
autem motum affert alicui quodque ipfum agitatur
aliumie, quando finem habet motus, vivendi finem
habeat necefTe eft. ^olum igitur quod fefe movet,
quia nunquam deferitur a fe nunquam ne moveri qui-
dem definit. Q^inetiam cxteris quae moventur hie
fons, hoc principium eft movendi. Principio autem
nulla eft origo. Nam ex principio oriuntur omnia.
Ipfuni autem nulla ex re oriri poteft. Non enim eflet
hoc principium quod gigneretur aliunde. Quod fi
nunquam oritur, nee occidit quidem unquam." Jbid.
tion,
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tion, though clofe, is unfolded with diffi-
fulty, muft be explained with precifion,
and the embarraflment of protracted pe-
riods ought to be avoided when it requires
attention to purfue the thread of a fubjecl:
carried on in few words, and with fimple
illuftrations. While an author goes for-
ward in this accurate manner, adapting
his expreffion and images with exact pro-
priety to their objeds, he can never be
in hazard of extending his refearches be-
yond the province affigned to reafon ; and
his diftindlions, however fubtle, will have
that real (not nominal) truth, which a
reader of difcernment will comprehend
with fatisfaclion.
III. The fubjedt of this fedion as far
as we have yet purfued it, charaderifeth
the fpheres of philofophy and hiftory.
When we apply it to poetry and eloquence
the word is of higher import, and includes
that lively painting which gives peculiar
energy to every idea, and greatly heightens
its impreffion. We enter by this means
not only into the meaning, but into the
fpirit of an author, and become fpedators
of
Obfervatiom on Compo/itioh. iij
of the fcenes that are prefented to iis:
This is, indeed, the capital excellence of
thole branches of Compofition which are
ultimately addrefled either to the paffions
or the imagination; Of thefe (in moft
cafes) the moft diverfified^ and perhaps
the moll difficult tafk is afligned to the
orator. It is his bufmefs to unite perfpU
cuous reafoning with animated and beau-*
tiful defcriptiori. Without the former,
the principal purpofe of his art muft re-
main unaccomplifhed, and without the*
latter, the particular application of his afJ-
guments can neither penetrate the heaftj
nor operate on the conduct. When Quin-
tilian denominates perfpicuity the capital
excellence of an orator, he muft have un-
derftood the phrafe in the fenfe here af-
figned to it* He would not have called
that character of the flyle of Gompofition
the principal one, which- he reprefents as
in the power of every mad writer of mean
parts, who recommends his performance
by this quality, when he can do fo by no1
other. By fuch an affertion he would
have debafed an art which he juftly ex-*
VOL* II. I plains
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plains as one of the nobleft to which the
mind of man is adequate. It is therefore
evident, that this author takes the term
Perfpicuity here in its moft enlarged mean-
ing. He underftands by it, that ENAPFEIA,
as the Greeks call it, that emphatical and
animated expreflion, by which an accom-
plifhed orator, fpeaking to the heart of
man, obtains the perfection of his art.
In the province of ethical or didactic
poetry, where lefs ornament is required
than in any other, this vivid reprefentation
is highly ufeful, as it imprefleth a thought
at the fame time upon the power of ima-
gination, and that of remembrance. Here
however, that it may accomplim this pur-
pofe, the imagery muft be juft and per-
fectly appropriated. — " Honourable age
(fays the author of the Wifdom of Solo-
mon) is not that which confifteth of a
number of years, neither is meafured by
length of days. But ivifdom is the grey
hairs to man, and an unfpotted life is old
age" This juft and inftructive obferva-
tion acquires a light, and an expreflion
ineffably ftriking from the colours here
caft
Obfervations on Compofltion.
caft on it which cannot efcape a reader of
the leafl fenfibility. To fay merely that
the author's language is perfpicuous, in the
common fenfe of that epithet, would be
a reprefentation of it extremely inadequate.
It is pi&urefque in an high degree; and
we obferve a fentiment in its full force
exprefled in very few words, which might
have been expatiated upon to much lefs
purpofe through many a period.
The graces of Compofition, by whofe
aid this ftriking reprefentation is carried
on, are indifpenfably requifite to cha-
rafterife every other branch of the poetic
art. The mind can never be raifed to any
pitch of enthufiafm, unlefs the objects that
pafs fuccefiively before it are not clearly,
but vividly difplayed *. The paffions
muft be wrought into commotion by na-
xa» TIJ A
CTl p*^1*"* ^po> ofj.pa.Tuv
OUTCO vcxp ctvxfytfatroe, owv uvrrip •&»£ aura? <yiy>vo~
TOIf
r»
APIITOT. -GTfp» nOIHT.
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tural and pathetic exhibitions ; and we
fpeak to the heart only, when circum-
flances of diftrefs are fo particularly enu-
merated, and fo juflly painted, as that the
reader may be led to feel thefe as his own.
It is by no means neceflfary to effe&uate
thefe purpofes, that the ftyle of Conipo-
iition fhould always be diftinguifhed by
colouring. Arguments forcibly exprefled*
facts emphatically related, and appeals to
the under (landing or the paffions, drawn
from thefe fources, and properly pointed
to operate on either, become not only
clear, but highly interefting, and accom-
plifh the ends to which thefe branches of
the art are directed.
Thefe general observations on perfpi*
cuity, as it relates to poetry and eloquencey
it was proper to throw out here, that we
might give this fubjed: its full extent. It
will be conlidered more particularly when
we come to treat of the two arts feparately,
as forming important fpecies of the fub-
ject of this effay.
IV. From the remarks we have made
bn perfpicuous Compofition, it will be
eafier
O&firvations on Compofition. 1 1 7
eafier to develope the caufes to which the de-
fect of this character ought to be afcribed.
Thefe are diverfified according to the tafte
and complexion of the writer. Some men,
who poflefs a comprehenfive and pene-
trating judgment, without an adequate
proportion of imagination, beftow fo much
attention on the fentiment of a perform-
ance that they are fatistied when the ex-
preflion is rendered intelligible to them-
felves. The human mind is furely viewed
by fuch perfons in a very defective light,
and we may pronounce that underftand-
ing, however compreheniive, to have
formed a partial eftimate in this inftance,
which appears to have judged of all others
as correfponding exactly to its own iland-
ard. An author ought therefore to re-
member, that few readers are capable of
entering as much into the fpirit of a work as
the writer himfelf, and that of thofe who
are capable, flill fewer will fit down to
read merely for inftruction, when their
attention is not kept awake by the charm
of variety. This, indeed, fometimes pro-
ceeds from the defect of imagination, and
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fometimes from not having attended to its
real value and importance in the fphere of
Compofition.
An extreme of any kind is always per-
nicious, and by running from one into
another a man often falls into that very
error which he moft feduloufly ftudied to
avoid. Oppofite caufes produce, in this
inftance, the fame confequence. As the
former of thefe feem to require that every
reader fhould pofiefs as great a fhare of
judgment, and fhould beftow as much at-
tention on their writings as they have done
themfelves, the latter, by taking a courfe
dire&ly contrary, demand of their readers
acutenefs, difcernment, aad the quickeft
fenfibility. Authors diftinguifhed by exu-
berance of imagination, become often ob-
fcure by giving too much fcope to it, as
they are either hurried by it into digref-
fions, whofe connection with the principal
fubjecT: the reader may not be difpofed,
perhaps may not be capable of tracing with
accuracy ; or as the natural proportions of
an object are concealed by the luxury of
its colour. Thefe are faults into which
the
Obfervations on Compofitkn. JIG
the greateft geniufes are fometimes be-
trayed *.
Another fet of writers fall into obfcu-
rity by an affectation of concifenefs.
ISrevis efie laboro,
Obfcurus fio. HOR.
It is equally injudicious to croud thoughts
together too clofely, as it is to lengthen
out a few into great compafs by verbofe
expreflion, and tedious declamation. By
the firft method, a general air of obfcurity
is caft upon a work, even when particular
objects may be difHnctly exhibited, juil as
a confufed idea is excited by a multitude
of people ftanding clofely together, among
whom however the individuals are ftill
diftinct from each other, and only require
to be placed at fome diftance. This fault
as inconfiftent with fimple, as well as with
perfpicuous compoiition, we have treated
of and exemplified fo particularly in a
* See this fubjeft explained more particularly,
vol. i. It is illuftrated at large, with regard to its
effects on Competition, by an application to the Odes
of Pindar, in the author's iiliay on Lyric Poetry,
Let. ii. p. in. octavo edit.
I 4 Pre-
Philofophical and Critical
preceding fejftion, as to reader an enlarge-?
ment acre unnecefiary *.
The laft, and indeed the moft common
fource of obfcurity in Competition, is the
ambition of attempting to perform more
than we are able, and fixing on a fubjecl:
the parts of which we cannot range in
any juft difpofition.
Sumite materiam veftris qtti ftribitis oequam
Viribus, & verfate diu quid ferre recufent,
Quid valtant humeri. Cui letta potenter erit res
Nee facundia deferet hunc, nequc lucidus ordo. HOR,
An author who hath paid no proper atten-
tion to this rule, muft neceflarily be in-
volved in inextricable difficulties, and hjs
thoughts muft be vague, inaccurate, and
undigefted. Many fentiments rifing un-
formed while the mind takes a view of
forne comprehenfive theme, without cool
recollection its views are apt to be dif-
tracl:ed, and without compafs inadequate.
Like the difcourfes of which Cicero com-
plains among his contemporaries, " no-
" thing in this cafe will occupy its proper
" place. Senfe will be loft amidft the
* Sea. i.
Observations on Compofitkn. 121
** multitude of words, and that which
*' ought to have conveyed light to the
*• mind, will only involve it in obfcurity
" or darknefs *." He therefore, upon
the whole, who would write with per-
fpicuity, after having methodifed his fub-
ject, ought to avoid making ufe either of
fuperfluous, uncommon, or ambiguous ex-
preffions. To obtain this character his
digreffions rnuft be natural, (particularly
in the higher fpecies of Compofition) his.
allufions apt, his characters marked with
{lifcriminating peculiarities, and his illuf-
trations fitted with e^ad. conformity to
their objects.
* " Res fim ulac Fufius aut vefter s?qualis Pom-
ponius agere c.nepit non aeque quid dicant nil! admo-
dum attend! intelligo. . Ita confuia eft oratio, ita per-
^urbata nihil ut fit primum, nihi! ut fecundum tanta-
que infolentia ac turba verborum ut oratio quse lumen
adhibere rebus debet ea oblcuritatem & tenebras afte-
rat, ut quodammodo ipfi fibi in dicendo obftreperc
yideantur." De Orat. lib. iii. cap. 13.
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SECTION IV.
Of elegant Competition.
"P* LEG ANT Compofition is a phrafe ap-
plie.d to writings in which we fup-
pofe that there are certain peculiar graces
diftinguiming the fentiments, and orna-
menting the language in which thefe are
conveyed. Under thefe two heads there-
fore, we fhall confider this character of
the art here treated of, that thofe readers
xvho have ufed this expreflion without
comprehending thoroughly its import,
may be able to diftinguifh real from
apparent elegance, and may appropriate to
the word fome determinate meaning.
I. It will be acknowledged by every
man who beftows any reflection on this
fubjecT:, that the word Elegance, to what-
ever objects it may be applied, ftands in
oppofition to rufticity, and rudenefs.
Whatever is fordid, mean, and vulgar,
either in a man's opinion, deportment, or
even drefs, denominates inelegance when
prevailing in any obvious degree; but
when
Obfervatlons on Compofition. 123
when predominating confpicuoufly excites
difguft and averfion. As the term elegant
therefore excludes, in all fenfes, the coarfe
and difagreeable from entering into its
objects, fo the word refinement (a phrafe
often ufed without much propriety) de-
notes the higheft proportion of this cha-
racter, in which fo little alloy is to be ob-
ferved as ferves to heighten, rather than
debafe the object, and throws additional
luftre on what is truly beautiful, by the
foil that is oppofed to it.
Sentiments either in a feries of clofe
reafoning, or in loofer mifcellaneous ob-
fervation, may be faid to have elegance
when thefe are fo artfully ranged, and fo
happily expofed, as to be mown always iri
the mod pleafmg point of view. In a
difcourfe levelled againft the abfurdities,
the vices, or the follies of mankind, the
ultimate purpofe is by no means agree-
able; and it is therefore neceffary, that
prejudices mould be attacked with much
circumfpection in order to be effectually
eradicated. Opinions that are riveted by
time,
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time, and habits that have been ftrength-
ened by indulgence, cannot be fuccefsfully
combated, unlefs the arguments by whofe
ufe it is propofed to imprefs conviclion
on the underftanding, are enforced by cir-
cumftances that foothe and attack the ima-
gination. In this proccfs it is obvious,
that one falfe ftep will overturn a whole
fyftem, and will induce the mind to rejecl:
it as abfurdity. Inftead of liftening with
impartiality to the fpeaker or the writer
on fuch an occafion, we are difpofed, on
the contrary, either to fearch out miftakes
and fallacies in his reafoning, or to fup-
port our own fentiments, however irra-
tional, by calling argument to the afliftance
of paffion. For as it is an eafy matter to
convince or to deceive reafon by plaufible
appearances when the paflions are once
interefted againft it, fo it is, on the other
hand, extremely difficult to gain the ap-
probation of the former of thefe, without
at the fame time influencing the latter.
Both can then only be brought to concur
in one fentiment, when thoughts are com-
bined
on Compojition. 125
bined in fuch arrangement as that the
unpleaiing part is call into a {hade, and
the moft beautiful fide is expofed to view.
Elegance of fentiment muft diftinguifh
every work in which this purpofe is ac-
complimed. Gentle and iniinuating elo-
quence, fleals into the heart upon iuch an
occafion, and difpofeth us to liften to the
perfon by whom we are addrefled, by efta-
blifhing a prepofleflion in his favour.
i. This purpofe is accomplished in fome
cafes, wheri, inftead of addreiling roughly
an individual, ftimulated by the impulfe
of a ruling paffion, he is led, by general
obfervations apparently levelled at no par-
ticular object, to fee the effects that arife
from indulging it. A beautiful example
of this kind occurs in the Iliad. When
the Creeks are juil returned difpirited
from an unfuccefsful battle, and their
leader, either as an expreflion of his own
fentiments, or as a trial of theirs, pro-
pofeth to leave their conqueil uncompleted ;
Diomed replies, with an infolence and fe-
rocity deferving a fevere reprimand. After
having accufed the prince of pufillanimity*
and
126 Philofophical and Critical
and cowardice, he profefieth his own de-
light in war, and his resolution to continue
himfelf before Troy, though all the other
Greeks fhould defert it. Neftor with great
propriety attempts to cool this ardour.
But inftead of dire&ly reprimanding a
young hero, fired by a fuppofed injury,
and impatient of reproof, he, on the con-
trary, elegantly compliments him on the
freedom and boldriefs of his addrefs ; and
after having thus put him in good hu-
mour, artfully throws in the following re-
flection.
ffi* EX5IV9?
Og zsohtpov tpotTXi, tiriSrifjLioVi oxpuofvro?. IAIAA. I.
Curs'd is the man, and void of law and right,
Unworthy property, unworthy light,
Unfit for public rule, or private care,
That wretch, that monfter, who delights in war. Po PE.
There is great delicacy in this conduct, as
the paffions by which Diomed would have
been blinded are laid afleep ; and his rea-
fon is at leifure to perceive and to apply
in its full force the fucceeding obferva-
tion. It is from fuch inftances as thefe,
that the eloquence of Neftor, in the Iliad,
is
Obfervations on Compofition. 127
is faid by Quintilian to be character! fed
by a fweetnefs inexpreflibly pleafmg *.
In the fine addrefs of Csefar to the Ro-
man fenate, whom he would have per-
fuaded to pardon Cataline, we meet with
a fimilar inftance of fentiment elegantly
applied, not merely to influence the con-
dud: of an individual, but to regulate the
determination of an illuftrious affembly.
On the part of Cxfar great addrefs was
here peculiarly requifite, becaufe the caufe
in which he fpoke was univerfally odious,
and becaufe he himfelf was fufpected to
have been engaged in the confpiracy.
. Kno\ving, therefore, that his audience was
equally prejudiced againft the confpirators
and their advocate, he introduced! his dif-
courfe with fome general obfervations de-
figned to ftrike at thefe prejudices with-
out giving offence to individuals. — " All
" men, fays he, confcript fathers, who
" confult about dubious affairs, ought to
" judge of thefe with a difpaffionate
* " Ex ore Neftoris dixit dukiorem meJle profluere
fermonem, qua certe dele£latione nihil fingi majus
poteft." Lib. xii. c. jo.
" temper,
128 Philofcp/ncal and Critical
41 temper, uninfluenced equally by angefy
friendship, hatred, or pity. The mind
perceives not truth eafily when theie
paflions interfere" *." This introduction
is calculated with great propriety to make
every perfon turn his eyes inward, and
confider the ftate and impartiality of his
mind. The orator then proceeds to enu-
merate particular examples of the miferies
that had arifen from the defect of this
temper; and in the end he applies the
whole with mafterly addrefs to the affair
of Cataline. The crimes of the eonfpi-*
ratof s by this conduct are artfully veiled •
the beft fide of the object is only expoied
to the eye of the fpedator ; and thofe very
paflions are at laft powerfully ftimulated
in a bad caufe, whofe influence at firft was
fo profefledly difclaimed;
2. Elegance of fentiment as it thus re-^
quifes in fome inftances what is unpleaf-
ing to be fhaded, and what has either real
* " Omnes homines P. C* qui de rebus dubiis-
eonfuhant ab odio, amicitia, ira, atque miferlcordia
vacims effe debet. Haud facile animus verum prcr*
videt ubi ilia ofutiunc." Conjurat. Catal.
on Compofition. 129
or apparent beauty to be fhown in all its
attractions, fo in others we obferve and
acknowledge it more obvioufly to predo-
minate, when in clofe argumentation an
adverfary is confuted without having rea*
fon to feel that mortification which arifeth
from this circumftance ; and whofe vanity
is rendered fubfervient to his inftrucT:ion>
by being gratified at the time that his rea*-
foning is difproved. Of this addrefs no
man ever was a greater matter than So*-
crates, who puts it in pra&ice fucceffively
upon every occafion when he is engaged
with men who could not otherwife be
drawn into converfation. — When Euthy-
phron acquaints him, that he had come to
the Areogapus to profecute his father for -
murder, and attempts to jutfify his con-
duct by telling fome childifh flories of
Jupiter's conduct. to Saturn; Socrates, in-
ftead of laughing at his folly, applies
himfelf to his ruling pafiion, and refutes
his principles, while he appears willing to
adopt thofe as his own. After having
founded the depth of his antagoniil, and
brought him to acknowledge that he be-
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lieved the Gods to differ often from each
other in opinion, he thrufts a vein of re-
fined irony into his difcourfe,. and raifeth
fcruples in the mind of Eutliyphron, upon
his own principles \vith regard to the
juftice of his caufe, happily calculated to
make him deiift from the profecution. —
" Excellent Euthyphron (fays he), fmce you
" fay that the gods form different judg-
" ments of fight and wrong, truth and
*' falfhood, and act according to thefe
" judgments, you have not yet explained
" to me the nature of holinefs ; for I did
" not afk you what is at the fame time
" facred and prophane, pleafing to one
" god, and difagreeable to another: — fo
" that it would not be wonderful if you,
" by getting your father punifhed, mould
" do an action agreeable to Jupiter, but dif-
44 agreeable to Ccelus and Saturn ; pleafing
44 to Vulcan, but ofTenfive to Juno; and
" judged of differently by the other deities
" accordin to the character of each *."
3. In
* Ovx dfx. o itpopw onrsxtiMj u $*.\MCfO*t. x
TXTO <s naruv, o Tja.vti TX\>TO» ov O<TMV rt
Obfervatlons on Compofitiw.
3. In many inftances likewife, a pecu-
liar degree of elegance is difcovered in
turning a thought (principally of the pa-
nygirical kind) fo happily as may furprife
the reader into immediate approbation.
This happens, moft commonly, when there
is an artful difpofition of circumftances
concurring to throw light on fome object,
at once agreeable and unexpected. Of the
kind here mentioned, is the following
noble complement to Cato, in which the
poet ineffably heightens his eulogium by
a previous enumeration of grand and ter-
rible circumftances*
Jam nunc minaci murmure cdrnuum
Perftringis aures : jam litui ftrepunt j
Jam fulgor armorum fugaces
Terret equos, equitumque vultus.
Audire magnos jam videor duces
Non indecoro pulvere fordidos ! -
a.v
flft ft> E-j6u!ppov o cry vvv zs-oJiK TOV
votv S"au(uarov H TCUTO Jpuv, TW fAtv Ai» i
TW $i Kputu Koti TU Oupavw c^Opov. Ka»
trM JpiAov, TU Jf Hoa f^Qaov. Kctt fin;
trtpo; trt^it) JWvpfen-ai wfoi aurou, xat f
raura, &C. IIAATnN. EuOufp. rp^*. 0.
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Et cuntta terrarum fubatia
•• > . • J O _•
Pneter atrccem antmutn Colon is * /
The concluding circumftance here, every
reader, will allow to have elegant beauty
in its prefent connection. Even thofe,
however, who are actuated by prejudice
againft the authors of Chriftiamty, will,
perhaps, acknowledge the apoftle Paul's
anfwer to king Agrippa to have merit
(though not precifely of the fame kind) ia
all refpeds equal to that of the courtly
Roman in the preceding inftance. — " Al-
" moft (fays the prince to him) thou per-
<c fuadeft me to be a Chriftian." To which
the apoftle (ftanding in chains before his
throne) replies : " I would to God that
" not only thou, but alfo all that hear me
" this day were both almoft and alto-
4t gether, fuch as I am, — except thefe
*' bonds" The laft words here, as in the
former example, are peculiarly finking.
They give a polite air to the apoftle's
anfwer, and conftitute what the ancients
denominate urbanitas, and the verfutum &:
* Hor. Carmin. lib. iv. ode i.
leprde
O&feritaitons on Compojition. 133
lepide dictum. Its effect upon Agrippa
difcovered the propriety with which it was
applied to him ; for he was prevented
from fetting his prifoner at liberty only
becaufe he had appealed to Csefar.
4. The laft method we mall mention
here, of rendering fentiment elegant, con-
frfts in the artful introduction of a prin-
cipal topic from circumftances whofe con-
nection with it, though clofe and par-
ticular, the mind does not perceive until it
flides in as it were imperceptibly, and at-
tracts attention by being carelefsly repre-
•fented. This appearance of the character
treated of here, is rarely to be met with ;
and only in works of great ingenuity. — •
In Pope's excellent Preface to his mifcel-
laneous writings, he propofeth to dif claim
many performances that had been afcribed
to him, as unworthy that honour, and to
prevent, if poffible, a repetition of this
abufe. The manner in which he brings
about his purpofe is admirable. — " I be-
" lieve (fays he, fpeaking of himfelf) no
" one qualification is fo likely to make a
*4 good writer as the power of rejecting
K 3 " his
PhilofofKitat and Crlticar
u his own thoughts, and it mufl be; thi$
" (if any thing) that, can give me a chance
" to.be on«4, For what I have publifhed
"I can only hope to be pardoned; but
" for what I have burned, I deferve to be
v praifed. On this account the world is
" .under foifte- obligation tome, and owes
" me the jujlice in return to look upon no
" verfes QS mine that are nof ihjerted in
" -this collection ." Here the author's prin-
cipal end falls, as it were, incidentally into
his difcourfe : no reader, without having
been previoufly acquainted with his purpofe,
would expect it jLo be introduced here.
Yet the connection is natural, and we ap-
prove at the fame time of the writer's
judgment and addrefs.
II. Difficult as it may appear from the
preceding obfervations, for an author to
be diftinguimed by elegance of fentiment,
yet even when this point is obtained,
ibmething further is ftill requifite to con-
flitute elegant Compofition, if we include
under that phrafe all that it ought to fug-
geft. This fomething, fo necelTary to give
the Jail heightening to this character, is
undoubt-
Qbferv.at_ions en Compofitwn. 135
undoubtedly an expreffion happily corref-;
ponding to thefe fentiments, and fetting
off all to the higheft advantage. An emi-
nent critic obferves of ftyle in general,
" that of fiich importance is this fmgle
" circumflance, as to have decided (in the
" art of poetry) the fuccefs of pieces de-
" fedive in material points, and yet uni—
" verfally admired on this account only.
" He mentions as proofs of the truth of
" this remark, the Cid, and the Death of
" Pompey, both works of Corneille, but
" greatly defective both in charader and
" ceconomy. Thefe, he obferves, are yet
" preferred,, contrary to the rules of the
" drama, to others distinguished by fu-
*' perior manners, and a plan regularly
" profecuted.- — Why ? — Becaufe the ft vie
" and the lentiment happily correfpond in
" the firft iniiance : — in the laft, this af-
" finity is not to be difcovered. When
" the heart therefore is touched by the
*' voice of nature, all the critical argu-
<4 ments in the world can never per-
*' fuade a man to with-hold his appro-
K 4 " bation."
136 Phllofophlcal and Critical'
" bation *." This approbation every
reader gives to a performance diftinguifhed
by unafFecled elegance of expreflion, the
natural effect of which is always to excite
a very pleafing fenfation, even when we
are inattentive to the caufe.
Expreffion, to whatever fubject it may
be applied, is faid to have elegance when
certain natural graces are fo happily dif-
pofed in it, as to throw light on their ob-
jects without the glare of odentation ; and
when an eafe, confident with dignity, is to
be obferved univerfally in the difpofition
of words fitted to the various parts of a
fubjecl. It is difHcult, if not impoflible,
in mod cafes to give any clear and appro-
priated idea of this envied excellence, be-
caufe it is conftituted by certain exquifite
flrokes, whofe influence is felt by a reader
of fenfibility, though he cannot refolve
thefe into a regular fyftem, and account in
a rational manner for the caufe of his ad-
miratioin. They are fuch :
* See Du Bos' Reflex. Critique fur la Poef. &c.
torn, i. chap. 23.
Obfervations on Compofition. 137
Ut fibi quivis
Speret idem, fudet muhum, fruftraque laboret
Aufus idem. HOR.
Let us, however, try whether amidft fo
many evanefcent beauties ready to diflblve
like the fhade of Patroclus into air as foon
as we attempt to lay hold of them, we
cannot catch a few of the moft flriking in
their paflage, and hold thefe up as lights
by whofe aid we may diftinguifh real from
affected elegance of expreflion, in the va-
rious fpheres of Compofition.
In every juft imitation of any original,
propriety requires that the peculiar and
diftinguifhing graces, as well as the great
outlines of any figure, mould be tranfpofed
faithfully into a copy. When we defcribe
for inftance, a landfcape, it is obvious that
we are pleafed in proportion as the rural
fcenery is fo naturally difplayed as to
prefent objects in their native and fimple
decorations ; as the colours of nature (if
we may thus exprefs it) without being
heightened are juftly delineated ; and as
certain ftriking features are fixed upon
happily, and are fet off with graces which
give
138 Philofophical and Critical
give beauty to the piece. Elegance in
this imitation, requires that nothing in the
defcription fhould be overwrought; that
no foreign ornaments fhould be unna-
turally forced in ; that, in fhort, the words
ihould imitate by a certain carelefs, but
happy difpofition, the eafy negligence of
nature in the various arrangement and
attitudes of her objects.
To the fylvan lodge
They came, that like Pomona's arbour frr.iLed
With flowrets deck'd and fragrant ftnells j — but Eve,
Undeck'd, fave with herfelf, more lovely fair
Than wood-nymph, or the faireft goddefs feign'd,
Stood to entertain her heav'nly gueft.
Raifed of grafly "turf
Their table was, and mofiy feats had round
And on her ample fquare from fide to fide
All autumn piled, though fpring and autumn here
Danced hand in hand. MILTONT.
Nature herfelf appears to have held the
pencil in painting this group of beautiful
figures, in which no falfe heightening or
improper imagery is admitted; but the
imagination of the poet, wandering at eafe
over the bowers of Eden, adorns its def-
criptions with objects fo animated as to
diffipate
Obfervations on Compaction. 139
dimpate the languor arifing from infipid
uniformity, while propiiety takes place in
the difpofition as well as choice of thefe
which the mind contemplates with pecu-
liar fatisfaction. The whole is indeed
perfectly fimple, but it muft be acknow-
ledged to be elegant fimplicity.
We are not, however, always to fuppofe
that a reprefentation of the external beau-
ties of creation, in order to have the height-
ening of elegance, ought always to be en-
livened either with figures that have real
life, or even with an imitation of this cir-
cumflance by perfonification. A defcrip-
tion may have great elegance in which the
objects of ftill life (as they are called) ap-
pear in a certain natural arrangement,
when recommended by no other character
than harmonious and appropriated diction.
In the following combination of paftoral
beauties all is in the higheft degree pic-
turefque, though nothing is perfonified,
and the ftructure of the period is fuch as
to improve the effect of a mod elegant
aflemblage.
At
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*/ A
At fecura quies, & nefcia fallere vita
Dives opum variarum , at latis otia fundis,
Speluncz vivique lacus : at frigida tempe,
Mugitufque bourn, mollefque fub arbore fomni
Non abfunt. VIR.
ExprefTion acquires ineffable elegance
upon fome occafions from a vein of ima-
gery happily blended with the fentiment,
and coalefcing with it in fuch a manner
as that both muft fuffer by the flighteft
tranfpofition. Such is the character of
Sappho, drawn by Horace;
Spiral adhuc Amor,
Vivuntque commifli calores
•/Eoliae fidibus puellae. Ode i\. lib. 4.
The image wrought here fo exquifitely
into the character, reminds us of the de-
licate lhading in the moft maflerly draw-
ings, which leems to die away infenfibly
into air, or fades by imperceptible degrees
into the ground-colour of the piece. By
attempting to disjoin thefe, we encroach
upon fomething which we meant to have
preferved, and are fenfible that the piece
muft be disfigured by the moft minute
alteration.
In
Olferiiatlons on Compcfition. 141
In our remarks on elegant Compofition,
we have endeavoured to {how in what
cafes this characteriftic excellence diftin-
guifheth the fentiment of a performance;
and we have pointed out examples in
which it is confpicuous in the thought and
expreffion of a work mutually reflecting
light on each other. In fome inftances
however, thoughts that have no peculiar
merit of themfelves, and which in an or-
dinary drefs would have been wholly
overlooked, become fignificant by being
expreffed with a certain natural eafe which
gives an air of unaffected elegance to the
whole. In this branch of the character
here treated, we muft allow Anacreon to
be wholly peculiar and inimitable. When
this writer tells us, that " he cares not for
" Gyges the king of the Sardians ; that
" gold has no attractions for him ; that
" he envies not tyrants ; and that his de-
" fire is to pour unguents on his body,
" to crown himfelf with rofes, and let to-*
" morrow provide for itfelf ;" — fuch cir-
cumftances in a tranHaticn may appear
foreign and impertinent. Yet in the ori-
ginal
142 Philofophical end Critical
ginal that " curiofa felicitas dicendi," that
happy choice and difpofition of words,
which it is a vain attempt to imitate, con-
fers graces on thefe flight remarks which
render them the objects of elegant enter-
tainment *.
**~ In
^ Oo jtxoi [j.iXn
Tou
OVOE (pfiovw
F.U.OJ JtAfAfi
Euo»
Ou Zftuf^ov aiAj* jtxoi, &C. AN Aft. fif Ea'JT.
The character of this bard the reader will find drawn
more particularly, and the elegance of his compofition
exemplified, in the Eflay on Lyric Poetry, p. 55, &c. —
The ingenious Abbe du Bos has preferred a beautiful
ode in his Reflections on Poetry and Painting, in
which a thought, as fimple as any of the preceding, is
rendered (hiking by the graces of elegant expreflion.
It is a piece of the Abbot Chaulieu, whofe purport is
only this, that he would die in the place where he
was born. We .admire, however, the colour with
which it is ornamented. -
Fontenay lieux delicieux
Ou je vis d'abord la lumiere,
Bientot au tout de ma carricre
Chez toi je joindrai mes ayeux.
Mufea*
Obfervations on Composition. 143
In the fphere of Competition, as no
excellence whatever is more univerfally
envied and admired than that of elegance,
fo there is none in every fenfe more dif-
ficult to be acquired. This is obvious,
from the bad fuccefs of many attempts
that have been made to imitate writings
diftinguifhed by this character. Among
the imitators of the manner of Anacreon,
few have ever been able to catch the fpirit,
and transfufe the graces of this original *.
Plato in the fame manner ftands unrivalled
among Greek philofophers, and Horace
and Petronius among the Romans f. A
man
Mufes, qui dans ce lieu champetre
Avcc loin me f 'ites nourir,
Beaux arbres qui m'avez vu naitre,
Bieutot vous me verrez mourir. —
Du Bos. c. xxxiii. v. I.
* Prior, among our own writers, feems to have ap-
proached nearefl to this original. Some of his pieces
are happily Anacreontic. Fontaine is an inimitable
original himfelf.
f Thefe authors (the lafl particularly) are felecled
here, bccaufe elegance is their principal characleriitic.
Cicero has this in common with many other excel-
lencies, but upon the whole, the " teres atque ro-
tunJus" (as Horace calls it) characfcerifeth his copious
exprelucn
144 PJiilofophical and Critical
man muft have received from nature a
power of perceiving certain exquifite con*
neclions, in order to be denominated ele-
gant in the ienfe affigned here to that
epithet, and a facility of felecling and of
applying thofe graces to defcription or
.fentiment, that are juft the moft fuitable
and becoming. We muft make a diftinc-
tion however betwixt thefe powers, the
one of which regards perception, and the
other execution. Though neither are con-
ferred univerfally, yet many perfons are
enabled by the former to obferve and to
feel the effect ariflng from an afiemblage
of objects elegantly decorated, who yet
would fail in an attempt to form fo beau-
tiful a combination; becaufe with fenfi-
bility to relifh thefe beauties when pre-
fented to the mind, its powers may be in-
adequate to the tafk of creating them.
That energy of thought by which the
expreffion more remarkably than any other fignature,
and in ftudying a model of elegance it is proper to
have that prefented to us which offers principally to
our view the various forms of this diftinguifliing
quality.
moft
0$firv6tioni 'on Compojitibn. 145
moft appropriated colouring is imme-
diately applied to ideas, and the moft fuit<-
able expreffion is felected with eafe to
render thefe univerfally agreeable, is wholly
diftinct from the power by which we
judge of ajuft or inadequate combination;
the laft of which extends no further than
to enable the perfon pofleffed of it to
avoid grofs defects in Compofition, and to
be character! fed upon the whole by nega-
tive defcription.
To deny (whatever truths may be in
thefe obfervations) that an elegant tafte
may be improved, if not created, and its
influence rendered confpicuous in execu-
tion as well as theory, by the fludy of
unexceptionable models, would be as ab-
furd as to deny that the dignity of a good
mien may be heightened by having fre-
quented the beft company ; or that the
expreffion of an amiable countenance be-
comes mere attractive by a happy and
graceful difpofition of fuitable ornaments.
Though, therefore, we cannot fuppofe in
the prefent cafe, that he whofe natural
powers are deficient, will by any procefs
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146 PhilofopJrical and Critical
of obfervation be enabled to execute with
mattery, and to throw out thofe graces-
that give elegance to Compofition ; yet>
by having attended to the effect of thefe
in the writings of others, he may avoid
the oppofite extreme in his own ; and in
the conduct of philoibphical deduction,
while the arguments may carry conviction
to the underftanding, the ftyle of an au-
thor's compoiition will thus be often en-
tertaining, and at no time vulgar or dif-
gufting.
It ought always- to be obferved, that arc
exprcffion unexceptionably accurate, if not
really elegant, may be obtained by imita-
tion and attention much more eafify than
the means by which fintiments Acquire this
character. The art of turning a period
with harmony may be learned with more
facility than that of expofmg a thought
hi the happieft point of view, or of ren-
dering a feries of fentiments agreeable by
a certain juft and beautiful difpofition, be-
caufe the firft of thefe depends principally
upon an harmonious, ear ; whereas the lafl
requires tafte, clifcernment,. and feniibility.
Obfervatkns on Compojition. 147
As to elegance likewifc, confidered fimply
with regard to exprefiion, we muft diftin-
guifh that kind of it which arifeth from a
certain pleafmg arrangement of words,
from that which is obferved in the inven-
tion, beauty, and difpofition of images,
improving every object by an appropriated
colour, and adding to a piece the laft ex-
quifite fhading that renders it complete.
The attainment of the firft of thefe pur-
pofes depends in a great meafure upon the
choice of proper models for imitation;
principally upon having made a juft fe~
lection in very early life. There is (as
the ftudy of works compofed at ages re-
mote from each other will convince any
man) a certain mode of expreffiun, by
which contemporary writers in one (everi
clamcal) age may be diftinguimed as ob-
vioufly from thofe who at a confiderable
diftance have either preceded or come
after them, as that by which two flourim-
ing at the fame time are known and dil*
criminated. The difference indeed be-
comes more flrikingly confpicuous, when
we compare a polite with a barbarous age,
L 2 than
348 Philofiphical and Critical
than when we judge from any inter-
mediate periods * ; becaule this prefents
to us fuch a profpe£t as the fame face feen
in youth and in old age. Time, which
at a middle period would have been ob-
ferved to alter without impairing its ex-
* Longinus, who lived in the reign of Aurelian
and Zenobia, compared with the beft writers of the
age of Auguftus, is indeed a remarkable exception to
the rule here laid down i but not only are we to con-
fider this as an inftance almoft wholly fingular, but
we may afcribe it either to that native fublimity of
imagination, which (as we fhall fhow afterwards) is
the character of all others lead apt to be impaired by
any external circumftances j or to an happy fek&ion
of models in the firft ftage of life, which Longinus
might have been prompted to make by his own ex-
quifite difcernment. Both thefe caufes probably con-
curred to prevent this eminent critic from being
tainted by the tafte of an age confiderably degenerated.
The firft mentioned is evidently confpicuous in the
grandeur of his own fentiments, and in that keen fen-
fibility with which he appears to have entered into
thofe of others : — the laft is obvious from the autho-
rities quoted by him from the beft ftandards handed
down by antiquity. A writer converfant wholly with
thefe, and fitted at the fame time by nature to form
great conceptions, we might have pronounced fecure
againft the contagion of faife tafte, and qualified to
tranfpofe by imitation thofe excellencies into his work,
whofe beauty he at the fame time felt and developed.
Milton is an example of this kind.
preffion,
Obfervations on Compofition. 149
preffion, will be feen in this laft ftagc to
have made a remarkable change upon the
whole : but the fteps that have led to this
are real though imperceptible, and at any
confiderable interval their effect would
have been obvious.
We muft, after all, confider it at firft
view as fomewhat extraordinary that men,
living at a period however remote, who
might have imitated the perfect models of
the Auguftan age handed down as patterns,
mould yet have adopted the barbarous and
unintelligible jargon of their own. But
this conduct ought principally to be af-
cribed to the firft bias imprinted on the
inind, and to the writings with which it
was converfant. An individual, how in-
genious foever, and diftinguifhed by nature
with elegant tafte, yet forming himfelf at
firft upon models lefs perfect than thele
already mentioned, or carried away by the
prevailing character of his age and coun-
try, gradually falls into a manner which
thele circumftances contribute fo neceffarily
to frnim, different perhaps from that
L 3 which
150 Philofophical and Critical
which nature, imwarped by fafhion ancj
prejudice, would have taught him to a£*
fume. Elegant Compofition, confidered
as perfected by the union of eafy language,
and of images difpofed with grace and
propriety, cannot be obtained when the
mind is ftraitened in any exertion ; and ia
impaired indifpenfably by the accidents
here enumerated. In order therefore, as
much as poffible, to prevent their effects,
the works that are firft perufed by a man
of genius at any time whatever, ought
to be fuch as are univerfally acknow-r
ledged to be charadterifed principally by
the graces that conftitute elegance. A
fublime imagination will preferve its ori-
ginal bias, and will throw out ftrong ex-
amples of it, in whatever age the man
pofTeffed of this faculty may live, and by
whatever circumftances (a total want of
education excepted) its influence may be
counteracted. This is one of thofe vivid
and indelible characters fo forcibly ftamped
upon the mind, as to relift the power
of caules by which weaker ones are era-
dicated.
on Compojition. jrt
•d-icated *. The fame remark may be made
of this faculty when principally charac-
ter i led
* Of the truth of this obfervation, the celebrated
Oflian affords a diltinguifhed example among our own
•countrymen, as Dante, Camoens, and Arioflo, (though
ilourifhing indeed at later periods) exhibit among fo-
reigners. . The fpirit of Lada, and ghofts of the Cal-
Jedonian hard ; the machinery introduced by Dante in
order to give poignancy to his exquifite iatire ; the
Adamaiter of the Portuguese, introduced with fuch
grand and noble circumftcnces ; and the various ima-
gery thrown out with great fublimity of imagination,
though without much regularity by the Italian ; — thefe
furniih hvcontefhble proofs that this great character of
Competition is to be met with univerfaily in the works,
•of didinguilhed geniufes, in whatever age they may
happen to live. It is true that Ariofto lived in the
Sixteenth century, at the time of the refurretlion of
letters: but as learning was then only beginning to
emerge from the night of Gothic ignorance, neither
his work, nor that of Camoens is diftinguifbed by the
graces of elegant Composition ns a character! (lical ex-
cellence. Examples of fublimc, and of pathetic de-
fcription are to be met with univerfaily in the writings
of both. Oluan, in the fame manner diflirguifhed by
grandeur, luxury, .and exuberance of imagination, was
converfant with no objects, and beheld no manners
from which he might be enabled to obtain the graces
that conftitute elegance. The language in which he
wrote, (mnfical as it is faid to be), muft have been
unequal to the exprcfTion of degant fentiment, (fuch
as we have had occafion to exemplify) and fome ftroke«
L 4 of
152 Thllof opined and Critical
terifed by ftrength and energy. Thefe
laft are fo far from requiring a clafTical
age to call them out into action, that we
obferve them often moft confpicuoufly pre-
dominant in times of darknefs and bar-
barifm. It is otherwife with the character
of elegance, which marks upon all occa-
fions the productions of improved fociety,
and is never the capital ingredient of a
performance either compofed by an illi-
terate author, or the work of a rude and
barbarous age *. In order, therefore, ta
acquire
of defcription, finifhed with great delicacy, Scattered
through his writings, and through the writings of
others in fimilar circumftances, are like flowers rifing
in a wildernefs, whofe beauty might have been highly
improved by a cultivated foil, an happy expofure, and
a favourable fun.
* In the favage ftate we may expect to meet with
ftrength and vigour of thought, as well as of expref-
fion, particularly in the detail of tranfadlions, becaufe
the rougher paflions are in fuch a ftate taught to exert
themfelves with a certain defperate ferocity, whofe in-
fluence appears In Compofition. Accordingly, in the
works of the bards of thefe times (the criteria by
which we can beft judge of the tafte and manners of
an age) ftrength of expreflion, and of colouring, is a
fignature more univerfally to be difcerned, than in the
more finiflied produ&ions of our own. The inge-
nious
Obfervattons on Compofitlon. jo
acquire this character, or at leaft to im-
prove as highly as poffible the propenfity
of nature, a man of genius, after having
gained a juft and appropriated idea of ele-
gance, as relating both to exprefiion and
fentiment, fhould endeavour, by having
attended particularly to every appearance
of this excellence, and by attempts to imi-
tate it in whatever manner it is appre-
hended, to carry his general obfervations
into pradice, and transfufe a portion of
that fpirit into his own Compofition,
whofe influence he hath marked fo juftly
in that of others.
nious Dr. Blair has illuftrated this remark in his Dif-
fertion on the Poems of Offian, by tranflating a Gothic
poem preferved by Olaus Wormius, in his work De
Literatura Runica. " This (fays our critic, after
" having prefented us with the work) is fuch poetry
" as we might expect from a barbarous nation. — It
" breathes a moft ferocious fpirit. It is wild, harfh,
" and irregular ; but at the fame time animated and
" flrong ; the ftyle in the original highly figured and
cc metaphorical." Blair's Diflertat. quar. edit. p. u.
The fame nervous expreflion diflinguifheth the per-
formances of Chaucer among our own countrymen ;
and for the reafon already adduced, will generally be
moft confpicuous in the productions of a barbarous
age.
Let
154 Philojbphical and Critical
Let it be obferved, that we defire as lit-
tle in the prefent, as in any other cafe, a
man of genius to bind himfelf down to a
fervile imitation of any model, however
beautiful. Amidft all the objects that art
or experience can affemble to promote in-
tellectual culture, the original exprejfion of
the mind, like the original ftamina of the
body, remains unalterable, though this
expreffion will be fet off by thefe to the
highcft advantage, when neither impaired
by timidity, nor diftorted by affectation.
An herb withering in the made, and ex-
panding its leaves, or exhaling fragrance
in the fun, prefents an image correfpond-
ing to the prefent fubject. In both fitua-
tions a difcerning eye will trace the fame
lineaments, however different their external
appearance. But in one cafe the foliage is
mrunk and contracted ; — in the other its
colours are heightened, its foliage opened;
and its beauty greatly improved by ex-
pofure and cultivation.
As a principal means to affift us in the
art of rendering Competition truly elegant,
we muft endeavour to guard againfl errors
that
Obfervations on Ccmp^tion. 155
that carry the appearance of this character
fo plaufihly as not to be eafily known
from reality. Thus an attempt to intro-
duce brilliance into Compofition by a cer-
tain quaintnefs of epithet, and artful dif-
' potition of pretty images fubilituted with
no propriety or fignificance, paffeth upon
many readers for elegance, though really
incompatible with it at the bottom. An
imagination always looking out for meta-
phors, and applying thefe without proper
direction or difcernment, is ufually the
caufe of this falfe delicacy. \Vhen Ovid
makes Laodamia fay to Protefilaus, who
was engaged in the Trojan war,
Timeo: quotiefque fubit miferabile bellum
More nivis lachrymre fole madentis eunt.
Oft as the wars tremenduous fcenes appear,
Like (how diflblving, drops th* uncc;ifing tear.
The ftrained allufion employed here, has
fome appearance of elegance at firft view,
but tafte rejects it as a prettinefs indicating
at leaft want of attention, if not a defect
of difcernment.
We ought likewife to diftinguifh ele-
gance, properly fo called, from purity or
chaftity of language ; the latter of which
regards
156 Philofophical and Critical
regards the conftrudtion and propriety of
words, while the former relates to the
graceful and harmonious flructure of pe-
riods. By the harmony of periods is not
meant a long firing of words rounded in
an elaborate and uniform manner. This
end is obtained by a natural and judicious
variety, adapted properly to the different
branches of a fubjed, and to that particular
kind of fentiment into which an author
may happen to fall. It would be an eafy
matter to enlarge this part of our work,
by examples of falfe delicacy in the ftyle
of Compofition ; but as we have already
conlidered in what manner elegance may
be difcovered, either in the fentiment or
expreffion of a performance, and have at-
tempted to confirm, by fuitable illuftra-
tions, our remarks on the means that con-
ftitute this character, a further enlarge-
ment on the defects of writers, otherwife
eminent, would be at the fame time dif-
agreeable and unneceflary.
We fhall therefore difmifs this fubject
when we have juft obferved in general,
that however certain authors, from a con-
fcioufnefs
Observations on Compofltlon. 157
fcioufnefs perhaps of their own inability
to obtain the graces that conftitute elegance
in the art here treated of, may affect to
defpife it, yet it is by thefe that the human
heart is moft powerfully captivated, and
confequently the end of inftruction moft
effectually accomplifhed. By a conduct of
this kind, a man difcovers his own want
of underftanding, which would fuggeft to
him that a man, in whatever point of view
it may appear to himfelf, acquires fignifi-
cance in proportion as the purpofes are
important to which it may be rendered
fubfervient. The politenefs and fluency
of » Petronius, and the iimple elegance of
Anacreon, make vices and trifles the
fources of entertainment, while a writer
who poffeffed a vein of fterling wit, but
without the power of fetting it off with
this character of Compofition, is cenfured
with reafon, and is perufed with difguft.
Noftri proavi Plautinos & numeros, et
J^audavere fales, nimium patienter utrumque,
Ne dicam finite mirati ; fi modo ego & vos
Scimus inurbanum Jepido feponere dido,
Legitimumque fonum digitis calkmua & aure.
SEC-
158 Phllofophical and Critical
SECTION V.
Of fublime Compofition.
JTMIE characters of juft Compofitiort,
whofe nature and ufe we have at-
tempted to explain in the preceding fec-
tions, belong (as we have feen) indif-
criminately to every branch of the art
without exception ; and the execution of
any performance muft be judged deficient
in which thefe are not united. Simplicity,
perfpicuity, and elegance, we are therefore
to confider as criteria at the fame time
univerfal and indifpenfable, in which re-
fpects they differ from the ingredient of
fublimity, whofe influence extends prin-
cipally to certain known fpecies, and when
exerted in others is a noble but unex-
pected decoration, whofe prefence excites
high approbation, though its abfence
might have been marked without cenfure.
There is likewife another circumftance pe-
culiar to the grand in Compofition, con-
fidered as a character of the art by which
it is diflinguifhed from thofe that have
formerly
Observations on Compofitwn. iro
formerly been enumerated. It is, that
while thefe may chara£terife the expreffion
of a performance when there is nothing
ftriking or uncommon in the fentiment ;
and though on that account we may ex-
amine feparately the thought or defcrip-
tion, and the language that conveys it, yet
in the article of fublimity thefe muft al-
ways be contemplated together, and in
order to conftitute this excellence, there
muft be an invariable co-operation of both.
A work in which, upon the whole, there
is nothing either new or extraordinary,
when the thoughts are examined apart,
may yet be diftinguimed by fimplicity,
perfpicuity, and even elegance of didion : —
but an exalted idea naturally fwells out
the language to adequate emphafis * \ and
when
* Longinus, in his enumeration of the fources
from which fublimity is derived, confiders expreffion
" as a kind of common ftratum, or foundation for
" this magnificent fuperftruaure, which however
«' may be deficient fo as to render the whole of no-
« cited." n^» T4/. T.an^. H. But this aflertiou
upon ftricl examination, will not perhaps appear to
have been clofely inveftigated. For k is here fup-
pofed
160 Philofophical and Critical
when the latter (however founding) is un-
fupported by majefty of fentiment, we
denominate it timid and bombaft.
The
pofed, that to a mind pofleffing all the fources of fub-
limity, a power may be denied of clothing its ideas in
Cgnificant language. II^VTroxfj^tij wtit^ jj«p«ff
Ti»t? XOIVK T«I? 7«;£m ravratf iStotis ttij iv ru Xcytiv
JvvotfJitWy rj? oA&* ^WfK »&v. Ubi fup. But this is a
cafe rarely, if ever, to be met with. An imagination
filled with a great idea, will adopt an exprefiion as
naturally appropriated to the object, as a man flimu-
lated by the impulfe of any paflion finds words ex-
preffive of his feeling. In the firft inftance the mind
may labour with the greatnefs'of fome vaft conception,
and may find it difficult to feleft words proportioned
to its fublimity ; but ftill the thought will give ftrong
Cgnificance to fuch as are fixed upon, which, whether
adapted or not with perfect propriety, will receive
elevation from the fentiment. It is not, therefore,
true, that when an idea truly fublime is formed, and
diftin&ly comprehended by the mind, expreffion can
be defective, fo as to render it of no efFec\. But ad-
mitting that a perfon, capable of thinking in this manner,
{hould be able to make ufe of no words but fuch as
are mean and wholly difproportioned, it is obvious,
that notwithstanding this inconvenience by which an
alteration would be made on the external appearance
of an object, its intrinfic value would continue to be
the fame; and though fublimity is imperfect when
there ceafeth to be a proportion betwixt the thought
and exprefiion j yet the former, far from being ren-
dered
Obfervations oh Compaction. 161
The province of the fublime in every
kind of Compofition is pre-occupied by a
critic, whofe noble work on this fubjecl: is
fo univerfally perufed and admired by
readers of the fmalleft claffical knowledge*
that an enlargement on this fubject is in
a great meafure fuperfedcd by it. As a
repetition, therefore, of the fentiments of
Longinus would be ufelefs on the prefent
occafion, we fhall endeavour (as every fub-
jecl: admits of being viewed in different
lights) to avoid, as much as poffible, an
interference with this admired author*
which could anfwer no important purpofe
either of entertainment or instruction. We
tiered of no ufe by fuch an omiffion, would (till pro-
duce an effect upon a mind able thoroughly to com-
prehend it, adequate to its excellence, and to the
propriety of its difpofition. But fueh ?.ri inequality
when the mind is agitated by a ruling paflion, and far
more when imagination is filled with an exalted idea,
we have no realbn to expedt. An cbjc£l viewed in-
diftintlly, cannot be clearly reprefented ; but when it
is at once magnificent and turned full to the faculty
that furveys it, fuitable words will occur as readily to
delineate it with maftery, as the proper tools will be
applied by a ikilful artifan to give proportion, grace,
and confiftency to his work.
VOL. II. M fhall,
1 62 Philofophlcal and Critical
ihall, therefore, feparately confider by what
circumftances fublimity is conftituted in
the various field of the extenfive art here
examined, and £how in what manner the
true may be diitinguifhed from the falfe
fublime : — the moft proper method of im-
proving upon the foundation laid by na-
ture for the acquifition of this great quality
will fall next to be examined, as necefifary
to render our view of it complete as a
chara&er of Compofition.
I. The grand in this art, therefore,
arifeth from the union of bold and elevated
fentiments, with grace and dignity of ex-
preffion. Of thefe, when traced to their
original, imagination is in moft cafes the
common parent, To the observations for-
merly made on the employments affigned
to this power in the departments of fci-
ence, it is here only- necefiary to add, that
we ought to diftinguifh betwixt one idea.
greatly conceived, or one circumjlance
heightened by exquifite colouring; and
thoughts united together in a comprehen-
five plan, which may be deemed great
from the variety and complicated nature
of
Qbfirvattons on Compofitrin. 163
of its materials. We never apply the
epithet fubiime to a production of this laft
kind, whofe conduct is referred to the
underftanding ; and we denominate itgreaf,
In the fame fenfe as we would apply this
phrafe to an empire confpicuous not for
the grandeur of its palaces, but merely for
the extent, and variety of its provincial
territories. A comprehenfive fcheme,
therefore, whofe parts are well adjufted,
and obfervations that lay open the nature
of a fubject, indicate the compafs and depth
of an author's underftanding : — but one
«bject truly noble, or even one mafterly
ftroke in the delineation of a figure, dif-
covers a fubiime imagination ; and a con^-
genial fpirit is never at a lofs* both to mark
this character when it occurs, and to refer
it when difcovered to its proper original.
We do not here mean by afcribing the
fubiime to the power of invention, either1
to contemplate this as acting independ-
ently of the reafoning faculty in the pre-
fent office, or to reprefent fublimily as
principally conftituted by the deicription
of objects fubmitted to the cognifance of
M 2 fenfe,
164 PkSefipkical and Critical
fenfe. The range of fancy is immenfe;
and whatever excites admiration falls
within her province. A naked rock, a
ihipendous precipice, a ruined tower,
and other external fcenes of a fimilar kind,
are prefented in all the majefty of defcrip-
tion hy her pencil. But her influence ex-
tends no lefs to immaterial fobje&s, or
rather thefe when coloured, imperfonated,
and prelented vividly to the eye, form the
higheft and moft confpicuous characters
on whkh her creative -energy is exerted.
By the power therefore of" imagination,
innumerable themes, both in nature and
art, are rendered iubje&s of admiration; —
by the fuperintendenoe of neafon, her
flights are prevented from being ex-
travagant.
There is, in defcription of all kinds
whatever, a certain juftnefs of colour (if
we may thus exprefs it), a certain relation
- betwixt the perfon or thing ceicribed, and
the natural ideas formed of it by mankind
in general, without whkh no object can
be denominated fublime, or, indeed, be
di "; inguiihed by any determinate character.
When
Obfemations en C
When Milton (the mod fublime of poets)
reprefents the Deity as " enthroned a-
all height-" when in the fame fpirit of
exalted defcription his fktrts appear " dark
with excfffioe bright ;" we are led to ad-
mire tbefe daring and aftonifhing drcimi-
ftances as the refult of regulated, inftead
of cenfuring them as the ebullitions of
extravagant imagination, by recollecting
that both are mentioned of the only Being
to whom they can be applied with pro-
priety ; the hrft filling the mind with the
moft exalted idea of his ineffable majeflv;
the laft, by one of the happieft and moft
pi<fturefque images ever feized by human
imagination, reprefenting the effulgence
fplendor that furrounds iiira. Such t .'.--
ciimftances as thefe, appropriated to iggr
other object within the whole compais of
nature, would be viewed as indications df
an invt: .culty, great indeed, but un- ,
oontroiiled in its operations, and unaided
by that power which maintains confifte;
in every form delineated by the mind.
ere then we obferve the provinces of
the two fupeiior faculties in producing
M 3 fub-
3 66 Philofophical and Critical •
fublime Compofition placed in diftin&
points of view. As the former, therefore,
conceives the original idea, fo when this
has been reviewed by the underflanding
with approbation, it fuggefts an expreflion
adapted to convey it with fuitable energy.
Hence it happens, that though we often
meet with flimfy thoughts clothed in pom-
pous language, and rendered by this dif-r
proportion confpicuoufly ridiculous, yet
we rarely, or never obferve a thought,
conceived with genuine fublimity, to be
disfigured by mean and inexpreffive epi-
thets. The fame intellectual power that
rifes to elevated fentiment, prefcribes like-
wife an expreflion adequate to its majefty ;
as well as the colouring, or imagery, cal-
culated to make the moil vivid impreffion.
Contemplated as the parent of the marvel-
lous and admirable, the influence of im-
agination is by no means to be limited to
the invention of what is grand in fenti-
'ment, or to the perfonification of what is
inanimate in nature. Thefe are, indeed,
the themes that require her moft ftrenuous
exertion, But when we trace to this
power
Qbfirvations on CompofittQn. 167
power Hkewife, as to its original fource,
the {election of well appropriated language,
it ought to be remembered, that we afcribe
no greater effect to it than the paflions,
taken feparately, (hare with it in common j
each of which dictates a diftinct expreffion,
in proportion as it is gentle, or forcible ;
languid, or impetuous ; by which, as an
invariable criteria, we form an eftimate of
the character or temper.
We muft not fuppofe, however, that
this happy coalition of noble objects and
figniricant diction, whofe concurrence is
neceffary to give fublimity either to fenti-
ment or description, can be perfectly ob-
tained, even by the united effort of both
intellectual powers, while unimproved by
ftudy, experience, and practice. Art, in
order to complete this character, muft im-
prove upon the foundation of nature j
and an author ought to be fo well ac-
quainted with the manner of forming this
combination in particular inflances, as that
his own practice may be regulated by the
theory he hath gained from experience.
This circumftance it is, that renders the
M 4 true
168 Philofophical and Critical
true fublime fo uncommon, and fo difficult
an attainment. The irregular grandeur
of a Gothic edifice, at the fame time that
it excites admiration, reminds us of an
uncultivated age, and of a people yet un-
acquainted with the effects. arifing from a
graceful afiemblage of corresponding parts.
There is a wildnefs . here which pleafeth,
as an imitation of nature in fome of her
rudeft productions ; but we behold with
equal aftonifhment,, and with higher ap-
probation, a performance .in this kind,
finifhed by the exquifite ftrokes of an art
concealed from our infpection, and wrought
(though we perceive not the means) from
models in which the union of grandeur
and regularity forms the neareft approach
to perfection.
II. Thefe obfervations on the fublime
in Compofiticn, will be elucidated when
we confider the various means by which
this great character of the art is conftituted.
A little reflection will convince us, that
fublimity arifeth from combinations, fo
diverfified both of language and fentiment
in the various fpheres of Compofition, as
may
Obfervattons on Compofitlon. 169
may indeed be difcovered by tafte, but
cannot be reduced into a regular fyftem.
Some of thefe, however, it may here be
proper to point out and exemplify, as well
as to £how in what manner the true may
be diftinguimed from the falje fublime, iu
order at the fame time to direct a mind
ambitious of acquiring this excellence, to
the path that leads to it ; and by detecting,
from comparifon, the errors of falfe repre-
fentation to render thefe the objects of its
avoidance.
A thought then fometimes becomes
fublime, when the imagination feizing op-
polite circurnftances, two fubjects for in-
ftance, in the extremes of magnitude and
Httlenefs, of elevation and meannefs, placeth
the former in an exalted, and both in a
picturefque point of view, by bringing
thefe immediately into comparifon. " I
" believe (fays Socrates, in the celebrated
" dialogue formerly referred to) that this
" earth is an immenfe body ; and to a fu-
" perior Being (as he afterwards defcribes
' " one) looking down upon it, we, who
" inhabit the countries that lie betwixt
" the
170 Phtiofophical and Critical'
" the river Phafis, and the Pillars of Her-
" cules, appear fcattered on the coafts of
" the Mediterranean like ants or frogs, as
" we behold them gathered in parcels
" about a lake *." There is fomething
noble in the idea exhibited here of the
world in general ; and the contemptible
figure which many powerful nations make,
when compared with it, raifes our concep-
tions of its extent and magnificence as a
•work worthy of its Divine Architect. The
Being who looks on, likewife, we are dif-
pofed to admire as fublrme aud glorious,
in the fame proportion as thofe whom he
contemplates are deemed to be little and
Infignificant. A beauty ^of the fame kind,
but incomparably more exalted, charac-
terifeth the following paflage in the work
of a celebrated modern poet, where the
^ by one ftroke of his mafterly pencil,
* ETI TOJVW i^r,, iseifjt.us'yiz rt twoti aura, x«» r^a?
TUV
TOWOiJ OJXfiV
appears
Obfervations on Compofiticn. 171
appears ineffably glorious from compa-
rifon with the moft fplendid of his works.
O THOU whofe word from folid darknefs ftruck
ThatfparA the SUN *.
This glorious orb of light, reprefented as
a fpark ftruck out at once by the word of
the Deity, placeth the Creator in a point
of view inconceivably more fublime than
could have been attained by any detail,
however animated, of his perfections.
Viewed in oppofition to the higheft of his
vifible works, which difTolves before him
into nothing, the mind is filled by this
circumftance with an idea as worthy of
its original as it is poflible for it to con-
ceive.
As a great object is thus in general fet
off to the higheft advantage by being
placed in oppofition to an inferior one,
diftinguimed by fome real or fuppoied re-
femblance, fo in other cafes, when original,
to be placed in a fublime light is lefs dig-
nified, and the imagination of the painter
muft fupply its deficiencies by colour and
* Night Thought?, p. 2.
expref-
172 Phihfophical and Critical
expreflion ; it is yet rendered exalted by
a happy difpofition of fome preceding cir-
cumftances, without which we mould have
perceived in it nothing extraordinary. —
Thus when He&or is going to part from
Andromache, after many tender and na-
tural expoftulations, the poet fays,
Thus having faicl, the glorious chief refumes
His towering- helmet, black with {hading plumes.
POPE.
But what (it may be afked) is there great
in this defcription of the Trojan heroe ? —
We muft look for this purpofe into the
preceding interview, in which we fee this
illuftrious prince taking a laft and melan-
choly farewel of his wife and child, in a
fcene of mingled tendernefs and magna-
nimity; where, after having -given a'loofe
to the fofter pallions, and appeared the
tender father and affe&ionate hufband, he
reaiTumes the character of the hero, and,
expreiling his ambition to be foremoft in
defending his country, puts on hrs helmet,
and goes, with unfhaken fortitudes to the
battle.
This
Obfervatlons on Compo/itwn. 173
This happy difpofition of circumftances
'as it gives dignity to an incident, other-
wife inconfiderable in defcription, fo in
narration it renders a character truely fub-
lime ; and fentiments, otherwife merely
philofophical, the peculiar objects of ad-
miration.— Socrates, reafoning againft the
fear of death, and coolly running the com-
parifon betwixt what we enjoy in this life,
and what we conceive of the next, appears
merely in the light of an excellent philo-
fopher. But Socrates, juft condemned to
death himfelf, by a fentence flagrantly
unjuft, entering calmly into the examina-
tion of this queftion before his judges *,
without expreffing fear, anger, indig-
nation, or refentment f ; this great man
* After having faid that the friendly fpirk which
prevented him from purfuing upon other occafions
\vhr.t was unfit, had given him uo warning upon the
present, he concludes, that this being looked upon his
death as an happy event. This he proves by a philo-
fophical investigation.
•f* Ka» tyx'yt roig xaTai^Ti^p'frawtvsj? p* xa* rc>t;
xarJij-ofOij oy zravy p^aAfTraisa. xairoi ow rzvrv T>;
^iavot* K*Te$iKpt£«tto aou xxt XA'tyosmi. AHOA.
IHK. rff.r.fA. A}'.
cndea-
174 Philofqphical and Critical
endeavouring to prepare his accufers for
meeting death with intrepidity when their
own turn Ihould come *, and requefting
of them, to punim his children after him,
fhould thefe prefer opulence to virtue f>
appears in a light almoft divine. Every
fentiment is ineffably dignified by the cir-
cumftances in which he is placed; the
whole action is fublime in the higheft de-
gree, and the man appears exalted above
the common level of humanity. It is a
conduct of this kind upon which not only
men, but even the gods themfelves, were
fuppofed to look down with admiration.
A defcription (particularly in the higher
branches of poetry, where a feries of
actions are related) becomes wonderfully
fublime by the introduction of a juft and
* AAAa xai Ujtxa? -^prt u avSzt
ttvar* T&POS TOV $ot,va.rovt xai tv Tt TOUTO Jiavofi<r9ai aA»|-
6ft, OT» oux ff< av^i OLyaftw x^xov o*«dfv, cure
», Id. ibid.
raura raura AUTTCUKT*? aTTff fj/w u
^oxaxr»v »! ^^ n/xaray 7) aAA« T» TSgQTifiw tw*-
ti «f£Tr,f. Ibid.
adequate.
Qbftrvations en Compojition. 175
adequate illuftration *. This method of
obtaining fublimity is put in practice uni-
verfally by all writers who dwell on great
and magnificent objects. It is, however,
as difficult to reach this fummit of excel-
lence by the prefent, as by any means
whatever, becauie the image that conveys
to us fuch an object ought to be equal at
leaft, if not in fome refpe£ts fuperior to its
original. The understanding of an author
likewife, never appears more confpicuous
in this high fphere of Compofition, than
when it directs him upon fome occasions
to avoid comparifon of what kind foever, as
tending to depreciate, rather than exalt that
to which no illuftration can be adequate f.
That
" On s' explique (fays a French critic with pro-
priety on the fubjecl of illuftration} alTez ordinaire-
ment, par des comparaifons & Ton s'en fert pour mieux
iaire concevoir ce que Ton propofe, & pour en donner
une jufte idee. Elles ont deux qualiiez eflentielles;
la premiere eft, que la chofe que Ton y employe foit
plus connue, & plus aifee a concevoir que cclle que
1'on veut faire connoitre par fon moyen : & la fecontic
eft qu' il y ait un jufte rapport entre 1'un & 1'autre."
Boffu du Poeme Epique, liv. vi. chap. 3.
t What another critic of the fame nation with the
former, obferves of the poetic fable, may be applied
here
176 Philofophtcal and Critical
That tjie image which is applied to fet
a great a&ion or perfonage before our
eyes ought to exceed, rather than fall
below its original, will be acknowledged,
if we reflect that the narration of any
tranfa&ion, how animated foever, cannot
affect us fo ftrongly as if we had either
been eye witnefles of, or perfonally in-
terefted in the event; and in order as
much as poflible to compenfate for this
deficiency, images are felected that imprefs
a ijvoid idea of their original patterns upon
the mind, and by exceeding the truth,
excite in us nearly the fame fenfations
with which we mould have beheld it. By
following out this train of obfervation, we
may difcover the origin of poetic licence
(as it is called), and contemplate it in a
much more rational and philofophical light
here with perfe& propriety to its images. " La fable
Joit encore avoir deux qualitez pour eftre parfaite;
elk doit eftre merveHleux, & elle doit eftre rrai fern-
bable. Elle devient digne d'admirarion par la pre-
miere, & elle devient digne de creance par la feconde.
Quelque merreilleufe que foit la fable elle ne fera
point d'effet ft elle n'eft \Taifembable, &c." Rap.
Reflex, fur la Poetique Oeuv. torn. ii. p. 103.
than
Obfervations on Compofition. 177
than is ufually done. That dignified per-
fonages, great actions, momentous revo-
lutions, or aftonifhing events, might be
difplayed for the purpofe of exciting a
virtuous emulation, and of arrefting atten-
tion by ftrokes of mafterly eloquence*
images are made ufe of whofe tendency
principally is to exalt the imagination, or
to awaken the paffions proper to be
wrought on. While we are confcious of
the end for which thefe are applied, reafon,
in this caie, overlooks a difproportion be-
twixt the image and the object to be il-
luftrated, which it would have cenfured in
another as impertinent and injudicious;
Thus it was foon obferved, that the end
of poetic reprefentation could not be effec-
tuated unlefs an indulgence was granted
of the kind here mentioned. This indul-
gence therefore, has in all ages been per-
mitted, and when the truth is not grofsly
violated by circumftances abfurd and in-
credible, the mind confiders a certain dif-
parity as adding to the beauty, and height-
ening the impreffion of the whole.
VOL, II. N There
ij8 Philofophical and Critical
There is no perfonage of poetic flory,
either ancient or modern, defcribed with
higher colouring, and in a greater variety
of attitudes, than the Satan of Milton.
Yet when he is compared by this fublime"
genius (in different parts of his work) to
the fun in eclipfe *, to a comet f, to a
planet J, and even to Atlas or Teneriff §,
it is obvious, that thefe capital circum-
ftances are mentioned rather as their fplen-
dor, their portentous appearance, their
magnitude, and their ftability, ferve to
convey, in different points of view, fome
idea of the attributes that are afcribed to
him, than as thefe exhibit the exact pro-
portions of his Itature, the real expreffion
of his anger, or the unconquerable firm-
nefs of his ftrength and refolution. We
admire the grandeur of that imagination
which reprefents its object in fo many
noble and picturefque attitudes, without
either conceiving it to be fully equal to
the comparifons in every circumflance, or
* Paradite Loft, b. i. 1. 594. f Id b. ii 1. 708.
J Id. b. vi. 1. 313. § Id. b. iv. 1. 987.
being
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being offended becaufe we obferve fome
inequality. The cafe is indeed different,
when this inequality takes place in the
illuftration as falling below the original.
The end of poetic defcription (which is
intended, as we formerly obferved, to fup-
ply the emotions excited by perfonal in-
fpection) is loft in this inftance ; and a
character intended to raife admiration, ex-
cites no other paffion than that of ridicule-.
It is (as we obferved formerly) a proof of
an author s underftanding to avoid all
comparifon, when the perfon or thing de-
fcribed is either fuch as his imagination
can illuftrate by no adequate image, or
when it is fo great as that any illuftration
muft necefTarily fall below it. There are,
indeed, few things capable of being illuf-
trated, to which the genius of Milton was
inferior. The Deity himfdf, only his
judgment reprefented as fuperior to what-
ever falls within the compafs of human
-inveftigation. His ftrokes are therefore
here as cautious and timid, as in other
inftances thefe are daring and mafterly.
N 2 A very
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A very high degree of fublimity is often
obtained by a fudden and abrupt inter-
rogation *> An author may feize the
imagina-
* This method of becoming fublime, acquires its
excellence principally from exciting fuiprize, which
an interrogation, or a feries of theie, may awaken, fo
as to make a very powerful imprefiion. Here we muft
take care, however, not to include, under the deno-
mination of fublimity, fuch ftrokes of eloquence
as may have ftrength and pathos, though without that
character of jufl elevation which conftitutes this- ex-
cellence. Without keeping this diftin&ion in cur
eye, we fhall be apt to confound witb each other cha-
racters of Competition perfectly diftincl ; and what
•we do not thoroughly comprehend, we cannot hope
fuccefsfully to imitate. Quintilian, diftinguiihed as
he ufually is by exquifite tafte as well as accurate dif-
cernmcnt, feems fomewbat inadvertently to have fallen
into this miitake, by an example he produceth of fub-
Hmity from an oration of Cicero. Having made
much the fame diftintlion betwixt a comparifon and.
tranflaticn, as figures of rhetoric, which we have
found Ariftotle making betwixt an image and a meta-
phor, b. I. feel:, vi. p. 112. he proceeds to obferve,
that a wonderful degree of fublimity is often obtained
by the tranfiation as it is called, i. e. the giving life
and adlion to an objeft wholly inanimate. The fol-
lowing bold interrogations, addrefied to Tubero, he
produceth as an example. — " Quid enim tuus ille
Tubero deltrictus in acie Pharfalica gladius agebat I
Cujus fotns ilie mucro petebat ? Qui fenfus erat ar-
Obfervations on Comport ton. 181
imagination at once by employing this
figure; and when his own mind is filled
with the grandeur of fome idea, may exalt
in the fame manner that of another, with-
out entering into circumftantial detail.
When the great POET, formerly men-
tioned, is going to paint the combat of
Michael and Satan, as if at a lofs to con-
vey his idea with fuitable ftrength, he
exclaims,
Who, though with the tongue
Of angels, can relate, or to what things
Liken on earth conlpicuous, that may lift
Human imagination to fuch height
Of god -like power ? — Book vi.
Without mentioning any particular cir-
cumftance here, relating to the combatants,
morum tuorum ?" Cicer. pro Ligar. Quintil. lib. viii.
cap. 6. The perfonification in this paffage is un-
doubtedly Itrong and mafterly in an eminent degree.
But is it not an inftance rather/ of the bold that ani-
mates, and of the new that furprifeth, than of the grand
that fwells and elevates the imagination ? Thefe are
fpheres that ought always to be confidered as different ;
a point that can only be obtained by bringing to the
itandard of certain efhblifhed rules, -every -example
that falls under our cognifance, as we fhaH thus be
able to refer every effect to its proper principle, and
will be unembarrafied in our decifions.
N 3 the
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the author leads us to form the higheft
notion of their mutual ability, and interefts
us iirongly in the event of a tranfaftion
upon which he enters with fo much fo-:
lemnity, and to the full defcription of
which he reprefents created intelligence as
inadequate. It would be improper to mul-
tiply examples of fublimity obtained by
this figure, as after having the track
pointed out, every reader of fenfibility
will fuggeft thefe for himfelf.
The laft, and principal fource of real
grandeur in Compofition,confifts of bold and
animated perfonifications. By this figure a
fentiment is often placed in a light the moft
perfectly advantageous, as it becomes pic-,
turefque, and opens two inlets of pleafure
by gratifying at the fame time the ima-
gination and the fenies. It is on this ac-
count, that two of the moft beautiful pieces
of antiquity are fo much, and fo juftly
efteemed ; I mean the Hercules of Pro-
dicus, and the noble portraiture of Cebes.
We have, in a former work, confidered
this noble figure in a philofophical light,
and have endeavoured to account for its
various
Obfer'vations on Compofithn. 183
various effects to which we here refer, as
fuperfeding an enlargement *. We need
only at prefent to obferve, that as the fub-
lime in almoft every cafe requires the pic-
turefque to be united with it, and is per-
fected by this combination, the laft men-
tioned character is never more completely
obtained, than when imperfonated figures
are placed before the imagination with
their proper infignia, and are reprefented
as producing their natural effects. To the
union of thefe circumflances in Compo-
fition, we mall find, upon recollection, that
the moil admired examples, both of an-
cient and modern genius, owe all their
Lmpreffion. Of this the winds in the
^Eneid rufliing at the command of their
fovereign to fwell the agitated ocean f;
the deities, in the Iliad, occupying every
department of nature, and animating every
action of the poem $ ; the angels, in the
Paradife Loft, weildiag the elements, and
iliaking the whole creation from its bafis §,
* Efiay on Lyric Poetry, let. ii. p. 101. octav. edit,
f ^Eneid. lib. i. + IAIAA. pafl".
$ Parad, Loft, book vi.
N 4 or
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or (to mention perfonifications more per-
fedly allegorical) the figure of Melancholy,
in Pope's Eloifa to Abelard * ; of Night,
in the Complaint of Young j~ ; of the
mountains £, the ocean, and the deluge §,
in the Sacred writings, afford ftriking and
remarkable examples. In each of thefe,
taken feparately, and in many others of
the fame kind, great objects, particular
expreffions, and appropriated colouring,
form a combination which we furvey with
aftonimment, and whofe effecl: upon a fuf-
ceptible mind is little inferior to that
which would have arifen from beholding
the originals.
The great art of rendering either figures
imperfonated for exciting admiration, or
even inanimate objects pi&urefque, lies in
painting thefe with ftrokes that in order
to be difcriminating muft be particular.
It is the fame in eloquence, when an orator
attempts to awaken the paffions. The
fame expedient muft be ufed to penetrate
* Eloif. to Abel. v. 163, to 171.
-f- Night i v. 18—25.
$ Ilabak. ch. iii. v. 3. § Pfalm. civ. v-
the
Obfervations on Comptfition* i8c
the heart in the lad inftance, which feizeth
the imagination in the former. We may-
judge an object to be great from a defcrip-
tion which by no means renders it pic-
turefque, in the fame manner as we may
comprehend the general purport of obferv-
ations, when we defcend not to minute
investigation. Thus a mountain covering
an immenfe track of country, or in general
any object of uncommon magnitude, we
acknowledge to be great in the common
fenfe of that word. But it is by the fhadow
trembling on the diftant lake, by the cedar
on its top feen like a fhrub, and by the
eagle hovering like a fpeck above its fum-
mit : it is by thefe circumftances that the
whole becomes picturefque ; and the figure
is more completely difplayed by a fingle
ftroke of this kind, than by any defcrip-
tion, however elaborate, of its fize, height,
and productions. When, on the other
hand, the mind is to be powerfully im-
prefled, and the heart to be penetrated by
energetical reprefentation, this purpofe is
accomplished more effectually by one
pointed appeal, by one ftrong, fignificant,
186 Phllofophlcal and Critical
and particular expreffion, than by a ge-
neral enumeration, though conducted with
the utmoft accuracy, of all the motives by
which the heart of man ought to be
touched, and his practice to be regulated.
Such is the diftindtion which the mind al-
ways makes betwixt what is approved
folely by the underftanding, and what is
felt by the heart.
It will here naturally be afked, by what
means has this particularly its effed: ? —
The mathematician, who meafures exactly
the height and dimenfions of a mountain,
and the poet who paints it, obtains each
his purpofe by being particular; as the
philofopher in the fame manner who enu-
merates motives of conduct, defcends from
general to more minute difquilition, in
order to imprefs more powerfully, the
truth of certain propofitions. But here
lies the difference betwixt the faculty of
reafon operating by itfelf, and combined
with imagination, fo as to conftitute dif-
cernment. In the one cafe the mind can-
not, by the moft elaborate refearch, obtain
that puq>ofe, which in the other one maf-
terly
Obfervations on Compofition. 187
terrly ftroke inftantly effectuates, without
premeditation, ftudy, or induftry. It is
the province of this laft power (as we have
already feen *) to fuggeft immediately
every circumftance that tends to place its
object before the imagination in the moft
finking point of view, and every motive
that warms, agitates, and penetrates the
breart. A great perfonage, therefore, re-
prefented as a principal actor in fome in-
terefting tranfaction, moves at the fame
time in a dignified fphere, and is rendered
cogn liable by the eye of the reader, in
confequence of certain happy expreffions
thrown into his countenance, an attitude
jufily conceived, or an enterprize fuitably
adapted ; in which inftances the hand of
a confummate artift is indicated from the
choice of circumftances that carry fub-
limity to its utmoft height by uniting it
with the picturefque and animated.
The grand, in the art here examined,
confidered as it hath thus been with re-
gard to its original, and to the various
* See book i. fe£l. 4.
com-
1 88 Pk'lofophical and Critical
combinations by which it is conftituted,
in order to produce its proper effect, ought
to be diftinguifhed from the bombaft or
tumid, as it is called, which aflumes upon
many occafions fo nearly the appearance
of genuine fublimity, as to impofe almoft
eo^ially upon the inexperienced, as upon
thole who are really defective in difcern-
ment. We are as ready to miftake a
feeming, for a real character of Compe-
tition, as we are in life to give a man
credit for certain virtues, who has fliadow
without fubrtance, and it is by experience
only that we are undeceived of both. In
order to prevent fuch a deception in the
prefent cafe, let us enquire what is un-
derftood by bombaft Compofition, and by
what, criteria U is to be known.
As we have feen that the true fublime
demands an union of noble fentiments
and elevated expreflion ; the falfe it is ob-
vious, muft argue a defect of either or
both character iftics. In general, we may
pbferve on this fubject, that though even
a difcerning critic may be deceived by that
appearance of this great character which
fo
on Compofition. i^g
fo nearly refembles its reality ; yet when
he difcovers upon recollection, that the
pomp of language is elaborately difplayed
to fet off either trite fentiments, or inade-
quate objects, he will conclude that the
affedation of grandeur is then predo-
minant, and that the turgid takes place of
the genuine fublime. Expreffion, there-
fore, is faid to be bombaft when it is
wrought up in a manner which the judi-
cious reader perceives to be the effect of
art rather than of nature; when much
labour is bellowed to collect together
founding words and ftrong epithets, which
pour upon the mind at once, and, like the
noife of a torrent, are calculated rather to
ftun than to exalt it. Vulgar ideas con-
veyed in elaborate periods ; images far
fetched, difcordant, or unappropriated * ;
{trained
* KafiatTrfp i/auj pupix JjaJp^uso-* xu/x-arar, *2t
txtywyovrx j^si/Awi/a? (fays Chryfcftom,
fpeaking of the Pharaifee whofe arrogance is con-
demned by our Saviour) e irtx. tv avru ru
<TK07T£\u TJH &po(r«p*£«(r« WOIVTU rev
CUT05
Philofophical and Critical
(trained epithets, and defcriptions rendered
fhocking by unnatural circumflances *j
exprefled
euro? T
tv aurw TW
XPTZOS0.
This tumid and unappropriated image
conveys to the mind of the reader no didinft idea of
the action to which it is applied, and is befides
wrought up with improper circumftances. In order
to have rendered it properly adapted to the Pharai fee's
fituation, the (hip ought to have been daftied on a
rock, in confequence .of the mariner's abfurd confi-
dence and precipitance. This man likewife, is not
condemned for the offence of his tongue, but for the
temper of mind that prompted to this tranfgreffion.
* In order to have a full idea of the fault men-
tioned in the text, let usobferve in what manner three
of the moft celebrated ancients have' defcribed the"
fame a£tion. Homer fays, that the horfes who dre\r
Heeler's chariot, flew with great velocity from the
left to the right wing of the battle.
2-mecvTtS vfxva? rt xtxt ao-Truta?, ajjtxa-n (T a£&»
Ntpflfv «7ra?
A? a«
Ai r O.TT tiruriraTfuv. — IAIAA* P»C A«
This defcription is wrought up with ftrong and pic-
turefque circumftances ; but as the judgment of the
poet prevented him from carrying it on to too great
length, it prefents only to the mind a general idea of
the (laughter and defolation attending on battle.
Virgil is (till more cautious : when ^Eneas flies from,
one
Qbfervations on Compofition. igi
cxpreflfed likewife in language equally af-
fe&ed, are examples of that tumid didion
which
one end of the battle to the other, to avenge the death
of Pallas, he fays only,
Proxima quxque metit gladio, latumque per agmeu
Ardens limitem agit ferro. ./Eneid. lib. x.
But Statius, defcribing his hero in the fame point of
view, lengthens out the detail very improperly in this
place, and by attempting to be more circumftantial
than the other, introduceth ftrokes which tumid epi-
thets, and a falfe grandeur of ditlion, render equally
(hocking and unnatural.
Hos jam ignorantes teret impiu&axis, at illz
Vulnere femineces, (nee devitare facultas)
Venturum fuper ora vident, jam lubrica talx>
Fraena, nee infifti madidus dat temo, rotseque
Sanguine difficile s, & tardier ungula fcffls
Vifceribui : tune ipfe furens, in morte relicta
Spicula, & e mediis extantes offibus^ ha/las
Avellit. Strident animae, currumque fequuntur.
Thsebaid. lib..vii.
The feeling heart recoils from fuch a picture as this,
and a regulated imagination rejecls it with horror.
There is, likewife, a certain decorum of character to
which an author ought to attend in the expreffion of
certain paffions or actions. Circumftances that are
natural and proper in fome Ctuations, are indelicate
and fhocking in others. A warrior in the height of
his rage, upon being feized and reduced to fervitude
by an enemy, might call upon lions and tigers to tear
him to pieces, rather than drag out life in inglorious
bondage, But this language in the mouth of a lady,
in
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which conftitutes the falfe fublime. Thefe
are indications of an imagination vigorous
but diftempered, and in a mind void of
that fenfibility which reafori contributes
to imprefs on a fufceptible heart, pro-
ducing ftich effects as thefe faculties, when
juftly combined, render objects of horror.
It may be obferved here, that this propen-
fity to fwell out every circumftance by
falfe colouring, and thus to exceed the
proportions of nature will diftinguifh the
man directed by it from another whofe
mental powers are balanced with jufter
equilibrium, as much when both are em-
ployed in placing the fame object before
in any cafe whatever, is drained *and unnatural, a3
violating the foftnefs of the female character. When
one of Ariofto's heroines lays, therefore,
quefto il lupo, il Icon, 1'orfo
Venga e la tigre e ogn* altra fera brava ;
Di cui 1'ugna mi ftracci e franga il morfo,
E morta mi ftrafcini a la fua cava. Cant. x.
this difcourfe is extravagant, and this expreflion in-
flated, when we confider the perfon who pronounceth
it. In other circumftances the fame ftrokes might
have been highly interefting and pathetic. The reader
will find many other examples of this kind in the Or-
lando, probably occafioned by the manners of an age
not thoroughly refined,
the
'Obfervafions on Compofition. 19?
the mind, as when their fubjecls are dif-
ferent. We have adduced an example of
this in the preceding note. It is by com-
paring in this manner representations of
the fame kind at lea ft, if not precisely of
the fame things, that we judge from the
furefl tell, the effect produced hy thefe,
of their real value, or demerit ; and when
we have thus difcovcred the catife of a
fault, unperceived formerly in the per-
formance of another, the fame clifcerninent
leads us to correct it in our own.
Should it be neceffary to lay down any
other rule for avoiding the tumid in Com-
pofition (which to a man of true difcern-
ment, is more difgufting than any other
blemim in the art, as indicating more con-
fpicuoufly a defective underftanding) we
would advife a young writer to avoid, as
much as poffible, the perufal of dech:-
matory works, which are very inadequate
models, and yet are imitated by a man of
genius with fo much facility, as renders
the trial agreeable. By falling into this
manner, he will gradually learn to fub-
ftitute words in the place of things', and
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19*4 Pfiilofophical and Critical
having his ear filled with a founding pe-
riod, will overlook the fuperficial fenti-
ment often conveyed in it. The exterior
attractions of the ftyle of Compofition, are
like feathers beautifully variegated with an
aflemblage of colours floating on the fur-
face of a ftream impregnated with gold.
With no other recommendation than a
beautiful outfide, they arreft the eye of a
young and uninformed fpe&ator. He
may pleafe himfelf with placing thefe in
certain ftriking arrangements, and may
thus difcover that they have their ufe.
But it is by fearching the ftream to the
bottom, that he will be taught not to reject
the original objects of his choice as wholly
contemptible, but to confider their com-
parative utility, and value them propor-
tionally.
We do not, howevery mean when we
thus advife a man of genius to avoid fuch
branches of Compofition in very early
Ufe as may render his own expreflion in-
flated and turgid, to recommend the fame
cautious procedure when his tafte is pro-
perly formed, and when he is able to.
diftin-
Obferuations on Compofition. lot
diftinguim appearance from reality fo
juftly as not to be impofed upon by the
former. In this fituation he will receive
information from obferving the faults,
even of performances excellent upon the
whole, as he will at the fame time judge
of the caufe from which thefe are 'derived*
i
and of the method molt happily adapted
to correct them. With regard to the pre-
fent fubject more particularly, we may
affirm with truth, that the fame vigour of
imagination which directed improperly,
produceth tumid Compofition, juftly regu-
lated, would have rendered it fublime.
The firft of thefe, indeed, is commonly
fuppofed to accompany either objects or
fentiments themfelves fuperficial, or at
leaft fuperficially examined. But it is cer-
tain, that the phrafe tumid or bornbaft,
applied to any branch whatever of the art,
indicates a certain difproportion betwixt
the thing reprefented, and the words em-
ployed for this purpofe, and takes place,
even when the idea is really great and im-»
portant, as often as the diction by being
ftudioufly heightened with fwelling epi-
O 2 thets,
196 Philosophical and Critical
thets, is deemed to exceed that natural
fimplicity which excludes iuperfluity.
It is univerfally acknowledged, that the
genuine fublime is no where to be met
with in higher perfection, than in the
Paradife Loft. The ingenious author of
the Life of Milton, imputes, and no doubt
with truth, fome part of that amazing
grandeur which the imagination of this
poet obtained, to his having indulged him*
felf early in reading romances *. But
" along with the honey fucked from thefe
weeds,' * fome parts of their noxious
quality would appear, likewife, to have
tainted the Compofition, even of tjiis great
genius. Hence fome critics have cenfured
his expreflion as inflated, even when the
moft fublime ideas are conveyed in it. In
early life, therefore, what may have made
fome impreffion upon fuch a mind as that
.of this diftinguifhed poet, we .may natu-
rally judge to have an effect much more
confpicuous upon a genius of inferior
order, fufceptible of the fame effect from
* See Fentou'i Lite of Milton.
models
-
Qbfervations on Compofitlon. 197
models improperly felected, and lefs able
to detect their faults, or to refill their in-
fluence. A perufal, which, upon the
whole, was beneficial in one cafe, in an-
other will produce the bad, without the
good effect, and talie will be vitiated in-
ftead of being juftly directed by the falfe
model of imitation that is placed before
the mind.
Upon the whole, the utmoft purpofe
that culture, however conducted, can reach
hi directing to the attainment of fublimity
appears to be, that a man of moderate
genius may be taught to diftinguifh with
great -propriety, the fublime of fentiment,
or of deicriptidn, from that fwelling dic-
tion in which neither upon examination is
confpicuous. He may feel very power-
fully, the effect arifmg- from that affem-
blage of circnmftances which gives gran-
deur to Compofition, and when he cannot
accomplim a complete, will be deterred
from attempting a partial imitation. The
inventive power : likewife by the fleady
eontemplatio n of objects calculated to call
it out into excrcife, may acquire an energy,
P ? and
398 Phihfophical and Critical
and even compafs fuperior to that which
nature, unimproved in this manner, would
have enabled it to obtain. Thefe acqui-
^itions, valuable in themfelves, are enhanced
greatly by the additional knowledge which
a man of difcernment gains by fuch ob-
fervation of the real ftrength and proper
fphere of his faculties. Falfe ideas of an
excellence, or a partial reprefentation of
it, engage a man at beft in a fruitlefs pur-
fuit, which, when followed out to the
utmoft, produce in him only regret for
not having thoroughly comprehended his
work before he engaged in it. He, there-
fore, whofe imagination is capable of
making no extraordinary exertion, by ac-
quiring a juft idea of what is truly fub-
lime, will learn upon trial to imitate only
fuch beauties as fall within his fphere;
while that perfon, on the other hand, who
may have been fitted by nature to join
great conceptions with adequate execution
will find by being accuftomed early to
contemplate what is truly admirable, the
path to this excellence at lafl laid open to
him. Inftead, therefore, of fludying the
Decoration
Obfervations oh Compofition. 199
decoration of language as a principal in-
gredient of it (a miftake of which a young
mind is naturally fufceptiblc) he will dif-
cover this laft to be wholly of fecondary
confequence, as always accompanying ele-
vated fentiment, and though often obtain-
ing where this great characteriftic is not
to be met with, yet never deficient where
it is.
SECTION VT.
Of Nervous Compofition.
HpHERE appears, at firft view, to be
a very clofe affinity betwixt fublime,
and nervous, or forcible Compofition, by
which laft term we underftand ftrength and
•energy, either of thought, of ^xpreflion,
or of both taken together. Thefe, how-
ever, take their rife from very diftindl
exertions of the intellectual powers, and
produce very different effects. Sublime
Compofition is principally known by that
height to which it exalts imagination ; the
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soo Philofophica! and Critical
forcible or ftrenuous, on the contrary, by
the ftrength and duration of that imprek
fion which \rtj-makes either upon this
power,- or- ' upon.' • that of understanding.
The one convex fant always with the grand
-and magnificent, demands high colouring
and copious illuftration ; — the - -other is
commonly moft perfect in -its kind when
the feweft words are employed, and is
always weakened by diffufion. A man
of fublime genius, defcribing the fun as
an objecl: incomparably, glorious, would
dwell upon the extent and fpleridor of the
orbs enlightened by him : whereas an idea
of his influence would be forcibly conveyed
by reprefenting th-e penetrating power of
his rays in fome particular inftance. In
fhort, a man may have ftrength of intel-
lect who pofiefleth not fublimity of ima-
gination, thoti^h he who has completely
obtained the laft quality hath always a
power of exercifmg the former. The
fublime analiled into its principles, con-
fifts of great ideas ftrongly conceived and
vividly painted ; but a mind whofe range
-is- lefs compreheniive, may carry con-
viction.
Obfervations on Companion. 201
vidion to the judgment by flrenuous re*
prefentation, or ftrike remorfe to the re-
coiling heart by a particular and forcible
appeal.
This mafterly character of Compofition
is always the indication of exquifite fen-
fibility, and moft commonly the refult of
it. . This obfervation admits of eafy proof.
The impreflion made by any reprefen-
tation upon the mind of a reader, muft
undoubtedly bear a proportion to that
which the original objects imprinted upon
the thought of the author. We have here
faid, that the one of thefe muft bear a.
proportion to the other, it muft not be
concluded that this proportion will be per-
fect. Ideas, even when exprefled with
the greateft energy, lofe always a part of
their effect by being conveyed even in
words that may be deemed moft fignifi-
cant. The mind takes into its firft
draught certain objects, or particular
ffcrokes, which it cannot delineate with
adequate emphafis (in whatever fphere
likewife we iuppofe it to be employed)
whofe
2O2 PhilofopJiical and Critical
whofe abfence necefTarily weakens the i
preflion, and the effect of the whole. In
proof of this remark, we may refer every
man who has made a trial of this kind to
the teftimony of experience; and thofe
whofe powers are capable of making the
moft vigorous exertion, will probably be
moil fenfible of its truth. A mind, there-
fore, whofe feelings are weak, or whofe
powers though able to furvey objects ac-
curately is but (lightly imprefled by them,
may be rational or methodical, but can
never be interefting; and the fecondary
impreffion (as it may be called) ftill falling
ihort of the original, its work will ceafe
it Jaft to excite attention.
We fhall here confider that energy of
mind which gives rife to this ftriking fig-
nature of juft Compofition, as exerting its
influence on the fentiment, the diction,
and illuftrations or images, employed in
the various branches of the art. After
having viewed it in thefe lights, we fhall
endeavour to account for the inequality
that takes place in many inftances in the
works
Obfiruations on Compofition. 203
works of the fame author, characterifed at
one time by vigorous execution, as at
others by languor, and imbecility. This
will lead us to make fome general remarks
on the caufes that deprive language of its
due force in particular cafes, and on the
method moft proper to be ufed for avoid-
ing, or for correcting this weaknefs.
I. A thought, in any field of fpecula-
tion whatever, is faid to be flrongly con-*
ceived when its fignificance is fuch as to
command attention, and to imprefs very
powerfully that faculty to which it is prin-
cipally addrefled. Sometimes, without
having perufed a work, we may apply this
epithet with propriety to the mind that
conducts hypothefes or theory only upon
hearing this laft reprefented, when we dif-
cover in it not novelty only, which of itfelf
excites no other fenfation than that of fur-
prife, but a certain ftrenuous, and daring
exertion of intellect, that indicates energy
and vigour. When we hear, for inftance,
of a philofopher who undertakes to dif-
prove the exiftence of matter, the novelty
of
204 Pluhfophical and
of the fubje£t (hikes us with furprize^and
we even expert ingenious difquifitten1 in
the .profecution 'of.it. Refined inveftiga-*
tion, metaphyfical diftin&ion, and every
indication of: fubtle genius, we fuppofe
will be difplayed in fuch a field ; and upon
meeting with thefe our expectations are
gratified. But how different are the ideas
excited upon hearing repreiented the plan
of Burnet's Theory of the Earth! — The
{hell of the globe burft open at the deluge
by the waters lodged within its cavity as
in an immenfe refervoir; the rocks, moun-
tains, precipices, promontories, iflands
formed in different parts by this univerial
rupture ; the very idea, however unphilo-
fbphical> that is prefented to us of the pre-
fent earth as an immenfe ruin to be finally
confumed by the volcanos without, the
combuftible materials within, the fun
opening a paffage tq its central fire^ and
the earthquakes that unhinge its deepeft
foundations; — thefe are thoughts whofe
formation indicates vigorous intellectual
exertion ; and a ftrength correfponding tq
that
Obfcrvations on Compofitlon. 205
that of the caufes, whofe co-operating in-
fluence will effectuate the deftruction of
the frame of nature * !
The force with which fentiments in the
conduct of an exteniive plan imprefs the
mind, depends upon circumilances that
vary according to the purpbfe which the
writer ., hath ultimately in view. Political
obfervations on the manners of an age, are
flrenuoufly conveyed to the mind when
there is nothing peculiarly emphatical in
the expreflion, when an enumeration is
made of the different ideas which the
fame objects excite in men animated by
virtuous emulation, or enervated by luxu-
rious effeminacy. — " I have often heard
" (fays Salluft) that Quintus Maximus,
" Publius Scipio, and other eminent
" members of the republic, ufed to fay,
-
" that when they gazed upon the ftatues
" of their anceftors, their minds were mod
" vehemently excited to the practice of
" virtue. Not that the wax, or the figure
* See particularly the two Dlileriaiions upon the
Deluge, and the Conflagration.
« into
206 Philojbphical and Critical
" into which it was moulded, poflefled fo
<c much power. But the memory of their
" illuftrious adions, imprinted by this
'* conveyance an idea fo forcible and per-
u manent upon the breafts of thefe great
" defendants, as never to be effaced until
•* the fame virtue had rendered their fame
** as extenfive, and their glory equally
M complete. — But, on the other hand, (con-
" tinues this hiflorian) who is there of
<c us all, tainted as we are by corrupted
44 manners, whofe emulation extends any
*6 further than to the riches and magni-
" ficence of our anceftors ? Probity and
" ac*tion are out of the queftion. Even
" men of mean birth, who formerly ac-
" quired diftinguifhed pre-eminence by
*c their virtue, obtain in thefe times the
" firft dignities of the flate ; more by
" theft and robbery, than by any com-
" mendable occupation*." We have
here
• «' Szepe audivi ego Quintum l^laximum, Publlum
Scipionem, pneterea civitatis noftras pra;claros viros
folitos ita dicere: quum majorum imagines intueren-
tur, vehementilume animum fibi ad virtutem accendi :
fcilicet
Obfervations on Comp^fitkn. 207
here a ftrong pidure fet before us of the
degenerate manners of the Romans in our
hiftorian's age. The particular example
felected of effects produced on the minds
of men in his, and in a former age, from
viewing the ftatues of their predeceflbrs, is
happily chofen for this end ; and without
any exterior ornament of diclion, conveys
a more forcible idea of a people univer-
fally emafculated by luxury, than the pomp
of rhetorical declamation could ever have
prefented. — Let us hear Demofthenes on
the fame fubjed. — " It is not (fays he)
" furprifmg that a warlike, active, inde-
w fatigable prince, (Philip) mould conquer
" a people who are fufpended and irre-
" folute. I wonder not at this. It would
fcilicet non ceram illam neque figuram tantam vim is
fcfe habere: fed memoria rerum geftarum earn fiam-
inam egregiis viris in pe&ore crefcere, neque prius
fedari quani virtus eorum famam atque gloriam adae-
quaverit. At contra, quis eft omnium his moribus
quin divitiis & fumptibus, non probitate neqwe induf-
tria cum majoribus fuis contendat ? — Etiam homines
novi qui per virtutem foliti erant nobilitatem ante-
venire, furtim, & per latrocinia potius quam bonis
artibus ad imperia & honores nituntur." Saluft. Ju-
gurth. in proem.
« be
2t>S Pliihfophicd and Critical
" be furprifing, indeed, if you, who do
" nothing in war, ihould conquer an
" enemy who is attentive to all its opera-
" rations. This, Athenians, is aftonifhing,
u that you, who once attacked the people
** of Lacedaemon in defence of the liberty
" of Greece ; who generoufly transferred
" to others thofe emoluments which you
<c might have detained for your own ufe ;
" that you, in fhort, who braved with
" fuch intrepidity the dangers of war in
" their caufe, fhould now exert yourfelves
** fo indolently in your own ! that having
" rifked every thing formerly to fave
" others, you now behold your own li-
*' berty, and your own pofleffions, in the
<l moft imminent hazard, and are doing
" nothing to preferve them *." In thefe
examples
Ou Sn SaLVfAZTtov ;r<v ci r£2Trjetmo;, xai
xxi araipuv (? avouri x<xt
0/XWf JUEAXOVTttf, XJtl l
xai sn^avoufvav tftci'ijtTai. Qv
rxro ryu.-*—tsvo&Tu>v <ytx.o n» 'au^arcv n
TOIf T3-oAl/^»(T* ^Ofl-»!Xf» Tl/
.* IXclVO
• V?
Obfervations on Compofition. 209
Examples . we obferve and are imprefled
wholly by the fentiment, which acquires
fuch ilrength from the comparifon here car-
ried on, as muft have been felt univerfally,
whatever exprefiion had been felected to
convey it. The correfpondence of this laft
circumftanceJs an improvement to which
we attend afterwards with fatisfaction,
when we obferve the propriety with which
embellifhment of every kind is avoided in
it, as the effect of fo forcible and intereft-
ing an application muft at leaft have been
weakened by fuch an attempt, if not in a
great meafure fuperfeded.
In the conduct of philofophical invefti-
gation a thought acquires ftrength, and
the impreflion made by it is rendered dur-
p.tv -store u Avff vauoi VTTIO ruy
EAAHNIKIiN AIKAIIiN avTrn, x«»
ivx
ci aAAot •iv/jijG'i ruv (Jixat^i* r» vftfTtoz avrw
xm £«<r!p^c>Tff, xa< w^oix^^vtuiTf
o/.V£«T£ c^icvat, xat /ueAAm ncr^i^en vireg rcav
HANTAZ, xa* xa9' txaycv iv jufffi. Ta
ft TMETEPA aurwK a7roAwA»!XOTf,' xa6r,«r9«. AH-
MOZQ. OAuufiia, xf(p. /3.
VOL. II. P able
2io fhilofophicat and Critical
able when its energy is difplayed in £
climax juftly conftituted, the parts of which
are diftindl:, and the procedure rational.
A frivolous queftion connected remotely
with fuch a thought, but whofe nature has
not been fufficiently comprehended, Is
fhown likewife in a clearer and ftronger
light, by being fimply repeated after hav-
ing carried on fuch a reprefentation, than
by any other" method adopted for this
purpofe. It is difficult to feparate upon
many occafions, quefiions that minifter
wholly to curiofity, from fuch as tend to
convey real information ; and even when
this diftinclion Is made, the former muft
be placed in a very confpicuous point of
view, in order to deter men ftimulated by
a powerful paffion from engaging in en-
quiries that can be brought to no fatif-
fa&ory conclufion, though the mind is
flattered in a very different manner when
thefe are firft fet before it. How many
profound metaphyfieal fpeculations of no
emolument to the reader, who receives
difguft inftead of inftrudion from their
perufal, and of great detriment to the au-
thor,
Obferijatlons on Compofition. ill
thor, who, by launching beyond his depth,
has made no other difcovery than the de1-
fect of his own underftanding ; how many
of thefe might have been avoided, had the
perfons employed in them felt the effect
of the following nervous reafoning of the
Roman philofopher^ which mows the fri-
volous nature of the fubjeds that have fo
long engrofled their attention ! After hav-
ing, in general, obferved of the mind, that
whatever fubftance that is which feels,
thinks, lives, and animates the body, it
mufi be celeftial, and confequently eternal ;
he illuftrates his reafoning by faying, that
even the Deity himfelf we conceive only
to be a Being difengaged from all mate-
rial obftruction, endowed with a principle
of eternal motion, which he communicates
to all things. Of this kind (fays he) and
of the fame nature is the human mind. —
" But (replies fome minute enquirer) where
" is this mind, and what is it after all ? — •
u Apply (fays our illuftrious philofopher)
" thefe queftions to thy own foul. — Canft
" thou anfwer them ? — No. — But becaufe
11 I have not received every faculty I
p 2 would
212 Philofophical and Critical
" would wijh to poiTefs, doft thou, there-
" fore, forbid me to make life of fuch as
'** are really conferred on me ? — What the
" mind perceives not, its own form or
appearance is of leaft confequence. It
perceives, undoubtedly, at all times
ftrength, fagacity, memory, action, ce-
lerity.-—Thefe objects are great, divine,
" eternal. After knowing thus much
" of its nature, queftions that regard its
" countenance, and place of refidence, are
" not worth an anfwer *."
In this noble paflage the author diftin-
guifheth, with true philofophical fagacity,
the ufeful from the trifling and abfurd in
an enquiry of the greateft importance;
and by a climax well-conducted, when he
enforceth the firfl mentioned objects (haec
* " Ubi igitur, & qualis eft ilia mens? — Ubi tua
& qualis ?-— Potefne dicere ? An fi omnia ad intelli-
gendum non habeo quae habere vellem ; ne his quidem
.quae babeo mihi per te uti licebit ? — Non videt animus
quod minimum eft fuam formam. — Vim certe faga-
citatem, raemoriam, motus, celeritatem videt. Haec
magna, brec divina, hiec fempiterna funt. — Qua facie
quidem fit, aut ubi babitet ne quaerendum quidem
;cft." Tufcul. Difput. lib. i. cap. 28.
magna,
Obfervations on Compofiti'm. 213
magna, hsec divina, hsec fempiterna funt)
imprefleth as powerfully upon the mind a
conviction of their utility, as of the frivo-
lous nature of the others rendered more
confpicuous by being placed in oppofition.
Uniting, therefore, the diftincl: characters
of a philofopher and an orator, he forcibly
inculcates thofe truths as an eloquent
writer, which as a philofopher he difcerned
to have importance.
II. Thus far we have confidered the
character of juft Compofition, here ex-
amined, as influencing various kinds of
fentiment, when unaccompanied with any
uncommon energy of diction, or ftrength
of illuftration. When thefe laft concur
with the former, as well in difpoiition as
in degree, the combination is perfect, and
is known by the vigour and permanence
of its impreffion. It is true, indeed, that
a fentiment ftrongly conceived commu-
nicates a correfponding emphafis to ex-
preffion at all times, in the fame manner
as a paffion powerfully excited, gives
ardor and vivacity to the countenance.
In certain inftances, when a detail becomes
P 3 deeply
214 Philofophtcal and Critical
deeply interefting, and when an addrefe
is pointed to the heart, no art, unlefs it U
very refined, ought (as we have already
fhown *) to be made ufe of. A few fim-
pie words, juft infpired by the occafion,
produce the full effect to be brought about
in fuch circumftances as thefe ; and an at-
tempt to amplify or illuflrate, would either
weaken or fubvert it. A man, feeling
the prefiure of fome great affliction, will
make ufe of few words. But the two ex-
tremes of perfect indifference, or abfolute
defpair, adopt none at all. A mafterly
writer, therefore, will in the firft cafe em-
ploy few ftrokes, though thefe fignificant
and ftrongly expreffive. In conducting a
paffion to the laft excefs, he will know
that all defcription hath a boundary af-
figned to it ; and by acting like the
painter, who gave various expreflions to
the perfons attending the facrifice of Iphir
genia, but veiled the face of her father,
he will finim a picture incomparably more
animated in fuch inftances, than Ian-?
guage and images could make out.
• Vol. I. feft. vii. Note.
But
Obftryatiom on Compqfition. 215
But thefe obfervations relating to a few
particular and very fmgular cafes, though
they could not with any propriety have
been omitted, yet have no weight when
referred to the more ufual fubjects of
-Compofition, in which thoughts that are
recommended intrinfically rather by their
life than their novelty, and which though
approved by the power of underftanding,
yet imprefs but flight! y .that of memory
when retailed in unornamented expreflioa,
acquire peculiar fignificance by being con-
veyed in emphatical language, or prefled
home by appropriated and finking illuf-
tration. It is principally by means of this
energy, communicated to they?y/<? of Com-
pofition, that the two arts of eloquence
and poetry make impreflions more vigo-
rous and permanent than any other. Nor
ought the advantages derived from this
circumftance to be coniidered by the dif-
paffionate philofopher, as even of fecon-
tlary confeqtience, far lefs .as frivolous
.and unneceifary. If we allow that he is
±he mod ufeful member of iociety, whofe
thoughts by being ftrenuoully inculcated
P 4 are
216 Philofophical and Critical
are moft univerfally ufeful, a man who Is
capable in this manner of effectuating fuch
a purpofe is in every valuable fenfe pre-»
ferable to him whofe fentiments, however
excellent in themfelves, are enervated by
feeble expreflion, of rendered dry by being
defectively illuftrated.
It is univerfally acknowledged, that ge-
nius never commands admiration more pow-
erfully than when it is employed in giving
fuch fignificance to an ufeful precept^ or
common fentiment, as by feizing the fa-
culty of imagination makes a durable
impreffion upon that of remembrance.
When a thought is truly fublime, or is
flrongly marked by its originality, we ex-
peel: to meet with a correfponding energy
in the diction, and look upon this as a
neceflary accompaniment. But the mind
exerts a creative energy that is contem-
plated with atonifhment when we find it
giving diftinction to every idea that falls
under its cognifance ; and when fuch
thoughts as we have often met with, and
have as frequently neglected, are improve^
by pafling through this intellectual alem-
bic fo as to influence conduct.
Obfervations on Compofition. 217
In order to produce the purpofes here
mentioned, it ought by no means to be
confidered as neceflary, that we make ufe,
upon all occafions, of the figures or idioms
of poetry. Thefe, it is no doubt true,
when adapted to their objects with pro-
priety, contribute as much as any other
means to accomplim it effectually. Though
an important expedient, however this is
not an only one, and its ufe, though in-
difpenfable upon fome occafions, would
be unfuitable in many cafes, and inju-
dicious. Thoughts, when confidered as
forming in various combinations the parts
of a comprehenfive plan to be detailed in
Compofition, will -naturally be viewed
either as fupporting each other in a con-
nected feries when the argumentation is
clofely carried on, or as ftanding more
loofe and detached, when a queftion may
require to be illuftrated, and to be expofed
in a variety of lights. In the firft cafe, it
is requifite, above all other circumftances,
in order to convey each of thefe as
ftrongly as poffible to the mind, that the
author
2i8 Phiiofophical and Critical
author fhould make ufe of as few words
as may be confiftent with that perfpicuity
which ought to be his ultimate aim. Me-
taphors he may and ought to adopt, be-
caufe thefe, when well applied, render an
argument clear and forcible at the fame
time. But while he is not fparing of this
figure, a judicious writer will ftudy to ufe
it in the prefent inftance, only when the
idea thus enforced would have otherwife
been obfcure, or fo unimportant as not to
have fixed attention *. Nor is it injurious
to
* I know no work, either ancient or modern, in
which the figure here recommended is introduced
with greater force and propriety than in the excellent
work of Quintijian, to which we have fo frequently
referred. This admirable critic, feems to have under-
ilood thoroughly both their nature and their ufe in
Compofition. We have already confidered his defini-
tion of a metaphor, and have fhown its juftnefs.
In the futh chapter of his eighth boojc, the curious
reader will find him treating this fubjeet at great
length, and illuftrating his remarks by numerous
examples. To this, therefore, we refer him. Let
us only obferve, how juftly he has himfelf exem-
plified his own rules. He fays of this figure in gene-
raj, that when admitted properly into Compofition it
conveys
Obfervations on Compaction. 219
to the reputation of any author, however
eminent, to affirm, that in a work of
length, particularly of the argumentative
kind, many fuch ideas muft neceiTarily be
admitted. In the proof of every hypo-
thelis, however paradoxical, the principles
to which the mind originally recurs in
order to eftablifh a conclufion, muft be
fuch as are univerfally intelligible; and
conveys an idea more forcibly than the words in whofe
room it is placed. " Metaphora plus valere debet eo
quod expellit." Inflit. lib. ii. c. 3. He mentions it
likewife as a means to render an objedl clear and intel-
ligible. Lib. viii. cap. 6. Among many other paf-
fages of his work, which might here be adduced as
proofs of the conformity that takes place betwixt his
rules and his practice, the following, in which both
purpofes are accomplifhed at once, is remarkable.
" Nee mirum (fays he, fpeaking of the action of an
orator) fi efta quze tamen in aliquo funt pofita motu
tantum in animis valent, quum pi£hira tacens opus, &
habitus femper ejufdem fie in intimos penetret affe£tus,
ut ipfam vim dicendi nonnunquam fuperare videatur.*'
Inftit. lib. xi. cap. 3. Nothing can be more appro-
priated and forcible, than the language and illuftration
employed here. How vividly is the mind imprefTed
•with the effect arifing from the real aflion of a con-
fummate orator, perpetually varying when it recollects
the impreflion made upon it by one fingle attitude
imitated in painting !
he,
220 Phllofophlcal and Critical
he, who in a pHilofophical difquifitioti
calculated perhaps upon the whole to let
in new light upon the mind, fhould ex-
pect to be entertained by the novelty of
thefe contemplated feparately without re-
gard to the ultimate purpofe, would form
an expectation that can never be gratified.
It is not fo much to the firft principles
laid down (which cannot be too fimple
and obvious) that we attend, as to their
difpofition and tendency to effectuate a
certain end. As we are apt, however, to
be fatigued by following out thefe at
length, which make of themfelves no very
ftrong impreffion, it is of great confe-
quence to an author, that his diction be
rendered peculiarly emphatical in this cafe,
by a choice of fignificant wprds, and by
the beauty of expreffive metaphors hap-
pily interwoven (if we may thus term it)
in the compofition, that thefe may be read
with attention, and recollected with fa-
cility.
We have, in a former fedtion, adduced
an example of Compofition, diftinguifhed
at
Obfervations on Compojition. 221
at the fame time by ftrength and fimplicity
in hiftorical narration *. It is difficult to
illuftrate, in" the fame manner, our obferv-
ations on the moft proper method of
rendering expreflion nervous in the con-
duel: of an argumentative detail; becaufe
fuch examples, in .order to be complete,
would run into too great length. Obferve,
however, in what manner one of the
greateft mailers of language, among the
ancients, at the fame time elucidates and
enforceth a maxim by no means remark-
able for its novelty ; but rendered ex-
tremely fo by the expreffive words that are
felecled to convey it. Speaking of the
perfons that are bell qualified for the pur-
pofe of education, our author fays, — " In-
primis evitandus, & in pueris praecipue
magifter aridus, non minus quam teneris
adhuc plantis ficcum & fine humoie ullo
folum. Inde fiunt humiles ftatim & velut
terram fped:antes qui nihil fupra quotidi-
anum fermonem attollere audeant. — Ma-
cies illis pro fanitate, & judicii loco infir-
* Book II. feft. \l
mitas
mmJ Critical
mini ne maturites epi**
JBBwl XCBEDCt* HOC JBUftwl Mi JyTl uXtUA
"A
iLc.4*
It is by metapfaon dun Inppilj fafended
witk tbc dMK^te, and coaJrfdng wiA it, as
it
andL%mficu!Li; aztd ^*c ne kd to ad-
dm dttpgBftiap talcot, in die ex-
of thcfc Toy ideas wfatdi in a
acc£vefled of k would be deemed
infigoiiicant. In many cafes,
r, k is no doubt neither proper
indeed pn&kable to ptdcive this
-" ~~ r - a* il.,|» - •• _ **-_
mcmBy paiiiiimtiy wnen a lew
troths arc laid down in the Ian-
wholly onornamrntcd as the bans
of an hji«dbcfis- The fiaeft method of
k to make vie of as fcwurordi
not aMbbUeiy
A ~£ « f ___ f
/v wutGi of good, lenie never
4ttmn this qoafitjinore obrioofly, than
by appearing always to know when he1
has joft Jaad enough. Rednndant epithet
(H
Qlfcrcatwiu on Camfqf&g. 223
he will fhun, as enervating what it is ap-
plied Co ftrengthen, and declamation as
relaxing attention, which is kept op by
obferving the end of a certain refearch,
advancing nearer as we proceed, and more
as it were, within our reach. A fubjcd,
treated upon thefc principles, will pjeafe
by coherence, when not diftinguHhed by
vigour of fentiment ; and language, where
it cannot obtain the character of remark-
able force, will yet have ugnincance by
gaining that of propriety.
Thus far we have conGdered the fub-
je€t of this (edition, as improving the effect
of fentiments that {land in dofe connec-
tion, and appear with the greateft poffiblc
advantage in confequence of well-adapted
expreffion.
When the former, however, either have
greater energy themielves, or admit in
certain inftances of more copious and for-
cible illuftradbn, a defect of ilrength in
the llyle of an author s Compofition be-
comes couipicuous, in proportion as its
prevalence is required as expedient or ne—
ceflary. This cb?m^«^ of die art, as
appro-
224 Phtiofophical and Critical
appropriated more particularly to one fpe-
cies of it than to another, and conftituted
by different means when the objects vary
to which it is applied, we fhall have occa-
fion afterwards to examine. Some ge-
neral obfervations on thefe at prefent, it
may here be proper to introduce.
i. It was formerly remarked, when we
treated of the grand in Compofition, that
an object is often rendered fublime by an
happy difpofition of fome preceding cir-
cumftances *. This we then attempted
to confirm by examples. But the arrange-
ment of previous ideas, though it will
fhow us in any work whatever at what
time the thought ought to have ftrength,
and the diction correfponding energy ; and
in confequence of this difcovery will make
us immediately -fenfible when either or
both is deficient, yet imparts not vigour
as in the preceding inftance it may do
fublimity to an object. Yet by raifing our
expectations, it renders us particularly
confcious of that weaknefs in the mind of
"ift Sed. v.
an
Obfervations oh Compofition. 22-
an author to which we owe a difappoint-
ment. Thus a philofopher expofmg the
futility of an objection, an hiftorian re-
lating a defperate engagement, an orator
fumming up his various arguments in an
appeal required to be pointed, particular,
and forcible ; thefe gratify our hope in-
deed, when they acquit themfelves pro-
perly; but it is not to the difpofition of
preceding circumftances that either the
thought or expreflion owes its energy.
It is wholly to the real force of the one,
and to the correfponding propriety of the
other, both which we examine apart.
The fentiments of Socrates, therefore,
communicated to his judges after he had
been condemned to drink the hemlock*
acquire mblimity from his peculiar fitua-
tion. We confider this circumftance, and
pronounce thefe to be exalted. But when
we come to examine the force of his rea-
foning, and the words he makes ufe of as
juftly or unequally adapted, it is quite an-
other matter. We drop immediately every
thought of his lltuation, and are impreffed
only by the objects then contemplated.
VOL. II. Q !t
226 Philefophical and Critical
It ought likewife to be obferved, thac
the fubliraity which owes its origin to a
certain arrangement of previous incidents
admits of degrees. It is true, indeed, that
we expect the thoughts as well as the
conduct of a great mind tried with ad-
verfity, to be dignified and confident. But
Should thefe (the former particularly) be
noble, though not aftonifhing, we ftill,
with truth, denominate them fublime^
It is otherwife when we confider vigour
of intellect, as indicated by certain ideas,-
conveyed with fuitable emphafis of lan-
guage. When an expectation of this kind
is once raifed, the leaft failure in gratifying
it is deemed to be a weaknefs. The phi-
lofopher, hiftorian, or orator, who fhould
fail to exert feme part of that energy
which his 'fubject might neceflarily de-
mand, or the reader expect from his man-
ner of conducting it, would be deemed'
unequal to the tafk he had undertaken to
execute, and difqualified to rife with be-
coming vigour to his work. — Let us try
an example.
When
n
Observations on Compofition. 227
"When liberates has endeavoured to
perfuade Philip, in the oration addrefied
to this monarch, to bring about a general
good undemanding among the ftates of
Greece, with whom at that time he was
living in amity, we expect that he will
immediately propofe fome motive of pow-
erful efficacy, to make him follow an ad-
monition apparently fo contrary to his
intereir* But inftead of meeting with any
thing of this kind at the time we naturally
look for it, — after having told him, that
by following the counfel he had given him,
l< he would at the fame time conciliate the
" Greeks, and terrify the Barbarians *,"
our author makes a florid and elaborate
panygeric on himfelf, who, in thinking
rightly, and in directing to proper and
honourable means, is inferior, he informs
us, to no man whatever \. — Every reader
muft
* Hv T
tarn tzriro?? TOJJ Si (3Ap£apo»? (poSipos. IIOK.
$lA»7T. AO}'.
f To di ^aiifiv tu, xai Tffnro(.i$tvi<r§<zi xaAwf \ti xoti
228 Phtlofophical and Critical
muft be fenfible that there is great weak-
nefs in this condudl. It anfwers no pur-
pofc
tv TOK «7roX£X£J|w.|i*£K>»f, aAA ft
T0»f sro£xoy<r» TOJV aXXwv. M. ibid. This diicourfe of
Ifocrates has, I know, been greatly applauded in ge-
neral ; and one of the bcft ancient critics, Dionyfius
Halicarnafleus, recommends it as proper to be read-
by princes, to inflil into tkeir hearts the love of
virtue. The tendency of fome excellent moral ob-
fervations in it to promote this purpofe, we (hail by
no means difpute. It is only cenfured here as a Com-
pofuion defective in ftrength of thought, and which,
finks at that time when we expect the mod vigorous
and mafterly execution. With regard to the argu-
ments by which our author propofeth afterwards to
convince Philip of the utility of his propofal, appofite
as thefe have been judged to the accomplishment of
this end, we will not be furprifed upon reflection,
that thefe made no ftrong impreffion.cn the mind of
the Macedonian.' What is his fcheme taken alto-
gether ? After conciliating the; attachment of all the
Greek cities by offices of friendfhip, he exhorts this
prince to march into Afia, and fubdue the Peifian
nation. But this, furdy, was not a plan likely to be
prolecutecl by Philip, who knew well that as long as
Greece itfelt was left unfubdued, no profeffions of
alliance from that quarter were to be depended upon.
Jealous of its liberty, and of the ambition of this enter-
prifing prince, Greece he was well aware would have
obflructed inftead of forwarding his defign, as expect-
ing, like the moufe in the fable, that after having
devoured the greater objects, the leffer would fall an
Obfervations on Composition. 229
pofe but that of exciting difguft, and of
prejudicing us, as we have 'obferved him
to do in a former inllance, againft every
thing he afterwards advanceth on the fub-
ject. Strength of intellect (however con-
fpicuouily a character may be marked by
vanity) will 'upon fuch an occafion be dif-
eafy prey to his rapacity. His infincerity was too well
-known to make his promifes be regarded as of any
confequence. Philip, therefore, purfued a much
better plan than that propofed to him here by Ifocrates :
which was, to put it beyond the power of his ene-
mies at home to give him difturbance, before he
thought of carrying the war into a foreign empire.
The events that fell out upon the death of this great
prince, after he had effectuated this purpofe, clearly
fhow us what .meafures the ftates of Greece would
have adopted had he left them at liberty by marching
{boner Into Afia. Debilitated as they they were, they
forgot in a moment the lofs of Cheronxa, and the
fame people who had chofen Philip their generaliffimo,
took arms againft Alexander. Should it be foid that
the Greeks had at laft been driven by fprce.to take that
conrfe with regard to the former, which they might
formerly have adopted from choice; I have already
fhown that this u-ould never have been the cafe, from
their opinion of this man's infincerity. Thefe re-
marks, though foreign to the prefent fubjecl, the
author hopes that his -readers will excufe, as being
naturally fuggefted by the mention of this celebrated
oration.
covered
230 . Philofophical and Critical
covered by ftrenuous argumentation, and
by motives (whether conclufive or not,)
yet enforced as powerfully as the nature
of the fubjed: wouhd admit.
The proof adduced here of intellectual
debility, exhibits it principally as influ-
encing the fentiment and conduct of a
difcourfe. We obferve it to take place in
the didion, more particularly when an
author, after having acquitted himfelf
properly in conducting the fubordinate
branches of his theme, fails juft at the
moil important crifis of ufmg that " ver-
bum ardens," that language full of energy,
by which we then expe£b his Compofition
to be diftinguimed in all cafes, or thofc
pi&urefque and animated images which
ought more particularly to predominate in
the fpheres of eloquence and poetry. It
would be endlefs to adduce examples in
proof of this remark, as the reader of tafte
may collect many for himfelf, both from
ancient and modern performances. We
may obferve, however, that the difpofition
of previous circumftances prevents us from
being pleafed, even with moderate execu-
tion
Obfirvations on Compofition. 23 i
tion at fuch a time, becaufe from thefe we
have naturally been led to expect fome-
thing higher. When after having brought
his argument to a period, a philofopher
comes to place the whole in one confiftent
fummary before the mind ; when after
having expofed the falfhood of a plaufible
representation, he proceeds to examine its
confequences, we confider him as deficient
in ftrength of conception and of feeling,
whofe ideas are not then conveyed with
iuch emphafis as produceth at once a very
fenfihle and permanent effect. The fame
remark may be applied to the hiftorian,
whofe indignation wre fuppofe to be roufed
,by having recorded an infamous tranf-
action ; and in fimilar cafes .to the orator,
rand the poet.
However, therefore, in certain circum-
ftances that conduct may be deemed great
which rifeth not to the wonderful, yet
when ftrength, either of language or of
fentiment, is nereiTajtly required, we make
410 allowance as in the other cafe for de-
fect in either, which is immediately fup-
pofcd tp indicate a mind whofe feelings
arc
232 Philofophical and Critical
are weak, or whofe powers are dtfpropor-
tioned to their fubje<3:. What is the caufe
for which we judge fo differently of thefe
characters of Compofition ? — Upon recol-
lection we (hall find it to lie in the ends
which thefe propofe feparately to accom-
plifh. — The fublime (we have already feen)
is always directed to raife admiration.
Whatever object excites this paffion we
contemplate as great ; but the imagina-
tion, which principally takes cognifance
of it, without being exalted to its higheft
fphere, may yet be raifed to a fuperior
one, and betwixt the dignified that awakes*
and the aftonifhing that holds it in almoft
viewlefs exftafy, there are many degrees
that conftitute (if we may thus exprefs it)
the range of the fublime. Expectation,
therefore, even when excited in the higheft
degree, may be in fome meafure difap-
pointed when an idea though not reach-
ing the firft, yet falls not beneath the
loweft ftep of this fcale, and is ftill regarded
as noble, though by no means aftonifh-
ingly exalted. — But it is otherwife with
the nervous in Compofitiort, of which the
heart,
Obfervations on Compofition.
heart, not the imagination, decides; and
of whofe defeat, when it is expected emi-
nently to predominate, we are rendered
fenfible by feeling. Here there are no
other degrees than thofe that are prefcribed
by the nature of the fubjeft. We expect
not, for inftance, that Plato fhould convey
his arguments with the fame energy with
which Homer fets before us the deeds of
Achilles. But when once we are inter-
eiled thoroughly in a queftion, a reflection
that might have fignificance in one con-
nection, is wholly uninterefting in an-
other, and an image of unqueflioned energy,
when applied to fome circumftances, will
be cenfured in others, as weak, and un-
appropriated *.
A
* In conducting a work, compofed of very com-
plicated members to n period, to expec~l that equal
energy of mind fhould be difplayed upon every occa-
fion when this may, no doubt, be neceflary, would be
idle and extravagant. Of all authors whatever, Homer
is perhaps the leaft defective of this quality in general.
Yet amidft that amazing variety of obje£ls potirtrayed
in the Iliad, need we wonder if we fometimes meet
with an image comparatively weak at leafl, and ina-
dequate to its original ? — One inftance of this kind
it
234 Philofophical and Criticai
A writer of difcernment, therefore,
ought to be particularly cautious, left in
the
k may be to the prefent purpofe to felect. When
Achilles, in the twenty-firft book of the Iliad, engages
In a combat, fruitful of new and aftonifhing events,
with the river Scamander, the genius of the ftream is
reprefented as raifing it from the bottom, and attempt-
ing to overwhelm this formidable enemy, by loading
his waves with the carcafes with which he had
choaked up the tide. Achilles feizeth a tree, born
down by the current, and leaps from it on the (hore.
But the god attafcks him on all fides. To convey an
idea of the inundation burfting every where on hi«
head, Homer makes ufe of the following image*
*' As when a labouring man brings a rill of water
" from its fountain to refrefh his plants, and beautify
rt his garden, holding the line in his hand, and clear-
•* ing the paflage with his fpade, on a fudden the
** Waters ftreaming before him down the declivity
** throw the pebbles into confufion, and inflead of
'* following, go before their leader. — So with what-
** ever rapidity Achilles flew, Scamander, flill fwifter,
*' rolled his billows before him." IMAA. (£>. a.
\. 157. This illuftration has undoubtedly great
beauty. It gives an entertaining variety to tfie narra-
tion, and (what is not always the cafe with Homer's
images) is adapted to its object in every circumftance.
But with all thefe advantages in its favour, if it is
true (as we have endeavoured to prove at fome
length, feel, v.) that the imag&wbich is employed to
fet a great a£Hon or perfonage fce»re our .eyes, ought
to exited rather than fall (hort pf the original, we (hall
then
Obfervations on Compofition. 235
the original choice of his fubjecl he (hould
fix upon one demanding a more ftrenuous
exertion of intellect than that to which
his mind is adequate ; becaufe there is not
one among all the characters of Compo-
then pronounce this to be defective as a forcible re-
prefentation. For though a ftream defeating the in-
tention of the labourer who means to fcoop out a
channel for it, by overflowing the grounds before
him, reprefents to us Achilles furrounded by the Sca-
mander, whofe waves retarded his purfuit of the Tro-
jans, and were before him wherever he went; — yet
furely the rill that waters a garden defeating the pur-
pofe of a hufoandman, is an image as difproportioned
to the impetuous Scamander guided by a God, charg-
ing its billows with heaps of dead, and breaking on
the head of Achilles, as the hufoandman himfelf
{landing with his fpade in his hand, and feeing his
work overwhelmed by the water, is inferior to this
hero leaping on the ihore, and fpringing at every
bound from this divinity as far as a warrior can throw
a fpear. — The illuftration, therefore, is here inadequate
to its original in point of ftrength. The circumftances
of the former, though beautiful when contemplated
alone, yet fhrink into nothing when placed in com-
parifon with the latter. Thefe are appropriated, but
not pi&urefque. If, however, a defect of this kind
can never be excufed, it muft furely be pardoned in
fuch a work as the Iliad, in which an imagination,
kept perpetually on the ftretch, has erred as feldom in
this way as it ever did in any cafe, when not guided
by infpiration.
fition,
236 Phhofophiea! and Critical *
fition, whofe deficiency is fooner obferved,
even in a flight degree, than this of vigo-
rous execution ; nor is there any for which
when once detected, a performance is more
nniverfally cenfured. When our expecta-
tion is carried to a certain height, either
from the nature of the theme itfelf, or
from the manner in which it is conducted,
we become perfectly fenfible of an author's
weaknefs, who, though adequate to every
inferior reprefentation, falls off when en-
gaged in the mofl important ; and by fub-
ftituting affected, in place of natural
energy, difcovers the debility of talents
improperly exerted, which in a fphere
better adapted to their exercife, might have
been employed with propriety and emo-
lument. On the contrary, however, it
ought to be obferved, that as a certain
previous arrangement of ideas renders a
defeit of flrength, either iri thought or
cxpreffion, remarkably perceptible to a man
of difcernment, fo when the execution is
adequate in this character to the fubject,
the circumflance above-mentioned contri-
butes equally to render us feniible of its
full
fibfervations on Compcfitlon. 2:7
full effect. .Memory is never more per-
manently impreffed, than \vhen expeda-
tion is fuccefsfully gratified; and an au-
thor, who in the developement of his plan
exerts an energy proportioned to the occa-
fion, at the fame time that he rifeth in his
reader's eftimation, effectuates a purpofe
by the fignificance given to every object:,
which the fame reprefentation lefs ftrenu-
oufly enforced, or placed in another con-
nedion could never have accomplifhed.
2. As a writer, therefore, whofe corn-^
poiition is diftinguifhed as nervous or for-
cible, may render this character perfectly
confpicuous, by bringing on that crifis in
his diicourfe at which it is required moft
particularly to predominate; ib in order
to preferve it univerfally as much as the
nature of a fubjed will admit, he ought
to ieled as often as poflible, lively and
appropriated illuftrations. It would be
wholly ufelefs to enlarge here upon theie
as communicating peculiar energy to fen-
timents, and even rendering their influ-
ence at fometimes irrefiflible ; becaufe we
have .already difcufled this branch of our
fubjecl
238 Philofophical and Critical
fubjed at confiderable length. We {hall
therefore, only obferve at prefent, with
regard to the jlrength which thefe give to
Compofhion, that two things are requifite
to conftitute this character, ift. That the
image ihould either be really ftronger than
the object to which it is applied, or at
leaft fhould be fuppofed .to exceed it in
this refped:. 2dly, That foreign or ad-
ventitious circumftances, fhould, if poffible,
be wholly avoided in the application, or
admitted as feparately as poffible.
That an illuftration ought ufually to
exceed its original pattern in ftrength, to
convey a forcible, as much as in grandeur
to conftitute a fublime reprefentation, will
be acknowledged upon the principles for-
merly enumerated. As it is the bufmefs
of every writer to intereft his readers in
the fubject of which he treats, thofe ima-
ges which are called in particularly to ani-
mate his narration, ought to exceed the
objects in ftrength which thefe are brought
to illuftrate, in order to fupply, in fome
meafure, the lofs of ocular evidence, to
which all narration is inadequate. When
an
Qbferuations on Compofition. 239
an illuftration, in the fame manner, is ap-
propriated to a fintnnent, which in a cer-
tain connection hath peculiar emphafis,
we are fo far from condemning the author
for mixing bolder ftrokes in his illuftra-
tion than we might conceive the original
to have fuggefted, that we look upon thefe
as indications of mafterly execution. Thefe
rules may be deemed perhaps at firft view
not to be applicable to every cafe, and
therefore to be imperfecl. A fentiment
(it may be faid with truth) fometimes ac-
quires great ftrength from an image pur-
pofely reprefented, as inferior to its ori-
ginal, inftead of being ftronger or more
expreffive. Thus in Sha^efpeare*s beau-
tiful Ode,
Blow, blovf , thou winter wind \
Thou art not fo unkind
As roan's ingratitude, &c.
the two images of " winter wind," and
" biting froft," difficult as thefe are often
to be fupported, are yet denominated com-
paratively light, when compared with the
ingratitude and inexcufable negligence of
mankind, the two originals to which thefe
- - - ^
cor-
240 Philofophical and Critical
correfpond. Yet the latter are ftrength*
ened by this companion ; and the whole
is incomparably glowing and animated*
But a difcerning reader will take notice*
that in every inftance of this kind, with-
out exception, the original object acquires
force, not becaufe the illuflration is really
of an inferior nature, but reprefented,
though really higher in itfelf, as lefs than
the thing to which it is compared, the one
lofeth no part of its original force, and the
other gains a confiderable acceflion. A
mind, pained by the recollection of ingra-
titude, is very forcibly fet before us when
compared with a man feeling in a defart
the blafting winds, and piercing ft oils of
winter ; but while the confequences arifing
from thefe laft, are placed full in our fight,
the anguiih, excited by the other, is
painted with incomparable energy when
the poet, perfonifying the biting air, fays,
Thy tcoth is not fo keen,
Thou caufeft not that teen ;
Although thy breath be rude.
The reader will eafily fupply to himfelf
many other examples of the fame kind, to
which this obfervation may be applied.
The
Qlfervations on Compofition. 241
The other rule we laid down for ren-
dering images forcible when applied to
thoughts in compofition, viz. that thefe
without the embellifhment of adventitious
circumftances, fhould be adapted with pro-
priety to their objects, reflection will in-
duce us to follow likewife as expedient.
It is indeed true, that an image may be
thus appropriated to its original without
rendering it animated, in the fame manner
as the colour that is fuited to the com-
plexion of a countenance, may add no
diftinguifhing vivacity to its expreffion.
With regard to the firft, however, it is
certainly true, that though this correfpond-
ence betwixt an illuftration and its original
pattern may tak;e place (as we have already
feen) when no degree of ftrength is com-
municated to either ; yet when it is vio-
lated by the introduction of objects foreign
to the principal purpofe, the force of both
is confiderably leflened, and their impref-
fion is rendered lefs durable. The ufe
of unappropriated circumftances in the
illuftration of an important fentiment,
hath the fame effect upon the mind of a
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242 Philofophtcal and Critical
reader as the " turba verborum," (as
Cicero calls it) the multitude of words-.
The ftyle of Compofition is enervated by
both. The ftrength indeed of the image
it'felf confidered apart from the language,
depends, no doubt, upon that of the ima-
gination which conceives it. This radical
character, therefore, can be altered by no
difpofition whatever. But the figure of
Compofition here mentioned, when little
detached flrokes are admitted into it, by
carrying the reader's attention away from
the principal point, renders that difFufe
which ought to have been clofely united ;
and impairs in this manner the effect of
the whole.
Thefe obfervations it ought to be re-
membered, relate wholly to jentiments as
energetically conveyed by illuftrations, in
whatever fpecies of the art thefe may be
introduced. With regard to action, (that
high kind of it in particular which forms
the epopoea) the matter is different. In a
narration extremely diverfified, the images
drawn promifcuouily from all fources muft
be at the fame time frequent and various,
as
Obfervatlons on Cowpo/ition.
as the circumftances direct to which thefe
are applied. Amidft fueh diverfity, the
mind though pleafe.d to find in each pro-
portion and fymmetry, yet requires to be
relieved by ftrokes fomewhat digreffive.
The force of a defcription, it is true, may
be weakened in a fmall meafure by this
conduct at the time. But the writer, like
an able commander, by extending his
powers at fome times over a larger com-
pafs than neceflity might prefcribe, will
moft fuccefsfully accomplish his ultimate
purpofe ; and if a lively impreffion is made
while thefe are yet diffufed, it will become
irrefiftible when they are clofe and con-
centrated. In an eloquent oration, there-
fore, and in the higheft fpecies of poetry,
the diffufion here cenfured in general,
may be judicioufly adapted to promote a
good end. In other branches of the art
in general, particularly in the cafe for-
merly mentioned, it renders, as we have
feen, Compofition enervated.
III. We have now endeavoured to mow
i
at confiderable length, what is implied in
the epithet nervous when viewed as a cha-
R 2 rafter
244 PJrilofofhical and Critical
rafter of Compofition, what faculty takes
cognifance of it, and by what circum-
ftances it is conftituted. Our obfervations-
on thefe fubjecls will enable us more eafily
to comprehend what remains to be treated ;
the caufes that deprive language of its due
force, and the moft proper method of
avoiding, or of correcting this weaknefs.
The caufes that deprive expreffion of
ks juft influence are principally the three
following, i. Improper diffufion of any
kind, but more particularly the too fre-
quent ufe of compounded epithets. 2. The
unneceflary admiflion of the particles of
fpeech into Compofition, by whofe ufe
its dignity is loft, and its impreflion en-
feebled. 3. When neither of thefe fig-
natures chara&erife a performance, this
defect of ftrength will ftill be confpicuous
when either the fubject in general, or any
particular branch of it is difproportioned-
to the ability of the writer*
i . We have made ufe of the term dif-
fufion frequently m this fection, when the
connection in which it flood muft have
rendered it fuffrciently intelligible. We
muft
Obfervations on Compofitlon. 245
here, however, explain it a little
more minutely. We commonly obferve,
that the language adopted by a rich ima-
gination is florid, copious, and luxuriant.
With the epithet copious we aflgciate no
idea of enervated diction; but on the con-
trary, apply it to a work in which every
fucceflive object is prefented before the
mind in its complete proportions ; and
deem it juftly, when eminently predo-
minant, to be the moft perfect character
of Compofition *. We call this the moft
perfect character of the art, becaufe it is
not, like any of thofe we have yet ex-
amined, required to predominate only or
principally in certain fpecies, but extends
univerfally to all. A copious writer, in
whatever department of literature his abili-
ties are exerted, is one who does juftice to
every branch of his fubject; and by fay-
ing all that can be advanced on it with
propriety, fills at the fame time the ear
Er» Af£i? xxTjfu -Grxa-Wt TJ TI?
?
9&f' AIONT2.
AAIKAP. vf^ SyvfitT. Ovo,u. c. 28.
R with
246 Philofophical and Critical
with the harmony of his periods, and
gives the mind a fatisfadlory view of the
theme of which he treats *.
A-kin
*. The beft critics, both ancient and modern, con-
cur in recommending the ufe of this numerous dic-
tion, particularly to young perfons, as much more eligi-
ble than the oppofite character, even though verging,
on the extreme of verbofity. The reply of the poet
Accius to Pacuvius, who allows his verfification to be
numerous and lofty, but cenfured it at the fame time
as defective in elegance, fets this remark in a very,
ftriking light. — " Ita eft, inquit Accius, uti dicis,
iieque id fane me poenitet, meliora enim fore quae
deinceps fcribam. Nam quod in pomis eft, itidern
efie aiunt in ingeniis, quas dura & acerba nafcuntur,
poft fiunt mitia & jucunda : fed quae gignuntur ftadm
vieta & mollia atque in pfincipio funt uvida, noil
matura mox fiunt fed putria. Relinquendum igitur
vifum eft in ingenio quod dies atque setas mitificet."
Aulus Gell. lib. riii. cap. 2. Quintilian is very ex-
plicit on this fubjeft. " Facile remedium eft uber-
tatis, fterilia nullo modo vincuntur. Ilia mihi in
pueris natura nimium fpei dabit in qua ingenium,
judicio prefumitur.. Materiam efle primam volo vel
abundantlorem atque ultra quam oportet fufam. Multum
inde dement anni, &c." Inftit. lib. ii. c. 4. The
younger Piiny judges in the fame manner of this
character. " Dele6lare, perfuadere, copiam dicendi
fpatiumque defiderant ; relinquere vero aculeum in
audientium animis is demum poteft, qui non pungit
fed infigit. Non enim amputata oratio & abfcifla,
fed lala, & magnifi^ & excelfa tonat, fulgurat omnia
denique
Obfervations on Compofition. 247
A-kin to this excellence, however, when
fubfifting in perfection, is that injudicious
diffufion which we have mentioned as in-
compatible with vigorous execution *. It
will
denique pcrturbat ac mifcet." Epift. lib. i. cpift. xx.
A celebrated modern critic confiders this fubject very
juftly. His words deferve attention. u Abfterreo
{fays he) juventutem a brevitate, cujus imitatio facil-
lime setatem hanc clecipit. Juveniii ille brevitatis
ftudio, aridus plerumque & exfuccus ftylus evadit,nec
facile ad laudatam tcmperiem veriitur, nifi initio libertas
quadam & luxuries fit quam zetas. paulatim depafcat."
Lipf. Epift.
* Cicero himfelf (as we are informed by Tacitus)
cfcaped not the cenfure of his contemporaries, on ac-
.count of this diiFufion in his diclion. " Satis conftat
nee Ciceroni obtre£latores defuiffe quibus inflatus, &
tumens, nee fatis preffus ; fupra modum exultant &
fuperjluensi & panim Atticui videretur. Legifti utique
& Calvi, & Bruti ad Ciceronem miflas epiftolas ex
quibus facile eft deprehendere Calvum quidem Cice-
roni vifum exfanguem, &c. Rurfumque Ciceronera
a Calvo quidem mala audiviffe tanquam folutum &
enervem, a Bruti autem (ut ipfius verbis utar).tanquara
fraclum atque elumbsm." De Orator. Dialog. Later
ages, however, have done more juftice to this admired
ancient, whofe language (if that of any writer ever
deferved this panygeric) unites the harmony of the
copious^ with the energy of the cvncife in Compofition ;
and may be denominated in words applied by an ele-
gant poet to a noble river, " full without overfaiving?
JDenham. It is fomewhat remarkable, that Tacitus
R 4 himfelf>
248 Philofophical and Critical
will be immediately underftood, by com-
paring thefe characters together, that as
the copious in Compofition is obtained
when the full dimenfions of every object
are difplayed, ib the difFufe or verbofe
takes place in it when in confequence of
an attempt to do more than is neceflary
thefe become difproportioned. As foon as
a writer verges from the point of per-
fection by falling into this error, his die-,
tion lofeth a part of its force, even while
we are yet infenfible of the caufe, or are
not fo much affected as to trace it out
with attention. A river, whofe waters rife
to the higheft level of its bank on either
fide, is a noble and majeftic object upon
which we dwell with admiration, and
whofe force is augmented in proportion as
himfelf, one of the mod concife writers whom anti-s
quity hath produced, recommends an expreflion fome-
what diffufed, in treating ferious fubje&s, to be made
ufe of, particularly in annals. *' Annalium tarda
quaedam eft & iners fcriptura." De Caufis Corrupt.
Eloq. c. 21. By the tarda and iners is here under-
itood, that copious exprefiion which is neceflary to
convey ideas clearly to the mind, when many tranf-
s muft be fuccinclly related.
O&fervations on Compofition. 249
the bounds approach to each other within
which it is confined. But when its banks
are either broken, or overflowed by the
tide, the impetuofity of the current will
be leilened as its range is extended, and
the paffenger will flem or repel it with
more facility. Thus as the ftream is rude
and turbulent when too much confined,
fo when taking too wide a compafs it be-
comes languid and enervated. The appli-
cation of this to the prefent fubject is
obvious : the difficulty lies in preferving
the juft medium.
In order to obtain this point, at leaft as
nearly as poflible, a writer ought to avoid
the epithetical ftyle as it may be termed,
which is formed by the ufe of too many
adjectives in a performance. Thefe, when
introduced at all times as if the fubftan-
tive ought never to ftand by itfelf, inftead
of communicating ftrength to a difcourfe,
render it, on the contrary, infipid and un-
meaning. This is the cafe more particu-
larly when thefe are either general, or are
thrown in to fill up a period, and contain
wfelefs repetitions. When Qaudian intro-
duceth
250 Philofophical and Critical
duceth his poem on the Rape of Profer«»
pine, by faying,
Infcrni raptoris equop, afflataque curru
Sidcra Tenario, caligantefque profundse
Junonis thalamos, audaci promere cantu
Mens congefta jubet.
(words whofe -meaning cannot be ade-*
quately conveyed in a tranflation) the dif-
cerning reader will be fenfible, that the
fenfe of this pafTage is hurt by redundant
epithets, which enfeeble the exprefiion
while they render it inflated *. In the
field
* The effect of this ftyle will be more fully com-
prehended when it is compared either with an expref-
fion divefted of epithet, or with one difiinguifhed.
on'y by fuch as have propriety. "We (hail here pro-
duce nn example of each. Atys recovering from the
frenzy in which he had emafcuiated himfelf, and re-
jecting on bis condition exclaims with great emotion.
Egone
Patria, bonis, amicis, genitoribus abero?
Ahero foro, paleftra, ftudio, gymnafiis ?
Mife;, ah mifer ! Quaerendum eft etiam atque etiara
animc
Quod enim genus ? Figura eft ? Ego numquid abierim ?
Ego MulierP
Jam, jam dolet quod egi, jam, jam quoque pcenitet.
Catul.
Here the reader will obferve, that the poet attempt*
not
Obftrvations on Compcjition. 25 i
field of fofter defer iption, adjectives ap-
plied promifcuoufly in this manner to fill
up a vacuity, as it would feem, conftitute
not to heighten the diftrefs of the fcene by employing
apy epithet. Ideas are fuppofed to have poured too
faft upon the mind to admit the heightening that
arifeth from this circumftance. Atys fpeaks the lan-r
guage of nature, when he draws a comparifon betwixt
his paft and prefent ftate in a few fimple words, any of
which would be weakened by the mod forcible epithet
that could be applied to it. — An inftance of the laft
kind we fhall take from Claudian himfelf, who, in
the following beautiful lines, propofeth his fubjecl:
with admirable fimplicity, and makes not ufe of one
epithet which could, with propriety, be altered or
omitted.
Ssepe mihi dubiam traxit fententia mentem
Curarent fuperi terras, an nullus inefiet
Re£tor, & incerto fluerent mortalia cafu.
IS am cum difpofiti quaefiflem fcedera mundi,
Pnefcriptofque maris fines, annique meatus,
Et lucis, noc~lifque vices, — tune omnia rebar
Confilio firmata Dei.
Qtn variam Phceben alieno jufferit igne
Comp'eri, folemque fuo, &c. In Rufin. lib. i. ab init;
This might well pafs as the language of the moft ac-
compliflied author of the age of Auguftus. The
whole paffage breathes the fame fpirit. We cannot
tranfcribe it here. It is a happy fpecimen of the
manner in which a philofophical fubjecl: ought to be
prqpofed, in a ftyle preferving the juft medium
betwixt bombaft, and meannefs ; redundance, and
defed.
the
2 $2 Phhofophlcal and Critical
the flowery, or puerile in Compofition,
which indicates always either a weak, or
an immature understanding ; and which
nothing but youth and inexperience ren-
ders at any time excufable.
While we here condemn a ftyle that is
fromifcuoujly epithetical, it ought not to
be imagined, that this circumftance ought
to be wholly excluded from any fpecies of
Compofition whatever; or even to be at
all times fparingly introduced. A' writer
in profe, can never be faid to make ufe of
too many adjectives in his work as long
as thefe are not redundant, i. e. expreflive
of the fame thing ; but while each con-
veys a diftincl: idea to the mind, and fuch
as hath fignificance. In poetry, epithets
can never weaken the diction of the writer
•while thefe are picturefque. But even in
this cafe they fatigue the reader, by recur-
ring upon him too often, and the glare of
imagery is as apt to hurt a fufceptible
mind, as the blaze of funmine is to dazzle
the eye. A man of genius will fucceed
beft in rendering his work beautiful in the
proper fenfe of that epithet, who knows
at
Obfervations on Compofition. 253
at what time it is fit to reflrain the luxu-
riance of his imagination ; fmce excellence
is conftituted as much by the judicious dif-
•pofition of colours^ as by their original
invention.
Compounded epithets are commonly
made ufe of to place the original to which
they are applied, in a point of view as
ftriking and pidurefque as it can pombly
admit. For this purpofe, the internal
feelings of the heart, and abftracted ideas
of the underftanding, are illuftrated by the
union of two fenfible objeds to which we
clifcover thefe to have fome ilriking refem-
blancc ; and their originals are faid to be
imperfonated) when rendered by an happy
application of this kind cognifable by the
ienfes, and pleafmg to the imagination
which is thus powerfully impreffed. Thus
fire-eyed anger, finooth-tongued flattery,
pale-lip'd forrow, rofy-featured eafe, be-
come much more fignificant by the com-
bined epithets applied to them here, than
by any fingle adjective of whatever im-
port. Complexion, grace, attitude, and
thofe circumftances in general that imprefs
the
254 Philosophical and Critical
the organs of fenfe, enter into the idea here
placed before us, and render it at the fame
time lively and permanent; This figure*
it mull be acknowledged, hath been ufed
much more frequently, and perhaps with
greater fuccefs, by modern, than by an-
cient writers of eminence *. It confti-
tutes,
* The learned reader muft decide on the truth of
this obfervation. Without confirming it, therefore,
here by particular examination, which would far ex-
ceed the bounds we mull prefcribe to ourfelves in
this note, we (hall only obferve, that from the works
of Homer, and Pindar, the capital Greek poets, and
thofe of Virgil, the Roman, whofe writings might
afford examples of this character, we find but few ir\±
fiances of objects rendered pi£lurefque by compounded
epithet, in proportion at leaft to thofe which their
fubjects might have fuggefted. The epithets of this
kind, applied by Homer to his heroes, are by no
means the principal beauties of that immortal work.
Thefe are, in truth, neither very charadteriftical, nor
much diverfified. Hector is commonly diftinguifhed
by the two epithets of KopvOajoAo?, and AvJpo^cvoio?,
i. e. plume-fhaking, and man-killing j UlyfTcs IIoAu-
T^WTTO;, fometimes; and at others, both he and
Achilles are diflinguifhed by the general epithet of
Aio?. Agamemnon is called, with propriety enough,
Eu£ux£«iw&, wide-commanding. Even Achilles him-
felf, is moil commonly denominated IlotWwcv?, f \vift-
footed 3
Qbfirvatwns on Cowpofitfon. 255
tutes, however, when placed 'with pro-
priety > one of the greatefl beauties of
poetry, (to which art it is peculiarly ap-
propriated) and fuch as diftinguifheth ge-
nius in its greatefl: eminence. But when
in confequence of an affectation to attain
this excellence at all times, it is applied
indifcriminately to every object, its ftrength
is impaired by this injudicious ufe of it;
and figures which would have commanded
admiration when contemplated apart, at
proper intervals from each other, efcape
even obfervation by being thus prcfented
in a promifcuous affemblage.
2. As Compofition is thus weakened
by dirTufion and redundance of epithet, fo
footed ; which is often repeated, when the reader
might expert that a much more forcible and pi£tu-
reiqiie phrafe fhould be fubflituted in its room.
There are, however, no doubt, fome epithets wonder-
fully finking and happy in the Iliad. Pindar has
fome of the fame kind, (examples of which cannot be
fele&ed here) but fewer, upon the whole, than it
might be fuppofed that fo great an imagination would
have fupplied. The cafe of Virgil we have already
confidered. It is probable, that the ancient poets in
general, avoided making ufe of compounded epithets,
as inconfiftent with that ftmplicity of expreffion which
they endeavour at all times to preferve.
it
256 Philofophical and Critical
it fuffers in the fame manner by the too
frequent ufe of expletives, and of thofe
monofyllabical particles which are em-
ployed to connect the parts of a fentence
together. The effect of the firft men-
tioned is moft confpicuous in poetry, par-
ticularly when rhyme is adopted. In this
cafe, the words do, will* Jhall, /iave, had,
&c. applied to the correfponding tenfes
of verbs, render a poem like a pedant, at
once fliff and unedifying, weak and af-
fected. Pope at the fame time exempli-
fies this fault, and expofeth the effect of it.
Expletives their feeble aid do join. EfT. on Crit.
But let it be remembered, that this remark
neither extends to dramatic poetry, nor
to any fpecies of Compofition that ap-
proacheth to the loofer ftyle of conver-
fation. In thefe the expletives above-
mentioned have not only propriety, but
fignificance likewife in many cafes ; be-
caufe inftead of being introduced to fill
up a fentence or a line, the whole force of
it often reils upon the emphafis with
which fome of them are pronounced.
When lago fays to Bianca, .in the Moor
of Venice,
Obfervattons on Compo/ition. 2C7
— — Guiltinefs
fpeak, though tongues were out of ufe.
Lodovico to Othello, in the fame play,
when he had killed his wife,
You Jhall clofe prifoner reft.
The king of Denmark to Polonius, IQ
Hamlet,
fomething's in his foulj
O'er which his melancholy fits in brood,
And I do doubt the hatch and the difclofe
Will be fome danger.
In thefe, and in many other examples of
the fame kind, an emphaiis is laid on the
expletive J/ja//y W//, do* which thus give
energy to difcourfe, inftead of lejfening it»
as In the firft inftance.
Profe Compofition is weakened by no-
thing more effectually, than by the incon-
fiderate ufe of little particles, and mono-
fyllables. Thefe are like tools, which,
when applied however apparently diminu-
tive to a folid body, deftroy its confiftence,
and break it into fragments. The little
copulative AND in particular, when too
frequently repeated, tends greatly to ener-
vate a fentiment, and to deftroy the har^
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258 Phtkfophieal and Critical
mony of a period. On this account, the
greateft mailers of Compofition frequently
drop it altogether, when the fenfe is not
injured by the omiflion ^ judging that the
words expreffive of certain ideas, when
placed together in one view, have much
more force without the repetition of this
copulating particle, than with it. — " Non
omnes (lays- the Roman orator) eos con-
temnunt de quibus male exiftimant. Nam
quos improbos, maledicos, fraudulentos
putant, &c. eos haud contemnunt quidem,-
fed de iis male exiftimant." Cicer. De
Offic. The reader will obfecve, that the
whole fentence is much more expreffive
when the terms improbos, &c. fland alone,
than if the particle et had been applied
to each of them, which, though an addi-
.tion feemingly infignificant, would have
impaired its ftrength as well as har-
mony *. — We avoid enlarging on this
head,
* In the fame manner our author, fpeaking a little
after of the objects that give agreeable and painful
fenfatione, fays, " Voluptates, blandiflimae Dominie,
f«pe iriajores partes anirni a virtute detorquent> & Do-
Observations on Compofition. 259
head, that our remarks may not be deemed
too minute. Such as have been made, the
fubjecl: appears not only to fuggeft as na->
tural, but to demand as neceffary.
3. We proceed, therefore, to obferve, iri
the laft place, that the caufe moft univer-
lally productive of an enfeebled exprefiion,
is a difproportion of the writer's abilities^
lorum cum admoventur faces, prseter modum plerique
exterrentur. — Vita, Mors, Divitise, Paupertas, omnes
homines vehementiflime permovent." Id. ibid. Here
the fentiment is much more nervoufly exprefled with-
out the repetition of the copulative et adjected to the
words vita^ &c. than with this addition. The beft
claffical writers avoid likewife at fome times making
ufe of the particle aut (or) in the comparifori of things
with each other. The repetition of the relative re-
ferring to a former perfon, renders a fentence incom-
parably more elegant and forcible. Thus Cicero,
again, fpeaking of juftice iri its moft enlarged accept-
ation, tells us. — " Nemo enim juftus efie poteft qui
mortem, qui dolorem, qui exilium, qui egeftatcm
timet." Id. ibid. This manner of reprefenting the
matter has a much greater efficacy, than if our author
had faid, as an inferior writer would have done, *' aut
dolorem, aut exilium," &c. The reader thrown into
tbis track of obfervation, may extend it to many more
inftahces than can be enumerated here, particularly in
the English language, which abounds with mono-
fyllables.
S 2 either
2.6 o Philofophtcal and Critical
either to his fubject in general, or to
particular branch of it.
When a theme in general demands more-
vigorous execution than that to which itfr
author is adequate, the defect of ftrength
is as confpicuous to a difcerning eye, as
the difference is to all betwixt the man
who fupports a confiderable weight with—
out difficulty, and him who heaves it from
the earth with trepidation, totters in his
gait every moment, and ftaggers with re-
laxed finews, to the place at which it is
to be depofited. The parts of a fubject,
when this is the cafe, commonly want that
juft coherence which conftitutes a whole
proportioned and confiftent : the enlarge-
ments are either foreign or trifling; and"
thofe branches which are of leaft utility,
and require the eafieft exertion, lead the
reader to form an expectation both from
the author's promife, and from his execu-
tion, which, when brought to the trial, he
is unable to gratify.
But as the defect of intellectual energy
is thus rendered perfectly- confpicuous
Ohfsrvaftons on Compofition. 261
when a theme is too great or compre-
henfive for the mind that contemplates it,
ifo it often happens, that when no fuch
defeat takes place in general, yet a writer
will difappomt ^expectation, not only in
the delineation of a particular part, or in
the ufe of a difproportioned illuftration,
but even in his manner of treating a cer-
tain branch (perhaps an- important one)
of his fubje£t, demanding no greater pro-
portion of mental ability than others to
which he hath been found adequate. The
iirft mentioned of thefe, a good-natured
reader will readily excufe. It is .the cha-
;racl:eriftic of every performance, andarifeth
from the imperfection of human nature.
Blemifhes of this kind are, perhaps, even
sieceflfary to recommend the beauties of a
performance, as the fhades of a picture
fet off its graces to advantage. We may
.at leaft obferve, that a perfect 'work (could
dfuch a one be produced) would prefent a
very uninterefling, if not a difagreeable
objecl: to that part of mankind, whofe jen-
joyment, if traced to its fource in the -pe-
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262 Philofofhicai and Critical
rufal of a performance, arifeth principally
from the gratification of malevolence.
With regard to the other inftance of
difproportioned vigour, that which appears
in an author's way of treating a particular
queftion, or branch of his difcourfe, in
which he exerts not the fame ftrength*
either of fentiment or expreffion, that he
difplays upon every other topic ; though
it is a weaknefs much lefs excufable than
the former, efpecially when arifing from
want of attention ; yet moft commonly it
is only an indication that the mind of the
writer is fitted to think with more perfpi-
cacity, and to exprefs its ideas with greater
energy, upon fome topics than upon others,
which in the difcuflion of a comprehen-
five plan will unavoidably fall out. That
the operation of both cafes may be pre-
vented as much as poffible, a man ought
to reflect in the firft cafe, that in beftow-
ing lefs attention on one part of his fub-
ject than on another, he does injuftice to
his reader, whofe judgment of its import-
ance may be very different from his own ;
in the laft he will moft fuccefsfully
redify
Qbfer "uations on Compqfition. 263
rectify this inaptitude, by fupplying in
-attention what he may \vant in natural
propenfity, and his thoughts, like a river
diverted into an artificial bed, though di-
verged at firft with difficulty from their
native direction, will at laft run freely in
the channel that is opened to receive
-them.
•IV. From the preceding obfervations on
nervous Compofition, as relating to fen-
timent, expreflion, and illuftration ; on the
means that conftitute this character of the
art, and on the caufes that deprive lan-
guage of its energy, from thefe one truth
will obvioufly appear to refult; — that the
firft thing neceflary to produce vigorous
execution, is a perfect acquaintance with
the fubject of which we treat. There are,
it is true, performances in whofe compo-
fition. there is apparently great ftrength,
though the authors are found upon clofer
-examination to have taken very defective
views of their fubjects. But when this is
the cafe, it is ufually the words or founds,
-not the fenfe imparted in thefe, that deem
,to have emphafis. Language .may, no
S 4 doubt,
264 Phikfophlcal and Critical
doubt, be fwelled out to fuch an expreffion
when the thought is wholly fuperficial;
and, indeed, when the mind is confcious of
a defeat in fentiment, it naturally attempts
to compenfate this lofs by far-fetched or-
naments, and ftrenuous afiertion. Men of
imagination, in whom the faculty of un-.
derftanding is either originally weak, or
who have formed a very inadequate efli-.
mate of their fubjec~t, generally fall into
the declamatory ftyle, which though incon-
fiftent with nervous Compofition in reality \
admits it greatly in appearance* Thofe
on the other hand, whofe view of their
theme is equally incomplete, but who
either avoid declamation, or cannot adopt
it, bewilder themfelves and their readers
in the labyrinth of obfcurity, and lofe fight
of truth in the purfuit of dijlinftion. If it
is true (as we have endeavoured to evince
through the whole of this fection), that
the character here examined can only be
faid to obtain when the thought and the
diction fupport and coalefce with each
other, we can never afcribe it to any pro-
duction in which the former is fuperficial.
The
Obfervations on Compofition. 265
The declamatory* and the nervous there^
fore, in the ftrid fenfe of the laft epithet,
are incompatible. The laft-mentioned
writers again, who " blunder about a
meaning" which they cannot make out,
far from deferving that the epithet nervous
fhould be applied to their compofition,
diftinguifh it properly by no character but
that of obfcurity. Energy of expreffion
is a fecondary quality of the art here ex-
amined, derived from ftrength of fenti-
nxent, and always accompanying it. It is
only when an author thoroughly compre-
hends the feries of thoughts paffing fuc-
ceffively before him, that he will convey
thefe with that mafculine force which an
idea ftrongly conceived will infufe, as it
were, into his diction. Otherwife it may
be tumid, ornamented, or diffufe ; but
never mafterly and invigorated.
Cui lift a pc tenter erit res,
Nee facundia deferet hunc, neque lucidus ordo. HoR.
2. Some critics are of opinion, that the
ftyle of Compofition in order to be deno-
minated nervous, ought to be fo concife
clofe (if we may thus exprefs it) as to
contain
266 Phhofophical and Critical
contain juft the necefTary words that are
expreffive of certain ideas, and no more.
Such appears to be the meaning affixed to
it by the detractors of Cicero, (mentioned
in the celebrated Dialogue on the Corrup-
tion of Eloquence above referred to,
when they accufe him of being defective
in the preffus and atticus *, as they deno-
minate it. This manner is no doubt
highly eligible when obtained in perfec-
tion. There are, however, two capital
errors into which an author may be led by
* The ftyle here cbarafterifed is probably termed
utticus from the peculiar character of Demoilhenical
eloquence, which is diftinguifbed by an exprejlion at
the fame time remarkably concife, and happily appro-
priated. O & AHMOZ0ENIK.O2 AOFOS
TTI <>pa<re», xixpajwfvof TCI? y,an, xa»
«£xo<rp,t)|tA£^o?, »cai j^pw^xtvo? TOL^H rrj x
xa» (jura, TV (TfM.v» mi/ ^a/ui» f^wv xa«
•A*ra SiKAfsn xarf^^Tai. AIONT2. APXAIHN
KPI i. Cicero looked upon the language of Dempf-
thenes as fo remarkably energetical, that he charac-
terifeth it by the fingle, but nervous epithet VIM.
*' Suavitatem Ifocrates, fubtilitatem Lyfias, acumen
•Hyperides, fonitum ^ifchines, VIM Demofthenes ha-
.buit." I)e Orat. lib. iii.
attempt-
Obfervations on Compofition. 267
attempting it without proper attention ;—
that of harfonefs) and of obfcurity.
The harfh in Compofition is conftituted
by words that have fignificance thrown
together without harmony. This hap-
pens either when there is no proper af-
finity betwixt the words employed in a
difcourfe, and the fenfe conveyed in it ; or
when the ftruclure of periods is perplexed
and diffonant. Language may be faid to
want a juft correfpondence with the fenti-
ment (iuppoiing this laft te be ftrongly"
conceived) when an attempt to maintain
the harmony that ought to fubfift betwixt
thefe is carried too far; and by leaving
out, as fuperfluous, words that give foft-
nefs and elegance to expreffion, an author
collects together a fet of unmufical phrafes,
by which the ear is (hocked, and the fenfe
injured. We muft not, however, fo far
miftake the meaning of the term Jiar/b,
when applied to language, as to confound
it with a rough, or even rude and obfolete
phrafeology. The fenfe, particularly in a
well-wrought defcription, may often re-
fluire rough founds to be aflembled, which
a juft
265 Philofophical and Critical
a juft difpofition will render harmonious *„
Even rude and obfolete expreffion in the
fame
* Every reader knows, that an aifemblage of this
kind conftitutes one of the principal beauties of poetic
cxprdfion.
Una eurufque, notufque ruunt, xrreberquc procellis
Africus -
and again,
In fegetem veluli cum flam ma furentibus auflris
Incidit, & rapidus montano fiumine torrens
Sternit agros, &c.
"Thefe defcriptions, and many others of the fame kind,
fur from being harfh or ungrateful, are, on the, con-
trary, remarkably harmonious. The language of
Spenfer in the fame manner, and that of Taflb,
though rendered obfolete.'m fome meafure by time, are
{till admired as -elegant and melodious. Shall I be
pardoned by the reader for giving an example of barjb
CompoGtion from the work of a modern author,
vrhofe writings in general are the ftandards of harmo-
nious expreiTion, as well as of phiiofophical fenti-
.tnent? — Homer, defcribing the preparations for the
funeral of Patroclus, tells us, that the party fent at a
Pittance to collect wood for the pile, led their mules
with difEculty over broken rocks, and precipices.
The line
Kxr&rroc, tr
haih great poetic beauty, but the tranflation, in con-
fequence of too clofe an imitation of it, is unmuGcal,
and even grating to the ear.
O'er hills, o'er dales, o'er crags, o'er rocks, they go.
There is fomething ftiff and affected in this line, to
whkk
Obferv at torts on Compofition. 269
fame manner we may cenfure as the effect
of defective education, or may confider as
the ftyle of an uninformed age ; but in
thefe likewife, there may be rufticity with-
out that difcordahce* to which laft, juft ob-
fervation, of whatever kind, can have no
affinity.
Harfh diction, oecafioned thus at fome
times by the discordance of words to the
fenfe conveyed in thefe, is, however, mod
commonly the effe<St of ill-conftruded pe-
riods. We pronounce expreflion to hare
this difagreeable peculiarity, when the
members of a fentence are broken and dif-
jointed, inftead of forming a confiftent
body; when there is a vifible constraint
in the choice, as well as difpofition of
words, and when the conclufion of the
period is ungratefully abrupt. Some of
which the original by no means correfponds. Again,
Jumping high o'er the (hrubs of the rough mound.
Rattle the clattering cars, and the fliockt axles bound.
The firft of thefe lines is pichirefque, but the laft is
particularly harfh, and the defcripticn is overwrought
in it. A writer fond of conceit might fay here, that
the ear of the reader is as much flncked by this collec-
tion of founds, as the poet reprefents the axles of the
chariot to have been.
thefe
270 Philofophical and Critical
thefe circumftances, it is true, may cha-
racterife verbofe, as well as concife Com-
pofition. A long-winded fentence may
be broken, and rendered diflbnant more
readily than a fhort one, which, confifting
of fewer parts, may be regulated, one may
fay, with greater facility. But this is the
cafe only when ftyle, though upon the
whole deferving the character of concife*
remote as it muft be from the extreme of
improper diffufion, is equally fo from that
of deficiency. It is when a clofe and con-
tracted manner is ftudied, that the words,
like the jagged points of a rock, uncon-
nected with each other, give the whole
Compofition this moil unfavourable afpect.
That harmnefs in a more particular man-
ner which is occafioned by the abrupt
conclufion of periods, is always originally
the confequence of ftudying brevity too
univerfally, and depriving language of its
proper ornaments. — The other error into
which the affectation of too concife an
expreffion may lead an author, that of
obfcurity^ we have confidered fo fully in
other parts of this work, as to fuperfede
the
Obfervations on Compojitlon. 271
the ufe of an enlargement here *. In
order to avoid both the faults we have
thus pointed out, as arifmg from affected
brevity, a writer ought to weigh the fen-
timents or arguments fuggefted to him
together, fo as to judge of their compa-
rative energy, and of the words adapted
with greateft propriety to each. He who-
defires to form himfelf in early life to a
nervous ftyle of Compofition, will moft
probably obtain his purpofe by taking- a
thought that hath remarkable energy from
fome work in which this character pre-
dominates ; and dropping the words of
his original, by endeavouring to exprefs
it in his own. When he compares his
own attempt with the pattern imitated, he
will judge not only of its general con--
formity to the ftandard, but of the caufe
from which a difproportion proceeds. As
fbon as this is detected, it may be era-
dicated with facility, not in the fingle in-
ftance alone, but in all cafes without ex-
ception, where a fimilar ftrain of Com-
* Sec fe£t ii. and fe&. iii. Sec. of this volume.
pofition
Philofophical and Critical
pofition is required to prevail. The ob>*
fervation of this rule tends no doubt td
improve, when properly applied, every
chara&er of the art. Yet it is peculiarly
adapted to that which we have confidered
in this fection, becaufe a nervous manner
is of all others the moft univerfally af-
fected ; and at the fame time in confe-
quence of the faults allied to it, the moft
difficult to be obtained.
3. The laft method we fhall mention
of giving this mafterly character to Com-
pofition, is that of carrying on a well-
conducted climax in any branch of it what-
ever. By a climax i whether in the lan-
guage or fentiment of a performance, we
underftand a gradual progreflion from the
lefs to the more animated, as the objects
which the mind contemplates grow in
their importance, until the faculty that
fcanned a few general principles with in-
difference, fixes with clofe attention on the
forcible and interefting. As every fubject
ought to be treated in this manner, that
it may make a fuitable impreflion on the
power to which it is addrefled, a fimilar
pro*
Qbfervatiom on Compofition. 273
jprocedure in concluding the members of
a fentence to its conclufion muft naturally
be productive of a correfponding effect.
This conduct is principally requifite when
the motives ufed to enforce any propo-
fition are placed before the mind in one
comprehend ve fummary; as it is here
neceifary to concentrate their whole force
in one pointy whofe energy may be thus
rendered irrefiftibly penetrating. The ef-
fect of fuch conduct will be felt moft
powerfully by trying an example. — .
" Idemque (fays the Roman orator) cum
coelum, terras, maria, remmque omnium
naturam perfpexerit, eaque unde generata
quo recurrant, quando, quomodo obitura,
quid in iis mortale & caducum, quid divi-
num seternumque fit viderit. Ipjumque ea
moderantem & regentem psene prehen-
dznt-yfejeque non unis circumdatum maeni-
bus, popularem alicujus definiti loci ; fed
chem totius mundi quafi umus urbis agno-
verit: — in hac magnificentia rerum\ atque
in hoc confpeSlu & cognitione natura ; —
DII immortales! — Quam ipfe fe nofcet !"
De Legib. lib. i. — The gradation here
VOL. II. T from
PJiilofofhical and
from lefs to more interefting circumftancesr
and th<* corresponding emphafis commu-
nicated to the diction as the author pro-
ceeds, can efcape the obfervatiort of no
reader who is able to comprehend an ori-
ginal which, any translation muft greatly
injure.
Thus we have attempted to1 render the
reader acquainted with the proper mean-
ing and fphere of this diftinguiShed cha-
racter of Composition, with the caufes that
produce, with the faults allied to, and with,
the means of obtaining it. We fhall con-
clude with obferving, as the refult of all,—
that however- eminent any characteristic
of the art may be, a writer of good fenfe
will take care never to give fuch flrenuous
and clofe attention to that one, as to over-
look others of considerable, perhaps of
eq«al importance. In the puriuit, there-
fore, of Jlrengthy he will" be careful to
prefer ve harmony of di&ion. Thefe, as we
have feen in many inftances, are perfectly
compatible. The excluSion of the laft from.
Compofition can be compenfated by the
attainment of no excellence whatever.
SEC-
Obfervations en Compofition. 275
SECTION
Of correct Compofition*
O branch of the various and compre-
henfive fubjecT: of the prefent work
opens to us a more exteniive field of ob-
iervation, tfhan that with which we here
propofe to fum up our remarks on the
principal characters of the ftyle of Com-
pofition. Every writer defires to render
his performance correct ; and his attention
to this circumftance is proportioned to the
follicitude with which he wifhes to obtain
tmallayed approbation. The purpofe to
which the critical art hath been principally
fubfervient in all ages, is that of correct-
ing the faults, of pointing out the defects,
and of retrenching the fuperfluities of in-
accurate Compofition ; by which means,
when un warped by paffion or prejudice
to felfifli gratification, it hath contributed
eminently to reform the manners, and
promote the happinefs of mankind. The
truth of this obfervation we mall illuftrate
at greater length, when we come to trace
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Philfifopliical and Critical
the connection- of both arts with each otherT
and to fho\V the tendency of each.
When we con£der the moft correct per-
formance in this manner, as that in which-
the near eft approach is made to perfection,
the animadverfions of fome men muft ap-
pear to be ill-founded, who affirm, that
too much attention may be "bcftowed on
this circum-ftance ; that it is often unfa-
vourable to the exertions of genius; and
that exquifite beauty y though frequently
characterifmg works whofe compoiition is
unequal^ yet is feldom to be met with in
thofe more chaftifed productions, where
'the reader finds nothing to cenfure. We
{hall here begin with laying before the
reader the reafons that are urged on both
fides of this queftion, we fhall then en-
deavour to mow what degree of attention-
this character of the art necefiarily claims,
and in what cafes an author ought perhaps
to relax in it ; — fome obiervations (as
ufual) on the moft proper methods of ren-
dering Compofition correct, will conclude
the feel ion..
•Vbfervafions on Compofition. 277
I. It is almoft needlefs to obierve here,
that the term correff, when applied to this
art, fuggefts a negative rather than pofitive
defcription of any kind. It implies, in-
deed, the abfence of faults, but not the
predominance of dirlinguilhing excellence.
At the fame time this epithet -contains
nothing in its meaning, either exclufive
of rfuch excellence, or incompatible with
it. A work eminently characterifed by
every fpecies of beauty, may be likewife
correct. But it is equally true, that a per-
formance in which we find little to cen-
fure will always deferve thi-s character,
though its excellence may be at tnoft but
fecondary.
It deferves more particular notice, that
•this phrafe, when applied to the various
parts, or members of Compofition (as thefe
may be denominated), hath a more deter-
minate fignification than when viewed
with relation to the art in general, and
'fuch as is pofitive and direct. Thus by a
feries of corrected fentiment, we underftand
thoughts that rife naturally out of a fub-
ject ronveying diftinct ideas to the. mind;
7 3 and
278 Philofophical and Critical
and placed in fuch exad; difpofition, as
that the fenfe muft be injured by altering
their arrangement. By a correct image in
the fame manner, we mean one that is
appropriated to its original pattern, whofe
parts correfpond exactly to thofe of this
object; to which a retrenchment would
give defect, and an addition fuperfluity.
Correct diction is that which being both
grammatically accurate, and diftinguifhed
by propriety, obtains at once the appro^
bation of the lefs intelligent, and efcapes
the cenfure of the critic.
Thefe remarks on correft Compofition,
lead us naturally to take notice of another
circumftance by which it is difcriminated
from thofe which have formerly been
enumerated. It is, that the prefent cha-^
racter can be applied more properly than
any other to one member or ingredient
of the art, though wholly excluded from
the reft. We have already feen, that the
fublime, and the nervous in particular,
never take place unlefs when there is a
Concurrence of ftrong or exalted fentiment,
\vith vigorous, or elevated expreffion,
This
Observations en Compofitkn. 279
This holds true likewife of the other cri-
teria we have examined, which commu-
nicate a certain colour^ :as it may be called,
or peculiarity to language. But no fuch
combination is jndiipenfably requisite to
conftitute the prefent character, which may
be even perfect in its kind, though wholly
confined to one object. Thus it will be
acknowledged, that the fentimental part
of a performance may be correct while
She diction is inaccurate; this laft chaftifed
again when the former is defective; and
(in timage may be fitted to its original with
flifficient accuracy, when both the others
4ie open to cenfure. This-circumftance ,it
is, that renders Composition perfectly
chaftifed, fo rare and difficult an attain-
ment. Thought and expreffion forming
here no neceffary combination, as in the
former inftances *, cannot be made equally
.correct without the clofeft attention .tQ
both. Yet a want of either, .far from being
of /mall confequence, is a capital defect.
Frqm the view we have here exhibited
-of the prefent fubject, we may, without
* See fecl» iv. and fe£l. v. pall".
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280 Philofophical and Critical
difficulty, account for that defire
hath obtained among authors in every
civilized {late of fociety, to diftinguifh
their performances by the prevalence of
this criteria in its utmoft extent ; as being
fenfible, that though the term correct may
be applied without impropriety to one in-
ingredient of Composition, exclufively of
others ; yet that work comes neareft to
perfection, in which its influence is moft
univerfal.
The reafons, therefore, that are urged
for rendering Compofition, in the full
meaning of the word, as correct as poflible,
are fo obvious and ftriking, as to require
no particular enumeration ; and far lefs
any long enlargement. It is by means of
this character alone that a work, in whofe
conduct there may be very confiderable
ingenuity, affords the mind a rational en-
tertainment, inftead of being laid afide as
containing the ebullitions of extravagant
imagination, reduced into no form, and
exciting the difguft of a fenfible reader,
by the frequent violation of decorum and
of truth. It is (as we have already feen)
the
Obf equations on Composition. 281
the peculiar province of underftanding to
beftow this laft heightening on a produc-
tion *, the maturity, as well as compre-
henfion of which power, is indicated in
proportion as this chaftifed manner pre-
vails in one branch of the art, or takes
place equally in all. There are, indeed,
certain deviations from propriety rendered
excufable by various circumftances, as the
age in which an author wrote, his time of
life (particularly if pofTefled of extenfive
imagination), the nature of his theme, as
demanding materials greatly diverfified;
and, finally, the imperfection of the hu-
man mind, extending neceflfarily to its
production of what 'kind foever. This laft
caufe muft be allowed by all to have uni-
verfal influence ; and thofe who have leaft
of it themfelves, are commonly readieft to
confider it as a plea for the greateft num-
ber of defects.
Thefe caufes, however, operate only
within certain fpheres, and there are boun-
daries (if we may thus exprefs it) fet to
• See vol. I, fed. ii.
their
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their dominion, beyond which we permit
tt not, at any time, to be extended. Thus
a writer, whom we know to have lived in
a barbarous xge, will be readily excused
on this account for falling into a rude and
ill-adapted phraieology. But fhould this
be adduced as a plea for that obfcurity
which arifeth from perplexed conftrudtion,
or the fimplicity that is violated by inflated
defcription, a fenfible critic would reply,
that thefe are faults derived, not from the
manner of an age, however uncultivated,
but from a defed: of the author's under-
ftandiag. This, he will fay, mufl have fug-
gefled to him if at all adequate to any fphere
of Compofition, that perfpicuity requires
the members of a fentence to correfpond
with each other; and that the fimplicity of
language is violated, when it is fwelled
out with epithets which injure the fenfe,
inftead of adding to its fignificance. The
florid, the luxuriant, the digreffive, and
even the flowery (of all others the leaft
agreeable manner), are likewife excufed as
foon as we know the youth of the author ;
and are contemplated as the firft crop of
.a young
Obftrvations 'on Compofition. 283
a young tree, whofe bloflbms, though not
hardening into confiftence at that time,
yet promife a rich crop of fruit when the
plant hath arrived at maturity. But as we
are induced to overlook the prefent in this
inftance, from our expectation of the fu«
ture, the plea fo fuccefsfully employed in
the cafes above-mentioned, would be ad-
duced to no purpofe in favour of a frigid,
trifling, or infipid production, which af-
fording neither immediate gratification,
nor a profpect of future emolument, would
be rejected as wholly unworthy our atten-
tion. Finally, when we difcover great
mattery and precifion to take place in the
general conduct of a work (efpecially
when confiding of very complicated parts),
the imperfection of human nature will
lead the more difcerning part of mankind
not only to excufe great inequalities in .an
author's Compofition, but even to confider
the lejs as compenfated fully by the more
material, when the former is uniformly de-
fective and inadequate. But this plea can
never be admitted, unlefs when there is a
greater proportion of excellence than of
defeft,
2$4 Philofophical and Critical
defect, upon the whole, in a performance.
It would otherwife be preferred to no
other purpofe, than that of exciting indig-
nation.
Correct Competition, therefore, as it
renders at all times that work the moft
valuable of which it is moft univerfally
•characteriftical ; fo within certain limits no
atonement can be made for its deficiency.
Thofe, however, who appear to have ex-
amined this matter with clofe attention
are of opinion, that, excellent as it is, the
•defire of obtaining this character in per-
fection may be carried fo far as to produce
bad confequences, and fuch as are detri-
mental in particular to authors of the moil
•diftinguifhed eminence *. Thefe reprefent
this taik of correcting every inaccuracy,
not only as painfully minute, and dif-
agreeeaWe to a man of genius f, but they
obferve,
* *' Sunt fcriptores (fays the Jearned and elegant
Erafmus) qui femper aliquid addentes, adimentes,
immutantes; & hoc ipfo maxlmt peccantes, quia nibil
ftccart conantur." Chil. i. cent. 3.
t Ovid is very honeft hi making an acknowledg-
ment of this kind*
Seej*
Obfervations on Compofttion.
obferve, likewife, that there is a certain
point beyond which this affectation of
chaftifmg every part to the lad degree of
perfection may injure Compofition, but
ean be of no ufe to it *. They reprefent
it as an affiduity, by which the vigour
and energy of fentiment is drained away,
Ssepc aliquod verbum cupiens mutare, relinquo :
Judicium vires deftituuntque meum.
Stepe piget, (quid enim dubitem tibi vera fateri)
Corrigere, & longi ferre laboris onus :
Scribentemjuvatipfefavor,minuitquelaborem, — Sec.
Ctrrigere at res eft tanto magis ardua, quanto
Magnus Ariftarcho major Homerus erat.
Sic animum lento curarum frigore hedit,
Ut cupidi fl quis fraena retentat equi.—
De Pont. lib. Ep. 9,
This, it mnft be owned, is the language of indolence,.
but it is an indolence of which imaginatisn is the
parent. A heavy author would never talk in this
manner.
* 4t Cum perfeclum abfolutumque fit opus, non
fplendefcit lima, fed atteritur" Plin. Epift. lib. T.
Epift. ii. Dionyfius cenfures Ifocrates for an atten-
tion of this kind. IfOK^atrrt; -sr«v>i^u^»x«Tf^of tfi
Xov n ^XAvjxwTf^o?. Ep^ft h TOV xoo-/xc» pi
&C. Ou w awvtfjxo? Trivotfyw cfe rr.v
TO & ^TOV f£ztcw. Kai
re TUV ov94UiXTW cruvt^fiav, &C. T APXAlliN
ESBTA&
as
286 Phtiofophical and Critical
as it were, and tells us, that a work thus
elaborately purified, is like a body whofe
richeft blood, and moft invigorating juices,
are ftrained off by the phyfician, who
leaves it an heavy, and inanimated car-
cafs *. With regard to the ftyle of Com-
pofition, it is faid to be rendered, by at-
tempting to deprive it of every fuperfluity,
either fo dry and infipid as to be read
with liftlefs inattention f ; or fo fcholaftic
and grammatical as to fhow that elegance
is facrificed to precifion.
But thefe, though errors that ought to
be avoided carefully by thofe who would
be matters of the art, are yet by no means
* " Et ipfa emendatio finem habet. Sunt enim
qui ad omnia fcripta tanquam vitiofa redeant, & quaff
nihil fas fit redhim efle quod primum eft melius exifti-
ment quicquid eft aliud, idque faciunt quoties librum
in manus refumpferint fimiles medicis, etiam Integra
fecantibus. Accidit itaque ut cicatricofa fint, & exfan-
quiat & euro pejora." Quint, lib. x.
f " Non minus non fervat modum, qui infra rem,
quam qui fupra: qui adftri£lius, quam qui efFufius
dicit. Itaque audis frequenter ut illud immodice &
redundanter, ita hoc jejune & infirme. Alius exctffifle
materiam, alius dicitur non implejje. &que uterque, fed
ille imbeciliitati> hie viribus peccat." Plin. Epift. lib. i.
Epift. 20.
the
Qbfervations on Compojitton. 287
the principal faults into which authors of
the firft rank are apt to be led, by making
too much ufe of the fie (as it may be
termed) in order to give the laft polifh to
their pieces. It is faid, with foine truth,
that though in confequence of this practice
a performance becomes, upon the whole,
kfs apt to excite an unpleafmg fenfation
at any time, than when it obtains not;
yet it ceafeth likewife, by this means,, to
excite fo much admiration*. In order,
therefore, to render a work faultlefs, it is
deprived of capital excellencies ; and a ge-
nius which might have gleaned many a
wild, though exquifite beauty, had it been
. * Shall I offend any rational admirer of Pope (fays
a critic well qualified to judge of his fubjeft) by re-
marking that fome juvenile defcriptive poems oF
Milton (TA!legro> 11 Penferofo, and Ode on tha
Nativity) as well as his Latin elegies, are of a ftrain
far more exalted than any the former author can boaft.
Let me add at the fame time, what juftice obliges me
to add, that they, are far more incorreft. For in the,
very Ode before us (that on the Nativity) occur one
or two paflages, that are puerile and affected to a de-
gree riot to be paralleled in the purer , but lefs elevotid
compofitions of Pope. Effay on the Writings and
Genius of Pope, p. 40.
left
288 Philofophical and Critical
left to expatiate on the common of nature^
yet like a bird taken from this field, and
confined within a circumfcribed and fcanty
fpace, it ranges among a few objects, in-
ftead of viewing an exhauftlefs variety,
and finds its wings every moment repelled
by the bars of its dungeon. It is worth
while to enquire what truth there is in this
obfervation, as this will introduce a branch
of our fubjecl: not yet touched upon, how
far the defire of rendering their perform-
ances correct ought to operate on writers
of exalted genius.
This great and extraordinary quality,
conftituted by the union of the fuperior
faculties in vigorous -exertion, is yet, no
doubt, diftinguimed principally by ftrokes
derived from imagination. On this ac-
count it is, that as the native bias of this
power directs it to form elevated, forcible,
picturefque, or beautiful imitations of the
objects that pafs before it, we denominate
the genius of the writer to be fublime,
vigorous, animated, or elegant. The in-
ventive faculty, therefore, in general deter-
mines our application of the word Genius
to
Objervatt'ons on Compofifion. 289
to any mind ; while the character belong-
ing to it is fixed by that modification
which we perceive to take place. From
thefe principles it naturally follows, that
the higheft walk of genius is that in which
imagination makes the greateft and moft
aftoniming exertions. But in what cir-
cumftances are thefe exertions made ? Is it
not neceflary for this purpofe, that the
powder above mentioned mould be per-
mitted to take cognizance of a feries of
objects, at once great and diverfified ; and
that a field, proportioned to this diverfity,
ihould be opened for its range, as they
will thus be obferved to the greateft ad*
vantage ?
That both ought to take place here will
not be difputed. It remains, therefore,
that we enquire by what means the range
of imagination is moft contracted, and the
feweft objects prefented to its cognizance.
Both thefe are confequences of attending
clofely to the circumftance of jlricl pro-
priety in every idea, and of beftowing on
it not the richeft colouring, but fuch as is
VOL. II. U
290 Philofophical and Critical
moft decent and fuitable. We do not
deny that this choice is made by the un-
derftanding, and that whatever receives its-
approbation, will be considered as the
fi^teft and leaft exceptionable. We mean
only to obferve, that in confequence of the
fevere invefligation carried on by this fa-
culty, many objects will be rejected as
unfit, which might have pleafed by being
decorated with certain admirable graces \.
and what thefe obtain by this intervention
in point of accuracy, they lofe in wildnefs,.
variety, and grandeur. This, upon reflec-
tion, will appear not to be an adventitious
but neceffary effect, arifing from the ends-
. which the powers here mentioned propofe
feparately to bring about, fancy attracted
always by beauty^ and judgment directed
by propriety. Thefe ought, no doubt, to-
be generally united in ordinary cafes.
Elegance is improved by regularity ; but
the wild and, luxuriant require it to be
violated. We are pleafed when cultivated
inclofures, laid out with all the improve-
ments of art, terminate with the profpect
of
Obfervations en Compofition. 291
of broken rocks, iinmenfe mountains, or
ftupendous precipices; in the lame manner
as we prefer the irregular grandeur of a
Gothic pile, to the molt perfect plan of
modern architecture, executed with fo
much judgment as to preient few, or no
objects, that require to be rectified. The
protuberances in both are violations of
cor reel dejign. But they are fuch viola-
tions as no man, poflefled of the leaft
perception of beauty, would wifli to re-
move. 1 here is a grandeur in the ap-
pearance of certain objects, which com-
penfates in the eftimation of every beholder
for the defect of regularity. Imagination
dwells upon this circumftance with intenfe
enjoyment ; and reafon Jiands a/ide, as it
were, while the mind is entranced with
its idea, and dafheth not its pleafure by
the thought of difproportion.
Thefe remarks bear a ftrict and obvious
application to the prefent fubject. In the
fphere of philofophy, confidered as of the
moft extenfive import, and in every pro-
vince that is occupied principally by the
U 2 under-
292 Phllofophkal and Critical
underftanding, the firft thing to be con-*
fidered is correctnefs of difpofition. A
writer can only be faid to carry his atten-
tion to an extreme in this point, when he
extends it to minute circumftances ; or
by re-touching every part with unremit-
ting affiduity, deprives his work of vigour
and character. The fame obfervation may
be made on hiftorical Compofition, and
on that of eloquence (as we mall mow
afterwards), when in the fimple proof of
any proportion the orator neither fpeaks
to the imagination, nor toucheth the heart.
But when we confider the more peculiar
department of exalted genius in Compo-
fition, the fublime, and pathetic, it muft
be acknowledged, that not only are the
capital beauties of thefe fuch as imagina-
tion flrikes out at once in the fervor of
abftracted contemplation, but when we
attempt to defcribe the circle within which
me ought to be confined, her moil mining
attractions are no longer perceivable, and
even that character which the clofe fuper-
intendence of judgment renders regular
and
Obfervations on Compofition. 293
and confiftent, becomes at the fame time
languid and uninterefting *,
What
* The chara&er of Cato, in the celebrated tragedy
of that name, affords a pregnant example to the pre-
fent purpofe. That this character is juft, and ren-
dered confiftent by the moft judicious conduct, will
admit of as little difpute as that the HamJet of t>hake»-
fpeare is frequently irregular and offenfive. The for-
mer (which Voltaire affirms to be the greateft character
that ever was brought upon any (bge, Lettr. fur le
Traged.) is uniformly great, and " nothing is uttered
<{ by Cato (as a contemporary critic juftly obferves)
" but what is worthy of the beft of men " -Guard.
Numb. 33. Hamlet, on the contrary, fcruplesto kill
the king of Denmark at his prayers Idl he fliould
go to heaven, but propofeth to take him in the com-
minion of fome deed, which may make his foul " as
damn'd and black as hell whereto it goes.'' Cato
utters no fentiment but fuch as reafon approves, and
is confiftent with the dignity of his rank and character.
Hamlet, giving a loofe to the wildeft imagination,
alks his friend, " why we .may not trace the duft of
*' Alexander till we £nd it ftopping a bung hole."
Act v. fcene i. Yet with all this irregularity in the
latter, Hamlet is, upon the vhole, not only an ami-
able, but an exalted character. He holds (if we may
thus exprefs it) the keys of the human heurt^ fr.om which
he calls out alternately, love, pity, terror, indignation,
grief, amazement, horror, and anguiih ; while the
Roman, with all his perfections, is cold and uninter?
<fting. We admire his virtues, as we may do thofe
»of a deceafed friend ;— but the uniformity of thefe is
U -t fuch
294 Pkilqfophical and Critical
What (it may here be afked) is the ten*
dency of thefe observations ? Is it the au-
thor's
fuch as that any reader may guefs at the general tenor
of his difcourfe when he knows his fituation. He
cannot, therefore, be much moved by it. Whence
does this itriking difference takes its rife? Without
afcribing it to a difparity of genius betwixt two
writers, who both do honour to their country, we may
obferve, that the author of Cato appeal s to have been,
too intent upon rendering his principal character per-
eft^ to make it deeply interefting. Such a perfonage
is indeed an obje£t of admiration, whofe original is
coldly contemplated at a diftance; but it can never be
fo of love, which is only excited when virtues, weak-
nefies, ioibles, and bJemiihes, are blended fo happily
into one piece as to prelent a mind fimilar in fome
refpech to our own in order to obtain this laft end,
the wild fallies of imagination mnft be often admitted
into the mod dignified ipccies of Compofition, whereas
the defign of the former is incorreft when thefe are not
wholly excluded Shakefpeare, therefore, born with
an unbounded reach of imagination, lived in an age
when he was at liberty to indulge it. Hence his.
FalfinfF, Hamlet, Profpero, Orlando, and many other
perfons, are fuch juft pictures of human nature, repre-
fcnted in every fphere of life, that the fable of Narcifius
may here be faid to be realized ; and while we are
enchanted with this various aflemblage, the poet's ad-
drefs to him may be applied with ftric~r, propriety to
us in many cafes,
Ifla repercufiae quam cernis imaginis umbra eft.
and again,
tecura
Qbfervatiims on Compofition. 295
•thor's intention to reprefent dcflgn as in-
confiftent with any degree of excellence,
and the moft cardefs writers as the moft
iuccefsful ? — As it cannot be fuppofed,
that any author will attempt to fupport
either of thefe aflertions, we (hall now
tecum venitque, manetque
Tecum difcedet, fi tu difcedae poflis.
But Addifon, on the other hand, flourished at a time
when the principal excellence of Competition was
judged to be the chaflifed manner we are here con-
iidering ; and, in truth, no author ever obtained it
more thoroughly than he. But fettered in this pur-
juit by the laws of criticifm, while his eye was fixed
on propriety, it loft fight of nature; and that imagina-
tion which difplays fuch tnchaotjuf luxuriance in his
profe compofitions, is rendered unanimated in its proper
province by caftigation. Had Shakefpeare himfelf
flouriihed in the age of Addifon, how many of his
,moft exquifite beauties mull have been facrificed to
the prefervation of certain unities which he hath noto-
.rioufly violated ; of -rules, which a great genius can
.neither follow without lofing its claim to originality,
nor break through without incurring the cenfure of
little minds unable to comprehend his motives ! Even
the excellencies of this admirable writer, in fuch a
fituation, would have appeared like flowers that lan-
guifh on the parterre when tranfplanted from their
native foil, .fitted only to fhow, by difplaying fome
charms in the^r^n of art, with what fupcrior beauty
they would have attracted every eye in the wlldernefs
of nature.
U 4 pro-
296 Philofophical and Critical
proceed to enquire how far correct Com-*
p. hi ion ought to be fludied in fcientifkaj
refeai ch, and in what degree it fhould cha-
racterife the higheft exertion of elevated
genius. This is a fubjeet which we have
not yet entered upon, and which will ferve,
\vhen examined in its full extent, to com-
plete the view we propofed to take of the
characters of Compofition.
II. As we have already feen, that to-
render any branch of the art here examined
correct, is the province of understanding,
we may naturally conclude, that this fig-
nature will prevail principally in fuch
fpheres as the power above-mentioned en-
grofleth rnoft to jtfelf, and in which it is
leaft embarraffed by the interpofition of
any other. Whatever hath a tendency to
hurry the mind in any of its purfuits, by
throwing the man off his guard, neceflarily
imparts confufion to his ideas, and inac-
curacj to his manner of exprefling them.
This effect arifeth moft commonly from
fome improper influence, exerted either
by the imagination, or the paffions. The
firft of thefe readers thoughts diffufed
wheo
Obf creations on Compofition. 297
when they ought to ftand clofely together,
or ornamented when iimplicity is requi-
fite. The latter not only fruflrate, but
pervert reafon to wrong purpofes, and
ftamp upon the Composition of a writer,
the certain marks of their own irregularity.
\Ve may, therefore, fay with Csefar, in the
celebrated oration above referred to *.—
" Omnes homines qui de rebus dubiis con-
" ful'i:.t, ab odio, ;ra, amicitia, atque mi-
" feric -rdia vacuos effe debent. Haud
" facile animus wriim provide! ubi ilia
" ofHciuat."
Of the inequality occafioned by either
of thefe cauies, the Compofition of philo-
fophy and hiftory, ought to be fo much
corrected as to exhibit the feweft poffible
examples. An author ought likewife, in
either of thefe provinces, to give the clofeft
attention to the juft connection and dif-
pofition of his fentiments, that thefe may
•follow each other naturally, and may form
altogether a body made up of parts that
are mutually proportioned. With regard
• See feft. iv. of book II.
29 8 PhUofophlcal and Critical
to thofe enlargements on every topic,
which will occur to the mind upon reflec-
tion, when its principal work is over, and
thole little alterations which are made with
the view of iuperfeding fome frivolous
objection, or of rendering the import of
fome thought more perfpicuous, there is
no end of fuch indulgence as this, which
after all muft fail of anfwering any pur-
pofe. Far from rendering fentiments un-
exceptionable, this reliefs affiduity ferves
only to throw an air of perplexity and
embarralTment over a performance, and
the writer can fcarce exped: his reader to
be pleafed, when he appears incapable of
being fo himfelf. An understanding,
whofe perceptions of truth or falfhood
are originally clear, will place them upon
making one comprehenfive examination
in the moft fuitable points of view. But
when the cafe is different, its utmoft re-
peated efforts may render the perplexity
ftill greater, but will never remove it.
We do not mean here to affirm, as may
at firft be fuppofed, that after having once
methodifed and digefted his thoughts, an
author
Obfervations on Compofitkn. 299
author fhould not take any fubfcquent
view of thefe. He only can be faid to
have made an examination fufficiently
comprehend ve, who not only endeavours
to turn a thought on all fides in his own
mind, fo as to judge of its truth, and of
the exceptions to which it lies open ; but
who has, at the fame time, a difpaffionate
temper which fits him for hearing the
judgment of others, and who readily fub-
mits to fuch animadverfions as his own
reafon, uninfluenced by any felfifh motive,
approves as well-founded. There is, we
may obferve in general, no furer evidence
of great intellectual debility, than thedefire
which fome men difcover, not merely to
defend their errors, when candidly pointed
out, againft the exceptions of others, but
even, if poflible, to hide thefe from them-
felves. A performance we may fafely
pronounce, whatever excellence it may
poffefs, muft fail of being correct, as long
as its author is aduated by this principle ;
fmce, befides that, an impartial critic can
judge much more properly of the elucida-
tion which certain points may require in
order
3 DO Phikfophical and Critical
order to produce their effect, than the
writer himfelf, to whom thefe are familiar ;
fuch conduct, even fuppoiing the author's
underitanding to be perfett. (if fuch a fup-
pofition can be made without a folecifm in
this cafe), muft ftill be exceptionable, while
he addrefieth himfelf to thofe whofe judg-
ment is fallible and uncertain. Upon the
whole, therefore, the diftinct nature of
ideas, as having no coincidence ; their
proper felection, as means to promote an
ultimate purpofe ; their order, as mutually
fupporting each other ; and their truth, as
evinced againft material objections ; — thefe
are points of efTential confequence, to
which, therefore, great attention ought to
he given, in order to render trie fentiment
of Compoiition properly correct. But
when the writer hath availed himfelf of
the refources above-mentioned, fo as to be
fatisfied of thefe capital circumftances, a
minute investigation carried on into every
little error which rigid critjcifm may
detect, is an endlefs labour at the lame
time that it is of no utility, becaufe not
only will one man judge that to be well
explained.
Obfervattons on Compojition. 301
explained, which another may deem faulty;
or that to be perfectly intelligible, which
another may have charged with oblcurity ;
but even the fame perfon will be found
to vary at different times in his judgment
of fuch points ; and that from caufes whofe
influence is unavoidable and univerfal.
The fame finical attention to exactnefs
which is thus detrimental to philoibphical
fentiment, will be equally fo to the lan-
guage that conveys it. It is when words-
are moulded into a certain form with
much labour, that Compofition acquires a
ftiffnefs, which we exprefs by faying, that
fuch didtion fmelh of the lamp^ i. e. bears
the marks of having been wrought up
with much toil and difficulty. Art (it is
univerfally acknowledged) makes the
higheft effort we exped: from her when
fhe difappears in an imitation, fo as to
leave no traces by which her ftep may be
marked. It is a miftake to fuppofe that
this apparent want of defign (as it may be
termed), is obtained by much thought,
and coils the writer many elaborate ex-
ertions.
302 Philofophical and Critical
ertions. In fad, it is partly the effed of
that eafy freedom with which the intel*
ledual powers ad:, when unreftrained in
their exercife, by too clofe an attention to
rules ; and partly, of being early accuf-
tomed to the imitation of fome model in
which this character is confpicuous. The
laft caufe, in particular, operates much
more powerfully than we are apt at firft
view to fuppofe. That general fimilarity
which we obferve in the didion even of
the moft approved contemporary authors,
and which marks the productions of an
age, as more or lefs conformable to a cer-
tain ftandard, hath its origin in the imita-
tion here referred to. We have already
confidered this fubjed at fome length *.
It is to the prefent purpofe only to obferve,
that too much attention to make the ftyle,
efpecially of philofophical or hiftorical
Compoiltion, correct, by attempting to
render every word almoft diftinguifhed by
fignificance, and every period by being
* See feet. iv.
elaborately
Obfervatwm on Compofition. 503
elaborately rounded, introduced! as natu-
rally that conftraint into expreffion, which
is incompatible with- correctnefs, as the
deli re to pleafe, when too remarkably pre-
dominant, taints the manners with auk-
wardnefs and refeive.
The expreffion of a performance is,
upon the whole, fufficiently correct, when
the character, whatever it may be that is
required to predominate, is well fupported,
and the fault moft nearly allied to it is
either wholly avoided, or fo rarely and
i neon fider ably permitted to appear, as will
give no offence to thofe who are moft fuf-
ceptible of being impreffed by it. Thus-
Simplicity, a character required to diftin-
guiih every fpecies of Compofition, ought
always to be preferved diftinct from a cer-
tain plain and rnfipid uniformity of dic-
tion * ; juft perfpicuity from finical exact-
nefs 7 ; elegance demanding eafe and har-
mony, from quaintnefs and affected bril-
liance, inconfiftent with both J; fublimity
* Seft. ii. f Sea, iii. I Sea. iv.
from
304 Philofophical and Critical
from bombafl * ; and energy from harfh*
nefs, difFufion, and obfcurity f. We have
endeavoured to mow, in other parts of
this work, by what means this important
purpofe may be moft probably, and com-
pletely effectuated, in each of thefe in-
ilances. The faults here mentioned are
fuch, as when taking place, univerfally dif-
figure Compofition, and deftroy, in a great
meafure, the effect which it is propofed
principally to bring about in any branch
of it. On this account they ought to be
avoided by every writer ; for which end,
we have placed both the excellence, and
the error refembling it, in one point of
view before the reader, and have illuftrated
each by feparate examples, that having
both before him, he may know, as nearly
as poflible, at what point the former ob-
tains in perfection, and when by attempt-
ing to purfue it too far he will fall into
the laft.
2. It is a remark which every man of
letters hath met with, both in books, and
» Sett. v. f Sea. vi.
in
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in converfation, that rules in general are
unfavourable to the exertions of a great
imagination * ; that on this account, the
works upon which men in all ages have
dwelt with the higheft admiration, are fuch
as either preceded the exiflence of critical
inquifition, or cannot yet fland the teft of
its rigid inveftigation ; and that in general,
the pieces rendered by fevere attention
mofl exactly conformed to a certain itan-
dard, are thofe which exhibit the feweft
examples of confummate excellence f»
But
* Some of the ancients have for this purpofe given
fuch definitions of poetry, as muft exclude the appli-
cation of rules to the art. Thus Plato terms itj
Ev9f »a Auv»jt*is & MIMHZIZ. A Latin critic expreff-
eth himfelf ftill more particularly. " Per ambages*
Deorumque minifteria, & fabulofum fentehtiarum tor-
mentum pnecipitandus eft liber fpiritus ut potius fu-
rentis animi vaticinatio adpareat, quam religiofz ora-
tlonis fub teftibus fides,** fays Petronius Arbiter,
fpeaking of the difTerence betwixt poetic and hiftorical
narration. This, however, is carrying the matter too
far. But the examination of both bdongs to another
part of this work.
f As a confirmation of this remark it may be
ferved, that the greateft genuifes have failed moftcon-
fnicuoufly when they have attempted to reader thofe
' VOL. 11. X
306 Philofophical and Critical
But thefe general obfervations, however
true, anfwer no purpofe of importance, as
long as we do not afcertain the influence
which this character ought to exert in the
higheft, as well as in the lefs difficult de-
partments of genius ; as it is certain that
a performance of any kind, in which no
attention is paid to it, muft prefent fuch a
jumble of incoherent ideas, as no rational
mind can contemplate with fatisfaclion.— -
It may, therefore, be proper here, to
pieces correct which attracted admiration in their ori-
ginal form. Bayle has preferved a curious anecdote
to this purpofe of Taflb, which accounts for the dif-
ference betwixt his GierufalemmeLiberata, and Con-
quiftata, at leaft in fome meafure.' In an attempt to
correct the laft (improperly conducted it fhould ap-
pear) he cancelled fome of the greateft beauties, and
fubflituted in their place, others that are unintelligible.
*' A quali tutti (fays the Italian critic, after having
enlarged on the former) gratiffimi e giocondiffimi au-
venimente fuftituifle il Taflb cofe tali che fe con fem-
plice inteiiigenza debbono prenderfi, fono fi frivole,
che niente piu, e fe ci e dentro qualche miftero, egli
ci e involto con tante ambagi ch'a fottrarnelo non
bafterebbe 1'ifteflb Edippo." Diftion. Crit. &c. Art.
RONSARD. The predeceflbrs of this illuftrious writer
in the fame high department of genius, avoid a cen-
fure of this kind, by having attempted no fuch emen-
dations.
enter
Ob formations on Compojitwn. 307
enter into this fubjed a little more par-
ticularly.
The laws of criticifm confidered as
fandions eftablifhed by the understanding,
for the purpoie of rendering any fpecies
of Composition a proper vehicle, either of
emolument or entertainment, various as
thefe are, may yet be comprehended under
the three following heads. — They are
either of that kind whofe obligation is at
all times indifpenfable, and which cannot
be violated without defeating the ultimate
purpofe of the art : — or of fuch a nature,
as though always approved by reafon,
when juftly obferved, may yet be difpenfed
with upon fome occafions that juftify the
neglecl:: — or, laftly, thefe confift of cer-
tain incidental circumflances tagged to the
former which are eflential, deriving their
origin from accident, and eftablifhed prin-*
cipally by ufe.
Under the firft head we may compre-
prehend the general method or plan upon
which any piece is laid out, whether ob-
vious or concealed; the tendency of its
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«J »/ 4
parts to promote an ultimate end ; the
union of theie into one body, fo as to
render it coherent and proportioned ; a
depth, or ftrength of conception, adapted
to the fubjeft ; and, finally, a jufl corref-
pondence of language to the objects, of
whatever kind, that are fet before the
mind. Thefe are principles which it re-
quires no great attention to convince us,
adhere to the very eflence of Compofition,
and cannot be difpenfed with without ren-
dering any performance capitally defective.
As, therefore, the human mind hath at
all times confidered thefe as fundamental
rules, which muft be obferved in every in-
flance, the decifions of eriticifm when they
are violated, however fevere, are yet ra-
tional, and proportioned to the breach of
an indifpenfible requifition.
But when fo much attention is beftowed
on the radical characters here enumerated,
as that reafon approves of them upon the
whole, as being well preferved ; there are
other points in judging of which this fa-
culty relaxeth of its feverity, and though
always
•Qbfirvations on Compofition. 309
always fatisfied when thefe are clofely ad-
hered to, yet judgeth their neglect upon
fome occaiions to be compenfated by the
attainment of a noble end. We may com-
prife in this clafs, the ufe of epifodes, and
.digreffive circumftances, the connection of
which with the principal fubjcct, may be
fomewhat remote ; the introduction of
images not appropriated with perfect ac-
curacy to their originals ; thoughts diftin-
•guimed by a certain boldnefs, fuited rather
•to the character of the fpeaker than to the
.occafion, and principally thrown out to fet
.the former in fome. new point of view;
illuftrations that are .beautiful .rather as
diftinct pictures, than as ftrictly conformed
to a model ; and, finally, .flights of ima-
gination wholly excentrie, and excufable
only on account of their wildnefs or fub-
limity. In thefe cafes, as it is neceflary to
deviate from ftrict propriety in order to
raife admiration, we judge that a nobler
purpofe is obtained by the breach of an
.•eitablifhed law, than could have refulte<i
from a rigid adherence to it; and therc-
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fore ceafe to apply it where it muft be
deficient.
Lauly, we may regard as circumftances
wholly incidental, derived from accident,
and eftablifhed by cuftom, ,fuch rules as
regard the divifion of dramatic pieces into
a particular number of acts ; the opening
of an epic poem in the middle of the
action which it celebrates ; an attempt to
comp~ife it likewife within a certain deter-
minate number of books, as if the fpirit
of the great matters of the epopcea would
be transfufed into him who touched the
feirt of their garments. A fervile ad-
herence to the unities of the drama, be-
longs likewife to this clafs of laws, con-
fecrated by ufe, rather than approved by
the reafon of mankind ; as the lofs of one
ftroke of nature and paflion, excluded from
a performance in confequence of fuch an
adherence, and far more the abfence of
many of thefe left out by this practice,
will not be thought by any reader of dif-
cernment, to be compenfated by the ftricteft
pbfervation of the mechanifm of the drama,
that
Qbfervatwns on Compofition* 311
that can be fuppofed to take place in any
production *.
From this general divifion of the rules
which criticifm hath eftablifhed for the
conduct of Compofition, it will be readily
concluded, that the two laft clafles are the
only ones in which genius may meet with
a confiderable (hare of indulgence. The
principles laid down under the firft head,
are altogether out of the queftion. — But
here I am aware, that a critical inquifitor
may ftrenuoufly urge a very plaulible ob-
jection.— " The laws, he may fay, by
" which every fpecies of Compofition
** ought to be tried, are ordained like thofe
" of civil government in foine fenfe, to
* Some of the laft-mentioned circumftances (it
may be faid) ought not to be included in an enumera-
tion of eftabliflied rules in the province of criticifm,
but are rather arbitrary modes derived from imitation.
They are here, however, confidered as rules, becaufe
a performance would be excepted againft in which the
leaft of them (that only excluded, which regards the
number of books in an epic poem) was omitted; and
as eftallified rules, becaufe with whatever truth reafon
may exclaim againft their obfervance in particular
inftances, cuftom hath rendered it expedient to carry
them moft commonly into practice.
X " main-
312 Philofophical and Critical
<c maintain order in their departments,
" and to fubftitute in place of a wild and
" faulty exuberance, fuch judicious con-
" duel: as a fenfible mind will ever view
" with approbation. So intimately are
" thefe connected with each other, that
" the leaft innovation ought to be con-
*' fidered as a precedent leading by natural
" fteps to the greateft. Though, there^
" fore, the higheft branches of Compo-
" fition may lofe fome advantages by
" being thus rigidly conformed to efta-
<c bliflied laws, yet it ought to be remem^
" bered, that when this conformity is
" difregarded, confufion muft immediately
<c take place of regularity, and that at
" worft, if the mind is deprived of plea-
*' fure in fome inftances when certain rules
" are adhered to, it meets with fewer
" objects to cenfure than when they are
*c violated."
We might reply in general to this feries
of obfervation, that it would have had
much more force at any lefs enlightened
period than the prefent, when men were
nqt thoroughly acquainted with the tefts
by
Obfervations on Competition. 313
by which criticifm tries every object ; be -
caufe the frequent violation of her laws
might then have been productive of con-
fequences, which now, when thefe are imi-
verfally known, there is lefs reafon to
apprehend. We will allow, however, fo
much weight to the objection, as that in
order to obviate it properly the reafons
ought to be affigned for which a licenfe
is (bmetimes granted of deviating from
received principles; the cafes to be fpecified
with precifion in which this licenfe may
take place; and the bounds to be affigned
with accuracy, beyond which it ought
never to be extended. Let us conlider
each of thefe in its place.
i. We have already laid down in this
fedtion, the reafons which make it necef*
fary to grant an indulgence to writers of
exalted genius, when we find them affiim-
ing liberties in the two laft mentioned
departments of the laws of criticifm, which
would be juftly cenfured in thofe of an
inferior clafs. It is, therefore, needlefs to
dwell on this branch of the fubjedt at pre-
fent. We may only add to our enumera-
tion
314 Phllofophical and Critical
tion of thefe caufes, a remark that may
reconcile even the moft rigid defender of
critical defpotifm to the infringement of
its rules upon fome occafions ; — viz. that
the difcerning faculty after all is the ulti-
mate judge to which an appeal is made
concerning this infringement, as juftified
or not by the purpofe to be obtained by it.
Every deviation of this kind is confidered
as hazardous. Curiofity is excited to trace
out its effect: and even when fallies of
imagination the moft excentric, bewilder
the mind for fome time in its purfuit, the
whole terminates at lail in this point,
whether thefe, when viewed as irregulari-
ties in the methodifed order of Compo-
iition, are real violations of an eflential
law ; or whether they are breaches of fome
fubordinate nature, whofe inequality may
be amply compenfated by the pleafure of
which they are productive. Of this mat-
ter, the difcerning faculty muft finally take
cognizance. Of the fuperior powers, by
whofe union it is conllituted, imagination
imprefleth the idea in all its ftrength upon
the mind, and reafon enables it to judge
in
Obfervations on Compofition. 31 r
in what refpects it is, or is not, conformed
to the laws of criticilm.
2. With regard to the particular cafes
in which the neglect of correct Compo-
fition may be juftified, we have likewife
mentioned, in general, the principal of
thefe in the enumeration above referred
to. It is a rule with which we expect
writers of genius to comply, particularly
in the higher fpheres of its exercife, that
the epifodes, or digreffive parts of a per-
formance, fhould be wrought in fuch a
manner into the body of the piece, as to
complete, inftead of disfiguring its pro-
portion; and mould appear like rays of
light, which, though diverging at firft in
various directions from their centre, yet
may be made to terminate in one point,
and co-operate in the accomplimment of
a general end. On this account, an au-
thor ought in moft cafes to be cautious,
both of deviating too often from his prin-
cipal fubject *, and of (hiking too far into
the
* " Les Tragedies les plus defeftueufes font celles
4ont les epifodes n'ont point de liaifon enfemble ;
Ariftotc
316 Philofiphicai and Critical
the paths that lead from it, left he break
that union of parts in which excellence
eonfifts; and bewilder at the fame time
both his reader and himfelf *. — But this
rule is not without exception. There are
circumftances apparently remote, and even
foreign to the point in view, that yet com-
penfate at laft for having thrown it for a
time out of the reader's fight, by that
light which they are brought to beftow
upon it in the end, as well as by the pe-
culiar beauties which thefe may poflefs
when contemplated as diftindl pieces. A
great genius far from being expofed to
cenfure on account of fuch an introduction
«f digreffive circumftances, will be judged
on the contrary, to have difplayed con-
-fummate maftery by the manner in which
Ariftote Jes nomme e-pifodiquts c'eft a dire furabondantes
en epifodes, parce que ces moindres epifodes ne peu-
vent en compofcr un feul ; mais demeurent necefiaire-
jnent en ,cette plu/alj,te vicieufc." Boflu du Pae'n>e
£pique, iiv. ii. chap. 2.
* *' Les aclions les plus fimples, & les moins in-
triguees, etoient le plus fujettes a cette irregularite,
parce qu'ayaut moins d'incidens, & moins de parses
aque les autres, elles fourniflent auffi moins de ma-
.tieres," fcc. Jd. ibid.
they
Obfervations on Compofition. $lj
they are made to fall at laft into his nib-
jedl, as harmony will thus appear to arife
from the difpofition of materials fo com-
plicated as an inferior hand muft have in-
volved in confufion *. The law demand-
ing exact proportion to be accurately pre-
fer ved in every cafe, is, no doubt, after aU
violated in fuch inftances ; but in this vio-
lation we obferve a degree of excellence
difplayed which a tame, though faultlefa
compliance with the rule, muft have effec-
tually fuperfeded.
When again, we pronounce either a
particular thought, or a certain train of
fentiment to be remarkably bold^ the idea
of temerity enters in fome degree into our
eftimation ; and whatever bears the marks
of this character excludes that of corrcc~t-
nefs. But a difcerning critic will weigh
* We have conGdered this fubjecl at fo much
length in a former eflay, and have endeavoured to*
illuftrate our remarks fo particularly to the cafe of
Pindar, whofe digreffions are bolder and more excen-
tric than thofe of any other author ; that we beg leave
to refer to that piece the reader whom curiofity may
prompt to fee the obfervations in the text exemplified,
tff. on Lyr. Poet. let. ii. p. 95 to 98.
cue
318 Phllofophical and Critical
one circumftance againft another, in order
to know how far an author is, on this ac-
count, an object of admiration or cenfure ;
and will confider, that what may be un-
appropriated to the occafion, may yet have
peculiar merit, as being adapted to the
charadler of the fpeaker in fome branches
of Compofition * ; as in others, the fame
thoughts that ftrongly evince the genius of
the 'writer , contain an impeachment on the
prudence, or even virtue of the man. As
critic^ however, thefe objects not only ob-
tain our forgivenefs, on account of the
qualities which we fuppofe to have given
rife to them, but even command involun-
tary admiration.
This is the cafe, likewife, with thofe
irregular fallies of imagination which ap-
pear to have been thrown out, as it were,
at random, rather as if the writer had been
impelled by an enthuliaftic impulfe, to
break into fome abrupt apoftrophe, than
* Let the candid, and difcerning, apply this remark
to the buffooneries (as they are termed) by many of
the perfons introduced into Shakefpeare's plays, par-
ticularly in the comic parts.
like
Obfervations on Compofition. 319
like him, who, with both the fuperior fa-
culties acting in juft combination, fliould
conduct a regulated procefs to a period.
A piece, in which many ftrokes of this
kind were to be met with, it is confefled
might with juftice be cenfured as incor-
rect by the judicious; but would it, there-
fore, ceafe to be admired as exquiiitely
beautiful by the difcermng critic ? — By the
former, upon being tried by a certain
ftandard, thefe might be condemned as
effufions u neon nected with the fubjecl:, and
forming excrefcencies that disfigure its
fymmetry : — by the latter, they would be
prized as imitations of nature, the wildnefs
or magnificence of whofe works compen-
fate, in numberlefs inftances, for an appa-
rent irregularity of difpoiition *. — Thus,
therefore, in each- of the cafes mentioned
* The higheft productions of genius, and thofe in
which the mind makes the mod aftonifliing efforts,
are the works where we will meet with examples of
the kind here enumerated. A feleftion of thefe here,
would have anfwered little other purpofe than that of
protracting the work. To a penetrating judge fuch
beauties need not be pointed out, and by readers of
another caft, they would not be comprehended.
here,
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here, we permit ftrokes to be thrown into
Compofition that render it incorrect when
flrictly examined, not merely without cen->-
luring thefe on this account, but even
with pleafure, when we reflect that a noble
purpofe hath been effectuated in confe*
quence of an exertion not otherwife to be
allowed.
3. But is not (it will be faid) the me-
thod ejj'entially neceflary, as we have al-
ready fhown, to be obferved in every fpe-
cies of the art, broke in upon when fuch
unlicenfed freedoms are taken at any time,
and are juftified as fources of happinefs,
rather than overlooked as the confequences
of inadvertency? Or admitting that, in
fome few cafes, the delight with which a
mafterly ftroke is contemplated may atone
for it as the violation of a rule, ought not
fome bound to be fixed, beyond which no
acquifition, however eminent, can make
up for a temerity inexcufable, as it indi-
cates a defect of underflanding ? This laft
requifition is unqueftionably reafonable ;
and in order to anfwer it as nearly as pof-
fible, we mail here make a few obfervations.
3. The
bbfervations on Compofition. 321
i. The term incorrctt, when applied to
any branch of the art here treated of, in
which we might meet with fuch ftrokes
as have heen enumerated, would charac-
teriie it, not as a work in whofe conduct
no regard was paid to an arrangement that
is indifpenfably requifite; but merely as
containing certain irregularities, which,
without breaking the general unity of de-
fign, are yet inconfiftent with perfect ac-
curacy, and might be deemed fuperfluities.
That order in which objects ought at all
times to be prefented to the mind, is then
only eflentially violated, when an undue
weight appears to be laid upon the lefs,
which thus take place of the more im-
portant; or when circumftances wholly
foreign to the principal point are intro-
duced, and are purfued without any fixed
intention. In thefe cafes, inftead of a me-
thodifed feries, we meet with a promif-
cuous jumble of difcordant ideas, which
the mind can neither contemplate with
pleafure nor information. In whatever
inftances, therefore, we obferve either of
thefe criteria univerfally to predominate,
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: : 2 PMkfsffcical and Critical
no reader can be at a lofs to pronounce a
fuhable decifion.— But it is evident, that
the deriations from exact dilpolition, which
we have reprefented here as ju&nable on
ibme occafions, fall not under either of
theie heads. For it cannot, furely, be faid,
that objects comparatively iniignificant,
are obtruded upon the reader in place of
inch as have importance, when it is only
in conibquence of the high eftimation of
thefle, that their introduction is rendered
exccfable- 1 nftead, on the other hand, of
cucumflances promilcuoufly afiem bled, and
purfued without any fixed intention, the
ficenfe here vindicated is principally that
which throws a fhong tight upon fome
capital objecl ; and though a large compafs
may be taken in order to efiecluate this
purpofe, yet at lift imprefleth it with an
energy which it could not otherwife have
acquired.
2.. As thofe liberties in Compofition,
whole ufe we endeavour to vindicate, are
inch as make no real encroachment upon
the order eftabtifhed in every fpecics of it,
ib they can likewiie occur but rarely in
6 any
Gbjervatiatu on Compqfition. 323
cafe, and are confined moft commonly
(though not indeed always) to a particular
branch of the art. Exuberant imagery,
daring appeals, abrupt traufiticns, bold
fentiments, and wild faliies of imagination,
are not often to be met with in the peruial
of any writings, and are highly chara&er-
iftical of the higher fpecies of poetry.
Bold and new thoughts often thrown out
without methodical accuracy, will, no
doubt, fometimes point out the track of
philofophical difcernment, even in that
iphere where corre&nefs ought to be the
diftinguilhmg character. But as it is the
author's bufinefs here not to paint^ but to
prove the truth of certain propbfitions ;
not to dazzle the mind with novelty, but
to convey fatisfactory information to the
underftanding ; whatever tends «to perplex
the reader's attention, by withdrawing it
from the principal point, or to render his
view inadequate by the interruption of un-
expected tranfition, ought to be carefully
avoided, as inaccuracies which disfigure
his work, and which are not to be com-
penfated by any external advantages what-
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324 PhilofopJiical and Critical
ever. Freedom of fentiment he may in-
deed indulge, and audacity, when thefe
are conformed to the ftandard of truth,
will ferve to render their impreflion
ftronger and more permanent. But his
deviations (if at all allowable) ought to be
fhort, even though obvioufly growing, as
it -were, out of the fubjecT:; his illuftra-
tions calculated rather to mow truth in a
clear^ than in animated colours ; and when
he rifeth to the fublime of fentiment, the
admiration of his readers muft be excited,
not by the difplay of the writer's imagina-
tion, but by the extent and compafs of his
judgment, or difcernment.
Hiftory, whofe Compofition is much
more diverfified than that of philofophy,
admits but rarely of the licenfes above
enumerated, and would lofe its principal
excellence, confidered as the vehicle of
facts related with impartial accuracy, by
their introduction. The pen of an hifto-
rian muft, no doubt, be guided by the
events of which he treats ; and his diction
may with propriety be not only forcible,
but highly figured, when the ftronger paf-
fions
on Compofaion. 325
fions are naturally awakened by the detail
of great or interefting tranfadtions *. It
is, however, at all times incumbent upon
him to avoid peculiarity, which will al-
ways expofe his candour to fufpicion ; and
fuch liberties in particular, as in other
fpheres of Compofition are viewed with
an aftonifhment which fufpends cenfure,
would in this be deemed indications of
undue partiality, or of an imagination not
properly temperated by the controul of
underftanding. From both thefe fciences
the wild and exuberant, as deriving their
jeffecl: wholly from the fervor of irregular
imagination, muft be wholly excluded at
all times without exception.
* " Narrat fane ilia, narrat & hrec (fays a cele-
brated ancient, fpeaking of the difference betwixt elo-
quence and hiftory), fed jlli oninia fplendida, recon-
riita, excelfa convenient. Hanc, (oratiqnem) fdepius
ofla, mufculi, nervi, illam (hiftoriam) tori quidam &
quafi jubne decent. H:ee vel ir.axime vi, amaritudine,
inftantia. Ilia tra6lu, & fuavitate, atque etiam dulce-
dine placet. Poftremo alia verba, alius fonus, alia
conftruclio. Nam plurimum refert, ut Thucydides
ait, KTHMA fit an AFONI2MA quorum alterum
pratio, alterum hiftoria eft." Plin. Epift. lib. v.
ift, 8.
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It is, therefore, almoft only in the two
higher fpheres of eloquence arid poetry,
that the delight with which certain ftrokea
are contemplated by fuch readers as are
capable of feeling their force, is judged fully
to corripenfate for that appearance of in-
correftnefs which their admiffion naturally
gives to Compofition. With regard to the
rhetorical art, the leaft reflection will con-
vince us, that with whatever precifion its
general laws may be determined, much
greater latitude may be taken in this fphere
prefenting an exhauftlefs variety of fub-
jeds, than in the more regulated provinces
of philofophy and hiftory. In thefe laft,
the procefs of argument carried on from
lefs to more obvious truths, or the detail
of tranfactions following each other in a
certain natural and eftablifhed order, forbid
the ufe of bold deviations in almoft any
cafe ; becaufe the powers which it is moft
commonly propofed to imprefs by means
of thefe, are weakly if at all excited in the
laft mentioned departments. Hiftory, in-^
deed, fometimes addrefleth herfelf to the
paffions, and even adopts, as we have feen,
the
Ofyervafio&s on Compqfition. 327
the glowing idioms of imagination. But
what in her fphere is only a fecondary
purpofe, becomes a principal one in that
of the orator ; and though it is by different
exertions of the intellectual powers that
he kindles the imagination, and fpeaks to
the heart (which are therefore confidered
as diftinct provinces of the art), yet the
boldeft images of the former are intro-
duced fo naturally into this laft addrefs,
that we not only excufe thefe, but are
even led to contemplate them with ad-
miration *,
It
* Was it neceflary to eftablifh the truth of this
obfervation by examples, we might adduce many from
the higheft ftandards cf eloquence, both ancient and
modern. One, becaufe it is remarkably finking, the
reader will perufe with particular pleafure. It is taken
from a maflerly difccurfc of Dr. Fordyce, on the Folly
and Infamy of Unlawful Pleafure. In this defcrip-
tion of the death of an abandoned libertine, wrought
up with ftrokes that are worthy of Demofthenes, he
hath contrived to heighten the pathos of the fcene by
admitting into it one of the mod piclurefque images
ever feized by a fublime imagination. — " The dread-
44 ful alternative (fays he) entirely mifgives him. He
^* meditates the devouring alyfs of eternity ! — He recoils
*( as he eyes it!" — There is fomething (if we may thus
Y 4 exprefg
328 Philofcphical and Critical
It ought likewife to be obferved, that
eloquence not only . includes (as we {hall
more particularly afterwards) both
the
exprefs it) folemn, and awfully pathetic in this defcrip-
tion, arifing from the cslaur that imagination cafts on
it, which without this heightening could never have
taken place. It is no doubt true, in general, that the
heart is moft powerfully imprefied when a few cir-
cumftahces are exprefled in plain, but forcible words,
and are put together in fuch a manner as to form a
climax. The appeals likewife, by which it is moft
deeply penetrated, require to be conveyed in few and
unornamented expreffions. The exclamation of Grac-
chus, which Cicero tells us drew tears from every
hearer, is a mafter-piece of this laft kind. " Quo me
rnifer conferam ? (faid he foon after the death of his
brother) quo vertam ? — In Capitoliumne ? — At fratris
ianguine redundat. — An domum ? Ibi confpicere ma-
trem miferam, lamentantemque & abjecTam." De
Orat. lib. iii. c. 55. When the real or fuppofed fuf-
ferer fpeaks in the firft perfon, it is only by fuch plain,
though animated expoftulations as thefe, that a power-
ful impreflion can be made upon the heart. It is
feldom, indeed, that high colouring ought to be ad-
mitted into the pathetic part of a difcourfe, unlefs
\vhen narration is employed by fome third perfon to
accomplish this purpofe. But genius claims as its
privilege, an exemption from thefe rules. It is one
of the (ignatures of this great character to ftrike out
light from objects that are commonly deemed leaft
capable of producing it ; and even the inroads that are
made by an exuberant imagination, properly reguhte'd
into
Obfervations en Compofitlon. 329
the philofophical and hiftorical characters,
by uniting in its comprehenfive fphere the
didactic with the narrative manner; but
even its principal ends, that of painting
in particular, and that of moving the paf-
lions, are obtained moft effectually by the
ufe of licenfes, which a rigid critic might
cenfure as rendering the author's plan dif-
proportioned, and his Compolition incor-
rect. Thus we might pronounce with
truth, that an orator, by working up the
colours with ftudied attention in which
fome capital object is pourtrayed, and by
endeavouring to catch every light in which
it can be expofed to advantage, may give
one branch of his fubject greater compafs
and extent than it ought to poflefs. The
fame remark may be made of his addrefs
to the paffions, in which the tranfitions
may be too rapid, the appeals too daring,
and the topics of expoftulation may hang
together with too muchfeeming negligence
into foreign province^ are marked with fuch genuine
flrokes of nature and originality, as that the deviation
from a rule is wholly abforbed in the contemplation of
the effect.
to
Philofiphic*! and Critical
to render the difcourfe ftrictly conformed
to the rules of criticifm. But the ftandard
of nature, and that of art, are eflentially
different in the cafes here examined. The
firft would lead us to enquire whether the
orator in one cafe has really placed the
object of his attention in ftriking points
of view ; not whether thefe are numerous,
but how far each is fignificant and inter-
efting. In the other it would fuggeft to
us, that we are not to try any eloquent per-
formance by the tefts above enumerated,
as decifive of its merit, but are to examine
a much more important queftion for this
purpofe, whether thefe correfpond to the
natural feelings of a fufceptible temper.
The avenues that lead to the heart of man
are fo various as not to admit of regular
enumeration. We cannot lay down ge-
neral rules that are fufficiently compre-
henfive of this fubject ; but no man is at
a lofs to decide on the tendency of a par-
ticular means to excite certain paflions or
affections, becaufe of this he is rendered
fenfible by feeling. Sudden tranfitions
have a powerful effect upon many occa-
fions,
Obfervations on Compojltwn. 331
(ions, when the heart is to be penetrated ;
becaufe nothing is more natural in circum-
ftances of real diftrefs, than to fly to fome
profpect whofe connection with that which
engrofleth attention, may after all be
merely ideal. Appeals in the fame man-
ner, and abjurations rendered energetical
by certain awful and folemn circumftances,
are the natural expreflions of paffion ; and
will be judged more or lefs excufable in
particular cafes, in proportion to the
ftrength or imbecility of the mind before
which they are prefented. A man of weak
feelings, and whofe exertions are propor-
tionably feeble, will be ftunned, and, as it
were, overpowered by an expreflion which
one of vigorous intellects would have con-
fidered only as adequate to the occafion.
Nature is likewife happily imitated by an
apparently negligent difpofition of objects,
when the pafllons are to be ftimulated,
which hath, in this cafe, much greater effi-
cacy than could have arifen from the
clofeft and moft exact arrangement. The
mind, when giving vent to its fenfations
\mder the preflure of affliction, is attentive
only
332 Thtkfophlcal and Critical
only to the ftrength of its expreffion, as
conveying thefe with adequate emphafis,
But as its ideas at that time fucceed each
other without much regularity, and are
thrown into language as they occur, an
imitation of this diforder, happily executed,
is a picture of the human heart, and will
be cenfured only by thofe who are either
deprived of fenfibility, or who have not
attended to its effects.
Since, therefore, it will be faid, thefe
licenfes have a noble effect in fo many
cafes, at what point does this effect ter-
minate, and in what inftances are fuch
liberties really inconfiftent with correct
Compofition ? — Principally in the three
following.
i. When fo little regard is paid to the
eftablifhed order of parts, as that one power
of the mind breaks in abruptly upon the
province of another, without aiding it in
the accomplifhment of its particular pur-
pofe. 2. When an author, not fatisfied
with attracting his reader's aftonifhment
by fuperior excellence at one time, at-
tempts to excite this paffion too indif-
crjminately.
Obfervalions on Compofition. 533
criminately, and thus aflumes liberties
upon every occafion, which a great one
can only juftify. 3. When ftrokes of per-
fect originality, whofe connection with the
principal fubject is at beft remote, are pur-
iued through circumftances fo various and
complicated as erafe it wholly from our
memory.
A judicious author will guard with par-
ticular folicitude againft the two firft men-
tioned indulgences, becaufe by breaking
the union of parts in his piece, and by de-
ftroying its effect, thefe exhibit ftriking
evidences of defective underftanding. An
orator, who in the firft part of his dif-
courfe fimply proves the truth of fome
propofition, addrefleth himfelf wholly to
the reafon of his hearers. Strokes, there-
fore, however admirable when contemp-
lated apart, which are derived from an-
other power, and are introduced without
any tendency to promote his ultimate pur-
pofe, may be juftly cenfured ; not merely
as ufelefs fuperfluities, but as foreign cir-
cumftances thrown without order or pro-
priety into a difcourfe. Thefe, by leading
the
334 Philofophical and Critical
the mind away from the point of which
it is in purfuit, inftead of throwing light
upon it, tend to violate an eflential law,
and break that harmony with which the
fubordinate parts of a fubjecT: ought to
concur in promoting a general end *.
Imagina-
* Among the ancient and illuflrious orators of
Greece and Rome, there are few examples to be met
with of the fault mentioned in the text. But this de-
fed: is amply fupplied by the rhetoricians of the mid-
dle and dark ages, as well as by modern writers of
this clafe. It is difagreeable to fele£fc examples of fuch
a nature from works of real ingenuity. One however,
we fljall adduce here for the fake of the Englijb reader,
from a late collection of difcourfes which are diftin-
guifhed, upon the whole, by no inconfiderabk (hare
of eloquence. The ingenious Mr. Seed, in a dif-
courfe on the duty of unreferved obedience, propofeth
to obviate this objection to his do£lrine; — that it i*
inconfiftent with the divine goodnefs to confign any
man, who ftands clear of all other vices, to future
mifery for one habitual fin. To this he replies, That
future mifery i$ the neceflary ccnfequence of one habk
of fin, fince on« habk of fin disqualifies us for the
enjoyment of heaven. — That habitual bad difpofition,
fays he, which the decays of the body do not weaken,
the diffblution of it will not deftroy. — The joys of
heaven (fays he) are like the beams of light: if they
fall upon forne objects of a fuitabie texture to reflect
them, as upon cryftal, for inflance, they brighten ami
beautify them : but if upon others, they are quite loft
and
Obfervations en Competition. 335
Imagination, it is true, may here be per-
mitted to throw ftrong and lively colours
on the objects that are fucceffively con-
templated. But in this office, it will be
obferved, that me acts only a fecondary
part, by fetting off rational fentiments to
the higheft poffible advantage, and thus
impreffing thefe upon the mind with a
force which they muft otherwife have
and ftifled ; they prefent nothing to the view .but one
undiftinguifhed biacknefs of daFknefs. — This meta-
phor, the reader will obferve, hath no propriety as
an illuftration of the author's reply to the objection
here propofed, but is fo general and unappropriated^
as to admit of an application to almoft any religious-
rule. A correct writer will never indulge his imagin-
ation in a licenfe of this kind, even though it may
have peculiar excellence when contemplated as a dil-
tinct picture, (which is not the cafe in the prefent
knftance), becaufe it bears no relation to a point upon
which every circumftance ought to throw light ; and
from which fuch as are foreign ought to be excluded,
for the fame reafon, that when employed in any bu-
finefs that attracts very clofe attention, we abftract
ourfelves from fuch converfation as might draw off
our thoughts from this point ; or fuch external objects
as might divert our eye. We confider not in this cafe,
what attractions either of thefe may pofTefs, had we
been difengaged ; but avoid them at the time only as
having no relation to cur employment.
wanted :
336 Philofophical and Critical
wanted : — whereas in the cafe cenfufea,-
this power intrudes as a principal when it
ought to be wholly fubordinate; and in-
ftead of promoting the fearch of truth,
prefents objects wholly foreign to fuch a
difquilition.
If a writer may thus be eenfured with
juflice, who permits one power of the mind
to interfere in the province of another, by
throwing into it ftrokes that are foreign to
the fubject, we may furely animadvert
with the fame propriety upon Compofition,
in which, by an attempt to excite admira-
tion indifcriminately, every part appears
to be over-wrought ; and the liberties taken
at all times are feldom juftified by the oc-
cafion. Even though this attempt had no
tendency to render Compofition inaccurate,
good fenfe would fuggeft to the mind, that
it mufl defeat the purpofe which it pro-
pofeth to bring about, even fuppofing it
to be purfued with fuccefs; becaufe an
object or idea that is truly admirable, in
order to make an adequate impreffion,
ought to be placed among fuch as have a
fubordinate relation to it. By this means,
the
Qlfervations on Compofition. 337
trie capital figure is difpofed properly, fo,
as to produce its full effect, and receives
fome additional grace from each of thofe
that furround if. Whereas, when we en-
deavour to fhow all objects in the fame
light) and to excite promifcuoufly one uni-
form paffion, a work riot only ceafeth to
become interefting by being deprived of
juft variety, but thoughts deftroy mutually
the effect of each other ; and the glare that
is caft on all parts prevents us from
fingling out, and from being duly im7
prefled by thofe which we might otherwife
liave dwelt on with admiration.
But it is principally to our prefent pur*
jpofe to obferve, that the licence is here car-
ried too far ; and Compofition is rendered
fo incorrect by this practice, as to lie open
to the jufteft cenfure. For as the judg-
ment of that writer muft be defective in a
very great degree, which cannot eftimate
the comparative value of objects, fo as not
to know that fome would be rendered ridi-
culous by being reprefented in colours that
are fuited to others with propriety ; fo the
work of fuch a mind muft exhibit marks
VOL* II. Zi of
338 Philofopfiical and Critical
of this defect, fo univerfal as to render the
\vhole difgufting to a reader of penetra-
tion, when confidered as a body that ought
to have confidence and {lability, in what-
ever manner he might be affected by the
view of particular objects*.
The licence in the laft place, of digreff-
ing from the principal point upon fome
occafions, which is claimed by all writers
promifcuoufly as accompliihing purpofes
of importance, is then carried beyond its
proper bound, when either repeated fo fre-
quently as to diftract attention, or purfued
through fo many circumftances as to throw
the fubject which it was introduced to il-
luftrate, wholly out of the reader's eye.
A difcourfe, in which this conduct is pur-
fued, can have no more connection than a
dream made up of incoherent ideas, and
muft argue an indulgence of imagination
* The Thebais of Statius affords many examples
of the fault here cenfured, as that writer appears to be
particularly fond of drefling up every object in pom-
pous and affe&ed ornaments. This condudl often*
prevents the effeft of his defcriptions. Tfce reader
may apply, as an example of this kind, the paflage
quoted from him, fo£t v.
wholly
Obfervatlons on Cotnpqfition. 339
\vholly unwarrantable, as it is carried on
in oppofition to every rule that is efla-
blifhed by reafon *.
The obfervations we have made here,
upon the abufe of the inventive faculty in
the art of perfuafion, bear fo obvious a
relation to that of poetry, as to require no
particular application. The only circum-
fiances by which the laft mentioned art is
peculiarly diftinguifhed, are the freer ufe
of high colouring in all fubjecls ; and thofe
irregular fallies of imagination which com-
mand admiration merely on account of
their wildnefs and fublimity, and whofe
introduction would juftly be deemed inex*
cufable in any other fpecies of Compo-
fition. Thefe are of two kinds : the firft
is conftituted by the exhibition, though
perhaps fomewhat abru.pt, of forne bold
* As no poet, either ancient or modern, rifeth to
inore ailonifhing grandeur fhan the Theban Bard, fo
from none do we meet with fuch inflances of an in-
coherence wholly unwarrantable. The Ode infcribed
©pa<n&nw ©r,£a»w FlaJl IraJWj, IIT0. I. A. is
wholly of this kind. The imagination of the poet,
uncontrouled by any other power, renders this piece
wholly excentric, and inexcufably obfcure.
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and mafterly figure ; or by an allegorical
reprefentation, purfued through various
circumfbnces, as expreffive of fome great
idea. The other arifes from apoftrophes
ftrongly animated, from daring and ori-
ginal expreflions thrown into a picture,
which give a grace to the whole, that ren-
ders it truly and properly admirable. Of
thefe we may obferve, that not only are
they confined to the pathetic art, but it is
wholly into thofe branches of it which
afford the wideft range to the power of
invention, that they can be darned (if we
may thus exprefs it) without giving of-
fence. The great matter of the epopcea,
has eminently diftinguifhed his principal
work by excellence of the former kind * ;
and
* The philofophy of the Iliad, and the knowledge
that Homer had acquired of nature, is conveyed in a
feries of allegories the mod exquifuely beautiful that
the human mind can be fuppofed to conceive. Every
object appears to be animated with life, by the creative
touch of this exalted genius; and hence arifeth that
perpetual fucceffion of inchanting forms, which keep
attention always awake, while we are reading a work
which muft have otherwife excited unavoidable fatiety
from the uniformity of its fubjeft. Among ftrokea
thus
Ofyervations on Compq/ition. 341
and fome modern performances of the
higheft
thus conftamly diverfified, there are fome diftinguifhed
by their originality fo ftrongly, as to fix the mind in
admiration, and whofe wild beauty more than con-
templates for the defect of ftrict propriety. Let us
take one example. It is in the defcription of Achilles,
upon whofe appearance Homer has lavifhed all the
powers of his genius, when oppofed in his laft combat
to Hector. After having placed fucceflively before
the eye his armour, his fhield, the plumage of his
helmet, his terrific afpect, eagle fpeed, and godlike de-
meanor, he paints him at laft in the act of waving his
fpear, and confidering in what place his adverfary is
vulnerable. On this occaGon, the very point of this
hero's fpear muft be irradiated while yet waving in the
air, in order to complete the reprefentation. Obferve
,the illuftration.
Cho? £ ar»lf »<rt pir arpxtrt I/UKTO? apoAj^
of xaAAifo? £» ovfatvu ffxron ar»!p'
TrfXapr' HMXEOJ, TJV oto AftiXXtv;
pu. — IAIAA. X.
In order to have rendered this illuftration Jlriflly proper,
Achilles ought to have been placed amorfg many war-
riors whofe fpears were all waving together, but his
throwing a ftronger light around him than any of the
others. But who would lofe this exquifitely beautiful
and picturefque circumftance, for a fmall impropriety,
which after all it is impoffible to guard againft in every
inftance, without giving up the nobleft and moft fub-
lime exertions of human genius ? In the fame fpirit he
defcribes the eyes of Hedor in another place, as
withering all the ftrength of Greece. Nothing can
exceed
342 Philofophlcal and Critical
higheft poetic merit, afford the moft flrik-
ing examples of the latter *.
III. We
exceed the wild beauty of the expreflion in which this
idea is conveyed.
OMMAT' EXHN. IAIAA. 0.
This is undoubtedly " fnatching a grace beyond the
reach of art," if any thing can be it. Perhaps fome
readers will confider, as a more ftriking example of the
licence which a great imagination may indulge with^
out cenfure, the following fublime figure fet before
the mind in the highefl colouring which that faculty
can throw on any object. It is the defcription of the
Origin of Time, in the Night Thoughts, a work infe-
rior to none of the fentimeutal kind in point of poetical
merit. Speaking of the abufe of time, the poet fays,
Not on thefe terms was time (heaven's flranger) fent
On this important embafiy to man.
When the DREAD SIRE on emanation bait,
And big with nature rifing in his thought
Caird forth creation / - -
Not on thafe terms, from the great days of heav'n.
From old eternity's myflerioui orb,
Was TIME cut off, and caft beneath the fkies.
This we muft, no doubt, acknowledge, has little con-
nection with the fentiment immediately preceding, in
which we arc informed, that in no inftance does this
god (as he is called) Hand neuter. The fucceeding
lines correfpond flill Jefs to it. But is there a mind
animated with the leaftfpark of fenfibility^ which would
dafti out fo great an effort ©f the moft exalted genius,
on this accouiU ? — Surely not. There is
Obf:r vat ions on Compojition. 343
III. We have now, in following out the
method laid down in the beginning of this
fedion,
fomething noble even in the irregularities of a great
mind, in which the prefervation of its radical character
(when an adequate fubjcft is prefented to it), diftin-
guifheth it from one of an inferior order, and con-
verts its very defects into excellencies ! —
There is, perhaps, no writer, either ancient or
modern, who has mote the art of rendering his figures
intenfely animated and pi£lurefque by certain daring
and mafterly flrokes thrown out abruptly, than the
divine author of Paradife Loft. His well known de-
fcription of Death, oppofed to Satan in his journey
through Chaos, is wrought up with fome which arc
truly original.
Black it flood as night,
Fierce as ten furies, terrible as hell, &c.
Again,
The monfter moving onward came
With horrid flrides ; — hell trembled as bejtrode.
Admirable, however, as thefe are, the following ftroket
thrown into the defcription of Taflb's Pluto, is in no
refpecr. inferior to either.
Roflegian gli occhi, e di veneno infelto.
Come infaufta cometa il guargo fplende.
The portentuous glare of the comet flafheth fuddenly
upon the eye of the reader, and renders its original
perfectly picturefque. It is one of thofe daring images
xvhich a great genius can only adopt, and which we
contemplate, not with cenfure, but aflonifliment. —
We fhould fwell this note to too great length by ad-
ducing many examples of thofe expreffions, diftin-
Z 4 guifhed
344 Philofophical and Critical
fection, endeavoured to (how what is un*
derftood by the term corretf, when applie4
in its moft extenfiye fenfe to Compoiition;
what degree of attention a judicious writer
will beftow on this character in the vari-
ous departments of fcience ; in what cafes
guifhed by wildnefs or fublimity, which claim admi-
ration in poetry. Let us, however, juft mention one
of the fudden apoflrophe that fo powerfully. excites this
paflion. When Macbeth is juft fetting about the
murder of Duncan, and has difmifled his fcrvant, we
expeft from him fome difcourfe, intermixed with exr
preflions of horror and remorfe, which the mind natu-
rally fuggefls on the eve of fome defperate and wicked
attempt. 'But inftead of thefe, his entranced imagina-
tion prefents to him a dreadful obje£l, and he breaks,
put at once into the exclamation,
Is this a dagger that I fee before me",
The handle tow'rd my hand ? — Come let me
clutch thee !
jind a little after,
I fee thee ftill,
And on thy blade and dudgeon gouts of blood^
Which was not fo before.
This addrefs is more abrupt and daring, than any of
which a ftudied difcourfe could have admitted, in
vhich the paflions were to be excited by rules, how-
ever clofely thefe might be adhered to. But here it
* flrikes with irrefiftible energy, and is admirable as a
deviation from thofe very laws, whofe application in
W inferior branch of the art, would have led us to
eenfure any fimilar indulgence as a violation of order.
• vf..i. V . ....... . .1 O ,,
Obfervations on Compaction.
this attention may be carried too far ; and,
laftly, we have attempted to afcertain the
bounds within which the licence of dif-
penfmg with rules that is fometimes
claimed by, and allowed to genius in fome
inftances, ought always to be confined.
It remains only, in order to render our
view of this fubjecl: complete, that we
point out the moft proper methods of ac-
quiring an excellence fo univerfally at-
tended to ; as neceflary to fum up our ob-
fervations on the moft diftinguifhing cha-
racters of the art.
We mall enter moft effectually into the
queftion which it is here propofed to ex-
amine, by confidering Compofition in its
moft extenfive latitude, as confifting of the
union -of fentiment and expreffion *. As
no
T *
* Quintilian ftates this point with great propriety.
" Proxima flylp Cogitatio eft, quse & ipfa vires ab
hoc accepit, & eft inter fcribendi laborem, extempora-
lemque fortunam, media qusedam, & nefcio an ufus
frequentiflimi." — Again he fays. " Neque vero re-
rum ordinem modo (quod ipfum fatis erat) intra fe,
ipfa (cogitatio) difpofuit, fed verba etiam copulat,
fotamyue ita contexlt orationenty ut nibil ei prater manum
346 Phllofophical and Critical
no performance can be pronounced correct
in which there is not a jufl correfpondence
betwixt thefe; and as we have already
fhown that they are not neceffariLy con-
nected with each other, in the fame man-
ner as a caufe and an effect ; we fhall ex-
amine feparately by what methods each
may appear in the leaft exceptionable light,
and the concurrence of both may effectuate
that purpofe which it is propofed ulti-
mately to obtain.
r. To render the fentiment of Compo-
fition correct, conlidered wholly as a dif-
tinct branch of the art, the following
things appear to be neceffary. i. That
thd thoughts mould have a ftriet relation
to fome principal point, and grow, 'as it
were, naturally out of the fubject. 2. That
thefe, inilead of being treated in the fame
uniform manner, mould be explained with
a care proportioned to their nature, and
degrees of importance. 3. That they
debet" The reader of tafte will be pleafcd with the
laft words of the fentence particularly, which exprefs
the author's meaning with much elegance. Inftit.
Jib x. c. 6.
fhould
Obfervations en Competition. 347
fhould be ranged in perfpicuous order, fo
as gradually to open upon the mind of the
reader, and place the ultimate end clearly
and forcibly in his view, as he makes his
approach to it.
i. By thoughts that grow out of a fub-
jecT:, we underftand fuch as naturally tend
to produce that effect:, whether of proof,
illuftration, perfuafion, or defcription, to
which they are applied. When this ten-
dency ceafeth to take place, correct defign
is effentially violated; nor is the depart-
ment in which an author is employed of
any confequence, as an apology for an in-
dulgence of this kind. In order to obtain
a point of fuch confequence, the writer
ought not only to keep his eye fteadily
fixed both on the general end, and on the
fubordinate purpofes which he may ac-
complifh in the courfe of his procedure;
but as it is difficult, efpecially in works
of length, and when the parts are compli-
cated ; to avoid the intermixture of foreign
objects with thofe that are directly to the
purpofe, he ought to revife his perform-
ance when his mind is cooled, at intervals
of
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of leifure, from the ardor excited by a con-
ftant fluctuation of ideas * ; and exclude
from it thofe fentiments, however juft or
ftriking when viewed apart, which he dif-
covers to be protuberances that disfigure
his work; or fuch ufelefs members of it
as may be lopped off without injuring its
proportion *f. It will, no doubt, require
confiderable refolution to carry this admo-
nition jleadily into practice, becaufe vanity
(the moft powerful of the paffions) muft
be mortified by it; and the attractive or
entertaining, give place to the ufeful. But
this facrifice will be made with lefs reluct-
ance when it is confidered, that by divert-
ing Compofition of fuch adventitious and
frivolous circumftances, the effect: of what
is retained will be more fenfibly felt, and
every thought, as of importance to the
* c< Hsec (Cogitatio) inter medios rerum adlus,
aliquid invenit vacui, nee otium patitur." Id. ibid.
•f Ex TU; aMzyyvrt TOD iTn^f^r^arof ctvirocMvov T*
TO £^>* i^»!f uvj/of EN o ^05/0?
iv
xai
en4
Obfervations on Compojition. 349
end in view, will make that impreffion
which ought moft naturally to arife from
it. Thoughts, on the contrary, or embel-
limments that tend rather to mow an au-
thor's genius, than to promote his purpofe,
while they gratify a temporary deilre,
eflentially injure his work. By diverting
trie mind to objects foreign from the point
to be contemplated, thefe make it lofe that
thread -which would have led it by eafy
fleps, if kept always in pofleffion, to the
end originally propofed.
2. As fentiments, in order to be correct,
ought in this manner to have a clear rela-
tion to fome ultimate purpofe, it is no lefs
neceflary that an author mould vary his
method of unfolding or enforcing thefe,
according to their natures and degrees of
importance. No man needs to be in-
formed, indeed, that fome thoughts either
as being more abftracted in their nature,
or demanding illuftration from the place
which thefe occupy, or, finally, in confe-
quence of the weight that refts upon them
in any branch of Competition, require to
be explained with greater compafs and
pre-
350 Philofophical and Critical
precifion than fuch as are recommended
by none of thefe diftindions. But ready
as we are to make this general acknow-
ledgment, it happens frequently, that the
jnoft frivolous parts of a fubjed are thofe
upon which the greateft attention appears
to have been bellowed ; a conduct that
naturally renders the whole obfcure, and
deflroys its efred. This propenfity takes
its rife often in men of genius, from the
defire of obtaining a certain end as quickly
as poffible ; in the purfuit of which they
go forward with fuch rapidity as prevents
them from contemplating at leifure, the
various means that conduce to its attain-
ment. In confequence of this condud, the
author's inclination takes the lead at many
times of his underftanding ; and inftead
of unfolding at length, and with particular
accuracy thofe branches of a fubjed, or
thoughts which though perhaps the leaft
fhowy, are yet of the greateft importance,
he expatiates improperly on parts that are
recommended by novelty, or may be laid
open with the greateft facility. Impartial
refledion muft fuggeft to us the many
a
Obfervafions on Composition. 351
difadvantagcs arifmg from this indulgence
of an unwarrantable propenfity, by which
a man, capable of thinking deeply as well
as clearly, gives up his pretenfions to both,
in order to follow a whimfical bias ; and
deprives his performance of its principal
merit by attempting to fix the reader's at-
tention moft intenfely on thofe objects
which contribute leaft to promote the fcope
he hath in view.
It is by an effort of judgment, not ex-
erted at different times, but carried uni-
formly into exercife, that the confequences
of indulging this bias will be prevented.
The mind, it is no doubt true, may be
mifled in its eftimation of objects, fo as to
permit the frivolous to take place of the
ufeful in the heat of Compofition ; in the
fame manner as a man of difcernment in
characters, may prefer tinfelled oflentation
to merit modeftly attired, while he is hur-
ried by bufmefs, or duped by prejudice : —
but in both cafes, it is by recollection that
the error is detected ; and the trivial dif-
placed, however elaborately decorated, to
make
352 Phiiofophicat and Critical
make way for what has real utility *.
negle&ing to purfue a courfe fuch as is
here
* The obfervations made on this fubjeft may re-
quire perhaps to be exemplified, as many readers, whcV
are not accnftomed to fearch out the lefs obvious ex-
cellencies of Compofition, and who want leifure for
this talk, may be at a lofs to apply general remarks ori
fuch a theme, until they are thrown into the proper
track. It happens luckily for us at prefent, that in a
periodical performance of diftinguithed merit, we meet
with an example perfectly to the purpofe. Addifori
fays, in one-of his Spectators, that " notwithstanding
*' we fall fhort at prefent of the ancients, in poetryi
" painting, oratory, hiftory, architecture, and all the
'* noble arts and fciences, which depend more upori
*c genius than experience -r we exceed them as much
*' in doggerel, humour, burlefque, and all the trivial
" arts of ridicule." — This fine obfervation (it is well
remarked by the author of that excellent paper, enti-
tled, the Adventurer), ftands in the form of a general
afferticn. He examines, therefore, its truth by an in-
duction of particulars, and confirms it by examples.
Adven. vol. iv. No. 127, 133. Without entering
particularly into the truth of this remark (as to which
we might differ from both thefe writers, refpedhble
as they are), we may only obferve from it, that
thoughts that are of much ufe when enforced with a
certain degree of energy, may yet be overlooked by
the greater number of readers, when the proper em-
phafo) if we may thus exprefs it, is not laid upon them
by the writer ; and though it is otherwife in the Cafe
here fpecifiecJ, yet neither hath an author reafon to
Obfervations on Compofition. 353
liere pointed out, works in which there
is a very high degree of merit are ren-
dered obfcure to the greater number of
readers ; nor can their opinion be cenfured
as ra(h or ill-founded. For however in-
trinfically excellent many fentiments may
be in a work of which thefe ought to con-
flitute the principal ornaments, yet it is
not furely the reader's bufinefs to fearch
them out, if they are placed in difadvan-
tageous points of light by the writer.
The latter may direct the attention of the
former to run in any channel that he may
cut out for it. If parts, therefore, com-
expect that his readers in general will be qualified to
feel the force of truths, even the moft important, when
not confirmed by fatisfaQory evidence ; nor if they
fhould, that any of them, like the prefent ingenious
critic, not fatisficd with his own perception of fuch a
truth, will endeavour I ike wife to render its influence
and evidence univeifal. He, therefore, who fixeth his
attention upon the point of utility, ought always to
remember, that in order to gain this ejid, he muft fel-
dom ajjert without entering into the proof of his prin-
ciples; and that it will often be neccflary for him to
a£l in oppofition to the impulfe of inclination, when
rcafon informs him that by complying with it, he will
at Jeaft conceal what has genuine excellence j if he
does not really facrifke it altogether to obje£bthat arc
comparatively frivolous and nfclefs.
VOL. II. A a paratively
354 Philofophical and Critical
paratively mean are wrought up fo highly
as to conceal thofe that are of greater con-
fequence, he is under obligation to the
few who may clear thefe diamonds from
the rubbim that fur rounds them, but ought
to confider, as the effect of fo injudicious
a conduct, the cenfure which will in ge-*
neral be paft upon the whole, as either
unintelligible, or containing little to the
purpofe.
That the error here expofed may be
effectually avoided, a judicious writer will
find it neceffary to guard againft the im-
pulfe of imagination, as this power, even
when it fubfifts in the higheft degree, is.
always ready to beftow the higheft colour-
ing on thoughts that ftrike by their bril-
liance, rather than on fentiments that im-
prefs conviction by their importance,
This is a point which it rather demands
refolution, than any great degree of atten-
tion to carry into practice. A moderate
fhare of this laft will enable an author to
diftinguifh objects of real utility, from
fuch as are adventitious, or ornamental.
But it may require no inconfiderable effort
\.o cancel a. favourite illuftration, not be-
caufe
Qbf equations on Competition. 355
caufe inadequate to its pattern, but merely
as an urmecefiary embellifhment; and to
fubftrtute in its place, the proof of fome
proportion that may have been defectively
laid open ; the completion of forne evi-
dence that may not have been fuitably
enforced ; or the illuftration of a thought
lefs fufceptible of ornament ; and to render
which energetical, fancy is brought with
difficulty to give her concurrence. Habit ',
therefore, is every thing in fuch cafes as
the prefent. When the mind hath been
accuftomed to examine its productions,
with the view of placing in ftrong lights
fuch objects as have primary confequence,
without regarding them merely as agree-
able; reafon will acquire by degrees fo
much command over the other powers,
that even when icleas are crouding toge-
ther moft clofely, and when imagination
catcheth fome with eagernefs, it will check
the career of this faculty ; and will render
its images fubfervient to the purpofe of elu-
cidating points of importance, fo as to pre-
vent future and difagreeable emendations.
3. We mentioned, as the laft circum-
ftance- necefTary to render the fentiment of
A a 2 any
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any performance correct, its being placed
in fuch exact difpofition as gradually to
open with new evidence upon the mind
of the reader as he proceeds, that the ulti-
mate purpofe of the work may be fhown
in a ckar and flriking light as we ap-
proach to it. To go about to prove that
thoughts cannot be correctly or judicioufly
put together^ when this regularity is not
obferved,, would be wholly impertinent.
We have enlarged at fo much length on
the fubject of method in every branch of
Compofition, that without falling into-
repetition, little can be added on this-
point. In order to be thoroughly mailer
of a fubject (efpecially of one tha,t is com-
prehenfive) an author ought to weigh the
principal topics feparately in his mind,,
and to turn each upon every fide, fo as to
judge of the lights in which it may be ex-
pofed to the beft advantage. After having
marked down fuch obfervations as occur
to him on each part contemplated by itfelf,
it will be proper for him to compare them
together;, that he may judge of their mu-
tual coherence, as well as of their extent,
as including what is necefiary to be ad-
vanced*
Obfervations on Composition. 557
vanced *. When, the writer hath once
formed a general eftimate of this kind,
with whofe accuracy he is fatisfied, he
hath only further to take care in the de-
lineation of particular parts, that his eye
when taking cognifance of one obje&, may
not be diverted toothers, as being fimilar,
until his firft purpofe is accomplifhed ; be-
caufe the mind is unavoidably embarraffed
by having things of different kinds pre-
fented before.it at the fame time, and can
delineate neither with precifion. On the
other hand, when never lofing fight of his
principal end, an author proceeds through
the intermediate fleps with deliberate re-
collection f, he will moil probably accom-
plifh his own defign effectually, by taking
in every means that conduceth to gain it;
* This procedure conftitutes what an ancient critic
denominates TO JIPEIION TH2 TAHmZ, the
Decency of Order, which he afcribes fo particularly
to Lyfias. AJJTTTEOV 3s TO Txcrn-ov TTJJ T«£iwf Trxpx
Auo-w. AIONTZ. ATS.
f To this purpofe is the judicious Roman's ob-
fervation.
Ordinis haec virtus erit & venus eft, aut ego fallor
Ut jam nunc dicet, jam nunc debentia dici
Pieraque differat, & pre/ens iu tempus omittat. HOR.
and
35 8 Philofophical and Critical
and will place each of thefe in its propef
place fo diftinctly before his readers, as at
the fame time to imprefs conviction upon
his underftanding, and the knowledge of the
means that produced it upon his memory.
2. Thus far we have endeavoured to
fliow what requifitions are neceflary to
render fentiment, confidered by itfelf, as
the moft important branch of Compofition,
properly correct. In order to obtain this
character in perfection, it is, however, in-
difpenfibly neceffary, that a jufl corre-
fpondence of language to thoughts thus
accurately difpofed mould take place *, as
without this harmonious concurrence the
compofition muft be effentially defective.
This
T»i? (AivToi cfyuyns TUV TSiAuita TO XUXAJCV.
ruv riAKTiTJi,(i)v rr,f Ai^£a)f TO pt^&xtuoi{ OVK
<ya.p r, Ai«vo«% uroAAxxjj ra
xa» T» xoy Xinrmit TO
T?) At^« roe, von/xara. AIONT2. AAIKAP. ISHK.
It may not be improper to fubjoin this critic's judg-
ment with regard to the moft perfect exprefiion, from.
his excellent treatife n^» 2TN0ES. ONflM. En
AI£K KPATIITH DAZ
HXI |!A5TaCoA«f
as EHI2 «r»oscu. Kat
Obfer nations on Compoption. 359
This laft is (as we have already fhown) a
coniequence invariably arifing from the
former. Obfcurity in the manner of ex-
preffing ideas, indicates always fome em-
barrafTment in their original formation;
and he who is able to feparate thefe, and
range them under proper heads, will never
be at a lofs (if he beftows fuitable atten^
tion on this circumftance) to convey them
to the minds of others with adequate per-
fpicuity. As we have endeavoured in can-
vaffing this branch of our fubject, to fhew
in what manner every character of the
ftyle of Compofition may be obtained
in the higheft perfection, we refer the
reader to the concluding article of each
preceding fection, for fatisfadion on this
head, along with what is faid on it in.
the prefent.
D Tsr^iooj ix. wXiiovuv TrAjJttjTai xoAwu ; rttii i f
7ovuv. Auray J1? Twi/ xcXwu TO jtAfw Ppa^UTf^cv TO SB
potxfOTtfov, &c. Vid. Rapin. AIONT2. ITrFPAM,
torn. ii. p. 2p. edit, Lip.
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